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Re: Can't even shout, can't even cry

Postby Plastixs » Sun Nov 10, 2002 9:05 am

I just finished reading this fic & I loved it. I just hope you'll decide to do an update in the near future. I'll be waiting patiently to read it. Thank you for what you've written so far. :grin



btw: I really like what you're doing to Warren. :)



Ron

Plastixs
 


CH 9B I'm baaaaaaack (evil laughter)

Postby Soul Unity » Tue Nov 12, 2002 1:05 pm

Hi All,



Sorry i was gone so long, my health hasn't been so good lately.

:sneeze

I've been trying to post since sunday, but my computer sux :mad



If a doctor ever says to you " Well, the good news is....." RUN!!! After the good news comes really BAD news. :p



mollyig, BV,and willntlover: Thank you for the "get wells"



foreverwillowtara and Plastixs: Glad your enjoying thing so far Here comes some more :)



-Unity







Title: Body and Soul Chapter 9b

Author: Unity

E-mail: soulunity4ever@aol.com

Feedback: Yes please! Good or Bad

Distribution: You want it you got it. Just let me know where you put it.

Spoilers: Everything up to and including “Villains”

Pairing: W/T

Rating: R

Disclaimers: All BtVS characters are owned by Mutant Enemy. except for Tara, they don't seem to know who she is.

Summary: Tara's back. but shes in a robot. Somthing up with Willow. Warrens in pain. Xander is NOT the hero.

Notes: All character thoughts are in italics. All character speech is in ”quotations” scene/location change ~~~~~~~







“Ok Buffy, we’ll be out soon” Tara said, as Buffy left



As Tara shut the training room door, she heard a soft groan. Tara turned around to find Willow doubled over, clutching her midsection.



“Willow!” she exclaimed.



As she rushed to Willow’s side, Tara felt the cold chill of dark magic.



“no.” Willow said, almost too low for Tara to hear.



Just as Tara reached her, Willow began to fall. Tara quickly caught, and guided her to a chair.



“I can’t…..I won‘t” Willow closed her eyes tightly as she broke out in a cold sweat.



Tara kneeled in front of willow, clasping her hands.



“Willow honey, You won’t what?”



Willow’s eyes snapped open. “Tara” she said, as if just realizing her presence.

Tara gasped at the sight of Willow’s eyes. They were flickering between normal Willow-green and Dark magic-Black. After a few moments they settled on green as Willow regained control.



“Cast” Willow said, solemnly. “I won’t cast But I don‘t know how long I can fight it.”



“Fight what?” Tara didn’t like the sound of this.



“The magic…. I needed power, so I got the black arts books. But I had no time for the reading, so I just sucked the spells up. I kinda absorbed them.” Willow slipped her hands from Tara’s and stood as she spoke.



“Oh Willow! Which books?“ Tara asked, with growing concern. “ Some of those books were so tainted by evil, it was painful just to be near them.”



“All of them.” tears slowly rolled down Willow’s face



“All of…..GODDESS!…..all that darkness.” Tara was shaken, by how much hurt and anger Willow must have felt, to take such drastic measures.



“It’s all in here now.” Willow patted her chest. “And I don’t know how much longer I can keep it in.” Willow turned away from Tara, unable to face her now that she knew everything.



Tara moved behind Willow, and wrapped her arms around her. She placed her mouth near Willow’s ear, and spoke in a voice that was soft, yet somehow firm.



“I love you Willow, and I meant what I said earlier. I’m still here, and I not going anywhere.“



Willow relaxed into Tara’s embrace. “You’re not?



Tara turned Willow to face her. “I‘m not, and whatever happens, we’ll get through this together.”



“Forever?” Willow asked quietly.



“Forever.” Tara leaned closer to Willow.



“Promise?” Willows voice was almost a whisper.



“I promise.” Tara sealed her words with a kiss.



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~





Jonathan, Andrew, and Xanderbot stood inside a large loft, not far from the hospital. The walls were lined with electronic equipment file cabinets and a very impressive computer system. In the center was what appeared to be a modified boxing /wrestling ring. The ropes were made of barbwire and there was no mat, just bare wood, which was stained many colors.



“So, why’d you leave Warren? I thought you needed him.” asked Jonathan.



“Yeah, and what are we doing here?” Added Andrew.



“Warren wasn’t in physical, or mental condition, to be of any use to us. He was however, able to tell me who can help us, and how to make them do my bidding.” Xanderbot said, with an evil grin.



“Well, this place is way cooler than that stupid basement.” Jonathan said. “I can’t believe you guys had another hideout, and didn’t tell me.” The hurt was clear in his voice.



“Don’t you get it? Me and Warren are partners, you’re just the hired help.” Andrew said smugly.



“If I’m hired help, so are you. Warren ditched both of us.” Said Jonathan.



“I am not! He was coming back for me!” Andrew wined.



“He was not!”



“Was TOO!”



“WAS NOT!!”



