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Re: chapter 9

Postby TheWhiz » Thu Jul 25, 2002 4:29 pm

Loved the update!

The T/W moments were really sweet :)

And so to the date....

"I am a whiz...If ever a whiz there was"

TheWhiz
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby Ginner WTluv » Thu Jul 25, 2002 6:27 pm

Eillie.... having an innocent mind.... Does not compute....OVERLOAD!!!! *Head explodes*



hehehehe....:D



~ Jen.... As queer as black sunshine.

Edited by: Ginner WTluv at: 7/25/02 5:27:55 pm
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Re: chapter 9

Postby witchbitchwillow » Fri Jul 26, 2002 10:01 am

hey all,



lola- well she still hasnt called me and i go away tomorrow :( so im all sad, i would explain but it would be longer than most of my updates! lol. good luck with all those exams, and happy birthday too!



thewhiz- Willow and Tara moments are always sweet :D . the dates probably not going to be for another 2 weeks, sorry :(



Jen- What you trying to say! oh course im innocent, im a little angel! hehe, if you believe that youll believe anything :D take care while im away!



xxelliexx

**"Damn gayly forward!"** Anya- into the woods by blameburner.

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby pikescoob » Fri Jul 26, 2002 10:19 am

:lol the blonde thing was funny and Tara being like 'what's wrong with that' and making Willow squirm. I also loved Buffy squealing when Ken gave her flowers and chocolate...oh my :laugh Have a fun and safe trip ;)



--Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby witchbitchwillow » Tue Aug 13, 2002 6:18 pm

heya everyone!!!



im back at last! had a great time but its also good to be back. ill have an update soon i hope.



michelle- thanx for the feedback! the blonde bit was mean but true lol.



take care everyone.



xxelliexx

**"Damn gayly forward!"** Anya- into the woods by blameburner.

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby eccentrictulip » Wed Aug 14, 2002 9:37 pm

ooooohhhhh.....i love it, i love it, i love it!!!! i just found this fic and i'm finally all caught up. such an interesting situation for the characters with tara in the bar and buffy and willow all out of sunnydale and whatnot.....and go willow for kicking mr. maclay's rotten little butt!!!!! looking forward to more......

*please use both hands....*

eccentrictulip
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby witchbitchwillow » Thu Aug 15, 2002 1:22 pm

heya eveyone!



okay i have finally got an upate ready! wahooo! chapter ten is here at last! im going to take a little break from this one for a while because ive started working on another fic, so once ive got that one up and running ill come back to this one. sorry for taking so long!



eccentrictulip- hey, thanks for reading it all! i wanted to change the situation because things in series 6 were getting so hectic in sunnydale. so they are now in florida heh.



feedback is greatly appreciated, with ideas and criticisms so i can change them.



enjoy everyone!



xxelliexx





Title: Summer Loving

Part: 10

Author: Ellie Walsh aka. Witchbitchwillow

Email: witchb1tchwillow@hotmail.com

Feedback: yes please. Be brutal I can take it. “Strong like an Amazon right!”

Spoilers: none

Rating: PG

Pairing: Willow/Tara

Disclaimer: Joss owns it… Mutant enemy blah blah blah etc…

Summery: Based around series 4 when Oz left Willow. Willow then

goes on holiday to Orlando, Florida, goes into a bar, and makes

a new acquaintance.

Authors Note- well I don’t really have one this time so blah blah, I proof read this one so I’m sorry for any mistakes.





        “Table for four please” Willow was waiting at the entrance of the ‘all you can eat’ Chinese restaurant. With Tara close behind her, trying to distance themselves from Buffy and Ken, kissing fest behind them. The waitress lead the two girls to their table and then gave out the menu’s. Buffy had just paused to take a breath when she turned round to see that Willow and Tara had walked off and left them.



        “Hey guys, sorry we didn’t see you walk off”, Buffy was trying to straighten her top and stay out of the view of displeased customers because of their public display in the doorway.



