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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's not just...Part One 11th May

Postby Willowtree252 » Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:01 pm

:pinky :pinky Oh PTS I had to cross my legs while reading this one do go on please I must see the rest promises were made this kitten wants to see her Mistress in action. ;-)
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's not just...Part One 11th May

Postby Paint the Sky » Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:47 pm

I thought I'd do the replies seein' as someone was good enough to bring this back to my attention (thanks Dia :smash ;-) ).

Zampsa1975 - sami, oh faithful reader, I'm glad you enjoyed the smutty goodness

amazon -
Fucking in the rain... Now that sounds like something eveyone should experience


Well, what are ya waiting for. go to it!

Can't wait for the spanking


Everybodies gettin' spanked but me!


wimpy0729 -
And ooh yes, bring back Mistress, please?


Only if you're very naughty, or no Mistress for you!


katjetson - thanks for making me look at this again ;-)

Someone here is just asking for a spanking, isn't she?


Yes she is, and she very likely to get, big style!

As always, many thanks for the fun time here.


You are most welcome!

Nenyath -
I've never been much for domination but then again, seeing Tara like that, all mistress..


Yeah, that'll do it everytime...

Quote:
“Not crazy, quirky, remember, baby. We decided I was quirky, c’mon, dance with me?” Willow sing-songed as she danced around her lover.

This is just Willow in a nutshell


I love the quirky line, and I just had to use it :)


taralicious -
That puts me in the mind for a new revival of the Golden Age of Hollywood Musicals: Fucking in the Rain.


You have very strange and disturbing thoughts ;-) I had very weird thoughts as to what they would do with the umbrella! Mmm...maybe your not the only one strange and disturbed!!


Lonewolf22 -
I REALLY, REALLY LOVE the update before this one, you could just feel Willow's frustration, and the way that Tara teased her at her desk was just amazing, I was hoping that Tara would take it further, but there is always next time (Hint, Hint). I can't wait to read more.


I'm working out how to fit that in, so to speak. Thank you for your very enthusiastic feedback, I'm pleased it pleased you!


Artemis -
And I also really liked how this scene came out of nowhere


That's good, I struggled with that for a while, I worried it may have been a bit random, but they had been at the beach all day, possibly in bikini's and surrounded by people only able to look and not touch, and Willow is a bit of a horndog, so...

As well as being very sexy, it's really sweet how easily they turn each other on, without meaning to at all.


They are indeed lucky girls in that respect.

I loved Webcam Whoopee too - especially the twist of Tara being right there, surprising Willow, that was delicious!


I tried not to make too obvious that she was on the premises, thank god the smut stopped any pedantic comments like, 'how did Tara get in the building', or 'how did Willow not notice something going on in an empty office' etc.

Oh, maybe I shouldn't have said that! ;-)


Willowtree252 -
had to cross my legs while reading this one


Sorry Dia, you may have to keep them crossed for a little while longer. I know promises were made, and Mistress will keep her promise, I just don't know when. But, I'll do my best to maybe get something by some time next week sort of :hmm

Is that concrete enough for you? ;-)
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's not just...Part One 11th May

Postby amazon » Tue Jun 03, 2008 2:00 pm

I forgot to tell you that
Willow dirty talked her to orgasm.

was a very nice phrase. It creates a very pleasurable image :clap
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's not just...Part One 11th May

Postby Paint the Sky » Thu Jul 17, 2008 8:24 am

Hey smut monkeys. Bet you all though I'd forgot about this. I know it was a long time coming, but it's here now. Hope you all enjoy it, especially you kinky boot people - yeah, you, and you, and probably you!! ;-)



Title: Writer’s Block
Author: Paint the Sky
Rating: NC-17. Sex, swearing, extra spicy talk, spanking and kinky boot fun.
Pairing: w/T
Disclaimer: AU. I don’t own Willow and Tara, don’t sue me, I own nothing.
Feedback: Silly question
Distribution: Pens, and if anyone else wants it, just ask.
Summary: The girls have finally got home, let the kink commence.
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The links are there to show what Tara is wearing in case you need a more visual experience. And let me tell ya, the research was hell!






It’s Not Just the Rain that Makes You Wet – Part Two


Tara felt the warm water suffuse her body with welcome heat that inched its way under her skin to dispel the chill from her bones. The head bobbing languidly between her legs was having the same effect.

They had climbed into the shower as soon as they had gotten home and once naked they had inevitably sought each other, the buzz of their roadside encounter creating an almost instant need to be sated again. Willow had fallen to her knees as soon as they entered the shower cubicle and the suddenness of her tongue in Tara’s folds had taken the blonde by surprise, making her groan as sparks of pleasure fizzed and spiralled within the depths of her pussy.

Leaning against the cold tiles Tara’s hands held Willow’s head in place winding wet strands of red around her fingers. She could feel short fingernails digging into her thighs, urging her to open her legs wider. Bending her knees slightly she pushed her pussy against Willow’s circling tongue.

“You’ll have to get that talented tongue working much harder than that if you still want that spanking pet,” Tara chastised in her best Mistress voice. She hadn’t intended to begin their game so soon, but having Willow kneeling before her Tara found she had slipped into her role with just as much ease as the redhead’s tongue had slipped into her pussy, and she just about held back the groan that Willow was teasing from her flicker by flicker.

On aching knees Willow shivered at the implication of Tara’s warning and worked her tongue into a frenzy of activity. She licked, poked, jabbed and swirled for all she was worth. Her mouth filled with water that had traversed her Mistress’s body diluting the natural muskiness of the liquid collected by her tongue from an infinitely more interesting source, Willow swallowed each mouthful and went back for more to quench a thirst she never wanted quelled. She could feel the tremble in Tara’s thighs as the blonde’s muscles strained against the semi-squatting position, and she moved her hands to quickly support her Mistress’s weight. Willow gave a contented groan as Tara’s slippery buttocks settled into her hands and she doubled her efforts to bring her Mistress to orgasm.

Tara felt the exquisite pleasure of suction on her clit, and when the forceful entry of three fingers into her pussy caused her muscles to clamp down firmly on those invading digits she raised her face and screamed her release into the cascade of water that bathed them both.

Willow revelled in her Mistress’s orgasm, feeling pride and love and overwhelming devotion to this woman who squirmed on her fingers. She fucked Tara harder, pushing and stroking within her slick channel, her fingertips circling, over and over again on that sweet spot that made her Mistress wail like a banshee.

