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Re: Re: ...

Postby Tempest Duer » Thu Sep 02, 2004 9:08 pm

Chris danced with Tara? Lucky Chris!



But, uh, the dance and the touching and Willow doing pushups and... wow, it was long and so totally cool. Yayness.

It's insulting to the whole gender[sic] of rap.



~Eminem

Tempest Duer
 


chapter 6 feedback

Postby willohand » Thu Sep 02, 2004 9:48 pm

well it seems everyone enjoyed what i did with the new charaters i added.i had a heck of a fun time writing you guys in.And RaVeN, with a name like yours i had to come up with something good.tango anyone?yeah chris got to dance with tara,but so did RaVeN oh and she`s going to be in this fic for a while as is other characters.

so what about willow`s new body part discovery? can it get any sexier? she was kissing tara`s hips.:thud :blush my my

for a virgin she has a way with making a woman feel like a queen.and her closing her eyes before kissing tara in the park,,,how sweet of her was that? of course once she was at home alone with tara...so she asks tara if she could see her and then she studies every inch of her.and tara is so at ase she`s able to go to sleep.now thats trust and total comfort.did anyone really read the last fw lines?you guys do realise willow is now looking at and inside of tara`s...

willohand
 


Re: chapter 6 feedback

Postby WickedReds » Thu Sep 02, 2004 11:28 pm

Wow.. Chirs is lucky.. I love how u stuck everyone in the story made it very fun... wonderful update..



-reds:willow



my banana dances for smut :banana

Tara in a wet shirt, Tara in a wet shirt. Tara in. A. Wet. Shirt. “Of course.”-Willow From Remember to Breath By Yellow Crayon



Now that just sucks- me

WickedReds
 


Re: chapter 6 feedback

Postby ramjr » Fri Sep 03, 2004 12:02 am

Been a long time since I read Chapter 1 & 2, and now I've read through 6. Your writing has so improved! Your characterization is so right on. I am so enthralled with the story! Tara, goes with out saying, is so perfect. And Willow? Wow!! Though I wasn't too keen on Faith, I like what you have done with her. She and Buffy!!You are a genius!

ramjr
 


Re: chapter 6 feedback

Postby WillowPowered » Fri Sep 03, 2004 12:19 am

Am loving this fic, it's so romantic and so darn HOT!!!!



Can't wait for more.