Xanderbot stepped between them. “Will you two, shut up. We need to find the Ack’Lar talisman, and we need to find it NOW!”



Jonathan and Andrew quickly began to look in different drawers.



“Right, looking for the talisman now” Jonathan said as he began to search. “Um…what does it look like?”



“DUH!, It looks like…….“ Andrew stopped, realizing he had no idea what it looked like. “Well, it looks like a talisman looks.”



“Thank you, Mr. Helpful.” Jonathan said, sarcastically. “I’m glad we got that cleared up.”



“Now I understand why Warren’s plans failed” Xanderbot said to himself. “It’s in an old wooden box, with ancient symbols on it. There should be a paper taped to it that says Ack’Lar. NOW LOOK!”



After s minute of searching, Jonathan and Andrew were across the room from Xanderbot.



“I think Xanderbot’s programming is malfunctioning.“ Jonathan whispered. “”He doesn’t act anything like the real Xander”



Jonathan suddenly found himself being held in the air by his throat. He looked down into the glowing red eyes of a very angry Xanderbot.



“Three things you should know” Said the bot. “One, My name is Alex. Two, I will NEVER act like ’the real Xander‘. And three, The next person that calls me Xanderbot, will be in a world of pain.”



Alex dropped Jonathan, and headed for the door.



“I’m going to get my ‘sister’. I will attempt to repair her myself.” “Oh, and the next one of you who questions anything I say or do, will not live to see sunrise.



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~



Tara and Willow were still in the training room. Tara was trying desperately not to show it but she was extremely worried. Willow was on an emotional roller coaster, with no breaks.



“….If you hadn’t come back, you would have been safe. You were right, I am dangerous. I mean, look at me now. I’m probably going to blow up or something.” Willow was franticly pacing.



“Sweetie, you’re not going to blow up” Tara sat in the chair trying to think of a way to counter the dark magic. “And, this really isn’t your fault”



“Yes It is. No one Made me use dark magic, I chose it, it was quicker.” As Willow spoke her hair darkened. “You tried to warn me, but noooooo, Willow can’t listen to Tara. She has to do things her own way, regardless of the consequences. Stupid, stupid, stupid.”



“WILLOW!” Tara exclaimed.



Suddenly willow snapped back to herself, she looked at Tara slightly disoriented.



“Was I doing it again? She asked quietly.



Tara nodded silently, trying not to cry. She felt like she was loosing Willow.



“Tara, I’m sorry. I didn’t… “ Willow began.



“No, its okay. I know.” Tara stopped her.



“Maybe we should change the subject, talk about something other than me for a while. I’ve been hogging the conversation.” Suggested Willow.



“Good idea.” Tara agreed .



“………”



“……..”



“……..”



“Um….”



“……yeah…?”



“What do you want to talk about?” Tara asked.



“Hmmm……. OH! Sooo…..Um…. how do you like your new body?”



To Be Continued………….



Keep on the lookout for chapter 10

Edited by: Soul Unity at: 11/12/02 8:18:24 pm
Soul Unity
 


Re: CH 9B I'm baaaaaaack (evil laughter)

Postby deixs » Wed Nov 13, 2002 1:45 am

Great update!!

I am glad that you are feeling better and continuing the fic!!

I hope Willow and Tara can deal with Willow's new power!!!



Stef :p

deixs
 


Re: CH 9B I'm baaaaaaack (evil laughter)

Postby Plastixs » Wed Nov 13, 2002 4:46 am

I really enjoyed the update.



It's kinda sad when the Xanderbot shows more emotional maturity than Jonathan or Andrew. Sheesh! I am really curious about Xanderbot's sister. Which one of the scoobies is she modeled after? :hmm



It's going to be interesting watching Tara dealing with her new body & Willow dealing with all the dark magic she absorbed. Looking forward to more updates. :grin



Ron



Plastixs
 


Re: CH 9B I'm baaaaaaack (evil laughter)

Postby mollyig » Wed Nov 13, 2002 10:38 am

Nice to see you back.



Tara's assurance to Willow that she's not leaving will go some way to calming her down, though she still has a lot to work through.



Xander chastising the squabbling duo, and his vehement reaction to being called Xander was funny. But I'm worried about his plan to go after his "sister".

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

mollyig
 


:)

Postby Soul Unity » Wed Nov 13, 2002 11:12 pm

Feedback Yay!



here's some feedback to the feedback :p



deixs: Thanks. I'm glad I'm feeling better too. :)



Plastixs: Yes, Xanderbot/Alex is way more mature than Jonathan or Andrew, too bad the real Xander can't be :p

As for who the mysterious sister is based on, thats easy its..... what?....oh....ok..... Sorry, :willow & :tara said I can't tell, and they run things ;)



mollyig:

Quote:
But I'm worried about his plan to go after his "sister".


After reading your post, I realized I had not been very clear on this. The sister Xanderbot/Alex speaks of is NOT Tara. Its the first bot Warren made with the new design. She is currently under a blanket in the front seat of the stolen police car. That's where Alex is going to get her from.

