Story: When the Goddess Calls

[Bobo's Mom]

Feeling much love. Hugs for all. The story's conclusion was never in doubt, but I was feeling a little murky. Wrote happy one shot. Feel Better.

[nika]

Pixie, sorry for spilling my beer on you. I'll offer to either a) Pay for dry cleaning or b) clean it off not so dryly

[Garner]

Bobo’s Mom,
I didn’t find this that dark yet. Dealing with a loved one’s death, especially at their age can’t be easy, but there is something reassuring in the naturalness of it. No one lives forever and there does come a time when death is welcome. I still really like Dr. Russel and how you have used her in this.
I also still like Spike’s role and loyalty. It should be interesting to see where you are going from here. I think that most of your tense problems have been overcome too.
Garner

[Web Warlock]

I am with Garner here. Your writting is improving (and I can tell because it was always better than mine!).

There is a, comfort, in this story because despite the inevitble end we can say, "look, they had a long and happy life together." and I think that is the way it should be.

I think the saddest part of this whole thing is that there will be a time, maybe very brief, that they won't be together.
That is something I worry about a lot with my own wife.

But as we all know, they will always find each other.

Warlock.

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[Jessie]

*sniff*

Uhm, "good" update doesn't sound right. I mean, it was good ... but it was also so very, very sad.

One *leetle* thing ... "dieing" shoud be "dying."

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"And how long have you known your girlfriend's Tinkerbell?"

[Bobo's Mom]

Hey,

I'm moved by the feedback to this story. Some of the thoughtful comments have made me want to raise the level of my writing; the writer's tone should match the soulfulness of her readers. I've taken a week off from this story, but will work on an update soon.

The spoiler thread has taken up too much of my attention, and I think it's time to get back to a little self distraction.

Thanks again for reading-
Danielle

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TARA: Willow and I always know how to find each other!
ANYA: With yoga?
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BUFFYBOT: That'll put marzipan in your pie plate, bingo!

[Katharyn]

quote:

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Originally posted by Bobo's Mom:

The spoiler thread has taken up too much of my attention, and I think it's time to get back to a little self distraction.

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Yeah it does help doesn't it... been distracted with writing until recently so I have not got around to this (and many other fics) Frankly it is pretty damn fine - to coin a phrase. I like...

Kathayrn

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