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Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (UPDTED: 4/03/18)

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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/29/10)

Postby Finey_McFine » Wed Dec 29, 2010 12:09 am

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TITLE: Racing The Rain

AUTHOR: Finey_McFine

RATING: PG13

DISCLAIMER: Willow, Tara and any other BtVS characters, as well as some random dialog, belong to Mutant Enemy.

SUMMARY: Totally AU, Willow and Tara Meet with not so surprising results! Set in LA with lots of W/T fluff and a little teeny tiny bit of angst, but no Hellmouthyness. Just good old regular day-to-day drama.



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AUTHOR’S NOTE: Hello Kittens! I hope everyone is enjoying their holiday! I actually got a break from all the kids in my house and decided to take the opportunity to post an update:) Enjoy!


Chapter 11: Rounding The Bases

After dropping Tara off, Willow stopped by the grocery store on the way home. Picking up some essentials for the week ahead and a few things for her Monday night dinner date. Tara was constantly on her mind and she was missing her already.

For Willow, the past couple days had been a watershed of sorts. In her scant few years of dating experience, she had never let anyone get this emotionally close. There was just something about Tara that Willow could not resist. The way she walked, the heavenly sound of her voice, her laugh…there was nothing that Willow didn’t like. Usually, after a date or two, Willow could name a whole host of reasons not to ever see that person again, but she could find no faults with the blonde. She thought about how Tara touched her and gazed deep into her eyes. The feeling of her soft plump lips grazing hers, the mere thought, sending shivers up her spine. She trusted Tara explicitly.

She was snapped from her reverie by a scratchy voice billowing over the stores PA system, announcing that they were closing in 15 minutes. Willow looked up and realized that she had been standing idle, for God knows how long, in the produce section with a head of lettuce in her hand and a cucumber in the other. She glanced around and saw a little girl giggling and pointing at her from behind a bin filled with watermelons.

She got in line for the only cash register that was open and glanced around at the various magazines on the rack, her eyes stopping on the latest issue of Flair. A faint smile crossed her lips and she walked over and picked it up. There on the cover was her beautiful girl, the headline reading, ‘Catch up with America’s Sweetheart, Tara Maclay.’ She thumbed through until she reached the article. She began reading while slowly moving up in the check out line.

“A Tara Maclay fan huh?” Said a young man that was in line behind her, tightly clutching a case of beer. She glanced at him over her shoulder.

“Huh? Yeah.” She answered, thrown a bit by his intrusion into her personal space. She turned her back to him, trying to ignore him and hoping that he got the hint.

“She’s fucking hot, but not as hot as you.” He said loudly, resting his eyes on Willow’s ass. “I’d definitely like to tap that!” He said, giving his pals a high five. Willow turned towards the boy, who was now grinning like an idiot.

“What?!” That’s it? That’s the best you’ve got? Dude, you seriously need to get a life and a few new pick up lines.” She turned pushing her cart forward and began to place her items on the conveyor belt.

“Ok then, how’d you like to share that bottle of wine with me? I might even let you round the bases.” He said to Willow, licking his lips and winking.

Willow spun on her heels with the bottle of wine, turning around and facing the boy again. “Oh, you mean this bottle of wine?” Willow said seductively, gently stroking the long neck of the bottle with her slender fingers.

“Yeah, now that’s what I’m talking about!” The boy exclaimed, bouncing on the balls of his feet.

“So, let me get this straight, if I agree to share this, I may get lucky enough to play ball with you and your friends?”

“Well, only if you let me bat first!” He countered.

“Well, I hate to burst you super intelligent analogy bubble, but I bat for the other team. Sorry Dude, but you just struck out.” She said smugly, as the cashier snorted, trying to hold back her laughter.

The young man was left with his mouth hanging open, effectively rendered speechless by the feisty redhead. His friends were whooping and punching his shoulder.

“What’s the matter? Lesbian got your tongue?” Willow said, smirking at the young man.

As she approached the cashier to pay, the young girl held up her hand and Willow high fived her, causing several other people in line to laugh out loud. She loaded her cart and made a quick exit. Willow knew all too well about guys like the one she’d just encountered, especially ones that traveled in packs.

Twenty minutes later she was sitting on her couch, eating a grilled cheese sandwich and reading Flair magazine. Her mind began to wander with random thoughts before she could even finish the article.

The last week with Tara had been surreal. Willow was fairly resigned and had become accustom to sticking to a routine, but everything changed that day in the park. Not only had she not imagined meeting someone, but that someone had turned out to be a real someone. Which to this point had not fully sunk in. Willow seldom thought of Tara as an uber-celebrity, but after seeing her on the cover of the magazine, billed as ‘America’s Sweetheart’ no less, reality started to sink in and the blonde was right.

Willow’s active mind began to churn out question after question. Would she be able to do something as innocent as grocery shop anonymously ever again? Would she be able to protect herself or Tara from guys like the one in line without it ending up in the tabloids? “Tara Maclay’s Gal Pal Attacks Helpless Innocent Straight Guy” Would they be chased by Paparazzi 24/7? Would she be portrayed as the evil lesbian that corrupted ‘America’s Sweetheart’ and turned her into ‘America’s Flaming Dyke?’ “Is it worth it?” She said out loud.

The logical side of Willow was taking over. Everything had moved at warp speed the last week and she hadn’t really taken the time to just sit and think. Now, finally alone in the quiet of the night, Willow’s mind remained in overdrive. She sat for a while and contemplated the consequences of a relationship with Tara, weighing the pros and cons. She even made a list using a system of different colored pens. After a significant amount of time spent over analyzing and running a thousand scenarios through her head, she gave up.

She sighed deeply, closing the magazine and tossing it onto the table next to her, then tore up the list and threw it in the trash. She decided it was time to face the preverbal music. She reached into her pocket, pulled out her cell and dialed Morgan’s number.

“Hey Morg-y! Sorry I’m calling so late, but I promised I would and a promise is a promise. So, what’s up?” She greeted her friend cheerfully.

“Shouldn’t I be asking you that question?” Morgan inquired.

Willow let out a sigh, she could tell that her friend was in a mood by the tone in her voice and was already wishing she hadn’t called. “Okaaay…so, what would you like to know?”

