Skip to content


W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.17 of NEW STORY 04/12/14

Willow and Tara live happy together in a place untouched by Mutant Enemy. This is a forum for Willow and Tara Fan Fiction (i.e. fan fiction, top 10s, etc...) Please read the content advisories on individual stories, read at your own discretion.

W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.13 of NEW STORY 03/23/14

Postby Katharyn » Sun Mar 23, 2014 8:58 am

Title: The Raiders Chronicles – Tomb of the Vampire Prince - Chapter Thirteen
Author: Katharyn Rosser
Feedback: Absolutely, yes please. That’s why I write for this place, to engage in the discussion about the story.
Spoiler warning: Nope. All new. All original. Set in a universe where Willow Rosenberg takes the place of Indiana Jones. What can I spoil?
Distribution: This story was written for Pens. Pens is its home. No archiving off Different Coloured Pens and the Kitten Board please. No conversion to eBook or other formats please. Enjoy it here.
Summary: What it’s all about…
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the copyrights or anything else associated with BTVS or Indiana Jones. All rights lie with the production company, writers etc. I am making no money from this series of stories however all original characters and situations remain my property. There may be occasional use of ‘classic lines’ from the source series/movies or others for which full credit is given to the original writers.
Rating: Occasional, tasteful, adult situations and contextual bad language.
Couples: Tara and Willow forever. 100% FAQ compliant, 100% of the time. Look it up if you don’t know what that means.
Text convention: Use of italics denotes either special emphasis if used for a single or a few words in a sentence OR first person thoughts if used for a whole sentence.
Physics: I’ll say it here… It’s Movie Physics, people. Someone Willow’s size and weight can punch out big, big guys… If you don’t like it, don’t read it. (But please read it)
Notes: So, the big reveal in the last part was that the bad guys (or girl, because hey – it’s me and I love bad girls) wanted them at the castle all along. I am wondering how that will go down. Yeah, I guess I can find a number of logic holes with that but – as in my longer stories – you do have to remember that even bad girls aren’t always geniuses. They can also be wrong, mistaken or… hiding things. I’m not saying which it is. But I figure that’s enough cover your ass (or in this case mine.) And – by the way – this is all very true to movies in general… (Yes, your writer is telling you that because most movies don’t think through their plots properly, she should be able to skate by on that front too. I think it’s only fair LOL.) Let’s just enjoy the ride shall we? Particularly as I’ve made provision in the next part to fill in my own logic gap ☺
Thanks to: Everyone who IS enjoying the ride. Let’s face it, if you weren’t you’d have gotten off by now. Wait… maybe you did. Maybe I’m redrafting right now and talking to my future self because your past future selves abandoned ship before your current future shelves got to this point. In which case your current future selves never knew about this… Hmm. Maybe I need to save this conversation for a Willowism sometime and somewhere.




Every time Rosenberg opened her mouth they were prodded - at best – or shoved - at worst – while they were being taken through the castle.

And it was getting pretty aggravating.

Sometimes they were shoved for no more than a commentary on what they were seeing, the design elements or the artwork and items that lay around the place. You know, professional stuff. For someone who was into relics and archaeology and the like.

But far more often it was just Willow being a wise-ass. And if she hadn’t been such a wise-ass to start with then the ‘professional’ comments wouldn’t have led to their punishments anyway.

Most of the time, when Rosenberg opened her mouth to bad guys, there seemed to be no more point to it than exactly that. Opening her mouth. Admittedly that mouth was very cute and capable of wonderful things, but all Rosenberg was proving was that these Nazi ghouls weren’t going to do them any real harm.

At least not yet.

But the thing was, they’d already known that. And without needing fresh bruises to illustrate it. Some people didn’t even have a shirt to protect against the bruises.

She’d even - eventually - asked for Rosenberg’s jacket and been shoved forward before either of them could talk it out.

Rosenberg was very attached to her jacket.

And these things… They wanted something from them. Something that only they could do for them?

The question was what in the world was that going to be?

And how bad for that same world was it going to be if they got it?

It looked like they’d reached their destination though.

“Here. Here you see your purpose,” Ilse stated as she swept into a room much brighter than the others, streaming with… must that be moonlight?

Certainly, it was impressive, she had to admit it - at least to herself. How bright and colourful must it be at the height of the day with all that stained glass?

It wasn’t just the glass either. There were mirrored surfaces, polished to a high degree of shine. Gold leaf. Jewels. She wasn’t a professional like Rosenberg, but she had no reason to doubt that any of it was real. And the emphasis seemed to be all about the light – just like up at the church where they’d entered the tunnel to get here.

Unnecessarily, as it turned out.

Even Rosenberg was impressed – whistling softly between her teeth – and considering some of the things she’d seen in her career? That said a lot. Not as grand a space as a cathedral – it was much smaller – but on its own scale at full moon?

“Impressive, isn’t it?” Ilse asked. “You’re the first person to see this since… me.”

“And look how that turned out,” Rosenberg quipped.

Tara winced, expecting another jab in the kidneys for her partners wit. But it didn’t come this time. Perhaps, now that they’d been herded to where Ilse wanted them, the guards discretion had ended and their punishments were solely under that woman’s control.

It was difficult to know whether that could possibly be a good thing.

“Yes, look,” Ilse replied, turning to them. Stroking the smooth skin which Willow had originally torn open. No sign of the damage remained – not even a bruise - even though they knew what was under her visage.

Someone had died to make those repairs – at least Ilse had said so. Why not believe that too? It was terrible enough.

These things, these creatures… They were fragile in the sense that they took cosmetic damage easily, but they were tough to put and keep down. Tougher than just about any normal man. The pair of them had kicked and beaten one of these things for several minutes just to keep it from getting up again.

At least immediately.

But it would. Broken limbs had stopped it, but they hadn’t killed it… And that was just one of them. If you had a platoon, a company or dare to whisper it… An army?

Undoubtedly, that was what Hitler wanted. Right?

Maybe some of those at the club had stayed down, the ones they’d shot in the head. But… there’d been signs even those hadn’t been dead… No, that wasn’t the right way to look at it. They’d been plenty dead. The signs had been that they just didn’t realise it or accept what that should’ve meant.

Even after a face full of shotgun.

An army like that, even if you could kill them with a well-placed bullet, an army that could march and fight without regard for food, water or the weather conditions that faced them?

Heat, cold… Neither would matter. Africa in the hottest months of summer and Russia in the depths of winter alike would become no more difficult to operate in than a pleasant spring day on the plains of Europe. The historical impediments to the breakout from Western Europe would cease to be a factor.

Napoleon had been stopped in his tracks by the weather to the east. Eventually. If he’d had these things… The world would be a very different place. A student of military history like Hitler wouldn’t be ignoring that.

She wasn’t sure she could ever write the briefing paper in a way anyone would believe, but an army that would not stop, would not falter in the face of any adversity. One that could heal itself through killing others and using their bodies or something in some way… If that was all true, no population would be safe. Brutality towards civilians would become the objective of war, not just a consequence.

Killing civilians, using them, would be a matter of logistics.

To sustain the army it would have to be. It’d be the final step from small armies deciding disputes at an agreed place and time, up through mass armies but still – relatively – separate from the population, to a global war where the civilians were little more than resources to sustain a military force that otherwise couldn’t be stopped.

Perhaps a lot of that was supposition but… perhaps it wasn’t.

Could it be done?

Ilse’s state and that of the Nazi uniformed creatures with her said ‘yes’ or at least ‘yes – sort of’ but… they’d been here a while already and this place wasn’t exactly overrun with these ghouls. There was some limiting factor at work on their numbers as well as the fact that… Ilse seemed very different to the others.

While Ilse herself remained – outwardly – a beautiful woman. The men who’d accompanied her to the castle looked – if not smelled - to be half dead.

More than half.

And there were only the same numbers of them who’d come here with her, that the priest had mentioned… No other recruits. No locals. Hopefully no naval officers and archaeologists in the near future either.

Whatever was holding them back from expanding those numbers, it had to stay that way.

But she feared that was exactly what they’d been brought here to do something about. Whether for HItler or for this other ‘Master’ Ilse had referred to.

“There,” Ilse pointed across the moonlit room. “There is the relic you were hired to recover.”

“Oh, well, that was easy. If you’ve already got it then… We’ll get out of your way,” Willow deadpanned.

“Hardly. I want you to remove it from the room,” Ilse said to Rosenberg.

That was hardly the instruction they’d expected. Sure, Willow was an archaeologist and could – in a pinch – work as a mover. But coming all this way for… that? Just to move it out of the room?

There was something else going on. Clearly.

And the prize for realising the brutally obvious goes to…

“Why me?”

“Do as you’re told, Doctor Rosenberg” Ilse insisted. “And things won’t need to get more unpleasant.”

“Why don’t you – No, you can’t can you?” Rosenberg asked.

Ilse nodded, confirming her supposition but otherwise wouldn’t admit the weakness.

“What, does it burn to touch it? Like holy water?”

Ilse seemed genuinely amused. “Probing for weaknesses, Doctor Rosenberg? I would happily bathe in holy water. Or perhaps you think sunlight will dry me to a husk and set me alight?”

Seeing where Rosenberg was looking for her mythical inspiration, Tara had the feeling that somehow they were… off target. She hadn’t seen Ilse out in the daylight, but she hadn’t seen any of the other girls working at the club in daylight either. That was just the way things were when you worked in a nightclub.

Or was there something to why Ilse had chosen to take effective control of an underground nightclub in Paris as a front for… whatever her activities were.

What was it this ‘Master’ wanted? And where did the Nazi’s fit in?

Where do we fit in?

Just moving an artefact from one room to another? It hardly seemed like… a plan?

“Your reputation preceded you, Doctor. I understood perfectly what I was taking on when I invited you. Relied on it, in fact. But, at this moment, understanding is not required,” Ilse said. “Only obedience. Go. Get the icon.”

“Or?”

“Or I will shoot Commander Maclay in the head.”

And then there was a gun pointed right at her.

Again.

-----------------------------

As a seasoned observer of Commander Tara Maclay – albeit one who was concerned about her – Willow recognised the other woman’s mood right at that moment.

She’d seen it before. More than once.

Right now, Tara’s expression just said ‘I wish people would stop pointing guns at me.’

Nothing more serious than that.

The thing was, Tara Maclay was highly experienced in a role that saw that happen more often than you might’ve thought to most Navy typists in what was officially described as ‘peacetime.’

So, despite what was happening, Willow knew that she wasn’t supposed to be too concerned. Tara was used to this – even if she preferred to be the one holding the gun - and so she could see her lover wasn’t panicked in the slightest.

And that gave her confidence.

But Tara did still have a gun to her head and the question might be ‘when’ rather than ‘if’ Ilse would squeeze the trigger.

First of all - Nazi. Second of all – some kind of monster under that smooth skin.

Third? I just don’t like her.

Doing what Ilse said wasn’t the answer either though. Then – presumably - they wouldn’t have any more use for them and German efficiency in these matters seemed – so far – to suggest that that killing them right away would be the cleanest option. Before they could cause problems.

And it was impossible to fault the logic. Why keep prisoners with reputations like their hanging around?

So, to disobey would get Tara killed. To obey would get them both killed. Just a little bit later.

Later was good.

Never was better.

So it was obvious what she had to do.

“You can’t touch it, can you?” she asked, focusing on the part of her earlier taunt that Ilse had never answered.

“This?”

Ilse walked over to the icon where it rested atop a stone altar. She caressed it first with her gloved hand and then – very deliberately and almost sensually – pulled the glove off one finger at a time and stroked the icon even more suggestively. There was nothing at all sexual about the object, but it was impossible to not conclude there was something sexual about the intent of the demonstration.

Which was all kinds of strange.

No one said fanatics were sane though. In fact, pretty much the opposite. She’d seen them all over the world – including her own country – and they all shared that ‘something not quite right’ characteristic.

In the head.

“Any of us can touch it,” Ilse said. “However to move it, that requires an act of love.”

“Keep stroking it that way,” Willow said. “I’m sure it’ll get the idea.”

That obviously struck Ilse as highly amusing because she really, genuinely laughed. So much that a tear came to her eye. “Oh, you’re exactly what I was told you would be, Doctor Rosenberg. I’m sure you’d be an endless delight. But I’m afraid I really must insist that you do as I ask.”

“Why?”

“Why what?”

“Why an act of love?”

Keep talking. Let me think.

“Because it was placed as an act of love, for the local people. For the woman that the priest had fallen in love with but could never – what is the word, consummate? Could never consummate his love for. It was placed to protect them all… It can be removed in the same way.”

“And when it is?”

The corner of Ilse’s lips twitched, a smile. A very satisfied smile. “Then the world will change.”

“Leave it where it is,” Tara said. “I meant it, Rosenberg.”

But Tara didn’t have all the facts… a part of the translation that they hadn’t gotten into back at the old church. If Ilse had her facts right then… the rest might also be true.

In every myth there was a grain of truth.

Whatever this icon was, it also had the capacity to be a great weapon. If used with that same love.

But we didn’t say the words. We know them, but we didn’t say them. What does that mean?

What was unfortunate was that Tara didn’t know every word of there story that had been written around the walls of the chapel in the mountains. Didn’t know that by doing what Ilse asked she was giving them the chance to not only get out of this trouble they were in, but also to come out of it ahead of the game.

“Rosenberg, don’t you dare do that – we knew the risks - ”

It was an act of love though and – tough as she liked to appear to the outside world – Tara knew her better. Tara would know, beyond doubt, that – even if they weren’t together that often – they really were in love.

Knew that there was no one else and hadn’t been since India. Despite opportunity - lots of opportunity - that was the honest truth that Tara knew and understood.

She knew too that was the reason behind the passion when they did meet, passion that might even mask the subtler – but more enduring – love.

Tara knew it because she was a trained observer.

Knew it because she was Tara Maclay, rather than just Commander Maclay.

And so, she hoped, Tara would know why she was doing what she did now.

Reaching to pick up the icon that Ilse had been caressing almost lovingly, but apparently couldn’t move.

“You know why I have to do it,” she said to her lover.

And Ilse knew it too.

She hated it when the Nazi’s were right.

*************************
-------------------------
If I wanted a little pussy, I've got my own to play with.

Chance in *Chance*
-------------------------
Katharyn
23. Volumey Text
 
Posts: 3794
Topics: 5
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2005 1:23 pm


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.13 of NEW STORY 03/23/1

Postby Will's redemption » Sun Mar 23, 2014 3:38 pm

:whip DIBS!! I haven't commented on this story before, but the opportunity to dibs is to great to ignore! I love the story! It's very thrilling, the action sequences are wonderfully written, but above all I love the dynamic between our favourite women, the playful banter and the obvious, until now not spoken out loudly but true and deeply profound love. I'm curious how Willow plans to use this love to control the icon...can hardly wait for the next update. Lucky for us that you never let us wait long!
Will's redemption
7. Teeny Tinkerbell Light
 
Posts: 612
Joined: Sun Jan 19, 2014 7:01 am


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.13 of NEW STORY 03/23/1

Postby zampsa19752001 » Sun Mar 23, 2014 9:39 pm

Yay for great update-y goodness... I wonder if Willow & Tara can use the Icon and "Act of Love" to make those ghoulies extra dead...
We Few, We Happy Few, We Band of Buggered

Posting while nude improves your mood...
User avatar
zampsa19752001
9. Gay Now
 
Posts: 922
Joined: Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:51 pm
Location: Kaskinen, Finland. Citizen of Kitopia


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.13 of NEW STORY 03/23/1

Postby Katharyn » Thu Mar 27, 2014 12:27 pm

Welcome, Will's Redemtion! You only comment when you can dibs? LOL. Very elitist and competitive!

Lovely to know someone else is out there other than the already commenting bunch :)

Thanks so much for what you said there. It's reassuring to hear that sort of thing. People tell me my action scenes work, but they are one of the things most in need of redraft. My first draft of action is usually hard to follow, but it seems to come together in redraft. It's just that I can't always see that!

As for the banter... I am not sure I could write a T/W story without it. Even when it's supposed to be super-serious (which this is not!)

And no, I never keep you waiting that long :)

Thanks again

Zampsa - Thanks, as ever! Your comment about 'ghoulies' has unfortunate overtones in the UK where 'ghoulies' has an alternative meaning I am not sure it has elsewhere... I'll leave you to figure it out ;) But using an act of love to make ghoulies extra dead... might cause a few people to wince LOL

Thanks

Katharyn
-------------------------
If I wanted a little pussy, I've got my own to play with.

