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cool fic

Postby willowsgirl » Sun May 04, 2003 11:41 am

Just thought id step out of lurkerdome to say that Im really enjoying this fic so far, I love the one's that start with wil and tara meeting. and this is just so damn cute!

So Im putting in an official request for MORE!

Looking forward to reading it.. no pressure or anything :fallen



xxx

willowsgirl
 


Re:cool fic

Postby kiaora1 » Mon May 05, 2003 12:20 pm

nice work....keep going with that one :)



:wave

kiaora1
 


..

Postby Auburn » Sun May 11, 2003 11:05 am

Nikkii update this, like........ now, u've taken ages :sob



look at this :baby i don't know if it's cute or scary!?!



:eatme <-- put ur mouse on that and read what it says! :wink



Gemma xx





Auburn
 


Re: ..

Postby Nikkii » Sun May 11, 2003 2:10 pm

ooo...'eat me'...is that a request? ;)



hehe I'll update soon I promise baby *mwah* :flower

Willow: Happy slaying!

Buffy: Wish me monsters!

Nikkii
 


Re: ..

Postby SilverWingedNemesis » Tue May 13, 2003 10:17 am

humm



hehe



me liking muchly





more pwease~!



:applause



Nickole

"All fear is the fear of loss. And only through that fear, can we truly love."

SilverWingedNemesis
 


Update

Postby Nikkii » Sun May 18, 2003 6:59 pm

--- Chapter 3 ---

________________________________________________



"Hey Will," chirped Buffy as she shifted on her bed, where she was comfortably watchin the TV, so she could see the redhead etering the room. "Fun at the beach?"

"Beach? Yeah...fun! A fun-filled beach. Xander and I ahd a a blast, not sure about Cordy though...I mean.....sand and Cordy-hair, not a good mix by her books apparently..."

"Funny," came the reply that was aimed to stop the Willow-babble that seemed to go unnoticed by the redhead herself, "Xan and Cordy came back from the beach like over an hour ago...said you went off with someone you almost killed?" Buffy's questioning tone and baffled look made Willow giggle and she smiled her innocent school-girl smile.

"No! No, there was no attempted killing of any kind...volleyball hit me...bad aim, and I kinda knocked this girl down when I crash-landed...so I took her out for a sundae, to apologise...but no, absolutely no-one hurt." Buffy giggled as Willow fumbled around in her pocket as her cell phone started to ring.



WIllow's face grew puzzled as she looked at the Caller ID, which displayed a number she didn't instantly recognise. "Hello? Tara, hi! You couldn't?" The redhead blushed as she self-consciously turned away from her petite friend slightly, wondering if she had caught on to the girl's name, and the flirtatious tone of her own voice as the blonde told her she couldn't wait any longer to call her. "Tomorrow? No, that's cool, yeah, see you then! Hehe me too, bye!"

"Tara? New name...anyone I know?" asked Buffy nonchalantly as she aimlessly flicked the buttons of the TV remote, trying to find some 'decent' music station.

"Oh, the girl I 'almost killed' as Xander so kindly put it, she's into like...science and stuff like me so we're um gonna meet up tomorrow and look at these rocks we found in an alcove just off the beach...ya know, kinda study them..." Willow cocked her head to the side slightly, a crease slightly forming in the middle of her brow as she hoped Buffy accepted her pethetic attempt at a cover-up. Buffy just looked at her and blinked.

"Willow, you really are nots you know that right?" Willow just grinned and nodded shyly at Buffy who rolled her eyes. "Studying, even on holiday...yup that's our Willow" she mumbled as Willow headed into the bathroom.



**********



As they headed towards the table where he was sitting, Xander looked up to see his two best friends walking towards him, both looking as beautiful as ever. When he'd told them it was a formal restaurant, he hadn't expected the girls to take any notice. In fact, he half expected them to turn up in shorts and a t-shirt, but as it was, each girl, sorry, woman, had dressed elegantly. The tall redhead wore a simple long cream satin skirt that flowed freely around her ankles, with a rather low, black cowl-neck top. Each of her slender arms had rather long slightly see-through sleeve flowing down it, while her freckled neck was decorated with a beautiful gold necklace with a single sapphire stone set in the centre, as her flame-red hair hung lazily yet sexily just above her shoulders. She wore elegant strappy black sandles which complimented the outfit perfectly, and accentuated her perfect figure.