“Please don’t take this the wrong way but well, your ‘Willow.’ You don’t date…ever. Then you meet this woman and not just any woman, but this super hot TV actress movie star type woman.” Morgan spat out, sounding bitter. “You bring her to a game, you take her on a date, she spends the night and the entire next day with you. Tara Maclay, hanging with Willow Rosenberg: College student and resident geek whose entire apartment could probably fit in her garage. It just doesn’t add up.”

“Morgan, where is this coming from? What are you saying, that I’m not good enough for her? That I’m some kind of science project? You don’t even know her.” Willow was trying to stay clam, but could feel the anger rising.

“Neither do you Willow, that’s my point, and you’re already jumping into the sack. I mean you’ve waited forever and now you boink the first chick that comes along” Morgan’s voice taking on a high-pitched squeaky quality.

“Who said anything about me sleeping with her? And what if I did?” Willow was getting more and more ticked off by the second.

“Will, She’s Tara friggin’ Maclay for Gods sake! She could have ANYONE and probably already has. You’re probably just another notch in her-”

“STOP! ENOUGH.” she shouted forcefully, cutting Morgan off mid sentence. Willow was furious, to put it mildly and Morgan was about to find out just how far over the line she’d crossed.

“DO NOT say another word. First of all, what I do in the privacy of my own home is none of your God Damn business Morgan. You’re sticking your nose in places it doesn’t belong, only one of a hundred reasons why we don’t live together anymore. Second, don’t you EVER make those assumptions about Tara again. You don’t know ANYTHING about her. Granted, I haven’t known her very long, but I know her a hell of a lot better than you.” Willow was livid and was now pacing in front of her couch. She waited for a reply, but was met with silence. Then it hit her.

“Huh…I just got it, you’re jealous. You can’t stand the fact that I met someone, someone that I genuinely like. I thought we were past all this shit. You’re supposed to be my friend. You’re supposed to listen to me, to be there and not judge me. Oh and just for the record, you don’t know me as well as you think you do.” Willow paused, her chest was tight and her breathing labored. She struggled to keep herself under some modicum of control; angry tears were streaming down a very red face. She took a deep breath; the last thing she wanted was to let Morgan hear her crying.

“Willow,” Morgan said, with an eerily calm voice, “Don’t you see it? This girl is just looking for a little plaything to occupy her time until she moves on to something bigger and better. Do you think she’s gonna take you places? Risk her precious rep by getting photographed with you? Will, I’m just looking out for you, I care about you and I don’t want to see you get hurt.”

“No Morgan…you’re scared. This conversation is over, good night.” Willow hung up and the sobs set in.

, she thought. When she had left Tara she was floating on the clouds and now everything had gone south. She desperately wanted to call Tara, to hear her soothing voice and have her insecurities quelled. She picked up her cell and paused, she couldn’t bring herself to make the call. This was her problem, with Morgan, not Tara’s. There were issues that had been simmering just under the surface and had plagued their relationship for sometime. She decided it was best to just go to bed. She crawled under the covers, curled up into herself and fell into a fitful sleep.

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Tara awoke with a heavy groan to the annoying buzz of her alarm clock. Morning had come much too fast for her liking. She slapped the offending clock to quell the noise and rolled over, stretching her arm across the empty space in her bed. “No Willow,” she sighed.

She laid there for a few more minutes before heading to the bathroom to take a quick wake up shower. She dressed, gathered some things together, along with Ralphie and made her way through the kitchen to the garage. She opened the garage door, depositing her bag in the car and followed her limping dog out to the grass. The sun was just beginning to rise, the dew was glistening on the grass and the scent of honeysuckle was thick in the air. After a few minutes she glanced at her watch and called to Ralphie. Tara got them settled in the car and began to back out of the garage when she heard the familiar jingle on her cell, indicating that she had a text message. She stopped the car once it was out of the garage and rooted for her phone in her purse.

“Willow…” Tara breathed.

‘Good morning beautiful’

‘Good morning sweetheart. What are you doing up so early?’

‘Couldn’t sleep…miss u’

‘I miss u too, but u need to sleep. U have a long day ahead of u.’

‘I’m fine. I need to catch up on my homework b4 class anyway. Was kinda distracted the last few days, lol’

‘I’m sorry?’

‘No, no, no!! Absolutely NO sorries. It was totally worth it!’

‘Yes, it was’

‘I don’t want to keep you…have a good day at work & I’ll see u tonight’

‘Ok Will…see u tonight?’

Tara tucked the phone back into her purse and sighed.

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Willow lay in her bed, clutching her phone and cuddled with the pillow Tara had slept on the night before. Miss Kitty was softly purring, curled up between Willows feet.

She’d been lying there for at least 20 minutes after texting with Tara, re-playing her conversation with Morgan over and over in her head. She wondered if she’d overreacted or had done the right thing in shutting her down and hanging up the phone. One thing was for sure; practice was going to be long and tedious.

The redhead got up and headed to the bathroom to take a shower, “Ugh,” she grunted when she caught a glimpse of herself in the mirror. Willow’s head ached and her eyes were swollen and puffy. She was pulled from her mirror image by a soft knock at her front door. She looked through the peep hole, “Tara…” and a huge grin spread across her face.

Willow quickly opened the door to find the blonde holding two cups of coffee, a small bag and Ralphie on a leash.

“Tara! What are you doing here? Is everything ok?” Willow said as she relieved the blonde of the coffee cups.

“Hi, I wanted to surprise you. I had a little time so…here I am. I-I hope it’s ok, I didn’t mean to intrude.” She said giving Willow the sweet lopsided smile that was only for her.

“C’mere,” Willow pulled Tara towards her and kissed her soundly, leaving Tara breathless. “It really is a good morning.” The redhead quipped as she knelt down to greet the little dog.

Tara stepped inside and was finally able to get a good look at Willow. She noticed the puffiness surrounding her eyes immediately.

“Willow, Baby what’s wrong? You look like you’ve been crying,” a look of concern crossing Tara’s face.

“What? No, no it must be allergies. I’m fine, finey-mcfine-fine.” Willow said nervously, as she averted Tara’s intense stare.

“Will, l-look at me. Please? Y-You can tell me anything.”



