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Feedback! Yay!

Postby missspangles » Tue Jun 24, 2003 8:17 pm

Hey, thanks so much everyone who's taken the time to let me know they're enjoying this and that they want more. It's really very much appreciated. So I will comment now and update later on today. Thanks everyoone. And now for the individual replies.

the vamp nurd thanks so much for your comments. Yeah, buffy can be a little slow sometimes..so that's the buffy I love - slow but really very sweet. Thanks for reading :)

AmberAlysonlover Yes, me too! :( Tara's dad really is kind of evil, isn't he? Thanks for your feedback, glad you're liking this :)

Stroke of Luck You've been great about providing feedback - thank you. Yes, Buffy hasn't twigged yet about Faith..but I think she'll gradually figure out the magic :)

Kiwigrrrl Now I've got that song in my head! Oh no!! :) But seriously, I'm glad you are enjoying this.I hope you'll keep on liking it..and thanks so much for taking the time to post.

Arwen276 Yes, you raise an interesting point. Well, as far as a better life is concerned, Willow's hoping for a better life financially because she's had a really tough life up to this point and America is very much viewed as the land of opportunity. Only Tara's really thought a lot about the homosexuality thing at this point (but Willow's definitely thinking and liking soon!) and to be honest, yes, there would still be a lot of prejudice..but a small fraction less than in the 'old country'. But actually, this hasn't really occured to either girl yet.. :) Thanks for your comments and for reading, i hope i can keep you reading :)

wiccanwiggle thanks for commenting, you're really very nice :) I'll see if we can find out what's going on with Riley very soon :) (nasty piece of work, he is!)

AmberAlysonlover glad you've found the inspiration for such an interesting idea - i will have to hunt down your story. And thanks so much for your comments, much appreciated! :)

Shadow You've got me blushing now! :) Seriously, thanks for such nice feedback. I'm thrilled you like it so much :)

When you were mine Hmmm. Well, I do find it very hard to resist putting Faith and Buffy together, they do seem to be kind of drawn together..if only Buffy would work it out! lol! :) Thanks for reading and posting comments! :)

Grimlock72 Oh, you've asked the interesting question. I want to explore that more over the next couple of chapters. Without spoiling you, I guess it's not a major plot point or anything, but Buffy, Willow and Faith know each other because they were all wards of the state back in England..so opportunities for a good life are pretty limited back there. All three girls see America as something of a golden land and it was Willow who really pushed the idea of going there (unfortunately on the Titanic though!). But I want to explore this more, so hopefully all questions will be answered :)

Oh yes, about Donnie, yeah, he's weak but not evil here. Basically Mr Maclay wants to get rid of both his children and he sees the match with Cordelia (or some other rich girl) as a means of staying well-connected and getting rid of the drain of his children. He'll definitely profit more from Tara's marriage (well, if there was one! :) lol!) Thanks for all your feedback though, I'm really pleased you're liking it and you've given me some great inspiration for things i need to cover soon :)

screemingguitar well, not really special skills in the way that Leo was an artist but she is extremely clever and enterprising, sweet, smart and cute. Tara's definitely falling for Willow big-time. SHe can see that she's something pretty special :) Oh, and very good point about Alexander, I think he might come in useful :)

Thanks for commenting and for reading :)

fairydust glad you're still enjoying :) Yes, Tara' s dad is such a villain! but in my world, he'll get what he deserves :) Glad you're enjoying! :)

bluewillowwitch Nah, Tara and Willow are far too sweet to have anything truly bad happen to them...i have a strong feeling they're going to be okay :) Thanks for your feedback, much appreciated :)

sam7777 Lol! Well, if you're evil, then I am too :) THanks for reading! :)

blindingwiccan Oh you've got me blushing again now :) Thanks for that, I hope I can continue to keep you enjoying it... :)





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missspangles
 


Re: Feedback! Yay!

Postby mocha fiend 22 » Tue Jun 24, 2003 8:53 pm

hehe kissing is good and her dad grrr i dont like him nope hes mean and grrr.... great update cant wait for the next part :applause

I love you now and forever and a week

mocha fiend 22
 


Love on the Seas - Chapter ten

Postby missspangles » Tue Jun 24, 2003 9:05 pm

Hey everyone, thanks for reading. Here's more - hope you like it..And I'm sorry to say that this is the less-happy part of my story..but things get better in the next chapter, I promise.