Chance in *Chance*
-------------------------
Katharyn
23. Volumey Text
 
Posts: 3794
Topics: 5
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2005 1:23 pm


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.13 of NEW STORY 03/23/1

Postby kimmy_s » Fri Mar 28, 2014 7:07 am

Hi Katharyn

So I'm back from the wilderness...iPad problems :crash along with crazy work schedule :buried and sick girlfriend = me with no kitten fix :gnome :fit

Chapter 11
No tongues? Ouch!!
Glad Willows finally come to the party about things that go bump in the night. Then she won't be surprised if there are worse things ahead (not that Willow is easily surprised).
I too don't like the idea of the girls being tortured.
Again loving the flirty, funny banter it really does make me smile.
OMG at Willows pathetic screaming...loved it! I'm just imagining Willow shouting "Help" Penelope Pitstop style.

Chapter 12
I really don't blame Willow for being distracted by Tara's chest I'd be pretty taken with them too if they were right there in front of me.
Rosenberg turned to her. “You know, she’s right, it really doesn’t.”

“We do tend to do things the hard way,” she agreed.

Nice moment, I can just see them turn to each other having their own little side conversation while Ilse and the others stand around tapping their feet lol.

Chapter 13
Nice build up to what feels like we're almost at the conclusion to this instalment of IJ (although I'm hoping it was last a while longer).
Ilse laughing at a Willow quip was unexpected.

And ghoulies? I was born and raised in England with 4 brothers, you betcha I know what they are lol.

Hopefully I'll be back to my normal feedbacking self now things have calmed down and I have a working IPad. It's great to be back!

Thanks
Kim
"I don't want our first time to be a quickie. I want it to be, a longie." The redhead looked at the blonde and smiled sweetly. "I want all of you." ~ Willow to Tara in Neverland by EasierSaid
The most anticipated Chapter in the history of fanfiction everywhere!
User avatar
kimmy_s
4. Extra Flamey
 
Posts: 167
Joined: Mon Jul 18, 2005 8:44 am
Location: Melbourne, Australia


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.13 of NEW STORY 03/23/1

Postby Katharyn » Fri Mar 28, 2014 11:20 am

Hey Kimmy Welcome back :)

You want to know why writers take the tongues from characters? Because then they don't need dialogue :)

You know that I'm not going to torture the girls... It's just something I don't do (unless you count a long fic called Sidestep LOL)

I think - perhaps - I was channeling Penelope Pitstop. I'd just forgotten that was what it was. That was kind of what I had in my head, well done!

Re Tara's chest - fic is the process of writers revealing universal truths :)

The side conversations are really more of a Harrison Ford thing, I suppose, in terms of Indy and Han Solo... That's why it really is fun to cross the characters over.

And yes, we're really getting into the conclusion now. I have in mind the need to do another to complete the trilogy but that may not be for some time as I've just started writing a non-T/W story so I'll have to see how that develops in terms of timing my next T/W story.

Good to have you back, thank you!

And so... to the next part...

Katharyn
-------------------------
If I wanted a little pussy, I've got my own to play with.

Chance in *Chance*
-------------------------
Katharyn
23. Volumey Text
 
Posts: 3794
Topics: 5
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2005 1:23 pm


W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.14 of NEW STORY 03/28/14

Postby Katharyn » Fri Mar 28, 2014 11:26 am

Title: The Raiders Chronicles – Tomb of the Vampire Prince – Chapter Fourteen
Author: Katharyn Rosser
Feedback: Absolutely, yes please. That’s why I write for this place, to engage in the discussion about the story.
Spoiler warning: Nope. All new. All original. Set in a universe where Willow Rosenberg takes the place of Indiana Jones. What can I spoil?
Distribution: This story was written for Pens. Pens is its home. No archiving off Different Coloured Pens and the Kitten Board please. No conversion to eBook or other formats please. Enjoy it here.
Summary: Moving the icon…
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the copyrights or anything else associated with BTVS or Indiana Jones. All rights lie with the production company, writers etc. I am making no money from this series of stories however all original characters and situations remain my property. There may be occasional use of ‘classic lines’ from the source series/movies or others for which full credit is given to the original writers.
Rating: Occasional, tasteful, adult situations and contextual bad language.
Couples: Tara and Willow forever. 100% FAQ compliant, 100% of the time. Look it up if you don’t know what that means.
Text convention: Use of italics denotes either special emphasis if used for a single or a few words in a sentence OR first person thoughts if used for a whole sentence.
Physics: I’ll say it here… It’s Movie Physics, people. Someone Willow’s size and weight can punch out big, big guys… If you don’t like it, don’t read it. (But please read it)
Notes: So, I made a big addition to this part in redraft. As mentioned in the notes for chapter 13 I realised that I’d brought the girls here to the castle mostly because they were the characters and they had to be there. The reason for it was… sadly lacking. Sure, maybe you could’ve enjoyed that and maybe not even spotted the hole but I didn’t want to go with ‘maybe’ because, hey, it’s me. The changes here give Willow a chance to do what she does and what she’s good at as well as filling in that logic gap. It also points out the gap itself in fairly stark terms.
I apologise though, because that addition does make it slightly disjointed since I basically changed about 5 words on either side of the insertion and just stuck it in there.
I might also have changed the geography a little (of the castle and the room) which may have been contradicted in earlier or later parts where I wasn’t having to pay attention to it as much (because I don’t do a lot of that. People, rather than places, are significant to me.) So, please excuse any hiccups of that kind and go with the version here… I will do my bit and try to catch any references that contradict.
Thanks to: My girl, for not swearing when I said that I’d need to do more writing at home (I used to do it on the way to work until recently)




Tara watched, hoping for a wink. For some sign that Rosenberg knew what she was doing when she made to pick up the icon that…

What exactly is it doing?

Ilse needed it moved… Just moved. Not destroyed or thrown out of the window to the rocks below. Just moved.

Why? Why couldn’t she do that herself?

Ilse watched, but her attention wasn’t entirely on Rosenberg. Instead, she was consistently glancing at the walls. What about the walls? Why…

Because nothing was ever simple. That was like their motto and even more so when it came to apparently easy things.

Like moving that icon.

“It’s - ” she started.

“Trapped,” Rosenberg said. “I know.” She touched the icon, very, very gently but then drew her finger back. Maybe she hadn’t really touched it at all.

“Would this be a time to stand back?” Tara asked since at least that test had been passed.

“You know how it goes, doll. It’s nearly always a time to stand back,” Rosenberg replied, considering a more vigorous prod.

“Don’t call me, doll,” she said, but absently.

Of course, this ‘act of love’ that Ilse was looking for came from threatening her. Making Rosenberg do what she was good at in exchange for saving her life. That was one thing, but if it was just that simple then there’d have to be someone in the village who could’ve helped them do what was necessary.

If love was all it took, there were people all around the world who could’ve done that. No need to ship Rosenberg over here… After all, what made them special? Not much. Except for what Willow knew how to do.

“How many of your people has it killed?” she asked Ilse, ignoring the pistol that was still – more casually now – pointed in her direction.

“None.”

“Then…?”

“It’s not the traps that frustrate us.”

Rosenberg didn’t seem surprised by that, but she didn’t engage with it either, leaving Tara to wonder what it might have meant. Then… the act of love wasn’t really a clue to how this should be approached. No, it was an actual requirement? Perhaps unrelated to the traps because…

An act of love would be so easy to get around. An almost mystical requirement while… Traps were very, very physical. And not something Ilse would probably have to worry about.

“Darts?” she wondered.

“I don’t think so,” Rosenberg said, though her eyes did track over the walls.

“Big swinging blades?”

“Probably not.”

“Probably?”

“Almost definitely.”

“Maybe you should… step back, think about it?” she suggested, gingerly taking that step herself - despite the pistol that was pointed at her.

A step away from the danger.

“No. No…” Rosenberg said. “Moving now wouldn’t be a great idea.”

“Why?”

“Oh, I’m pretty sure that I triggered the pressure plate under this floor tile.”

She looked down. If Rosenberg had done so there was no visible sign and there hadn’t been any click. No ancient gears working. No clanks. No squeaking ropes. No almost silent, but very deadly, swish of blades that could’ve sliced through flesh and bone without even getting bloody.

So…?

What?

She asked the obvious question. Part of her wanted to go to Willow and part… wanted to back away. Slowly. Because… until you had to actually run, experience had taught her that was the best way to back out of trouble. Further was almost always better. “What’s going to happen?”

“Unless I miss my guess, I’ll be dropped to my death, dashed the rocks below?”

“More likely dashed on your way down,” Ilse said.

The floor? They were overhanging the drop in here then? She hadn’t realised but… “But the tomb?”

“Remember the finger of rock that was by the east face of the castle?” Rosenberg asked. She was paying attention to her task though, carefully running her fingers around the tile by her foot. It showed impressive flexibility just to get down there without shifting her foot.

“Umm, yes?” Silence. “Oh.”

Now Rosenberg was looking at the tomb itself. Weighing her options, it seemed. Of course, if that wasn’t going to collapse or give way then it would be relatively safe. If the floor fell away though it would leave her stranded not in easy jumping distance.

Nor was she sure Ilse would bother to waste a rope to save Willow when she had what she wanted.

And that thing they wanted wasn’t the icon. It was the tomb… The icon was simply blocking their access to it.

So… what was in there? According to the stories on the walls of the church, up in the mountains, it was the creature who’d made war on the people of these lands. Sought to dominate them.

That great evil that was otherwise nameless.

And she knew she didn’t want to speculate on why they needed to get into the tomb. Except… she already was…

For now though, there was the trap that Rosenberg had triggered just by standing there and how she was planning to get out of it. Not even being sure what the pressure plate did – or at least she wasn’t sure – it was impossible to offer any advice. But well-meaning as that would’ve been, Rosenberg hardly needed it anyway.

She was a professional. She was experienced. And more than either of those things, Rosenberg was lucky.

It was the latter trait that sometimes seemed most important.

Of course, she believed that you made your own luck too.

Very carefully, without lifting or moving the foot that had triggered the trap, Rosenberg edged the other forwards, right up to the very edge of the tomb. Tara could see what she was doing, looking for a foothold in case the floor fell away from her. That was just step one though, because once she’d gained that – slight – reassurance it was obvious how very, very slight it would be.

In good shoes – and Willow’s boots were – it might help support her and –

Then there was no floor under Rosenberg’s feet.

That was the first thing she realised, the second was that Willow knew what she was doing because she was in motion – and not just falling away into nothing below.

Instead Rosenberg was pushing up off the lid of the tomb, swinging.

And so was the floor, but in the opposite direction. She realised then what had happened. The floor hadn’t just dropped or broke away, a large section had pivoted and opened like a trapdoor but then – maybe a second later – it had swung back into place like…

Like nothing had ever happened.

But for the rush of air and a glimpse of what was below, you wouldn’t have believed anything had happened. It was that fast.

Except Rosenberg was on the tomb. She was… really there was no way to say other than… well, she was straddling it. And not very comfortably. Rosenberg wasn’t a big girl with long legs and… the vaguely human male shape carved into the tomb lid was…

No, best not to think about how she was positioned.

“Are you okay?!” she asked.

“Doing just fine, doll,” Willow replied, distracted most of all by trying to sit a little more comfortably.

In her relief she didn’t even tell Rosenberg not to call her that. Somehow, half naked in front of Nazi ghouls and about to break into a tomb protected by elaborate traps – no, it really didn’t matter.

“Very good, Doctor,” Ilse said. “And perhaps if you would now disarm the mechanism?”

“Because it’d be a real shame if you all dropped into the chasm beneath us?”

“Yes, it would. Because Commander Maclay would be right alongside us. I think that would be a shame, don’t you?”

They shared a look then and because they’d been in this sort of situation before, they knew exactly what it meant. Even though Ilse had made the mistake of grabbing her arm, this wasn’t the time.

And they both knew it.

But for now she just had to trust that Rosenberg had a plan… That she wasn’t giving these things what they wanted just to save her. Because… that wasn’t right. In the end, if Rosenberg had to sacrifice her to save hundreds of others – thousands – then that was a sacrifice she should be making.

Not that she was discounting how hard that would be. Not when there was love in the mix. Albeit un-admitted.

“I need – ah… that,” Rosenberg said, pointing at Ilse’s hand.

“Surely you don’t expect - ”

“Not the gun,” Willow said, impatient. “The watch.”

Ilse eyes narrowed, plainly weighing the decision. Looking for the trick and how it could hurt her.

“Either give me the watch or give me a knife,” Rosenberg said. “You choose, but either way I’m not riding this boy of yours for much longer and you can disarm it for yourself.”

It did look a little uncomfortable and the fact that Rosenberg could drop down hundreds of feet onto the rock below probably leant itself to the reason that she was clinging on quite so hard with her knees.

“Give it to her,” Tara encouraged. It was a watch that the other woman was asking for her. She couldn’t begin to think how that might be a trick that would benefit them.

And in the end, she couldn’t look at it as helping Nazis – or worse than Nazis. She had to look at it as getting Rosenberg back in a place where they could do something about beating them.

Probably with their fists.

The encouragement spurred Ilse into removing the slim watch that she was wearing and tossing it over to where Rosenberg was perched on top of the tomb.

“Ladies,” she said, and then swung over to the far side of the tomb, out of their sight. She was clinging on with one hand, must be upside down and –

How did she even know where to look?

The counterweight… It had to be. For the floor to fall away was no trick at all, even in the limited time she’d been with Rosenberg in places filled with traps, she’d seen plenty of that sort of thing. No, the real trick here was getting the floor to fall away so completely but then swing right back into place and still support people’s weight both before and after.

And that must’ve required some careful engineering and… a counterweight.

Right?

Seemed likely… So what was Rosenberg doing? If she disrupted that mechanism – somehow using a watch - would it - ?

Then the floor vanished again.

With her attention drawn to the terrible sight below – growing blackness now the sun was down but with the tremendous sense of depth – she half thought she’d see Rosenberg falling away because she barely had a grip but…

No.

Then the floor was back and Willow was swinging herself back over the tomb. Just as athletic in her movement as she’d sometimes experienced for herself in… umm… straddling situations.

“Not quite it,” Rosenberg said, this time hanging down on their side of the tomb and prodding the floor tile that had originally triggered the trap with her foot while she hung there and –

When the trap swung open this time, Rosenberg did something. A tiny movement, a small but precise throw and –

The floor swung back and there was a grinding of stone against metal.

The mechanism had been jammed? It hadn’t been the pin she was after, she hadn’t been trying to unscrew something or jimmy it. She’d been looking for something metal – that Ilse would give up – to get into the mechanism.

Seemed obvious now.

“There,” Rosenberg said. “Once it opened up, it’s a nice big target. Oh, you didn’t want that back did you?”

“Walk across the floor,” Ilse said in lieu of an actual answer to the question.

“Sure,” Rosenberg said, swinging down from the tomb like it was a horse and landing lightly on her feet.

“Ah,” Ilse interrupted. “Trigger the pressure pad, please.”

‘Please’ being illustrated by the re-brandishing of the pistol in her direction.

Which was getting very, very tired now.

Of all the people who pointed guns at her, inhuman Nazis were just the worst.

“You think I’d cheat you?” Rosenberg asked, taking a step back and – very deliberately – moving the back of her heel towards the tile they all knew would trigger it.

“I think you would, yes.”

Tara knew it that moment that Willow wasn’t sure. She couldn’t be. Throwing a watch into the mechanism – even one as impressive as that – wasn’t exactly scientific. If it had fallen out, been chewed up or just wouldn’t survive being crushed more than the one time…

She doesn’t know that this isn’t goodbye. Not for sure..

Which was why Rosenberg was looking right at her – not Ilse – when she put the back of her heel down and everyone held their breath through the almost imperceptible ‘click’ and…

Nothing.

Rosenberg was still right there.

“Satisfied?”

“Again, please,” Ilse said, though the pistol wasn’t quite so firmly trained on her.

Nothing.

“The charm, they say, is the third time. One more time.”

Again. Nothing happened.

“Very good, Doctor Rosenberg. Your presence has been quite justified and now, if you please, the icon.”

