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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby watty » Fri Apr 20, 2007 10:32 pm

Ooooh, pissed off Tara. I like. :)

As usual, your comic timing was spot on.
She indicated the water with a jerk of her head. “Go on then.”

The horse stood and stared at Willow.

“What are you waiting for? Go on,” she said, as the horse continued to look at her.

Not exactly at me, Willow thought to herself. More like…past me…over my shoulder.

And then whammo, Tara hits Willow with the saddlebag. Snerk!!! And did I mention, how I love pissed off Tara?

“You…scoundrel!”

Ever since Princess Leia screamed that at Han Solo, I've associated being called a scoundrel as "I really hate you, no wait I love you, but I have to be mad at you and call you names but I'm so deranged from hating you and loving you that I can't think of a better word than scoundrel." Really, Tara can't be mad at Will for long, because there wasn't much of a choice, or time to tell everybody everything. Tara is smart enough to know that on a rational level, although I think she is justified in being ornery for a little while longer because they hit her and won't tell her who did it. :hmm DCP aka Kitten Ranch? That's a very intriguing name, I wonder what sort of (savory and unsavory) characters we will run into at the ranch?

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby pipsberg » Fri Apr 20, 2007 11:57 pm

Cam,

Hey dude, I missed quite a few updates for GER, so my feedback is going to be a little disjointed and well... lame. I apologize in advance.

I really love were you are going with the story and especially how damn funny it is. The character interaction and dialogue is laugh out loud. Some things that had me rolling to name a few:

-Brawling Willow (red fists of fury!!!)
-Cross Cross dressing bonnet Willow
-Hitting Tara and the spit bet
-Going to the Kitten Ranch

Priceless!! Wonderful job. I am really enjoying it and look forward to more laughs, romance and all that jazz (hands). Peace!
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby dlline » Sat Apr 21, 2007 5:27 am

Yee-haw! Another great update!

If I had shootin' irons, I'd be blastin' into the air! Yee-haw, again.

Really, Cam, it's great. I love the play on the stereotypical western images. I'm reminded of the westerns I watched as a kid, except I like these characters a lot better.
Willow deftly moved under the swing and lunged forward, into Tara’s back. She caught the blonde around the waist with one arm and wrestled the saddlebag away with her free hand.

I can just see 'ornery Tara' kicking and struggling, and poor Will doing everything possible to avoid the attempted ass-kicking. Great visual.

I also loved Tara's diatribe about yesterday ("started out like any other day"). Just another great view into the story.

"It’s kind of a collective farm. Officially it’s the DCP, but they call it the Kitten Ranch.”

Oh, shit.... now do we get to see who lives there? Can't wait for that.

Keep it up, Kiddo. It's still a great story.

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby Chummy » Sat Apr 21, 2007 6:24 am

That was amazing. it was worth the wait ,it was funny. I love it plz don't keep us waiting so long Can't really wait to see what will happened next. Keep the good job. :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party :party
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby EasierSaid » Sat Apr 21, 2007 11:41 am

Boy howdy that was fun. Hi-larious as always. I know I've said it before, but your stories always have this great visual aspect; I really do feel like I'm watching a movie, or at least a very highly regarded mini-series on TNT. ;) I may just have to go back to having a bag of Reece's Pieces handy for future updates...

Loved spittin' mad Tara, that was amusing and really well done. I laughed (and then felt a little guilty for laughing) when Tara ate it, and thought Willow handled the whole hissy fit quite well. I thought Willow did a pretty good job of reassuring Tara that she had her best interests at heart, and that they weren't just abandoning Donnie. The discussion after the wrasslin' was a good show of the trust building between them, too. Also loved the inclusion of Miss Horsey and her reactions. She's a good ol' horse. The Kitten Ranch? Brilliant, and only a little bit scary. But mostly brilliant. Hooray!
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby db » Sat Apr 21, 2007 12:51 pm

tee hee!

'ornery Tara' swinging a saddle bag at Willow is *intimidating* as hell (and sweet and funny and, kinda hot).

I would *not* want to piss Tara off...

I loved all the little images -- Tara dragging Willow down the path (the wrong way), all the Miss Horsey commentary, Tara spitting out a mouthfull of dirt and calling Willow a "scoundrel" *snicker*.

Well -- at least Tara finally understands *why* Willow did it (I suspect it's going to a bit before she *forgives* the scoundrel though).

I love this sweet story!

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby wimpy0729 » Sun Apr 22, 2007 10:01 am

Wow Cam, I can't believe I missed leaving fb for the last few updates. It's been a rough few months and seems like my old body is falling apart, literally. Now things seem better, and you updated, so all is good in the world. Please forgive me?

Okay, probably going to just be repeating what everybody else has already said, but this is still great. Loved the "storyteller" interaction with the children and being corrected regarding the correct version. Hard to take the part about knocking Tara out, but I guess that's how it had to be done at the time for her own safety. And the promise to never tell who the culprit was, apparently, was never broken.

Totally loved Tara waking up and being ticked off, and can't say as I blame her. Their little scuffle was hilarious, and you made it seem like I was standing right there on the dusty road with them.

Well, at least Willow is starting to be more honest with her about the situation, so I'm hoping soon all her secrets will be revealed.

Now...we're off to the Kitten Ranch! Woo and Hoo!

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby Willowtree252 » Mon Apr 23, 2007 1:56 pm

:pinky I am in love with this fic and Tara pissed is a sure turn on mmmmm I like. The kitten ranch :lmao :kgeek
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby Halo » Tue Apr 24, 2007 12:00 pm

Hi there!

Just repeating everything that was said about this wonderful story! I love it, and especially the interactions between the characters! Your dialogues are sooooooo funny (well, not just the dialogues! Miss Horsey, the Kitten Ranch... :-D :-D :-D )
I'm also glad to see Faith in your story ;-)

And now I have just one question trotting in my head: is Willow going to tell Tara that she's a woman, or is Tara going to understand it by herself? I
Thank you for the update!
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby JustSkipIt » Tue Apr 24, 2007 6:41 pm

Cam -

Way to go Tara! I mean, I'm generally a pacifist and not into rooting people on to violence let along violence against their girl/boyfriends, but in this case, I love the way it seems almost as if Tara is growing into her own in this story. I feel like when the story started, she was almost a non-entity. But now she's a genuine character. She really got Willow to listen to her and I loved her rant about what has happened tonight plus which being mad that she didn't know that Will is a bank robber. Quite cute.

I'm glad that Will could calm Tara down and glad for this udpate to be a sort of walking slow for the story.

Well done.
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby tarawhipped » Wed Apr 25, 2007 7:01 pm

Replies to Chapter 22...