Jill

~~~~~~~~

Willow - Say, you all didn't happen to do a bunch of drugs did ya?



My Home Page | Amber Powered | Alyson Powered



My lack of talent is more than made up for by my enthusiasm.

WillowPowered
 


Re: Wow I Live Next Door!

Postby tararosenburg » Fri Sep 03, 2004 2:26 am

:bigwave



First of all I must say :thud I live next door to Tara! That would be the best thing in the world. And I sign! sooooo cool. It's been so long I haven't anyone to sign to except for my one friend that took ASL with me in school. :party I shall do a happy dance! I love the whole chapter and the Dancing! RaVen and Chris are lucky! The bath was soooo sweet! :sheep That last part can I say :drool much! You are major cool I will Love this fic forever and once it is finished it will be printed out and put into a speical binder so I can read it over and over and over!

YOU ROCK!

Keep writing! :banana :dance :pinky

-Mal-

"Happiness is not a fish that you can catch!" From Happiness and the fish by Our Lady Peace

tararosenburg
 


Re: Wow I Live Next Door!

Postby Artemis » Fri Sep 03, 2004 3:04 am

Yep, I read the last lines :blush It's great that Tara feels that comfortable with Willow, that she just gives her everything, nothing hidden, and what she gets in return is nothing less than love.

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

Artemis
 


Re: Wow I Live Next Door!

Postby alysagoddess85 » Fri Sep 03, 2004 7:33 am

well then*clears throat*...that was interesting...hips?! yea...it was just hot...lol...i love how willow wants to learn EVERYTHING about taras body...my my shes just soooo dedicated. it does make for good reading i must say. what body part shall we read about next though hey? are we gonna have a foot chapter...or kneecaps?! cuz im thinking anything you do will just be hot...lol...more soon please!



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

alysagoddess85
 


Re: Wow I Live Next Door!

Postby umgaynow » Fri Sep 03, 2004 7:56 am

:shock GULP I seem to have lost the ability to swallow...OMG that was sexy...I should have known better than to read this story before work...arrrrgggghhhh



If Will and Tara are half as frustrated as you've got me, they better make love soon or they'll explode...



Excellent work...can't wait for the next chapter...please don't make me wait long :pray :p ray:pray :drool



umgaynow





Quote:
you all didn't happen to do a buncha drugs did ya?

umgaynow
 


word of thanks to my devoted kitties

Postby willohand » Fri Sep 03, 2004 9:31 am

well just wanted to thank you guys for reading and leaving such wonderful replies,which i live for. so you all have a good weekend and enjoy your day off for labor day if your off from work Monday.by the way its my birthday on the 7th.yay me.

that`s right im a virgo.and if anyone is interested id like from you kitties a photo of willow/tara, color if possible and a single 8x10 of AMBER BENSON sent to me via email at

willotara69@yahoo.com

You all probally know what a huge amber benson fan i am.if not im a huge amber benson fan.so can you guys fill up my email with photos of her.i dont care if their black and white either.:bigwave thanks.

willohand
 


The story...

Postby WillowTara Addict » Fri Sep 03, 2004 9:59 am

:bigwave I just got back in and wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed reading your fic. I was so honored to be asked to help you write this fic using my knowledge of Deaf culture. I never thought you would do something so radical and yet fantastic. I really enjoyed everything you have created with Willow and Tara, our favorite TV lesbian couple. Keep up the wonderful work! I will be around to leave more feedbacks and comments so forth. :kiss1

WillowTara Addict
 


Re: word of thanks to my devoted kitties

Postby ramjr » Fri Sep 03, 2004 10:51 am

:no I ain't gonna tell you what you'll get on the 7th, but it will be something really special, so be sure :boot to grab it when it comes through. :luv

ramjr
 


...

Postby RaVeN » Fri Sep 03, 2004 1:58 pm

I can't wait to see the next update.. I don't know I think Chris or I should give Willow dance lessons hee hee.



As always happily awaiting more.

__________________



Chantry: Now that, you know, the moon's dripping blood and all thats left is freaks and cockroches and all your old friends are zombie like. What's next?



Raven: You know the usual.



Chantry: Your going to Disneyworld with the freaks and cockroaches?



Raven: I was thinking more of survivng thanks, and NO 'Ratworld' that place scares me enough with just the talking rat.

RaVeN
 


Re: ...

Postby umgaynow » Fri Sep 03, 2004 9:45 pm

OK, so I read the update this morning before work, but I hadn't had my caffeine yet so I had to read it again...made me think of one thing...how come every time things are getting all sexy between our girls, Tara doses off...does this woman have sleeping sickness or something???:gnome

umgaynow
 


