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Re: Part 6 feedback

Postby eklipsej » Mon Nov 08, 2004 9:46 pm

I wanted to reply individually to all of your wonderful feedback, but work was hell and I'm exhausted (cripes and it's only Monday!) So the little energy I have is going into getting Part 7 fit for posting and...well...posted. And in the meantime, my all-encompassing reply to your feedback is:



Thank you :dance :dance :dance :dance :dance

I know you're all feeling a little :gnome but they'll talk soon :applause

And I'm glad you all like Jo :banana , I'd have to double check her dating status though so :pray

There's no pie in part 7, but :hmm I think there'll be some pie somewhere in there by part 10...

Now off I go to :kgeek before I feel like :crash



:bigwave





eklipsej
 


okay im half sleep so forgive me if i make no sense

Postby willohand » Mon Nov 08, 2004 10:20 pm

WOOHOO im :sleepy but awke enough to say:sleepy this is a good update.my dear your update is so :cool .:yawn okay really trying to stay awake but now that i have my update i

think ill just :wave you a good:yawn :sleepy oh my i-i think

im going to sleep god to nig:thud .

willohand
 


Re: At last!

Postby The Rose24 » Mon Nov 08, 2004 10:51 pm

At last, they meet again! :blush :shy Sorry, feeling a little silly today.



This time they better get the 411! :applause

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Falling

Postby wimpy0729 » Tue Nov 09, 2004 12:11 am

Ooh, I love all the falling. One falls and then the other one falls and they're both falling and tangling and all that other good stuff.



More good stuff soon please!



Wimpy



"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara

wimpy0729
 


Run-Ins

Postby behindhereyes » Tue Nov 09, 2004 9:25 am

Woo Hoo... physical contact, even by accident :wink . I love how the you've created the circumstances for their paths to cross. Next up...conversation ??



behindhereyes

Kim

"To the world, you may be one person; but to one person, you may be the world"

Edited by: behindhereyes at: 11/9/04 8:26 am
behindhereyes
 


Re: Run-Ins

Postby ceridwenfaylinn » Tue Nov 09, 2004 3:29 pm

Hey, I just read this story, all of it and i think its great!!!:clap



I cant wait to see what happens next.



Please, update soon :wave

ceridwenfaylinn
 


Re: Run-Ins

Postby shadowygirl » Wed Nov 10, 2004 3:42 am

Oh come on you can't just stop the update there that is horrible ! MEAN MEAN MEAN !!! hehe but the fic isn't horrible I actually love it to pieces great job more SOON right ? RIGHT ?!



Luv April M

shadowygirl
 


Re: Run-Ins

Postby mollyig » Wed Nov 10, 2004 10:11 am

I like the premise of this story. Two people meeting in an airport and instantly forming a connection. Airports are normally all hustle and bustle, with people intent on their own destinations, plans etc.; it's nice to think that such a deep, lasting connection can be forged in a situation like this.


You stay the course, you hold the line, you keep it all together.

You're the one true thing I know I can believe in
- Sarah McLachlan

mollyig
 


Part 8

Postby eklipsej » Wed Nov 10, 2004 10:09 pm

Same disclaimer…no pie yet MissKitty, but I promise there will be soon…



Part 8



Willow was staring. She knew it, but she couldn’t stop, nor did she really want to. Her fears that the blonde’s presence was a dream or an illusion were assuaged by the fact that the girl was laying on top of her. She could feel the other girl’s chest moving against her own as she breathed in and out. Oh my. And she could feel the weight of the other girl pressing down on her lower body. Oh my indeed. And she could feel the other girl’s skin on her fingers. Skin! Oh that’s definitely skin! Willow’s breath hitched when she realized that the blonde’s shirt had ridden up when Willow reached out to break her fall her hands had caught her just under the hem of her shirt. Yep, definitely skin…kinda nice.



Tara knew she should get up, but her body refused to cooperate. She could feel the girl beneath her breathing, and she could feel fingers grazing the skin at her waist. Oh fingers… And she could feel the other girls’ legs tangled up in her own, pressing into interesting places. And something else in interesting places too. Tara realized. She shifted a little to get her bearings, but the fingers at her waist tightening ever so briefly caused her to pause. The redhead’s breath caught, she had just realized where her hands were. Tara could feel her tense up, so she smiled a little before speaking.