Tara felt the universe explode within her, she felt like she had been pulled into herself and was then expulsed out into a world of light and heat, she felt the water on her skin and it made her tingle as every inch of her was given over to the bliss that came from Willow’s touch. An eternity seemed to pass before her body’s responses stilled and her breathing returned to normal. She was slack jawed with satisfaction, and flushed with contentment and filled with love for her pet, for her Willow, her life, her love…her everything. Still aware of their game, Tara closed her eyes tight against the tears of pure joy that threatened to spill from her, she expelled a sigh to clear the emotions she felt and looked down at her pet, whose cheek rubbed against her thigh, and whose fingers remained deep inside her, “You’ve given me pleasure beyond words, you’ve earned your reward. Do you still want it, pet?”

Willow looked up and into blue eyes that sparkled with promises of pleasure from her Mistresses hand, but behind the sparkle, the unsaid words where there. Tara was telling her it was ok to change her mind, that to say no was just as acceptable.

Willow slipped her fingers from her Mistress and stood up to look directly into those eyes that held her soul. She searched hard for any doubt that might be hidden there, if there was anything that said Tara, not Mistress, had any reservations about moving into an arena they hadn’t explored before then she would see it and act upon it. All she could see was love, trust and herself reflected in the brightness of those eyes that hid nothing from her own.

“Yes, Mistress, I want it.”

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Mistress entered the bedroom and looked around giving visual approval to the preparation of the room.

Candle-light illuminated the cosy space. Tea-lights flickered, their flames dancing in the current created by her movements as she disturbed the air in passing. From the corner of her eye Mistress observed her pet kneeling in the centre of the floor, naked, waiting, eyes cast down. Tara knew that even if her pet was not watching her movements as she traversed the room, that her clever girl had fixed her position in her mind.

“Red silk, pet,” Mistress said with a touch of humour as she ran her fingers along the bed that Willow had stripped and adorned with a single cover, “how very appropriate. Mmm…I wonder if your oh so pale, and very delectable, ass will match it when I’m finished rewarding you?”

Tara didn’t need to look at her pet to know the effect of her words. She heard a soft gasp, and could almost feel the shiver that ran up her pet’s spine, very much like the shiver that ran up her own.

“Should I spank you here?” Tara said as she sat on the bed and rubbed her palms over and over again feeling the cool weave beneath them heat up from the friction, “the silk feels smooth to my touch, and, oh, how it warms up under my touch.”

Another gasp, and Tara smiled, “That’s right pet, just like your little booty, but trust me, the heat you’re going to feel will make this seem icy cold by comparison.”

Willow heard her Mistress give a throaty chuckle, and the creak of springs told her that Tara was on the move. The redhead loved this part. Mistress loved it too.

The redhead felt like prey, but this was a willing sacrifice. Willow knew that her Mistress was circling, verbally and physically, building the tension, playing with her senses, teasing her with words before swooping in for the kill. And such a delicious death it always was, over and over again.

Tara stood behind her pet and lazily stroked her fingers through red hair. The toe of her shiny black leather boot was put to good use as it pushed Willow’s ankles apart causing her pet to settle back onto pale freckled calves.

“Do you know how beautiful you are from behind pet?” Mistress growled, her eyes raking down Willow’s back, and over the swell of her buttocks that were slightly parted where they met the muscles of her lower legs. Even in the subdued light Tara could see how wet her pet was. Willow’s pussy was practically dripping, her inner thighs were coated with slippery goodness just waiting for to be lapped up. Tara fought against the need to push her pet forward and take her there and then.

Tara licked her lips and hesitated for just a moment before sliding her right foot between her pet’s legs. Let’s see if you like this…

She waited.

A beat.

A heartbeat.

The toe of her boot rose slowly from the floor and the rounded point of it pushed gently against the soft yielding flesh of her pet’s core.

Willow’s head shot up as a long groan escaped her lips.

Oh, my Holy good fuck.

Willow wanted to push down, take more of her Mistress into her. Shaky hands clenched closed, short fingernails dug into her palms, slipping on the sweat that had sprung from nowhere.

Mistress was pleased with the reaction. Part of her had worried that pet would pull away, that was a kink too far.

Tara pressed harder and shifted her foot from side to side, her toe making contacting with Willow’s clit.

Again Mistress heard her pet’s moan of pleasure, and frustration no doubt. Tara’s hands had wound themselves into Willow’s hair and she gave a sharp tug that turned Willow’s face up to her.

Mistress smiled at her, a secret smile that said ‘guess what’s coming next’.

Me, I hope…

Mistress lifted her heel from the floor and the leather upper slipped between Willow’s cheeks. Tara pressed her knee against her pets’ back for balance then pulled her foot back slowly so that each and every part of it made contact with Willow’s ass crack.

Don’t move. Don’t move…

Tara raised an eyebrow as Willow pushed back a little as the leathered toe pressed against her anus. Too late, Willow realised her mistake and pulled her hips forward again.

“Oh, pet, shame on you. Now your reward has become a punishment,” Mistress said thrilling her pet even further by pressing her toe against her rosebud again before withdrawing her foot from her pets hot and now even wetter apex.

Willow lowered her head, her eyes once again on the floor and she felt Tara move away and then heard the creak of bedsprings.

Her heart was racing, Mistress was going to spank her, and she briefly wondered if the punishment would be as pleasurable as the reward. Her ass muscles twitched in anticipation as her Mistress ordered her to stand and join her at the bed.

Her legs were unsteady and her first few steps faltered, but then she was there. Standing in front of her Mistress. Her green eyes now focused on the black shiny leather of her Mistresses boots. One of which was highly polished with her juices. Willow blushed a soft pink at the sight, and her asshole contracted in pleasure.

Who knew I had so much kink in me?

With her head bowed, pet looked up along the length of her Mistress from her booted feet to the top of her hips. Her bright green eyes darkened with lust when they seen the black shiny leather that stopped at mid-thigh, they darkened further as they drank in the smooth lightly tanned skin that looked so soft and squeezable. Rolling her eyes up, ignoring the strain, Willow allowed a small smile to play at her lips when she saw that her Mistresses was not wearing panties.

Tara sat down on the bed and moved her thighs apart giving her pet a glimpse of her pussy. Willow, in turn, gave a low groan which elicited a throaty chuckle from the blonde.

“Don’t worry pet, you’ll be up close and personal with it before long, but for now, you only get to look.”

Now that her Mistress was sitting Willow was able to see all of her. Tara leaned back, her arms just behind her and let her pet take in the vision of the Mistress she became for her lover.

