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Postby witchbitchwillow » Sat Jun 29, 2002 3:52 pm

heya again,



thank you so much for the feedback, its relaly appreciated.



rose24- thanx, im also really gald that i could show Tara standing up to her father, i hated the way he treated her in family, wlel before he was stood up to by the whole gang and eventually tara.



Xita- lol yes, 'ken the walking talking Buffy companion'. i feel sorry for the fella in a wierd way:D



aly- hehe, aly remember to stop the men bashing! "its not so much the hating of men, were just more centered around the girl on girl action*.



TheWhiz- i think that it was important that Tara stood up him herself, and by having him threaten Willow it gave her a good insentive to do so.



no birthday cake- lol terminator look, great disription. i think that i like Tara in her ass kicking shoes!!



Snuggle- yeah i tried not to centre around the brutel bit bevause i wanted to keep this fic quite light. i tried to this by including some humour, for example Buffy carrying him around the streets.



Kieli- all brawn no brains i think i could name a couple from my school lol. not sure when ill have another update, ill try and get one done soon though i promise.



love ellie x x x x





*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: feedback

Postby Ginner WTluv » Sat Jun 29, 2002 4:12 pm

Woo hoo!!! Mr Maclay got his ass kicked!!! Hell yeah!!! *does a little dance* Great update, Ellie:D Keep it coming.

Ginner WTluv
 


Re: feedback

Postby witchbitchwillow » Sat Jun 29, 2002 4:24 pm

hehhe ginner you little madman!!!



*joins in with little dance*



ill keep it coming when i get the urge too. :D



love ellie x x x x

*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: feedback

Postby Lynz » Sat Jun 29, 2002 5:38 pm

hehe liked it when buffy was trying to talk to w&t,the whole talkin to a brick wall sydrome goin on! Tara finally standin up to her father was cool as well;the enormnity of what she had did sinking in,but *go Tara!*



cool update man ;)





Lynz

x x x x

Lynz
 


Re: feedback

Postby Lola19 » Sat Jun 29, 2002 6:28 pm

Go Tara and her bad self!

Ha Har, her dad finally got what he deserved!

Im liking this alot!

Looking forward to more.

Love Lola xxx :love

Lola19
 


Re: feedback

Postby witchbitchwillow » Sat Jun 29, 2002 6:36 pm

heya,



Lynz- i know the brick wall sydrome all to well lol. yeah i think that it was a very emotional point for tara, but having willow there by her side helped a lot.

i lover ure picture thing!! sassy eggs he he he.



lola- her name was lola she was a show girl, and she wore ribons in her hair and a dress right up there, la la la la la. sorry ill stop embarassing myself now. im glad that ure looking forward to more.



love ellie x x x x









*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: feedback

Postby Lola19 » Sat Jun 29, 2002 7:06 pm

Ellie, you crazy chick,

Thats so funny, My friends call me Lola as a nickname and the first time they did it was because they all sang those very same words. Thanks, u gave me a smile! :)

Love and hugs to ya Ellie

Lola xxx :love

Lola19
 


Re: feedback

Postby no birthday cake » Sat Jun 29, 2002 8:34 pm

i think tara's hot in her ass-kicking shoes.

maybe she should wear those more often.

no birthday cake
 


Re: feedback

Postby pikescoob » Sun Jun 30, 2002 9:08 am

Heh...poor Ken...it was too much for his teeny brain to handle.....lol. And yay for Tara using a chair to take care of her father....er...I mean she shouldn't have used violence.....ah hell, I'm glad she kicked his ass....:grin



--Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: feedback

Postby KathleenWolf » Sun Jun 30, 2002 10:15 am

okay now caught up again... mmmm a very nice few updates though i'm glad i got to read up until the bashing of Mr.Maclay... grrrrrrrrrrrrrr.... so glad it was Tara that hit him, to help solidfy how much she loves Willow



bravo

kathleen



"I am my beloved's and my beloved is mine."

KathleenWolf
 


Re: feedback

Postby Grimaldi » Sun Jun 30, 2002 10:45 am

that was a great update :)

yay Tara for hitting her father with the chair, the jerk deserved it. Ken was funny, sounds like he has spent too much time in the sun.

Dude, we're surrounded by perverts!

Worm, are you ready to die in the cleansing apocalypse?