        “We didn’t want to interrupt, you looked as if you were enjoying yourselves.” Tara was relishing in seeing Buffy turn a bright shade of red for the second time that evening.



        “So how about some wine then?” Ken’s immediate attempted to change the subject was greeted happily by Buffy who jumped in her seat and wrapped her arms around Ken’s neck.



        “I think wine would be a great idea!” Buffy placed a kiss on Ken’s lips and then rubbed their noses together.



        Tara looked very uncomfortable all of a sudden and clumsily got out of her seat and mumbled something about needed to use the bathroom. Willow watched her lover make a hasty exit from the table and head directly for the bathroom without looking up once.



        “What was that about?” Buffy was picking at the bowl of prawn crackers on the table.



        “I don't know!” Willow was completely taken aback by Tara’s reaction. She wasn’t even sure what had triggered it off. “Do you think that I should go and make sure she’s okay?” Willow was staring at the bathroom door, biting her lip agitatedly.



        “Yeah Will, might be a good idea! Your girlfriend just freaked out for no reason and ran off.”. Buffy had just finished the bowl and was now searching for the waitress to get a refill.

       

        “Right yeah, I should go and see her.” Willow leapt out of her seat and ran to the bathroom.



        “Excuse me miss, could we get some more of these weird chips please?” Buffy had finally got the waitress’s attention and was holding up the bowl and shaking it about threateningly.



* * * *



        “Tara, baby, are you in here?” Willow was wondering around the women’s bathroom, looking in each cubical for her lover.



        “Hey” Tara came out from the end cubical and leaned against the wall. Willow made her way over to her and placed her hands on Tara’s hips.



        “Honey what’s wrong? Is it Buffy, because if she’s making you feel uncomfortable then I can. . .”



        “No Will, its not Buffy” Tara giggled slightly at the redheads immediate effort to make things better.



        “Oh then its Ken, because he’s like male and a beach bum” Willow at this point had removed her hands from Tara’s waste and was flinging them around in a complete frenzy.



        “Willow its not. . .” Tara had grabbed hold of Willow’s hands, risking being hit by flying limbs doing so. Willow sighed and her features took a completely serious tone.



        “It’s the waitress, isn’t it!” Tara burst out laughing and pulled Willow into a hug. Willow pulled out of the hug, not very amused. “Are you laughing at me missy!”.



        “I’m sorry, but you just look so amazingly cute when you do that!” Willow rolled her eyes and pulled Tara into her once more.



        “You know if you weren’t my girlfriend. . .”. Willow and Tara both stopped dead as they heard a lock on a cubical door open and a women came out. Giving the girls a distasteful look, before washing her hands and leaving the bathroom. Tara immediately pulled out of Willow’s arms and walked away.



        “Tara, what’s going on? Are you ashamed of me or something?” Willow’s face was lined with hurt and she played with her hands nervously.



        “No W-w-willow its not like that! I just, I dunno.” Tara’s head had dropped and she was unable to make any eye contact with Willow.



        “Tara, will you please talk to me!” Willow took a step towards Tara, wanting desperately to go and comfort her, but was getting the vibe off Tara that she didn’t want her touching her right now.



        “Look Willow it doesn’t matter, I’m just being stupid, can we just go back and eat”. Tara turned towards the door, with her back to Willow.



        “I’m sorry Tara”. Willow wasn’t sure why she was apologising but she got the feeling that she had done something wrong.



        “Its not you, its me.” Tara crossed her arms over her chest, the tears beginning to waver her voice. Willow was unable to hold back anymore. She walked up to Tara and scooped her from behind and rested her head in the blondes shoulder.



        “Its okay baby. I know its hard but you have to talk to me, otherwise how am I meant to help you”. Willow kissed Tara’s neck, causing Tara to turn round and fall into Willow’s arms. Tara had her head resting on Willow’s shoulder and the redhead played with Tara’s golden locks.



        “Its just I get so annoyed with myself, because Buffy and Ken can just kiss and hug in public but I feel like I can’t do that without people ridiculing us. I want more than anything to show the world how much I love you.” Willow pulled out from Tara slightly and rested her arms round Tara’s neck so that they were only inches apart.



