(New AU Fic) Wild Horses....

[RaVeN]

WOW! and may I meantion again WOW! I just sat down and read all of this fic for the first time and I can't help but say WOW again. Everything was just so how can I put this ummm WOW!



I am from Arkansas myself but moved to Cleveland Ohio about 2 years ago and I am thinking this weather is kinda strange. Maybe I will have to take the motorcycle on a road trip and see exactly where all of you are talking about



love it emensly..

[singgirl]

more please

Pax! -Bev

[WillowFever]

Okay...first...some quick replies....





ophelia11

Hey sweetie....glad you are enjoying...you have quite the addictive little story going on yourself...love it...thanks a bunch....did you like the dress???



RaVeN



Wow...is right....so many wow's ....thanks hun.....and if you get down this way on your bike let me know....I'd love to take a ride....woohoo.....thanks....



singgirl



Hey Bev...more is here....thanks hun....









Now....thank you to everyone for being so patient with me....I'm so sorry for the lapse in posting...but RL is a little crazy right now...but I will try to post as quickly as possible...thanks again to everyone....as always...Happy Reading...











Wild Horses

by

WillowFever





Part 44:        Steam







Willow stood in the middle of her bedroom staring at the vision before her.



She’s a goddess...



She watched helplessly as the glass door to the shower steamed over...slowly blurring the curvaceous body inside. Willow felt her throat go dry. She wanted nothing more than to join the blonde, but her feet would not move.



A goddess in the mist...





Her green eyes took in the shapely form of her lover. There was something so erotic about watching the blonde move and yet not being able to clearly see what she was doing. Silently, Willow stepped towards the shower. The warm scent of vanilla tickled her nose as her eyes followed a lazy trail of suds rolling down Tara’s body.



Oh...I wanna be bubbles...



Tara felt the warm water wash over her and rinse away the troubles of the day. All she needed now was some intense Willow-lovin’. Slowly, she opened her blue eyes and could see the outline of her lover just on the other side of the shower door. She leaned closer to the door and smiled at the blurred face looking back at her.



“You comin’ in?”



Willow opened the door to the shower and smiled at her lover.



“Just try and stop me...”



The redhead stepped into the warm water and found herself immediately held captive against the shower wall. Tara leaned into her lover...their lips a breath apart.



“Ohhhh...I don’t want to stop you....”



Willow felt the blonde’s lips latch onto her neck and suck hard.



Ohhhh....that’ll leave a mark....



Tara ran her hands down Willow’s body as her lips made their way to the redhead’s ear.



“I want you so bad Willow...”



Willow tried to speak, but the feel of Tara’s wet body pressed against her and the warm breath in her ear made speech impossible. She closed her eyes and surrendered to the blonde’s touch.



Tara brushed her thumb across a hard nipple as she moaned against Willow’s ear. She slid her wet body against the redhead’s and felt Willow’s hands slide around her.



“Do you know how much I want you...?”



Tara didn’t give the redhead a chance to answer. Her lips claimed Willow’s and she felt her body ache with need when Willow’s tongue slid against her own. It was slow and sensual...their bodies pressed together as their tongues swirled and danced in the familiar kiss.



Willow felt her knees go weak and wondered if she would be able to remain standing. Tara’s hands were everywhere...caressing...squeezing...teasing.



“Tara....”



Both girls were breathing heavily. Their bodies were on fire and Tara felt her last thread of restraint snap.



“I’ve got to have you...”



Willow threw her head back against the shower as the blonde kissed her way down the freckled body in front of her. Tara paused briefly to kiss and suckle two perfect breasts before continuing her path southward. Willow frantically searched for something to hold onto, but it was too late.



Willow felt warm fingers slide through her folds and into the sticky wetness that had nothing to do with the shower. She gasped as she looked down into the heavy lidded eyes of her lover. Slowly, Tara’s tongue slipped out...Willow closed her eyes as she felt the blonde taste her.



“Oh god Tara....”



Tara moaned against the redhead’s sensitive flesh as she closed her eyes and lost herself in the softness and sweetness that was Willow. She gently nudged Willow’s thigh and the redhead allowed the blonde to lift the trembling leg and rest it over her shoulder.



Tara, slowly, ran her tongue over Willow’s swollen center. The redhead gasped as she felt the blonde latch onto her and begin to suck. There was no urgency to curb the blonde’s appetite. The moment was precious and the embrace was tender. She pulled the redhead into her mouth over and over again. She wanted...and needed to give Willow all the pleasure she could.



