Wiltar's Collected Fic

[sonja]

wouw that was so sweet, realy fantastic wiltar!!!!!!

you mast be a righter haha

[alyamber4ever]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.......what a sweet story!!!!! I love it. I'd have to say this one is my favorite. I'm all for the kissing!!



GiMmIe MoRe *LOL*



There will be more, right??





and 4ever

Edited by: alyamber4ever at: 8/12/02 3:01:30 pm

[TaraManiac]

That was sooo Sweet , U Made Them lovely as they always Are... Thank You baby



I Love You Too



-Liliana-

[wiltar]

MissQuirky Thank you very much! I'll keep on trying to pop out more fics... especially now, next Monday I'm starting a new job so then it will become harder to write...however I will not give up on it. I'm very glad you enjoyed my fics so far.

I'm WAY too insecure, so I'm waiting for feedback all the time, and I'm happy with any feedback that I get.



sonja hehe, fellow dutchie, Son, wat ben je toch een muts! hahaha. (a little explanation: I just had to do some dutch name-calling, but all in the friendly way.)Thanks for reading again, thanks more for replying. Glad you like all so far.



alyamber4ever Let me ask you a question: do you know anyone who is NOT all for the kissing? that's right. So there had to be some quality kissing in at least one of my fics

Thanks for reading and replying again. I appreciate it.



TaraManiac you know, there can be a thousand people telling me they hate my fic but it all wouldn't matter as long as you like it. So YAY, big time even. Thanks for reading it. I'm very happy you liked it



Patricia

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W-what were they looking at?

-The hotness of you doofus!!!

Edited by: wiltar  at: 8/13/02 5:30:02 am

[xita]

first kiss that was sweet. sigh.. and brave Tara, good for her!

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Childie -"Not all girls are raving bloody lesbians, you know!"

George - "That's a misfortune of which I am perfectly well aware."

The Killing of Sister George

[Rane018]

hehe... i love these little stories. so, so cute. tara singing on stage... swoon...

TARA- It looks like gibberish.
SPIKE- (moving to them) Gibberish?
TARA- Or possibly gobbledygook. It's not words, anyway…

the yoko factor

[tiredsoul]

That was great. The show never gave us that "moment of truth." I can imagine that it would have gone something like this.



--celia

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"That was just rude. Now I forget what I was saying."

[wiltar]

Well, a new little story. Can't wait to read what you all think of this one

But first, another round of thank you's



xita Thanks for your feedback Again, I am all with the extra-proudness for having had a moderator read and like my story



Rane018 Thank you. I think I have read all of your stories, and I love them... another round of extra-proudness. It's such an honour when other fanfic-writers tell you they love your stuff



tiredsoul You too, thanks! I'm glad other people can agree with my pov on the girls



Okay, and now, the new fic. Enjoy!



Title: I Surrender

Author: wiltar (wiltar@hotmail.com)

Rating: G

Disclaimers: Same old story, Willow and Tara belong to Joss, yadda yadda yadda. I’m just a fan expressing her love, making no money with this at all.

Feedback: Again, same old. Yes please, I wanna become a better writer, tell me what I do wrong! Or right, I like it when people tell me what I do right too

Distribution: Sure, take it, do with it what you want. Well, don’t change the story please Oh, and tell me where you have put it up Thanks!

Dedication: To the people who read this. To the characters Willow and Tara, special dedication to Amber Benson and Alyson Hannigan. More special dedication to my girl, Liliana.

POV: Tara

Summary: Our girls are getting married, yay. This is Tara’s perspective on marriage, and her love for Willow.





To surrender…. To some people surrendering might sound really negative, to me it doesn’t. To me, it’s all about commitment, about giving myself. Totally give myself, that is. Heart, mind, body and soul. To do that freely, and completely out of love.



I surrendered to Willow a long time ago. When I look back, I find out that I did that the moment our hands touched in the laundry room, while trying to hide from the Gentlemen.

There was something special about that moment. And even though months passed before Willow and I shared our first kiss, we both know that our relationship started at that one moment. Two hands, finding each other…. But it wasn’t about those hands finding each other. It was about two souls finding each other.



That was the moment that I surrendered to Willow. And it was the moment she surrendered to me, I know that for sure. I felt it back then, and I still feel it.



Even though we surrendered such a long time ago, today will be the day we will officially surrender to one another. Because today is the day we will get married. After years together, we feel the moment is right to make that commitment for the rest of our lives.



So, here I am, wearing a beautiful wedding dress. I am nervous. Not about spending the rest of my life with the woman I love, not about stuttering when I have to say ‘I do’. I am just nervous that I will trip when I have to walk down that isle. Thank god I have Giles by my side. Talking about him, there he is… this is the moment. He holds out his arm and I stand up to take it. It all feels so surreal. Before I know it, I am outside, at the edge of the carpet. I look up and my heart skips a beat. Why? Because I see Willow. Beautiful Willow. She’s wearing a white suit that looks just great on her. No, not great, perfect. The most perfect of perfect-ness.



I feel a gentle tug at my arm. Oh yeah, walking. I’m supposed to walk towards Willow now. I’m surprised my legs even know how to work. We say our vows, and before I even realize it she tells me ‘I do’. And after that, I tell her ‘I do’ as well. We share the classic kiss.



Our life together has just begun. And even though all of our guests heard us say ‘I do’, I know what we really both have said. “I surrender”



The End



Patricia

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W-what were they looking at?