Yes, with the trap disabled – at least one of them – then all that remained was… The icon and whatever it was doing to hold back these creatures. Because they’d already been able to get to the tomb. The trap hadn’t been intended for them – it was for whoever they might’ve brought in to do their bidding.

The trap was intended to deal with whoever tried to remove the icon. She wasn’t certain that entirely made sense but… not everything in this world did. That was just the way things were.

“Why don’t you do it yourself?” she asked.

“As I told you, we cannot. The icon, Frau Doctor.”

The implication had been that it was immovable – to them… Did that mean ‘heavy’?

Did that mean it could be trapping something beneath it? Like the lid of the tomb? Probably… Languistic misunderstandings aside, it sounded like that was what they believed and Willow had been very careful to avoid disturbing the icon when she was doing her straddling a few moments ago.

“You’re sure?” Rosenberg asked.

“Quite.”

“Because – I usually find that people like you have second thoughts, not too long after a moment like this. It’s not too late to call it a day. No harm, no foul.”

“Yes, it is. Too late. And trust me, Doctor, you’ve never known anyone like me.”

Rosenberg nodded, sighed like ‘what can you do’ and then picked up the icon. When she did it was all business, there was no hint of the sensuality with which Ilse had imbued it. Because… icon. And why would you?

And then -

Nothing at all happened.

Not a damned thing.

No trap. No crash. No erupting tomb or flashes of light. No cry of triumph from the guards.

No exploding hearts or deadly winds.

No melting faces or screams of pain.

The floor was still beneath their feet…

Nothing.

Had.

Happened.

Ilse seemed satisfied though. Like she hadn’t expected anything more than that. Or was it because she could feel something? Sense some change? She looked like a woman inhaling the scent of… victory? Like the air itself carried something tangible.

So much so that - just for a moment - she wondered about the possibility of gas. But… no.

The weapon that had been trained on her dropped to Ilse’s side, though the guards all stood ready to riddle them both with bullets and apparently had no reason to worry too much about hitting their own people.

No such immunity for she and Rosenberg.

And now there probably weren’t any ways left in which they’d be useful.

Right?

The trap was disarmed and then icon had been moved… What else could they want from them?

Did she really want to know? Because if you listened to myths and legends then – typically – when something that was in a tomb got out of it, there was some sacrificing required. Right?

I don’t want to be a sacrifice.

I don’t want to be eaten either.


And she had no intention of letting either of those things happen.

Surely Willow would be having the same thoughts. She knew her well enough by now that she wasn’t really surprised when Rosenberg tried something. To be precise, the Doctor threw the icon at the closest of the guards.

Not even with any force.

More like… she knew something. Or was testing it.

Any softball game for six year olds would’ve seen a more violent throw (though six year olds could be terrors), but despite that the guard that Willow hit went down like a full grown elephant had been dropped out of the sky on them.

Or at least something the weight of an elephant.

He was crushed to the floor by the much smaller object.

Literally.

Too crushed to be getting up anytime soon. At least not until the icon was removed from his shattered torso.

Everyone in the room, including her, had frozen just to watch what happened. Obviously no one had really known - either that it was coming or what would happen when it did. Not Willow, who’d thrown it. Not the ghoul who’d been crushed.

Not Ilse who was also momentarily confused.

As for her, she’d been anticipating some kind of wink. Or some other warning that hadn’t come and so being the first to react was no bad thing. It was Ilse she was most worried about; the ‘woman’ had just spent the last several minutes pointing a gun at her head and that would probably be her immediate, reflex reaction now – to pull the trigger.

But she wasn’t about to let that happen. When she threw herself at the female ghoul, it was the gun hand that she went for, causing Ilse to shoot one of her own men in the leg.

The wounded ghoul didn’t – quite – bleed. Instead what would’ve been a mortal wound for a normal person simply oozed, but then another – luckier – shot took him in the throat while she and Ilse struggled and he went down when the back of his neck was blown out and he stayed down, though he clearly wasn’t - quite - dead.

That seemed simpler than it should’ve been, but was the spine what was vulnerable? Basic anatomy – even for whatever was underneath that human skin – should suggest that without an intact spine whatever the brain told the body to do wasn’t going to happen below the level of the breakage.

If so…

I know how to snap a spine. Just one of the things the Navy teaches it’s ‘typists’.

“Rosenberg, the neck!” She had to force the words out. She – and events – had taken Ilse by surprise. But the great strength of the ghoul was already beginning to tell.

“I know!”

Her struggles with Ilse spun them around just in time for her to see Rosenberg’s whip flicked out with a crack, looping around the throat of one of the guards and then – when the archaeologist jerked it savagely – really only succeeded in pulling him off his feet. But it happened to bring him close enough to her that she could put her foot against his chin and tell Willow to jerk it again and…

Snap.

Teamwork at its best.

There wasn’t time to enjoy the small victory. Ilse, after the surprise, managed to throw her aside and then she was caught up in trying to defend herself. Faster, harder hitting than the more decayed ghouls, this woman was punching her so rapidly all she could do was throw her arms up and try to cover herself, like a boxer caught on the ropes against a much fresher opponent.

She’d once seen a Marine boxing match her Daddy had refereed and this… that was the sum of her training for dealing with this particular tactic. They didn’t teach you about super-strong, super-fast ghouls in the Navy though.

An oversight, clearly.

Luck was with her in two ways though. First, Ilse wasn’t much of a fighter for all her speed and strength.

Second, Willow was able to take a break from her own fight with the other guards, just long enough to snap the whip out again and jerk Ilse back and away from her, pulling the woman back onto her knees before she dropped the whip when one of the ghouls punched her in the face.

Ouch.

She’d virtually heard the crunch.

It was the moment she needed though, a chance to catch a real breath. A chance to switch to the offensive. Was she as fast as Ilse? No. But she was trained in hand to hand combat, combinations of blows and in how to take advantage of an opponent’s weakness – even if it was only momentary.

The trick here was going to be not letting Ilse get up. Not letting her use that strength and speed.

And so she didn’t.

How? She kept Ilse off balance, from being able to recover from being jerked back like that. On her knees, Ilse didn’t have the chance to kick and denied her reach too. The shoe was on the other foot this time.

And then that same shoe was on the female ghoul’s neck.

She was only dimly aware of Willow’s fight with the others, but it must’ve been going okay. But just as she was about to try and separate Ilse’s head from the top of her spine everything shook.

No.

Not everything.

Just the floor. She and Ilse looked at each other, realising the danger of the trapped floor – if that gave way they’d both fall even if only one of them would be to their death. Then they struggled to get to the safe area just behind them. Trying to beat each other to it.

But the floor wasn’t actually giving way. It was the tomb. The heavy stone slab above it, the one that Rosenberg had barely straddled even with her impressive flexibility, shook and jumped.

It had been protected by an immovable icon, light weight in Rosenberg’s hand but impossibly heavy on chest of the Nazi guard…

And they’d removed it.

Seemed pretty obvious what it had been for.

Right?

They’d just freed what was inside.

Oh.

*********************
-------------------------
If I wanted a little pussy, I've got my own to play with.

Chance in *Chance*
-------------------------
Katharyn
23. Volumey Text
 
Posts: 3794
Topics: 5
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2005 1:23 pm


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.14 of NEW STORY 03/28/1

Postby zampsa19752001 » Fri Mar 28, 2014 2:18 pm

Dibs-y Goodness!

Yay for great update-y goodness... Good for them to figure out how to make the ghoulies extra dead... Waking up old fang-tooth is definately not good...
We Few, We Happy Few, We Band of Buggered

Posting while nude improves your mood...
User avatar
zampsa19752001
9. Gay Now
 
Posts: 922
Joined: Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:51 pm
Location: Kaskinen, Finland. Citizen of Kitopia


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.14 of NEW STORY 03/28/1

Postby Katharyn » Mon Mar 31, 2014 11:13 am

Thanks, Zampsa. No, waking that guy up isn't going to be a good (or educational!) thing :)

Next part tomorrow.
Katharyn
-------------------------
If I wanted a little pussy, I've got my own to play with.

Chance in *Chance*
-------------------------
Katharyn
23. Volumey Text
 
Posts: 3794
Topics: 5
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2005 1:23 pm


W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.15 of NEW STORY 04/02/14

Postby Katharyn » Tue Apr 01, 2014 9:25 pm

Title: The Raiders Chronicles – Tomb of the Vampire Prince - Chapter Fifteen
Author: Katharyn Rosser
Feedback: Absolutely, yes please. That’s why I write for this place, to engage in the discussion about the story.
Spoiler warning: Nope. All new. All original. Set in a universe where Willow Rosenberg takes the place of Indiana Jones. What can I spoil?
Distribution: This story was written for Pens. Pens is its home. No archiving off Different Coloured Pens and the Kitten Board please. No conversion to eBook or other formats please. Enjoy it here.
Summary: Time to get out of there…
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the copyrights or anything else associated with BTVS or Indiana Jones. All rights lie with the production company, writers etc. I am making no money from this series of stories however all original characters and situations remain my property. There may be occasional use of ‘classic lines’ from the source series/movies or others for which full credit is given to the original writers.
Rating: Occasional, tasteful, adult situations and contextual bad language.
Couples: Tara and Willow forever. 100% FAQ compliant, 100% of the time. Look it up if you don’t know what that means.
Text convention: Use of italics denotes either special emphasis if used for a single or a few words in a sentence OR first person thoughts if used for a whole sentence.
Physics: I’ll say it here… It’s Movie Physics, people. Someone Willow’s size and weight can punch out big, big guys… If you don’t like it, don’t read it. (But please read it)
Notes: And we’re into the running, jumping and all around craziness part. I referred in an earlier chapter to changing things so that Willow had her chance to do some archaeology – rather than just ‘the act of love’ that could’ve been accomplished by just about anyone Ilse threatened. That was a big gap I left in the first draft, but was plugged as we went along. But it’s in this chapter where the things I changed to bring that in may well come home to roost.
Originally there was a tomb under a flat floor (which is a problem when I add in the fact that flat floor now falls away when the trap is engaged!) That got changed to a raised tomb, above the floor. A sarcophagus as you might find in Egyptian tombs if you like. I really hope that I caught every reference and didn’t leave anything not making sense. Sorry if I didn’t! Also, due to the writing process, in first draft I changed PoV inside scenes (I usually only do it at scene breaks) because I was on the clock for Nano and not paying proper attention to what I was doing. All of that SHOULD have been fixed in redraft. Again, sorry if it didn’t work out in every sentence or reference. Or if the voice just seems a little ‘off.’ Of course that’s a fringe benefit of writing the girls. Both of them are ‘she’ which masks these little problems!
But sometimes it’s hard to see this stuff in a sea of words and you just get too close to it.
Thanks to: Kajun. I am not sure if she is reading this story as I am writing these thanks before starting posting, but yesterday I finished posting my long fic ‘Coulda, Woulda, Shoulda’ and she was there for every part with her wild speculation (some very good) and her hopes I couldn’t answer and her crazy notions that gave me extra ideas. It’s really nice to have had that sort of writer/reader collaboration. It came from other people too, but not as consistently as from her because life – over more than a year – gets in the way. I know that. So… thanks again. Oh, and how lucky that she is a moderator too? It’s not like she doesn’t have more to do with her board time…




“Time to go,” Willow insisted. “C’mon, Navy! Hussle, hussle, hussle! Come on! We’ve got to go!”

“Sorry – I’m a little – busy,” Tara gasped with Ilse writhing under her. Pinning the woman was like trying to pin a giant snake.

Or an alligator. Because this one did – or was trying to – bite.

“It’s just one little ghoul,” she chided, even though she knew that Ilse was a much tougher fight than the guards she’d taken on. Maybe even collectively. Something about her was… different again.

They weren’t exactly dead either; she’d just had to damage them enough to make getting up problematic. Tara had tried the same thing, she’d seen her do exactly that.

But Ilse… For Ilse it looked like only dead - really dead - would be good enough. Problem was, they had no idea how to make that happen.

Secret agent girl hadn’t managed to make it happen. At least not yet. And Tara knew far more ways to kill things than she did.

The government had decided that she needed to.

“Got to get out of here,” she pressed, just in case Tara hadn’t actually noticed what was happening. “Unless you want to deal with that.” The stone sarcophagus shook again, fractured this time. Not just the part that was, ostensibly, the ‘lid’. No, the whole stone tomb cracked.

How strong would something have to be to do that from the inside.

Whatever was in there was in another league - again - even to Ilse.

And that was why they had to get out of her.

Now.

So it was time to end Tara’s fight with Ilse. She scooped up the icon from where it had crushed the body of one of the ghouls – a creature that was still twitching and clawing at the small and immovable object – and this time…

She dropped it on Ilse’s head.

“There.”

That had to be pretty final, right? There was no healing that kind of injury, surely?

Except… not quite.

As she helped Tara up, she noted the problem. The tomb was still - kind of - intact. They had a second or two. Maybe not much more. “I pretty much think the brain is gone after that, but not the body.”

Ilse was still moving. Still struggling to get at her last target, but the ‘weight’ of the icon was holding her down. More likely she’d tear what was left of her head away, from the jaw down, than she’d manage to shift what either of them could easily lift with one hand.

“Looks like it,” Tara replied. “Grab the icon.”

Willow looked down at the spreading goop from Ilse’s shattered brain. It didn’t look quite human. On the inside. “You grab it, she’s the one you were fighting.”

“And you were the one who dropped it on her head!”

“Okay, okay. Fine…” She scooped it up and put it in her bag. To her it couldn’t weight more than five pounds, but to these creatures? Tons. Tons and tons. “But you’re cleaning my bag.”

“Fine, but I thought you said we had to go?”

When a four inch thick piece of the sarcophagus shattered outwards and whizzed past both their faces before smashing into the wall, that pretty much confirmed it.

“I think so, unless you want to fight something that’s been trapped for a few hundred years and staked people out even before he was pissed off?”

“Might be easier now than later - ” Tara started to rationalise, hesitating for a fraction of a second.

“It can’t get out. I mean - it can get out of the tomb, we let it out. But we can’t let it get out of here. Loose in the world. You know that – it’s what you’ve been telling me,” she replied.

“So you do pay attention.”

“Sometimes. Look, we have the icon. And it looks like we have what we need to use it.”

Love. Maybe the words didn’t have to be there. When something like that confirmed it, who needed words?

“Okay - well, I guess, run?!”

She didn’t need to be told twice as the rest of the tomb erupted, exploding outwards in an unlikely shower of stone.

Even with the warning, they – as well as the Nazi’s – froze as a seven foot man rose from what was supposed to have been his burial place. How did she know he was seven foot? Only because he was far taller than anyone she’d ever seen.

Ever.

He was gaunt, but not as ‘obviously dead’ at the ghouls appeared to be, even after all that time. Just not as ‘alive’ as Ilse had looked either.

Before her head was flattened.

Then his eyes fixed on them and… That obviously wasn’t a good thing.

When he spoke, it was like the air rumbled around them. It got into your head, even though you didn’t understand the language that was being spoken. The meaning was plain enough.

Well, what else to do but what the woman she loved had suggested. She just shrugged at him and ran.

“We can’t just let him go!” Tara called after her. Probably only running herself because she didn’t want to face him alone.

“Doll, I really don’t think that’ll be a problem,” Rosenberg replied. “Come on!”

----------------------------

“Doll, I really don’t think that’ll be a problem,” she called back to Tara. “Come on!”

He was coming after them.

This was important because – in terms of Tara doing her duty - they absolutely weren’t ‘letting him go’. Mostly because he wasn’t letting them go. If it became necessary to remind Tara of that she had her argument all ready to go.

Strong as Ilse had undoubtedly been, she couldn’t have smashed her way out of that sarcophagus in a thousand years of trying. So it was important not to be on the receiving end of a blow from someone – something – that could do that.

Running as fast as she could down the corridors of the castle, she was reminded of one of the last times she’d run flat out like this. It was rarer than you’d have thought given their careers. But usually you took a breath for a moment, pausing for obstacles or to shoot at something.

Last time had been - well, boulders had seemed easier… They just followed the line of least resistance and stopped when you came to a choke point.

That wasn’t going to happen this time.

Also, boulders didn’t cheat.

Thinking, for a moment, they’d eluded him and gained some time to try and come up with a plan – a better plan – instead… no.

