FF: Unexpected Consequences

[Lisa of Nine]

Um, NOT the last chapter. LOL This thing has a mind of it's own. It was supposed to be done three chapters ago, but I keep adding more details. I just don't want to short change the readers. So, you guys get lots more chapters, and I get to put off my three term papers while I write fan fic!
Lisa

And not to by-pass all the other feedback... but as to tonight's comments after posting 24...
Kendalh897... Um, I will give a happy ending, but I'm not dragging this out until they give birth to Brianna. Sorry. You'll have to settle for her playing with her granma in the waiting plane.
mini-alf:
Yes...more... but I have to write at least one paper first!
Paula:
I have stock in Kleenex! Glad it's working on you. I know when you cry, I've done my job!
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Originally posted by Kalita:
That's not the LAST chapter, right? Just checking.

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[Web Warlock]

Wife and son are asleep, so I can sneak off to finish reading this...

Wow.

Cool, Tara the Arch-Mage. This was worth the wait. In a way I am glad Amy wasn't killed, because you got her character nailed down so well and I would have missed reading your portrayal of her.

Though I am quite glad that Caedo and Rack got theirs.

Would I be repeating my self too much if I said I can't wait for the next part?

Well off to bed...

Warlock.

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Tom Servo: Oh my God. They killed Black Leaf!
Crow: You bastards!
- MST3k: Dark Dungeons

[Kendahl897]

Happy ending--Good enough...And I was totally serious about taking it to Kinkos and having it binded. Do you mind? (Strictly for my own bookcase) BTW, I went to your website and read some of your other fiction . It was great. I hope you're an English major, cause you're a great writer. No kidding!
Maybe one day you'll do a sequel..

[Kiwiccan]

Lisa I have gone back to my old habit of staying a few chapters behind you, so when I feel the need, I just start reading. Right now I have been slowly reading chapters 20-22. This way I get a little bit of Lisa FF heaven every day.

I have learned to do this rather successfuly over the years while reading Lisa's ff.

Ch 22 - Tara just woke up and Rack has tasted her. We always knew she was sweet tasting.

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Paula
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May the Amber Force be with you.
Keeper of my own insanity

[This message has been edited by Kiwiccan (edited February 03, 2002).]

[Scout]

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Originally posted by Lisa of Nine:
"Sweet goddess, help us, She’s so much more."

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When I read that I flashed on Checkpoint - "what is she?" "she's a god." heh heh

Very exciting installment, Lisa, and well worth the wait. Although we've spent all this time worrying about Willow's magick use, now we have to worry about Tara's. So glad to hear the fun isn't ending any time soon.

Thanks again!

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[katydid]

Lisa...I am just speechless. I have to add myself to the list of Lisa Fic Junkies. I have a problem...and I can admit it. This chapter was just incredible.

I know you are not gonna write this until Brianna is born...but who bout a prologue for after she is born? hee hee I will beg! I will let you have all the spicy Tara sandwichs!! I would do anything!

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"She practically has 'genuine molded plastic' stamped on her ass.

[Puff]

I know it was a wonderful chapter very serious and all with people getting their karmic rewards etc but this made me laugh so much.

I got turned into a rat." Amy glared at Cassie. "Then I had a run in with a cat."

"Was he wearing a hat?" Diana suggested with a smirk

Thanks Lisa for the wonderful update. I'm glad the story is going longer than expected, although sorry it is adding to your work load. And hey, the hands across the kitten board worked

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“I…I love you. I just…I just don’t want to be afraid anymore. I want to feel like I am living again.” Legends of the kiss by Mariacomet

[Quill]

Lisa,
What a wonderful update. It was well-worth the wait. The description of Tara in her primal form had my heart racing...I could picture it so clearly. And Willow's pleas for Tara to return made my heart ache.

I am very curious to know what "so much more" means. But then again, that would be the point of ending a chapter with a line like that: piquing our interest just to the point where we're brainstorming all the possibilities, as we lose sleep waiting for the next chapter. *grin* Very clever.

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"My faith in love is like blood...I spill it freely."

[Pixie]

I was desparate after I came home from work yesterday and couldn't get to the Kitten board. I kept getting that stupid screen "cannot find website, hit refresh or try again later." *cries* Kitties, you got so lost. I found you, I'll always find you!

So, I finally got the new chapter. Lisa, you are a goddess! Do you accept minions?

I love how Tara's rage and grief took over her, but she still was only able to kill Caedo in self defense. And Willow's words to bring her back brought me to tears. And, uh...Lisa...what's more than a mage? *waits nervously for the answer*

I'm so glad this just keeps going. Good luck with your papers!

[Bobo's Mom]

Lisa - I'm blown away by the last update. How thankful I am that I decided to check the board today!

BM

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TARA: Willow and I always know how to find each other!
ANYA: With yoga?

[willow_thebadasswitch]

Tara's more than a mage?? Wow! Really curious now. Excellent update!!

~Caro

[ForeverPiper]

That was EXCELLENT!!!! I have been looking for an update for a couple of days now, and I was SO happy to have found one. I can't wait for the next part. What is Tara, if she's not a mage? And how's Willow gonna react? So many questions, I'm just gonna have to wait 4 the answers.
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I still don’t know why we had to come here to get info about a killer-snot demon. -XANDER
Because it’s a killer-snot demon from outer space...I did not say that. –GILES

Talk. All talk. Blah, blah, blah, Gaia. Blah, blah, moon. Menstrual life force power-thingy. –WILLOW

[Sharri]

I'm speechless. I read 24, believing it to be the final chapter - and it ended with the biggest question of all time hanging open.

You are SUCH a gifted writer and I bow at your magificence - truely!