Love on the Seas - Chapter ten

There was no other way to describe it. Tara was quite simply petrified. She was shaking and she knew that she was in for a whole world of trouble.

"W-W-W-W Willow" she managed to get out, stuttering more than Willow had ever heard before. "You have to hide....c-c-can you..." she trailed off, desperately looking for a place Willow could hide.



"Tara" said Willow softly, "I'm not sure that's such a good idea...Your dad..he sounds like he might..." she could barely bring herself to say the words. "It sounds like he might hurt you.."



"Y-Yes" agreed Tara, "but it will be even worse if he finds you in here.." she looked pleadingly at Willow.

"Please Willow! I'm begging you. Hide!"



Willow slowly got up off the bed.. "Tara, I'll do anything you say but I'm not sure ..."



"Over there" murmered Tara, leading Willow to the large walk in wardrobe. "And please Willow, if you have any feelings for me at all, stay there until I tell you to come out..."



Willow climbed in, her heart still in her mouth, desperately scared for Tara and fearful that she wouldn't be able to help the other girl if things got rough.Tara shut the door, closing off Willow's view of the room and muffling its sounds.



If I hear anything..Willow resolved...if he tries to hurt Tara...then I'm going to hurt him...she trailed off, desperately anxious.



"C-C-Coming" said Tara loudly as she put on a dressing gown and moved to open the door. Her hands were shaking so badly that it took her several attempts.



Finally she pulled open the door to reveal the looming shape of her father.



He pushed past Tara and shut the door behind him. Tara braced herself, expecting the usual slap in the face. But her father didn't even move to hit her.



"Tara" he said evenly. "I had a visit from Riley Finn earlier. telling me that you'd been down-right inhospitable to him earlier..And this bothers me for two reasons.."



Tara met his gaze but didn't say anything. Mr. Maclay continued.



"It bothered me because I was trying to impress a wealthy lady friend...and Mr Finn cut into that time.."



He paused for a second and then continued. "And it bothered me because Mr Finn's family is one of the wealthiest one this ship..and I know that our family's survival depends on you marrying someone like that..Riley agrees that the match between a Finn and a Maclay would be the society event of the year."



Mr Maclay appraised his daughter's dishelved appearance for the first time since he'd entered the room. Her face was flushed and tear-stained.



"You know...I can't understand what a man like that would even see in someone like you..But my god Tara! I just spent three hours with that man..talking about how things could be fixed and apologising for your behavior and convincing him that you'd be a lot easier to control in future...and you know what?"



Mr Maclay puffed himself up proudly. "For some reason..he's seen something in you..that means he's prepared to give you another chance..of course, you're going to have to be extra nice to him..but perhaps you can get out this little mess you've managed to get yourself in..."



He collected himself for a second and continued. "Now Riley admits that he might have come on a little too strong for a shy southern girl like you..and just to show that there's no hard feelings, he's given me this.." Mr Maclay reached into his coat pocket.



Tara couldn't believe what she was hearing. She couldn't help herself. "W-W-When you say he might have 'come on too strong', are you t-t-t-talking about the bit w-w-when he called me a little bitch and tried to molest me?"



"Tara" said her father with quiet aggression. "Say that again and you'll experience more trouble than you've ever seen in your life.." He collected himself and continued. "Riley told me it was just a misunderstanding. And after your behavior, I have no idea why he'd want anything to do with you at all..but he's prepared to try again.."



Mr Maclay trailed off as he fished into his pocket and pulled out a necklace. "In fact" Mr Maclay continued, he brought me a box of fine cigars and a little peace offering for you...



He handed over the necklace to Tara. "I think you'll agree this is quite something...this here Tara is worth more than the cost of all three of our tickets on this ship, more money than most people would see in a lifetime...and it's yours courtesy of Riley Finn."



Tara flinched and went to hand it back to her father.."I don't w-w-w-want it.." she managed.



Her father glared at her. "Oh, you'll take it..and tomorrow morning you'll go and thank Riley Finn wholeheartedly for it."



He turned on his heel. "Because if you don't ..you have no idea of what I'm going to do to you.."



He opened the door and it slammed behind him, leaving a stunned Tara to collapse on the bed. She put her head in her hands and started to cry.