He/it wasn’t just on Tara’s tail – attractive as that tail was – in fact he was taking shortcuts through the castle, it was his place after all, and ended up coming out ahead of both of them, forcing them to change direction and respective positions in the chase.

What? Couldn’t he just behave like your normal super-strong, impossibly old and yet surprisingly sprightly brute? That would really have been helpful…

When he emerged behind one of the Nazi ghouls – just as she was about to try and shoot it in the head while on the run – claw tipped hands just tore the uniformed storm trooper apart in one swift movement.

Literally apart.

Into… pieces.

And more than two of them.

In that one move.

The ghouls seemed entirely in his power, but equally they had no value to him. They wouldn’t do anything to defend themselves – seemed more like they actually couldn’t – but he didn’t even tolerate their presence in his castle.

In that they were alike. She hated Nazi’s too. Equipped with super-strength and nasty claws like that she might’ve done the same thing.

But he looked like he’d practised.

And it was worth remembering that the army which had - eventually - defeated him, hadn’t killed him.

It’d just sealed him away, weighed down by a religious artefact.

Could the two of them do the same?

“Other way!” she called urgently to Tara, running towards her sometime lover now as she reversed her previous course. Closing the distance rapidly as they both ran as fast as they could, she saw Tara figure out what had happened and then grabbed her sleeve to make her go in the necessary direction. They were together for the first time since the tomb and despite the fact her lungs were already starting to burn, she managed even more words. “He’s sneaky.”

“Good news though,” Tara gasped, clattering into the wall as she stumbled and Willow found it necessary to pull her up, to prevent her falling and stopping altogether. “Thanks. He seems to hate Nazi’s too.”

“Not sure that’s as good as it seems,” she said. Especially since those claws might be their fate too.

And he seemed fixated on them - while the Nazi’s were about as much of a hindrance as a thin curtain.

“Where are we going?”

“I don’t know – we need a moment to – to think.”

It was tough to think when you running flat out, trying to hold a conversation and watching out for monsters that –

Cheated in more than one way.

A chunk of the wall ahead of them exploded as a large fist came through it, barely missing Tara’s head as it followed through. The naval officer was equal to it. This time when she went down it was entirely deliberate and she was rolling sideways and around, only to come up to her knee to smoothly fire three rounds into him.

The creature – the Prince if you will – roared, obviously feeling it but there was no blood. Instead, he seemed confused.

Of course, he’d probably never seen a gun before… Never been shot.

So it didn’t have much effect but –

The fourth shot Tara took was a half second later. When she’d had chance to aim. It caught him in the head. A little to the right of centre, but still in the temple.

With the .45 calibre bullet Tara preferred it should have put a neat hole there and then blown the back of his head out. Brains everywhere.

Goodnight Gracie.

And there was no doubting that - even more than the first three - it was a damn good shot in the circumstances. All four of them had hit the target in potentially lethal zones.

If he’d been a man.

Instead… there was no such explosion of brains and the wound quickly closed over itself like it had never been there. Presumably the bullet was inside, but he didn’t seem to care that he might have a piece of metal rattling around in there, still less about what it should’ve done to his brain, even less resilient a tissue than most of the rest of the human body.

Instead it… stopped him. Not ‘stopped’ as in ‘everything was okay.’ No, this was a very bad man stop. He was calmer, for a moment at least. The Prince spoke to them again. The words were still a mystery, but they were probably about the pistol or the time that had passed or how their efforts were futile. Something that made him sound grander in his own (now bullet laden) head. Most likely it threatened them with inevitability of one kind or another.

Something like that.

That was what guys like him usually did when they thought their enemy was beaten.

Except they weren’t beaten. Not at all.

The bullets did mean that he turned his attention to Tara, who was loading a new clip into her pistol. Well, what sort of girlfriend could have that? Immortal, invulnerable Prince looking my girl? No way. Willow just opened up with the machine pistol, riddling him with bullets for a full four-count.

While she did that, pieces of his clothes and skin were torn. He didn’t move. He didn’t do the bad guy taunt.

And then the hammer snapped back on an empty chamber. At six-hundred rounds a minute, those four seconds were all she could expect and…

It hadn’t done a damned thing.

“Just no more speeches!” she insisted wearily. “Okay?”

Got his attention though, so once again he came after her.

---------------------------------

“Meet back here!” Willow called as she ran in the other direction, still clutching the – now empty – sub-machinegun.

Confused, Tara called after the other woman. They’d only just got back together again and now Rosenberg was charging off? “Meet back here? Why?”

But Willow - and the Prince who was pursuing her - were gone.

“What the hell is the point of that, Rosenberg?” she asked herself.

Sometimes she got the idea that the archaeologist was in it for the adventure. Not the glory, as she’d sometimes been accused of. No, that wasn’t who Willow was. But the adventure? Sure. Why do things the simple way if you could make it dramatic instead?

Exciting.

Some way that would get the juices pumping.

And so it was again. Not that the breather wasn’t appreciated…

Along with a moment to think that went really well along with sufficient oxygen.

She’d held her breath when she was shooting and been flat out sprinting just before that… Now, it came a little easier and she couldn’t even see which way Rosenberg and the Prince had gone when they got to the end of the corridor.

While she could just wait here for Rosenberg to bring him back here – the place was that sort of interlinked maze - she chose to err on the side of caution. Willow might need help. She often did, so she trotted after them and was quickly able to follow the noise of the pursuit rather than their actual trail.

Machine pistol fire – Rosenberg must’ve found another after the first had clicked empty. Roars of frustration. Those strange, rumbling words from a man who should’ve been long dead, wasn’t and – apparently – wasn’t a man either.

Shoot a man in the head and he will die – or at least he’s out of the fight for a long time. It had always been an article of faith for her. Even the ghouls had succumbed to it. But if that man just keeps coming after that… That was a terrifying prospect. Who could stop him then?

And the army of ghouls that presumably would herald him?

Or - if he was moving this fast - follow in his wake.

If this Prince joined the Nazi’s who’d freed him then it would be very, very, bad.

She had no evidence either way, but she didn’t suppose that high explosive would be much more use against him either.

But – though it might take longer – at least then the Nazi’s would be a check on him. They didn’t give up power lightly, that was their whole purpose – to horde it. Take it for themselves and their Fuhrer. Independently… How long before the Prince alone could raise an army of ghouls? They didn’t know how difficult it was to create one but… now he was out, no longer entombed?

That could also be very bad. Even if he had to get through Germany to threaten any of her country’s allies. Let alone the Atlantic.

Could a ghoul walk along the bottom of the ocean and emerge in Manhattan?

Again, they didn’t know. What she did know was that there was no good here. None at all.

Ilse and the Nazi ghouls had been created while he was trapped – somehow. Now he was out what could he do?

The story from the wall of the church here on the mountain? The Dark Prince and his dark army…

Unstoppable until the church had stepped in. And even then they hadn’t killed him. Just sealed him away.

Also, those had been different times. A different church, that still believed in those sorts of things. She wasn’t convinced that the current one would know how to respond at all. It would’ve been a very long time since they’d had to.

That wasn’t going to save anyone.

They had to do this themselves. Take responsibility for what they’d released into the world.

Finally, she caught up with them. Emerging on the balcony of a large dining hall, she was just in time to see Rosenberg swinging from the whip, itself looped around a chandelier that was chained to the ceiling. The whole lighting of the room was swinging with her, candles falling in her wake like rain.

With a flick of her wrist, the whip detached and Rosenberg – not entirely gracefully – hit the ground, rolled and opened up with the machine pistol at the Prince as he leapt down after her.

He didn’t seem to need the whip to limit the influence of gravity.

There was no more effect then than there had been a few minutes ago, though it did stagger him for a moment.

Again.

And – she supposed from her own experience – it felt like you were accomplishing something. Even though you really weren’t doing much at all. She’d felt exactly the same way as Rosenberg must be now.

She didn’t bother to shout a warning about the ghoul in the uniform that was behind the other woman. Instead, it seemed simpler to just shoot it in the head.

Yeah, that was definitely a lot more effective.

Not dead, but definitely down until it could heal… however that happened.

Rosenberg looked up at her, didn’t bother to say anything or wave but Tara could see what was in her hand.

She had taken the icon from her bag.

And that meant she probably had a plan…

Probably.

Or if not a plan, then just desperate.

Could be that.

**********************
-------------------------
If I wanted a little pussy, I've got my own to play with.

Chance in *Chance*
-------------------------
Katharyn
23. Volumey Text
 
Posts: 3794
Topics: 5
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2005 1:23 pm


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.15 of NEW STORY 04/02/1

Postby zampsa19752001 » Tue Apr 01, 2014 9:45 pm

Dibs-y Goodness...

Yay for great update-y goodness... So Ilse-ghoulie lost her head (for the moment at least)... I wonder if getting hit by the Icon makes Old-Fang-Tooth go to sleep-y land...
We Few, We Happy Few, We Band of Buggered

Posting while nude improves your mood...
User avatar
zampsa19752001
9. Gay Now
 
Posts: 922
Joined: Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:51 pm
Location: Kaskinen, Finland. Citizen of Kitopia


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.15 of NEW STORY 04/02/1

Postby Katharyn » Sun Apr 06, 2014 11:37 am

Hey, Zampsa - I think it's safe to say that (this being inspired by Indiana Jones) someone is going to get hit and probably with the icon :)

Thanks!

Katharyn
-------------------------
If I wanted a little pussy, I've got my own to play with.

Chance in *Chance*
-------------------------
Katharyn
23. Volumey Text
 
Posts: 3794
Topics: 5
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2005 1:23 pm


W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.16 of NEW STORY 04/06/14

Postby Katharyn » Sun Apr 06, 2014 11:43 am

Title: The Raiders Chronicles – Tomb of the Vampire Prince - Chapter Sixteen
Author: Katharyn Rosser
Feedback: Absolutely, yes please. That’s why I write for this place, to engage in the discussion about the story.
Spoiler warning: Nope. All new. All original. Set in a universe where Willow Rosenberg takes the place of Indiana Jones. What can I spoil?
Distribution: This story was written for Pens. Pens is its home. No archiving off Different Coloured Pens and the Kitten Board please. No conversion to eBook or other formats please. Enjoy it here.
Summary: Confrontation…
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the copyrights or anything else associated with BTVS or Indiana Jones. All rights lie with the production company, writers etc. I am making no money from this series of stories however all original characters and situations remain my property. There may be occasional use of ‘classic lines’ from the source series/movies or others for which full credit is given to the original writers.
Rating: Occasional, tasteful, adult situations and contextual bad language.
Couples: Tara and Willow forever. 100% FAQ compliant, 100% of the time. Look it up if you don’t know what that means.
Text convention: Use of italics denotes either special emphasis if used for a single or a few words in a sentence OR first person thoughts if used for a whole sentence.
Physics: I’ll say it here… It’s Movie Physics, people. Someone Willow’s size and weight can punch out big, big guys… If you don’t like it, don’t read it. (But please read it)
Notes: I am curious – though we’re past that point now – how many people thought we’d get to meet the Vampire Prince of the title? I’d have thought it was a little like putting Dracula in the title. Once you invoke the whole ‘vampire’ thing, it becomes inevitable. I could’ve just left them fighting Nazi’s who wanted to do a ‘bad thing’ but the title needs some degree of hyperbole to fit with the series it is based on. Also, I have shifted the mythology a little more towards the supernatural than the mystical in this one (with what Tara has been doing with some of her time). But basically, we’re in chase mode now. Because – notwithstanding the top of the train thing – these movies need a chase.
But no monkeys. Or giants ants. Or refrigerators. I promise.
Or Tarzan calls.
Thanks to: Everyone who waited for the long promised action. I’m trying to make it iconic (no pun intended).



She’d learned – in several tough situations over the past few years – that she could always rely on crack shot Tara to get her out of trouble.

If that ghoul had caught her, maybe she could’ve fought it off – even though they were dangerous – but to do so would’ve slowed her down so much that this Prince would’ve been right on top of her.

And then I’d have been squished.

So, good for Tara.

Good for her too.

But she couldn’t exactly yell out what she had in mind. Someone might understand and pass the message on as a warning. She wasn’t sure who since the Nazi’s all had their tongues ripped out apart from Ilse and her head was a squishy mess but –

The bigger problem with communicating the ‘plan’ was that she wasn’t sure – exactly – what the plan was. What she was going to do.

For now, backing away – past the twitching, fallen ghoul Tara had put down with a bullet through the eye – was giving her time to think.

Because the ‘plan’ was definitely kind of vague. More to the point, it was based on superstition and legend. Those had proven accurate often enough that she had some hope of it being valid here, but you never knew when being wrong would turn out fatal… And she really didn’t want Tara Maclay to be disappointed in her.

Of course, she can’t be disappointed if we both get our heads ripped off.

Not for long, anyway.

Worse, though, because I can’t believe even Nazi’s would choose what had happened to them here. Nobody is
that fanatical and if they are… the whole of Europe, maybe the whole world, is in a lot of trouble no matter what.

But to deal with this, to end it, they needed to get back to the tomb. Why? There were all sorts of possible reasons she knew about and it likely wasn’t any of them because… Well, this was ghouls and maybe-vampires and stuff that was outside of what experience or much less the text-books had taught.

Maybe they shouldn’t have even left the tomb, but it had seemed important for their survival at the time. And the Prince was certainly willing to follow her.

At least if she could keep ahead of him. He was showing no sign of tiring either, even though she could feel herself flagging. If he got too close…

I should’ve given the icon to Tara.

This was too dangerous. If he catches me, he has control of the only thing that can hold him.


Of course…

Not just hold him.

Or so she hoped.

The next time the Prince took a shortcut it was - again - right through a wall and he came through it like that wasn’t even there. He seemed eerily able to gauge where she’d be. Or at least only off by a little. But whatever that innate sense of his target was, maybe there was -

Ducking under his grasp – and she was once again thankful he hadn’t bothered to draw the wicked looking sword he’d been buried with – she came back up with the icon in her hand and drove it upwards into his chin.

The effect was…

Unnatural.

That would be a really good word for it.

Another would be ‘surprising.’

And because she over-extended with the punch and found herself off balance, a suitable short phrase for the moment would’ve been – literally – ‘thank God.’

The icon weighed little more than five pounds, inconvenient in its size and shape to try and punch anyone with but not actually that heavy. Even though she’d managed to put as much muscle behind as she could, the impact was out of all proportion to what should’ve happened. And she’d been punching upwards, unable even to put her whole bodyweight behind it.

Not that her weight was considerable anyway.

So, given what happened, there was some mix of the physical and the mystical going on here.

As with the guards she’d crushed, the punch actually staggered him, rocked him back. And it all came from love, Tara flashing in her mind as she struck him that way.

The sense of weight the icon had to him had merged with the ease with which she could wield it and left her something of… Well, she doubted anyone human had ever hit harder.

Taking the moment she was afforded by his stagger, she straightened up and faced him. Weighing the next move, actually a little shocked this was working. She’d emptied three clips at the Prince during the chase and done nothing. Now a half-hearted, ill-delivered punch had actually staggered him.

That mechanic, back in the desert, wouldn’t even have flinched if she’d hit him that way.

But with the icon in her hand, against the Prince? It actually made him stop.

If only for a moment.

Nothing had managed that so far.

When she followed up with a right – without the icon – he barely twitched. But then another left – not her dominant hand – and he went down.

Actually knocked off his feet, sprawling like a third-rate boxer on the canvas.

He wasn’t down for good but… She briefly considered just dropping the icon on his head, but she had this sense that if it was that easy to finish him off then his enemies would never have just buried him with it protecting his tomb.

No, plainly that wasn’t the way to kill him – if there was one. For that… she needed him back in the room he’d been buried in. It was just too perfect not to try to take advantage of.

But now that she could stand toe to toe with him, maybe there was no need to run anymore. No reason to show her back and risk him ripping her spine out when he caught up with her.

She could fight him every step of the way back there. Backing off, in a controlled manner, while they were on much more equal terms.

Was this how he’d been trapped in the tomb in the first place? Some priest duking it out with him? Maybe so, but she was going for a much more final resolution.

Hoping to, at least…

But with some confidence.

Knocking him down had actually refreshed her and – despite the chase and everything that had happened the last few days – she was light on her feet, even bouncing a little. They might not speak the same language, but the gesture she gave him was universal.