The thigh-high boots were laced up the back and Willow’s mouth watered at the prospect of undoing them with her teeth and licking at the marks the laces had made. She quickly bypassed her Mistresses pussy, the urge to part those thighs and worship there would have been too strong to resist if she had let her gaze linger. But, she had seen enough to know how much her Mistress was turned on.

Willow controlled her breathing and moved on in her visual journey. Bad enough that her Mistress was naked at the waist, but her resolve almost collapsed when she saw what was up top.

A black leather bustier, tailored to expose Tara’s magnificent breasts hugged her frame tight. At the neck a circlet of leather held everything together. Willow licked her lips, and couldn’t help but think her Mistress was making things particularly difficult tonight.

“Do you like my outfit pet?” Mistress drawled, her head cocked to the side so she could see more of her pets face.

Willow dragged her eyes away and looked at her Mistresses face, but it was a hell of a battle to keep them there.

“Yes, Mistress, very much,” she said, flicking her glance downwards again.

“I though you would. I like this bit,” Tara said turning her upper body around to show her pet the small silver ring that adorned the back of the leather circlet on her neck, “it’s for attaching a leash.”

The implication wasn’t lost on Willow, she knew the leash wasn’t for her Mistress, and she flooded at the thought.

Tara straightened her back as she turned around to face her pet again, and saw that Willow was excited by the possibility, “I see you’re ahead of me, pet. That’s what I love about you. Your brain, you’re so smart lover.”

Reaching out Mistress took her pets hand and gently pulled her so that she stood at the side of the bed.

“Now, let’s see if we can make you smart somewhere else.”

With a sharp tug Willow found herself laying across her Mistresses lap, she could feel the edge of leather on her skin as well as the heat of Tara’s thighs.

“Wrap your arms under me pet, and hold on tight,” her Mistress told her softly as Tara’s stroked the length of her pets back and over her ass to come to a stop between her thighs.

Tara felt a small kiss brush her hip as Willows hands held her outer thigh, the fingertips burning into her skin. She could also feel the thump of her pet’s heart against her, it was fast and strong and beat a rhythm of fire on her thigh.

Mistress softly stroked her pet’s folds, and Willow’s legs fell open at her touch.

“You really want this, don’t you?” Mistress asked, wondering if her question was directed at her pet or herself.

Willow twisted her neck and looked back at Tara, “Yes, I want it, Mistress,” she said honestly and put her head down again.

Tara slipped her left hand under Willow’s hips and quickly placed it between her open legs. Questing fingers found their target and Willow’s clit jumped as her Mistress applied pressure to it and entered her with two fingers of her right hand.

“I love fucking you pet, giving you pleasure, making you squirm. You’re so wet, so tight.”

Mistress pulled her fingers out gathering as much wetness as she could and moved one up to her pet’s sphincter.

“I can think of somewhere tighter though” she said giving a gentle push at the wrinkled skin.

Tara held her breath, they had never gone this far before, but her pet’s reaction earlier gave her the courage to push the bounds.

Her pet moaned and pushed her ass back at the finger wanting entry, giving Tara permission to take her.

With a firmer push Tara slid her finger into Willow’s ass and she groaned with pleasure as the small muscle gripped and sucked her in further.

Willow was in heaven, or somewhere damn near it as her Mistress stroked in and out of her and rubbed her aching clit harder. She bit down on her lower lip, the pain taking the edge of her pleasure just enough so she wouldn’t come.

Tara could feel just how close her pet was to coming and she slipped her finger from Willow’s anus and rubbed hand over Willow’s ass, painting the taut flesh with her with wetness.

I can do this. Willow wants me to do this. Anything. Everything for her!

Willow groaned loudly and pushed herself against the fingers still circling her clit.

Oh, fuck, do it Mistress, do it now…

Almost as if she heard her pet’s silent plea Tara raised her right hand to shoulder height and swiftly brought it down with a sounding smack.

It was quickly followed by another.

Tara marvelled at the sound of skin on skin, and in the dim candle light the imprint of her hand glowed pink on the alabaster background.

Willow had let loose with loud a yell and encouraged her Mistress by raising her hips and offering herself up for more.

Again and again Tara brought her hand down, and every slap forced Willow’s clit onto her moving fingers.

“Come for me pet,” Mistress urged with next contact and Willow’s buttocks clenched tight as she pressed herself hard against the fingers that had entered her cunt and where now fucking her senseless on her Mistresses lap.

“Argg!! Fuck, oh fuck, yes, again Mistress, again,” Willow screamed before the brain melting heat of orgasm choked her throat leaving her non-verbal.

Two more resounding smacks filled the air before Tara fell back on the bed flushed and sweating. She watched her pet come, hips shaking as she rode the fingers still inside of her, her ass speckled red and white and Tara thought she had never seen such a beautiful sight in all of her life as her lover in the throws of orgasm.

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An hour later, naked and with her pets head between her thighs Tara was fully sated as she came down from her third orgasm since she had reddened her pet’s lily white ass.

Willow crawled up beside her and stretched out pressing her length against the hot skin of her Mistress, who turned to face her with a sad smile.

“I have a confession to make pet, I don’t think I can spank you again like that,” she said softly holding up her hand and looking intently at the redness that still lingered.

“Mistress?” her pet questioned, confused and most of all worried that Tara, not Mistress, hadn’t felt totally comfortable with it all.

“Just look at my hand. We’ll have to buy a paddle.”

The End
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's not just...Part Two 17th Jul

Postby Zampsa1975 » Thu Jul 17, 2008 9:22 am

Yay for another dose of excellent smutty goodness... So the next stop is buying the paddle... I guess very soon Willow's ass has the very same color as her hair...
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's not just...Part Two 17th Jul

Postby JustSkipIt » Thu Jul 17, 2008 10:21 am

I just stumbled upon this. Poor me and lucky me too because I got to read the entire thing in one sitting. Love it. Well, you know. I think that my interest in stories like this is somewhat established. I love the timing and way you're interweaving the BDSM with their love for each other.
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's not just...Part Two 17th Jul

Postby Willowtree252 » Fri Jul 18, 2008 5:37 pm

Sweet heaven it wasn't my legs I had to cross this time ;-) :thud :thud :thud :thud :whip I am so keeping my mouth shut here but surly you are able to read minds right :kdevil more, more please more!!!!!
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's not just...Part Two 17th Jul

Postby Lonewolf22 » Fri Jul 18, 2008 9:51 pm

Paint the Sky: Great update, you could just feel Willow's want and need for the spanking and being dominated, just great. THANK YOU SOOOOOOOO MUCH for letting Tara take it further, I love that Tara was able to give Willow exactly what she wanted. The spanking was really HOT and now that they're going to use a paddle even better. I concur with everybody here, we more, more, more. I can't wait to read more.