“H-hey.”



“Hi.”



“A-are you okay?” Tara asked.



“What?” Willow strained to hear the girl above her. When did the music suddenly get so loud? Her breath hitched again and her heart started racing once more as she felt the blond press into her further.



“A-are y-you okay?” Tara had moved closer to allow the redhead to hear her better, not knowing the effect she was having on the other girl.



Willow nodded. She felt tickling on her nose and reached up to tuck a strand of hair back behind the other girl’s ear.



“Are you?” She asked as she let her hand fall back to the blond’s waistline.



Tara nodded. “I-I’m sorry. I sh-should get up. I m-must be t-too heavy. I’m p-probably c-crushing you.” She was surprised to feel the hands near her hips tighten as she shifted to stand.



“Wait.” Willow again tightened her grip on the other girl briefly. “Not too heavy.” She smiled. “Besides, you think it’s safe to get up yet?”



Willow could feel the blond’s laugh reverberate through her body, and she fought to the urge to moan at the reaction her own body was having.



“I, um, I think the c-coast is clear?”



Willow could feel her own smile widening, and she gave the blond another squeeze before nodding that she was ready to stand. She sat up as the girl above her rose to her knees. She gasped when she felt the blond press into her again. She was essentially straddling Willow’s lap, and whether she knew it or not, the motion had given Willow an interesting view.



By the time Willow was done mentally chastising herself for thinking it, the blond had already shifted back and was resting her weight on her own calves.



“D-don’t want to l-lose that.” Tara said, handing the redhead’s bag to her. She knew that reaching for the bag behind the other girl would bring their bodies closer together again, but hey, give her a reason right Jo?



“Thanks.” Willow took her bag and slung it over her head and across her body, securing it firmly in place. She reached out for the hand being offered by the blond, who was now standing above her once more. As she rose to her feet she felt a sharp pain in her right ankle. She would have fallen again had the blond not reacted so quickly.



Tara saw the redhead wince in pain. She tightened her grip on the hand in her own and wrapped her free arm around the other girl’s waist.



“I guess I’m not as okay as I thought.” The redhead shrugged sheepishly.



Tara looked around and saw a first aid tent nearby. She tightened her grip on the redhead and draped the other girls’ arm over her shoulder.



“L-let’s get that looked at.” She said, motioning with her head in the direction of the first aid tent.



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After only a minor struggle, Willow and Tara found themselves at the entrance of the first-aid tent. They checked in with a volunteer and were told they would have to wait a few minutes before someone could look at Willow’s ankle. As they made their way to an examination station, Tara felt something tickling her hip.



“I-I think you’re, um, you’re v-vibrating?” She told the redhead.



It took Willow a moment to realize that the blond was referring to the cell phone in her left pocket. Her attention had been focused on the arm around her waist and the hand holding her own firmly. Willow tried to reach into her pocket with her free hand, but found the maneuver difficult, as she was forced to contort her right arm to dig into her left pocket.



“Here, l-let me.” Tara offered, seeing the redhead struggling to get her phone. She let go of the hand on her shoulder. “D-Don’t let go, okay?”



Not a chance… Willow thought as she nodded her head in agreement.



Tara reached into the redhead’s pocket with her now free hand. She bit her lip at the awkwardness of the situation, the phone had fallen deep into the other girl’s cargo pants and... Just try not to cop a feel accidentally Tara.



Willow felt the blonde’s hand go into her pocket. She tried not to blush when she realized that the other girl would have to dig around a bit before she could get a hold on the cell phone. Hands! Hands in new places!



Finally Tara managed to pull the cell phone out. She held it out for the redhead, who took it in her free hand. Tara again held onto the arm resting on her shoulder, just to be sure… as the redhead talked on the phone.



“Hey…Yeah, no, I did go…No, I’m in the first-aid tent…What? No, I just tripped…it’s okay, someone’s helping me…No, I’m okay… Yes, really, just enjoy the show…Yes I can hear her from in here… I’ll come find you when I’m done…It’s probably just sprained, I just want to be sure…Don’t worry, I’m in good hands…Okay, bye.”



Willow returned the phone into her other pocket and returned her attention to the girl holding her.



“Sorry, my friends got a little worried. They said I was taking longer than usual to go to the bathroom. Not that it takes me a long time in general; usually I’m very quick. I try to multi-task you know? It’s just I was taking a long time, and you didn’t need to know that, and did I say thanks again?”



