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Fic: Out of Character - Part 8b

Postby kindagay » Mon Nov 17, 2003 5:34 pm

Tempest Duer: I wasn't doubting your innocence or sweetness, I was merely suggesting that this fic probably isn't the most appropriate fic for the sweet & innocent.

& I'm sure you are sweet, your feedback (when you're not accusing me of being evil :) ) is very sweet.



Anyway, before I start the next update I just want to say thank you so much to everyone who's reading & enjoying this little creation of mine. & special thanks to all you lovely people who leave feedback, it is greatly appreciated :)



So, who wants to know what happens next?

You do? Well read on then...



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Tara’s hand returned between her legs and she drew lazy patterns on the insides of her thighs, swapping from left to right and back again.

After a short moment her slender fingers began playing with her soft honey blond curls, alternating between gentle strokes and not so gentle tugs.



As Tara continued teasing herself she kept her eyes locked with those of her soul mate, gauging Willow’s reactions and using these to determine her next move. The intense arousal that was clearly evident in the darkened green eyes increased Tara’s own arousal and left her unable to ignore the throbbing in her clit.



Slowly, gently her index finger made contact with the swollen nub and she began rolling it softly between her finger and thumb. The sight caused Willow’s breath to hitch and as Tara’s head rolled back and her lips parted invitingly, it took all of the redhead’s self-control not to reach out and touch her lover.



Noticing Willow ball her hands into tight fists Tara knew that the smaller girl was having great trouble restraining herself. Spurred on by this knowledge Tara increased the speed and pressure of her ministrations, her hips bucking upwards as her juices ran freely onto the sheets below her.



The scent and sight of her honey’s arousal caused Willow’s tongue to dart out, desperate to devour her baby’s offering. With her eyes still locked on Willow’s every move the appearance of the thirsty pink tongue left Tara desperate to feel her lover inside her. She circled the tip of her middle finger around her entrance before thrusting it deep inside herself. This action was repeated a few more times before the finger was joined by another and both were curled forwards towards her g-spot.



“Oh gods.” Tara moaned breathlessly as she reached her left hand out to locate her lover’s black thong.

“Need to, smell you.” The blond groaned in frustration when she failed to locate the underwear.



Hearing the desperation in Tara’s voice, and taking into account her own excitement, Willow was hit with an idea. Placing a leg at either side of the blonde’s head Willow lowered herself down onto her girlfriend’s face.



“Goddess Willow.” Tara gasped as she inhaled the incredible scent, the realisation of what was happening finally dawning on her. Instinctively her tongue reached out and licked the delicious fluid escaping down Willow’s silky thighs.



“Oh Tara.” The feel of Tara’s tongue against her thigh made Willow’s legs tremble; she lowered herself onto all fours to regain some balance. This movement left the girls in the perfect 69 position and Willow was almost painfully desperate to descend on her lover. She knew however that she needed Tara’s permission to drink from the fount. “Please my love?”



Tara knew what Willow wanted and she wasn’t about to begrudge her baby a drink.



“Taste baby.” The blond pleaded.



In a second Willow’s tongue had joined Tara’s fingers inside of the blond. She lapped greedily at Tara’s juices luxuriating in the heavenly taste and feel of the girl’s velvety folds.



Tara rolled Willow’s clit between her teeth as she brought her left hand up to caress the smaller girl’s ass. Her nose nuzzled deeply between Willow’s swollen lips she felt the redhead buck against her. Her tongue reached deeply within Willow causing her lover to ride her faster and harder.



Both girls could feel their orgasms approaching; both were equally determined to push the other over the edge first.



Their tongues began moving in and out of each other at increasing speeds.

Willow removed Tara’s hand and replaced it with her own, finding and applying pressure to the blonde’s g-spot with record time and precision.

The fingers of Tara’s right hand still soaked in her own juices slipped easily into Willow. Thrusting frantically as her teeth went back to playing with the redhead’s pounding clit.



In a matter of seconds the pair screamed into each other’s curls, showering each others faces with their release.



The knowledge of their synchronised orgasms.

The indescribable feeling of pleasuring whilst being pleasured.

The overwhelming feeling of complete togetherness.

It all served to bring the lovers wave after wave of further pleasure.



One orgasm merged with another until the girls were unable to distinguish between the end of one and the beginning of the next.



After what felt like a lifetime and, at the same time, like no time at all, two completely exhausted and blissfully happy wiccans collapsed. Somehow managing to change position so they were wrapped in each others arms beneath the covers, they whispered ‘I love you’s’ before succumbing to deep, tranquil sleep.



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Now, to all those who are thinking that was kind of a nice place to end, I agree.

BUT

This fic is just too much fun to write & I don't wanna stop.