“Tara....oh yes....don’t stop baby...don’t stop...”



The blonde felt Willow’s hand rest on the back of her head. Her fingers squeezing every time Tara dipped her head to taste the redhead.



She softly ran her fingers up the inside of Willow’s thigh. She felt the muscle’s tremble under her touch. Slowly, she slid her fingers over to where she wanted them to be. Tara allowed her finger to tease Willow’s opening as she continued to gently suck on the hardness of her lover.



“Tara....please...”



Willow gasped as she felt the blonde slide inside her.



“Ohhhh...yes....“



Tara moaned as she felt Willow tighten around her. Slowly, she pulled out of her lover. Willow barely had time to whimper before she felt the blonde fill her again...this time with two fingers.



“Oh god Tara....yessss.....”



The blonde sucked harder as she began pumping her fingers in and out of her lover. She could hear Willow crying out in pleasure and the sound alone brought Tara over the edge.



“Unngghhh.....Tar...Ohhhh....yes....I’m comin’ baby...”



Tara felt Willow tighten around her fingers once again and knew the redhead was slipping over. She could feel the redhead’s legs trembling as her orgasm hit her hard. Willow’s fingers tangled in blonde locks and Tara moaned at the pleasure she felt when Willow pulled her hair.





Willow’s body shook as wave after wave of pleasure crashed over her. Slowly, Tara pulled her fingers from her lover and sat back. Within a heartbeat, she found herself with an arm full of Willow as the redhead slid down the shower wall.



Willow couldn’t speak as she clung to her lover. Her breath ragged and her body spent. Tara held onto her, rocking softly under the warm spray of water.



“Sshhh....I got you...it’s okay...”



Tara continued to whisper words of love as she made tiny circles with the tips of her fingers on Willow’s back.



“I....I love you...”



Tara held onto her lover as tightly as she could. It was such a surreal moment for her. Here she was...holding onto the woman of her dreams...in the middle of the shower after making love...



“I love you too...”



After a few moments, Willow was able to stand and they finished their shower as quickly as they could. After they dried off, Willow tossed her towel to the floor and grabbed a blanket.



“There’s a very warm fire waiting for us downstairs if you care to join me...”



The blonde smiled as her towel slid from her fingers and landed on the floor.



“Lead the way lover...”



Willow reached out, took Tara by the hand, and slowly headed down the steps. Her mind began to fill with all the ways she could bring this woman pleasure.







tbc......

~ ~ Every so often, I like to stick my head out the window, look up, and smile for a satellite picture...~ ~

[littlecrazy80]

Off to take a cold





*lil´c*

"I am S-E-X-Y" Amber at the FedCon



Sweet Amber ~~~ Amber Board ~~~ Danielle Benson ~~~ Danielle Benson France ~~~ Danielle Board

[wimpy0729]

Oh My! Very steamy indeed!



Well worth the wait Rach! Whew! Okay, breathing coming back to normal. Eyes almost focusing.



Gotta say I love shower scenes.



Thanks for updating. My goofy grin will be in place for many hours to come!



Now, where's the sheepskin rug? Don't leave us waiting too long!



Hugs!

Wimpy

"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara

[marciam]

um... yeah.. what lil c said...



And they're heading for the cozy fireplace setting, oh my. Can't wait for more. Oh, and I looooove take charge Tara.



Marcia

"Now get out of here and go claim your orgasms!" Anya to Tara in Something New by Ophelia11

"Well, we usually call it the ‘Wine Me, Dine Me, Sixty-Nine Me’ Festival of Homos, but Lezziepalooza has a nice ring, too." Willow to Buffy in Gods Served and Abandoned by Antigone Unbound

[willohand]

and eep

ock and eep eep oh my do i need to say anymore?

[pipsberg]

Holy crap, I read that at work. Great update WF!! You are just amazing...

-pipsberg



"We live our lives, do whatever we do, and then we sleep - it's as simple and ordinary as that."

Michael Cunningham, The Hours

[Arwen276]

OH GOD!



wow!



that was just...



PLEASE excuse the lack of appropriate words...



I NEED to cool down a bit!



~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

[WickedReds]

Holy Shit!! that was so worth the wait...

My goddess that was one of the best sexy, smutty , Shower scenes that i'v read... it so ranks up there with some of chris's hellebore bath/shower scenes... i , i , i , and i .. i think i need a cold shower now....