Sorry for the confusion.



An Apology for Chapter 8



Chapter 8 was originaly huge, but it focused too much on Xanderbot and co. and Katrina's toture of Warren. After editing to center things back on W&T where they belong, some things that used to have a whole paragraph were reduced to a sentance. As a result Some things might be a little unclear. I'm just now realizing how much i cut out. I'm sorry for making things so dificult, and i promise to try and hold the story together and prevent any plotholes from forming. :)



Thanks again, to everyone who has posted to say they are enjoying this. I just hope I'm not chasing you ail away.



-Unity

Soul Unity
 


Re: :)

Postby eccentrictulip » Fri Nov 15, 2002 11:38 pm

yayay!!! you're back!!! i hope you're feeling better.....i have to make a trip to the doctor next week myself for some *tests.* i don't like *tests.* grumble, grumble, grumble....but anyway, feedback....

xanderbot's reaction to being called xander was just too funny, and it's always so good to see willow tara snugglies, especially the reassuring kind poor willow has so much to work through still, and i have a sneaking suspicion that xanderbot is going to interrupt them.....damn warren. grrrrr..... :rage

fantastic update, as always. looking forward to more!!!

*please use both hands....*

eccentrictulip
 


Re: :)

Postby willntlover » Sat Nov 16, 2002 12:58 am

Ooooooo! Another robot!! What can I say?? Loving it :)



-Will

"Hear that baby? You're my always."



"well, you know, when you play a lesbian witch you've gotta get killed in this fun kind of exciting way, so the heart was the way to go..."



"we have the most amazing fans though they LOVE us."





willntlover
 


Re: :)

Postby tkheaven » Sat Nov 16, 2002 7:24 am

WooHoo! This is so cool! And another robot? Methinks it may be a Willowbot, but not too sure (:hmm two Willows running around)...

Tk's new and improved "GrrArgg"...Tk's Heaven


"I've become really protective of her. I want to make sure if Tara comes back, it's for good reason." -Amber Benson

tkheaven
 


Re: :)

Postby Rocktoddy » Tue Nov 19, 2002 7:56 am

Oh Wow! I really love this story! It's getting better and better with each update! And about Xanderbot; It got me wondering... what if season sux had Xander as the Big Bad in the end? He would make an excellent enemy. Always the funny butt monkey, now an unpredictable psycho. I mean, that would be so much better than Willow's f*cked up story arc. And... it would deepen Xander's character so much more! Or maybe not.



Anyway, this story rocks!



:peace Rocktoddy

"Goodbye, cruel adventure game!"

"See, I just came here to lip-sync."

Rocktoddy
 


FRELLING PIECE OF DREN!!!!

Postby Soul Unity » Thu Dec 05, 2002 7:41 am

I hate my computer.



I found out last saturday it had a nasty version of the Chernobyl virus, that attacks on the 26th of each month.



After useing an antivirus program every thing seemed fine, until i shutdown my PC. When I turned it on again it wouldn't load windows anymore. A friend told me to run system recovery, and i got it working again, but a lot of files were missing.



Among the files lost were all the parts of this fic including the current outline and a list of things i wanted to include. :cry



After having 6 people try and recover the data I have to accept that it's lost.



I have a rotten memory and I'm a little lost without the outline. Luckily, chapters 1 through 10 are here so i can read them and make a list of things that need answers and go from there.



I am currently trying to replace all my W&T pix and vids that i also lost. :cry



I will try and get Chapter 11 done as soon as i can but it might take a couple of weeks.



I'm begining to think all these setbacks are trying to tell me to stick to reading fanfic and stop trying to write it :(



Sorry for the long post, when I'm depressed i get longwinded.



-Unity



Edited because I just noticed that the message I posted on Thanksgiving isn't here, and it incluuded chapter 10, I guess i will be rewriting 10 first then I will work on 11, *sigh*

When Love Is True, Two Souls Become One - Soul Unity

Edited by: Soul Unity at: 12/5/02 5:50:08 am
Soul Unity
 


Re: FRELLING PIECE OF DREN!!!!

Postby willntlover » Thu Dec 05, 2002 8:53 am

::hugs::



My computer sux a$$ also. I recently had all my work deleted also.



Don't worry about the fanfic. Put your computer back together. Have a bit of fun. (which of course would be finding the w/t pics :) )



Please don't stop writing!!!! I am totally in love with your story!! I'd be heartbroken if you never finished it.



So good luck with getting/finding all your stuff. ::hugs some more, cuz its a bitch trying to remeber where you found stuff::



-Will

"Hear that baby? You're my always."



willntlover
 


Re: First posted FIC: Body and Soul

Postby maudmac » Sun Sep 28, 2003 1:18 pm

This is new to the archive. You can leave feedback!



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I have often been adrift, but I have always stayed afloat.    --  David Berry,  The Whales of August

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