        “Tara I love you. Nothing is ever going to change that. Not even some stupid little sly remark from someone who doesn’t understand what its like to be in love.” Willow placed a gentle kiss on Tara’s full lips and then took her hand and walked her out of the bathroom.



        “Thank you” Tara looked over at the lover and in full view of all the restaurant kissed Willow passionately. Once the kiss had finished Willow’s smile spoke for the both of them.



        “Anytime”. Willow winked and Tara and they made there way back to a table.



TBC . . .





**"Damn gayly forward!"** Anya- into the woods by blameburner.

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby foreverpiper » Thu Aug 15, 2002 1:44 pm

:calp That was great! Aww, poor Tara thinkin she couldn't kiss Will in public cause of all the mean, nasty people. I'm glad Will made her feel all better! And go Tara, kissin Willow in front of the restraunt! This story rocks, you rock, everything rocks! :grin

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby Ginner WTluv » Thu Aug 15, 2002 1:50 pm

*squeals with delight* Yay! Update! *does snoopy dance* Loved this update Ellie! It was sooooo sweet. Poor Tara though. Stupid small minded people, didn't stop her in the end though. :grin Great update Ellie!! You rock! *bows down to Ellie*



~ Jenny

Ginner WTluv
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby snuggle79 » Thu Aug 15, 2002 1:58 pm

yeah, that kiss was very sweet!

Awesome update! :clap :D

Tara:"Maybe we dreamed it."

Willow:"Right. Right. Wrong! (points at her head ) Different Brains." Tara:"Oh yeah."



Can we just skip it? Can...can you just be kissing me now?

snuggle79
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby funkyasian » Thu Aug 15, 2002 2:15 pm

:clap - you go tara! damn people stupid publics...blah blah...:rage - dont' get me started on the stupid people thing...(sorry, personal trauma seeping into that comment)



great update...



steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

funkyasian
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby MissQuirky » Thu Aug 15, 2002 2:39 pm

Wow I don't think i have ever posted 4 this fic!! Shame on me, cos this fic is awesome!! Very sweet!! :grin



I'm glad W/T had that lil chat in the bathroom. I say damn the people, ur free to do whatever the hell u want! Especially showin ur feelins w/ the one u Love!!



Can't wait 4 more!! :)

"Don't warn the tadpoles!...
I-I have frog fear."

MissQuirky
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby Lola19 » Thu Aug 15, 2002 3:35 pm

Woo Hoo! :clap :bounce

Welcome back Ellie, how was Edinburgh? Did your play go well? Oh how you were missed! Ive been looking forward to your update, and woo hoo! Great come back update. Im glad Willow made Tara feel better. Makes you think too, I dont know how I would feel it was me. On one hand Im quite shy but on the other, if I found someone and cared so much like Willow and Tara do, Id like to think that I wouldnt care what other people think!

Anyway, Great update Ellie, great to have you back :grin and its all just great great great! :bounce

Love and hugs

Louise xxx :love

Lola19
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby Grimaldi » Thu Aug 15, 2002 3:54 pm

great update. good for Tara for kissing Willow like that. :clap

Dude, we're surrounded by perverts!

Fucking Windows 98, get Bill Gates in here!

Little pussy gnome, don't call me a pussy. Pussy gnome.

Grimaldi
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby witchbitchwillow » Thu Aug 15, 2002 4:34 pm

heya everyone,



thankyou so much for the feedback! i really really really so appreciate it. okay here goes with the replies.



foreverpiper- people can be very mean! but i think that Buffy would take down anyone who said anything to them anyway, well thats if she wasnt to busy sucking on Ken lol. thank you for reading! and i rock, wahoooo! heh.



jenny- hello lovely, my ever adoring fan and stalker from the planet Twong. heh. no i really apreciate your support :D thankyou. you should never let small minded people get you down, it shows that ure open minded. wahoo i rock again! and you can get up now dear heh.



snuggle- sweet was what i was going for so thats good. thankyou for reading!



steph- heh, i take it you can relate to that chapter then! its always a fear i have on my mind whenever im out with a girl, it drives you insane i know! just keep kool and just dont worry about thwat people say, you have the right to show your affection in public there all sooo in the wrong if they have a problem with it.



missquirky- thankyou repling! i'm glad that you like it, and think that its sweet. the chat in the bathroom was important i think because it brings a reality to the fic thats not entirely there. it shows that they still have obsticals that they need to overcome.