So, if you want more, I will happily write about what happens the morning after :wink



So what do you think?

You want more? Or should I finish there?



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Posh flowers make me feel groovy - My niece



I am perfectly normal in my abnormalities

kindagay
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 8b

Postby willowsgirl » Mon Nov 17, 2003 6:11 pm

Finish? Finish? Finish is so not a word that should be used here!!

That update was just...wow. Well worth the wait, although that wait was torturous you evil evil kitten!

So yes, I would like to put my vote out there for this fic 2 continue :)



stacey xx

willowsgirl
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 8b

Postby i dig redheads » Mon Nov 17, 2003 6:26 pm

what? stop? you honestly think that we would deny you the chance to use what the muse gave you????

here's another vote for a mornign after!



i dig redheads

i dig redheads
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 8b

Postby shuyaku » Mon Nov 17, 2003 8:37 pm

Please ma'am may I have another? :D



-shuyaku

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"Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

shuyaku
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 8b

Postby AxMan936 » Mon Nov 17, 2003 9:06 pm

stop?! are you crazy?

that word should not be used in refernece to this fic

ever



my vote is definately for the morning after



-Chris

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"True knowledge is knowing that you know nothing" - I Forgot

AxMan936
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 8b

Postby intricate mirage » Tue Nov 18, 2003 1:02 am

Finish? :no Finish is not a word that should be used in this fic. So another please? :D

Cassie





Ask me if I loved you yesterday. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I love you today. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I'll love you tomorrow. I'll say 'Always'





intricate mirage
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 8b

Postby SJ » Tue Nov 18, 2003 3:32 am

Great update :thud

Another vote for you to write the Morning After :read

SJ
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 8b

Postby sam darls » Tue Nov 18, 2003 3:42 am

More more!! That was uh..wow. Some update :bow Love sammi xx

sam darls
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 8b

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Tue Nov 18, 2003 5:58 am

Yes I vote to see what happens the morning after ;)

AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Out of Character

Postby wolfwynd » Tue Nov 18, 2003 2:51 pm

One word... more :thud



please?! :thud



I :bow to your fic writing skills!!



Wolfy :pride

wolfwynd
 


Re: Out of Character

Postby kindagay » Tue Nov 18, 2003 4:44 pm

Okay, so that's 1,2,3....9, nine votes for more.



I best get back to writing then



::toddles off to write more smut::

:D

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Posh flowers make me feel groovy - My niece



I am perfectly normal in my abnormalities

kindagay
 


Re: Out of Character

Postby Tempest Duer » Tue Nov 18, 2003 5:40 pm

Well, ten now that I'm here...



And don't you remember? Evil's... good.

I believe in the madness called "now."

Tempest Duer
 


Re: Out of Character

Postby droidy » Wed Nov 19, 2003 2:17 am

11. 'nuff said.

droidy
 


Re: Out of Character

Postby epaige » Wed Nov 19, 2003 9:46 pm

seriously I need another chapter. This story is fantastic, I check all the time for an update, would it help if I begged? Because I can do that.

epaige
 


Fic: Out of Character - Part 9

Postby kindagay » Thu Nov 20, 2003 4:34 pm

Okay kittens, you asked for more so here's more.



Thanks to everyone who begged for me to carry on, I'll keep writing for as long as you want to read.



So, here you go, the morning after...



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The following morning Tara awoke to the feel of soft hands and warm lips tenderly stroking her naked skin.



“Mmm, morning.” The blonde mumbled sleepily.



“You’re beautiful first thing in a morning love. With your hair all tousled, your eyes half lidded and that peaceful, contented expression…”



“… and my skin still glowing after a night of orgasmic bliss.”



“Exactly.” The redhead grinned as she positioned herself so she was straddling Tara’s hips. “And speaking of orgasmic bliss…” She lowered her lips to Tara’s breasts, eagerly nibbling the taut dark nipples.



“Oh my.” Tara’s eyes rolled shut as she arched her back, pushing herself deeper into her sweetheart’s mouth.



Recognising her lover’s appeal for more contact Willow cupped her hands around the blonde’s supple breasts, kneading and stroking them with passionate strength and enthusiasm.

Her teeth and tongue alternated from one hard nipple to the other.

Sucking. Nipping. Licking. Biting. Kissing.



Tara’s writhing body between Willow’s thighs provided welcome friction to the redhead’s sex and she began gyrating against Tara’s firm stomach. As the blonde became aware of Willow’s excitement gathering on her stomach the flow of her own juices increased. The knowledge of her lovers arousal coupled with the way Willow was playing with her breasts quickly brought Tara close to the edge.



“Bite. Harder. Please.” Tara begged desperate for release.