I am caught between the burning need to know how it all ends and total despair that it will.

The minions bit is a GREAT idea - where can I sign on???

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Connect and heal - be true to yourself.

[Pixie]

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Originally posted by Sharri:

The minions bit is a GREAT idea - where can I sign on???

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What with Lisa's modesty, I have a feeling that we'll just have to take matters into our own hands and declare ourselves minions of the gifted Lisa of Nine. Um, never having really been a minion before, I'm not exactly sure how this works. There may be some bowing involved, although the goddess tends to be quite gracious and undemanding. Oh, perhaps shipments of cinnamon tea and cookies would be appropriate, and haikus? I think we'll have to make it up as we go along. Anyone else have any other ideas? Anyone else wanna sign up? You know, we have to keep ourselves occupied and amused while we wait for the next chapter!quote:

[ShaggyKat]

*bowing low*

I am told I make a really good butter cookies. Would the great goddess Lisa of Nine like some?

[Quill]

I can do humble...sign me up. Oooo, a minion of the great Lisa of Nine...*swoons*

As far as services I can offer my mistress; I'm a trained and certified masseuse. It must be terribly stressful on your back sitting at that computer writing for hours. I'm sure I could find some way to alleviate that tension. *grin*

[willow_thebadasswitch]

I too would like to be a minion of the great Lisa of Nine.

I'm a computer programmer and am quite willing to offer my services free of charge... anything to keep the goddess' comp in tip-top shape.

~Caro

[willterra]

I have been reading your fics for ages now, and once I finally reached the end so far, decided I HAD to post a reply. You are absolutely brilliant. I've never tried writing Willw/Tara fics before, as I'm a Kerry Weaver/Kim Legaspi ER fan - visit my homepage
http://www.angelfire.com/ky3/er_fan if you've never heard of them, but I think you've inspired me. I only found this site about a week ago, and I've been on nearly every night trying to catch up. How could I have missed all this for so long?!

Lisa - more? Pretty please?

Gem

[Puff]

I've been a minion before, I seem to remember having to bend over a lot

As for being Lisa's minion I believe we just have to spread the good news about the stories and support the writer. And if there is bending involved then in the name of good fic, I will do it Although...um...it may put Lisa off writing. I do make a mean cup of tea though, anyone?

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“I…I love you. I just…I just don’t want to be afraid anymore. I want to feel like I am living again.” Legends of the kiss by Mariacomet

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[delany]

bending over? that i can do. i shall expose my big red behind in all its glory!!
although its prolly not the behind that your wanting right?
i have goats..
i could set you up a harem? (i've been told i do an amazing dance of the seven veils)
and make superb rum balls..

hehe..

[Pixie]

Puff, thank you for lending your experience to us newbie minions. Should this bending over be a group activity, or do we take turns? I suppose we'll have to ask Lisa what she prefers. Supporting the writer, I can do! *flexes virtual muscles*

[Kalita]

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Originally posted by Pixie:
Supporting the writer, I can do!

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Supporting, eh? I can do that too, though I don't want to strain my back... If it's not too personal, Lisa, how much weight we lookin' at? 'Cuz we may just end up doing a cheerleader-pyramid-group thing, maybe... we'll have to see...

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[Pixie]

I hope that when Lisa gets a chance to look at our replies we'll be able to add "amuse the goddess and cause her to rotflhao" to our miniony duties.

[Lisa of Nine]

Oh, Kalita...
the cardinal minion sin...asking Lisrificus' weight!
Oh the horror!
I'm working on the next chapter...adding some detail and polish, plus working on term papers.

Okay... I hope I don't live to regret this... dear and faithful minions... here's pic of me with the new horse. I'm the one out of focus and wearing the helmet.
Hope this will provide laughs until I can post.
Lisa
http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/arenatrot.jpg

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Originally posted by Kalita:
Supporting, eh? I can do that too, though I don't want to strain my back... If it's not too personal, Lisa, how much weight we lookin' at? 'Cuz we may just end up doing a cheerleader-pyramid-group thing, maybe... we'll have to see...

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[kpmuse]

Pretty horse! Nice Lisa!

minion kris

[willow_thebadasswitch]

horse looks good. erm... it doesn't like arms, does it? cuz an armless minion is so not good.

~Caro
(should i start putting the word "minion" at the start of my name?)

[jomarch]

Hey Lisa, cute horse, good luck with your papers, hope your sister is feeling better and can we have another chapter please!

Minion Jomarch :-)

[Quill]

What a beautiful creature...and a nice pic too. *grin*
~Minion Jayme

[nika]

I want to sign up as a minion too, let's see I uuummm...make a killer pasta and give great foot rubs, would that cut it?

[Lisa of Nine]

Good afternoon,
Well, I just finished with my day classes, and I'm heading to the evening section.
I am giving you tonight's chapter and I will have to work on replies after I get back tonight.All the feedback really makes me smile after a long day.
Sorry for the delays, I've been really swamped.

Tonight's chapter is not betaed, so blame me for the mistakes, not my editor Lea.

The next chapter will be a bit slow because I have several papers due in the next few days.

Enjoy tonight's chapter, and oh yeah... it MIGHT have a cliffhanger.

To my new minion...(wow, I have minion.)
All skills are welcomed, but I especially liked Quill's offer of massage. Um, what state do you live in? ...cuz if you live in California, I might be moving to a state of bliss.

Come forth faithful minion, and don't spare the chocolate or the other sweet snacks! Pasta, tea, any snackage will do, and any and all 'rubbing' is encouraged... oh, wait, that sounds naughty. well, you know what I mean!
Lisa http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/uncon25.html

[This message has been edited by Lisa of Nine (edited February 05, 2002).]