Tara was already half-smiling from the side of the telephone conversation she had overheard. Yes, I’d say you’re definitely in good hands. But hearing the redhead babbling made her smile fully. There it is again, that babbling. If I wasn’t sure before, I certainly am now. It’s definitely her.



Edited by: eklipsej at: 12/1/04 6:30 pm
eklipsej
 


Re: Run-Ins Part 7 feedback

Postby eklipsej » Wed Nov 10, 2004 10:55 pm

Willohand – Thank you, and thanks for staying up to read and leave feedback, hope you slept well.



The Rose24 – Yep they meet again, and don’t worry I like silly. As for the 411, I’m still :hmm



Wimpy0729 – LOL…Glad you liked the falling…and the other good stuff…And yes there will be more good stuff soon.



behindhereyes – Thanks…next up, a little conversation and maybe some more physical contact. :glasses



ceridwenfaylinn – Thanks…I’m updating VERYsoon



shadowygirl – You posted after I left the chat didn’t you April? Hehe, I know it’s mean, but I know other writers have left their stuff hanging at worse points (case in point: neverland…EasierSaid is driving me :rage !) But thanks, and yes there will be more VERY VERY SOON.



mollyig – I’m glad you like it…I’ve spent a lot of time in airports and over the years I’ve met a lot of random people, and seen a lot of random people I would have liked to have met and I’ve always wondered…



OK folks, part 8 WILL be up tonight!

:bigwave

eklipsej
 


Re: Part 8

Postby The Rose24 » Wed Nov 10, 2004 11:24 pm

Willow's babble is definitely a dead give away. They always seem to fall into each other's arms don't they?



The scenario is really reminiscent of the sewer tunnel scene in Tabula Rasa, I love it. Keep it up! :applause

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Pt. 8

Postby wimpy0729 » Wed Nov 10, 2004 11:37 pm

Oh boy! We have more touching of the nearly intimate variety, with the bodies pressing in places and phones deep in pockets. Good thing Tara's so 'handy'.



Can't wait to see what happens next.



Wimpy





"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara

wimpy0729
 


Re: Pt. 8

Postby eklipsej » Wed Nov 10, 2004 11:51 pm

Quote:
Good thing Tara's so 'handy'




I love it I love it I love it! :p



Thanks Wimpy!

eklipsej
 


Re: Pt. 8

Postby Tempest Duer » Thu Nov 11, 2004 12:50 am

This is getting so cute. I'm sorry I haven't been posting feedback... I haven't read the update thread in a while.

It's insulting to the whole gender[sic] of rap.



~Eminem

Tempest Duer
 


Re: Part 8

Postby WickedReds » Thu Nov 11, 2004 1:15 am

I missed an update... part 7 was cute with willow catching here hehe..

Part8...hey look a play on Hush... nice

great update... now they must know eachothers names... hehehe..



-reds:willow



Mein Banane tanzt für Schmutz :banana

Smutbunny Anthem: *sung to tune from Goldfinger* Smutbunnies...they'e the bunnies, the bunnies that love the smut...and Willow's butt. They surf for smut fiction...always lookin' for the next naked sweaty fix...of Tara's tits.- Written By Cameron(tarawhipped) For Us Smut Bunnies

WickedReds
 


Re: Part 8

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Thu Nov 11, 2004 2:42 am

:bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce

yay for updated! Im happy! And how cute was it!! man! love it! loves ya! wooty!

:pride

-rose

I didnt know what being happy was till i found you, i didnt know what love meant till i loved you.

Spikeizmine87
 


Re: Part 8

Postby mollyig » Thu Nov 11, 2004 4:46 am

Lovely how, despite all the time that has passed since she last saw Tara, Willow instinctively trusts her, telling her friends "Don’t worry, I’m in good hands".


You stay the course, you hold the line, you keep it all together.