-The hotness of you doofus!!!

Edited by: wiltar  at: 10/12/02 4:08:27 pm

[alyamber4ever]

Once again I have to say, Awwwwwwwwwww. That was an amazing story. I really wish we could have seen something like that,..no,...EXACTLY like that on the show. Oooooh, My heart just melts thinking about it.



Patricia,

Your stories are all so beautiful. Thank you so much for writing them and sharing them with myself and all the kittens. And ya know what? I could just hear that song playing in my head while I was reading this story. Maybe it's because...... I actually DID have it playing!! *LOL*



But, Honestly.....This was so great. I loved it very much. I still want more though.....MUCH more!!!



~ Sarah ~



and 4ever

Edited by: alyamber4ever at: 8/16/02 1:17:04 pm

[MissQuirky]

Awww very beautiful!! All ur fics r just soo sweet!! U ROCK!!! Keep em comin cos I just Love readin em, soo a very BIG THANX 4 writing such awesome fics!!

"Don't warn the tadpoles!...
I-I have frog fear."

[AmberBensonRockzMyWorld]

Patricia,

That was so beautiful, WoW. Amazing...and WOO HOO! for Willow and Tara surrendering to one another. I can't wait to read your next fic, or poem.

Much Love,

Lisa

Must I dream and Always see your face.~ Jeff Buckley "Last goodbye"
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Recomended Reading: IttyBittyKitty's fic...
"7th Hellvan"
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Edited by: AmberBensonRockzMyWorld  at: 8/16/02 3:43:51 pm

[TaraManiac]

That was sooo Beautiful! I Loved It very Much... giving Urself to someone, that's... Love

Thank You for all ur sweet fics, I could Never get tired of Reading those Lovely Stories ...



-Liliana-

[netgirlwillow]

Well hello there.



Patricia,



Been a long time since I read your fic again. But I have to say that you have come a long way since that k-otic series. And a long good way if I can say so. You've become a better writer and i already thought you were a great one. Keep up the good work.



Love Chantal

Love,

Chantal



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"Come on let's feed you. I think I'm scared of the way that stomach of yours growls." - Buffy, 'Compliment' by Michele (chapter 13a)



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"What can I say B, you make me forget the rest of the world exists when you touch me." - Faith, 'Compliment' by Michele (Chapter 31a)



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"Do you think that Lesbianisme and Alcoholisme are directly related?" - Elle MacPherson (to Kate Capshaw in 'It's A Girl Thing')



"Goodbye, there's just no sadder word to say" - LeAnn Rimes (song: Please Remember)

[wiltar]

alyamber4ever Thank you. Hope your heart get solid again though, that might be easy to live on And hehe, it's such a cool song, I understand why you were listening it while reading the fic (For those not knowing what we are talking about this fic was inspired by a song by a dutch group, called K-otic, and the song was (obviously) I Surrender. I like it )

And the more...I'll try. Monday I start that new job so I guess I better try to write something either today or tomorrow. But, once again, even when I am a working-gal, I will try to keep the fanfics coming.



MissQuirky Thanks I want to thank you for reading it and giving me feedback...if it wasn't for the people like you, telling me they like it and they want to read more, I would have quit after the first one. Thanks for giving me the chance to rock on



AmberBensonRockzMyWorld Aw, glad you liked it... and indeed, yay for the girls surrendering I'll try to write more soon (btw, LOVE your nick, Jeff Buckley rocks!)



TaraManiac My sweet Liliana, you are totally right... giving yourself to another, surrendering completely....to me that's what love is about (ehm, well, you probably already knew ) Thank you so much for reading again. I'm very happy you liked it



netgirlwillow Chantal, thanks for your feedback.... The other night I was actually reading my k-otic series again, and I was like 'god, that was soooooooooo.... amateuristic, compared to what I write now (hehe, I'll probably say that next year about this stuff too, when I hopefully see that my writing has improved again ) Anyway, thanks a lot



To all the people reading this fic Thank you all so much. I have no idea how many (or how few) people read this, but I am glad anyway that people take the time for it. Thanks



And one big special thanks, once again to all the people who have given me feedback so far You have no idea how much that means to me. Feedback is what I live for (well, when it comes to the writing anyway). I really appreciate it that you take the time to let me know you have read my fic, and liked it (well, so far, I think no one has said anyway that they disliked it, so ) Thank you so much. You guys totally ROCK



Patricia

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W-what were they looking at?

-The hotness of you doofus!!!

Edited by: wiltar  at: 8/17/02 10:54:02 am

[tiredsoul]

**Sigh** That was so sweet. Really liking this short moments.



Love the comment about tripping down the aisle. So true. My sister actually did. Good thing too since I won ten bucks that I had bet with the best man.



--celia

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"That was just rude. Now I forget what I was saying."

[sonja]

fabulous, really fabulous, as usually.

i will let you hear how good i liked it: woooouuuuuuuweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee jihaaaaaaaaaa cooooool, sweeeeeet etc

hahhahahug son

[wiltar]

tiredsoul Thanks for reading my fic. And thank you so much for the replies you give me.



About your sister....damn, that must have sucked for her, but lol



sonja Crazy Sonja, guess that will never stop But thanks, really



To everyone who wants more (if there are any) I'm really busy right now with my new job, but I'll try to see what I can do in the weekend...I for one do miss the writing a lot.



Patricia

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W-what were they looking at?

-The hotness of you doofus!!!

[maudmac]

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