Its not my fault that you're a little geek with no sense of humor

Grimaldi
 


Re: feedback

Postby witchbitchwillow » Sun Jun 30, 2002 12:01 pm

heya,



thanx for the feedback.



lola- wlel it is a great song lol. i just get nick named nellie from nellie the elephant and also smellie, not sure which one is better really. glad that i made you smile, its a thing that i always try to achive with my little lesbian friends. crazy chick eh! nah never. *HUGS*



no birthday cake- yeash i definately think that Willow should consider wearing them more often. but then again i think that she looks hot whatever shes wearing. or better still nothing at all would be nice :-p



michelle- yeash michelle violence is never the answer! unless comoletely necessary. yeah you have to feel sorry for Ken, hes so clueless hehe.



Katheen- glad that your all caught up, yeah it think that it was important that it was Tara that stood up for herself rather thatn someone else. Willow being in trouble gave her a good reason to do so. i think that if it were herself that was in trouble she may not have been able to get the courage to do so.



Grimaldi- yeah ken is a bit dim lol. glad that you liked the update. Tara with the chair hitting was a good way to get back at her father i think.



love ellie x x x x











*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: feedback

Postby SlayerTazz » Sun Jun 30, 2002 12:17 pm

too cool - go Tara. I love to see bad people get what they deserve. Thanks for the update - can't wait for the next one.

A dream is a wish the heart makes.

Willow: "You had two eggs, sunny-side-up. I remember because they were wiggling at me like little boobs."

Tara: "Sassy Eggs."

SlayerTazz
 


Re: feedback

Postby mollyig » Mon Jul 01, 2002 4:34 am

As glad as I was that Willow was there to support her, was really pleased that Tara stood up for herself.

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

mollyig
 


Re: feedback

Postby witchbitchwillow » Mon Jul 01, 2002 4:36 pm

heya,



thanx for the feedback:



SlayerTazz- eyah what goes round comes round. Tara's sweet revenge. i dont think that just by hitting him with a chair is going to make up for what he did for her though :(



Mollyig- yeah i dont think that Tara would have been able to do it if it wasnt for Wilow being there to back her up.



update should be up in the next couple of days i hope, but i do have a very hectic week with art exhibitions and plays and everything else mounting up.



thanx for reading everyone :D



love ellie x x x x

*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: feedback

Postby TareBearRS » Tue Jul 02, 2002 10:53 am

I'm sorry but YEEEE , he so had that comming. Hopefully he gets the hint and goes away and stays gone.

Willow was so cool, with her vamipre-remark, haha.

o man Buffy, why waist time on a dork like that..

Love the story.

R.

TareBearRS
 


Re: feedback

Postby ExtraFlameyWT » Wed Jul 03, 2002 9:06 pm

Woo Hoo!! I'm finally caught up! Great update, Ellie...I can't wait for more! Anymore on the way?



Aimee :D

*****
"Pope John Paul today confirmed his opposition to gay marriages, said they're unnatural. Gay marriage is unnatural. Then he put on a pointy hat, his dress, and returned to never having sex at all." -Bill Maher

ExtraFlameyWT
 


part 8a

Postby witchbitchwillow » Sat Jul 06, 2002 2:47 pm

heya,



cheers for the feedback, its always appreciated.



TarebearRS- lol, well he'll be out of it for a while i think. Vamp Willow is the greatest and extremly sexy :D



aimee- hello my lovely, glad that you're all caught up, just in time for the next update.



okay heres part 8a, it is a bit short but ive been so busy, but i made up for it by including kissage. :D



enjoy!



love ellie x x x x



Title: Summer Loving

Part: 8a

Author: Ellie Walsh aka. Witchbitchwillow

Email: witchb1tchwillow@hotmail.com

Feedback: yes please. Be brutal I can take it. “Strong like an Amazon right!”

Spoilers: none

Rating: PG

Pairing: Willow/Tara

Disclaimer: Joss owns it… Mutant enemy blah blah blah etc…

Summery: Based around series 4 when Oz left Willow. Willow then

goes on holiday to Orlando, Florida, goes into a bar, and makes

a new acquaintance.

Authors Note- well I don’t really have one this time so blah blah, oh yeah Aly proof read it for my this time so blame her lol.







        “This is nice, I mean the apartment and all.” Willow was trying to break the tension. She didn’t no quite what to say to Tara. She had walked hand in hand with her all the way back to the blondes apartment. When they got there Tara had disappeared into the bathroom for ten minutes and had only just emerged again.