‘Come on. Have a go if you think your tough enough.’

She backed up step by step and held the icon in her left hand, she’d considered moving it to the right, but she sucked with the whip in her left. She just wasn’t ambidextrous and like a lion tamer, she was intending to use the whip to keep him at a distance but goaded while she guarded herself in close with the threat of the icon.

It wasn’t her plan to fight him to the death - especially hers - just to take him back where she needed him to go.

While he was open to the challenge – some overly developed sense of manliness in all probability – he’d not anticipated the whip. Three times she caught him with it, leaving welts on his face and hands while he tried to ward it off. Sure, they healed almost right away but they maddened him and gave her a sense of…

Winning.

The fourth time it wrapped around his wrist and she jerked it hard, bringing him stumbling inwards even though he tried to pull her back to him.

It was the surprise that made him falter when it was like she was anchored in place.

Because I have the immovable-something right here in my hand.

When he stumbled she brought the icon laden hand down on the back of his head as he passed, sending him sprawling to the floor once again.

Yeah… now he wasn’t happy. The whip marks were already healed, but she’d knocked him down twice and the noises he was making, words perhaps no one in the world still understood, were clear enough to her.

But she was tiring too. Better than she had any right to expect to be, but still. And all of this wasn’t dealing with the fact she wasn’t killing him very well.

Something that was going to be necessary or - eventually - she’d lose.

Of course now he was mad as all hell too. Mad enough, as he got back to his feet – she’d retreated to make him come after her again – that he tore another ghoul apart with his bare hands.

Which was good, she wouldn’t have wanted to bother with it herself and she didn’t know where Tara was. Didn’t have time to worry about it either. Her girl was a big girl. She could look after herself – and consistently did.

“Come on, big boy,” she said. “Keep on coming.”

Twice more she stung him with the whip, three times more she punched him – though he didn’t go down again.

In exchange… Ow.

His claws finally succeeded in raking across her stomach. They shredded her shirt and were within fractions of an inch of doing the same to her skin and muscle. Even so, the wound burned like fire, as if infection had set in instantly.

Wouldn’t be the first time she’d suffered that way either, but never this fast…

Now she had to guard herself and the whip… The whip was necessary to what she intended, she couldn’t afford to have it torn away from her or snapped but she also didn’t dare switch hands to go more on the offensive. Not even for a moment.

So she was still trying to fight him mostly left handed. Not great.

All that was holding him back from tearing her apart like the ghoul was the threat of a punch and - now she was protecting her stomach - that wasn’t something he continued to feel worried about.

His confidence grew as she withdrew further and by the time they got back to the room where he’d been entombed all that time he was striding forwards after her. Full of deadly purpose.

True to that instruction she’d yelled, Tara was already there and she had to yell out again to stop her from shooting at him.

“NO!”

Don’t distract him, Tara. Not now.

One thing you could say about Tara Maclay though was that she was only a distraction in a very specific way. Like, when you should be getting out of bed and doing other things like eating or bathing.

Not that you couldn’t bathe with her.

Or… eat.

Per her unspoken wishes, Tara almost faded into the background. Letting this play out.

And that was exactly what she needed.

------------------------

As promised, Rosenberg had brought the Prince through the castle, right back to where they’d started out.

In terms of efficiency it was probably lacking… well, something. But compared to the alternative of being very dead, it was doing just fine.

Why it’d been handled things that way, she had no idea. But there was usually a reason. Sometimes it was no better than Rosenberg’s flair for the dramatic, but since Tara knew that her lover wasn’t actively masochistic (just prone and able to take the occasional beating – but she didn’t seek them out for kicks) she could rule out the need to suffer a little as the motivation for delaying whatever she was about to try.

She’d been hurt too, the claw marks across her belly weren’t going to be pretty – the shirt was already stained with three streaks of blood around the slashes – but aside from that it didn’t seem to be flowing with blood – which was good. Nothing serious had been hurt then.

A few punches had – and were - exchanged too, par for the course with this archaeologist. Worked out just fine when it came to goons. Rosenberg had a good chin and because of that she tended to worry less about dodging or blocking than getting the next good punch in for herself.

At her size, that really shouldn’t be the way things worked but… nature was weird.

But against the Prince? Getting tagged was likely to be a death sentence and obviously Rosenberg knew it.

The whip hand, her right, was now clutched across the wounded stomach acting as something like a shield against further damage. Though she didn’t have the whip coiled around her arm to protect it.

Why not? It’d make sense. Unless… she was afraid of the whip being damaged? Sure, Rosenberg liked her whip but she liked life better. So… she needed it.

Another plan?

In the left hand, Willow had the icon. It was being held like some people would a roll of coins - in her fist. Rosenberg was ready to punch above her weight – which wasn’t considerable.

But the Prince was wary of her all the same.

He could take a bullet in the forehead with barely more than a flicker and yet Rosenberg punching him with an icon - which had to be awkward as weapons went - worried him?

So while he was bigger, stronger and more durable they were – strangely – both wary of each other.

Yes, there was certainly something strange about that religious idol. As they’d already seen. As far as the ghouls and the Prince were concerned it was heavy beyond all imagining.

To Willow? Light enough to punch him in the face. Once. Twice. The third blow was blocked and Rosenberg barely ducked under a counter that looked like it should’ve taken her head clean off had it connected.

She’d actually gasped when she’d seen the start of the swing, seen that Rosenberg wasn’t going to be able to get out of the way – or so it had seemed – but then, at the last minute -

And then Rosenberg started to run.

But not straight across the room, like you might’ve expected. The Prince was bigger, heavier, slower to react and took longer to get up to speed. It was almost like Willow wanted to give him that time. That she wanted him to be chasing her hard before –

Was she heading for the pressure plate that sprung the trap? Was she hoping to use that? No – at the last minute Rosenberg veered away from it and good job, because she’d already lodged it shut. There’d be no way to dislodge the watch that had been thrown in there.

So what was she - ?

She realised what was happening at the instant her mind rebelled against it.

No!

Now Rosenberg had changed direction, running towards the end of the room in a long curve. The initial dash had been simply to start to build some speed. Then Willow was beyond the shattered sarcophagus that the Prince had emerged from. The change had given the Prince his chance to cut the distance to her and only the arch of Willow’s back prevented him grabbing her.

But there was only one thing, one way… Running so fast – aiming right for the wall. No. Not the wall. The window.

She could see that Rosenberg wasn’t intending to stop, kicked off from the edge of the tomb and -

“No!”

One arm in front of her face, Willow shot blindly at the window, shattering it and dove headlong at the still collapsing stained glass. Leapt out…

Out.

Into nothing.

Nothing at all.

Not until the rocks.

Hundreds of feet below.

*******************
-------------------------
If I wanted a little pussy, I've got my own to play with.

Chance in *Chance*
-------------------------
Katharyn
23. Volumey Text
 
Posts: 3794
Topics: 5
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2005 1:23 pm


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.16 of NEW STORY 04/06/1

Postby zampsa19752001 » Sun Apr 06, 2014 1:00 pm

Dibs-y Goodness...

Yay for great update-y goodness... I really wonder how Willow is going to save her ass this time...
We Few, We Happy Few, We Band of Buggered

Posting while nude improves your mood...
User avatar
zampsa19752001
9. Gay Now
 
Posts: 922
Joined: Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:51 pm
Location: Kaskinen, Finland. Citizen of Kitopia


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.16 of NEW STORY 04/06/1

Postby Will's redemption » Sun Apr 06, 2014 1:36 pm

Another brilliantly written action scene! If I didn't knew Willow and Tara have to come out of this alive and well (it's the kitten board + Indiana Jones survives everything, too) I would be scared that defeating the vampire prince demanded a self sacrifice as the ultimate act of love. Trusting this isn't going to happen I'm only wondering how Willow will manage to save herself with her trusty whip. And how will she destroy good old Vlad - even if he isn't able to stop himself in time and falls out of the shattered window, the fall won't be able to kill him, will it? What use will the icon be in this moment? I'm sitting at the egde of my seat here...
I really feel for Tara because she has to believe that Willow is going to die and that's probably breaking her heart, even if only for a moment until Willow comes back swinging somehow... But hey, maybe the immense relief that Willow managed to survive again will lead to them finally exchanging "I love you" before the end of this story - a girl can dream...
Will's redemption
7. Teeny Tinkerbell Light
 
Posts: 612
Joined: Sun Jan 19, 2014 7:01 am


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.16 of NEW STORY 04/06/1

Postby Katharyn » Fri Apr 11, 2014 12:24 pm

Hi...

Apologies I've not posted the last part yet but I honestly thought I might never be able to. For the last five days all my links to TKB and Pens have been going to dead links where the domain name was for sale. Google was not my friend and never came here... Eventually I just had to try Xita.Org to get back. Thank goodness!

I will be replying to feedback and posting the final part tomorrow.

Anyone know what happened to the board??? There don't seem to be any threads about it so... is it just me?

Responses to feedback...

Thank you, Zampsa. All is revealed below.

Wills Redemption - Thank you very much! Of course they'll come through it all right :) (As you can now see below) I shant spoil the actual ending by saying too much, or even tease you :)

Tara won't really have much time to 'feel' anything but of course she's worried...

Katharyn
Last edited by Katharyn on Sat Apr 12, 2014 6:15 am, edited 1 time in total.
-------------------------
If I wanted a little pussy, I've got my own to play with.

Chance in *Chance*
-------------------------
Katharyn
23. Volumey Text
 
Posts: 3794
Topics: 5
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2005 1:23 pm


W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.17 of NEW STORY 04/12/14

Postby Katharyn » Sat Apr 12, 2014 6:06 am

Title: The Raiders Chronicles – Tomb of the Vampire Prince - Chapter Seventeen
Author: Katharyn Rosser
Feedback: Absolutely, yes please. That’s why I write for this place, to engage in the discussion about the story.
Spoiler warning: Nope. All new. All original. Set in a universe where Willow Rosenberg takes the place of Indiana Jones. What can I spoil?
Distribution: This story was written for Pens. Pens is its home. No archiving off Different Coloured Pens and the Kitten Board please. No conversion to eBook or other formats please. Enjoy it here.
Summary: Following on from the cliff-hanger…
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the copyrights or anything else associated with BTVS or Indiana Jones. All rights lie with the production company, writers etc. I am making no money from this series of stories however all original characters and situations remain my property. There may be occasional use of ‘classic lines’ from the source series/movies or others for which full credit is given to the original writers.
Rating: Occasional, tasteful, adult situations and contextual bad language.
Couples: Tara and Willow forever. 100% FAQ compliant, 100% of the time. Look it up if you don’t know what that means.
Text convention: Use of italics denotes either special emphasis if used for a single or a few words in a sentence OR first person thoughts if used for a whole sentence.
Physics: I’ll say it here… It’s Movie Physics, people. Someone Willow’s size and weight can punch out big, big guys… If you don’t like it, don’t read it. (But please read it)
Notes: So we’ve had some ‘fairly’ short parts in this story – by my standards – mostly because of the flow. This may well be the final part, but much longer than those short ones. I’m not sure there’s a good way to split it up. Depends – as I write this before redrafting – whether I think anything substantial needs adding.
It’s been a blast being back in this world where things don’t have to be deep or meaningful, where you can just have fun and put the girls in the sort of danger that should make you worry but in this reality is resolved with a punch (or a whip).
It’s also interesting to have this ‘different’ kind of relationship operating. One where there is love, but separation in favour of doing other things – important things. I’m not so certain either of these girls would know how to ‘settle down’ with each other. Oh, they’d be happy, of course, but it’s not who either of them is at this moment.
Maybe later it will be…
You know, possibly after a few more adventures.
Thanks to: Everyone who reaches this point. Stop in. Say hi, even if you’re too shy to leave feedback. It’s just great to know you’re there.



Everything slowed down.

It seemed to anyway. Because she had the opportunity to study Every. Single. Moment.

To know what was coming next.

Understand what it could, would and should mean.

Rosenberg had shot out and then crashed right through the collapsing stained-glass window, through which the morning light was starting to stream.

She’d leapt out into the open air.

In that moment of slow clarity Tara could see her, almost running in the air… legs still pumping even though they were taking her nowhere. It was all just momentum that was driving her forwards.

But the Prince was following. Part-predator – Part-unable-to-stop and either way unable give up his prey. Faster, heavier, seeming like – even in nothingness – he might still catch her on the way down.

Even though physics argued against such an outcome.

Of course there was only one of them who could hope to survive the fall, because the room almost hung, barely supported except for that spire of rock, over nothing at all. The cliff face behind them.

The one who could survive the fall – it wasn’t going to be Rosenberg.

She knew this.

But Willow Rosenberg wasn’t falling… Not yet.

Rosenberg had flicked out with the whip and that was wrapped around some stonework she couldn’t possibly have known for certain would be there but…

The important thing was that it was

And there she hung, pulling herself upwards as soon as the whip caught. Up to try and dodge the grasping claws of the Vampire Prince before gravity took hold of him.

Except he caught her.

In that moment his reflexes were equal to the challenge too and he was hanging from her ankle as time returned to what it had been.

Rosenberg cried out in pain. Maybe it was the added weight and the protests of muscles and ligaments suddenly asked to take an impossible strain. He must weigh more than three hundred pounds. Maybe he was actually hurting her in some other way.

No question, he was going to pull Rosenberg down, down to her death if he stayed there. No could maintain that grip except –

Tara could see that Rosenberg had the handle of the whip wrapped around her wrist and –

It’d probably dislocate her arm – maybe it already had.

Perhaps all that was holding them up was muscles and skin, stretched tight.

Tara hurried to the broken window. Just as with the trap door in the floor, at this height the wind was rushing through it, blowing her hair back where it had come loose. But she was only trying to get to Willow, hanging there…

And she started to let go of the whip with her left hand. The good one.

“No! You keep hold of that – I’ll - ”

“Don’t worry, doll,” Willow almost grunted the last, hated word and then caught a breath. “I’ve got this one.”

Looking downwards, the hanging woman started to kick at the Prince. Every blow she landed was causing her more pain than it did him. But still she did it. Every word punctuated by a kick, or the other way around.

“I.”

Have had.

Enough of.

You!

Grimacing, unable to let go with her right hand if she wanted to, Rosenberg aimed… and on that final word dropped the icon, very carefully, from her other hand into the upturned, open mouth of the creature that was hanging from her.

Maybe mystical physics should’ve meant that the additional weight would’ve torn Willow’s leg off.

Except… somehow it didn’t. Instead, it surpassed his strength to deal with and pulled the Prince from her, sending him tumbling into the emptiness beneath.

Plummeting, you might say.

-------------------------

Everything hurt.

But some things hurt much more than others. Even though getting rid of that – very – dead weight was a massive relief, Willow was certain that she’d done something bad to her shoulder.

Hanging there, far above the rocky ground below, swinging in the wind… Yeah, that was some kind of agony. But she tried to hold it together in front of Tara. Getting weepy wasn’t going to help right now. But…

I could do with a good weep.

Bright side? Still alive to have those kind of thoughts.

Oh, and the Prince had been smashed on the rocks below because… Straight down.

She watched as Tara came right up to the edge, out of the shattered window and then looked down into the mists…

“Some help?” she asked as she continued to swing gently in the wind. It was murder, just murder on her shoulder but – there was another bright side.

Tara was here.

And the Navy didn't leave a girl swinging in the breeze. Not for long.

Holding onto stonework, Tara leaned out and offered a hand to her. It was as far as she could go and she tried to take the pain of swinging back and forth to allow her lover to grab her. But…

No. It was too far. It hurt too much and she didn’t have anything even to kick against to push herself out. Maybe without the dislocation - or whatever she’d done to it - she could’ve pulled herself up and used that to kick off but, like this, not so much.

She needed something to take enough strain that the whip could lose some tension. So she could free it and release the shoulder from its torment. That had to be Tara.

Or something connected to her.

“It’s not enough - your arm,” she gasped. “It’s not.”

Tara knew it, she could see it. But she wasn’t seeing the solution. “There’s nothing,” Tara said, looking around desperately.

“Take your pants off,” she hissed.

“What?”

“Take your pants off.”

“No - I mean - I know what you mean, I’ll go for one of the guards - ” the (almost) topless woman argued.