Alcy: Hiya Alcy! I'm glad you liked the opening. I wanted to start with a nice gentle morning tableau before all the violence and recriminations. Hehe. Tara definitely needed to open a can of whoop-ass, and even if she didn't beat the crap out of Will, I think the latter will think twice about crossing Tara (not that she was planning to, anyway). As for who did the hitting...it was basically in there. When Tara squeezed Will's hands and she did nothing but smile back at first, Tara knew it wasn't Will who did the deed. If it had been Will, there would have been grimacing at best, a howl of pain at worst. The Kitten Ranch is still down the trail an update or two, but we'll be moseyin' there shortly. Thanks![br]
tazraven: Thank you for the kind words, Sara. No worries on not wanting to read a western, since I'm not a fan of the genre, either. Once I started writing it, though, I found it was so much fun! There are so many opportunities for action, humor, and sweetness, and it's nice to see so many people enjoying it.[br]
watty:
Ever since Princess Leia screamed that at Han Solo, I've associated being called a scoundrel as "I really hate you, no wait I love you, but I have to be mad at you and call you names but I'm so deranged from hating you and loving you that I can't think of a better word than scoundrel."
Yes!!! That was it exactly...and the impetus for using the word. Man, I wanted to be Han Solo so bad...he was so cool. Thanks for the comments on the humor. It's hard to know what'll work, and harder to take an image I find funny and translate it to words, but everyone here has such a great imagination that I trust it's coming across. Thank you, and there will be some familiar folks at the Kitten Ranch, but that's still an update or two away.[br]
pipsberg: Thank you, pips, and no worries on missing a few updates. You updating The Rosenberg Institute gives you a free pass [Non transferable. Limited time only. Some restrictions apply. Offer void if fic abandoned. Cash value is zilch]. LMAO r.e. "cross cross dressing." Always good to see you, pal.[br]
dlline: Thank you, Diane. With the exception of my childhood alter-ego, Cowboy John (don't ask...I so should have known I was a dyke), I never got into westerns, so it's cool that this has appealed to people who do and don't like them. Glad you liked the image of Willow avoiding getting her butt kicked. While she will fight if she has to, I wanted to keep her more in tune with canon Willow's approach to danger ("run, flee, maybe skedaddle"). No Kitten Ranch yet, but ever since Wimpy mentioned the Smut Bunny Ranch way back when I started writing this, I've been planning to put it in.[br]
Chummy: Two updates in under a week! How's that for not waiting? :D I don't know how long it'll last, but I've been really on a roll with this fic again, and all the feedback certainly helps. Thanks.[br]
EasierSaid: Okay, I'm going to ignore that "TNT miniseries" remark, Heather, but ONLY because both you and pips updated this past week and I'm feeling generous. Ever since you first told me you thought S&S had a very visual feel, I've been aware of it, and I do 'see' a lot of the action before I write it...and not in a psychotic "Cam's hallucinating again" way. Glad you liked p.o.'d Tara. She had to get her anger on and out before they could get to the talking. Plus it was fun...kinda like starting a fight with a cheerleader or mascot when they barge into your dorm in Sims, you know? Thank you![br]
db: Yay, more props on the imagery! I loved the idea of a determined Tara stomping off, dragging Will behind her. I felt a little bad dropping her in the dirt, but sometimes comedy hurts. Tara's a pretty forgiving sort, so she's not going to dwell on things too much now that Will has explained. However...Willow hasn't explained everything, has she? >:) Thank you.[br]
wimpy0729: Holy crap! Good to see you, Pam, and just in time, too. No worries on missing a few, and sorry to hear you've been under the weather. I hope all is well, and I'm glad you're still out there enjoying the story. I've never forgotten you're mention of the Smut Bunny Ranch, and hopefully the Kitten Ranch will please. Thank you, and take care.[br]
Dianneswillowtree: Why, thank you kindly, ma'am! No Kitten Ranch yet, just some more quality time on the trail. Enjoy.[br]
Halo: Thank you for commenting on the dialogue. I try to write it as they would talk, which might sometimes make it harder to read, so it's nice to hear positive things. As I mentioned to Heather, I tend to 'see' the scene as I write it, which includes 'hearing' the voices (and again, not in a "Cam hears voices in her head and should be committed" way :D ).
is Willow going to tell Tara that she's a woman, or is Tara going to understand it by herself?
It will be a little while yet (I'm not even sure how long...I know where in the scheme of things it will be, but not how long it'll take me to get there)...but when it does happen, Tara will find out on her own (with the help of incontrovertible visual evidence).[br]
JustSkipIt: I too am a pacifist, Debra, but writing a western...I'm getting in touch with my inner Stooge. I also wanted Tara to get some shots in, since she was really sucker-punched. I'm glad you see her growing as a character. She was definitely the meek, damsel in distress type at the beginning, which was fun to do knowing I was gonna show her not taking any guff later on. That's one of the reason I never liked westerns...women were always the genteel, supportive farm wife or the whore. While Joyce and Darla (among others) get to fill those roles, respectively, it's fun to have a female in the classic hero role, and Tara as the stereotype who breaks the mold. The story will continue to mosey along, as I'm enjoying it too much and finding too many things to throw in there to race to the finish line. Glad you're enjoying the ride, and the update is next. Thanks![br][br][br]
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The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby tarawhipped » Wed Apr 25, 2007 7:01 pm