You're the one true thing I know I can believe in
- Sarah McLachlan

mollyig
 


Re: Run-ins

Postby KiSsWiLLoW4Me » Thu Nov 11, 2004 6:36 am

well that left me speechless.. :shock with the fake tara at the opening-which shocked me at first but i kinda figured it out almost in the end (coz i know tara wouldn't laugh at her dear willow, not in a willow's-insane way:luv2 ), tara and willow at the same concert which they both thought that the odds of meeting again was slim to none, and tara on top of willow which is so naughty:punish !!*jaw dropping + drooling* love the babbles, willow and tara thoughts and just about everything!! ok, here i am telling you earlier that i was speechless but i go on blah blah blah..:rage hehehe



NICE WORK!!:bow

:clap

Edited by: Warduke at: 11/11/04 9:17 am
KiSsWiLLoW4Me
 


Re: Run-ins

Postby ceridwenfaylinn » Thu Nov 11, 2004 11:41 am

:shock Your're such a tease!



But I enjoyed it inmensely :p



Great update!! :wave

ceridwenfaylinn
 


Re: Run-ins

Postby Arwen276 » Thu Nov 11, 2004 1:21 pm

I love it!!!



interesting developments ! I like where it's going, and Can't wait for more!





~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


Re: Run-ins

Postby MissKittys Ball O Yarn » Thu Nov 11, 2004 6:47 pm

Wow that was really good! I read it first thing this morning and I had wanted to leave feedback then....but nothing good can come from being late for work.



I loved the whole scene with them being smooshed on the ground together and then when Willow asks if its safe to get up yet, that had me on the floor :rofl also, It was great when Tara had to dig around in Willow's conveniently deep pockets. I was hoping she'd grab a little something more than a cell phone though. :eyebrow



There wasn't pie this time...but I think I read something about you promising it soon?... Just remember... Pie makes all things better... unless you drop it on your new suede jacket...then it pretty much sucks.... yay for pie! :peace



xoxo

Emms

In the future there will be a revolutionary technology that will enable us to turn into fishes at will.



--- Me

MissKittys Ball O Yarn
 


Re: Run-ins

Postby behindhereyes » Thu Nov 11, 2004 8:19 pm

Tara falling and landing on top of Willow...now that's the stuff dreams are made of... or is that just me :blush



Miss Kitty...ooh meow :eyebrow



behindhereyes

Kim

"To the world, you may be one person; but to one person, you may be the world"

behindhereyes
 


Part 9

Postby eklipsej » Thu Nov 11, 2004 10:00 pm

Okay, I went to edit 1 typo and Part 9 disappeared so hopefully this works:



Part 9



After Willow returned her phone to her pocket, the two girls resumed their way to the exam bench pointed out by the first aid volunteer. Tara helped the redhead climb onto the bench and remove her bag. When she was sure the redhead was settled, Tara looked around, wondering briefly what to do with herself.



“W-will you be okay here?”



Willow gulped. Is she leaving? No, she’s leaving, she can’t leave yet!



“Yeah, um did you need to go?” She asked quietly.



Tara nodded and reached up to brush back some hair that had fallen onto the redhead’s face when she removed her bag.



“J-Just for a little while. I’m here with someone. I sh-should let her know where I am.”



Willow gave the blond a tight smile and nod of the head. As the blond left the tent, Willow could not help but be both happy at the affectionate gesture from the blond and deflated at the thought that she was here with someone. It’s a date, she’s here on a date dammit, but no wait, it’s a her so maybe it’s not a date! Maybe it’s just a friend someone and not a something more someone. No wait, that would be bad too, if it’s a her someone friend, because then maybe she doesn’t like girls that way and that would be bad. Very very bad…



When Tara entered she saw the redhead scowling. She rushed over and put a hand on the other girl’s shoulder. “W-what’s wrong? A-are you in very much pain?”



The sound of the blonde’s voice coaxed Willow out of her internal panic babble. She looked into concerned blue eyes and felt all her nervousness drift away.



“I’m okay, just, you know, busy in here.” She said, tapping her forehead and giving the blonde a reassuring smile. “Did you find your friend?” Please be just a friend, please be just a friend. Willow begged silently, hiding her one hand by her leg and crossing her fingers.



“I called her.” Tara nodded. “We’re l-like sisters so, um, she worries?”



Like sisters! Yes! Willow did a mental victory fist pump before speaking. “She’s worried? Is she mad? You’ve probably been gone a while! Oh God, I’m making you miss Sheryl Crow and abandon your friend! She probably thinks I’m all latchy-helpless girl making you miss the concert.”



