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Re: Wow...

Postby wimpy0729 » Sat Apr 10, 2004 8:39 pm

Hey Holly! :bigwave



Absolutely loved it!



The flashbacks were adorable, Willow and her jealousy and of course Tara would make her hot, with the dancing.



And again, Willow jealous with Faith talking about Tara's stamina -- so cute!



More soon!



Wimpy

wimpy0729
 


Re: Wow...

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Sat Apr 10, 2004 9:33 pm

:bigwave hey look! Its Holly! Ive heard alot about you! Everyone in that chat is always like "Whens Holly gonna update!" haha...anyway...you must think im odd...i just finished reading all of the fic here cause who was it...april...marina...or maybe mika kept talkin about it....its a great read! I like it alot! Great writting and i cant get enough! Must have more soon! Thanks for writting!

:pride :peace

-Rose

Please dont let my name fool you, I really am a lesbian! willowntara247@yahoo.com (my email addy!)

Spikeizmine87
 


Re: Wow...

Postby Shadowed Grl » Sat Apr 10, 2004 9:51 pm

Holly! :D



Wow, I'm speechless all of your flashbacks are remarkable! I agree with everyone else when they say that it gives you an insight of their friendship and how it'll grow into the future. Willow and Tara have always been in love it just took them five years to admit their feelings. I hope we have more soon because I'm seriously going through Taras Shadow withdrawls. :spin



-Jolie

Shadowed Grl
 


Re: Wow...

Postby The Rose24 » Sat Apr 10, 2004 10:38 pm

I am loving the relationship between our two ladies. :heart

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: Wow...

Postby Stroke of Luck » Sun Apr 11, 2004 3:32 am

:lol what a timing, its as bad as Buffy´s

They are already aroused, how will it be when they are all alone at night and having time for them self:drool I see lots of action coming:glasses



CU:wave

SoL/Natti

Even in death Baby, i´ll never leave u!

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: Wow...

Postby Grimaldi » Sun Apr 11, 2004 9:54 am

loved the update :D



Faith and her lousy sense of timing, kind of like Buffy

I'm not stealing, I'm just taking things without paying for them. In what twisted dictionary is that stealing?
Welcome friends, how may I pervert you?

Grimaldi
 


Re: Wow...

Postby sam darls » Sun Apr 11, 2004 2:07 pm

Aww great update..and very nice :heart . Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: Wow...

Postby bindingwiccan » Mon Apr 12, 2004 12:58 am

:heart :heart :heart

ahh the wonderfulness of this fic... *sighs* :heart :heart :heart loved faith in this chapt. shes so funny.

love it!





-kelsey

bindingwiccan
 


Re: Wow...

Postby bluewillowwitch » Tue Apr 13, 2004 11:03 am

:bigwave Holly :flower ,

I loved the update! :clap :bow I love how you build :willow and :tara up and let them down. :lol It just means that later there is going to be much in the way of smut. :D Buffy and Xander are coming for a visit! :pinky Faith and Buffy can get themselves hooked back up. :whistle Maybe Buffy should just move to Alabama. :whistle Can't wait to :read more. Update soon, please? :pray :pray :pray :pray





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

------------------------------------------

"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos



bluewillowwitch
 


Re: Wow...

Postby Fuzz WT » Tue Apr 13, 2004 10:59 pm

The flashbacks are very lovely. I mean I think it's the very cool idea. Everytime I read it, I'd get the giddy feeling! :blush It's very cute.



The last update was really a teasing...uh, I don't do well with the teasing. So, please stop teasing. And there were a lot of teasing in yr fic...a-and I could die with that...um, and I'll stop now. :shy



*Fuzz*

*******




Oir la noche inmensa, mas inmensa sin ella.Y el verso cae al alma como al pasto el rocio...Tonight I can write the saddest lines, the saddest lines about her.

~ Puedo Escribir / Sixpence None The Richer ~


Fuzz WT
 


Chapter Fourteen - Take Me Away

Postby Taras Shadow » Fri May 07, 2004 2:34 pm

Hello Kittens! Sorry for the delay, but I have a short update for ya! :D Thank you all for the awesome feedback. :) Love it! Enjoy! :D



Title: Five by Five (High)

Author: Holly aka Taras Shadow

Disclaimer: All characters belong to Joss Whedon, ME, UPN

Feedback: Yes please, everything is welcome.

Pairings: W/T mainly

Rating: PG 13 or R - You decide

Summary: It's been five years since High School ended for the Sunnydale crowd, will thing be the same when a reunion takes place? Or will somethings remain the same?

All Mistakes Are Mine



Chapter Fourteen - Take Me Away



“No, over to the left more,” Patricia scratched her head a bit as Tara moved an antique picture above the new couch in Willow’s apartment.



