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Re: Sexy and Sweet!

Postby wimpy0729 » Fri Jul 02, 2004 10:39 pm

Hey WF!!



How do you do it? You still write sexy and sweet together so good that it simply amazes me.



I could just picture Willow trying to seduce Tara with her looks, and Tara being so flustered that she almost falls over the boxes. And yes, the panties dangling from her fingers even had me feeling a little flustered, in a good way!



Now, can you please get these girls home? They have some important things to take care of. :eyebrow



More soon please!



Wimpy

"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara

wimpy0729
 


Re: Sexy and Sweet!

Postby sam darls » Sat Jul 03, 2004 5:21 am

That was simply adorable :heart . Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: Sexy and Sweet!

Postby BurningWhiteRose » Sat Jul 03, 2004 2:07 pm

"Walkin' in my Sears underwear! lalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalala Walkin' in my Sears underwear!"-to the tune of that "Winter Wonderland" song...



...childhood memories...



Im completely off track....i should be all :drool over the Willow with Tara's underwear scene, but for some reason, by brain isnt functioning correctly.



Continue, before I tell you more about my childhood songs.



Out of my Mind,

:flower BWR

Edited by: Warduke at: 7/3/04 1:15 pm
BurningWhiteRose
 


Re: Update

Postby Apache138 » Sat Jul 03, 2004 6:57 pm

Rach,



Wow, two updates that totally rocked this little kitties world.



I do not think you have to strive any more, you hit the peak along time ago and have stayed there. I love the teasing in this update.



Take care



Your Humble Servant,



Dena

Apache138
 


Re: Update

Postby scooben » Sat Jul 03, 2004 8:23 pm

Once again another wonderfully cute update. As always a pleasure to read. Cant wait until the next one.:)

"Love isnt just a feeling, its shaving your balls," Michelle Flaherty, American Wedding

scooben
 


Re: Update

Postby Kajun » Sun Jul 04, 2004 6:43 pm

While Willow and Tara unload the Chevy they are likely to come across a few stowaways. Heck.. there’s probably a line of critters two country-miles long following a path through the woods that lead to the Rosenberg Estate! Tara may have been able to resist Willow’s temptations long enough to pack but will all the boxes make it into the house before today turns into tomorrow? Very sweet inclusion of Tara's thoughts of her mom.. Thanks. Wonderful update.. as always!

Kajun
 


Re: Update

Postby willowsgirl » Mon Jul 05, 2004 3:28 am

Ive been a bad bad kitten and not left feedback until now, but Ive been reading this fic since the very start! And I have to say, it is amazing, I really love it :D Theres something about the way you write, that in another fic this might all seem to have happened too fast...but this fic, and the way you capture willow and tara..the pace seems just right, just perfect for them. So on that note, Im sitting here patiently waiting for more! ;)

Keep up the good work :applause



Stacey xx

willowsgirl
 


Re: Update

Postby Stroke of Luck » Mon Jul 05, 2004 4:42 am

Quote:
“I’m going home....”

A lazy grin formed across the blonde’s face.

“Home....”




Oh how do i know that feeling:heart :love



This was an absolutely adorable update hehe and willow started with the top dresser:p that poor girl!!! yeah right :lol



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

"I wish that you were here or that I were there, or that we were together anywhere!"

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: update

Postby Arwen276 » Mon Jul 05, 2004 6:10 am

WF,



I've just read your fic in one go on Chris's website! TRULY AMAZING! I then came to the board to post my appreciation when I found another update! WOOHOO!!!



Anyway it's a greatly written fic, love the settings, the characters and biscuit! more please?





~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


Re: (New AU Fic) Wild Horses....

Postby sharleen711 » Mon Jul 05, 2004 9:28 am

Hey WF.

I discovered your fic yesterday and i spent all day reading it.. I don't have eyes anymore. But i couldn't stop reading!!!!

So i say for your first W/T ff because it's fabulous.

What a great trip to Phoenix !!!!!

And so happy they decided to live together...

So now i just can say that i'm waiting for the next update.

~ Sharleen ~

sharleen711
 


Re: (New AU Fic) Wild Horses....

Postby singgirl » Mon Jul 05, 2004 1:28 pm

Woot! Very touching. Thank you for the updates.

:peace Pax! -Bev

singgirl
 


replies and update

Postby WillowFever » Mon Jul 05, 2004 2:40 pm

hello everyone.....WOW...I can't believe all the feedback on here....it has totally made my day.....so.....I will make the personal replies and then post the next update....I love you guys....hope everyone had a safe and happy holiday weekend....well...everyone in the states that is..unless it just so happened to be a holiday somewhere else as well...and...I'm totally babbling now....so...here we go.....











marciam



Hey hun....you know lot's of W/T goodness to come...





wimpy0729





Thanks so much hun.....glad you are still enjoying...and they are sure to have lot's of fun after getting home...woohoo..





sam darls



Thanks...





BurningWhiteRose



Ohhh..please enlighten me with your childhood stories....lol...that was very cute.....thanks for sharing...





Apache138



Wow..I rocked your world...twice..I feel...fantastic...thank you darlin'....



scooben



Thanks sweetie...glad you enjoyed....more to is on the way...