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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's not just...Part Two 17th Jul

Postby Anonymous » Sun Jul 20, 2008 1:53 am

Man...That was so hott!...it made me :blush im sure of it....great job :-D
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's not just...Part Two 17th Jul

Postby amazon » Thu Jul 24, 2008 6:29 pm

I'm a bad feedbacker! I can't seem too find words to describe this wonderful piece of writing :thud
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's not just...Part Two 17th Jul

Postby Artemis » Sat Jul 26, 2008 7:50 am

Whew! *fans self* Are you getting a commission from the kinky thigh boots shop? Because you really should - I wouldn't be surprised if they suddenly get a boost in sales because of this.

I really enjoy how you juggle various facets of Willow and Tara's playtime during the story - especially what we see from Tara's perspective. She doesn't just become a dominatrix for the duration - she's stern and intense, but she also jokes, and she has the inner thought questioning how far she can go, whether she's being too kinky, and so on. It gives the scene a very 'amateur' feel, in the best possible sense - the feeling that Willow and Tara aren't mechanically running through a predetermined scene, but that they're just doing it for fun, exploring and making it up as they go along.

Now, I'll go see if there's room on my Willow/Tara memorabilia shelf, besides the action figures and the autographs and the Ghosts of Albion books, for a pair of 'Tara boots'...
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's not just...Part Two 17th Jul

Postby Paint the Sky » Sat Aug 09, 2008 7:14 am

It's been pointed out that I am a tad tardy in replying to feedback. For that, I apologise, and even though it's bumping of a sort, I feel I must rectify the situation.

Zampsa1975 -
So the next stop is buying the paddle..


Yep, and after they buy the paddle, they might even buy the canoe to go with it!!
Thanks for reading Sami.

JustSkipIt - Thank you for your comments, and I'll say again how pleased I was you liked the story, even though I've already told you. Sorry I didn't get back to you about the grammatical advice, but, thank you for the pointer in that direction. Anything that improves the structure and presentation is always welcome.

Willowtree252 -
I am so keeping my mouth shut here but surly you are able to read minds right Naughty Kittens more, more please more!!!!!


It's not hard to read a kittens mind around here, smut, smut and more smut with teensy bit of plot before we get to more smut - lol.

There will be more, but I don't know when. Unlike some, I only have my imagination to fuel my muse, you lucky girl!!


Lonewolf22 -
Great update, you could just feel Willow's want and need for the spanking and being dominated, just great.


I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that Willow's need came over as well as it did. Who wouldn't want to be taken by this Tara? Willow is a lucky girl in all respects.


spashlove23 - Thank you for reading, and leaving feedback - hoped you've stopped blushing by now. If it's any consolation, I blush when writing it - lol.

amazon - There is no such thing as bad feedback, and if i've left you speechless, then my job here is done! Thanks for reading.


Artemis -
Are you getting a commission from the kinky thigh boots shop?


I wish. They are fabulous boots, though!

I really enjoy how you juggle various facets of Willow and Tara's playtime during the story - especially what we see from Tara's perspective. She doesn't just become a dominatrix for the duration - she's stern and intense, but she also jokes, and she has the inner thought questioning how far she can go, whether she's being too kinky, and so on. It gives the scene a very 'amateur' feel, in the best possible sense - the feeling that Willow and Tara aren't mechanically running through a predetermined scene, but that they're just doing it for fun, exploring and making it up as they go along.


I'm pleased you see all of this. I can't imagine that anyone could go from vanilla(for the want of a better expression) to kink in one easy step, with expertise and no doubts along the way. My own feeling is that it isn't about sex, but sex is used as an examination of the self to explore and expose strengths and flaws in the character, as an aide to help a relationship grow and to help two people bond on a deeper level. It's all about trust and the freedom to be who you really are and who you want to be, and no-one achieves that in one giant leap.
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's not just...Part Two 17th Jul

Postby Guest » Sun Jan 25, 2009 2:08 am

First and foremost, this is beautiful smut written with a mature hand.

A contemplation of the relationship between Willow and Tara when they are in Mistress-Pet mode makes me think of this issue as being more than just trust. I do believe there is in fact no attachment to the results of the sexual interplay and that is what creates a setting in your story that is anything but superficial.

There is a verbalisation of frustration, such as you depicted it in the scene where Tara is on the phone with Will and touching herself but there is also an undeniable assumption, both from the standpoint of the readers and the characters themselves, that the interactions inevitably always lead to orgasm. Though it is exciting as smut fic to imagine the expected, it also takes away the human aspect away from it. And I was on the look-out for more emotionality coming from Tara. She does laugh at times or even feel concern thereby temporarily ensuring that the reader does not connect fully with her mistress role but I thought the break was too meagre.

With this in mind, it is the submissive Willow who has my empathy more. Tara is presented as the one with power in the bedroom but the one who truly acquires the power is Will. Paradoxically, though you have shown this through her willingness to trust whatever it is that Tara wants to do with her (nipple clamps or spanking for example), your story at a deeper level encompasses the power aspect in a totally different way.

That is how I came to absolutely love how your Willow lets go of her attachment to the final result with an inflexible intention to be a real pet making the dominion between the two partners psychologically stable.

Thank you for portraying BDSM in the way that you did.

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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's not just...Part Two 17th Jul

Postby Paint the Sky » Thu Jul 16, 2009 10:11 am

Hey, I'm not sure if there is anyone still interested in this series of stories because it has been a long while since I've written anything for here. Hah! Its been a long while since I've written at all, but I thought I'd post this and see how it goes.

In relation to the feedback left by nimloth, we have chatted about it, so I wasn't ignoring it, although I didn't reply here.

Title: It’s all happening at the Zoo.
Author: Paint the Sky
Rating: NC-17. Sex, swearing and extra spicy talk!
Pairing: w/T
Disclaimer: AU. I don’t own Willow and Tara, don’t sue me, I own nothing.
Feedback: Silly question
Distribution: Pens, and if anyone else wants it, just ask.
Summary: Maybe not too chock full of naughty stuff in part one. Tara is having trouble writing, and Willow has been busy being all cute and photoshoppy.
Note: I haven’t written anything in ages, but suddenly got the urge to write this, and as the muse hasn’t beckoned for a while, I thought it best not to ignore her.