        Tara looked up and just nodded. She needed to explain everything to Willow, but didn’t know how to tell her. they had walked all the way without saying a word to each other. she took a deep breath and tried to ease the tension in the room.



        Willow noticed how uncomfortable Tara was, she stood up and took both of the blondes hands. “Tara, look at me” she slowly lifted her head to meet Willow’s eyes. “You don't have to explain if you’re not ready, we can do this another time if you want”. Willow was trying desperately to make Tara feel more comfortable around her.



        “I know, its just” she took a staggered breath. “It can be so hard sometimes, to like explain how I feel”. Willow could see that the blonde was struggling to explain. She let go of Tara’s hands and placed them snugly on the blondes wait.



        “I know its okay, we can talk about it in the morning, when things are a little less confusing, okay?” Willow drew Tara in closer and placed a gentle kiss on her forehead. Tara just nodded and placed her arms around Willow’s back and enjoyed the comfort of the embrace.



        “Thank you” Tara couldn’t believe how much Willow’s words had calmed her so easily.



* * * *



        “Hi” Buffy placed Tara’s dad on the front desk of A and E, the women at the desk gave her a strange and tried to ask Buffy to remove the bleeding man from her desk.



        “Excuse me ma’am, but if you would like to take a seat I’ll. . .” the receptionist had obviously practiced this speech many times with uncooperative patients.



        Buffy interrupted casually, “so I’ll just be leaving him here then, I’m sure you can sort him out for me”. She smiled cheekily, “thank you”. Then turned around and walked out the door.



* * * *



        “Thank you”, Tara was snuggled into Willow’s chest as they laid entwined in Tara’s bed.



        “Stop saying that, you don't have to thank me.” Willow was playing with the soft blonde hair that had scattered across her chest. Tara just made a muffled sound and snuggled closer into Willow.



        The sunlight through the open window made little patterns dance across Tara’s face. Reflecting off her pale skin, Willow traced there patterns with her finger. Letting her skin connect with Tara’s, she loved feeling the electricity pass between them. All night they had just laid in each others arms, not needing to do anything else. Just being touching each other was enough, the events of the evening before meant that they just wanted to be close to each other, both taking comfort in the others embrace.



        Once again a thoughtful silence hung other pair, it. It was finally broken when Tara whispered “Do you want to get up”.



        Willow moaned turning her head on the pillow. “Do we have to?”. Tara giggled at how cute Willow was when she was sleepy.



        “No we don’t have to, but I’m going to make us some breakfast”. Tara attempted to make it out of the bed when a Willow hand grabbed the blonde by the waist dragging her back in again.



        “You’re not going anywhere young lady” Willow put on her resolve face, still clinging onto Tara with both hands firmly fixed around her waist, scooping her from behind.



        “Willow its eleven o’clock, I’m due at work in an hour”. Even though she knew she had to leave she found herself slowly leaning into Willows body. Willow then took a firm control of the situation, making it perfectly clear that Tara wasn’t going anywhere if she had anything to do with it. She pushed Tara down onto the bed and then straddled a very surprised blonde.



        “Your not going anywhere” she leaned down and kissed Tara with so much passion that the blonde moaned loudly and began to rub her hands the length of Willow’s thighs. The redhead pulled back giving Tara a chance to reject her if she wasn’t comfortable.



        “I’m suddenly feeling a little bit flustered, I think that I should maybe call in sick”. Tara grinned and pulled Willow’s face down to her own, engulfing Willow’s lips, letting there tongues battle furiously and hands roam confidently.



        The kiss broke off again once the two women had run out of oxygen, they kept their faces inched away from one another. They were both breathing heavily, just staring into each other eyes. Willow swallowed, emotions swirling through her body like she had never felt before.



        “Is this okay?” she was still unsure about whether it was definitely what Tara wanted.



        “Tara kissed Willow softly and replied, “its more than perfect”. She smiled at the beautiful redhead before, she couldn’t believe that she had got so lucky in finding her. She knew that she would be able to tell her everything about her past.



TBC . . .

       





*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: part 8a

Postby Ginner WTluv » Sat Jul 06, 2002 3:12 pm

Ggggggreat update Ellie!!! The electricity!!! Hell yeah!!! Why would anyone want to go to work, when they could be having serious snuggles/smoochies with Willow. Not me!! Call in sick Tara!! Yeah.... heh....