Tara couldn’t help but smile. The redhead’s face was like an open book. She saw how relieved the girl was when Tara said the words ‘we’re like sisters,’ and how quickly her expression had changed when she started to panic again. She gave a small wave of her hand, “Nah, she s-said, ‘Roomie, as long as you’re abandoning me for a hot damsel in distress, it’s all good.’”



Tara’s eyes grew large when she realized what she had said, and the hand that had been dismissing the redhead’s worries was now firmly clamped over her mouth. She watched the redhead carefully for any adverse reaction.



Willow however did not notice. She was too busy doing a little jig in her head. Hot damsel…she called me a hot damsel…Yay me! Well, okay her roommate called me a hot damsel, oh hey, Yay roommate! But still, her roommate wouldn’t call me a hot damsel if she hadn’t said something right? So Yay me again!



“So, which one of you lovely ladies is my next patient?” The two girls turned to focus on the sound of a male voice nearby.



A tall man in scrubs was standing next to them with a clipboard in his hands. He looked back and forth between the blond and the redhead, neither of whom were responding to his question, so he checked the name on the paper.



“Willow?”



Hearing her name caused Willow to come out of the haze she was in, and she raised her hand. The man smiled and placed the clipboard on the bench next to Willow, pulling a stool up for him to sit on as Tara moved over to one end of the bench.



“Hi Willow. My name’s Tom. I’m a nurse. It says here you hurt your ankle?” He smiled brightly at the redhead. “Can I look?” He gestured to her foot.



Willow nodded. The nurse, Tom, gently pulled the redhead’s foot onto his lap and removed her shoe. The motion caused a sharp pain to fly up the girl’s leg and she reached out to grip the bench, but instead found soft hands take her own and hold on firmly.



Tara was not watching the nurse, Tom, remove the redhead’s shoe. No, she was watching the redhead’s face for any sign that she might be in pain, so she saw when the other girl’s jaw tightened, and she felt more than saw Willow reach her hand out for something to grip. Instinctively, Tara reached out and took hold of the searching hand, holding it firmly with her right hand and placing her left hand over it.



Willow looked up when she felt the blonde take her hand. She gave the other girl a grateful smile just as she felt another burst of pain. The nurse, Tom, had been moving the redhead’s foot around, trying to gauge the extent of her injury.



“Well, Willow, aside from some mild swelling, I’d say your foot is perfect.” He winked and gave the redhead another bright smile. “It’s just sprained a little. We’ll put a cold pack on it, wrap it up, I’ll find you a crutch, then you and your girlfriend here can get back to the show.”



Both girls were too busy blushing and looking everywhere but at each other to notice that the nurse, Tom, was waggling his eyebrows at them. They were both very aware that they were still holding hands, but both girls thought it would be more awkward if they let go suddenly.



Willow felt a hand massaging her ankle, and she focused her attention back onto the nurse, Tom. “Thanks.”



“No problem, I’ll be right back.” He stood and winked at Willow again before resting her foot on the stool.



A few awkwardly silent minutes of handholding later, the nurse, Tom, returned with a cold pack and a bandage. He shifted Willow’s foot onto his lap once more as he sat back down.



“Sorry, we’re all out of crutches. I guess your girlfriend here will just have to hold on to you real tight when you get back out there huh?”



This time, both girls did not miss his leering grin and waggling eyebrows.



“C-can you just f-finish up so we can go?” Tara said firmly.



The tightened grip on her hand made Willow glad she was not on the receiving end of the blonde’s glare. Willow squeezed the palm in her own and gave the blonde a weak smile as the nurse, Tom, dropped his eyes and began wrapping Willow’s ankle. When he finished, he stood and handed Willow his clipboard to fill out a few forms. He gave the girls instructions on caring for the ankle as Willow made quick work of the forms. Taking the clipboard from the redhead, he mumbled a quick goodbye before rushing to his next patient.



Willow was about to try to stand, with the blonde’s support, when she saw Faith rush into the tent. She prepared to insist that she was fine and there was no need for Faith to come find her, but the look on the brunette’s face told her something was definitely wrong.



Tara felt Willow tense, and followed Willow’s gaze to a frantic-looking girl with long dark hair. Not knowing exactly the reason for the redhead’s reaction, she moved closer and placed her palm on the redhead’s back.



Though she was worried now, Willow couldn’t help but smile at the feel of the blonde’s hand on her lower back.



Faith spotted Willow, having pushed past a dazed volunteer insisting she had to wait in line.