Part One

It wasn’t like the blank white page and black flashing cursor was mocking her, but, dammit, they were mocking her. What else could it being doing?

Tara Maclay, bestselling children’s author, was back in the land of Writer’s Block. There had to be a reason this kept happening, but Tara couldn’t quite fathom it. All the pressure that she had felt working for Anya Jenkins had long gone, and Rupert Giles was more than happy just to have her on board. He had given her assurances that there would be no frantic phone calls demanding her to write to a deadline. The Children’s Library understood the creative process had been Giles words on more than one occasion.

This didn’t make Tara feel any better, though. Deadline or not, she had to be businesslike. To take advantage of the Christmas market, her latest book had to be finished by August, proof read, edited, and on the shelves for the last quarter.

Ugh!! I sound like Anya!

It had begun easily enough, and the illustrator had even made initial sketches based on the outline Tara had provided, but even that bothered Tara.

The outline hadn’t fleshed out the way she had hoped. Teddy Bumkins and the Cave of the Snarfledarg was less than half complete.

“Come on, Tara, Squirgleland isn’t such a big country, and the Cave of the Snarfledarg shouldn’t be that hard to get to,” she chided, “he already has the map given to him by King Wibble-long.”

“Yes, he has,” she answered, “but his balloon is damaged, so how does he cross the Sugarcoated Mountains?”

Her books may have been for children, but Tara wanted no easy fixes in them. Children were smarter than that, they knew when you were cheating them. She felt a responsibility to them, they needed to learn that sometimes the journey would be hard, but no matter what, you could achieve your goal.

She frowned at the computer screen, “Stop mocking me.”

It had been a long morning. A morning only made better by copious cups of coffee and sweet thoughts of her red-haired lover naked on the bed, dripping sweat and honey. She pushed Teddy Bumkins trials from her thoughts and concentrated on the one thing that would make her day happier.

Willow was rarely home in time to cook dinner, but the previous evening her lover had waited on her hand and foot. She giggled as she remembered Willow’s discourse on that.

“Hand and foot? I mean, what does that really mean? ‘I was waited on hand and foot’. I know when to use it, and I know it means to do everything for someone, but why hand and foot? What’s so special about the hand and foot? There are more interesting body parts!”

It had been a wonderfully slow relaxing evening. Willow’s dinner of baked salmon with a crisp garden salad tasted fresh and inviting accompanied by a cold Chardonnay and warm candlelight. They talked about their day, Willow filling Tara in on Buffy’s lovelife, and glossing over the boring parts. Tara, for her part, told Willow about her nagging feeling that the illustrator at The Children’s Library wasn’t quite getting Teddy Bumkins and the Squirgleland inhabitants the way she wanted.

“How do you see them?” asked Willow.

“I know they can’t be exact copies of the previous books, let’s face it, Anya screwed us over with that one. It never occurred to me that with Dawn contracted to Anya’s company, that we would have to modify the illustrations for the new books, but, I don’t know, there’s just something I don’t like about the new ones.”

“Maybe they just need a little work. Do they need to change much?” Willow sipped her wine as Tara thought about her question.
“Not too much, I don’t want to change them beyond all recognition, but there has to be changes – I don’t want them too cutesy and Disneyfied,” Tara stated, “I don’t want them Poohed on, you know how much I dislike that.”


Poohed on, was an expression Willow had coined when Tara had first told her how much she loved E.H. Sheperd’s illustrations for Winnie the Pooh, and how she felt Disney had corrupted them too much by making Pooh too round, and Eeyore less gloomy.

“Where are you going?”

“Come with me,” Willow smiled taking Tara’s hand, “Let’s get comfy on the couch and I’ll read to you.”


Who would have thought reading Winnie the Pooh could have led to such sexy fun.

Oh, it had started innocently enough – but then, these kind of things always did.

“Who would you rather be? Pooh or Tigger?”

“I should be Pooh,” Willow stated, “My name begins with a W, so it stands to reason I’m Winnie, and you, Tara, beginning with T, should be Tigger.”

“Ah, I see the logic in your argument, sweetie, but there is also a flaw.”

Tara closed the book and set it on the coffee table; turning to her girlfriend she smiled and took a lock of her hair between long fingers. “This is why I should be Pooh. Pooh is golden honey coloured, and so is my hair. You, on the other hand, are not – Tigger is orangey red, and those beautiful red tresses indicate definite Tiggerish tendencies.”

“Red, not orange – I don’t have orange hair, anyway, you’re not a real blonde, so it doesn’t count,” Willow giggled, “My drapes match the carpet!”

“All true, my love, but there is another reason why I should be Pooh.”

Willow felt the mood change, and she was doubly sure when Tara leant toward her and teasingly ran her tongue over soft pink lips. She swallowed hard, “Why’s that, Tara?”

“Cos, Pooh loves honey, and you know how much I love your honey, all sweet, sticky and warm and dripping from your honeypot.”


Tara smiled. The best way to win any argument with her girl was to deflect logic with seduction.

But nothing could deflect the impasse she now felt as she debated whether to shut down the computer and just accept a day where nothing was going right for Teddy Bumkins, or to struggle on and try and write something, anything, as long as there were words on the screen.

The smile gave way to a sigh as Tara pushed her chair away from the desk, “Lunch.” she said out loud. “Maybe a little food to soak up all the coffee would help.”

Leaving her office door open she entered the bright spacious hallway and continued on to the kitchen checking her cell phone on the way.
While trying to work she had put the cell on silent, and she grinned widely opening up the inbox that contained three texts from Willow.

With one hand she opened the fridge door, and the other opened the first text from her girl.

A gale of laughter erupted as the picture message loaded.
“Is this Tigger enough for ya?” the legend asked.

Tara had to sit down. She couldn’t stop laughing as she looked at the picture message again.

Willow’s smiling face had been transformed into Tiggerish features. The red hair was streaked with black, and orange and black stripes followed the contours of her cheekbones, and whiskers sprouted from the sides of her nose.

“Oh, sweetie, you are a complete nut,” she said with total affection.

The second showed Willow’s torso, naked and painted with more stripes of the same colour. “What about this?” the accompanying text asked.

“A completely crazy, but very sexy nut,” Tara said laughing.

“Oh my God!” Tara exclaimed as the third picture opened.

