funkyasian's random poetry and other writings...

[ExtraFlameyWT]

Hey Steph! I want a poem!! Pleeeeeeeeeeease? You know you want to...



Tanniyn, don't be afraid to post anything...Everyone here is pretty nice...and I'm sure your poems are wonderful. I hope to see something from you.



Now, Steph...poem? Please?



Love,

Aimlet

Watch out for ankle-bit[/i]

Edited by: ExtraFlameyWT at: 12/29/02 4:14:19 pm

[funkyasian]

rl sucks...that's my conclusion...but enough about me...don't really have much time, but i wanted to post this for all to read...i promise thank you's later...



aimlet - here's the poem you asked for...what was it they said? ask and ye shall receive? eh, catholic school ever agreed with me...



disclaimer: ever sit there and watch the one you love and just let your mind wander? these are willow's wandering thoughts...

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Following my dreams

My path led to you

My goddess bathed in light

Unconditionally you give

I love you       

Let me take the hurt

I love you

Let me take the tears

I love you

Let me be everything you need

On bended knees

I offer my reverent heart

Please let me be yours

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thanks for reading as always...



~steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

Edited by: funkyasian at: 12/30/02 7:20:24 am

[ExtraFlameyWT]

Okay...it worked for a poem...now, Steph...can I have a million dollars?



Anyway, great poem...I LOVE IT! hehe *dances around happily now that there has been posting of a poem*



Another one soon? hehe







Love,

Aimlet

Watch out for ankle-biters.

[The Pineapple Head]

Steph - I'm always struck by the expression, 'nothing is trivial' because it reminds us that every action causes a reaction, every place we go, leads us to the next. Every decision we make leads us to different people and I think your poem expresses that well.



Take care my friend

Diana

Everyone in the house had heard that I was the "sex consultant" . I think they imagined that meant I stood over Gina and Jennifer with a riding crop, snapping, "Deeper , Harder, A Little to the Left!"
Susie Bright on the premiere of BOUND

[SJ]

Great poem

[funkyasian]

thank you thank you...you make me blush with your encouragements <-- see, me blushing



some thank you's...



*ExtraFlameyWT* - my dear aimlet...thank you for your encouragement always...i'm glad you like the poems...but as for missing 2 of them...ahem...just don't let it happen again...



*The Pineapple Head* - well, we're both getting old aren't we...but you know...i think little asians age better then pineapples...i don't go all gushy in the middle anyway, i'm glad you like my work...yours ain't half bad either you know...



*SJ* - woohoo!! a new reader...thank you for your compliment...i really do appreciate it and i hope you keep coming back for more!



*tiredsoul* - ooh!! i got a thud! i got a thud!! *does the dance of joy* - thanks for dropping by celia...your compliments always mean lots to me...so...when are you finishing kali and starting another fic huh??!!

- i can't wait!!



*tanniyn* - ooh ooh!! i got another thud! *does another dance of joy*...hi sweetie - i'm glad you can stop by again...and of course i remember, what a silly question...i never forget my readers - i can understand the anxiety of first postings (trust me, took me 3 hours to hit the post button), but everyone is incredibly encouraging on this board, and you really meet kindred spirits. i definitely look forward to reading what you're willing to share...no worries...



*ExtraFlameyWT* - sorry, no million dollars...i did as you asked for the poem though...glad you like it...hee hee...so how was bball??



*The Pineapple Head* - i thank you for understanding my verses...i'm so glad to find kindred spirits when it comes to writing...bravo to you too, loved your latest!



*SJ* - again, thank you for the compliment and your continuous support...



i'm sincerely moved by all your compliments and support...and that's why i keep coming back and posting. hope you all had a great holiday season, and looking forward to the new year. i've been in a writing mood so hopefully i'll have something to post again soon (maybe tonight?) - have a great monday everyone!!



~steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

[The Pineapple Head]

Steph - I'll have you know that this pineapple is aging just fine missy.....thank you very much. Considering the twisted branches of my family tree, I have heart disease, cancer, high blood pressure and senility to look forward to....where's the bad?



Believe me, it goes both ways my dear, it goes both ways. You have done wonders for my writing, so I suppose I should be thanking you for the motivation and the inspiration.



Diana

Everyone in the house had heard that I was the "sex consultant" . I think they imagined that meant I stood over Gina and Jennifer with a riding crop, snapping, "Deeper , Harder, A Little to the Left!"
Susie Bright on the premiere of BOUND

[ExtraFlameyWT]

nope...won't miss another two poems, i promise



as for the million dollars...why not? it would be very helpful for my education....



and basketball was fine, thankyouverymuch.



a poem tonight? PLEEEEEEEEEASE?



love,

Aimlet

Watch out for ankle-biters.