“Red, we have to go, now.” Faith said rushing up to Willow and putting a hand on her arm.



Oh God, Tara thought, She looks really upset. No…please don’t let her be…



Resting her hand on top of Faith’s, Willow frowned.



“What is it, sweetheart? What’s the matter?”



Sweetheart…oh God, it’s her girlfriend, it must be. Tara could feel her hopes being quickly crushed.



“It’s…It’s Joyce, something happened.”



“It’s okay Faith, just take a deep breath and tell me what’s going on.”



“Joyce…she’s, she’s in the hospital. Giles called, B thought it was you!”



“Where are they now Faith?”



“Xander took B and the squirt in the jeep. I promised we’d be no more than 15 minutes behind them.” The brunette’s voice was now about to crack.



Tara watched as the redhead brushed the hair away from Faith’s face and tried to calm the girl down.



“Oh God Red, B says it’s pretty bad. She’s…B’s…Buffy’s freakin’ out Will. I…We have to go now.”



“Okay, Faith, okay. We’re going now.” Willow said, moving to stand.



“Wait.” Tara interrupted, “I’m going with you.”



Though she was surprised by her own boldness, she refused to shrink at the two pairs of eyes now staring at her.



“What?” Willow and Faith asked simultaneously.



“Neither one of you is in any condition to drive. You’re hurt.” She pointed to Willow’s bandaged ankle. “And you,” she pointed to Faith, “are p-panicking.” Seeing that both girls were not going to argue, she reached into her pocket. “Just l-let me call my roommate okay?”



Willow could only nod, and Faith was too torn between telling this girl off and trying not to hyperventilate to say much of anything at all. As the blonde dialed her phone, Willow had a sudden thought.



“Wait, we can’t let you leave your friend here.”



Tara smiled at the redhead’s concern. “She’s coming with us.”



“But, but your car!”



“It’s okay,” she said, as she waited for Jo to pick up. “We took a b-bus from Sunnydale.” She held her hand up when she heard her friend’s voice. “Hey, it’s me. Grab our stuff and meet me in the parking lot…No, I’m okay…I’ll tell you later okay, just do it…Oh yeah, hold on…here talk to someone.”



Tara handed Faith her cell phone and instructed Faith to give Jo directions. As Faith told Jo what their car looked like and where to find it, Tara reached down for the redhead’s shoe and placed it in Willow’s bag.



She felt a hand on her arm and when she looked up from the bag she found herself looking into shining green eyes.



“I keep having to say this to you, thanks.” Willow said, her voice thick.



Tara reached up and wiped a tear that was making its way down the redhead’s cheek. “Y-you’re welcome.”



“Okay,” Faith interrupted, returning Tara’s phone. “She knows where to go.”



“Okay…now, car keys?” Tara said, holding out her palm as she pocketed her cell phone. Willow took out a set of keys on a Snoopy chain and placed it the blonde’s waiting hand.



“Here.” Tara passed Willow’s bag to Faith before moving to Willow’s side. Once again she wrapped one arm around the redhead’s waist and draped the redhead’s arm over her shoulder, helping the redhead to stand from the bench and take a few tentative steps with her support.



Reassured that Willow would be able to make it to her car, she gave Faith a quick smile. “Don’t worry okay? We’ll get there as quickly as possible.” She said, giving Willow’s wrist and waist brief squeeze.



Looking at Faith, she nodded towards the tent door. “Lead the way.”



Edited by: eklipsej at: 12/1/04 6:33 pm
eklipsej
 


Re: Part 8 feedback

Postby eklipsej » Thu Nov 11, 2004 10:27 pm

The Rose24 – Lol, wouldn’t you want to fall into Willow’s arms? Or Tara’s arms? I didn’t think about the similarity to Tabula Rasa, I try not to think about that episode too much because it makes me want to cry, but I see what you mean…Thanks!



wimpy0729 – Yes, me likes the nearly intimate touching…and I repeat,
Quote:
Good thing Tara’s so handy.
I love it I love it I love it!



Tempest Duer – Thanks…and hey look you’re leaving feedback now, so it’s all good!