This was all because she’d already taken her shirt off. Well, now the mission demanded her pants. She cried out in pain to make her point. “Tara - I’m in agony here. Please, just take your damned pants off.”

There wasn’t time for her to try and take the pants off some dead weight, dead guy zombie that was still twitching.

Much as she might want to deny it, Tara understood the objective truth and kicked off her shoes before sitting down and pushing her pants down her legs.

The wind and circumstances conspired that she was hanging facing Tara every second of that.

“Not a word,” Tara said. “Not one, damned word.”

“Hurry up,” Willow gasped, but she could see that her lover - now literally just in her underwear - was going as fast as she could.

Then, clinging onto the edge of the window frame again - cutting herself in the process - Tara hung out once more and with one trouser leg around her wrist threw the other out to her.

It took three attempts before she caught it in her left hand and Tara was able to start to pull her in.

Which hurt. Obviously.

Hurt so much that she’d pretty much forgotten that the object of her desire was saving her life, again, but this time mostly naked.

That was how much it hurt. And some of the words that came out of her mouth…

Well, she’d learned some really foul words in a lot of languages.

And naturally, the pants started to rip as Tara pulled her in and she was able to transfer her weight away from the whip to free it.

“Thanks, doll,” she breathed as she collapsed to the floor of the tomb, just about convinced she wasn’t about to pass out because she hadn’t landed on her shoulder. Tara wasn’t about to let her fall into blessed unconsciousness though. No, because the interrogation had to begin.

Right now. Obviously.

Looking up at her though, all (almost)-naked and heroic? It was easy to believe Tara was some kind of angel.

I’ve never been interrogated by an angel before.


“What did you do?” Tara demanded as she pulled her in and away from the edge, but careful to avoid tugging or banging her injured arm.

“Huh?” she tried to focus, but all she could do was clasp her arm and try to find some spot – any way of holding it – that didn’t hurt so much.

Oh, and she was bleeding. Cuts across the stomach. Great…

“That! What was that?” Tara demanded.

“Sorry, doll. This time - SHIT! - This time I didn’t have time to stop and work out the plan with you.”

Then Tara hit her with her own hat, still carefully avoiding her injured arm.

“You call that a ‘plan’, Rosenberg? That’s not a ‘plan’ – trust me on this. I’ve liberated enough of them from bad people. And I told you a million times. Stop. Calling. Me ‘Doll’!”

“Sure… Tara.”

It was easy to be overwhelmed by the anger, especially while she was in so much pain. But she knew exactly where it was all coming from. From the very quality that had made them the ones who had to come here.

The one that made them a threat to the Prince they’d just sent tumbling into the depths below.

And that bright point did - just about - cut through the hurt.

“Rosenberg?”

“Yeah?”

“You know what I have to do,” Tara said, looking at her – very concerned.

“Is it a plan?” she gasped as Tara carefully held her injured arm and made her roll over onto the opposite side.

“It’s the only one. Sorry.”

Tara shoved, she heard someone scream and was fairly sure it was her. Then she passed out.

----------------------

“You’re sure you’re okay to move?”

“Yes, it’s still a good sling,” Willow admitted even though her first instinct, using Tara’s bra, had proven not to be the way they’d gone. And not having her arm popped out of its socket was so much better than when it had been.

Commander Maclay did good work whether she was fully clothed or not.

“I’m talking about you passing out,” Tara chided her, now - at least partially - covered.

“Oh, that. It was mostly just the pain.”

“I’m sorry.” Tara’s apologies really hadn’t stopped since she’d pushed her arm back into its socket. Not for doing that, but for hurting her so badly she’d passed out.

Or perhaps it was the ‘scream like a little girl’ Tara regretted causing.

Or hearing.

She didn’t remember it herself, but to hear her tell it, it sounded like it might’ve taken some of the mystery away. But, at the end of the day, she was what she was. Ira Rosenberg’s little girl who hated snakes and felt pain just as keenly as anyone else. Sure, she had a high threshold but when she did scream, it was absolutely like a little girl.

She was fine with that too. There was no shame in it. Not many people had ever made her scream and Tara usually had other, gentler ways.

No, not always ‘gentler’ but definitely much more attractive.

“We’re a long way from a hospital.”

“Stop fussing, d – Tara.”

Tara smiled. “How long do you think you can keep that going?”

“Not calling you doll? I’ll try for as long as I can. But like I said, good sling. If we find a bottle of something I’ll be set.”

And so they’d proceeded, looking around the place. Whether it was because the Prince had fallen or they’d just got to them all the ghouls already, they hadn’t met anyone they had to worry about while they’d been going through the castle.

“What do you think happened to the rest of them?” Tara asked.

“You’d know better than I,” she pointed out. “All of this… this is not what I do.”

She prodded at the remains of what had been one of the ghouls. The clothes were all Nazi, but the body was… just gone. Seeing one or two you’d have bet on the already leathery skin collapsing around the bones for all, but instead some of them had turned to little more than dust (a few with a bullet resting where the head would’ve been) while others were… goopier.

But – no matter what - all of them were at last… gone. No more twitching.

They’d made their way through the castle, passing some that they’d put down (if not killed) in their fights and others whose fates somehow seemed tied to that of the now departed Prince.

Or at least departed from the castle. Was that all it took? Had there really been all that much to worry about if that was what was needed to end them? Cut off the head and the body would falter?

Figuratively at least.

They’d probably never know how it worked and what had ended them.

But they were intent on finding the body of the Prince all the same.

Just to make sure that he was gone.

And they found him too. The sun was already rising from behind the mountains whereas it had just been breaking through them when he fell. Twenty miles away the sun would’ve been obvious for an hour or more, but here with the sharp, jutting peaks it had stayed hidden and some long shadows would still be cast until deeper into the morning.

But there was still light, more than enough to see by.

Which was how they found him.

Vlad Tepes – or one of his descendants, they weren’t entirely clear on that – impaled on one of his own, giant stakes. A post as thick as her thigh driven through his chest where he’d fallen. Was that irony?

Definitely bad luck. From his point of view.

While his velocity might’ve maxed out at the limit of these things, the weight of the icon had pulled him all the way down it. More than six feet of it extended above his chest, leaving him two feet off the ground, bent back on himself by the icon.

“Oh,” Tara said when she saw what she was looking at.

“Yeah. Ouch.”

“You want to see ‘ouch’ just wait a moment,” Tara said. She could see that Willow was – momentarily – confused. But then she realised that they were waiting for the sunlight.

“A moment?”

“Or a few.”

The sun was creeping, just creeping from behind – and around – one of the peaks until it reached that critical moment where it couldn’t be held back any longer. Even though they were waiting for it, and for much more than a moment, the final breaking of the light was a surprise.

Too much anticipation.

And then – even though there seemed no way he could be alive or at least comprehend anything – they were waiting for a reaction.

His head was half smashed open and one eye had popped out entirely. But both of them somehow focused just at the moment that the sun crossed his flesh and then he started to writhe and fight and struggle.

It wasn’t pain that drove his cries. If there were screams, they were of anger, frustration and hatred.

But awful as that was, they both stayed there and watched it all as he burned to a crisp.

Even then, when the screams had burned away with his lungs and throat they stayed. When the movement had stopped they still stayed. Watching. Watching until he collapsed into ashes and then the ashes blew away.

Only then did she reach to she pick up the icon wincing as the shift in weight tugged on the abused muscles around her shoulder.

“No,” Tara said.

“I was hired to recover it,” she pointed out.

“I don’t think anyone at the club’s going to pay you.”

“Oh, I figured that the government might have an interest in it?”

Tara smiled. “I suppose they might have… but let me.”

She left it so Tara could do just that.

I must be feeling better, watching her bend over in just shoes and underwear?

Such is the healing power of Tara Maclay.


“We have to walk down this mountain now?” she guessed.

“Yeah. You’re really going to make me walk down there in just my brassiere?” After the pants tore saving her life and the shirt was firmly tied around that barred window they’d really struggled to find anything else. Neither of them wanted goopy/ghoul-dusty, Nazi clothes.

So… Well…

“Suns up,” she said. “It’s going to be a nice day. You’ll be fine.”

“Very noble.”

“Look, we can go straight down the road to the village. None of that climbing or caving.”

“Great, yeah. I can arrive back there basically naked. What will they think we were doing? What will Dottie think?”

“I’m wounded and it’s chilly,” she explained.

“I know it’s chilly,” Tara said, hugging herself.

“I didn’t make you take your brassiere off, did I? And you wouldn’t ask me to try and take my jacket off now would you?”

“I guess it would hurt,” Tara said.

“Lots.”

“I’m starting to think there’s another reason you call me ‘doll’.”

“What?”

“Trust me, I know what you did with your dolls once you were old enough.”

“That’s just so - Okay… it’s true.”

--------------------------

Making it down the mountain hadn’t been nearly so hard as getting up there. As expected they’d only needed to find the track-cum-road down from the castle and then just followed it. But any time after sunrise, in a place like this, there’d been no way to get into town without being seen.

The surprise people showed was obvious.

And only a little of it was that she hadn’t been ‘properly dressed’ or even just ‘dressed’ by most people’s definition of the word.

Shoes. Socks. Underwear.

Thick socks, but still…

Thank you, Rosenberg. You perv.

Knowing Rosenberg held ulterior motives for getting out of her clothes didn’t change the fact that - at those precise moments - she hadn’t been able to come up with any better ideas.

And so… mostly undressed.

The rest of the obvious surprise had undoubtedly been due to the fact that the villagers didn’t expect people to come back down that road. Or if you did then… you should be avoided. It was there that, possibly, the underdressed part had probably helped. Because who could take her seriously as a ghoul or a vampire or whatever those things had been?

Technically, of course, they’d never gone up the road – but these people weren’t to know that. They just thought it was a miracle that they’d survived the castle.

And, due to the language difficulties, there were precious few people here they could tell what had actually happened. That they could assure that there wouldn’t be some sort of terrible, dark retribution boiling down from the castle above the village.

One of those people they could talk to had different concerns.

“So… really, when you think about it,” Dottie said, visibly thinking hard, “this wasn’t the weapon at all?”

The girl had the icon in her hands and was turning it over and over. She kept weighing it too. Testing it, as if it suddenly might weigh more than a car.

Or a house.

But no. In their hands, it was still less than five pounds. That wasn’t changing. It had simply had a different effect on evil…

And despite the fantastic nature of their story, Dottie had absolutely accepted what had been said as well. Accepted and had a few thoughts, a different perspective that was actually surprising her.

She’d never ever thought Dottie was ‘silly’ or even ‘naïve.’ She’d never have put her in that club if she had, but events had really proven that wasn’t the case. No, Dottie was simply… inexperienced. But she’d managed the Carpathian village equivalent of ‘stay in the car’ with dignity and without getting herself into trouble.

Which was one better than Rosenberg had ever done.

All in all, she had to approve.

“What do you mean?” Tara asked the girl.

Meanwhile, Rosenberg was pretending to be asleep. She had her hat pulled down over her eyes, but there was no way that she could – truly – be asleep. The train they’d waited most of the day for was just too loud. Their compartment was right over a set of wheels and every time it went over a join between the rails the doors, windows and even the floor shook.

Oh, and they did too.

No, Rosenberg wasn’t asleep. There was the train and then with her arm still causing her that much pain when it was jostled, no one could.

“Well, you wouldn’t even have been able to move it unless it was an act of love. Right?”

“That’s what they say,” she acknowledged, wondering where Dottie was going.

“So… Doctor Rosenberg loves you?” It sounded like the sort of question she’d been building up to for a few miles.

“So she says,” Tara said, glancing at the woman in question and wondering if it would get a response. Even a sardonic one. No… Rosenberg was still pretending to be asleep.

“But what did you say?” Dottie asked.

“Oh, I told her that I know.”

“You don’t love her then?” the girl followed up. “I mean, you – it doesn’t seem like you’re just… you know. Doing it. Even when you come back from an adventure in nothing but your underwear.”

“And shoes. And socks,” Tara pointed out. “Which we agreed not to talk about anymore. And we’re not just ‘doing it’.” Absolutely, she agreed with Dottie. Even though once they got back to Paris, once they dropped Dottie off and had her safe, she and Rosenberg might well not emerge from her apartment for several days. As long as that arm healed up enough to take more than a jostle.

It might take a couple of those days to get beyond the bedroom.

That was their usual pattern, she and Rosenberg. They met up. They talked. They connected along the way. They faced the danger, came out on top and then they went to bed for as long as either of them could bear.

By now… they could ‘bear’ quite a long time. Recently re-socketed arms not withstanding.

And then they went their separate ways, pulled apart by duty and careers. Quite often by the needs of their country. The needs of the free world, if you wanted to take the big picture view.

Yes, they parted. But they did it knowing there would always be a next time.

“So… you love her?”

“I didn’t say that,” Tara answered, not having missed the fractional reaction from Rosenberg. It was the reaction she was looking for. Just to prove the woman was awake.

“You didn’t not say it, either,” Dottie said.

“You are right about that.”

“You know what I think?” Dottie asked, smug as anything.

“I think you’re about to tell me,” Tara said, giving the girl a smile. She was cute when she was like this. It was easy to see how – despite her ‘inexperience’ – plenty of young women her own age just seemed to end up falling into her arms. “Right?”

Dottie smiled back, they really were at ease now. She trusted this girl from the small town who’d willingly accompanied them on a couple of adventures but knew when to keep herself out of the way.

When to obey orders too.

She was much better at that than Elizabeth Summers who kept needing rescuing before eloping with Faith Lehane. The one thing Summers had going for her was a mean right hook.

Holding your drink wasn’t a talent, so far as she was concerned. It just led to destructive behaviour.

Dottie was just… easier. Better.

“I suppose I am. Well, here it is. I might’ve built it up too much though.”

“No, go on,” she encouraged.

“I think – I think that one person can’t be in love on their own.”

Tara sat back, considered just how profound that sounded in her current state of exhaustion. Probably more than it merited and on the surface it seemed kind of judgemental about all sorts of people’s relationships – even if the girl was only really talking about her and Willow.

But before she could think much more, Dottie thought she needed to explain.

“Seems to me like, if it’s all one sided then it’s obsession, right?” Dottie asked.

“Or maybe a crush?” Tara countered.

“You knew?”

She nodded. “Willow’s been rubbing my nose in it every chance she got.”

“We were talking about a crush,” Dottie pointed out, grinning.

“Ha ha. I didn’t mind,” Tara said. “I guess it was even kind of flattering in a weird way.”

Blushing deeply, Dottie took a breath before she blurted the rest out. “I admire you, Commander. You’re not what everyone says you’re supposed to be. Not at all. I guess that… I guess it was a little dazzling.”

“Part of not being what people expect you to be is knowing when to politely ignore something once you know it exists. I’m just glad you didn’t throw yourself at me.”

Dottie’s lips thinned. “I kind of thought I was. Before I knew about Doctor Rosenberg. But… then you took me to that club and, that really opened my eyes.”

“Not just your eyes, kid,” the supposedly sleeping Willow said from under her hat.

Dottie flushed even brighter red and she started to mumble something that might’ve resembled an excuse, but Willow wasn’t having that.

“No. You’re right about Tara,” Rosenberg said. “She isn’t what anyone expects – not even me. I was sure – I was absolutely certain that when I told her I loved her, she’d say it right back to me. That’s her, that’s who she is. But she didn’t.”

“I didn’t need to, did I?” Tara asked.

Rosenberg didn’t answer her, at least not directly “Kid, you could do worse than look up to her. You could look up to me, for example. That’d be worse. But, if you did throw yourself at her, you and I would end up having words.”

“I’m past that,” Dottie said. “Now… I just really admire her.”

“I’m sitting right here,” Tara observed. On the one hand it was a relief that her friend wasn’t thinking about her that way, but on the other something of a disappointment that anyone could get over her that quickly.

“But I’m not into her, you know?” Dottie continued.

“Because?”

“She’s in love with you,” Dottie said to Rosenberg.

“I think I get to be the one who says that,” Tara told them. But neither of them were – apparently - listening to her.

Of course, that just meant she was being teased by both of them. Which certainly wasn’t what she’d had in mind…

“And – like I was saying – one person can’t be in love with someone who doesn’t feel it too. I never thought I was – by the way – Commander Maclay was just like… well, there weren’t many people like me – like us – back home. Or none, really. It was something – my whole world would’ve been very different, staying home. Then I came here and - ”

“There she was.”