Hearing the loud bang of the door slamming, Willow assumed that the room was empty and slowly opened up the door.



"Tara?" she questioned the distraught girl on the bed. "What's happening?"



Tara collapsed into Willow's arms. "I just can't marry him..Willow..I won't!"



"It's okay" said Willow, pulling the other girl towards her. "I have an idea....we can work this out.."



Tara looked up at the other girl, "You know Willow" she said softly. "I believe you..and I'm so glad that I've found you.." she trailed off as her lips found the other girl's and they kissed, gently at first..



missspangles
 


Re: Love on the Seas - Chapter ten

Postby mocha fiend 22 » Tue Jun 24, 2003 9:28 pm

*growls* i hate that man so much... I hope those two can make this all work out...wait they always do so im all with the hope :applause cant wait for more...even tho u just updated :p

I love you now and forever and a week

mocha fiend 22
 


Re: Love on the Seas - Chapter ten

Postby When You Were Mine » Tue Jun 24, 2003 9:42 pm

Grr... I really don't like Tara's dad, he is just getting worse and worse! I can't wait to find out what Willow and Tara will do with the whole.. 'Tara must marry a rich man' thing..



Love

JFK

When You Were Mine
 


Re: Love on the Seas - Chapter ten

Postby Stroke of Luck » Tue Jun 24, 2003 11:08 pm

:rage :rage :rage argh this dam f...... guy or better guys.



Willow think and please help Tara...I hate to see that she is always the loser in that family. But i guess u will change that really soon dont you?



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



This is a duet, Amber! You need to sing!"- Tony

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: Chapter ten

Postby screeminguitar » Wed Jun 25, 2003 1:00 am

Arrrgh maties!!!!! Oh, where's the one-eyed Xander when you need him to pirate this ship????



Glad Willow wasn't found!! Me thinks she needs to give lots of comfort and reassurance to Tara. Like Tara deserves sooo much more love than what's been dealt her. Mainly, take it and don't think otherwise.



Willow has given her a taste of better, dare it be love???



**holding both hands cupped** "Moooore please!""



Sending you love this day-Marie

screeminguitar
 


Re: Chapter ten

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Wed Jun 25, 2003 4:02 am

awwwww poor old Tara :( I hope Willow takes good care of her ;)



More soon please ;)

AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Chapter ten

Postby Grimlock72 » Wed Jun 25, 2003 5:31 am



I was very impressed that Tara managed to tell her "dad" she didn't want that necklace. I'm about done waiting for that iceberg to take care Mr. MaClay though, I say we arrange a neat little accident before that.... can he swim ?? : -->>: Or give a him bottle of whiskey mixed with washing-powder, that should keep him busy on the toilet for several days :-)



I wonder what his response would be to the question if he is concerned with anything else but money.



I don't know what Riley sees in Tara either... sure she's pretty but she also has a will of her own. That's hardly something a man *cough* like Riley would want in a woman.



Now I seem to recall some fuss over an expensive item in the movie.. Willow better make sure she doesn't touch or get near that necklace or she'll be branded a 'thief'. She's a thief alright, she's stealing Tara from Riley :D



Grimmy

--
"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Grimlock72
 


Re: Chapter ten

Postby fairydust » Wed Jun 25, 2003 10:45 am

*bounces* moremoremoremore....:grin MORE PLEASE

I LOVE MY KARE-BEAR

fairydust
 


Re: Chapter Ten

Postby Arwen276 » Wed Jun 25, 2003 11:24 am

Hey!!!!

well of course i'll keep reading I'm just hung on it! you just can't imagine how much I enjoy AU, it's funner to write than cannon and you can concentrate on reality issues and such!! I'm definitely interested in finding out what Willow's plan might be! Keep it coming!!! :clap



~Arwen

Arwen276
 


Re: Chapter Ten

Postby Velaingie » Wed Jun 25, 2003 2:30 pm

Hello :bigwave



I've been reading your fic for a couple of days now and I just love it. It's really great fic

:clap :clap :clap :clap :clap :clap :clap :clap :clap . Tara's dad is just :rage and :smash . Poor Tara. Can't wait for the next great update :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce .

Bye

Velaingie

Velaingie
 


Re: Chapter Ten

Postby bluewillowwitch » Wed Jun 25, 2003 8:17 pm

:bigwave ,

Great updte! :applause :clap :bow Can't wait for more. :pray Glad to hear that you think :willow and :tara will meet a better fate. Can't wait to read more. Update soon I hope. :pray







bluewillowwitch :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

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Re: Chapter Ten

Postby the vamp nurd » Thu Jun 26, 2003 2:28 am

OK who wants to shove Mr MacLay and Riley onto the nearest iceberg!



just me then...:D

Sorry I missed church, I was busy becoming a lesbian and worshiping Satan



Bardlet no #27



the vamp nurd
 


Re: Chapter Ten

Postby Kiwigrrrl » Thu Jun 26, 2003 7:43 am

More please!!!



When is Tara's dad getting thrown overboard? I'm really looking forward to that...



I'm getting a little bit anxious about the fact that the ship is going to sink though, but I have complete faith that you will make everything alright.:D



Awesome chapter, looking forward to the next one...



- Skye:eatme :banana :eatme





"You cannot have any more Cheese! You have a Cheese problem!"

Kiwigrrrl
 


Love on the Seas - Chapter eleven

Postby missspangles » Fri Jun 27, 2003 2:17 am

Mocha fiend 22 - glad you're liking it. And here's a bit with no terrible characters, just some willow/tara sweetness. Hope you enjoy :) And thanks for your encouragement.

When you were mine Oh yes, i totally agree. But don't worry, all will be revealed over the next few chapters :) Thanks for your comments.

Stroke of luck Oh yes, Tara's luck is really improving now that she's met this terribly sweet red-headed girl :) Thanks for reading and posting :)

screeming guitar thanks for your feedback, yes, I wish Xander would reappear as a pirate too! :)

AmberAlysonlover more feedback, thank you! :) And it's all quite sweet in this chapter :)

Grimlock72 I like the way you think! Yes, poisoning does sound rather appealing. Oh yes, no doubt, Mr Maclay is a very money-hungry man. Sad in a way cause he's never understood that his daughter is worth so much more than that! So of course, nasty things will just have to happen to him! :) Thanks for posting, always appreciated!

fairydust well, you asked so nicely, so here you go! Thanks for feedback and hope you like it! :)

Arwen276 thanks for that, i'm glad you like it and encouragement is very appreciated. I'm sure Willow will reveal her plan shortly :) And I love AU too, it's heaps of fun to write :)

Velaingie oh, i'm glad you're liking it. Thanks so much letting me know. Hope you'll keep enjoying :)

bluewillowwitch Here you go! Hope you like it and thanks again for posting comments:)

the vamp nurd I think there's a line forming to push Riley and Mr Maclay overboard, very bad men! :( But thanks for reading, your comments are much appreciated!

kiwigrrrl thanks for that :) Here's a little more, hope you like it! :)





______________________________________________

So onto a little update. Well, this bit isn't terribly dramatic at all. Just a little bit of dialogue as the girls work out where they stand with each other. Hope you like it and more action in the next few chapters, I promise.



_______________________________________________

Love on the Seas

Chapter eleven



Tara allowed herself to get lost in the increasingly heated kiss she shared with Willow. Finally, with both girls breathing heavily, she pulled away and looked at the other girl.



"Oh Willow, what am I going to do? I just can't take this anymore..I can't do this.." she trailed off.



"Hey" said Willow softly taking her hand. "We can do this..together."



Tara managed a smile as Willow gently squeezed her hand.



"Willow" begun Tara. "There's something I have to ask you, and it's pretty serious.."



Willow met her gaze. "You can ask me anything."



"Okay" begun Tara, thinking to herself that this was probably going to be the most difficult thing she'd ever asked anyone. "How ..do you feel about me? I mean...uh.." Tara paused and swallowed while she tried to think of the right way to ask what she needed to know. "How do you feel about me, romantically?"



She gazed straight at her feet as she waited for Willow to answer.



"Tara" exclaimed Willow a little strongly, then seeing the forlorn expression on Tara's face, she began assuring the other girl.



"When I came on this ship, I wasn't looking for anything other than a cheap way of getting to America - you know, land of streets paved with gold and all that.."



Tara managed a little smile at Willow's description. The red-haired girl continued.