Title: The Legend of Green Eyed Red
Author: tarawhipped (Cameron)
Email: tarawhipped@hotmail.com
Rating: R (just to be safe)
Disclaimer: All characters are the property of Joss Whedon/Mutant Enemy
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Distribution: Pens, Through the Looking Glass, Mystic Muse. All others please ask first.
Summary: A redheaded stranger rides into a town full of trouble and meets a blonde barmaid. Can they save each other and the town?
Setting: AU (the Old West)[br]
Thoughts in italics[br][br]
***Author’s note: the first section is from Willow’s pov, the rest from Tara’s, hence the change in pronoun usage (Will=‘he’). I hope it’s not too confusing.[br][br][br]
Chapter 23[br][br]
After soliciting repeated promises from Tara that she would not turn the wagon around and head back to Dusty Hollow, Willow gratefully turned over the reins and climbed into the back for a nap. Exhausted, she fell into a deep slumber, lulled by the rocking of the buckboard. When she awoke, the sun was high in the sky, and she was startled to find the wagon stopped and Tara nowhere in sight. She jumped to her feet and scanned the landscape in a panic. Rolling green hills broke the horizon to the north and east, and the grasslands were dotted with shrubs and trees.[br]
“Tara!” she cried out, her brain concocting sundry explanations for the blonde’s absence. She could’ve been waiting for me to go to sleep so she could run off, or maybe she was kidnapped again—oh boy, that would really make her mad—or she could’ve been eaten by a bear—are there bears out here? “TARA!”[br]
She heard a rustling off the trail to her left, and spun to see wide blue eyes peeking at her over the top of a shrub.[br]
“Just a m-minute,” the barmaid stammered, her head disappearing again.[br]
Willow turned away quickly, rolled her eyes at her own stupidity, and realized with some discomfort that the call of nature was hollerin’ awful loud at her too. Tara returned, a slight blush pinking her cheeks. Willow grimaced apologetically.[br]
“Sorry, I just saw you were gone and uh…sorry. I’m just gonna…” Willow waved her hand in the direction of another cluster of bushes and beat a hasty retreat. Before dropping her drawers, she checked over her shoulder to ensure the blonde wasn’t watching, but Tara seemed to be poking around in the bushes on the other side of the buckboard. Her business attended to, Willow trotted back to the wagon and offered Miss Horsey a drink of water from one of the buckets they’d filled at the stream that morning. By the time she returned the bucket to its place, Tara had come back, clutching her bonnet in one hand and smiling widely. As they took their seats side by side on the perch, Tara opened the bonnet to reveal several handfuls of plump blackberries.[br]
“Ooh!” Willow exclaimed, helping herself to several. “Yum.”[br]
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They rode on through to late afternoon, enjoying the changing scenery and the clear day. Despite the strong rays of the sun, the early fall breeze was cool. Will let the reins rest slack on his lap, allowing Miss Horsey to set her own pace. Despite the nagging thought that she should, Tara found it impossible to stay mad at the boy, even when the bruise at her temple began to throb. As the sun began its slow descent, they talked of travel; Tara asked Will about his adventures, and was regaled with increasingly wild stories of daring-do.[br]
“You jumped off of a moving train,” the blonde stated with no small amount of doubt evident in her voice.[br]
“Had to. I’d only crawled into the car to take a snooze.”[br]
“How fast was it going?”[br]
“Had to be thirty, forty miles an hour,” the redhead said, puffing out his chest. “Soon as that whistle blew I woke up, swung open the freight door, and sure enough, Wheeling’s barely a speck behind us.”[br]
“Why didn’t you just stay on it?” Tara asked, her curiosity piqued even if she did question the story’s authenticity.[br]
“Well I did consider that, but you see, that train was headin’ back to Pittsburgh, and I’d already been there,” he winked.[br]
Tara laughed with delight, while Will tossed a blackberry into the air and caught it in his mouth, grinning ear-to-ear before biting into the ripe fruit.[br]
“You, um, you have some juice,” Tara pointed at the redhead’s chin. His smooth, naked chin, she mused, the odd thought pushing through the haze caused when Will wiped his chin off and sucked the juice from his stained fingers. “How old did you say you were?”[br]
The young man’s eyes widened and he looked away. “Sixteen?”[br]
“Hm,” Tara replied, her eyebrows raised. She reached for another berry and popped it in her mouth, chewing thoughtfully. Okay, he’s gone from eighteen to seventeen and a half to sixteen. Even Donnie was getting a scraggly beard at sixteen. Oh god…what if he really is fourteen?[br]
She reached blindly into the bonnet, which lay on the seat between them, and paused when her fingertips touched skin. They pulled their hands out at the same time, Will’s fingers wrapped around the last blackberry, Tara’s fingers wrapped around Will’s wrist. She stared at the freckled hand…the long, graceful fingers. Her thumb and middle finger easily met around the slim wrist. They were deceptively strong hands, obviously used to work, but Tara couldn’t help thinking of them as almost…dainty.[br]
“Please…take it,” Will said, indicating the berry with a nod of his head when Tara raised her eyes to his.[br]
Tara shook her head, dispelling the thoughts that troubled her mind.[br]
“I want you to have it,” the boy said earnestly, mistaking her gesture and raising the berry, along with their still joined hands, closer to Tara. “Please?”[br]
Tara thought about her brother and the boys she’d gone to school with. At fourteen, they were more likely to pull girls’ hair and drop frogs down the back of their dresses than offer them their last berry. She could remember more than one occasion when Donnie had unapologetically scarfed down the last piece of pie without bothering to ask if anyone else wanted some.[br]
Everyone develops at their own pace…that doesn’t mean he’s fourteen. So he’s not all ill-mannered and rough and hairy. Maybe he’s just not like other boys.[br]
Her eyes glued to Will’s, Tara dipped her head toward their hands. Will blinked and his mouth parted as Tara’s lips plucked the berry from his fingers. She maintained her hold even when she lowered their hands to the seat between them.[br]
“Thank you,” she said softly.[br]
“Thank you,” Will echoed. He shook his head a little. “For uh, the berries…picking them.”[br]
“You’re welcome,” Tara said with a gracious smile. “We’ll have to find some more.”[br]
Will nodded, raising a hand to shield his eyes as her squinted at the fading sun. The trail had followed a narrow river for the past few hours, but several miles ahead the two parted ways, the stream bending to the west while the trail continued north. Will pointed to a stand of trees at the divergence.[br]
“Looks like a good place to stop for the night,” he said, looking to Tara for her opinion. She nodded her agreement, and soon they reached the site.[br]
Where the river bowed, a small lake had formed, and Tara offered to see to Miss Horsey while Will tied a hook and length of fishing twine to a fallen branch and set out to procure dinner. By the time he’d caught, gutted and cleaned two medium sized trout, Tara had a fire going and coffee brewing. While Will skewered the fish on two sturdy sticks and held them out over the fire, Tara scavenged the area for more blackberries, returning with a bonnet full of them just as Will was carefully placing the fish on two tin plates.[br]
Their easy conversation over the course of the day dwindled with the last rays of daylight, and Tara found herself growing increasingly anxious. The previous night she’d been unable to consider the situation, but the fact remained that she was out in the middle of nowhere…alone…with a man.[br]
Even if he is sixteen…or fourteen…oh, Anya would never let me hear the end of this. What was Donnie thinking? Of course, he’s been a perfect gentlemen, other than several kisses…most of which I initiated. Oh my god. What must he think of me?[br]
“I guess it’s bedtime,” Will announced, having put the cleaned dishes away and retrieved several blankets, which he spread on the ground near the fire.[br]
“W-what?” Tara asked, standing up sharply, clutching a hand to her chest. He can’t possibly expect—[br]
“I don’t know about you, but I’m dead tired,” the redhead said with a smile. “The sooner we get to sleep, the sooner we can get on the road tomorrow. I think we can reach the ranch before the sun’s too high.”[br]
Tara continued to stare at the bedroll on the ground. It hardly looked big enough for two, unless they lay very close together. Of all the presumptuous nerve![br]
“Mister Smith, I realize that our friendship has at times espoused a…romantic nature, which I admit I am just as responsible for as you. However, you go too far in your assumption of my character, and I simply will not stand for such impudence!”[br]
Will’s brow furrowed deeper as Tara spoke, his eyes finally bulging as he grasped her meaning and he looked in horror at the makeshift bed at his feet, then back at her.[br]
“You thought I, we—no! No, this is—I figured you would take the wagon! It ain’t that cold out, so you should be fine away from the fire…but if you want I’ll take the wagon and you can have…,” he waved his hand down at the bed, seemingly afraid to even look at it again. “I would never suggest any impropriety, Tara. You gotta believe me.”[br]
Seeing the young man’s stricken demeanor—he appeared almost on the verge of tears—Tara trusted his word at once, though she found herself taking momentary umbrage that it hadn’t even crossed his mind. That’s good, Tara. Accuse him of being a rake, then feel insulted when he turns out not to be.[br]
“I’m sorry, Will,” she said apologetically. “And um, the wagon will be fine.”[br]
The redhead nodded and forced a slight smile. Tara cursed under her breath as she turned and walked back to the buckboard, where Will had already laid out blankets for her to sleep on. She smiled at his thoughtfulness and climbed into the bed, unlacing her boots and setting them off to the side. Looking over at the young man, who lay on his side, facing away from her, she felt a slight twinge and recognized it for what it was.[br]
I want to be near him. Heaven help me, I want to fall asleep in his arms. Tara shuddered, and though she pulled a heavy blanket over her shoulder, she knew it had not been from cold. She lay down, her head pillowed on her arm, and the last thing she heard before succumbing to sleep was Will’s sweet voice calling “good night.”[br][br]
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby dlline » Wed Apr 25, 2007 7:34 pm