The blonde, although the complete opposite of her taller sidekick, looked equally as breath-taking. She strutted comfortably next to the redhead in simple red stiletto boots, which were mostly covered by her black kick-flare trousers, hosting a simple satin strip down each of the outer seems of her legs, and trimmed by a silver belt, laying across her perfectly rounded hips in an assymetrical manner. The top of her body was bathed in a simple yet elegant scarlet v-neck top, with a trim of dazzling silver sequins along the neckline, carrying on just below each of her breasts to create an X-shape across her upper body. Two strands of her long blonde hair hung either side of her silver diamonique choker as the rest of the golden locks were swept back and secured in place, with several other strands peeking out of the top of the stlye. The tied-back tresses made way for the beautiful diamonique-studded earrings which dangled perfectly from her petite ears.



"Ladies." He said as he stood up to greet them at the table. "Wow, look at you two all scrubbed up and womanly."

"Xander," Buffy motioned to the corner of her mouth with her finger, "you've got a little drool, sweetie." Both girls giggled as he fumbled with the side of his mouth to make sure any trace of the substance was irradicated immediately. "Hey, no Cordelia?"

"She's still getting ready, she has been for like the past two hours. I decided to come down here and wait, rather than listen to her endlessly complimenting herself to the mirror. You'd think if she thinks she's hot...it'd take her less time t get ready." Xander shook his head in confusion as both girls seemed to give the statement brief thought.

"Maybe she takes so long because...there's a lot of parts of her that she um...loves about herself?"

"Xander, I don't know how you put up with her sometimes...she's just so...me me me," stated Willow in a tone of slight confusion as she studied the menu in front of her.

"Becasue it's Cordy ya know? And I kinda love her."



________________________________________________

Nikkii
 


Re: Update

Postby The Rose24 » Sun May 18, 2003 8:30 pm

A very sweet update. Neither of our girls want to stay apart for too long. I can't wait until the date.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: Update

Postby Stroke of Luck » Sun May 18, 2003 11:01 pm

Wow what an beautiful update:heart



Too cute that Tara couldn´t wait any longer to call Willow:love



And well the sight of Willow and Buffy must be :thud



More please



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



You'll follow your heart and don't worry about me."

"You're part of my heart."

Gabrielle and Xena in "Ulysses




Stroke of Luck
 


Re: Update

Postby TareBearRS » Tue May 20, 2003 12:31 pm

Cool story!!!

It's just so sweet.



I wonder what will happen when Tara and Willow decide to study those stones :wink .



Update soon.



Renate

TareBearRS
 


Re: Update

Postby Grimlock72 » Tue May 20, 2003 1:08 pm

Heh, I wonder if Tara will see Willow in her nice dress :D . Very sweet indeed.



Grimmy

--

She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

Grimlock72
 


Re: Update

Postby Auburn » Tue May 20, 2003 2:13 pm

Hey baby,

this update was great and you know I think you do both good description and good diologue. hehe I bet Willow and Buffy looked great! bless Xander for being in love! you'll have to show me a picture of you on friday ok? cuz I still feel guilty for missing it. and I REALLY wanna see you in that dress!



Great update sweetie! :flower :kiss



Gemma xx



Auburn
 


Re: Update

Postby Nikkii » Wed May 21, 2003 3:19 pm

hehe sweetie dont feel bad *kisses* ul see me in my dress! i might have the pics back before tuesday so YAY lol!

Willow: Happy slaying!

Buffy: Wish me monsters!

Nikkii
 


cool

Postby serenity » Thu May 22, 2003 9:49 am

that was again a great update!! when is the next coming?!:banana can´t wait! :bounce

serenity
 


Re: cool

Postby Auburn » Wed Jun 04, 2003 12:57 pm

So, I can't threaten you with sex anymore but that doesn't mean I can't nag!



UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!!



getting the msg?



Gem x

Auburn
 


Re: Update

Postby TareBearRS » Sat Jun 28, 2003 1:24 pm

Any word on when there will be a new update?



Renate

TareBearRS
 


Re: Update

Postby Auburn » Sat Jun 28, 2003 1:44 pm

I don't think Nikkii is continuing with the story Bear... I nagged her all the time.



Gem xx

Edited by: Auburn at: 6/30/03 12:24 pm
Auburn
 


Re: Update

Postby allykat » Sat Jun 28, 2003 3:40 pm

Update soon?? Please???:pray

Edited by: allykat at: 6/28/03 2:45 pm
allykat
 


Re: Update

Postby chumsleyistheman » Sun Jun 29, 2003 1:24 am

Okay... don't make me cry now....

pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease don't give up on the story!!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE?????????? :pray

~~~

eutuxestaton pheusma: lantanomai.



Tara: I said "quirky."

chumsleyistheman
 


Re: Update

Postby Nikkii » Mon Jun 30, 2003 2:05 pm

hey i might update if i have time, the thing is im not on my pooter or online as much anymore...so...we'll see :)

Willow: Happy slaying!

Buffy: Wish me monsters!

Nikkii
 


Re: Update

Postby WannaBlessedBe » Sat Jul 05, 2003 11:13 am

WOW!!!!! :clap



*falls out of chair* ouch



this is an amazing fic, I loved every single moment of reading this story and i'm hooked, line and sinker!



can't wait for another update, guess i'm going to be checking every five seconds for one!



keep them coming!



Krystle

WannaBlessedBe
 


Re: Update

Postby sapphocrazygirl » Fri Aug 15, 2003 3:42 pm

The lurker, who is now emerging from the shadows of lurkiness, would like to say a few words.



Willow. Tara. Smoochies. NOW!!



Thank you.

"No candles? Well, I brought you one. It's extra flamey."

- Willow to Tara, in New Moon Rising

sapphocrazygirl
 


Re: Update

Postby Nikkii » Mon Aug 18, 2003 1:12 pm

hey all! Goo dnews I guess, I SHOULD be updating 2nite, all being well lol



um so yeah...until then....ciao!



Nik xxxx

Willow: Happy slaying!

Buffy: Wish me monsters!

Nikkii
 


Re: Update

Postby sam darls » Mon Aug 18, 2003 2:30 pm

Hey Nikkii..awesome fic, so adorable..and an update soon? yay!!:flower love sams xx

sam darls
 


Re: Update

Postby sapphocrazygirl » Mon Aug 18, 2003 6:15 pm

ah, beach and they just met. good, with the developing of relationship and cuteness. bad, with the taking very long to get to smut.



update early and often!



sappho loves you




"I got my axe, I got my honey...I'd say all I need is a quiet room and some body lotion and I've got me a party!"

- Faith, in Torturing Touch

sapphocrazygirl
 


Re: Update

Postby Nikkii » Fri Aug 22, 2003 3:37 pm

Here it is, the next update, be ruthless :wink



:: Chapter 4 :: (big thankies to Gemma :bigkiss )



***********



“Guys, I’m just off to the bathroom,” announced Willow as she excused herself from the table and exited the bustling atmosphere of the restaurant. After asking the lady at the reception where she could find the bathroom, Willow headed down a long corridor.



***********



Sitting in the cubicle, the redhead heard a toilet flush, a door click unlocked, and as she heard the water run into the basin, she heard a soft voice humming a gentle tune to accompany it. She smiled to herself. The song reminded her of something, but she couldn’t quite grasp what it was. Pushing the familiarality to the back of her mind, she flushed the toilet, and entered the main area of the bathroom. As she moved towards the basin, she glanced in the direction of the humming.



“Tara?” The humming stopped.

“Willow! You look great! Wait a sec…you’re staying here?” Tara questioned.

“Yeah, for the summer, you?” Willow responded, with a slight edge of excitement sweeping through her voice.

“Ditto!” Tara’s answer came out almost as a squeal, and her mouth turned upward into the most adorable lopsided grin Willow had ever seen. She giggled softly to herself. Tara’s face turned to a picture of puzzlement and worry. “What?” she asked simply.

“Nothing. It’s just your smile, you’re so pretty.” Tara blushed under the intent gaze of the Wiccan. “Your whole face just seems to light up, you can see your smile in your eyes and…are you gonna stop me before I regret opening my mouth?” Sighed Willow to herself as she rubbed her forehead with the back of her hand.

“Why would you regret saying that?” asked the blonde as she gently moved Willow’s hand away from her forehead and squeezed it assuringly. “I really don’t mind, I mean, I’m totally flattered.” Tara lifted the back of Willow’s hand up to her mouth and kissed it once, gently. Willow smiled, and gently pulled Tara into a warm hug. She wasn’t sure why she felt the need to do that, to be so...forward? She just felt like she needed to, needed the contact with Tara. As the girls pulled away, their eyes met, just for a second, but that second was enough. Four eyes were burning with want, and with need, but most of all, with honesty. Tara leaned forward slightly, giving Willow the chance to back away, to run. To her surprise, Willow glanced down at the blonde’s lips, then met her eyes again. Tara’s lips gently pressed against Willow’s, opening slightly to capture her bottom lip and suck on it gently. Willow returned the kiss and ran her tongue along Tara’s lips, seeking permission. Permission was granted as Tara opened her mouth slightly, the tips of the girls’ tongues finding each other.