“Tare, it’s nothing really. I called Morgan after I got home and we just had a little disagreement that’s all.” Willow said hoping that would suffice.

“Minor disagreements don’t make someone cry so much that their eyes are still swollen and puffy the next morning. What did she say to you?” Tara said, a little more forceful than she meant to and with zero hint of a stutter. The idea of someone making Willow cry sent the blonde into ultra mega protective mode and even she was surprised by her reaction. “I’m s-sorry, I don’t know where th-that came from. It’s really n-none of my b-business. I shouldn’t have barged in, I’ll just go.” She said, attemping to turn away from Willow.

“Baby, come here and sit with me.” Willow said pulling Tara with her to the couch. “It’s not that I don’t want to tell you, I do. It’s just that my head is kinda throb-y right now and we don’t have very much time together. I’d rather snuggle a little and feed you some of these delicious donuts you brought.” She said sweetly smiling up at Tara and popping a bite of the sugary snack into Tara’s mouth. “Do you get it, at all?”

“I do.”

“I promise we’ll talk tonight, ok?”

Tara simply nodded her head and Willow fed her another piece of the donut. “Hey, no sad faces. Especially not when there’s sugar-y goodness and mocha’s involved.” Willow leaned forward and pressed a long sweet kiss to Tara’s lips.

“Mmhmm, much sweeter and tastier than that donut.” Tara said as she took Willow’s hand and licked the redhead’s fingers clean, one at a time, never losing eye contact.

“Tara Maclay, you are such an incredible tease.” Willow breathed.

“Who said anything about teasing?”

Willow reached out and tangled her other hand in Tara’s golden tresses. She pulled Tara forward and crushed their lips together in a steamy kiss. They stayed that way for longer than either had planned, completely loosing track time.

“Willow…” Tara whispered.

“I know, you have to go.” Willow replied and continued to plant short kisses on Tara’s luscious lips.

“I’m sorry, I didn’t plan on…”

“It’s ok, I guess we just can’t be trusted to be alone in the same room together.” Willow smiled.

“So, I’ll see you tonight then?” Tara asked, as she stood and straightened her blouse, pulling Willow up with her.

“Uh huh, right after practice.” Willow gave her hand a reassuring squeeze. She grabbed the bag with the last donut and handed it to Tara.

“Oh Will, you go ahead and eat it.” Trying to hand it back to Willow.

“How about we split it?”

“Deal.”

Willow opened the bag and pulled the last donut apart and fed Tara her half, causing a slight giggle from both girls. As Tara gathered Ralphie and prepared to leave, Willow pulled her in for another sugar-y kiss, before sending the blonde on her way.

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HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYONE! See you all on the flipside!!!!
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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/29/10)

Postby vampyregurl73 » Wed Dec 29, 2010 12:33 am

Dibs! brb with something more insightful ;)

Willow seldom thought of Tara as an uber-celebrity, but after seeing her on the cover of the magazine, billed as ‘America’s Sweetheart’ no less, reality started to sink in and the blonde was right.


Not as much of an issue in her world...

The whole interlude in the grocery store in the checkout line gave me a good giggle; the travel in packs though made a might queasy, but then again I'm just that way.

Willow’s active mind began to churn out question after question. Would she be able to do something as innocent as grocery shop anonymously ever again? Would she be able to protect herself or Tara from guys like the one in line without it ending up in the tabloids? “Tara Maclay’s Gal Pal Attacks Helpless Innocent Straight Guy” Would they be chased by Paparazzi 24/7? Would she be portrayed as the evil lesbian that corrupted ‘America’s Sweetheart’ and turned her into ‘America’s Flaming Dyke?’ “Is it worth it?” She said out loud.

This is another hilarious bit - can you imagine some horrible picture of Willow charging a paparazzi in a rage?!?! LMAO.... Of course she's worth it.

Aww, poor Morgan...what a friend though, am I right? - that was sarcasm btw.

Now we're getting to the good stuff - a nice plot has developed, we've got some drama, some romance... will something of the evil variety now show up? I vote no, but that's just me.

Happy New Year Shel!!!
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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/29/10)

Postby Grimm » Wed Dec 29, 2010 12:47 am

Not liking Morgan much right now... she's obviously under the influence of the green eyed monster (jealous much?). Question is, why...Crushing on the Willster perhaps? I hope Morgan won't be the asshole who outs the Girls 2 the tabloids..But, we don't always get what we wish for... I :pray the next update has a bit less drama and a bit more :wtkiss and gay love.. I will be w8ting with nervous anticipation!!!
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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/29/10)

Postby Laragh » Wed Dec 29, 2010 5:29 am

Morgan... :shy

Drama's a-brewing! I don't mind a little bit...as long as it doesn't make the girls fight. That I can't stand lol.

I liked this chapter though, plenty of cuteness :D

And I agree with SMGOVAN; :wtkiss and gay love galore!

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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/29/10)

Postby KioNewgo » Wed Dec 29, 2010 5:34 am

Woo!
First off, Morgan ><. Bitch! I mean, they were perfectly good points...IF she wasn't talking about Tara! I hope Willow bats her over the head ><.

Oh, and Willow in the store? Pure gold :').
“Well, I hate to burst you super intelligent analogy bubble, but I bat for the other team. Sorry Dude, but you just struck out.” She said smugly, as the cashier snorted, trying to hold back her laughter.


“What’s the matter? Lesbian got your tongue?” Willow said, smirking at the young man.

As she approached the cashier to pay, the young girl held up her hand and Willow high fived her, causing several other people in line to laugh out loud


I'm still giggling over it! :D.

And I love how Tara turned up with breakfast :D. So sweet!
I can't wait for more, and I also agree, :wtkiss gay love gay love gay love! :D
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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/29/10)

Postby zampsa19752001 » Wed Dec 29, 2010 9:10 am

Yay for great update-y goodness... I loved how Willow put the dude in the store in his place... I truly hope Morgan doesn't rat out Willow & Tara to the tabloids... I really liked how Tara surprised Willow with breakfast... Can't wait for their dinner date... I hope the dinner dessert includes lots of :wtkiss and gay love...
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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/29/10)

Postby Promthea128 » Wed Dec 29, 2010 9:40 pm

Aww, surprise breakfast. Morgan's points woulda made sense if they weren't shouted. And if they weren't about Tara, cause she's never anything but sweet and kind. The checkout line was hilarious
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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/29/10)

Postby bouncer73 » Wed Dec 29, 2010 10:08 pm

simply amazing..I think I could've came through the computer and snatched up that Morgan. :smash ...

