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She's my everything!
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She's my everything!
First, the 'feeding Tara' scene at the end (Somehow I think that phrase just took some of you to gutter city.) was a last minute add on. I didn't expect the Glory thing to come up either, but the characters sort of ran with it. It probably would have been much more 'neat' to end with the Spike/Dawn scene, but well...I was having fun with Willow and Tara.
You know, from some of your comments, I get the feeling that you will be quite upset with me if I tell you I have joined a convent and am forbidden to write smut.
A few of you have sent well wishes to my mo, Thank you. Mom is still not feeling 100% but is doing much better.
Rose - I am glad you can feel that tension. I was trying to maintain a delicate balance.
Getting Tara to the bridge was a real challenge. Whew. I am glad I could get her there.
Autumn - Thank you for reading. What kind of wine do you drink when you read fan fic, white or red?
Leatherqueen - You never asked me when the next story installment was coming UNTIL I mentioned the smut scenes. Does NO ONE love me for my mind?
Ahem. Regarding Spike: I have to admit that I get a kick out of writing Spike. It's always interesting to try and maintain his balance. Of course, Willow and Tara are my first loves.
RJ - Thank you for helping me with Spike Taunts. And for snuggles. ALWAYS for snuggles.
Orion - I hope you had wonderful Willow and Tara dreams. Hopefully involving mistletoe.
*whistles innocently*
ForeverPiper - A standing ovation?! And Roses? For Moi'? Thank you very very much for the kind words.
Jessie - Well I did want that place to be vivid. I was very challenged by the idea that I wanted to make the joy at the end live up to the angst. Hopefully I have done a good job there.
Katy- Thank you again for the encouragement. and I am glad you liked the feeding scene. *big grin*
Kittyko - at least one more bit of snuggles and then well...more then snuggles in the next bit. I still haven't done Christmas morning, after all.
Tiggr - Well I consulted the sisters at the nunnery (see above) and they laid down the list of penance that writing such a scene would entail. I have to admit that I'm intimidated.
Kidding. Yes, yes, yes....there will be one more part. and yes, there will be smut.
Be gentle with me though when I post it, I'm new at this 'naughty' stuff.
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Autumn - Thank you for reading. What kind of wine do you drink when you read fan fic, white or red?
Red. A nice pinot noir usually or a red zin. It's a wonderful compliment to your writing. A reward for me at the end of the day.
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Be gentle with me though when I post it, I'm new at this 'naughty' stuff.
Sure you are...
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Autumn
I have the sudden urge to dedicate my productive cooperation.
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Anyway the update was worth the wait, thank you it was wonderful.
Now bring on the smut
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'The cold and ruthless sea tossed the lovers' into the starry black night. together they fall, together they sleep. forever.. forever.. *whisper*forever..the cold and ruthless sea...' By Sweets
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"Sometimes, we just can't make it on our own. We all need someone to love us, to help remind us that there's good in the world, to keep us from going crazy."
Willow from Dacia's The Dreamer Awakes
If you were to end the story here, I would be satisfied. However, if you really insist on including some smut, I certainly won't complain.
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I'm very seldom naughty
Your FIC is beyond good !
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Willow: ...coz me at fifteen..hello - spaz
And MC...where's the update?
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'The cold and ruthless sea tossed the lovers' into the starry black night. together they fall, together they sleep. forever.. forever.. *whisper*forever..the cold and ruthless sea...' By Sweets
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Patience kittens...I can't just tie up my muse and make her cater to my whims.
er..
That didn't sound right at all.
I actuially have to admit to taking a little break before the smuttage, but only a little one. I never break my promises. Give me a couple more days and I will make thing extra spicy.
frogfear, Actually my stuff is not up on extraflamey...yet. It is on my to do list. But there's tons of stuff floating around 'Different Colored Pens' and one day I'll get my own website up.
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"Sometimes, we just can't make it on our own. We all need someone to love us, to help remind us that there's good in the world, to keep us from going crazy."
Willow from Dacia's The Dreamer Awakes
sorry about that realised after there was more pages! having a DAh moment there!
that was brill! love it to pieces. you should sent that to Joss and if he doesn't use it, he would be dalm stupid! that was fantastic, ever thought of getting Joss to give you a job?
Have you put this great passionate,heart compeling piece of art anywhere complete so i can print it out and show to my girl! and read it over and over again?
*edited to add: instead of double posting, edit your first post and add anything new there, please read the FAQ.
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-AzBlu (going into hiding now)
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If I can survive death, I can probably survive anything.
Common Sense Isn't
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PS: I hope everything's going OK on the home front.
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I'm very seldom naughty
Hope the Muse is in good working order and that the breakfast scene gets saucy!!!
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"Infested roots? Trying to turn me on?" ~ Tara
"I have to try now!" ~ Wil
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'The cold and ruthless sea tossed the lovers' into the starry black night. together they fall, together they sleep. forever.. forever.. *whisper*forever..the cold and ruthless sea...' By Sweets
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