Dibs.... be right back

OK, I'm back. That was so incredibly sweet. I'll apologize here for not breaking it down, but it was just so effing cute that I don't even know where to start.

I can't wait to see where this goes. Keep up the good work.

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby EasierSaid » Wed Apr 25, 2007 7:39 pm

Well shucks that was sweet. I really liked that Tara is using physical cues to start to figure Will out, as well as using remembrances of her brother's boorish behavior at the same approximate age to help in the figuring. You have to think that all of the little things that help make Tara attracted to Will - the smooth face, thin fingers, caring/sharing nature, etc. - are all the same things that would give "him" away, and it's cool that Tara's clueing in some (especially before they get to the rough and rowdy Kitten Ranch - "assume much," you might say, but honestly 'rough and rowdy' can't be that far off, right? ;) ).

The thought that Will might be 14 was pretty funny - I liked that Tara worked really hard to rationalize her way out of that momentary concern real fast (lord knows I'd do the same in her position). Loved Will regaling Tara with tall travel tales, and that Tara is very skeptical of their authenticity. The interplay is really endearing and shows great chemistry. And of course, have to mention poor Will, getting the short end of Tara's assumption stick, but hey - looks like Tara was the one that missed the snuggling most. Kitten Ranch next, huh? (Provided they're not waylaid by coyotes or rattlesnakes.) Can hardly wait. Thanks Cam - was a great read!

p.s. In my defense, I did say *critically acclaimed*... ;)
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby spells42 » Wed Apr 25, 2007 7:44 pm

Can I make up for missing feedback for the previous update by being first for this one? Well, da**! Nearly first :blush

I was so excited when I saw an update to this fic, and it was great to read, but then I didn't have time to feedback, and then I thought I had so I didn't come back to do it, and THEN I saw another update only to realise I hadn't left feedback at all. ooops.

Anyway... they were both great. Loved the bit where Miss Horsie appeared to be a very amused spectator... just waiting for the blow to land. Angry Tara was magnificent, and wasn't she clever to work out who'd hit her like that. I wouldn't want to be Donnie next time they meet.

This last update was fun: starting with the business in the bushes, Tara finally beginning to get a clue, and finally
That’s good, Tara. Accuse him of being a rake, then feel insulted when he turns out not to be.


Soooo good you're back with this fic. Looking forward to more.
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby db » Wed Apr 25, 2007 8:17 pm

ooooh Tara is *so* catching on to 'Will'!

...the whole idea of Tara smooching a 14 year old thing gave me a momentary blechy feeling until Tara (and I by proxy) figured out it wasn't true. Sooooooo, Willow has already called her/his self different ages, and Tara has picked up on in (and the dainty hands and the slim wrist and the smooth smooth skin).

But

Why hasn't Tara called Will on this? She seems quite willing to call Willow on other suspected behaviors...

I think it is because Tara is figuring things out. I wonder how long it will take for Tara to formulate a hypothesis on this subject, and when she does, I wonder how long she'll torture Will before she lets on that she knows!

I love this story, it is so sweet and original and entertaining!!

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby Willowtree252 » Wed Apr 25, 2007 8:31 pm

:pinky wow you have me on the edge of my seat for Willow to come clean. Will Tara A. Slap her B. Fall into her arms C. leave her at first and then forgive her ........ I just dont know love the story cant wait for more :kitty
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby wimpy0729 » Thu Apr 26, 2007 7:30 am

Hey Cam! You had me giggling at the thought of Will interrupting Tara's potty time, and then Will having to be cautious so Tara wouldn't notice she's a "squatter" too. BTW, did they have toilet paper back then or just have to drip dry. Sorry, just feeling silly today.

I really liked Tara's finally noticing Will's delicate features. I mean, hands are one of the first things most lesbians notice, um, at least this one does. So Tara almost had a "wow I coulda had V-8" moment. Come on Tara already. Oh, I'm getting frustrated now.

The bedtime scene was so cute, but I did feel sorry for poor Will.

Oh, and I'm glad to be back, but my gf is asking me why I'm spending so much time on the kittenboard, and I just smiled and said "Cam's updating". :party

More soon pretty please.


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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby hermitfish » Thu Apr 26, 2007 7:59 am

Dang. I'm a no good varmint for not catching up sooner. This turn of the story is awesome. You're still doing a great job of jumping in and out of narration, entering character's thoughts, and setting the scene. I also like that you are using the Tara realizes small clues method for figuring out that Will has girly parts. The one giant realization method would probably be messier overall.

Continuing my string of praise...the caveman style comedy (not lame insurance commercial mongers but the hit woman and drag away sequence) was hysterical. It was only topped by Tara's fiery reaction of swinging saddlebags, ninja style! (That's how I pictured it, anyway.) And, yes, I know I’m mixing genres in my commentary, but I'm just so darn happy to read some mighty fine updates that I can’t help it. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby tazraven » Thu Apr 26, 2007 1:45 pm

Awwww. :sigh That was just so darn sweet. I love Tara in this, so very much. She cracks me up. One minute aghast at Will's "impropriety" and the next insulted when he/she doesn't want to jump in the sack. Love it. I can't wait for the next chapter. Yeehaw!