I can't say it enough..but I LOVE this story..Keep up the great work
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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/29/10)

Postby wimpy0729 » Thu Dec 30, 2010 2:36 am

Wow - here comes the drama, and it's not even due to the paparazzi yet. Yeah, I'm definitely peeved at Morgan. If she truly is Willow's friend, she definitely could have handled that better. She's not giving Willow or Tara any credit here at all. Perhaps it is a little jealousy. I hate poor puffy-eyed Willow.

I loved how she handled the assholes in the store, although I wouldn't have had the balls to do that myself.

And how sweet was Tara stopping over with mochas and donuts, and of course, morning kisses. Guess their date will include some serious talking and not all good stuff, but looks like it will need to be discussed. Can't wait to see what happens here.

Great job again!


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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/29/10)

Postby deviantART » Thu Dec 30, 2010 6:38 pm

I just start to read your story i really like it !
i like the way you quote movie it's handsome !
Can't wait to read more
Even if i know you won't update until next year :p hope it won't take long !
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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/29/10)

Postby JustSkipIt » Thu Dec 30, 2010 6:58 pm

Happy New Year to you as well.

Hmmm. Here's my main impression here.:

It seems to me that what's hard about this whole fame thing is that they're sort of about to leap forward a few steps in the relationship. Like "normal" people who start dating can just date, kiss, have dinner, go for walks, get to know each other and see where it goes. The two of them are probably going to be forced to define their relationship and determine whether it's "worth it" before they really should have to. And even if the press doesn't force them, Willow's in her head and she's going to take them there. Plus you've got Morgan sort of pushing the issue. It's all a little turbo charged. I hope their date goes well and they can be there for each other and be honest without leapfrogging necessary relationship steps.

Thanks and I can't wait for more.
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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/29/10)

Postby Ariel » Thu Dec 30, 2010 11:54 pm

Hey, Shel!

Repeat-o-girl on the job - praising the fun stuff in the supermarket! :pride

“What?!” That’s it? That’s the best you’ve got? Dude, you seriously need to get a life and a few new pick up lines.” She turned pushing her cart forward and began to place her items on the conveyor belt.

Then you really cranked it into over-drive with the baseball analogies that Kirsty covered so beautifully in her post!

Now the ANGST factor with the famous false friend:
“Huh…I just got it, you’re jealous. You can’t stand the fact that I met someone, someone that I genuinely like. I thought we were past all this shit. You’re supposed to be my friend. You’re supposed to listen to me, to be there and not judge me. Oh and just for the record, you don’t know me as well as you think you do.” Willow paused, her chest was tight and her breathing labored. She struggled to keep herself under some modicum of control; angry tears were streaming down a very red face. She took a deep breath; the last thing she wanted was to let Morgan hear her crying.

“Willow,” Morgan said, with an eerily calm voice, “Don’t you see it? This girl is just looking for a little plaything to occupy her time until she moves on to something bigger and better. Do you think she’s gonna take you places? Risk her precious rep by getting photographed with you? Will, I’m just looking out for you, I care about you and I don’t want to see you get hurt.”

I like the reality of Willow being hurt by someone she thinks of as a friend but I LOVE Willow holding on to the essential truth of who she is and what is really going on with her so-called friend. Nice!

Finally, Tara who shows up and who really cares, love this bit:
“Minor disagreements don’t make someone cry so much that their eyes are still swollen and puffy the next morning. What did she say to you?” Tara said, a little more forceful than she meant to and with zero hint of a stutter. The idea of someone making Willow cry sent the blonde into ultra mega protective mode and even she was surprised by her reaction. “I’m s-sorry, I don’t know where th-that came from. It’s really n-none of my b-business. I shouldn’t have barged in, I’ll just go.” She said, attemping to turn away from Willow.


What they have is so precious and wonderful; thank you for this story. Love the humor, the suspense, and the love shining through.

Keep typing, girlfriend! :kgeek

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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/29/10)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sun Jan 02, 2011 6:57 pm

Hi Everyone!

Happy New Year!!! I hope everyone is off to a great start! Thanks for reading!

vampyregurl73:
Yay…DIBS again! You’re on a roll!

the travel in packs though made a might queasy

I know what you mean. This actually stemmed from something that happened earlier in the week. My 11yr old daughter & I were at the grocery store and a group of teenage boys were acting like a-holes and she said, “Mom, why do they always seen to travel in packs?” lol

This is another hilarious bit - can you imagine some horrible picture of Willow charging a paparazzi in a rage?!?! LMAO.... Of course she's worth it.

I’m sure it’s going to get interesting when things start to heat up, celebrity wise that is, especially with an athletic confident Willow! They’d better watch out!

will something of the evil variety now show up?

I think it already has…

I hope you are still enjoying your nice loooooooooong vacation!


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Not liking Morgan much right now... she's obviously under the influence of the green eyed monster (jealous much?). Question is, why...Crushing on the Willster perhaps?

Hmmmm….see below!

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Laragh:
Drama's a-brewing! I don't mind a little bit...as long as it doesn't make the girls fight. That I can't stand

Let’s hope it doesn’t come to that!

Thanks, I’m glad you liked the chapter!!


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First off, Morgan ><. Bitch! I mean, they were perfectly good points...IF she wasn't talking about Tara! I hope Willow bats her over the head ><

Yeah, I don’t think we’ve seen the last of this ‘friend.’
And I love how Tara turned up with breakfast

I thought it would be cute that Tara would be the one to really pursue Willow, even though she’s the big star, you’d think it’d be the other way around.

More coming right up!!


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I loved how Willow put the dude in the store in his place...

My Willow has quite the confidence streak in her and doesn’t put with much in the way of bs. Probably comes from being the youngest.

More fun to come! Thanks!


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Aww, surprise breakfast.

I guess Tara just needed a little Willow lovin’ to start her day:) At least she didn’t have to make pancakes!!!

Morgan's points woulda made sense if they weren't shouted. And if they weren't about Tara, cause she's never anything but sweet and kind.