Taking the sensitive skin around the blonde’s left nipple deep into her mouth she sucked harder, marking her girl.



“Oh gods, Will. Feels, so, good. I’m so close baby, so fucking close.”



Willow began grinding her hips faster and harder, Tara’s words bringing her closer to release.



“Please Willow. I wanna come for you. Make me come.”



As Willow’s orgasm ripped through her she bit hard on Tara’s nipple, effectively tipping her lover over the edge and sending her spiralling into oblivion.



“WILLOW!!!” The blonde screamed, so overwhelmed by the force of her orgasm that tears began rolling down her flushed cheeks.



Willow’s head moved away from Tara’s breasts so that she could push her lips against the blondes in a forceful kiss before collapsing against her lover’s chest.





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Posh flowers make me feel groovy - My niece



I am perfectly normal in my abnormalities

kindagay
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 9

Postby Tempest Duer » Thu Nov 20, 2003 8:16 pm

:drool



Thank you! :bow :bow :bow :bow :bow :bow :bow :bow :bow :bow :bow :bow :bow :bow

I believe in the madness called "now."

Tempest Duer
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 9

Postby AxMan936 » Thu Nov 20, 2003 11:31 pm

wow that yet again another great update:applause :bow

and especially thank you for continueing!

i wait in in giddy inpatience for the next update!:bounce



-Chris

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"True knowledge is knowing that you know nothing" - I Forgot

AxMan936
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 9

Postby SJ » Fri Nov 21, 2003 2:48 am

Wow great update :thud

SJ
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 9

Postby intricate mirage » Fri Nov 21, 2003 3:32 am

Mmm :drool What a lovely way to wake up in the morning :drool

Cassie





Ask me if I loved you yesterday. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I love you today. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I'll love you tomorrow. I'll say 'Always'





intricate mirage
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 9

Postby sam darls » Fri Nov 21, 2003 3:42 am

Ooh..wow, nice wake up call :love Very nice indeed. Love sammi xx

sam darls
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 9

Postby epaige » Fri Nov 21, 2003 9:04 pm

ok that was a great update, it so made my friday, thanks!



Paige

epaige
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 9

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Sat Nov 22, 2003 5:31 am

That was soooooo hot! I wish I had a girlfriend like Willow ;)

AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character-Part 9

Postby kristenluvswillowandtara » Sat Nov 22, 2003 11:12 pm

me too, AmberAlysonlover!

This was some great smut. :clap

kristenluvswillowandtara
 


Fic: Out of Character-Part 10

Postby kindagay » Sun Nov 23, 2003 1:46 pm

Thank you for the feedback, I'm glad you're all still enjoying this :)



As I said, as long as you want to read, I'm more than happy to write. And just to prove it, here's another update. Hope you all like it



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“Wow.” Tara exclaimed when she’d regained control of her breathing.



“Definitely wow. Not quite what I’d been planning, but I certainly have no complaints.”



“Not what you’d been planning?” Tara asked curiously.



“Nope.” Willow lifted her head to look at her girlfriend. “But, there’s nothing to stop me from executing my plan now.” She hinted with a suggestive, sexy smile and a glint in her eyes. “See, you are the most attractive, sexy woman in the world and I intend to make love to you. To all of you. I’m gonna worship every inch of your skin from the top of your head, to the tips of your toes.”



The redhead set her plan into action immediately after savouring the immeasurably adorable smile that had spread across her girl’s sweetly blushing face.



As she worked her fingers through Tara’s halo of soft golden hair Willow slowly ran the tip of her tongue around the outside of her baby’s left ear before nibbling on the delicate skin. Working her way down to gently bite the lobe she drew the flesh into her mouth and played with it with her tongue. She released her hold on the ear then traced a path of tiny kisses along her lover’s jaw-line up to the right ear. She paid the same attention to this ear as she had to its twin, whilst she fervently massaged Tara’s scalp.



Pulling back to look at her love Willow was met with a most beautiful sight.

Tara’s head was tipped back; the tiny tip of her tongue visible between her slightly parted lips and her half-shut eyelids fluttering like delicate butterfly wings.



Willow softly peppered Tara’s porcelain-like features with soft kisses.

Her forehead; her eyebrows; the thin lids of her eyes; the end of her cute little nose; each of her delicately pink cheeks; the corners of her soft, full lips; and finally her perfectly formed chin.



“So beautiful.” Willow whispered into the blonde’s ear before trailing her tongue along the curve of Tara’s neck.



Small soft hands gently massaged Tara's shoulders as the redhead savoured the sweet taste of her girlfriend’s smooth skin. Sucking lightly at the pulse points Willow was amazed by the sensation of Tara’s increasing heartbeat vibrating against her tongue.