She blinked, and then blinked again. The picture was of Willow’s legs. Wide open legs, Tara amended. Wide open and tiger striped, she further amended and a black crayon-like scrawl with a downward pointing arrow said “Hunny.”
“And this?” was Willow’s last question.

“And this,” Tara said, “this is proof that if there weren’t enough reasons for me to love you, you would always find more.”

Tara scrolled through the pictures again, examining them in detail. She couldn’t tell if they had been photoshopped or not. Surely Willow hadn’t spent the morning with body paints – had she? And if she had, did she do this at the office?

Try as she might, she lingered on the third picture longer than necessary. Her lover really did have a delicious looking ‘hunnypot’, and it tasted just as delicious as it looked. Tara’s mouth watered as she tilted the phone this way and that to get a better angle.

Her tongue slipped out and she moistened her lips as her thumb caressed the screen on her phone. She could imagine the texture of Willow’s skin, and the scent it gave off. Tara’s heart beat a little faster and she felt her pulse rise in all right places.

She growled softly and snapped the phone closed and sat it on the countertop.

“Oh, Willow, Willow, Willow,” she whispered softly, “the things you do to me ...”

Lunch had almost been forgotten until a grumble in her tummy reminded Tara that she had had nothing since breakfast except for coffee. A quick look in the fridge yielded nothing of interest which prompted Tara’s next move.

She retrieved the cellphone from the countertop and left the kitchen to go upstairs.

Sitting on the bed, she pressed #1.

A moment or two later she heard Willow’s voice say “Hi, baby.”

“Hi, yourself,” Tara replied, “You busy?”

“There’s nothing that can’t wait, everything is going great – oh, I shouldn’t have said that, bet it all goes kablooey now,” laughed Willow.

“I’m sure it will be fine, sweetie. I was wondering if you have time to meet for lunch. I’m kind of hungry and there is nothing here that will satisfy my appetite,” Tara said brightly, but full of purpose as her mind flicked back to the stripy goodness in picture number three.

“Oh, that’s a shame,” Willow pouted, “my baby’s appetite should always be satisfied. What do you have in mind?”

“How about I pick you up at the office and we eat al fresco. I just need to get outside for while, work off some of this caged up feeling,” Tara told her. “How’s your afternoon, anything that can’t be put off?”

It was a hopeful question, Tara knew that, but there was always a chance that Willow could juggle things in their favour.

“Ooh, let me check my schedule.”

While Willow checked her diary, she smiled and hummed to herself.
Whether deliberately or not, “The wonderful thing about Tiggers” filled the silence and had Tara stifling a laugh while she imagined Willow bouncing in her seat.

“Good news, baby, there’s nothing that Buffy can’t take care of, and my next meeting is tomorrow afternoon,” Willow almost sang down the line.

“Yes! I’ll see you soon, just need to shower and change and I’ll be on my way,” beamed Tara.

“See you soon, baby. Um, Tara, where are we going?”

“Willow, how long has it been since you went to Zoo?”

“Huh? ... Um, not since a day trip in High School. Why the Zoo?”

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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's all happening... 16th July 2

Postby Zampsa1975 » Thu Jul 16, 2009 10:37 am

Really nice beginning...
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's all happening... 16th July 2

Postby Laragh » Thu Jul 16, 2009 11:15 am

Just wanted to say I really love this entire series, so keep it up!
Can't wait to read the next installment.
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's all happening... 16th July 2

Postby taralicious » Thu Jul 16, 2009 5:12 pm

Paul Simon sang it best when he wrote "Somethinhg tells me it's all happening at the zoo" and I can totally see Willow and Tara listening to Simon and Garfunkel.
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's all happening... 16th July 2

Postby Zooeys_Bridge » Thu Jul 16, 2009 5:45 pm

PTS, I'm so very glad to see your triumphant return here! Hearty congratulations to you! Well deserved, because all this Pooh and honey and squiggle mcsquiggerton children's bookiness is making me smile.
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's all happening... 16th July 2

Postby JustSkipIt » Sun Jul 19, 2009 2:31 pm

Well, now I'm teased. I'll be expecting some nice smut. Or not so nice...
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's all happening... 16th July 2

Postby Willowtree252 » Mon Jul 20, 2009 7:17 pm

Yeeehawww I love the beginning looking forward to more!!! :pinky
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's all happening... 16th July 2

Postby Guest » Tue Jul 21, 2009 1:50 pm

Poohing and tigerish goodness made me hop giddily into this pane ^^ And I see that we are in for more great acts of love and sensuality towards the sweet body. In the same way that more appetising wetness (as promised in the chapter to come) is more than likely to satisfy anyone's whetted appetites.

There is one thing though in this chapter that is far too wonderful for me to understand and that is the growth of love between Willow and Tara without you having touched extensively on that particular undercover knowledge. I really enjoy those simple touches that get entwined within the timeline as well as the creativity of your language and the ideas generated for adding more bliss to their sex life.

Fleeting glances at a vision of a Willow all decked up in orangery stripes more than compensate for anticipation and patience too. The Pooh/Tigger dialoguing is one of the most authentic role plays I have read so far. There is a genuine touch to it and it's definitely my favourite part of the story so far :)

Thank you for the originality of the text.

So saying, I end my feedback with a grin and a longing to know the outcomes of a zoo outing ...

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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's all happening... 16th July 2

Postby Paint the Sky » Tue Aug 04, 2009 1:40 pm

Hey all! Thank you for the feedback and continued readership :)

And, a big thank you to Chris Cook (Artemis) for the fabulous graphic for this instalment – you can see it at Chris’s site which you can find via a link in any of his posts. Seriously, go look at it, it’s brilliant.

A strange thing happened when putting together the second part – a little plot has crept in. I swear, I tried to keep it out, but it kept niggling at me, so, this one has evolved into a three parter.

I tried to make it smutty, I really did, but I sorta went down a funny road and it ended up being a piece from Willow’s pov – part three will have our girls together at the zoo and the smut will ensue (lol – that rhymes).

Although, it did throw up a scenario for another tale in the series :)

Okay, time for replies to the feedback.

Zampsa1975 -
Really nice beginning...


Thank you, Sami – hope you enjoy the middle part too!

Laragh – Welcome to the board! Thanks for reading, and I’m really enjoying Frothy Goodness even though I’ve yet to leave feedback.

Taralicious -
Paul Simon sang it best when he wrote "Something tells me it's all happening at the zoo" and I can totally see Willow and Tara listening to Simon and Garfunkel.


