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The Dark Inside - W / T Poem

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The Dark Inside - W / T Poem

Postby Scarecrow » Tue Aug 28, 2001 12:50 pm

This is a poem i wrote after watching Tough Love. be warned, it may be a little depressing...

The Dark Inside.
A Poem by Mark Adams.

We don’t always get to choose
our paths. Other hands decide the
fates of many, choice departed.
Body and mind were as one, now
separated by walls of
darkness. Impenetrable.

Grasping at body, the mind
slips into the void. Trapped,
screaming to get out, to be
free. The noise, the shapes in the black;
they all conspire to keep
it hidden. No salvation.

Release the memories of
the past, except the fate.
Never again to know your
loved ones touch, to laugh, to smile
or to walk the world as one;
it is ended. Forever.

- Based on the events of “Tough Love”.

© 2001 Mark Adams

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"Liberate tutemet ex inferis"

"She's my everything"

"It only takes one tree to make a thousand matches; it only takes one match to burn a thousand trees"

"There are worlds out there where the skies burning,
Where the sea's asleep and the rivers dream,
With people made of smoke and cities made of song,
Somewhere theres danger, somewhere theres injustice,
somewhere else the teas getting cold.
Come on Ace,
We've got work to do"

Scarecrow
 


The Dark Inside - W / T Poem

Postby KittyKo » Tue Aug 28, 2001 1:09 pm

*sigh* it's a little depressing true.. but *very* well created! *snif* what a way with words...

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The Dark Inside - W / T Poem

Postby Scarecrow » Tue Aug 28, 2001 3:15 pm

Awww... thankx.

:-)

Scarecrow
 


The Dark Inside - W / T Poem

Postby Dr.G » Wed Aug 29, 2001 1:07 am

Well it would have been depressing but for the fact we know it ends well, so I don't mind.

I'll second KittyKo's comments.

Dr.G
 


The Dark Inside - W / T Poem

Postby WiccanBex » Wed Aug 29, 2001 5:54 am

this is really great!

sure, it's depressing... but it's so well written!

well done, scarecrow!

WiccanBex
 


The Dark Inside - W / T Poem

Postby Scout » Wed Aug 29, 2001 12:15 pm

It's like relivin' the show all over again! Very nice!
Scout
 


The Dark Inside - W / T Poem

Postby Scarecrow » Fri Aug 31, 2001 11:32 am

Thankx for the comments everyone! I'm thinking of writing one based on NMR next...
Scarecrow
 


The Dark Inside - W / T Poem

Postby Kath » Sat Sep 01, 2001 7:46 am

I'm not much good at poetry myself. Well done!
Kath
 


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