I don’t think it matters much to Morgan. All she sees is a serious someone between her and Willow and it can’t be good.

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bouncer73:
simply amazing..I think I could've came through the computer and snatched up that Morgan.

That seemes to be the running sentiment of feedback for this chapter, lol ps. Be my guest!

More to come!

wimpy0729:
here comes the drama, and it's not even due to the paparazzi yet.

Yeah and can you imagine the chaos when a little paparazzi gets thrown in?!?!?

Guess their date will include some serious talking and not all good stuff, but looks like it will need to be discussed.

Yep, but I’m sure they will get some things straightened out. This stuff with coming out publicly, etc, I’m sure, will be an ongoing issue. Unfortunately, there’s no where for them to run.

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I loved the funny shirts. I have enough where I can wear one every day. My favorite is "...And then Buffy slayed Edward. The End."
Hahahahahaha…funny you should mention that shirt, it was on my Christmas list and I didn’t get it. So, I already ordered it online. On a side note…my daughter was kinda pissed…she’s ‘Team Edward.’ Lol

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I kinda hope they quite soon graduate from to naked snugglies...
They’ll get there…eventually!

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JustSkipIt:
The two of them are probably going to be forced to define their relationship and determine whether it's "worth it" before they really should have to. And even if the press doesn't force them, Willow's in her head and she's going to take them there.

I think that’s the biggest hurdle in the ‘celebrity world.’ The rush to figure out what’s going on in your relationship before everyone else in the world does. It pushes them faster than they need to go. I think the ones that make it, are best at taking things a little slower and not letting the world define them. The thing about Willow is that she’s always in her head about something. Sometimes she allows outside forces to influence her thinking and if she doesn’t make the mistake of acting rashly, she’ll logically think things through or seek help from a reliable source. Let’s hope for the latter!

Dinner date coming up!


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I like the reality of Willow being hurt by someone she thinks of as a friend but I LOVE Willow holding on to the essential truth of who she is and what is really going on with her so-called friend.

We find out a little bit more about the true nature of Willow’s relationship with Morgan in the next couple chapters. It’s definitely complicated and could pose a definite threat to Willow and Tara. We’ll just have to see how it all plays out…

Finally, Tara who shows up and who really cares

I think it’s safe to say that Tara is already feeling ultra protective towards Willow. She’s been so worried about her celebrity coming between them, that her nerves are raw. When she saw Willow upset, she felt responsible, even though she wasn’t directly. It would be fun to see her kick Morgan’s ass though, lol

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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/2/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sun Jan 02, 2011 7:10 pm

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TITLE: Racing The Rain

AUTHOR: Finey_McFine

RATING: PG13

DISCLAIMER: Willow, Tara and any other BtVS characters, as well as some random dialog, belong to Mutant Enemy.

SUMMARY: Totally AU, Willow and Tara Meet with not so surprising results! Set in LA with lots of W/T fluff and a little teeny tiny bit of angst, but no Hellmouthyness. Just good old regular day-to-day drama.



FEEDBACK: OK

AUTHOR’S NOTE: Hello Kittens! I hope everyone had a wonderful holiday season! I’m hoping to get back on a more consistent posting schedule and plan on updating at least twice a week. Sunday’s for sure, but the other day will depend on my work schedule. Anyway, here’s the first update for the new year…enjoy!



Chapter 12 The Shower

The day had gone by surprisingly quick for Willow. After Tara left, she’d spent the morning catching up on her homework and laundry. After class, she decided to head straight to practice. Normally she would eat or hit the library, but today she felt the urge to take an extra round of batting practice. She was hoping to work out some of her pent up energy on a softball, instead of Morgan.

By the time she made her way over to the practice field, most of the girls were already stretching and readying themselves for practice. Willow deposited her gear in the dugout, greeted the coaches and headed out to stretch. She noticed immediately that Morgan was sitting with Sarah, looking in her direction and whispering to the sophomore. Willow decided to avoid confrontation and steer clear of her friend, deciding instead to sit with Stacey and a few others.

Willow stood on the field lost in thought, absently picking at the leather binding on her glove, as practice seemed to drone on forever, even the coaches were getting bored. There were several freshmen on the squad that were struggling with basic skills and were making mistake after mistake. The coaches finally gave up and ordered the team to run several laps around the perimeter of the field.

Not wanting to waste anymore time, Willow dropped her glove where she stood and took off like a thoroughbred out of the starting gates. She figured that the sooner she got done, the sooner she would be kissing Tara.

She hadn’t gotten very far before she heard someone shouting from behind her to wait up.

“Will! Willow!! Come on, slow down so I can catch up!” Stacey yelled, in a dead sprint to catch her.

“Willow, what the hell’s gotten into you? Did you suddenly morph into Carl Lewis or something?” Stacey exclaimed, currently breathless.

“What? No, I just have stuff to do and need to get out of here.” Willow panted.

“Will, what’s going on? You’re being all avoid-y, and what’s going on with you and Morgan? Did you think we wouldn’t notice?”

Throughout practice Morgan had gone out of her way to irritate Willow. Which included over throwing balls to second and ‘accidentally’ tripping her on a run around first base.

“See, I knew this was going to happen. Maybe you should ask Morgan.” Willow stated, with sarcastic tone.

“Will, come on. We’re all friends here and we don’t like it when you guys are fighting.”

“We? I only see you here. What are you the spokesperson for ‘Let’s pry as deeply as possible into Willow’s personal life club?’ Did Morgan send you out here?” Willow questioned.

“Willow Rosenberg! She did not and I haven’t done anything but try to be supportive, so don’t give me that accusatory shit.” Stacey panted, clearly out of breath and finding it hard to keep up with the redhead and yell at the same time.

Willow didn’t really know why she was so bitchy towards Stacey and decided to slow her pace a bit, lest the poor girl faint from exhaustion.

Stacey continued, “Look, you think I fell off the turnip truck yesterday? I know when Morgan is up to something. I was there 2 years ago for round one, remember?”

“I’m sorry. I don’t mean to take it out on you. I know you mean well.” Willowed sighed. “In a nut shell, Morgan’s jealous of Tara and we kinda had it out on the phone last night.”