“Mama, Willow’s going to be back from her business trip in a few hours, we should hurry this up,” Tara mounted the painting on the wall and carefully got off the couch.



“I still can’t believe you’re moving out,” Patricia tucked dark blonde hair behind her daughter’s ear.



“I’m only a five minute drive away,” Tara smiled sheepishly, pulling her mother in for a hug.



“But still, you’re moving out, spreading your wings...leaving me with Faith,” Patricia chuckled.



“Aww, you love her company, she taught you how to pull that Britney move out on the dance floor,” Tara waggled her eyebrows.



“Which embarrassed the hell out of you!”



Tara shrugged and moved the last empty box by the door. “You were doing it in the middle of the grocery store,” she smirked.



“What can I say...Mama’s got moves,” Patricia waggled her eyebrows playfully.



Tara laughed, taking one last look at the small apartment she now shared with her lover, Willow. “I can’t believe her and I have finally found each other.”



“You deserve each other,” her mother patted her on the shoulder.



A quiet bang could be heard in the hallway, followed with a low rumble sound. Tara raised her eyebrows as her and her mother opened the door to find Faith pinned to the wall by a rather, aroused blonde.



Patricia’s eyes went wide as she quickly looked away, horror expressions showing her face as she just witnessed her surrogate daughter caught in the act.



“Hey! Get a room!” Tara yelled, giggling as she shut the door. “Man, horny women these days.”



“Oh Tara,” Patricia scolded before moving towards the small kitchen area, putting the clean dishes away.



Tara shrugged and smiled to herself, life was great. Now she just couldn’t wait until Willow got home so they could make up for the two days the redhead was gone.



~



Tara sat on her doorstep, watching the time on her watch tick by slowly. She sighed a couple of times before looking back down the streets. Summer was over and she couldn’t wait until Willow got back from a two week vacation with her parents. She missed her deeply.



She remembered how excited Willow was to go away to Florida for a while, relaxing in the sun and meeting new people. Of course the thing that killed Tara the most was the fact that she was invited to go with The Rosenbergs, but politely declined, still feared by her deep feelings for Willow...the last thing she wanted to do was ruin her awesome friendship with the redhead.



“Why so glum? Missing someone?” A voice said from behind her.



Tara swung her head around and found herself face to face with her crush. “Willow? How’d you get behind me?”



Willow smiled and made her way to the steps, sitting next to the blonde. “Your mom let me in from the back... I kinda took the back alley route.”



“Oh...welcome home!” Tara smiled and hugged her best friend.



“Thank you,” Willow grinned and pulled out a small box from her backpack. “Here, I got something for you.”



Tara looked into green eyes and smiled softly. “You didn’t have too.”



“I know, but I wanted too... the least I could do since you never came with us.” Willow smiled sadly.



“I-I’m sorry Willow,” the blonde’s voice faltered.



“Don’t be, I had a good time...I mean, I am sad that you didn’t want to come, but I had fun.”



“That’s g-good,” Tara sighed and cursed herself and looked at the neatly wrapped box in her hand.



“Open it, I think you’ll like it,” Willow moved closer and rested her chin on Tara’s shoulder playfully.



Tara unwrapped the box and opened it, inside lay a white shell on a chain and engraved on the shell was ‘Best Friends’. A ring also lay inside with their names engraved on the inside. “Moonstone,” Tara smiled. “Oh Willow, I love these.”



“Really?” the redhead asked nervously.



“Yes,” Tara smiled and looked at the shell again. “So this makes us official? Best friends, I mean.”



Willow nodded, giving Tara her adorable grin. “I have one too, we can where them together.”



“Thank you,” Tara pulled her best friend into a hug, melting into her embrace.



Willow swallowed and squeezed the blonde’s body softly before pulling back. “Miss me?” she asked.



“You have no idea,” Tara whispered under her breath while nodding.



“Good, cause I missed you too...I have so much to tell you!” Willow bounced excitedly. “First, when we checked in the hotel, this guy tried to pick up my mom and my dad wasn’t going to hear any of his lame one liners so he never tipped the guy with money, instead his tip was to make sure and check to hit on a woman when her child and husband aren’t around, oh my gods, Tara, it was funny,” Willow babbled, grabbing Tara’s hands while she continued to smile and talk, “and then we went shopping and their was the person in one of the store windows and my mom thought the girl was a robot...Oh! And I wish you were there because we met the author of your favourite book...so I got you this...” She pulled out a book from Tara’s favourite author, and had it autographed personally for Tara.



“Willow!” Tara’s eyes went wide as she looked at the book with the young author’s name written inside. “Thank you!”



Willow smiled and pointed to her cheek. “This deserves a kiss,” she giggled as she felt Tara lean in and brush her lips lightly over her freckled skin.



“You’re amazing,” Tara whispered, placing one last lingering kiss on the redhead’s forehead.