feedback on tara`s position about willow`s attention

Postby willohand » Sat Sep 04, 2004 4:47 pm

dont worry umgaynow with the kind of attention shes givivng tara no way is tara`s body going to allow her to be unconscious for too long.and you arent going to believe what and how willow gives tara`s body some good long loving.okay already ive said too much.

willohand
 


Re: feedback on tara`s position about willow`s attention

Postby Nicole023 » Sun Sep 05, 2004 6:11 am

How and what is Willow gonna do to Tara's body for lovin ? :flirt



I know, i know, you're probably not gonna answer that, but.. a girl can try can she ? :whistle



And if i give you puppy dog eyes ? :paranoid



Ok, Ok, i'll be waiting for your update.

Nicole023
 


just a feedback

Postby DreamLover » Sun Sep 05, 2004 9:01 am

Willohand,



When can we read your masterpiece, will Willow finally be a woman or will Tara just give her a preview-taste :p



DreamLover



==============================================

DreamLover
 


feedback on willow`s loving tara`s body

Postby willohand » Sun Sep 05, 2004 10:47 am

well kitties ill give you a hint on whats to come...willow is going to... which is going to have tara all:blush and not to mention:drool .but then tara turns the table on willow by... surprising isnt it?well there now you have an idea of whats to come. boy i treat my kitties so special.;)

still love me right?

willohand
 


Re: feedback on willow`s loving tara`s body

Postby Shy One » Sun Sep 05, 2004 12:00 pm

Of course we still love you. :p

Just don't keep us waiting too long. :D



Shy One

:shy

Shy One
 


..

Postby RaVeN » Sun Sep 05, 2004 2:20 pm

WOW all thats going to happen??? I am well SHOCKED! lol



:p

__________________



Chantry: Now that, you know, the moon's dripping blood and all thats left is freaks and cockroches and all your old friends are zombie like. What's next?



Raven: You know the usual.



Chantry: Your going to Disneyworld with the freaks and cockroaches?



Raven: I was thinking more of survivng thanks, and NO 'Ratworld' that place scares me enough with just the talking rat.

RaVeN
 


Re: ..

Postby Nicole023 » Sun Sep 05, 2004 3:05 pm

To tell you the truth.. I don't know if my mind can handle all of that happening.



So maybe someones gotta help me true it all? :eyebrow So my brains don't fry and go numb... ?? :flirt



:blush





Will be waiting for the update :)

Nicole023
 


Re: ..

Postby alysagoddess85 » Sun Sep 05, 2004 7:54 pm

ooo...so now im all excited and waiting for an update...it sounds like there is much steamyness to be had...and some more body parts?! lol..i can just never tell!



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

alysagoddess85
 


feedback to upcoming update

Postby willohand » Sun Sep 05, 2004 8:11 pm

well kitties yes there is going to be lots more body parts being discovered by willow and lucjky tara gets to enjoy the slow exploration.things will be getting a lot more intense.oh and poor (lucky)tara has to be laying down for it.:wink .should i tell you kitties that willow is going to use her...

and tara is going to looooooooooooooove it so much but then again what woman wouldnt?okay enough said.:D :devil im so bad arent i?

willohand
 


feedback to upcoming update

Postby DreamLover » Mon Sep 06, 2004 1:55 am

YAHHHHHHHHH You are BAD BAD BAD: -->>:

DreamLover
 


feedback to my being a bit of a tease

Postby willohand » Mon Sep 06, 2004 5:21 am

yeah i am arent i? i can be such a bad kitty;)

willohand
 


feedback to my being a bit of a tease

Postby DreamLover » Mon Sep 06, 2004 5:59 am

Bad kitty? mystery lioness you mean :kdevil

Edited by: DreamLover at: 9/6/04 5:00 am
DreamLover
 


Happy B-DAY

Postby DreamLover » Mon Sep 06, 2004 3:57 pm

It's midnight in my country so im wishing you a:



HAPPY B-DAY HAPPY B-DAY HAPPY B-DAY Lets party



:banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana





MAY ALL YOUR DREAMS COME TRUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



DreamLover

Edited by: DreamLover at: 9/6/04 2:59 pm
DreamLover
 


infoon chapter 7

Postby willohand » Wed Sep 08, 2004 6:51 am

well here it is the middle of the week and im working hard on the next chapter.well its raining here in new york so ill be spending the day writing :kgeek :buried and will be posting by s

unday.:applause ::buried .well im off:(

Oh and this chapter is :p :gnome :drool :drool .

willohand
 


Re: infoon chapter 7

Postby amazonaa » Wed Sep 08, 2004 6:08 pm

WOW!!!!:drool That was....wow.





More soon, please.







brittney







~Good friends help you move. Real friends help you move the body.~

amazonaa
 


Re: infoon chapter 7

Postby umgaynow » Wed Sep 08, 2004 8:14 pm

If you don't update soon, I'm gonna have to pitch a big ole hissy fit! :gnome :rage :gnome :rage :gnome :rage :gnome :rage



umgaynow



Quote:
you all didn't happen to do a buncha drugs did ya?

umgaynow
 

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