Need more, Ellie!! You know how addicted i am to this fic..... i could get cranky.... ;)



~Jen

Ginner WTluv
 


Re: part 8a

Postby ally02 » Sat Jul 06, 2002 3:18 pm

Yayaya! Loved the smoochies. Much droolage. Cant think of anything to say. Maybe u could fit in knee high boots into ur next fic? ;) for everyone else, that does make sense really!



love Aly xxxxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

ally02
 


aly boots.

Postby witchbitchwillow » Sat Jul 06, 2002 3:26 pm

heya,



woah feedback already!



Ginner- hello my lovely, long time no speak! where have you been? i'd deifnately choose snuggles with Willow, and if tara was there aswell that would be twice as good :D lol, more after ive finished my play, probably next thurs i think. a cranky ginner could be bad, ill try not to keep you waiting to long i promise :D



aly- omg omg omg the boots hello :D . maybe the knee high boots with the long denin wrap around skirt, he he he. be carefull of the droolage, but it can be kinda cute when people are asleep lol. mm maybe we could write one with the boots in, after the picnic. saying that, aly get ure sexy little butt into word and open that fic now bitch! ow ow ow head hurts, lights in long sticks very very bad. ow ow ow.



love ellie x x x x



:D :D :D :D







*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: aly boots.

Postby snuggle79 » Sat Jul 06, 2002 3:48 pm

Great Update! It was so lovely to see how they are both enjoying the others company. And you described it - as always - in a very good way. :D

Oh baby, want me to rub your tummy? She likes it when I ... stop explaining things.

Hi, um Tara..how are you? well...I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time...for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

snuggle79
 


Re: aly boots.

Postby pikescoob » Sat Jul 06, 2002 3:58 pm

Buffy just plopped Mr. Maclay at the hospital and left...lol...that's more than he deserved...heh. Sweet moments between W/T....I think I'd be calling in sick to work too....hehe. :grin



--Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: part 8a

Postby Lynz » Sat Jul 06, 2002 4:28 pm

Hey Ellie,

really nice update :) I liked the comic moment with buffy and the receptionist! oh yeah and I really liked how you were describing Willow and Tara the next morning, how Willow loved "feeling the electricity pass between them"

ooh and loved the smoochies as usual! mmm fluster-y goodness! :love





Lynz

x x x



I'm very seldom naughty - Willow, Restless

Lynz
 


Re: part 8a

Postby SlayerTazz » Sat Jul 06, 2002 4:37 pm

Great update!! Can't wait to read the next one. ;)

A dream is a wish the heart makes.

Willow: "You had two eggs, sunny-side-up. I remember because they were wiggling at me like little boobs."

Tara: "Sassy Eggs."

SlayerTazz
 


Re: aly boots.

Postby ally02 » Sat Jul 06, 2002 4:44 pm

Promise i will write 2moro. Gtg to bed too cos im gonna die and the gerbil is knawing my trousers!!

Butch lesbain...hmmm mistress of pain. Not too bad!! You wear the boxers and ill wear the boots :D



love u

xxxxxxxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

ally02
 


Finally caught up

Postby KrisBo5 » Sat Jul 06, 2002 5:09 pm

Hey!



I just caught up with this fic, and am I glad I did. It is just fab-O. I love alternate uni stories and yours is great. I can't wait for the next update.



KrisBo5



"Frell that!"

KrisBo5
 


Re: Finally caught up

Postby ExtraFlameyWT » Sat Jul 06, 2002 9:26 pm

Hey Ellie!! Great update! WOO DAMN HOO for smoochies! :)



Can't wait for more...



Aimee :D

*****
"Pope John Paul today confirmed his opposition to gay marriages, said they're unnatural. Gay marriage is unnatural. Then he put on a pointy hat, his dress, and returned to never having sex at all." -Bill Maher

ExtraFlameyWT
 


Re: Finally caught up

Postby TheWhiz » Sun Jul 07, 2002 4:28 am

Great update!! :)

Loved the moment between Buffy & the receptionist! :lol The moments between W/T were very sweet.

Look forward to next part!!

"I am a whiz...If ever a whiz there was"

TheWhiz
 


Re: Finally caught up

Postby TareBearRS » Sun Jul 07, 2002 7:49 am

Nice!!!! Likeing where this is going...

So sweet how Willow was comforting her and not pushing anything, bless her.

And Buffy, ha way to go..

Tara will be ok!!!

R.

TareBearRS
 

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