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 Post subject: Fic: Out of the Closet
PostPosted: Fri Mar 29, 2002 12:56 pm 
New fic...my last one didn't work out so well so i hope this one is better. Excuse the grammar mistakes...

Title: From the Closet
Author: shooting star
Feedback: Yes please, I never notice my mistakes and all comments help. This is gonna be in script format, I find it easier and being a drama student its what i'm used to so...
Spoilers: Well none unless you don't know that Tara and Willow are a couple d'uh
Summary: My take on how Willow could have come out to the gang
Disclaimers: Joss, ME anyone else who owns them, not me dammit!
Rating: Haven't a clue, it has kissage and obviously Willows coming out

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Taras dorm room. Willow and Tara are lying on the bed snuggled together, kissing. They kiss for a while before Willow pulls away slightly, she takes a deep breath.

W: I wanna tell the gang about us

Tara looked suprised for a moment, and moved back slightly to look at her lover. She had been introduced to the Scoobies a couple of times, usually in a life or death type thing. She remembered voicing her concerns about being a secret they don't even know i exist right? I mean, i know all about them...'. It was almost immediently after that, that Willow had introduced her to Buffy and the gang. Even though as it turned out it had been Faith not Buffy at the time. But this, this was a lot different.

T: (pause) Are you s-sure?
W: Well, yea. i mean i'm really happy and i want everyone to know. Before i wasn't sure about us, about what i was feeling but i really think your the person i could fall in love with, really fall in love with. And i like having something that's just you know mine but i feel like i wanna share that with everyone and usually i don't use so many words when i could just have said yes, but do you get it at all?
T: (smiles) I do..

Tara leaned in and captured Willows lips in a loving kiss, after a few seconds she broke the kiss but stayed close to her girlfriend.

T: I am you know.
W: What?
T: Yours.

Willow looked at Tara lovingly. Both girls smiled and lean towards each other anticipating their lips. They met in a slow kiss which ,as many of their kisses did, built passion.

W: (Big smile) See? Happiness.
T: So when are you gonna tell them?
W: (Turns to a nervous smile) Um..tomorrow? I think...
T: Do you want me there? Because i have a class in the morning but i can come with or meet you...
W: You probably shouldn't blow off your class...but i could use the support.

Willow moves and lies on her back, Tara rests her head on her chest.

W: I thought i would tell them in the morning, there's a meeting at Giles, then we could met for lunch or you could drop by after class? I figure we'll all still be there.
T: Sounds good. How about i meet you at Giles' and then we can get something to eat.
W: Great, I'm thinking the gang will probably wanna met you (frowns)...again.
T: (Rubbing her Willows arm) Are you nervous?
W: On a scale of one to ten...really really nervous.
T: You'll be fine, their your friends. Whats the worst that could happen?
W: Right

TBC

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 Post subject: Fic: Out of the Closet
PostPosted: Fri Mar 29, 2002 1:07 pm 
Hm. Good..I like it.


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 Post subject: Fic: Out of the Closet
PostPosted: Fri Mar 29, 2002 1:24 pm 
I really like it too. Good job. Keep going, please.

Ange.

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"Things are not always what they seem to be...." Shakespare.
"Once you're fallen for me, you stay fallen..."



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 Post subject: Fic: Out of the Closet
PostPosted: Fri Mar 29, 2002 1:41 pm 
Nice little look at that period. Taking us back*S*

Katharyn

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You hear that baby?



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 Post subject: Fic: Out of the Closet
PostPosted: Fri Mar 29, 2002 1:46 pm 
Very sweet. I like the physical closeness they have right now in this chapter.

You might want to try breaking up the speech with some narration; what they're doing, facial expressions, tone of voice, something like that.

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You know I've been through hell...Joss can't you see, there'll be nothing left of me. You made me believe...



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 Post subject: Fic: Out of the Closet
PostPosted: Fri Mar 29, 2002 10:16 pm 
Don't say that!!! Never say that! It always mean adverse reactions.
-Will

btw: great it was cool in script form



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