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby watty » Fri Apr 27, 2007 4:42 am

I remember reading long long time ago our hands give away our gender more so than facial features / hair / posture. I think if Tara relaxes her mind and ignores all preconceptions as well as prior interactions with Will, she'd come to the conclusion that Will isn't Will (if you know what I mean). Right now it's impossible for her mind to wrap around the possibility that the boy who rescued her, kissed her and is taking her to an unknown ranch ... is a girl. I mean the other alternative is that she's a cradle-robber -- I'm sure even in those wild days it's not so wise to have a romantic liaison with a fourteen year old. I chuckled at Will's girly flustering, at the morning toilette and at bedtime. When the truth is finally revealed, Tara will have a fit! This is comedy gold! Thanks for updating so quickly.
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby Halo » Fri Apr 27, 2007 10:17 am

Yay! Tara beginning to have clues!! Well, not really since she wonders about a fourteen-year-old Will... XD

In spite of the, let's say, "uncomfortable" situations in this chapter (I loved Tara's last outburst!!), you still manage to make them have nice and natural interactions with each other... I love your story!!!
I can't wait for the next update!! :bigwave
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby pipsberg » Mon Apr 30, 2007 2:50 pm

Hey Cam,

I was really happy to see another update! This was a very cute exchange. I liked seeing the two back to back perspectives and the analysis by Tara. I also think that it's funny that Tara suspects Will is as young as fourteen! That would be a little embarassing.

I'm looking forward to more... the Kitten Ranch awaits! ;)

PS - Thanks for the free pass. I'll let you know when I want to claim it.
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby Selena Taiki » Tue May 01, 2007 4:30 pm

Very cute update, I am really enjoying your story. I have a feeling the Kitten Ranch will bring Willow's charade to an end, can't wait.
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby Alcy » Wed May 02, 2007 3:21 pm

Heya Cam,
I’m fashionably late to the party but thought I had better sneak in and deliver my feedback before you posted the next chapter.

What a great start, both of them having to answer the call of nature, so normal and take for granted but of course could cause great difficulties for Willow if Tara were to take a peek of any sort! But of course, there are other facts of nature that are raising questions for Tara anyway…and she’s a thinking! I’m not sure how much longer the wool is going to stay over Tara’s eyes. At the moment though, she’s thinking she’s a cradle-snatcher…which is hilarious in itself. Then she just goes and digs an even bigger hole for herself by mistaking Will’s intentions as to their sleeping arrangements…even if she does come to regret her outburst later and so should she! Could’ve spent the night wrapped in Will’s arms but she had to be all ornery and get offended! Seriously!

Thanks for another great update, I just can’t wait until the cat’s out of the bag…well, I can actually, and I will because I’m enjoying the charade at the moment!
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby JujuDeRoussie » Thu May 03, 2007 3:05 pm

Hello :)

I caught up with the whole story yesterday, and I wanted to tell you I really appreciate it.
I read the short fic you made for a challenge a long while ago and always thought "I have to read this fic"... but finaly I didn't read earlier :blush

Anyway, I'm not a big fan of western but I was when I was younger... much younger lol. I like the idea of a western Robin Hood... and more the fact that it's a man being actually a woman... ^^

oh and I love miss Horsey ^^ make me think of Jolly Jumper, Lucky Luke's horse (a comic character from Belgium... well the scene doesn't take place in Belgium since it's a western and Lucky Luke is a cowboy ^^)

anyway, thank you for your fic :)

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby WolfNightwind » Thu May 03, 2007 9:39 pm

"Willow turned just in time to duck out of the way of the saddlebag aimed at her head. The force of the swing spun Tara full circle, and Willow jumped backwards as the blonde set herself for another try."


for one reason or another this line strikes me as soooo funny! i could just see Tara swinging the saddle bag with all her might, and when it doesn't hit, being swung in a circle! great stuff i can't wait for more!
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby tarawhipped » Sun May 06, 2007 5:36 pm

Chapter 23 Replies...

dlline: Thanks Diane, always good to see you here, and I'm glad you're enjoying it.[br]
EasierSaid:
I really liked that Tara is using physical cues to start to figure Will out, as well as using remembrances of her brother's boorish behavior at the same approximate age to help in the figuring.
*nods* Yes, Tara is starting to puzzle out the equation and put 2 and 2 together (unlike another Tara in another fic that will remain nameless ;) ), and I assumed that having a brother who'd once been that age would have helped.