“But really,” Dottie said, “it was the world that was here. Not her. I mean, when we went to that club… I had no idea that there were so many people like me. I didn’t think I was even like a lot of the women in that club but… I was. And places like that – I – I didn’t feel alone anymore.”

“And also, you had fun?” Rosenberg asked, just about managing to keep her voice level, but she could tell it was a struggle for her.

“Well, it was like another job, on top of my real one,” Dottie explained. “But in the best place in the world. Oh my goodness! Even if I was just a coat-check girl but… look at whose coats I was checking. Do you – do you - Commander, do you think the embassy would let me keep that job?”

“Really?” Tara asked. “That’s what you’re asking after all this?”

“Well… I can’t afford to be a member,” Dottie said. “But… I can be a coat check.”

“And hang out with the members after your shift?” Willow asked.

“They said I could,” Dottie said. “But now I realise that was Ilse and she was a Nazi and you killed her so that might not count for much – and I missed a bunch of shifts – and – and - ”

“You’re babbling, kid,” Rosenberg said.

Tara looked at the hat, since it was as close to Willow’s eyes as she could get. The kid was babbling? She was pretty capable of that herself. When she put her mind to it.

“I think I’d like to go back. One thing I’ve realised is that I’ve got a whole lot of people not to be in love with,” Dottie said with a shy grin. “I need to make up for lost time, before someone comes along and sweeps me off my feet. You know, like you two.”

“And who do you think swept who off her feet?” Rosenberg asked.

“Be careful how you answer that,” Tara warned her.

Dottie paused, thought about that. “I’d have said it was you, Doctor Rosenberg.”

Willow seemed happy about that, but Dottie wasn’t done.

“But…”

“But? What do you mean ‘but’? I absolutely swept her off her feet. Literally, actually – remember that Tara? The whole giant statue thing? The whip?”

“But,” Dottie continued. “You also said you loved her first, I think – the one sweeping, well, you wouldn’t say that.”

“Maybe I’m just a romantic,” Rosenberg said, discomforted. “A romantic sweeper.”

“Maybe, but I think the Commander’s playing it cool,” Dottie said, looking at her. “Getting what she wants. Playing the long game.”

Tara looked over at Willow, who was looking right back at her and wondering if that maybe that was how it had gone down. That what she thought had been happening, actually… hadn’t.

Rosenberg had thought everything was happening one way, her way and now that the (supposed) innocence of Dottie had questioned it that assumption… Well, she would wonder. Willow was very certain of who she was.

But honestly – to herself at least – there wasn’t a ‘game’. There never had been. There’d always just been what felt right at the time. She was a big believer in following what felt right. Without putting too much additional pressure on things.

Just because she’d known the very first time she and Willow Rosenberg had a romantic encounter – even before that actually – they’d also known how hard it would be to keep their lives, duties and careers going alongside what they knew they were going to be.

Saying something like ‘love’ – self-evident in many ways – would only have put pressure on them to be something they weren’t able to be. Not in this crazy world that they were moving through.

At least that was how it felt.

Was that the ‘long game’?

“Nah…”

“Looks like it to me,” Dottie countered. “But what do I know? Please don’t whip me.”

“Whip you?” Rosenberg asked, shocked. Like it had never occurred to her.

“Unless, like, you wanted to.”

“What?!” This time it was her time to be shocked. Dottie was supposed to have a crush on her and now she said that to Rosenberg?

Except… she was only playing with them. “I’m just kidding,” Dottie said.

“You’re a dark horse, Dottie,” Rosenberg said. “I just realised, but you really are.”

The girl smiled, just a little smug. “Darker than you think.”

“What do you mean?”

“Well… while you were killing ghouls and vampires and things up at that castle?”

What did you do?” Tara asked.

“The better question might be ‘who’,” Rosenberg said.

“Huh?”

“She did the girl who saw us off at the station? I thought she had a strange smile.”

“She’s just happy,” Dottie said, undeniably smug. But she’d probably earned it.

“Wait – you don’t even speak the language! Or did she - ”

“No,” Dottie interrupted. “She didn’t.” And the girl couldn’t stop herself grinning from ear to ear.

And that was why she was smug.

Truth be told, that was pretty impressive. ‘Connecting’ with someone when you couldn’t even speak the same language. That was… beyond impressive.

“Honey,” Rosenberg said, “you’re going to be wasted as a coat check girl.” Then she pulled her hat back down and at least pretended to be asleep again.

Tara thought about saying something, Dottie looked as if she expected her to. But then she closed her mouth.

There really wasn’t anything she could say. But she had to ask. It was something she just had to know.

“Really? Without saying anything?”

“I guess love just has its own language,” Dottie said.

Perhaps. But when it was obviously just the one night – when you both knew you weren’t ever coming back - she wasn’t sure you could call that ‘love’. No. That was something else. Not worse, but definitely not better.

Damn.

Rosenberg was right about Dottie. She was going to be wasted as a coat check girl.

Or a typist.

-------------------

“So I’ve got you all to myself?” Willow asked, aiming to loop her arm through Tara’s.

It was something she liked to do when Tara was in uniform. Having this girl on her arm was always nice, but having her on her arm in uniform? That was a genuine privilege.

It wasn’t so much showing Tara off as being shown off by her.

She hadn’t come into the embassy. Government frustrated her. She’d had enough experience with Tara’s bosses – from the Secretary of the Navy on down through the functionaries who kept everything going and buried half the world in paper – to understand that she simply wasn’t suited to it.

University had seemed bad, but compared to the government? Child’s play.

Maybe Romania had been rough. But Tara was still looking at days or weeks of paperwork just to close that matter off.

Never mind even if there was another crisis she should be solving. The paperwork monster must be served. Someone ought to look to slay it something.

“You have,” Tara said, offering her arm more fully. “All to yourself.”

“Hey, I’m the one in the pants here.”

“We don’t go for that role based rubbish,” Tara replied.

And that was true enough. From the outside plenty of people who knew them both made assumptions about them that simply weren’t warranted. Tara looked great in uniform and – more often than not – that featured a skirt. Tara was also much the more likely to be caught wearing a dress.

On the other hand, she was rarely seen out of either her suit or her field gear. She wore ‘men’s’ hats because they were practical for jungles as well as the rain, like today. They didn’t care about it though. The rain was light and it was warm and the sun was emerging from behind a cloud, casting a rainbow that wouldn’t last long as they headed down towards the Seine.

Too many people who never had cause to think about it liked to assume she was the ‘man’, entirely missing the point that being a lesbian was all about there being no men involved at all.

Dottie, she was sure, could’ve clued them in. The girl was… She had an appetite that, honestly, was something to do with youth. Or being hidden away in that small town or… Maybe she just had an appetite and needed to meet the right girl.

Even Lehane had settled down eventually.

Course that was with entirely the wrong woman but… The point was that it could happen. Even a (newly) legendary Lotharia like Dottie who could charm a girl into bed without words could meet the right woman.

But Tara too was operating in a macho world, one that wouldn’t even admit that it needed her. That was why she was – officially – a typist.

And it was why Commander Tara Maclay had just submitted a report, then attended an interview to clarify some points and now the result would be being encoded and sent to the desk of the Secretary of the Navy. Informing him that she – with some help – might well have saved a good portion of Europe from being overrun by Nazi ghouls.

A typical day in the Navy? Probably not. They’d probably never had a message like that before. All the paperwork that would follow couldn’t say more than that.

But most important, whether that had been a risk or not, she’d stopped Hitler from getting what he wanted. And that had to be an end in itself. Even if war consumed this continent, it wouldn’t be fought with the Prince of Carpathia – the Dark Prince – at it’s head.

She did wonder whether the role of ‘love’ had been mentioned. Not because of any need to hide or deny it, but just because she couldn’t imagine it would go over very well in a government report. Vampires and ghouls and religious icons, certainly – but ‘love’? Perhaps that had never been in a Navy report either?

Certainly not in that context.

They couldn’t have done any of it had they not been in love.

‘Role based rubbish’ though. That was what Tara had said.

“It’s true,” she admitted. “We really don’t do that role thing. When we’re rolling around so much, who can tell whose on top?”

“Exactly,” Tara said, sighing as pulled her closer.

“So, did it all go okay?”

“They sent Army Intelligence,” Tara confided.

“Ah.”

“They’re not exactly understanding when it comes to why two typists saved the world.”

“I can see why that would be confusing to them. And this time there were two typists.”

“Exactly. And they really hated the parts about the civilian involvement.”

Willow grinned. “Good.”

“I know. But it probably didn’t help that I outranked them too either.”

“Ohh, yeah they’d hate that. Stupid Army Intelligence.”

“They did.”

“So, what you’re really saying is that you had fun?” Willow asked.

“More than I’d have thought,” the other woman admitted.

Not many people thought it to look at her, but Tara Maclay had a truly wicked sense of humour. It was just very deeply buried. Once you got to down there though… watch out.

“And they had no trouble believing it? We didn’t have much by way of proof. Just the icon and that’s not exactly clear.”

“Oh, they got it, they’re with the Programme,” Tara said.

“What’s ‘the Programme’?” It sounded like it had a capital P.

“I can’t say.”

“But you just - ”

“Classified.”

“But - ”

“If you were working for ‘the Programme’, that would be something else,” Tara said. “Then I could tell you but…” She shrugged.

“I have a job - ”

“If you were working for the Programme, I wouldn’t have to deny that there was any cross-government body that was working to frustrate the hell out of the Nazi’s and dealing with every strange thing that came along.”

“Oh, well, shame I’m not working for them then,” Willow said. “So that I’d know that much at least.”

“If you’d be interested in some consultancy though…?”

“They did agree to pay me, right?”

“Mercenary.” Tara pressed a whole roll of US Dollars into her pocket. Of course, they might be one dollar bills…

If the US Government was being cheap.

“A girl’s got to eat, you know.”

“Well, I was hoping you would feel that way.”

Wicked. Sense. Of. Humour.

“And just how many days leave have you got?” Willow asked.

“I have to report to the Navy Yard in Washington next Wednesday,” she said.

More than a week then. Well, that was fine. A few days here and then a cabin on a liner? “Maybe I could keep you company on your trip?”

“I can’t promise I’ll be hanging around Washington,” Tara reminded her.

“That’s fine, we’ve never made promises.” For one thing she had to get back to the university anyway. But for another, the world was getting deeper and deeper into trouble. Tara was convinced war was coming, as were all her bosses. It was a sobering thought, but they’d get through that the same way they got through the process of trying to avoid it.

By working together when they could and by being… who they were.

“I will though, if you want,” Tara offered.

“What do you mean?”

“There’s one promise I can make.” They stopped on the bridge, looking at each other as the sun finally overcame the light rain. Neither of them was looking at the water. Just each other. “I can say it.”

“I already know it,” Willow said. “You don’t need to say a word.”

“But you want me to. I’ll say it right now.”

“I have a better idea,” Willow said, pressing a finger to her lips to stop her being premature about it.

“Oh?”

“Why don’t you see how long you can not say it,” Willow said. “Considering what I have planned for you… That’ll be the real challenge.”

“Oh, I do like a challenge,” Tara admitted. “And you always are.”

“Me?”

“You.”

“If you say so,” Willow said. Then asked something she’d been building up to for a while. “By the way, have you still got that corset you were wearing at the club?”

“No. I mean – yes, but I’m not - ”

“Oh, come on.”

“No. Have you ever worn a corset? No, of course you haven’t. Let me tell you it’s not exactly comfortable and I don’t just mean how it pulls everything in and what it doesn’t pull in it pushes up.”

“I’ll be grateful,” she offered. Yes, it was the ‘up’ that she was interested in.

How grateful?” Tara asked after a few moments.

“Oh, probably ‘very’. Certainly grateful enough you should probably want to get back to that apartment of yours. As soon as possible.”

“Hmm. That grateful, huh?”

“So?”

“I’ll think about it.”

“You do that.”

“On the way.”

“If you’re sure the arm’s up to it?”

“You’ll see how ‘up to it’ it is.”

“Promises, promises.”

----------------------------

Epilogue

The man - whose name definitely wasn’t Wells despite the name on his ID badge - carefully boxed up the small item that had been sent through from Paris.

He’d worked here for many years and had been quite content with that. However recently things had changed.

Recently he’d been inducted into The Programme when he’d started to notice that items that had – previously – simply been deposited with him had started to be checked out much more frequently. Asking questions was never encouraged, but because it had offended his sense of order he had and…

He’d always understood something - or enough - of the nature of the things that he was storing for the people in Washington. People who wanted complete security and had – previously – left them there to gather dust to ensure it.

Buried at the bottom of a bureaucracy just as surely as they were physically in the backend of beyond.

Now… The world was changing. He read newspapers. He recognised it. Certain items were never touched, so buried in that bureaucracy that he might be one of the few people on the planet who knew they even existed. But some of the others were evidently proving useful.

This was a deposit. One, he suspected, was more likely to be required one day than not.

Why?

He didn’t know what it was. He didn’t need to. Or at least not why it was unique enough to earn a place here. But it was small, portable and had come from Eastern Europe. These were the facts that gave it away. The way the world was looking, it was hardly surprising that someone – someone who knew what they had here – was willing to make use of those assets rather than just lock them away forever.

Otherwise why keep them at all? Why not just melt this down?

Someone was afraid it might be needed one day.

There was still a place for new acquisitions. Always a place here.

Even if he had to wonder what a small, religious icon, could possibly have accomplished for anyone.

It wasn’t his place to wonder what the story behind this was.

His place was just to pack, store and document.

For the bureaucracy.


THE END

*******************

Authors note: Why leave that story tantalising for the future? Well, because although I am not exactly happy with the first draft of this story, if it does see the light of day then the next advance of time will see Tara and Willow during wartime and that’s something that has never been explored even in the Indiana Jones movies. But ‘The Programme’ sets up the possibility of something vaguely related, that they could be doing during wartime… Whether that can be ‘fun’ in the way of these stories and the movies, I’m not so sure.

So will I come back to it? I don’t know. I had this story in my head since the end of the original Raiders and it didn’t work out exactly as I thought it would because the original version would’ve been much longer, along the lines of Coulda Woulda Shoulda in length (well, maybe half that – ‘just’ Lord of the Rings length LOL) but I wanted to limit it to Nanowrimo length and the sacrifices I made for that (without even reaching the full 50K) were quite substantial. Who knows what redraft will add though… (For the record I am much happier with the redraft than the original!)

Willow and Tara will definitely return from my keyboard at some point, but whether they will ever return as Commander Maclay and Doctor Rosenberg is another question…

I find it tough to be objective on this, it feels a little like a bit of the poor relation to the Raiders version from last year. But then that was based on a masterpiece with me just putting it into my words. This… less of the masterpiece, but perhaps more character development and touches that – I think – locals hereabouts will enjoy.

So, I guess I don’t know.

What do you think?

Katharyn - UK - 2013/14

***************************
-------------------------
If I wanted a little pussy, I've got my own to play with.

Chance in *Chance*
-------------------------
Katharyn
23. Volumey Text
 
Posts: 3794
Topics: 5
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2005 1:23 pm


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.17 of NEW STORY 04/12/1

Postby zampsa19752001 » Sat Apr 12, 2014 9:25 am

Dibs-y Goodness...

Yay for excellent update-y goodness... Nice way to end the story... I definately would love to read more adventures of Commander Maclay, Professor Rosenberg and Dottie..
We Few, We Happy Few, We Band of Buggered

Posting while nude improves your mood...
User avatar
zampsa19752001
9. Gay Now
 
Posts: 922
Joined: Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:51 pm
Location: Kaskinen, Finland. Citizen of Kitopia


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.17 of NEW STORY 04/12/1

Postby loislane1 » Tue Apr 15, 2014 7:30 pm

First my sincere apologies for being MIA over the past couple weeks. Work, school, and life did not leave much time for relaxation and reading. My dissertation has well and truly begun and I vacillate between being thrilled, overwhelmed, hopeful, and terrified of the work and possibilities before me. That being said, I enjoyed the latest adventure of Commander Maclay and Professor Rosenberg. The action was quick and exciting with that jump out the window at the end and the humorous moments actually had me chuckling out loud a few times. I would be happy to read a future story especially after you sort of left us hanging there.
On that note, I know you write other non-W/T items as well and would love to read some of that as you have an interesting style and voice that holds my attention and that I find very enjoyable. So thank you for another fun story and as always I look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
-H.
Sometimes it feels like we are running headlong through the woods on a dark cloudy night from monsters we can't see towards a destination we don't know.
User avatar
loislane1
3. Flaming O
 
Posts: 75
Topics: 1
Joined: Thu Oct 10, 2013 10:32 am
Location: North Carolina


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.17 of NEW STORY 04/12/1

Postby Katharyn » Fri Apr 18, 2014 6:30 am

Zampsa - Final dibs! Congrats.

