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Re: Fic : All You Wanted

Postby Naeryn » Sun Apr 24, 2005 3:27 pm

Okay, I'm not even halfway through this thing, but I just wanted to point something out.

In chapter seven - did no one notice that neither Willow nor Tara stopped to put on pants before taking Xander - sorry, Alex - to the hospital?
Don't you sit upon the shoreline and say you're satisfied, choose to chance the rapids, and dare to dance the tides - Garth Brooks, "the River"
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Re: Fic : All You Wanted

Postby AmberGoddess » Sat Oct 24, 2009 2:53 pm

Um... wow, no I did not. An update would be nice, I love this story! :party
I'm under your spell...

I am the Queen of Mosquitoes personified, feel my annoying wrath! ~Willow, The Rose

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