[funkyasian]

happy new year!!!



i figure i'd ring in the new year with a new poem...hope you all said your goodbyes to the old, and ready to welcome in the new...



disclaimer: before willow and tara drift off to sleep...what do you think the sleepy exchange is like?



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Eternity’s too short you said

Lazily I smiled, throwing my arms around you

Pulling you close, breathing your scent

Sweet musk mingling our love

Eternity’s too short, you said again

Silently I agreed

Sighing softly

Our fingers intertwine naturally

Together we drift off

Dreaming of forever beyond eternity

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thanks for reading...and may this new year be happy and properous for you and your loved ones...stay safe and be well...



~steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

[ExtraFlameyWT]

happy new year! great poem...i LOVE it!



love you,



Aimlet

Watch out for ankle-biters.

[The Pineapple Head]

Steph - I think you're trying to show me up I'm just playing with you sweetie. The new one is really good and I look forward to what's to come.



Diana

Everyone in the house had heard that I was the "sex consultant" . I think they imagined that meant I stood over Gina and Jennifer with a riding crop, snapping, "Deeper , Harder, A Little to the Left!"
Susie Bright on the premiere of BOUND

[SJ]

Great words

[tiredsoul]

**scrambles into the thread**



"I'm late! I'm late! For a very ... wha ...? **looks around** where's my date?"



Loved the last one Steph, particularly this line

Quote:

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Dreaming of forever beyond eternity

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Very nice.



--celia

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The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.

Edited by: tiredsoul at: 1/14/03 9:59:30 pm

[ExtraFlameyWT]

*walks into deserted thread* anybody here? Steph, come on...we need another poem...I'VE even been writing...granted, not posting...but I've been writing.



Poem? Please?



Love,

Aimlet



p.s. That goes for you, too, Trish!

"Pope John Paul today confirmed his opposition to gay marriages, said they're unnatural. Gay marriage is unnatural. Then he put on a pointy hat, his dress, and returned to never having sex at all." -Bill Maher

[funkyasian]

has it really been that long? hmmm...well, just cause i haven't posted, doesn't mean i haven't been writing...so, maybe i'll post something and hope the kittens out there are willing to read...



disclaimer: first few minutes of seeing red...



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The path ahead uncertain

The road behind darkened

The light of us illuminates the present

Nevermind the future

Forget the past

For this moment

We are here

We are now

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Personal note - RL has been pretty good lately...*knock on wood* - hopefully the trend will continue. anyway, there's a few more i can probably post...but i'll use this one to test the waters...as always, thanks for checking in...and please don't throw rotten fruit if you dont' like it...



~steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

[SJ]

Great writing

[ExtraFlameyWT]

*comes bounding into thread* WOO HOO!!! Great great great GREAT poem, Steph. And did you say more? I think you said more...and in that case I must agree with you. More!!!



Love,

Aimlet

It's hard to be precise, though. Alternate universes don't stay put. Sending him to a specific place is like, like trying to hit a puppy by throwing a live bee at it. Which is a weird image and you should all just forget it. -Willow in Triangle

[barnabasvamp]

Hey there about time you gave up a new one!



Testing the water?? Hope you find it nice and warm, and share yet another.

Quote:

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Forget the past

For this moment

We are here

We are now

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*sigh* as it should be

BV

"When choosing between two evils, I always like to take the one I've never tried before"-Mae West

[funkyasian]

wow...people actually are still reading!! coolness...



SJ - thanks for reading...i'm glad you enjoy my writings...



ExtraFlameyWT - Aimlet!!! *hugs* so glad you liked it...and as for more, well, maybe i can come up with something? *runs off to to find more to post*



barnabasvamp - hey there BV - so nice to see you stop by...the waters? they're definitely warm and comfy...just like i expected it to be. i think i can definitely be persuaded to find another to post...thanks for reading...



well kittens, work's been kicking my ass royally for the last few weeks...and i'm...well, i'm beat... - but i'll see what another poem to post soon...thanks for stopping by!!



steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

[tiredsoul]

Hey Steph ... you lied .. there were 8 lines



This was great. I'm always impressed at how you can put so much into so little. And because I must always quote my favorite:

Quote:

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The path ahead uncertain

The road behind darkened

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That was powerful. Words to live by ...



More please



--celia

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The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.

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