Reluctantly pulling away from Tara’s neck, Willow placed soft, butterfly kisses along one shoulder, across the girl’s collarbone and back up the other shoulder. Whist she did this her fingers absent-mindedly drew swirled patterns over the tops of the blonde’s arms.

Willow used both of her hands to gently raise Tara’s left arm. She kissed her way along the raised upper limb from shoulder to wrist, over the back of the hand before running the tip of her tongue along each finger, sucking the digits into her mouth one at a time, then pressing her lips against the blonde’s palm. She repeated this action to her lover’s right arm, fingers and hand.



Willow descended on the girl’s chest, licking a line down the centre of Tara’s rib cage before tracing an infinity sign around her lover’s full breasts. She buried her face deeply between the ample breasts, inhaling the scent of the tiny sweat beads that coated her baby’s flushed skin. The redhead soaked up the salty perspiration with her tongue, making her way up each breast individually to circle the hard, stiff nipples, and then drawing the nipples between her teeth, biting down hard on them.



A sharp intake of breath and a small whimper of pain caused Willow’s head to shoot up, concern shining in her eyes as she tentatively enquired



“Did I hurt you?”



“Just a little, i-in a good way. Don’t stop. Please.”



Willow grinned affectionately before continuing the journey of her lips down her soul mate’s front and over the taut, flat stomach. Adventurous fingers joined the eager mouth as the full expanse of Tara’s toned abdomen was explored and worshiped.



“Mmmm, luscious Tara-legs.” Willow hummed appreciatively as her hands worked their way over waist and hips down to muscled thighs.



Positioning herself between Tara's legs, Willow ran her hands down the length of the silky appendages, feathering the smooth skin with kisses along the way. When she reached her girl’s perfect feet Willow replicated the actions she had executed to Tara’s hands. Running her tongue along the blonde’s instep then licking and sucking each of the toes in turn.



“Oh baby.” Tara moaned.



Her feet were one of Tara’s most sensitive erogenous zones and Willow knew it. The redhead knew that her lover could come just from a foot rub if you touched her feet in just the right places with the right amount of pressure. Being an expert where Tara’s body, especially her soft spots, were concerned, Willow used her knowledge to her advantage, bringing her baby extremely close to orgasm, but not providing the much needed final push over the edge.



“Willow, please. I n-need to come.”



“Need to?” Willow enquired, running her lips along the inside of Tara’s ankles.



“Yes baby. Need it so badly.”



“How bad?” Moving higher up the inside of her lovers legs.



“So bad it hurts.”



“Are you wet for me?” She torments Tara’s ticklish knee with her tongue.



“So wet sweetie. Just for you.”



“I can smell you. You smell so good.” Her hair and lips tickle the inside of the blonde’s thighs.



“Taste Willow. Lap it up, it’s all for you.”



She couldn’t resist Tara’s invitation and she ran her ravenous tongue up the full length of her girlfriend’s dripping pussy.



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Posh flowers make me feel groovy - My niece



I am perfectly normal in my abnormalities

kindagay
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character-Part 10

Postby sam darls » Sun Nov 23, 2003 2:32 pm

Oh my good god!! That was so good, and willow's speech at the beginning was so gorgeous. Love sammi xx

sam darls
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 9

Postby AxMan936 » Sun Nov 23, 2003 2:59 pm

wow

that was soo frikin amazing... :thud

i wait inpatiently for the next chapter:bounce



-Chris

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"True knowledge is knowing that you know nothing" - I Forgot

AxMan936
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 9

Postby Vizier Mountian » Sun Nov 23, 2003 8:13 pm

“Taste Willow. Lap it up, it’s all for you.”



She couldn’t resist Tara’s invitation and she ran her ravenous tongue up the full length of her girlfriend’s dripping pussy.



:applause :applause :pride This is such a sweet and sexy fic, and it's more then that, the love that :willow and :tara have for each other shows through as well.I want to read more.

Vizier Mountian
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 9

Postby justkazy » Sun Nov 23, 2003 8:23 pm

OMG!!!!:drool :drool :thud



but you can't just stop there:cry



me want more, oh yeah



P-L-E-A-S-E:pray



O:D



PS :love this fanfic

Lead me not to temptation....I can find it myself

justkazy
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 9

Postby musicmad10 » Mon Nov 24, 2003 4:55 pm

Hiya, great update! Wow, getting hot in here!

Keep it up!

Hannah

musicmad10
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 9

Postby Tempest Duer » Mon Nov 24, 2003 6:22 pm

*pouts* Lucky Willow... now excuse me while I :shower

I believe in the madness called "now."

Tempest Duer
 

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