Willow sighed and snuggled into the blonde’s embrace. “It’s good to be home.”



~




***



Willow opened the door to her apartment building and found it dark and empty. “Tara?” she frowned and turned on the lights, finding a small post-it note on the side table.



Went out to grab a few items for tonight’s dinner.

I miss you.

Love, Tara.




Willow smiled and put her luggage against the back of the couch, going to the fridge and grabbing herself a bottle water. Tara was always thinking of her, looking at the freshly stacked water bottles and her favourite Oreo cookies by the cookie jar.



“Hey you,” Tara shut the door with a soft click, dropping the grocery bags onto the kitchen table. “I missed you,” she smiled and grabbed Willow by the waist, pulling her in for a slow kiss.



“Oh Tara, I missed you too, so much!” Willow sighed and nuzzled the blonde’s neck. “Too long,” she mumbled against creamy skin.



“Did you have a nice trip?” Tara asked, tucking red strands of hair behind her lover’s ears.



“Lonely,” Willow pouted but then smiled widely. “However, I did get a five hundred dollar bonus!”



“Willow! Good for you!” Tara said excitedly and cupped Willow face, kissing her again slowly.



Willow melted into the kiss and clasped her hands to Tara’s back. “I love you,” she murmured.



Tara giggled softly and pulled back, licking her lips. “I love you too,” she smiled.



“Sorry I couldn’t be here, helping you move in,” Willow looked around the apartment and noticed only a few added items. “Where’s your stuff?”



Tara blushed. “Well, I have a lot of stuff, so most of it is packed away for now...until we get a bigger place.”



Willow beamed. “So then we can have all of our stuff put out on display together when we get a bigger place?”



Tara nodded shyly.



“Yay!” Willow squealed softly and kissed Tara again.



“Faith and Buffy were caught making out in the hallway, again,” Tara laughed, pulling Willow to the couch.



Willow rolled her eyes. “Doesn’t surprise me,” she grinned. “I’m glad Buffy decided to stay for a while, before heading back to California.”



“I bet Dawn misses her,” Tara smiled sadly.



“Dawn is coming with her next time,” Willow explained. “They were talking about moving here together...though, can you see Buffy, Dawn and Faith living in one apartment?”



“Party central,” Tara chuckled. “I’d rather live here, with my beautiful girlfriend, where the party is for two people only... a very intimate party for two.”



“Mmm,” Willow leaned in and kissed Tara gently, before parting her lips and accepting the blonde’s tongue. “Party for two indeed.”



***



TBC...



~Holly~ :heart

Baby, baby, baby when all your love is gone, who will save me from all I'm up against out in this world

- Bright Lights - Matchbox Twenty


"Show me where to touch you." - Tara, It Ain't Fickle (Luciddream)

Edited by: Taras Shadow  at: 5/7/04 1:39 pm
Taras Shadow
 


Re: Chapter Fourteen - Take Me Away

Postby AmbeRocks » Fri May 07, 2004 3:02 pm

aawwww holly, great update!

man those memories they have...it have to killed them both always with the flirting and all, just so sweet:heart



hope it won't be as long until we have the next update!

take care!



jen:fallen

There is such a variety of well-invented things that the earth is like the breasts of a woman: useful as well as pleasing - Nietzsche

AmbeRocks
 


Re: Chapter Fourteen - Take Me Away

Postby wimpy0729 » Fri May 07, 2004 3:04 pm

Yay update!



It was worth the wait.



Again, loved the flashbacks. They felt so much for each other, even back then.



And now...they're together and they have some lost time to make up for!



Soon please!!



Wimpy

wimpy0729
 


Re: Chapter Fourteen - Take Me Away

Postby SilverWingedNemesis » Fri May 07, 2004 4:43 pm

YAY!!



very sweet.. hehe I love tara's mom in this fic too!!



*hugs*



keep up the great work sweetie,



:applause



Nickole

"Life is eternal; it has no beginning and no end. The loving friends we meet on our journey return to us time after time. We never die, because we were never really born."

SilverWingedNemesis
 


Re: Chapter Fourteen - Take Me Away

Postby justkazy » Fri May 07, 2004 5:43 pm

Hey:wave



very sweet update..well worth the wait



more soon please!



:D

"I'd cry..i would die if i lost you"-Alex Parks...I love you, baby!

justkazy
 


Re: Chapter Fourteen - Take Me Away

Postby Mikaelah Braenna » Fri May 07, 2004 7:50 pm

Hey Holly ... Welcome back! We got an update! :banana



Willow and Tara, finally, living together. :bounce Wonderful update! More soon, please?



~Mikaelah

Willow: "Where would you go? If you felt lost and alone? ..."

Tara: "To You..."