I think you will probably get to see a conclusion to this trilogy, though the inclusion of Dottie isn't certain but... I've already written a prologue for the next part.

Probably not until later in the year though. Time to take a break from T/W after doing (another) 2 year stretch writing them nearly every day :)

Thanks

Loislane - Don't apologise for life! Esp not for good stuff.

The window jump really did help I think. It's true Saturday Matinee type stuff - which was what George Lucas wanted Indiana Jones to be (I am just about old enough to remember re-runs of that stuff before we got betetr TV in this country!) So happy it worked for you. I had my doubts after first draft...

In terms of other work, well... I am currently embarking on a fantasy story (assuming I find more than the setting and the characters) which would probably be a trilogy if I ever tried to get it published. You know, a short story in terms of what I write for Pens ;)

Thanks so much... Keep an eye out for more here.

Katharyn
-------------------------
If I wanted a little pussy, I've got my own to play with.

Chance in *Chance*
-------------------------
Katharyn
23. Volumey Text
 
Posts: 3794
Topics: 5
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2005 1:23 pm


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.17 of NEW STORY 04/12/1

Postby willowtaralover » Tue Apr 29, 2014 10:10 am

Hey there Katharyn I've only just discovered this new Indiana Rosenberg!!!! Willow Jones!!!!!! story but so far I'm totally loving it. The pastiche of Indy going into the Obi Wan nightclub with Willow going into the La Chelle Rose (I think) lesbian bar, Tara wearing a very flattering corset showing off her very ample attributes and the references to ToD and I think the Last Crusade are fun and I'm really enjoying the character of Dottie. I especially like the fact that she asked the one main question, why it was that Tara knew all about ghouls and what they were and Willow, is reputed to be an expert on the supernatural didn't. I'm up to where they have just arrived at the rail station in Germany, is it Berlin? Looking forward to reading the rest of this particular adventure.
willowtaralover
8. Vixen
 
Posts: 729
Topics: 22
Joined: Thu Dec 24, 2009 11:38 am


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.17 of NEW STORY 04/12/1

Postby willowtaralover » Tue Apr 29, 2014 10:17 am

PS You've not seen Warehouse 13?????? It is a pretty fun show with a couple of nice leads who are being kept platonic but close friends which I like in a show. They're currently showing the final season on Syfy on a tuesday evening at nine, I don't know if they have any of the previous seasons on lovefilm or netflix but again they are repeating the earlier shows in the afternoons again on Syfy. I can highly recommend this show as a fun and enjoyable hour of televisual entertainment.
willowtaralover
8. Vixen
 
Posts: 729
Topics: 22
Joined: Thu Dec 24, 2009 11:38 am


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.17 of NEW STORY 04/12/1

Postby Katharyn » Tue Apr 29, 2014 10:39 am

Heya Willowtaralover - Welcome :)

It was a story that (especially for Raiders) really wrote itself and surprisingly easy to do. I think the lack of a need for a complicated structure, just a good adventure yarn with characters we care about made it really easy to write and get into.

I think Tara in a corset in a VERY lesbian bar is what they call 'fan service' but it's also 'writer service' so that's okay :)

The only railway station they actually stop at is the one in Romania, but they did go through Germany. Anyway, you've moved on past that ;)

Dottie is one of those characters I like to put in my fics. Sympathetic, likeable, not stupid and not just there to be a trouble magnet. I had one in Sidestep (Toni), one in Coulda Woulda Shoulda (Hope as the anti-Dawn) and now Dottie. Also I think it helps to view Tara and Willow through the eyes of a character who 'gets' them and lets you play with the humour a whole lot more. In a way, she's us... And gives them something to do other than adventure and enjoy alone time!

And no... I had not watched Warehouse 13. I've now caught an episode, but I have way too many shows to catch up on to get to that anytime soon! Also, if I do Raiders 3 then I am probably best staying away until then!

In an act of blatant self promotion... I will also say that I am currently working on a one-shot that MAY become another movie crossover. I hope to post a Tara/Willow Men in Black story in the next few days or next week. If it attracts any readers I may go ahead and write the story I've had in mind for a while... It's another that I think could be a lot of fun (neat idea for it too) but it's a 20 year old film so possibly not something people will be interested in. Hence the one-shot type of deal and then see how that goes...

Anyway, thank you!!

Check in as you read more, I luvs the feedback ;)

Katharyn
-------------------------
If I wanted a little pussy, I've got my own to play with.

Chance in *Chance*
-------------------------
Katharyn
23. Volumey Text
 
Posts: 3794
Topics: 5
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2005 1:23 pm


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.17 of NEW STORY 04/12/1

Postby willowtaralover » Fri May 02, 2014 2:42 pm

Hey Katharyn I'm still enjoying the story and wonder how it would look if it was a film, and not necessarily an Indiana Jones film. It could just as easily be a film with female protagonists and antagonists and...oh wait I forgot Hollywood are forgot of strong women. Still their loss.

Loved the conversation between Willow and Dottie after she cottoned on to the fact that Dottie has a crush on a certain blonde naval commander. It was nice to see that Willow understood that the crush wasn't so much on Tara herself as it was on the relationship that our two heroines have together. Dottie herself put it best this way...

“No – sorry, that came out wrong. I mean – You two go for months without seeing each other, but when you do? It’s like you never parted…Dottie sighed. “I think that’s why – I mean - It’s very romantic. I probably project that on her. It’s not her I want. It’s all that.

And at the end of the day isn't that surely what we all want?


But all were at least seven feet long with sharpened tips that pointed straight up towards the sky.

Hmmm this all sounds very Vlad Dracul aka Vlad the Impaler to me. Well, I'm sure you didn't call it 'Tomb of te Vampire Prince' for nothing ;)
willowtaralover
8. Vixen
 
Posts: 729
Topics: 22
Joined: Thu Dec 24, 2009 11:38 am


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.17 of NEW STORY 04/12/1

Postby Katharyn » Sat May 03, 2014 5:11 am

In my head it will look just like an Indiana Jones film. Cept with a slightly smaller titular hero. And a co-star who has her own, heroic charms.

It's an interesting question, about strong female characters. One I've been considering for a non-T/W story that I am plotting. I think in a lot of stories in movies and novels for the last few years a 'strong woman' has to be someone who (literally) kicks ass. But there's also (should be) the strong woman who is strong by virtue of other qualities like intelligence, willpower etc. That sort of thing is often underplayed in such genre material. Physically she might (relative to the rest) weaker, but that doesn't mean she can't be a powerful character. I've read very few books like that (though there are some) that avoid making her a damsel to be rescued but also don't feel the need to make her Trinity, Black Widow or Indiana Rosenberg...

There's no point to all that musing, just saying :) (Needless to say I LIKE Trinity and Black Widow!)

I guess it will depend on the sort of story I choose to tell. But where strong female characters exist that don't have to kick ass, they're usually parts for older women. I'm all for older women getting good parts, but what's the implication? If you're a strong woman you're a leather wearing, kick ass sex kitten until you're say 32,33 and then you're nothing until you're 50 when you turn into intelligent, strong willed, (whisper it but usually) bitch?

Are there no nuances?

Anyway... back to your feedback LOL.

I did worry about the crush, slightly, but I think I have a track record for 100% FAQ compliance being high on my mission statements! I never thought readers would worry where I'd go with that, but I did wonder if they'd hate her for it. On the other, don't we ALL crush on Tara? LOL

And yes, I was pretty upfront about the fact this was the Vampire Prince's tomb :)

Thanks!

Katharyn
-------------------------
If I wanted a little pussy, I've got my own to play with.

Chance in *Chance*
-------------------------
Katharyn
23. Volumey Text
 
Posts: 3794
Topics: 5
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2005 1:23 pm


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.17 of NEW STORY 04/12/1

Postby loislane1 » Mon May 05, 2014 3:40 pm

I think the only example of strong female character that I could think of that doesn't fit into the two categories you put forth is Pepper Potts in the Iron Man series brilliantly played by Gweneth Paltrow. Pepper is the reason Tony Stark is a success not a disaster and is a strong counterpart to him without actually being a superhero. On another strong female character note - don't even get me started on the fact that Wonder Woman still doesn't have her own movie.

-H.
Sometimes it feels like we are running headlong through the woods on a dark cloudy night from monsters we can't see towards a destination we don't know.
User avatar
loislane1
3. Flaming O
 
Posts: 75
Topics: 1
Joined: Thu Oct 10, 2013 10:32 am
Location: North Carolina


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.17 of NEW STORY 04/12/1

Postby Katharyn » Tue May 06, 2014 12:13 pm

I take your point on PP - though I suspect that's as much to do with GP being a big star. I am not sure another woman her age would get the role. They'd probably have gone younger, though as a character... yes.

Wonder Woman - I've not been into the mythology but I suspect that she might count but again, as a character rather than how she'd be portrayed in a movie made now.

That leads me to consider Xena... I was never really into that show and despite LL's obvious beauty it's an unconventional one in many ways and - as a character - I have the impression that Xena's backstory meant she was somewhat older than might have been otherwise. At least if you added up all the stuff she was supposed to have done and the travel time that would've been required.

Exceptions that prove the rule?

K
-------------------------
If I wanted a little pussy, I've got my own to play with.

Chance in *Chance*
-------------------------
Katharyn
23. Volumey Text
 
Posts: 3794
Topics: 5
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2005 1:23 pm


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.17 of NEW STORY 04/12/1

Postby willowtaralover » Tue May 06, 2014 2:33 pm

Hey Katharyn Still reading still enjoying :)

On the subject of strong women I would definitely class Joyce from the Buffyverse as a strong woman. She has to raise one, later two daughters alone, runs a struggling art gallery, helps Buffy with her slaying duties (to her best abilities) and even chats with vampires. Yet Joyce does all that without any super powers or special abilities and she has to be in her late 30s early 40s so isn't exactly a young woman yet is still very attractive. So Joyce Summers is proof positive that you do not have to be a major Hollywood hottie or be a super-powered character to be a strong person. However that's just the thoughts of this Kitten though and may not count for much.

I enjoyed their adventure in the caverns between the crypt and the castle though did expect a slightly more hazardous situation for them, don't get me wrong I wish no harm to befall out heroines but considering that it's Rosenberg and Maclay and trouble has a tendency to find them very easily, especially Willow.

But she didn’t wait for an answer and instead just opened the door.
Only to be met by a machine pistol.
No, actually, there were three of them.


See what I mean about trouble lol

An interesting thought about ghouls; they're usually supposed to be flesh eaters so how much danger are Willow and Tara going to be in now? I'll just have to keep reading to find out I guess. :)

“So this is the new plan?” Rosenberg asked.
“Right,” Tara said and started to take off her shirt.
“Oh. I like this plan!”


Me too :grin

"I don't scream", said Rosenberg
I'm sure Tara could find a few ways to make her though lol

Hopefully Dottie will come find and rescue them from their securely locked storeroom and get them away from the ghouls, after she's finished with the village girls lol.
willowtaralover
8. Vixen
 
Posts: 729
Topics: 22
Joined: Thu Dec 24, 2009 11:38 am


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.17 of NEW STORY 04/12/1

Postby Katharyn » Fri May 09, 2014 9:20 pm

Willowtaralover - the aim is that you will still read and enjoy so mission accomplished! (Thus far!)

Strong women... I see what you mean about Joyce but I suppose it wasn't really the kind of 'story leading' role that I meant. At the time I was talking about your core cast of shows or films but I didn't say so and so you're both entirely right (within what I'd actually said) and also right in the sense of stretching the conversation in a different direction! I'd respond, perhaps, by then suggesting there are more opportunities in that 'second tier' outside of the main protagonists. Ironically though, taking such a role (for someone who was, perhaps, when younger in the 'lead hottie' role) seen as a step down and can affect future career prospects. Like movie stars who go 'down' to TV (HBO series excepted) it can be hard for them to recover and be seen as a movie star again... Of course, if you were never such a 'star' then it can still mark an ascendency in your career and an entirely good thing.

So... to continue my original thinking, I think that there is still that gap between 'young, hot, action beat em up lead actress' and 'bitch' which, ironically, 'stepping down' to second tier roles in between those ages can hurt your chances of still being seen at the top of the profession to move between.

Very strong actors have different options, I think, but looking at - say - Helen Mirren's early career... it was before the days of 'hot action girl' anyway and I wonder what she might have done back then if that had been a trope...?

Anyway, back to the story :)

The caverns... In the first draft of the story, they went into a cave and then emerged at the castle. Almost between scenes. I expanded on that (and it's one of my favourite parts just as a exercise in descriptive writing - which I do far too little of) really to give them a different kind of obstacle. You're right, it was a little 'easy' but I think I was looking at the fact that they were supposed to be sneaking inside. If I made it too hard then they might as well have gone to the door! (Which it turns out they may as well have done anyway!!)

Also, wanting to end the chapter on them facing the guns - for me - made that the dramatic high which might seem a little flat if they'd been on a 'mine car roller coaster ride' for example!

I wouldn't worry too much about the classical description of what a ghoul is... I did no research but needed to distinguish them from... umm... anything else.

Tara removing items of clothing will... well, you'll see. It all goes back to the corset and costume from the club. I've decided to get her undressed as much as possible this time. Action woman forced into the trope as fan service ;)

Ah, Dottie... yes, what or who is she doing right now? LOL

Thanks so much!

Katharyn
-------------------------
If I wanted a little pussy, I've got my own to play with.

Chance in *Chance*
-------------------------
Katharyn
23. Volumey Text
 
Posts: 3794
Topics: 5
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2005 1:23 pm


Re: W&T: The Raiders Chronicles - Ch.17 of NEW STORY 04/12/1

Postby willowtaralover » Tue May 13, 2014 9:56 am

Hey Katharyn :bigwave

Now, she was sure it wasn’t actually ‘wrong’ that she found the sight of Tara kicking the stuffing out of an undead Nazi - wearing no more above the waist than her brassiere – something of a turn on.

One of mine too, though less with the kicking the crap out of an undead Nazy.

Sun going down, and a vampire princes castle, definitely a bad thing. Best get your stakes ready girls. Is the castle actually Vlad Tepes castle too I wonder.

She was just admiring another of her favourite things. Tara Maclay with a light sheen in sweat.
Still not a bad thing. Still not ‘wrong.’


Another of my favourite things too and definitely not wrong :grin Does this make me some distant relation to Willow I wonder or are we just partners in being perverts lol.

I lke the talk about bullets and how Tara believes Willow thinks the'll never run out. Makes me think of video games when you get to pick up ammo such as Half-Life 2 which I'm currently re-playing and massacring people to my hearts content.

“You just want me running around without anything on...Come on, just admit it!”

And is that such a bad thing?????? :p

“Don’t flatter yourself, doll. My only concern is for how we’re going to get out of here,” she said to Tara’s breasts.

“I’m up here.”


HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA. Oh Willow, you're awesome.

The idea of a girl dying to heal Ilse makes me think of the legend of Countess Bathory who believed the bathing in the blood of virgins would keep her young and beautiful forever. And then she turned into Sarah Palin...Nuff said.

A very enjoyable chapter especially with the banter going on between Willow and Tara both verbally and in their minds and now it looks like we're heading to the end game. Will the girls prevent the rise of the Vampire Prince? Will Tara retrieve her shirt??, Will Willow stop staring at Tara's breasts??? Well probably not really :p And will Dottie make out with every girl in the village???? At least one of these questions will be answered. I hope :biggrin
willowtaralover
8. Vixen
 
Posts: 729
Topics: 22
Joined: Thu Dec 24, 2009 11:38 am

PreviousNext

Return to Board index

Return to Different Colored Pens

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 53 guests


Powered by phpBB The phpBB Group © 2000, 2002, 2005, 2007
Style based on a Cosa Nostra Design