Kajun



Thanks hun.....glad you liked Tara's thougths to her mom...thanks for stickin' around..hope you like what's to come





5. Willowhand





Hey Stacey....thanks so much for the feedback....I'm glad you finally dropped a line in.....you know I worried about rushing them together...but it felt right and I'm glad the pacing is coming across as perfect timing....lol..thanks again hun....



Stroke of Luck



Glad you liked.....it does feel amazing when you truly find out that home isn't just a place....it's a person...



Arwen



hey Arwen....more is on the way....and so glad you came by to post some appreciation....I....appreciate it...hehehehe.....





sharleen711



OMG Sharleen...I'm sorry bout your eyes.....lol...but glad you are liking the fic...hehehe thanks hun...



singgirl



Hey Bev...so glad you are still around and liking this story...thanks so much...













Okay....as always thanks to everyone for reading and I hope you like what awaits you....happy reading....





WF













Wild Horses

by

WillowFever





Part 42: Sunshine









Tara sat on the tailgate of her truck...her legs swinging back forth. Willow had insisted that the blonde stay put while she went inside to get them something to drink and she wasn’t about to argue.



Who knew packing could be so strenuous...



“Hey Mac...”



A familiar voice rang in the blonde’s ears and Tara turned toward its owner.



“Hey Dougie...”



Tara soon found herself wrapped up in a warm hug that she happily returned. Doug sat down on the tailgate and motioned towards the farmhouse.



“Movin’ in huh?”



“Yeah...”



“Are you sure bout this Mac...?”



Tara looked at her best friend and smiled. How could she explain to him that she had never been more sure of anything else in the world...that she had found the reason she was alive..?



“Dougie...my soul aches whenever she’s not near...I can’t explain it...it’s like the sun coming up in the morning...you don’t know why it does...it just does...and makes everything brighter...and warmer...and you feel safe in the light of day...”



Doug watched closely as Tara spoke.



“She’s my sunshine...I don’t know why she loves me...but she does...and my world is a better place with her in it...and I would simply be lost and alone without her...”



“I’m happy for you Mac...I really am...”



Doug put his arm around the blonde and gave her a gentle squeeze.



“Its not everyday people find their sunshine...”



Tara arched a brow at her friend. She could just feel him leading into some unbelievable joke...she felt surprised when he didn’t.



“You’ll find yours too Dougie...”



“Yeah...well...”



Tara quickly changed the subject before Doug spiraled downward into the depths of single-hood.



“Aren’t you going to the rodeo?”



She watched as a bright smile lit up his face.



“Yep....leaving out in the morning actually...”



Tara hopped off the tailgate and dusted her herself off.



“Then what are you still doing here...?



Doug pointed over to the barn.



“Frankie’s still out exercising...”



The blonde stopped him in mid-sentence.



“Get out of here...I’ll put Frankie away...”



Doug scratched his chin as he stood.



“Are you sure...cause I...”



“Go...get outta here....have some fun....”



Doug picked the blonde up and twirled her around as he let out a big yeehaw.



“Thanks Mac...”



Doug headed for his Jeep in a light run. He couldn’t wait to get on the road and out of town. He had such a love for the rodeo.



“Call me if ya need me...”



“Yeah...yeah..yeah....”



Willow stepped out the front door and watched as Doug sped down the driveway...leaving behind a cloud of dust.



“Wow...where’s he going?”



Tara turned towards her lover and smiled. Willow stood on the porch holding two mugs of cider watching the Jeep fade out of sight.



“I told him to go...he needs the break...and...I...need you...”



Green eyes quickly shifted to the blonde and Willow smiled. She stepped off the porch and walked up to her lover. Tara took advantage of the moment as she ran her hands down the front of Willows shirt.



“Seems you have your hands full...”



Willow opened her mouth a couple times but nothing came out.



“Well...what do ya know...”



The redhead gasped as Tara’s hands squeezed her breasts.



“Looks like I do too...”







tbc.....