~~Truly and Forever~~

Mikaelah Braenna
 


Re: Chapter Fourteen - Take Me Away

Postby The Rose24 » Fri May 07, 2004 9:09 pm

Things are going just great for our ladies. :bounce

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: Chapter Fourteen - Take Me Away

Postby littlecrazy80 » Sat May 08, 2004 12:34 am

Great update! :bounce Buffy and Faith! :lol

Can we see a bit of the party for two? ;)



*lil´c*

"Okay, we’re here, we’re queer, let’s kick this shit into gear," Five by Five (Taras Shadow)



SweetAmber

littlecrazy80
 


Re: Chapter Fourteen - Take Me Away

Postby Stroke of Luck » Sat May 08, 2004 10:16 am

I would love to see all back together...and party time for Buffy, Dawn and Faith, why not but as long we gonna see the party for 2;) and maybe those two might join once a while...dont u think so?:D



Great update!



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

Even in death Baby, i´ll never leave u!

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: Chapter Fourteen - Take Me Away

Postby sam darls » Sat May 08, 2004 2:15 pm

Awww, Holly..that was so lovely :heart . Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: Chapter Fourteen - Take Me Away

Postby YMKA » Sat May 08, 2004 7:17 pm

I have this very good friend of mine;) [ more like a sister really:P ], she assured me that the author of "Five by five" updated her fic....I love that friend of mine:grin ;) Always manage to bring a smile to my face:grin ...oi wait...it's your fic and your thread....sorry....:blush :lol :lol



I looooooove Tara's mom here:grin Tara is sooo cute "“Man, horny women these days.”" :lmao ....Dude you killed me with that one:grin :lol that was great...Tara saying "Man" LMAO :lol :lol You are such a tease....."party for two" followed by "to be continued" ???? come on!!!! Tease!!!! :p



Thank you so much:grin



Love ya:grin

:peace :heart

YMKA
 


Re: Chapter Fourteen - Take Me Away

Postby Grimaldi » Mon May 10, 2004 7:58 am

loved the update :)



Faith and Buffy getting caught was funny. i liked the flashback, what Willow got Tara was sweet

I'm not stealing, I'm just taking things without paying for them. In what twisted dictionary is that stealing?
Welcome friends, how may I pervert you?

Grimaldi
 


Re: Chapter Fourteen - Take Me Away

Postby TaraBaby77 » Wed May 26, 2004 10:56 pm

Hey Holly -



Your fic stalker is back, heehee. Just wanna say that I have totally enjoyed the updates. I love this fic. Sorry, it took me forever to get caught up. Anyhoo, great work and hope to see more soon. =)

Aaron

'Tarababy77'


"Don't buy into all the media crap. Love yourself for who you are, not what others THINK you should look like. It's DEFINITELY more important in this life to love each other despite our imperfections." - Amber Benson

TaraBaby77
 


Re: Chapter Fourteen - Take Me Away

Postby hin768 » Sat Aug 28, 2004 5:27 am

great update

hin768
 


Re: Chapter Fourteen - Take Me Away

Postby bluewillowwitch » Fri Sep 03, 2004 12:14 pm

:bigwave Holly :flower ,

I love the update! :clap :bow :willow and :tara are the best couple ever! :luv2 I love parties for two. ;) Buffy and Faith are great. I can just think of the many place they have had sex in public. Can't wait to :read more. Update soon, please? :pray :pray :pray :pray





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

------------------------------------------

"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos



bluewillowwitch
 


Re: Chapter Fourteen - Take Me Away

Postby willowhanded » Sun Sep 05, 2004 11:02 pm

Awesome update, Holly.





I just love your stories.





Keep with it and you'll go far, babe. This ( writing, ) if anything is .. one of your fortes.





And if you don't update soon then .. :fit2 I will be one unhappy lesbian.



-Kristi:dance

Edited by: willowhanded at: 9/5/04 10:03 pm
willowhanded
 


Re: Chapter Fourteen - Take Me Away

Postby bluewillowwitch » Fri Feb 04, 2005 3:45 pm

:bigwave Holly :flower ,

I saw this fic way back here looking all unloved so I had to show it some attention. :aww Please tell me that you haven't forgotten about this little fic here. It's too young to be forgotten. :(





Grace

------------------

"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos



"Sometimes you have to walk through Hell to get to Heaven."--Me

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: Chapter Fourteen - Take Me Away

Postby hin768 » Mon Feb 07, 2005 6:09 pm

agreed. this fic was wicked.



any chance of more?

:pray

hin768
 


beautiful

Postby SilverWingedNemesis » Sun Feb 27, 2005 8:21 pm

I found myself on kitten tonight, going back through all your fics, reading some of my favourite parts.. and just.. admiring you all over again.



I love you, Angel.



*brushes her lips over yours*



Je T'aime

"Life is eternal; it has no beginning and no end. The loving friends we meet on our journey return to us time after time. We never die, because we were never really born."

SilverWingedNemesis
 

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