That’s exactly the song in my head when I was writing this I agree, I think Will and Tara would listen to Simon and Garfunkel. My own personal fav’s are Scarborough Fair, and For Emily, Wherever I may Find Her.

Zooeys_Bridge – Thank you for the hearty hurrah on my ‘triumphant return’. It was good to be writing again. I think our ‘chats’ about Lotus got me creative again, so a big thank you for that.
How is Lotus going? That snippet you sent me has me gagging for more.

JustSkipIt -
Well, now I'm teased. I'll be expecting some nice smut. Or not so nice...


Can you wait on the smut? I’ll try and make it extra nice. Or not so nice … 

Willowtree252 – Dia, good to see you here! Glad you liked the first part, hope you like the next part just as much.

nimloth – Thank you, my friend, for the usual well thought out feedback that has me scratching my head like that bear with very little brain – lol.

I really appreciate you reading this. I know, from conversations with you, that the type of sexual relations portrayed aren’t really your cup of mint tea, but it’s lovely that you see past that aspect to the love and trust that underpins it, because, it isn’t really about the sex. The very things you’ve highlighted about this chapter are the things that relationships are founded on and flourish within – everything else is just an extension of that.

I hope you enjoy part two!

See Part One for disclaimers.


It’s all happening at the Zoo: Part Two

Being all sugary and sticky wasn’t the worst way to wake up. But, stuck to your sleeping lover who you didn’t want to wake, well, that was a tricky one.

Definitely a poser.

Did Willow rip herself away in one quick motion, or pull a little bit at time? The poser became a conundrum. It was probably best she peel away quickly, get it over with and hope that Tara wasn’t disturbed too much.

I’m a Willow shaped sticking plaster.

She tried to lift her hand from Tara’s tummy, spooned as was behind her lover; every body part in contact with skin was stuck fast.

Mmm, ok, here goes.

She felt the pull on her palm, Tara’s skin coming with it until she flexed her wrist and levered her hand away.

Tara grunted at the disturbance and pulled away. Willow smiled until a sharp pain in her nipples wiped it from her face.

Ow! Ow! Ouchie!

She looked down at her chest, red from its sudden abscission from Tara’s sticky back. Along with the redness, was sugar, crystalline honeyed flakes that had dried on hot skin and baked solid with body heat. Her nipples still tingling Willow smiled again.

Is there nothing that won’t turn you on? You’re such a perve, Rosenberg... he-he ... Willow Rosenperve.

Willow had to bite her pillow to stop laughing. It was time to get serious. The sun was up and Willow had a plan to execute and other wheels to put in motion.

Okay, upper body free, thighs and tummy, you’re next.

Willow took a deep breath and mentally counted to three and abruptly straightened her legs and rolled onto her back.

Her eyes went wide and her mouth clamped shut as pain shot through her pubic region. Her hands flew to her mound and she rubbed the tortured area to ease the burning sensation that flooded her womanly parts.

Holy fuck! Oh, oh, oh! Holy hell on fire!

The ceiling swam through a haze of tears as Willow softly whimpered. Her girly parts felt like someone had whipped them nettles.

What the fuck ...

“You okay, sweetie?” Tara murmured from the threshold of sleep and awakening.

“Uhuh ... go back to sleep, baby, its way too early for you to be up,” Willowed said soothingly though her teeth were gritted against the throbbing ache at her groin.

“M’okay,” Tara mumbled as snuggled into her pillow and pulled the covers over her, “love you, Will.”

“Love you too, baby,” Willow whispered before easing out of bed to examine her nether regions.

She crept into the bathroom and switched on the light, and almost afraid of what she would find, she looked down.

Not much of the carpet left now.

As the pain had cleared, her addled wits had put together what had happened; her lovers sugar coated ass had ripped away a strip of pubic hair. Then, another thought struck her and she began laughing.

Willow was still laughing as she turned on the shower, and she was still laughing as she scrubbed dried honey from her skin and hair.

As she showered, her mind drifted back to the previous night and Tara’s predicament regarding the illustrations for her book. Willow’s brain had been busy thinking of a solution before Tara teased her into neural shutdown.
She began to hum as she washed her hair. The Wonderful Thing About Tiggers was drowned out by the sound of the shower, but it didn’t stop Willow from humming or hatching plans.

Her shower done, and body dried and deodorised, she ambled back to the bedroom and dressed as quietly as possible. Her shoes in her hand, she sidled up to her side of the bed and gently lifted the covers.

Her teeth were already biting on her bottom lip, because her assumption had been correct.

There, on Tara’s ass cheek, was a patch of red curls stuck firmly to blob of dried honey.

Willow dropped the covers and left the room as quietly and quickly as she could. She barely made it down the stairs and out onto the porch when she began to laugh again.

Willow’s shoes went on with a struggle as she lost a little co-ordination because her whole body rocked with giggles, and she had to really compose herself as she backed out of the driveway and onto the street.

By the time she reached the main road, normal service had been resumed and her brain clicked into work mode.

The drive to work was uneventful and quick, her early start to the day having the added advantage of less traffic on the usually busy morning roads. Willow pulled into her parking space happy that no one else from the office had arrived yet.

She exited, and locked her car and walked to the elevator. Willow bounced up and down on her heels as she waited for the doors to open. She couldn’t wait to start her day.

A few minutes later she was in her office with the door locked and the blinds closed. She had forty five minutes before Buffy arrived so she moved quickly to her private bathroom and removed her clothes.

She set the timer on her camera and placed it on the shelf beside the mirror. It was the perfect height for the head shot. She stood perfectly still, smiling, counting down the seconds until the shutter sounded.

A quick check, happy with the framing, the shot was saved. Willow set the timer again, and placed the camera on the cistern of the toilet. Again she waited as the timer counted down and the photo was taken.

Willow smiled as she looked at the photo of her torso. Perky breasts and a flat stomach. Not too shabby for someone who sits all day and wouldn’t know the inside of a gym if she was in one.

The T-plan diet. All the food you can eat and the best exercise in the world.

The third photo was a little trickier.

Willow squatted, her knees bent just enough that her folds opened naturally as she spread her legs to get perfectly balanced. She shook her head and smiled. Part of her couldn’t believe she was doing this, and she giggled at the absurdity of it all. But, the other part, the bigger part, knew that Tara would find it extremely funny and adorable, maybe even a little sexy.

She angled her wrist, camera in her hand and pressed the button to take what must be the strangest photograph she had ever taken.