Glad you liked the age fear. I haven't directly mentioned Willow's actual age, though it's not a spoiler to say she's 18ish. Considering her youth and build, there's no way she's passing for an older teen boy. Tara will be very relieved to find out both that she's a she and she ain't jailbait. I started having Will tell stories just so I could give them something to do to pass the time (without having to actually write it all), but it seemed fitting since I made her a storyteller later in life. As for the Kitten Ranch, it will be decidedly less intimidating and more civilized than Kitten chat could sometimes be. No need to fear. Thanks, Heather.[br]
spells42: First, third...whatever. You're here and that's all that matters. :) Hooray for the continued Miss Horsey love. We'll find out a wee bit more about her history next time. Glad you liked raging emotional roller coaster Tara: she's pissed! she's righteously indignant! she's smitten! The clue train is fast approaching the station, but not quite yet. Thank you, Anne.[br]
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Why hasn't Tara called Will on [the age discrepancies]?
You're correct that Tara is simply trying to puzzle out all the clues that are starting to build up. Also, she couldn't exactly card 'him', since birth records at that time often amounted to nothing more than a note written in a town bible. It will come up again, definitely.
I wonder how long she'll torture Will before she lets on that she knows!
Short answer: not long. But that's a few updates away (rapidly getting closer, however). Thanks![br]
Dianneswillowtree:
you have me on the edge of my seat for Willow to come clean. Will Tara A. Slap her B. Fall into her arms C. leave her at first and then forgive her
Why not all three? Or none? Heehee...Seriously, at least one of those options will happen, but I ain't sayin' which. :p Thank you.[br]
wimpy0729:
BTW, did they have toilet paper back then or just have to drip dry.
You know, in my research (and yes I did some and it made me very happy I'm alive in this era) I found out that paper has been used since the 6th century, though specific factory-made toilet paper didn't appear until 1857, and it wasn't available in rolls until 1879 (GER is set in '68). Am I the Big Knowledge Woman or what? ;) Don't worry, Tara is on the clue train and about to reach destination Willow. Thanks, Pam.[br]
hermitfish:
I also like that you are using the Tara realizes small clues method for figuring out that Will has girly parts. The one giant realization method would probably be messier overall.
I agree. There will be a one giant confirmation moment, but she'll already have more or less figured it out by then. I'm glad no one was offended by the 'Tara gets punched out' scene. She's a tough chick, she can take it. I love your Ninja!Tara image...frickin' awesome! Thank you, Cyd![br]
tazraven: I'm glad you liked Tara's reaction to Will being a gentleman. I thought the whole "oh good, he doesn't want to jump my bones...wait, why not?!" was a funny, and very human thought. Thanks, Sara.[br]
watty:
I think if Tara relaxes her mind and ignores all preconceptions as well as prior interactions with Will, she'd come to the conclusion that Will isn't Will (if you know what I mean). Right now it's impossible for her mind to wrap around the possibility that the boy who rescued her, kissed her and is taking her to an unknown ranch ... is a girl.
True enough, but her eyes are starting to open, and will be helped along by some of the ladies at the ranch, among other signs. A 14 year old could probably get married back then, but I agree it's pretty creepy. Thank you, Watty.[br]
Halo: Thank you, and Tara is on her way to knowing the whole truth. Update next.[br]
pipsberg:
I also think that it's funny that Tara suspects Will is as young as fourteen! That would be a little embarassing.
Ang is fond of reminding me that when I was a senior in high school, she was in 5th grade. Age differences matter less in the late 20s and on, but yeah...Tara's 19, she'd be cradle robbing. Thanks, pips, and I hope you like the ranch. >:) [br]
Selena Taiki:
I have a feeling the Kitten Ranch will bring Willow's charade to an end
How right you are...though they'll be there for a few days/updates. I'm still not entirely sure when I'll spring it on y'all (gotta keep you coming back, right?) Thank you.[br]
Alcy:
I’m not sure how much longer the wool is going to stay over Tara’s eyes.
Not much longer, indeed. I was worried for a lot of that update that I was including a lot of stuff that didn't really matter, but am glad I did. They were on the trail for a day and a half...they're going to have to pee, dammit, and they can't just stop off at a gas station. Tara fearing Will was 14 was a late addition, but it's nice to get her mental wheels a-spinnin' at last, and they'll be sleeping all snuggly-wuggly before you know it. Thanks, Alcy.[br]
JujuDeRoussie: I'm glad you found your way here, and the nice thing about this board is that even though you read what's basically an epilogue, it's not really a spoiler since everyone knows they'll end up together. And since it's a western, and I'm playing it pretty straight (except for the obvious ;) ), it's a given that the bad guys will get what's coming to them. Well...mostly. hehehe. Sorry, I have to be a little cryptic. I like Robin Hood much more than westerns, though some westerns did have a variation of the flawed anti-hero whose mission was more noble than his methods, and that's the style I'm trying to use for Will. Thanks, Julia.[br]
WolfNightwind: I'm glad you could picture the 'Tara swinging away at Will' scene. Writing the physical humor is probably the hardest part of this, but it's nice to have such an imaginative readership who really get it. Thank you, Bug.[br][br][br]
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The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby tarawhipped » Sun May 06, 2007 5:41 pm