"And I definitely wasn't looking to find a woman..that i uh..liked..you know, romantically.." Willow paused.

"But you know, it's happened. I've met you and in a matter of days, it feels like I've known you forever. And the more I'm with you, the more I want you. And now, it feels like everything would be meaningless if you weren't with me.." she trailed off, feeling insecure all of a sudden as she glanced around Tara' s first class cabin. "But uh, I'll understand if that's not what you want." She looked up and met Tara's confused face.



"Tara, you have everything..I can't possibly ask you to give that all up for me, some girl" Willow grimaced as she corrected herself, "no, some maid you've only known for days.."



Tara took Willow's hand. "But don't you see Willow. I don't have anything now. This doesn't matter to me, I don't want any of this...I'd rather be with you, no matter how much money you have, and feel alive, rather than have all of this" she made a sweeping gesture to indicate the trappings of the room "and feel dead inside..like I'm living in darkness."



Willow stared at Tara. "You feel that way?"



Tara managed a smile. "I did Willow. Till I met you".

She paused before continuing emphatically. "And now that I have you, I'm not giving that up to live some sort of half-life like my father wants me to."



Tara reached over and moved Willow's hand to her chest. Willow swallowed as she felt the other girl's heart race under her touch. "Do you feel that Willow?" asked Tara softly.



Willow nodded.



"You're doing that" continued Tara. "You make my heart speed up and you make me weak at the knees. I think about you constantly..." she swallowed nervously. "And I want to...touch you..and be with you..I dream about making love to you..and you making love to me..And I'm falling more and more in love with you every moment I'm with you."



Tara stared into Willow's eyes, uncertain of how the other girl would react to what she'd just said. But Willow simply pulled Tara to her in an embrace. "Oh Tara" she managed. "I never, ever thought that someone like you would want to be with someone like me.."



"Hey" said Tara softly, pulling back. "What do you mean someone like you?" She tucked a stray lock of hair away from Willow's face as she waited for her response.



Willow frowned. "Well, you know, I've got no money, grew up in an orphanage...work clearing away other people's messes.." she trailed off.



"No Willow" said Tara strongly. "None of that is who you are. And none of that matters to me. You're smart, you're beautiful, you're kind and you're the sweetest person I've ever known. And that's all I see when I look at you.."



Willow smiled, feeling like she was going to cry. "That's about the nicest thing that anyone's ever said to me..and you know..I promise you Tara, that when we get to America, I'm going to work so hard that we'll have everything we could ever want..." she smiled. "And the most important thing, each other."



Tara smiled. "Do you have any idea how important you are to me?" she asked simply.



"I feel the same way" answered Willow softly, before kissing the girl next to her.

missspangles
 


Chapter Twelve

Postby missspangles » Fri Jun 27, 2003 2:54 am

And a little more, seeing as there wasn't a whole lot of action in the last bit :)



Love on the Seas - Chapter Twelve



Meanwhile, down in the laundry, Buffy had been sneaking little glances over at her dark-haired friend whenever she thought Faith wasn't watching. Their talk earlier had put some strange ideas into her head, ideas about Faith..and...No..Buffy tried to stop thinking about it. It's just because of what she said about Willow and Tara, you are not sexually attracted to... Oh god! thought Buffy. Sexually attracted to? Where did that thought come from? She snuck another look at Faith, taking in her long legs, her taut athletic body, the way her dark hair framed her face, her dark eyes...which were fixed straight on Buffy!



Buffy blushed furiously and turned back to the laundry.



"Did you want something Buffy?" asked Faith casually, a hint of amusement in her voice.



"No!" exclaimed Buffy, perhaps a little stronger than she had meant to. "I -uh - have you finished with that bundle there?"



Faith looked a little disapointed. "God, you really are all work and no play, aren't you Buffy?"



Buffy managed to mutter a grunt in agreement, before turning back to the laundry. It was going to be a long night.



Faith turned to the pile next to her. It was going to be a long night, she thought. And then with a smile, maybe a long and an interesting night..she thought as looked over at Buffy. That girl is definitely hot, thought Faith. And what's more, I'm not entirely sure that it's a one-way feeling either. _______________________________________________

Upstairs, Tara thought it was time that she discussed her future plans with Willow. "So uh" she began, smiling. She felt a lot more confident about her feelings now that she'd established that Willow felt the same way. "We should talk I guess..about how I can avoid getting married to some massive jerk." She managed to say the last part with a smile but Willow realized this was a very, very serious issue.