A quick glance at her bits on the screen and Willow hurriedly dressed and rushed to load the pictures into her computer.

Twenty minutes later her work was done and the photos had been transferred to her phone. She deleted the photos from her computer and camera with a sigh of relief and pride in a job well done.

She unlocked the office door and opened the blinds and sat back at her desk with a proverbial grin on her face.

Okay. Time for real work.

She had barely opened her e-mail when she heard Buffy arrive in the outer office, and a moment later, the blonde assistant was standing in front of her with a takeout tray from the local coffee house.

“Morning, boss, coffee and a muffin, just the way you like it,” Buffy said happily as she sat the takeout on Willow’s desk.

Willow smiled at the appearance of both the takeout and her PA.

“Hey, aren’t they the clothes you left here in last night?” Willow teased as she reached for her early morning sugary goodness.

“Um, yeah, I stayed at Riley’s last night,” Buffy said blushing.

“Wow, you did? Well, of course you did, you just said so, but ya know it’s what people say, isn’t it?” Willow grinned, “So, it’s going good with you and Riley?”

“It’s going great with Riley, I never thought it would, but it kinda snuck up on me, and, so, yeah, it’s all of the good,” said Buffy with a sigh and a wide smile.

“I’m really happy for you Buffy.”

“I’m happy for me, too,” the blonde said with a laugh.

The telephone in the outer office rang, “Okay, that’s my cue to get to work.”

“Thanks again for the coffee,” Willow called out as Buffy left her office closing the door behind her.

The morning dissolved in flurry of phone calls and meetings with her programmers leaving Willow very little time to send the picture messages to Tara, but in a five minute window when Buffy brought her coffee she sat back on her chair, kicked off her shoes and put her feet on the desk.

Every time she pressed send she giggled like a naughty school girl.

Better stop thinking about being a naughty schoolgirl ... Mistress Tara would make a great teacher ...Head Mistress Tara.... all discipliny and stern ... ready to punish me for not doing my homework ... yeah, right, like you never did your homework ... okay, so that’ll never happen ... I was late that one time ... ooh, I could get detention for being late ... mmm, I wonder how I would look in a plaid skirt, white blouse and a tie ... Mistress would look great in a robe and mortar board, black lacy bra just showing, and oh, God, those boots, and a cane ...fuck ...better get myself back to the real world ...

Willow let out a long sigh as she rearranged her limbs into a more natural sitting position and slipped on her shoes. She was more than aware of how her body and how it had reacted to her little daydream. Her pulse had quickened at the images her brain conjured, a pinkish blush had crept up into her cheeks and her centre was warm and moist.

Her left hand trailed idly to the buttons on her blouse, she opened a third button and let her fingertips gently caress the exposed skin. Willow felt hot and dizzy. Her daydreams about Tara were just too distracting, especially when they were about Mistress Tara. She groaned at how much she wanted Tara and the tightness in her nipples and belly urged her on, demanding she do something, anything, to relieve the throbbing in her cunt.

I should call Tara, a little sexy tete a tete to break up the morning – there’s nothing like working up an appetite for lunch than my girl sweet talking me to bliss!

Just before she reached for the receiver a shrill ring broke her concentration.

A low muttered damn left her lips and she snatched the handset from its cradle.

“Yes!”

Willow quickly buttoned her blouse and reluctantly decided to take a rain check on sexy fun with her girlfriend.

“Geoffrey Chase on line two, Willow,” Buffy announced.

“Thanks, Buffy,” Willow said less abruptly than she had greeted Buffy’s interruption.

A quick stab with her index finger on the lighted button on her phone accessed line two, “Mr. Chase, thank you for getting back to me,” the redhead greeted in a pleasant tone, “I’m hoping you can give some advice.”

When the conversation ended twenty minutes later Willow was feeling more than pleased with the outcome.

The redhead was even more pleased when Tara called and suggested lunch.

But, why the Zoo?

TBC
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's all ...Part Two 4th Aug 2009

Postby Laragh » Tue Aug 04, 2009 2:12 pm

Okay, tease much?

Seriously though, that was super funny. Can't wait to see what happens when they actually get to the zoo!

Oh and thanks for the welcome...and for reading Frothy too!

Looking forward to the next update. And definitely looking forward to reading the schoolgirl/ head mistress Tara installment if you ever do it!
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's all ...Part Two 4th Aug 2009

Postby taralicious » Tue Aug 04, 2009 5:32 pm

Abcission, that's another good word. Just like Laragh using eviscerate in "Frothy Goodness."
Willow is a saucy little minx here, isn't she? Taking a triptych of photos to show Tara the lengths she'll endure for some Tara lovin'.
The red curls'll grow back and Tara can keep those she scalped Willow of as a memento.
I can deny chicks in chainmail nothing.
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's all ...Part Two 4th Aug 2009

Postby JustSkipIt » Tue Aug 18, 2009 1:38 pm

I'm so glad you PMed me about something totally different. When you did I remembered that you updated this and I never read it. I just read Part One (Rain = Wet). I hope that you'll believe me when I say, without going into too too much detail, that for me this is pretty much the perfect smut. We've got dirty talking (love it), fantasy about BDSM, more dirty talking, and raunchy fucking. Damn and also damn. I'd write more but I want to go read part 2.
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's all ...Part Two 4th Aug 2009

Postby love_2003 » Fri Aug 21, 2009 10:40 pm

Looking forward to what's going to happen at the zoo.
Keep updating.
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Re: Writer's Block NC-17 - It's all ...Part Two 4th Aug 2009

Postby Guest » Thu Aug 27, 2009 10:21 am

There are loads of magic instants present in this narration and once again, I appreciate the originality that you place in the smutty context. By magic instants, I'm referring specifically to these catchy Willow thoughts that provide so much food for the reader's imagination :).

These three are my favourites:

I'm a Willow-shaped sticking plaster

Not much of the carpet now.

The T-plan diet. All the food you can eat and the best exercise in the world.

This combination of dried up honey and polished carpet makes me giggle ^^. The combination between Buffy's shy, happy expressions and Willow's secretive, deep feelings are also assets to your story telling.

Each instance of sexual expression between Willow and Tara, especially in Willow's POV is I feel as sweet as its complimentary loving gesture. Playful Will with her creative and masterful exploration of new ideas for fun new moments is I think what generates further curiosity and interest in what will actually happen at the zoo. Because your smut is filled with surprises; exciting surprises even.

Thank you for this beautiful read and I'm looking extra forward to the zoo scene,

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