Title: The Legend of Green Eyed Red
Author: tarawhipped (Cameron)
Email: tarawhipped@hotmail.com
Rating: R (just to be safe)
Disclaimer: All characters are the property of Joss Whedon/Mutant Enemy
Feedback: You betcha, by golly.
Distribution: Pens, Through the Looking Glass, Mystic Muse. All others please ask first.
Summary: A redheaded stranger rides into a town full of trouble and meets a blonde barmaid. Can they save each other and the town?
Setting: AU (the Old West)[br]
Thoughts in italics[br][br][br]
Chapter 24[br][br]
The following morning both women awoke well before dawn. Pointing out the large supply of blackberries they had, Tara suggested they forego breakfast and make an early start. When Willow directed sad puppy dog eyes at her and mournfully droned “no coffee?” the blonde relented. They still managed to get underway within an hour of rising, as a cold drizzle began to fall. Will offered Tara her duster, which the blonde declined, insisting Will would need it, and simply wrapped a blanket around her shoulders. She did, however, accept one of the redhead’s broad-brimmed hats.[br]
The sky was an ominous steel gray for much of the morning, but the darkest clouds and heaviest rain stayed well to their south. Nevertheless, the muddy trail made travel slower than the previous day, and Willow was thankful that they’d only had to stop to push out of the muck twice in the hours before she spied the square arch of the DCP ranch entrance.[br]
“There it is,” she said excitedly, pointing to the large, rambling house that rose over the rolling green plain.[br]
Willow’s announcement was unnecessary, as Tara had already spied the huge building and was gazing on it in wonder. The two story abode had been constructed out of red oak logs, with dried mud packed into the gaps, and was easily a hundred feet wide with a covered porch that spanned the left half. Its style alone did not distinguish it from many others Tara had seen—on a smaller scale—in Dusty Hollow and on the rare trips she’d taken as far from home as Knotty Stump. What made her stare in awe, however, was the explosion of color. The house was painted with dozens of shades, each hue overlapping every other in nonsensical waves and swirls of paint. There was no rhyme or reason to the design; it was as though countless people had each painted a section, all oblivious to the work of the others. And yet it came together to form an almost magical whole. Tara couldn’t help but smile at the sight.[br]
The crack of a gunshot broke the stillness of the moment and Tara jerked at the sound. A short, stocky man dressed in black from head to toe stood in the middle of the gateway to the ranch, the butt of his shotgun resting against his thigh.[br]
“State your name and your business!”[br]
Tara pulled the blanket tighter around herself and shrunk down on the seat, reaching a hand out to clutch Will’s arm. The redhead patted her hand and gave her a smile and a wink before turning to addressing their adversary.[br]
“You tryin’ to give me a heart attack, Leila?”[br]
Tara’s eyes darted to her companion before turning back to the black-clad figure that approached them. Leila? Tara watched with wide eyes as the woman—and as she approached, it was clear she was a woman, though Tara couldn’t help but remain shocked at her attire—took off her hat and slapped it against her leg.[br]
“Well, I’ll be damned! So you decided to bring Trixie back to me, did ya?”[br]
Willow hopped off the wagon and peered down at the woman.[br]
“She’s Miss Horsey now, and I won her fair and square.”[br]
Leila stared at the redhead with a blank expression.[br]
“You’re calling her ‘Miss Horsey?’ I weep for your future children…Miss Girl and Boy Child.”[br]
Tara had sat quietly during the exchange, but she couldn’t suppress the giggle that escaped at last. Leila looked up in surprise and elbowed Willow in the ribs.[br]
“Trixie’s name isn’t the only new thing around here. Aren’t you going to introduce me to your gal, Will?”[br]
“This here’s Tara. Tara, this is Leila.” The two nodded politely at each other and Willow gestured towards the house. “I was hoping y’all could put us up for a couple days.”[br]
“Shouldn’t be a problem. Go on in and get settled; I’ll put Trixie in the barn.”[br]
Willow nodded and grabbed several bags off the back of the wagon, brushing off Tara’s offer of assistance and leading the way across the front yard to the wide front porch, where a half dozen cats were strewn about, sunning themselves on the painted floorboards. Tara stopped to pet a tan and white tabby who’d negotiated the narrow railing to inspect the new arrivals.[br]
“Now I see why it’s called the Kitten Ranch,” Tara said, smiling as the cat nuzzled her head against Tara’s palm.[br]
“They’re everywhere,” Willow agreed, even as she opened the front door and several more skittered through the gap. “More every time I visit. Can’t hardly keep them straight anymore, but I believe that’s Emmy…she’s a friendly one. If you see a snarly little reddish-yellow pipsqueak, though, best run the other way. She’s meaner’n a sack of rattlesnakes.”[br]
Tara gave the purring cat a scratch behind the ears before following Willow inside. She found herself in a large room filled with a mismatched assortment of chairs, sofas, and tables of varying size, many obviously handmade and most of them well worn. Practically every square inch of the wide plank flooring was covered with festive woven rugs. Wooden carvings of wildlife sat atop most of the tables, windowsills, and the mantle over the enormous stone fireplace that dominated the west wall. To the left of the fireplace was a fully stocked bookshelf, while a door to the right of it led to the bedrooms upstairs, Willow explained as she dropped her bags in a heap on the floor.[br]
“Come on, let’s see who’s around,” the redhead said, indicating the open passage on the eastern side of the room, which led down a short hallway adorned with dozens of tintype photographs. Tara made a mental note to peruse them later.[br]
They passed through a large dining room, which housed the largest table Tara had ever seen. Twenty ladder-back chairs surrounded it, with several more hanging from pegs around the perimeter of the room. Over a dozen place settings were neatly situated, and as they circumnavigated the table to reach the open doorway on the other side, Tara was hit by the scent of freshly baked bread, and could hear several voices. They stepped through the arch and into the kitchen, where a matronly woman sat at a small work table, peeling carrots and directing a younger woman at the stove.[br]
“Not too hot, Nancy. You don’t want to boil off all the water.”[br]
“Yes, Ma,” she said politely, though Tara distinctly heard her quietly add ‘I do know how to cook.’[br]
“Smells good,” Willow said, ambling over to the stove, where she was pulled into a tight hug.[br]
“Where have you been?” the woman demanded. “You go away for months and then you think you can just show up for dinner?”[br]
Tara watched with an amused grin as Nancy ruffled Willow’s already unruly mop of hair.[br]
“Don’t stay away so long next time,” the woman lectured before peering over her glasses at Tara, who was still standing just inside the doorway. Willow caught the look and quickly introduced Tara to Nancy and her mother Mary, affectionately known as Granny Mare.[br]
“Pleased to make your acquaintance,” Tara said formally, stepping toward the former, who engulfed her in a hug as well. Will apologized for her extended absence and explained that they’d just come up from Dusty Hollow.[br]
“Have you known Will long, Miss Maclay?” Nancy asked.[br]
“We just met this past week,” Willow spoke up.[br]
Tara noted with some concern the guarded looks passing between the two women and hoped they did not think too badly of her for traveling with the young man. Not like I had any choice in the matter, she thought, though they seem so fond of Will…I can’t tell them he kidnapped me.[br]
“Yes, he’s been a great help to my brother and I,” Tara added, deciding it couldn’t hurt to let them know she had a male relative who was aware of the situation. Again she saw furtive glances passing back and forth, though both women seemed to be shooting disapproving looks at the redhead, not her. Whatever was troubling them, neither spoke of it.[br]
“So, something smells good,” Willow interjected suddenly. She cringed as she realized she’d already said so, but was anxious to steer the topic away from less potentially revealing subjects.[br]
“Nancy…the stew,” the elder woman reminded her daughter, who gave the large pot a quick stir. “Where’s Carlotta? She should set two more places for dinner.”[br]
“She’s fetching the rabbits from the cellar like you asked, Ma.”[br]
“If you tell me where everything is, I’d be happy to set our own places,” Tara offered, but both women waved her off.[br]
“You’re a guest,” Granny Mare stated. “Car can do it.”[br]
“You are staying a while this time, I hope?” Nancy asked as she threw another log into the fire.[br]
“‘Fraid not,” Willow said, earning her several chastising glares. “I have a uh…delivery to make, so I’ll be leaving in the morning, but I was hoping Tara could stay until I get back. Shouldn’t be more’n two, maybe three days.” Will avoided Tara’s questioning glance and cocked her head as she noticed the distinct lack of noise in the house. “Where is everyone?”[br]
“Harvesting, mostly” Granny Mare answered. “From the gunfire I assume you already ran into Leila playing Captain of the Guard, and I think Gina’s in the game room. Go tell her to find you a couple of rooms.”[br]
“Dinner’s in an hour,” Nancy called after the pair as they exited the room.[br]
Tara wanted to ask the redhead about the aforementioned ‘delivery,’ but was unable to do so as Will kept up a steady soliloquy of the merits of Granny Mare and Nancy’s cooking prowess. They went back through the dining room and out the door on the side opposite that which they’d entered, ending up in a dimly-lit pine-paneled room. Tara spied several tables, one clearly dedicated to poker, another to chess. A bookshelf built into the wall near another, smaller, stone fireplace was filled with all manner of games: backgammon, dominoes, cribbage. Dozens of card decks and jigsaw puzzles were stacked haphazardly.[br]
In the far corner was situated a bar, which Tara noticed for the sole reason that a woman was lying across it, snoring softly. Willow turned and held her forefinger to her lips as she tiptoed closer to the sleeper, waiting ‘til she was barely a foot away before shouting “cock-a-doodle-ooo!”[br]
Tara rushed forward several steps, but knew there was nothing she could do to prevent the woman from rolling over the back lip of the bar, which she did with a startled cry. In less than a second, a tousled head emerged, anger flashing in her dark eyes before they focused on the redhead and lit up.[br]
“Oh, hey Will,” she greeted cheerily, smoothing down her long, black hair. She pointed at a glass that had somehow managed to avoid toppling off the surface. “Drink?”[br]
“No thanks, Gina. Granny Mare said you could tell us which rooms are free.”[br]
“Of course I can,” the young woman said, jutting out her chin. “After all, Pam left me in charge.”[br]
“Did she?” Willow asked, trying not to laugh openly at the blackboard behind the bar, which stated in clear, bold chalk: Gone to Buzzard Gulch to sell stuff. Back by end of month. Gina is NOT in charge. -Pam.. The ranch’s owner, Xita, was a former teacher, and Willow knew she’d been trying to teach some of the girls their letters, but it was obviously still a work in progress.[br]
When she turned to follow the brunette out of the room, Willow saw Tara quirking her eyebrow at the sign and leaned in to whisper “don’t tell her…she’ll just erase it.”[br]
Gina led the pair back through the house and up a steep staircase to the second floor. Tara gazed up at the pitched ceiling, where two stained-glass windows reflected prisms of colored light onto the floor and walls. A hallway lay straight ahead, running the full length of the house, with doors on either side. Each had a small blackboard attached to it and a piece of chalk hung along the side from a length of twine. As they passed down the hall, Tara noted that most already had one or two names written on them. With only several exceptions, all were female.[br]
“Is this an inn, or do all these people live here?” Tara asked.[br]
“It’s not an inn in the paying sense. Some do stay for only a few days, but most are here for longer,” Gina provided. “I been here going on three years now.”[br]
“It used to be a cattle ranch,” Willow added. “Cowboys would drive their herds up here for the summer, but it shut down after the drought in ’56. Xita bought it and opened it up to women who had nowhere to go. Nowadays most of the folks stay long-term, and help support the ranch. Almost all of the food is grown or caught, and everything else is bought in trade for quilts or rugs or carvings or whatever someone can make. Pam makes a sellin’ trip every couple of months.”[br]
“Nowhere to go? What do you mean?” Tara inquired, curious about Will specifying that it was specifically for women.[br]
“Well, take Nancy, for instance. She ran away from her no-good husband when Carlotta was just a baby, and showed up with Granny Mare. Xita took ‘em in and they’ve been the official cooks ever since.”[br]
“My folks tried to arrange a marriage for me back in New York,” Gina said, scowling at the memory. “As soon as they started writing letters to cousins in Italy, I caught a ride on the first wagon train I could find and heard about this place from a midwife traveling with us.”[br]
Willow gave the girl a one armed hug and paused to point out the bathing rooms and water closets to Tara before continuing to relay the home’s history.[br]
“So there are people here from all over the country?” Tara asked at the conclusion of Will’s monologue.[br]
“Yep, this country and more, sometimes. Those photographs downstairs were taken by Wat-Yee, who came all the way from Canton to work on the railroad before ending up here.”[br]
They arrived at the end of the hall, where Gina pointed out two doors across from each other and excused herself. She went through a door in the far wall, which Willow said led down to a back porch off the kitchen.[br]
“I’ll take this one,” the redhead said, pointing to the door on the back of the house. “It can get kinda loud out back in the mornings.” Grabbing the stubby chunk of chalk hanging from her door, Willow carefully wrote ‘WILL’ on the slate in block letters, which she underlined several times. Tara turned to her own assigned room and similarly imprinted her claim on the space. Will hovered in the doorway while Tara entered her room and gave it a cursory inspection.[br]
Blue muslin curtains were tied back from the large window, allowing the last rays of afternoon sun to stream in, gleaming off the recently white-washed walls. To the left of the window was a twin wrought iron bedstead, enameled in a cheerful yellow and covered with a sky blue afghan. Facing the bed was a small chest of drawers, its surface covered by several neatly folded quilts and a chipped porcelain washbasin.[br]
“There’s probably clothes in there if you need,” Willow said, still standing just outside the door and indicating the dresser. “Something to sleep in at least. Someone’s always sewing ‘round here, and they just load up the spare rooms with what they can’t use and don’t want to sell. Anyway, just help yourself.”[br]
Tara nodded, feeling both awkward yet strangely at ease in the rambling house. She’d never spent much time away from home, and on those rare occasions was always in the company of her late father or Donnie. Her primary experience with travel came from serving drinks to people passing through Dusty Hollow on their way somewhere else. It was a new and exciting experience to be out more or less on her own, meeting new people who had been places she’d only read of. She hoped she wouldn’t come off as a rube.[br]
“Is this okay?” Willow asked as Tara chewed pensively on her bottom lip. “Do you need anything?”[br]
“Everything’s fine, Will,” the blonde replied with a smile. “I’m just a little tired.”[br]
“Okay. Well, I’m just gonna go get settled and wash up. If you want to rest a bit, I’ll let you know when dinner’s ready.”[br]
“Thank you,” Tara said softly. Will closed the door, and Tara could hear the one across the hall open and close. She sat down on the bed, which was surprisingly comfortable, lay back against the pile of pillows, and was asleep within minutes.[br][br]
TBC[br][br][br]
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby db » Sun May 06, 2007 5:50 pm