“That was…” Willow found it hard to describe the feel of the kiss, it felt so good, soft, sweet, delicate, but at the same time, she couldn’t help feeling something wasn’t right, she didn’t feel completely comfortable. The confusion danced around in Willow’s head as thoughts seemed to do the Salsa in double-time, making it increasingly difficult for her to string them together, and make even a little bit of sense from them. “Um…I, I have to go, they’ll be w-wondering wh-“

“Willow? Are you ok? Should I not have-“

“Tara, I’ve got to go” The redhead avoided eye contact with the blonde, looking everywhere except into those blue orbs, as she swiftly backed away from her, and left the bathroom, seemingly in a panic.

“But…I…you have my number…” trailed Tara after her, in a sense, mumbling to herself. She turned to the mirror and looked at the pale curves of her face gazing back at her. “What are you staring at?!” she asked the glass, before splashing her face with the cool water still running from the silver tap.



************



After turning the light out, Willow climbed into the soft bed she’d be staying in for the summer. Hearing her friend sigh to herself softly, Buffy turned towards her.

“Will?”

“Hmm?”

”Are you ok? I mean, you were all shushy at dinner, and I dunno, you just seem…off.” The concern in the Slayer’s voice was genuine and it desperately made Willow want to tell her everything going through her mind, but the anxiety of her friend’s reaction got the better of her.

“I’m fine, Buffy, really”

“Ok, if you’re sure, but you know you can talk to me, right?” The blonde probed a little further, although to no avail.

”Can talk to Auntie Buffy, check!” Buffy grinned to herself at Willow’s comment, and snuggled herself into her pillow.

“Night, Will.”

“Night.”



*********



Willow woke up the next morning, and was greeted by the hot Miami sun streaming through the gap in the white hotel curtains and hitting her squinted eyes. She turned to look at the time on the clock beside her. 10am. The redhead sighed to herself as she remembered she was meeting Tara at noon. She still had no idea what she thought about the kiss they shared, had no idea what she was going to say to the blonde. Sitting herself up, she perched on the end of the bed and noticed a slip of paper on the bedside cabinet. Picking the paper up in her hand, she read the words written on it.



Wills,

        Gone down to grab some breakfast with Xander and Cordy…figured you’d want a sleep in so didn’t wake you. We’re gonna head into town, so probably won’t be back before you meet your friend.

Catch ya later,

Buffy x



“Friend.” Willow mimicked the word used in the note to herself. “Yeah, some friend I am.” She ran a hand through her fiery red hair as she placed the note and fumbled through the closet for something to wear. Nothing she found seemed good enough. Willow furrowed her brow as she pulled out a white linen shirt and baby pink tank top.



After spending the last half hour raking her hair back into a loose ponytail, then frustratingly pulling it back down again, here she was. Willow was stood at the side of the entrance to the alcove where she and Tara had arranged to meet the previous day. The blonde was already late, and Willow started to wonder if she was going to show at all.

“Hey,” squeaked out the redhead as she played with her thumbs nervously and looked at Tara questioningly.

“Hi,” came the simple, blunt reply. Tara looked to the ground, her hair covering her face. Willow felt a pang of guilt wash over her. She knew what she’d done was wrong, she just couldn’t figure out why. Was she wrong for kissing Tara then running away? Wrong for leading Tara on when she’s straight? Or wrong for kissing a girl?

“So…”



*************

Willow: Happy slaying!

Buffy: Wish me monsters!

Nikkii
 


Re: Update

Postby Auburn » Fri Aug 22, 2003 4:03 pm

ok...just read kiss..got nikkii kisses... i'm all kissed out!



I dunno what you were worried for... it was great!!!!:flower



Gemma :bigkiss



....Devious Mind With A Great Behind.

Auburn
 


Re: Update

Postby sailor80 » Fri Aug 22, 2003 6:15 pm

Great update! Can't wait to see what's next.



Mary Frances



I'm a cynical, cockeyed optimist. I have a lot of rage, but I'm happy about it. Dr. Susan Phelps

sailor80
 


Re: Update

Postby Still Waters T » Fri Aug 22, 2003 6:44 pm

I just read the whole thing, of what has been written that is, and it's so sweet! :heart



Willow in a blue bikini :drool and in formal wear. :bounce Heh, I hope you write more in the not-so-distant future.



LB:wave

Still Waters T
 


Re: Update

Postby The Rose24 » Fri Aug 22, 2003 8:41 pm

Hi,



I am glad you updated because this is one of my favorite stories. :applause :banana



Ooops. That's not good. Willow runs away after a kiss.



I hope they will be able to work through the awkwardness and move forward.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Edited by: The Rose24  at: 8/22/03 8:02 pm
The Rose24
 


Re: Update

Postby sam darls » Sat Aug 23, 2003 6:44 am

Hey Nikkii sweetie...Gorgeous update and so sweet..:love Love sams xxx

Edited by: sam darls at: 8/23/03 5:45 am
sam darls
 

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