Stacey rolled her eyes, “I’ll talk to her.” She said flatly.

“No Stac, I’ll handle Morgan. No sense dragging everyone into that particular hell dimension.”

“Well, I’m here if you need to talk. Soooo anyway, how’s it going with Tara?” Stacey asked coyly, giving Willow a little nudge with her elbow.

“Great, fantastic, amazing even. I’m having dinner with her tonight.” Willow said, sporting a goofy grin.

“Ah ha! That’s why you’re sprinting around this field like you’ve been shot out of a canon. I still can’t believe that ‘Tara Maclay’ is a lesbian, much less that you’re dating her.”

Willow suddenly stopped running, placed her hands on her hips and faced Stacey directly. “Why does everyone keep saying that?” She said, panting. “Is it really so hard to believe? I’m gay, she’s gay. We find each other attractive…I just don’t get all the hubbub.” Willow said incredulously, as she turned and began jogging again, before anyone else caught up with them.

“Will, it’s not that I think you aren’t worthy of her or something, or even that she wouldn’t find you attractive. It’s just that it’s ‘Tara Maclay.’ Try to see it from my perspective; it would be the equivalent of me suddenly dating Jake Gyllenhall. It’s just something that’s out of the realm of my current reality, of all our realities.”

“I guess.”

“You guess?” Stacey questioned. “Will, don’t ‘cha get it? Tara is Hollywood royalty and you’re dating the Queen.”

“Princess.”

“What?”

“She’s more like a Princess, not so much with the Queenyness.” Willow tried to break the tension a bit, but was met with a smirk from Stacey. “Look, I get it. I really do, but this is uncharted territory for me too a-and I’m not talking about the whole celebrity thing, that’s secondary, but you know the dating someone for more than a couple days thing. This is huge for me and I need my friends to be supportive.”

“I do support you Will, we support you. Tara seems really nice, but it’s not me or even Morgan that you need to be worried about. When your relationship goes public…it’s going to be like Mr. Toads Wild Ride.”

Willow scrunched up her face. “A frog analogy…really?”

Stacey tried to ignore Willow’s attempt to go off subject. “Have you had a serious talk with Tara about it yet?”

“A little, but I don’t want her to think I’m gun shy. I can handle it. I mean, how bad could it get?” As soon as the words rolled off Willow’s tongue she cringed and wished she could take them back. >

They finished their run in relative silence and then said their goodbyes. Willow jogged across the field, picking up her previously discarded glove along the way. She was the first person to finish, so she quickly collected her gear and headed off the field toward her car.

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About 20 minutes later Willow was standing on Tara’s doorstep, nervously clutching a bouquet of flowers in one hand and her gym bag in the other. She was still wearing her cleats and practice ‘uniform’, which consisted of a pair of baggy purple athletic shorts, knee high black socks and a light blue t-shirt. Completely mismatched yet again. The t-shirt had an illustration of a cow talking to a half gallon of milk. The cow saying, “Milk, I am your father,” and the milk responding, “Nooooooooooo!” She rang the bell and anxiously waited for Tara to answer.

She stood there, waiting for what seemed like forever, but in actuality was only about 15 seconds, when she heard a click and saw the doorknob start to turn. Tara opened the door and greeted Willow with a bright smile, melting away all of the redhead’s apprehension in the process.

“Hey you.” Tara said, as she opened the door.

“Hi.” Willow answered, as she stepped inside. “These are for you.” Handing Tara the bouquet of assorted carnations.

“You remembered.” Tara breathed, as she took the flowers, holding them to her nose and inhaling their sweet scent. The blonde reached out with her empty hand, pinching the fabric of Willow’s shirt between her fingers and pulled the redhead towards her.

Willow promptly dropped her gym bag and slid her hands around Tara’s waist as they came together for a deep sensual kiss. They remained that way for almost a full minute, before breaking apart and resting their foreheads together. Tara’s arms slung over Willow’s shoulders and the redheads hands absently rubbing up and down Tara’s sides.

“Mmhmm…I’ve been looking forward to that all day.” Willow breathed.

“Me too. You look a little tired Will. Rough day?” Tara questioned, as she brushed back a few strands of red hair.

“Yeah, a little. Tare, I didn’t have a chance to clean up after practice and I feel all icky. Do you mind if I grab a quick shower?”

“No, of course not. Come on, I’ll show you where it is.”

Willow picked up her bag and followed Tara.

“Oh, I almost forgot. I also brought a bottle of wine,” Unzipping her gym bag and handing the bottle to Tara.

“Trying to get me drunk and take advantage of me?” Tara said to Willow with a raised eyebrow.

“Of course!” Willow said with a wink.

Tara set the wine and her bouquet on a small table in the foyer; she took Willow’s hand and continued to lead her to the bathroom.

Willow had only been in Tara’s house once before and had never left the foyer. In fact, she remembered very little, other than their almost kiss. To say that she was amazed would be putting it mildly. From the outside Tara’s house looked small and unassuming, however the inside was anything but. As they walked through the foyer the house opened up. The ceilings were high with exposed beams and recessed lighting that gave the house a warm cozy feeling.

As Willow was admiring her surroundings, she heard a clacking noise, looking down to realize that she still had her cleats on. She suddenly pulled her hand from Tara’s and unceremoniously dropped to the floor and began to remove her shoes.

Tara started to giggle. “Willow, what are you doing? It’s just a floor...it was meant to be walked on.” She said sweetly.

“It’s just all with the shininess and I didn’t want to scuff it up or anything.”

“Come on you.” Tara said, as she offered a free had to the embarrassed redhead.

As they meandered through the house, Willow couldn’t help but feel a little out of her league. Tara’s house was simply amazing, filled with beautiful and expensive things. As they passed through the family room, Willow was entranced by what she saw. Original works of art adorned the walls, designer furniture and a gigantic flat screen TV hung above the oversized fireplace. The entire back of the house was lined with floor to ceiling windows that gave a breathtaking view of the mountains and the lights of LA below.