dibs! :-D

*giggile*

Oh,man the fact that Willow's leetle facade is crrrrumbling is, I am thinking, kind of the point of this chapter!

Leila? Tara watched with wide eyes as the woman—and as she approached, it was clear she was a woman, though Tara couldn’t help but remain shocked at her attire—took off her hat and slapped it against her leg.


Yep.. First we'll show Tara that the manly lookin' folk here are not what they seem. Hmmmmm. makes a gal *think*

“Yes, he’s been a great help to my brother and I,” Tara added, deciding it couldn’t hurt to let them know she had a male relative who was aware of the situation. Again she saw furtive glances passing back and forth, though both women seemed to be shooting disapproving looks at the redhead, not her. Whatever was troubling them, neither spoke of it.


Then we'll let the kind folk of the kitten ranch in on Willow's little ruse... which, they apparently don't approve of.

*then*

We'll leave Tara there while Willow runs off to deliver whatnot.

:-D

yup. slapping and possible falling into arms is gunna ensue!

... and I suspect the tin types downstairs on the mantle are going to play a bit of a part in this:


a short hallway adorned with dozens of tintype photographs. Tara made a mental note to peruse them later.


hee.

It's going to be maaaad Tara. I can't wait. She soooooo is figuring it all out!

“What do you mean?” Tara inquired, curious about Will specifying that it was specifically for women.


Tara has a good noggin on her --- she's already started peicing the whole smooth skin age stuff together. Combined with the fact that Willow has already told her that she lived there and the fact that Tara now knows its a woman thing....

I just wonder how Willow can possibly be trying to continue with her ruse. Ok, I can see how scary it must be for her... with the time period and the fear of Tara finding out she's a she... but this:

Willow carefully wrote ‘WILL’ on the slate in block letters, which she underlined several times.


How much more transparent could she be?

Poor Will.

Tara's just drifted off to sleep. Sometimes dreams reveal quite a lot... ooooorrrrr, *sometimes* all a girl needs is a bit of knowlege imparted on her from the cowgirls on the ranch.


Which brings me to this whole the rubber rose ranch for the kitten board with watty/car/xita thingie *cough* namedropper *cough*

*giggle*

:-D
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