Edited by: WillowFever at: 7/5/04 2:00 pm
WillowFever
 


Re: replies and update

Postby WillowPowered » Mon Jul 05, 2004 3:58 pm

:lol hee hee too cute



Jill

~~~~~~~~

Willow - Say, you all didn't happen to do a bunch of drugs did ya?



My Home Page | Amber Powered | Alyson Powered



There is a little bit of Amber in all of us.

WillowPowered
 


Re: replies and update

Postby wimpy0729 » Mon Jul 05, 2004 6:06 pm

Well, well WF -- I see you've dusted off your tiara and are again wearing it proudly!



How can you live with yourself knowing how unmercifully you're teasing us!!! That was just, just, OH MAN!!! That was just mean.



Anyway, you know I love it! Just makes me long for the next one!! :heart



Soon please?!!



Wimpy



Oh yeah, I am now officially no longer a Blessed Wannabe. Xita fixed me. I am now a "Willowhand" :D

"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara

Edited by: wimpy0729 at: 7/5/04 5:08 pm
wimpy0729
 


reply

Postby willohand » Mon Jul 05, 2004 6:40 pm

ohmygod...this just gets better and better. i just need to um...:thud ...

willohand
 


Re: reply

Postby DreamsToDream » Mon Jul 05, 2004 11:49 pm

Hahaha Thats Too Cute :laugh Naughty Tara Temping Willow When Her Hands Are Full. Cute Update! :)

D2D





Dreams To Dream In The Dark Of The Night, When The World Goes Wrong, I Can Still Make It Right...- Dreams To Dream



I Don't Know About You Miss Kitty,But I Feel A Whole Lot Yummier. - Catwoman

DreamsToDream
 


Re: reply

Postby sharleen711 » Tue Jul 06, 2004 3:13 am

Don't be sorry about my eyes, they are getting better so now i can read a lot again....

I'm really really enjoying your fic. Thanks for the update...



~ Sharleen ~



sharleen711
 


Re: reply

Postby sam darls » Tue Jul 06, 2004 3:17 am

Awww that was so cute :heart . Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: reply

Postby Arwen276 » Tue Jul 06, 2004 3:30 am

ooh la la!!



this is downright naughty!! I love it!!



can't wait for more!





~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


Re: Sunshine

Postby Apache138 » Tue Jul 06, 2004 4:33 am

Rach (Forgive me my queen for not posting w/proper title lately),



You are trying to spoil us with these regular, wonderful updates.



Loving it!!



Y.H.S



Take Care,

Dena

Apache138
 


Re: Sunshine

Postby Stroke of Luck » Tue Jul 06, 2004 4:45 am

Great update like always:D



Hehe that was very cute, and she has indeed two hands full now:D :love



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

"I wish that you were here or that I were there, or that we were together anywhere!"

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: Sunshine

Postby Shy One » Tue Jul 06, 2004 6:24 am

Great update!!! :applause :applause :applause

Sometimes I feel like a broken record...repeating the same feedback line. But what else can I say? Your updates are always great!! :bow :bow :bow

And, as always, I can't wait to :read more!!



Your devoted reader,



Shy One

:shy

Shy One
 


Re: Sunshine

Postby littlecrazy80 » Tue Jul 06, 2004 12:06 pm

Naughty Tara. :D More please! :pray



*lil´c*

"I am S-E-X-Y" Amber at the FedCon



SweetAmber ~~~ Amber Board ~~~ Fred the Elephant

littlecrazy80
 


Re: Sunshine

Postby veiled isis moon » Tue Jul 06, 2004 12:19 pm

Haha! Willow wasn't expecting that! Wish my hands were full................

veiled isis moon
 


Re: Sunshine

Postby Kajun » Tue Jul 06, 2004 1:00 pm

Doug is such a sweetheart.. have a nice trip but don’t hurry back! Now.. where were we? Oh yeah.. hands full of yummy goodness and.. and.. hey!.. you think I didn’t notice your updates getting shorter? Arg. It’s a conspiracy. You are in cahoots with Deb in an attempt to drive me to the brink of madness. Insanity is taking it’s toll. Must. Have. More. Is Tara going to take advantage of the opportunity to help Willow relieve some of her tension? Saddle up cowgirl.. Tara’s gonna take you for a ride! umm.. Frankie’s waiting..

Kajun
 


Re: Sunshine

Postby Artemis » Wed Jul 07, 2004 1:24 am

These latest chapters have been really great. I love how you can have Willow and Tara go from sweet to sexy to silly to profound and back again so seamlessly. I'll remain hooked as long as this story continues :)

Artemis
 


Re: Sunshine

Postby WickedReds » Fri Jul 09, 2004 11:22 pm

I'm so lovin this fic... i just stumbled on it today and all i got to say is :jaw :drool :thud and :banana



so :pray peas update soon...



reds:willow



WickedReds
 


Sunshine and the rest

Postby DreamLover » Sun Jul 11, 2004 2:18 pm

I know I know I never have left you a comment before



So here it comes {fasten your seat belts}:



IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII really like this storyyyyyy.

It's so so perfect in every way. Emotions of the character's and woooo what a first time for tara.

It's so perfect {oho I already said that} I will just stop babbling and go to the point.



Don't ever stop writing, just keep it up because I love it.



Your a angel with wings

DreamLover



DreamLover
 


Re: reply

Postby marciam » Sun Jul 11, 2004 2:48 pm

I'm tossing out my own big Yeehaw!! for this update... and the last part... humina humina... wonderful work sweetie. Looking forward to more :)



Marcia

"Now get out of here and go claim your orgasms!" Anya to Tara in Something New by Ophelia11


"Well, we usually call it the ‘Wine Me, Dine Me, Sixty-Nine Me’ Festival of Homos, but Lezziepalooza has a nice ring, too." Willow to Buffy in Gods Served and Abandoned by Antigone Unbound

marciam
 


Re: reply

Postby WillowFever » Wed Jul 14, 2004 5:06 pm

Hello little kitties...well....I just went through and did individual replies and something happened and it didn't post.....so....I will try again a little later....I just wanted to thank everyone and let ya know that the next part is at the cleaners and as soon as I get it back...I will post for you...



Thanks for being so patient...



love ya'll



WF



WillowFever
 

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