They rounded a corner and entered Tara’s bedroom. It was huge. On one wall was sliding glass doors that lead out to a garden and the pool area. Opposite the doors was a sitting area with a sofa that was surrounded by floor to ceiling built in bookcases that were filled to the rim. Next to the sitting area was a full size fireplace. The mantle was decorated with various framed pictures and several artistic statues. The centerpiece of the room was Tara’s bed, a beautiful four-poster canopy style king size bed. The canopy dressing was a rich cream color, which offset the deep red of the bedding. Willow’s insecurity seemed to momentarily disappear when her mind began to swim with thoughts of Tara in a negligee laid seductively across the soft red comforter. Thankfully, she snapped out of it before Tara noticed the flush in her cheeks.

Tara continued on and led Willow through a door into the bathroom. Willow’s jaw dropped. Tara’s bathroom was breathtaking. It not only contained a sunken ceramic tile shower, complete with a four-head shower system, but also a full size whirlpool style tub that looked big enough for four people. The tub itself was raised and there were candles on each of the three steps and the surrounding area. One side of the tub faced a small fireplace and the other a glass block window.

“Holy Goddess of luxury! Tara this is the most amazing bathroom I’ve ever seen. Even calling it a bathroom doesn’t seem to do it justice, I mean, it doesn’t even feel right to use the toilet in here.” Willow babbled, as she sat her bag on the floor. Her mind gravitated to the scene of a movie she’d seen recently where a nervous guy stopped up the toilet of the girl of his dreams. He caused it to overflow and accidentally used her luffa sponge to try and unplug it.

Tara snickered and shook her head in response to Willow’s comment about the toilet. “You’re a goof. The towels are under here and Willow…the toilet is similar to the floor, it was made to be used.” Tara said as she turned to leave, only to have Willow gently grab her hand and pull her back. Before Tara knew what was happening, she felt soft lips pressing against hers. She reacted immediately, slipping her arms snugly around Willow’s waist. The redhead’s hands soon finding their way to Tara’s cheeks, holding her head steady, as their kiss deepened. Willow wasn’t sure what drove her to kiss Tara so intensely at that moment; she had just felt an overwhelming urge to connect with the blonde. As the kiss ended, she wrapped her arms around Tara’s neck and pulled her in to a tight embrace. They stood in silence, wrapped around each other for several minutes, neither wanting to break the connection.

Tara wasn’t sure what had gotten into Willow, but she wasn’t complaining. If Willow needed her close, then Tara was more than happy to oblige. What she didn’t know was how insecure Willow was feeling and how she desperately needed reassurance and validation.

Willow finally loosened her grip and Tara began to extricate herself as well. No words were said as the blonde planted a kiss on Willow’s cheek and exited the room. Leaving Willow standing in the center of the room, lightheaded and happier than she’d ever been in her entire life.
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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/2/11)

Postby bouncer73 » Sun Jan 02, 2011 7:50 pm

:pinky .AWESOME update..I was just captivated and saw the whole thing play out in my head..and it was in HD too..lol..

This story is amazing. Its one of my favs and the best part is there is till best parts to come...Keep up the great work...

and I LOVE willows shirt and her comments about Taras house..just so cozy..

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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/2/11)

Postby Promthea128 » Sun Jan 02, 2011 8:15 pm

I'm wondering when the fecal matter is going to collide with the rotating cooling device, the the Paparazzi demons and Morgan's monster. Till then we have almost perfect Tara and Willow fluff.
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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/2/11)

Postby Grimm » Sun Jan 02, 2011 8:33 pm

You totally Rawk!! I loooooooved the T-shirt in this update...as any True Star Wars geek should... So, what happened between the Wilster and the bitch of the year candidate (morgan) 2 years ago? Can't w8 2 find out.... Hey, is there a "team Alice" T-shirt out there? :luv
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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/2/11)

Postby LonelyTara » Sun Jan 02, 2011 8:46 pm

Yay, early New Year update! Lovely little moment with our girls here. I'm glad that Willow's team mates realize that Morgan is not a nice girl. Willow's such a big star, I wonder if they'd throw Morgan off the team if she causes too much trouble. Great description of Tara's house, I can't wait until the two of them get to try out that tub! I'll look forward to next Sunday with great enthusiasm.
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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/2/11)

Postby Ariel » Mon Jan 03, 2011 1:04 am

Shel!


Willow stood on the field lost in thought, absently picking at the leather binding on her glove,

The little moments, the details, that's what I call the 'thunk' of reality; the sense of a real world. Love it! :applause


“Willow, what the hell’s gotten into you? Did you suddenly morph into Carl Lewis or something?” Stacey exclaimed, currently breathless.

Again with the detail! Fun way to reveal character and show off Willow's conditioned bod; clever! :party


About 20 minutes later Willow was standing on Tara’s doorstep, nervously clutching a bouquet of flowers in one hand and her gym bag in the other. She was still wearing her cleats and practice ‘uniform’, which consisted of a pair of baggy purple athletic shorts, knee high black socks and a light blue t-shirt. Completely mismatched yet again. The t-shirt had an illustration of a cow talking to a half gallon of milk. The cow saying, “Milk, I am your father,” and the milk responding, “Nooooooooooo!”

Willow, the glamor girl who puts the bad in bad wardrobe! :pinky Actually I thank you for this! It's so seldom I can smirk at someone else's fashion choices! ;-) Actually I love this picture in my mind!


Before Tara knew what was happening, she felt soft lips pressing against hers. She reacted immediately, slipping her arms snugly around Willow’s waist. The redhead’s hands soon finding their way to Tara’s cheeks, holding her head steady, as their kiss deepened. Willow wasn’t sure what drove her to kiss Tara so intensely at that moment; she had just felt an overwhelming urge to connect with the blonde. As the kiss ended, she wrapped her arms around Tara’s neck and pulled her in to a tight embrace. They stood in silence, wrapped around each other for several minutes, neither wanting to break the connection.

Tender, real, hot . . . :blush Thank you, Ms. McFine!


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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/2/11)

Postby vampyregurl73 » Mon Jan 03, 2011 2:25 am

Shel,

Well, if that wasn't a big "SHE'S A FREAKIN' STAR" moment, when she got the unofficial tour. Willow's reaction could have potentially shot it all down, I think the feelings were to be expected. I feel for Willow here, it's not that she's isn't as celebrated, she is, just differently (and probably not as handsomely financially), but it's the awe of the situation.