-reds



my banana loves ur smut scene

[singgirl]

wow...umm...nice... can't wait for more story, what will their next adventure be!?

Pax! -Bev

[Apache138]

Hey,



Thanks for this update....and that you took time from RL to give us this wonderful treat.



The way you capture their passion and love is truly beautiful..



Again...all I can say is thank you..



Take Care,

Your friend, always..

Dena

[Mikaelah Braenna]

Hey Rach... I know I have not left you a reply in a while and more than likely with our hectic schedules, you will be lucky if I get the beta'd version of the updates back to you in a timely manner. Speaking of, where is the next one? You know.. the fireplace scene. Soon, I am sure our lives will calm down, especially since we will be only a half hour apart.



I love the whole shower visual you created. Not to mention, it gave me an interesting idea. : --> Wonderful update hun.



Mikaelah

That'll teach me to challenge her. ~Tara ... ~Something New by Ophelia11

[numbered words]

wow...I..uhh...



wow...



is it hot in here?











-Kristyn

[BurningWhiteRose]

hehe...



Im just gonna go buy...a new jaw.







Sincerely,

BWR

***

If homosexuals dont reproduce, why are there so many of them?-Jim David

[sam darls]

Wow..that was mmmm.hot indeed . Wonderful, and beautiful update. Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

[Stroke of Luck]

Wow, that was more than HOT oh but i cant wait for the payback hihi



CU

SoL/Natti

"I wish that you were here or that I were there, or that we were together anywhere!"

[ophelia11]

Uh...humina? I'd say more but my mouth has mysteriously gone dry.



Loved the dress. Should my eyes glaze over right here?



I'm not sure whether I should be worried or thank you for whatever ideas you've given the supreme evil with this update. Either way, I'll send you the video.



Great update. Can't wait for more.

[RaVeN]

I hate to go back to the WOW's so umm I'll just say



WOOO HOOOO



wheeewww



and sure thing, if I head down that way I will reserve a ride for you.. umm motorcycle ride that is.

------------------

To see her was to love her, and love no one but her.. and to love forever...

[Artemis]

Welcome back, and wow, that was a *really* hot shower I'm still picturing the glimpsed curvy form behind the steamed-up glass... yummy.



Chris Cook

alia.customer.netspace.net.au/glass.htm

Through the Looking-glass: A Willow and Tara for every world.

[Kajun]

I love the idea of Willow being so stunned by the vision of her 'Goddess in the mist' that she couldn’t even move and Tara finding herself with an 'armful of Willow'. Beautifully written. Hey.. don’t fret if you’re a bit late with updates. They are definitely well worth the wait! Oh.. I wanted to mention that I like the titles you give each part. Nice touch to a continuously wonderful story!

[sam7777]

Now that was a steamy shower!!! The imagery was fantastic from the "goddess in the mist" to the "arm full of Willow". I also like the previous bit with Frankie laying his head on Willow and her reaction. I just love the horses. Each has it's own little personality and situation. I hope and get to do some riding after the fire in the living room. I'm pretty sure W/T will put the fireplace to shame.

Edited by: sam7777  at: 8/5/04 12:49 pm

[WillowFever]

hello little kitties...



I just wanted to say wow...and thanks for the wonderful feedback....I'll make replies a little later....my phone is out so I can only access the net at work for right now...which is hit and miss.....soooooo...please be patient with me...I promise I'm going as fast as I can......



I will update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!



Thanks for everything...catch ya soon...



Rachel

~ ~ Every so often, I like to stick my head out the window, look up, and smile for a satellite picture...~ ~

[Shy One]

Rachel that was SO.....

And so...........

Wow!

I can't wait for more! Willow and Tara.......naked........together.........in front of a nice roaring fire.................Yummy!!!!



Sorry to hear about your phone troubles. Hope everything gets fixed soon.

Waiting for the next steamy update........



Shy One

[tmr]

tttt.hhheeee..ssshoower..aaannnnndttara...willloooow......hhooottt







tmr

[little miss 666]

uhhh......oh...my......



need........



......more



....yea.....more is.............good



.....................sooooon





*frowns* why do i suddenly feel like Buffy in Beer Bad?!



i'm losing my mind...



...uh...did i mention....more?



........thanks



...................................*passes out*



-lilmiss

Forgive me love For loving you, Forgive my heart For needing you, Forgive my mind For wanting you … So much … Forgive me Love

[WillowFever]

Hello Everyone....wow....I don't think I've ever seen so many thuds and drools...lol...thanks!!!!