"I don't know if you heard" continued Tara, "But my father wants me to um..talk to Riley tomorrow..." she didn't finish the sentence but instead pointed to the necklace on the dresser by the bed. "That's the price that my father sold me for."



Willow frowned. "Tara?"



Tara continued. "It's from Riley and now my father's convinced that Riley's the one for me..Afterall, he said that the necklace was worth enough to cover the tickets on this ship."



Willow looked horrified. "I can't believe your father treats like a common..a common.." she didn't finish the sentence, not wanting to compare her beautiful Tara with a prostitute.



Tara didn't even look flustered. "Yes, i know. He's always made it quite clear that Donnie and I were nothing but burdens to be got rid off as soon as he could marry us off. And it looks like Donnie's fulfilling his part of the bargain."



"Well" began Willow. "There's no way that you're marrying that creep...especially after what you've just told me..I'm never letting you go." She smiled at Tara, who smiled back crookedly at her.



"So" continued Willow. "I'm thinking that you might have to say goodbye to your father and to the life that he wants you to live? Are you ready to say goodbye to all of this?" questioned Willow, indicating the room.



"Oh yes" said Tara emphatically."In fact" she announced getting up, "I think the sooner the better!"



"Good" declared Willow. "So I think you'd better start packing then"



"Okay" said Tara, scanning the room for a case.



"Aren't you going to ask where I think you should go?"



"I trust you Willow" said Tara softly, as she grabbed some things from her draw. "I'd go anywhere..so long as you were there."



Willow smiled. "Well, it might not be this comfortable but I think we can prevent your father and Riley Finn from bothering you.."



Tara pulled a few more things in to her bag. "Well, I guess that's it then.."



"That's all you're taking?" questioned Willow, surprised that Tara only wanted to take one suitcase.



"Uh huh" agreed Tara. "I've got everything I need. Are you ready to go...wherever it is you're taking me?"



"Yep" smiled Willow. "Hey" said Willow, "you left your necklace."



"I know" said Tara. "It's for my father. He thinks its worth so much..so now it's all his...he can have a necklace instead of his daughter."



"Oh wait!" Tara caught herself before she left the room. "I guess we should change huh?"



Willow glanced at Tara, wearing a robe over her nightgown. "Yes, I guess we should."



Willow went to turn around but Tara touched her arm softly. "You don't have to look away Willow..I -I don't mind..."



Willow swallowed at she met Tara's gaze. "I - I won't then.."



She watched Tara as she took of her robe, all the while keeping eye contact with Willow. And then, with a bit of deft manouvering, the night gown was off as well. Willow thought she'd never seen anything quite as beautiful as the half-naked girl standing in front of her. Tara caught her expression and smiled. But sadly, all too soon she was dressed.



Oh wow, thought Willow, still stunned. "And I believe you also have to get changed?" asked Tara, a teasing tone in her voice.



"Uh - yeah - yes, you're right" managed Willow, her voice cracking.



"Can I watch you too?" asked Tara, shyly.



"Of course" replied Willow, her mouth still dry.



And as Tara watched, Willow changed. She is the most gorgeous thing I have ever seen, thought Tara. That skin, her eyes, her legs... she swallowed nervously. And the less she has on, the better she looks.



But sadly, the display was over far too soon as both girls realized that if they were to leave Tara's room, and Tara was to leave her life, behind, then time was of the essence.



Willow headed out of the suite first and Tara turned the light off as they left. Goodbye to all of that, she thought. But she was happy.

missspangles
 


Re: Chapter Twelve

Postby Arwen276 » Fri Jun 27, 2003 4:29 am

Yay!!! You updated and On my Birthday!! wahooooooooooo I'm so happy!!!! and so happy for Willow and Tara too!!!

I wonder where they could hide and if Tara's Father is going to turn the ship upside down to look for her! maybe he'll get thrown overboard if the iceberg hits the ship before that!!

speculations, speculations, and you make it look all better :clap



~Arwen



Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


Re: Chapter Twelve

Postby wiccanwiggle » Fri Jun 27, 2003 6:05 am

Ooh, isn't it getting exciting! I think you really captured the whole Tara/father relationship perfectly in one sentence... "That's the price my father sold me for." Now that they've told eachother how they each feel they must believe it and stick together no matter what gets thrown at them over the next few days. Looking forward to more!