What saved it (I think) is Tara having the good sense/graces to not make it a tour of "TARA MACLAY'S CRIB ", she tried to put her to ease. It seems to have worked.

But I think I might actually be willing, or coerced into doing horrible things for a bathroom like hers... horrible, horrible things ;) lol

I also wanna see how you work the celebrity thing, I mean actors /actresses date/fall in love/marry athletes all of the time, so how are you gonna decide to play it?


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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/2/11)

Postby singgirl » Mon Jan 03, 2011 3:40 am

thank you :)
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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/2/11)

Postby Laragh » Mon Jan 03, 2011 6:54 am

I loved this!

Tara's got a slammin' house, that's all I have to say!

I'm not even gonna touch on Morgan 'cause she's such a bitch, my blood boils but I'm glad everyone else is realising that too.

The t-shirt had an illustration of a cow talking to a half gallon of milk. The cow saying, “Milk, I am your father,” and the milk responding, “Nooooooooooo!”


As a massive geek, I salute you for this.

I love how you describe kisses :) :blush

Eagerly awaiting more!

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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/2/11)

Postby zampsa19752001 » Mon Jan 03, 2011 9:11 am

Yay for excellent update-y goodness... Wow, Tara sure has a big swanking house... I truly hope that the other players in the team put Bitch M in her place... Can't wait for Willow & Tara to "test drive" the tub... I absolutely loved Willow's "Darth Moo" T-shirt...
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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/2/11)

Postby deviantART » Mon Jan 03, 2011 11:50 am

Great chap !
Tara is a really great actress :)
I was wondering if Willow is such a good player and having lots of success doesn't she has money too ?
The winner's competition doesn't get money ???
Just wondering :p
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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/2/11)

Postby JustSkipIt » Mon Jan 03, 2011 8:29 pm

Hey Shel,
So... first my condolences on posting a chapter shortly before EasierSaid. I mean... maybe it's just me but I've always felt sort of bad to post and then see like 800 new page views for Neverland and 45 feedbacks and my story gets 4 or something. But maybe that's just me and maybe because my ego is too big or something.

Anyway, these two parts are very well done. Interesting that Stacey alludes to something that happened with Morgan and Willow a few years ago. I think Will mentioned that on the phone too. I'm guessing Morgan had a thing for Will and it didn't happen and Morgan's still jealous? Still, she doesn't have to be a bitch.

2nd part.

Walking with cleats on the floor? Metal spikes or plastic cleats? Either way, get those the hell off. I think that Tara did a very good job of sort of showing Willow to the bathroom without making it "look at my pretty house!" Willow was suitably impressed but sort of "wow and also wow." I actually like the contrast between Tara's thoughts about Willow's apartment from her first visit and Willow's observations here. All in all, it's charming and I'm looking forward to dinner. Did Tara cook or does she have a cook or did she order in?

Ok, I'll be eagerly awaiting the next.
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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/2/11)

Postby wimpy0729 » Tue Jan 04, 2011 8:42 am

Okay, first I gotta say the title of this chapter was a bit of a tease and had my mind going to naughty places. Although, at the end she was in the bathroom and getting ready to shower, just not the same thing I was envisioning. Hopefully they'll get around to that soon.

Man, you did an amazing job describing Tara's home. It seems cozy despite it's size, and all the fireplaces really put me in the mood to cuddle beside them.

Willow's day at practice was not all roses, and it seems there was a thorn in there too by the name of Morgan, who seriously needs to grow up. I'm very curious about the details of what happened between them two years ago.

I hate the thought of Willow feeling insecure, so I'm hoping they have a relaxing dinner, a glass of wine while cuddling by a fireplace and have a nice long talk. Of course, I wouldn't mind if they did their cuddling by the fireplace while soaking in that huge tub surrounded by bubbles and candlelight. I'm just sayin'... ;-)


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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/2/11)

Postby wayland » Tue Jan 04, 2011 4:21 pm

I'm really enjoying this story.

I have a habit of skimming over descriptive passages, but I wasn't tempted to here. Partly because it was well written and partly because it was so important to the story. It was a perfect illustration of the differences they have to overcome. By the end of the update I had such a clear picture of Tara's home and the way it left Willow feeling a bit daunted and awkward. Personally, I'd prefer her little apartment any day.

Coming just after her friends' helpful comments, Willow can hardly avoid a little self doubt.

I'm interested to see how you tell Morgan and Willow's history. The way you've written Willow, I can't see her tolerating such behaviour without some good reasons.

Looking forward to the next update, thanks.

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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/2/11)

Postby Foomatic » Wed Jan 05, 2011 3:47 pm

One of my new year's resolutions this year was to read more fics, so I'm finally getting around to everyone's stories. I enjoyed your fic challenge entry, so I mosied on over. So far, so good. :)

I usually like my fics heavy on the angst side, but this is a welcome departure from all that doom and gloom! You've got a fun playful vibe that I'm enjoying a lot. Morgan needs to check herself. Something tells me there's a lot more going on there than Willow's letting on. Everything's all cute and cuddly now but I have a feeling that things are going to get pretty hairy the deeper W & T get into their relationship. Regardless of being a celebrity or not, dating someone who isn't technically 'out' can be a potentially damaging situation, no matter how much you love a person.

Anyways, thanks for the great read.
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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/2/11)

Postby KioNewgo » Wed Jan 05, 2011 4:39 pm

Shel, I loved it :D.
Stupid Morgan >< I'm really curious about the stuff that happened a few years ago though :P
Good that Will has at least one friend she can really one :)
Tara's house sounds...pretty sweet! But not exaggerated (sp?) as you might expect from a star.

Willow wasn’t sure what drove her to kiss Tara so intensely at that moment; she had just felt an overwhelming urge to connect with the blonde.

I really loved this. It seems (to me) to show Willow's insecurities and her deepening feelings for Tara. :)
Also, the extended hug...loved loved loved loved loved it! :D
I can't wait to read more of this addictive tale :P
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Re: New Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/2/11)

Postby LonelyTara » Thu Jan 06, 2011 6:39 pm

Shel,

Totally feeling your "I posted at the same time as a Neverland update" pain. I never thought it would happen to me--but there it was! LOL

Still, folks are definitely reading and enjoying your lovely fic! Be proud & update soon!
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