I thought I would do some individual replies while working on the next update....I have it almost finished and I hope to have it posted by the end of the week if not sooner...just depends on RL....



Okay...so...please accept my apology at the lack of updates....I will try my best to make it up to you...so here we go.....













littlecrazy80



Thank you sweetie....hope the shower worked for ya....have a great day....and thanks for stickin' round...





wimpy0729



Sheep skin rug.....well..okay..maybe just a cozy little country quilt..but nevertheless...(like it matters as long as our two favorite gals share it...lol)..is on it's way...hope you enjoy...thanks hun...





marciam



Take charge Tara is the greatest....lol...I'm sure we will be seeing more of her....and soon..... Thanks hun....hope you are settling in good....



willohand



Wow...no..no more needs to be said except one big whoppin...THANK YOU!!!!!.....



pipsberg



you read that at work....wow..very brave....thanks hun..







Arwen276



Ya know.....I see the lack of words as more of a good thing actually...hehehehe....so thanks a lot....more to come...



WickedReds



Wow reds....thanks so much....that was a wonderful compliment...and I love it that your banana loved the scenes...lol....more is on the way...



singgirl



hey Bev...you know it is a never ending adventure with those two...so lot's more goodness to come..thanks...



Apache138



Hey Sweetie...thanks so much. I'm so glad you are still liking the story and sticking round for it....lot's more to come so hang in there and bear with me a little longer....lol...







Mikaelah Braenna



Well hello great beta.... I know..I know...I'm such a slacker but I'm sure you've had your hands full of...ummm...activities to keep you busy...lol....when are we going shopping???!!! I know....after the next update...okay..fine....thanks hun for everything....



numbered words



Hey Kristyn....wow...you are speechless...amazing....glad you are enjoying....lot's more to come....thanks...



BurningWhiteRose



How is the new jaw working out for ya?....LOL....Thanks so much hun....



sam darls



Thanks sam....you are a sweetie.....





Stroke of Luck



More than Hot?? Wow..thanks hun....and lot's more goodness to come...promise!!!



ophelia11



lol...thank you so much...wow...I knew you would love the dress...(has it been that long...sheesh) more to come...



RaVeN



Wow's are always welcome...lol....and thank you so much...I hope things are going better for you...and Yes....I'm still gonna hold you to the bike ride....hehehehe at your conveinence tho....lol



Artemis



Hey Chris..thanks so much hun...and there is lot's more to come....



Kajun



Hi...and thanks...I do try to give each chapter a little title that gives something away bout what's to come....glad you like....



sam7777



Glad you are liking the story....and the interaction between Willow and the horsies...and I promise there will be riding to come...hehehe...





Shy One



Thanks hun...phone troubles are fixed and now my brain is on OT...more to come....Thanks..





tmr



Wow...ummmmm....thanks.....that was...hehehe....thanks...





little miss 666





Buffy in Beer Bad...that's funny....



Hope you didn't hit anything when you passed out...Thanks hun for everything and there is lot's more on the way..







I think that got everyone....if I missed anyone please don't flog me....lol....again..I apologize for the slackerness in posting....but I'm working as you read this on the next update...won't be much longer...I promise....



Take care....Happy Reading...

WillowFever

~ ~ Every so often, I like to stick my head out the window, look up, and smile for a satellite picture...~ ~

[pipsberg]

I thought this was an update! How you tease us!! I eagerly await the next thud and drool worthy update.

-pipsberg



"We live our lives, do whatever we do, and then we sleep - it's as simple and ordinary as that."

Michael Cunningham, The Hours

[VixenyTarasHot]

Duuude, I totally thought this was an update too... *sigh* well.. I am happy to hear there could be an update soon cuz you know, this story just kicks all major ass, and everyone loves it and yeah.. therefore updatey goodness is being looked forward to! Thanks



Ashleigh

"...A-and I'm gonna make it up to you. Starting right now."

(Starts to smile)"Right now?"

[Mikaelah Braenna]

I just have to point out that for ONCE this is not Rach's beta's fault! I am totally innocent in this one. As soon as I receive the update, it will be posted. Provided it is before this weekend since I am going out of state. Nonetheless, it will be soon. Thanks everyone.



~Mikaelah

That'll teach me to challenge her. ~Tara ... ~Something New by Ophelia11

Edited by: Mikaelah Braenna  at: 8/23/04 8:10 pm