Laura

Everyone's Gettin Spanked But Me...!

wiccanwiggle
 


Re: Chapter Twelve

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Fri Jun 27, 2003 6:11 am

awwww that was sooooo cute :)



I only hope it gets more and more better for Willow and Tara :)

AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Chapter Twelve

Postby Stroke of Luck » Fri Jun 27, 2003 6:51 am

YAY they wanna spend their lifes together no matter what....i hope her father or Riley will not stop them:(



Hmm and those looks cute...:blush wow cant wait when the cuddle time starts:grin



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



This is a duet, Amber! You need to sing!"- Tony

Edited by: Stroke of Luck at: 6/27/03 5:59 am
Stroke of Luck
 


yay!

Postby willowsgirl » Fri Jun 27, 2003 8:01 am

Yay, an update! :applause

I love it that tara's gonna leave everything behind for willow; she knows what really matters.

and that last part...:grin luvverly!

more soon please!

willowsgirl xx

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Re: yay!

Postby Velaingie » Sat Jun 28, 2003 3:02 pm

Hello,:bigwave



'Your the queen of the world for writing a story like this, woohoo, woohoo!!!' :laugh (sorry about but it just bumped out of my head when I read your fic and I just had to say that) But very much loved the last updates, they were great. :applause :applause :applause

Can't wait for the next update :bounce :banana

Bye bye

Velaingie







Velaingie
 


Re: yay!

Postby bluewillowwitch » Sat Jun 28, 2003 3:49 pm

:bigwave ,

I only hav one thng to say, MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!! I loved the last part. I can't wait for an update! :pray :willow and :tara are so wonderful in this fic.



Quote:
"He can have a necklace instead of a daughter."




:applause :applause :applause :applause :applause :applause





bluewillowwitch :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happenig."--Anita Loos

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Re: yay!

Postby fairydust » Sat Jun 28, 2003 11:49 pm

YAY!!!!:party heh....*bats eyelashes* more pwease:flirt

I LOVE MY KARE-BEAR

fairydust
 


Re: yay!

Postby sam7777 » Sun Jun 29, 2003 6:30 pm

I love that Tara is ready to leave her family for Willow. Your depiction of Tara's family is 180 degrees from their trailer trash on the show but they are still evil. Great stuff. I can't wait to see our two girls get some private time in a car or anywhere else. Thanks for the great fic.

_____________________

I see dead lesbian cliches

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GREAT!

Postby willara » Sun Jun 29, 2003 10:55 pm

Wow, this is great. I just love the story line. And the way that Tara can't be bought, always a class act. Even when questioned with having to step out of class. And poor Willow,thinking she's not good enough for Tara because of her job, silly girl. Pleeeease update soon!





:pride Allison

willara
 


Re: GREAT!

Postby the vamp nurd » Mon Jun 30, 2003 2:56 am

Social classes are a thing of the past... yay!



Willow's gotta be good enough for Tara....:D

Sorry I missed church, I was busy becoming a lesbian and worshiping Satan



Bardlet no #27



the vamp nurd
 


Re: GREAT!

Postby Artemis » Thu Jul 03, 2003 11:34 am

Hi :) I have to confess I'm only as far as the first few paragraphs - my reading time is sorely limited sometimes - but I can recognise a very enjoyable story when I see it, and I love the setting as well (not that I ever saw the movie, I just like the setting on its own merits :) ). Would you consider letting me host this story on Through the Looking-glass (www.netspace.net.au/~alia/glass.htm )? Seeing as it fits right in with the 'alternate setting' theme, and did I mention pretty please, with a custom title graphic on top? If you're okay with adding your story to the archive, and want an email address with it for feedback, just let me know here and I'll have it online in a couple of days.

Edited by: Artemis at: 7/3/03 10:16 pm
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Re: GREAT!

Postby Arwen276 » Thu Jul 03, 2003 4:28 pm

Hey!!!!



Not wanting to sound pushy and all...but is there any update in the horizon?? :pray :pray :pray





Anyway cheers!! ur fic rocks!!!



~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

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