LOLA!!- hey honey! edinburgh was fab! ive fallen in love with the city! the festival was great, play went relaly well too. and i got sooo drunk everynight it was so much fun lol. i didnt want to come home, but i couldnt leave all my kittens waiting any longer now could I! id have claw marks all over the thread! i take the same point of view as you on the showing affection, id be scared but at the same time i wouldnt be able to stop myself, its a tough one. in theory though it shouldnt be a problem its just a same that it is. whoah! essay! thats longer than some of my updates lol.



Grimaldi- heh, kissage is always good when it comes to Willow and Tara! thanks for reading!



okay i think im just about done!



xxelliexx



oh one more thing, *cough*



Her name was lola she was a show girl and she wore ribbons in her hair and dress right up to there! la la la la la la. heh.



take care x





**"Damn gayly forward!"** Anya- into the woods by blameburner.

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby Ginner WTluv » Thu Aug 15, 2002 4:49 pm

Ellie, i will forever be your adoring fan and stalker. It's my job. It's what i do;) Oh, and give you the support you deserve:grin

All small minded people should be taken out into the field and shot.... *coughs* or something.:grin



~ Jen



Ginner WTluv
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby witchbitchwillow » Thu Aug 15, 2002 5:49 pm

jen u crazy lady! not sure they should be shot, but they are very annoying! thankyou for being my stalker! i feel like a true fan fic writer now! hehe.



xxelliexx

**"Damn gayly forward!"** Anya- into the woods by blameburner.

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby The Rose24 » Thu Aug 15, 2002 8:14 pm

Slightly angsty but cute update.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

The Rose24
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby SlayerTazz » Thu Aug 15, 2002 11:27 pm

Sweet update - love the kiss!!!

A dream is a wish the heart makes.

Willow: "You had two eggs, sunny-side-up. I remember because they were wiggling at me like little boobs."

Tara: "Sassy Eggs."

SlayerTazz
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby mollyig » Fri Aug 16, 2002 2:55 am

I liked that scene, it reminded me of the conversation they had in The Real Me.



Lovely!

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

mollyig
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby witchbitchwillow » Fri Aug 16, 2002 6:53 am

heya,



thre rose24- everyine needs a bit of agnst every now and again. it makes the cute things seem a lot cuter, hehe.



slayertazz- kissage is always a good point for a chapter.



mollig- glad you liked it, its good that it reminded you of another scene, shows hopefully that i got the realtionship between them right.



xxelliexx

**"Damn gayly forward!"** Anya- into the woods by blameburner.

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby Lola19 » Fri Aug 16, 2002 7:30 am

Quote:
oh one more thing, *cough*



Her name was lola she was a show girl and she wore ribbons in her hair and dress right up to there! la la la la la la. heh.




Ellie you crazy chick! Its fab to have you back! And did you get a phone call before you left?

Glad you had fun in edinburgh, jeez u were like 45mins away from me! I had 3 nights in a row getting very drunk last weekend for my birthday, it was great. Although, there was an accident with, a sambucca, my lip, and a lighter! ouch!

Just sat my last exam this morning too, woo hoo,no more studyin = more time for the kittens!

Im a bit hyper today as you can tell, so enough of my babble!

Love and hugs to ya Ellie

Louise xxx :love

Lola19
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby witchbitchwillow » Fri Aug 16, 2002 7:52 am

heh lola honey! you were so close! grrr oh well never mind, we'll meet up next time. i fell in love with edinburgh i relaly want to go there for drama school at some point!



phone call? huh?