WickedReds – You’re all caught up now right? Yup, although The Rose24 pointed out the Tabula Rasa thing, I was actually going for Hush in this one. I’m so happy you caught that :dance and yes because you said so there will be name discovering in the next update



spikeizmine87 – love the bouncy dude, glad you’re lovin’ it…and can I say thanks again for the neck thing?



kisswillow4me – sorry kiddo, having a hard time with the toggled cases…glad you liked it and you’re drooling and (not so) speechless



ceridwenfaylinn
Quote:
You’re such a tease!
I try…Thanks!



Arwen276 – thanks…more soon!



MissKittys Ball O Yarn – Thanks…and no goodness if you’re late, that’s why I get up a little earlier than usual to check the board in the morning, :) Yes there will be pie soon…I’m working on it I promise!



behindhereyes – No it’s not just you…It’s me too, that’s why I wrote it, though I wouldn’t mind being in either girl’s shoes…he he, but those are other dreams…



Thanks again all for reading and fb’ing. I’m glad you liked the falling and the laying on top of each other and the hands in fun places. More soon…I’ve already got Part 9 up and running and boy is it’s so going it might turn into part 10 too…



eklipsej
 


awww

Postby VixenyTarasHot » Thu Nov 11, 2004 11:30 pm

This is SUCH a good story dude. Seriously, I was all confused with the airport "wrong girls" thing and then I was all "ooooh" and then they left... and I was like *sigh* well they'll meet again.. and THEN the concert with the seeing each other again and the cuteness of Tara taking care of poor Willow :D



So I know Joyce ends up being not-so-ok in the show.. but I hope everything turns out ok here.. I don't like badness... lol So take care of her eh? Buffy too :D And Willow! haha



Can't wait to read moooooore!

Ashleigh

VixenyTarasHot
 


Re: Part 9

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Thu Nov 11, 2004 11:39 pm

:bounce :bounce

Wonderfull update! I love bold Tara, taking care of Willow! And the way Willow freaks out and babbles! Too cute! Hope you update soon! :)

:pride

-rose

I didnt know what being happy was till i found you, i didnt know what love meant till i loved you.

Spikeizmine87
 


Re: Part 9

Postby WickedReds » Thu Nov 11, 2004 11:40 pm

Yay update... ehehhehe

So let me guess Faith and Buffy are together.. and hey Tara know Willow's name but Wills dosen't know her's... next update a suppose.. hehe



-reds:willow



Mein Banane tanzt für Schmutz :banana



Smutbunny Anthem: *sung to tune from Goldfinger* Smutbunnies...they'e the bunnies, the bunnies that love the smut...and Willow's butt. They surf for smut fiction...always lookin' for the next naked sweaty fix...of Tara's tits.- Written By Cameron(tarawhipped) For Us Smut Bunnies

WickedReds
 


More owies

Postby wimpy0729 » Fri Nov 12, 2004 12:22 am

Oh no! First Willow and now Joyce! And the handiness of Tara just keeps on growing!



Gotta love her taking charge of the situation. That is earning big points with both girls. I'm finding that very hot and very sweet. And who needs a crutch when you have a hot, strong blonde to hold onto?



More soon please!



Wimpy



"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara





wimpy0729
 


Re: More owies

Postby Arwen276 » Fri Nov 12, 2004 3:58 am





hmmm I really liked it!



The hilarious part was when you kept repeating : the nurse, Tom, I don't know if it was done on purpose or just slipped, but the effect was very comical! (I'm not insulting male nurses here... so please don't throw smelly tunas at me!!)



I loved protective Tara, and I'm glad, we got rid of potential angst by clearing the air about Jo and Tara...something that a fellow fanfic writer of yours, who shall remain nameless keeps ignoring...thus providing us with Chapter 29 of Angstness!!

But of course you couldn't go angst free, cos that's like writer-suicide on the kittenboard right?? (WHERE ON EARTH COULD KITTENS THINK THAT?) so there's the mini-drama Willow/Faith , and there's the Joyce situation...

Hope everything'll be okay!



CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!





~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


Re: More owies

Postby mollyig » Fri Nov 12, 2004 4:39 am

I'd say Tara is normally somewhat reserved, so I'm sure she's surprising herself with her boldness. Of course I'm glad she offered to drive Faith and Willow, because once she spends some time with them she'll realise that Willow is not interested in Faith romantically.



Thanks for the update.


You stay the course, you hold the line, you keep it all together.

You're the one true thing I know I can believe in
- Sarah McLachlan

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