**Although, there was an accident with, a sambucca, my lip, and a lighter! ouch!**



right okay i wont ask hehe.



hope your exam went okay! i get my results next thursday! im scared but excited at the same time! glad that you have more time for your kittens! i'm on holiday so we can do nothing together lol. wlel actually im going to the reading music festival next thursday right after my exams! so that should be great i cant wait!



okay now that was a abbale and a half hehe!



are you on any IM's?



xxelliexx



*Turns up stereo and dances round the thread to 'her name was lola' * heh see you get that fun song and i get eleanor rigby! although that is also a good song, but it doesnt relaly have the same ring to it.

**"Damn gayly forward!"** Anya- into the woods by blameburner.

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby TheWhiz » Fri Aug 16, 2002 8:07 am

Lovely update! :grin

Glad they had a chat and decided to face the ignorance together :D

"I am a whiz...If ever a whiz there was"

TheWhiz
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby Lola19 » Fri Aug 16, 2002 8:21 am

Yeah im only on Msn Ellie, My email is Louiseb_82@hotmail.com.

Thats a deal, we'll do nothing together! The reading festival sounds good, id love to go down for that one year! Ooh the phone call, were'nt you waiting on a phone call before you left but she didnt call and you didnt want to phone her again?

The sambucca incident was funny, we met up with a group that we met on holiday that lived near because it was my birthday and they decided to get me very very drunk! One lit a sambucca while it was in my mouth and it burnt my lip, it still hurts ( a week later!!!) Apparrantly i spat out a pretty amazing burst of flame in the process so that was cool!

Edited to add: And im sure theres no reason for you to be scared about your results so just keep with the excitement! :party What results are you waiting for?



There i go with another babble!

Love Louise :love



Edited by: Lola19 at: 8/16/02 7:36:32 am
Lola19
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby witchbitchwillow » Fri Aug 16, 2002 11:05 am

we are great babblers! lol.



wlel the phone call never came because *as i said* she was avoiding me, and when i got back from holiday she had a girlfriend which sucked a lot, but lets not go into all that again ive just got through it! lol.



im on msn aswell so ill add you in a second.



awww, poor you, remind me never to get really drunk! oh actually dont remind me, then i still can, i just wont hang around near lighters, oh actually dont remind me to do that too, hmmmmm. shutting up now!



i'm waiting for my gcse results! see im still a baby :( im only 16.



xxelliexx

**"Damn gayly forward!"** Anya- into the woods by blameburner.

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby TareBearRS » Sat Aug 17, 2002 8:46 am

YEEEE



Way to go Tara and Willow, it does suck to treated differently but they shoulden't let that stop them.

I am glad to takled about that and made with the kissing in front of the restaurant. Nice one.



R.

TareBearRS
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby pikescoob » Sat Aug 17, 2002 12:14 pm

awwwww......i wish that people would mind their own business...heh...but unfortunately that'll never happen.....go Tara kissing Will in front of everyone :grin I'm glad you had a great time away and welcome back!! ;)



--Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby witchbitchwillow » Sat Aug 17, 2002 2:00 pm

heya,



TarabearRS- thank you, i had been kinda thinking about this topic myself so i thought it might be a good thing to put into the fic. kissage wahoo!



michelle- its great to be back :D i wish ppl would mind their wn aswell, but as you say its never going to happen.



xxelliexx

**"Damn gayly forward!"** Anya- into the woods by blameburner.

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: chapter 9

Postby tkheaven » Sat Aug 17, 2002 6:54 pm

awww : the kiss *sigh* :grin

Tk's new and improved "GrrArgg"

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Tara was similarly riveted, her body on slow burn as Willow's lips parted and her mouth opened, the food slipping inside and being consumed. Never in her life had Tara ever wanted to be a chicken casserole so badly...Later that night..."It's good to be a chicken casserole," Tara murmured, before passing out. ~ Answering Darkness by Sassette

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