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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Eight - Recall

Postby Grimlock72 » Sat Apr 12, 2003 5:48 am



patience...hmm... I seem to remember that word... :D



It's not that want Willow to have magic problems, not at all. I just wish both girls would have actually to/with each other about their obviously different views on using magic. Being in a relation doesn't mean being equal, but you got to handle the differences some way. Just ignoring them is bound to fail at the worst possible time.



Just little ol' me being all concerned I guess :-).



Grimmy

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She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Nine - Hurt Me

Postby LostWithoutTara » Sat Apr 12, 2003 8:29 am

Okay - warning, this part contains ANGST (not that bad, but still angst). Only a couple more instalments before mucho action. Grimmy, I promise that there’ll be a conversation dealing with their different views of magic very soon. :D Enjoy!



Part Nine – ‘Hurt Me’



Willow ran, pulling Tara with her into the rain, which was falling more heavily now, forming big puddles along the pavement. Tara pulled back and stopped her. “What did you see, Willow?”

“I, I don’t know. But it wants us. A woman, black hair, black eyes. Please, we have to go.” The witches resumed their fast pace. “W-what was this woman doing?” Tara asked, slightly breathless. Willow stopped again and turned to Tara, the rainwater running down her face. “Please, Tara…”

“Willow, we’re a partnership. If something wants to hurt us I have to know. We have to fight our battles together. I don’t need you to protect me from this.”

“Tara…”

“Please, Willow. Tell me!” The rain down even harder, a distant cry from the drizzle of the morning.

“She was killing you!” cried Willow, choked up with emotion. “ Now, we HAVE to get to the Magic shop. This thing isn’t some demon. It’s ancient, and it wants us dead. And unless we can get every spell we can muster, we will be dead.” Tara stared at her, horrified. “Okay,” she said softly. “Let’s go.” They both ran down the street as fast as they could as the rain hammered around them.



Rack stood and admired the girl in front of him as she swirled, lost in his magics. He smiled. She was nice, but that redhead was even nicer. He could feel the power emanating from her, even though she’d only been there for a few minutes before running away. Willow should thank him for giving her a heads-up about that woman. If Red died, he’d never get his hands on her… that energy within her. If Willow survived this, she’d be a suitable candidate. And she’d come crawling right back. They all did. No-one had escaped him. One touch, and they were lost, addicted to the power, the darkness within themselves. Oh, she’d definitely be back.



The witches rounded the corner to Main Street, running towards the Magic Box. Willow stared at the building and stopped in horror, seeing the smashed in window at the front of the shop. She gently pushed the main door, surprised to find it unlocked. “Hello?” she called. “Anybody here?” Tara slowly followed behind her. Stepping into the shop proper, Willow saw Anya and Xander sitting at the counter. Anya looked glum. “What happened here?” She moved to the main table and sat down, Tara joining her. Anya frowned. “Some idiot decided that smashing my precious window in and stealing things would be fun! And to add insult to injury, they didn’t even steal anything decent! Sage, thistle powder… all cheap, cheap, cheap! If they’d stolen the Urn of Ishtar or something important, then okay. But stealing grocery supplies is just pathetic! And now I have to shut up shop all day while the glaziers come to put the new window in!”

“You called the police and everything?”

“Yes, they don’t have a clue. Sunnydale’s police force is just stupid, anyway. I still can’t believe they haven’t twigged we live on a hellmouth! Stupid people! I hate them all! If I had my vengeance powers back, I swear that there’d be a lot of entrails everywhere right now.” Xander looked alarmed and placed his hands on Anya’s shoulders.

“Calm down, Ahn. These things happen. The last time this store was broken into the owner ended up dead. At least you still have all your vital fluids.” Tara nodded sincerely. Mr Bogarty hadn’t been so lucky. That vampire gang had gotten in and stolen – what was it? That’s it, a cheap unicorn. Ughh. Evil and tasteless. A thought shot into her head

“Anya, what did you say was stolen?”

“Um, sage, thistle powder, a jar of lotus petals…” Tara felt alarmed. She recognised that list. But what spell would those ingredients be used for? She frowned, thinking as quickly as she could.

“What is it?” asked Willow anxiously, turning to her.

“Those ingredients – they’re used for locator spells. To-to track down individuals with concentrated magical energy.”

Willow gasped as she twigged what Tara meant. “You mean it might be her?” Tara nodded. Willow stood up and ran her hand through her wet hair. “Anya, we need to borrow all the books from upstairs. I had a flash of something coming here very soon and we’ll need all the firepower and defence we can muster.” Anya, who normally would have been loathe to lend out all the books at once, nodded, sensing the urgency in Willow’s voice. Willow turned to Xander. “Can you take care of Dawn for a few days? Tara and I need to sort this out, alone. That means no interruptions from anyone.”

“Sure, Will. Whatever you need.”



Tara made her way up the stairs to the black arts books. She could feel the power inside them. It was somewhat exhilarating, but frightening. The books were full of dark forces waiting to be unleashed. No wonder that Giles was unhappy with the idea of anyone taking them. If a novice worked any of these spells, it could be catastrophic. She knelt and ran her hands down the leather spines of the volumes, pulling them out. Darkest Magick, Exodus Volume 12, Darkness Reborne, Witche’s Baine. All powerful texts in their own right, but would it be enough? Willow sounded up the stairs and knelt beside her, pulling all the texts off the shelves, not bothering to check them. “Xander said he’ll give us a lift back home with these books. Save us getting soaked again.”

“Okay.” The girls silently continued to root out the books.



Victorian England, 1891



Tara finished pulling on her thick overcoat and silently walked down the stairs, making sure nobody could see her. For a young lady such as herself to be going out at night would be highly suspicious, and she didn’t want any gossip amongst the servants. Reaching the main door, she quietly pushed it open, jumping as a loud creak echoed through the hall. Nervously, she stepped out, double-checking to make sure no-one had seen her. Tara pulled the door shut, exhilarated at having escaped. She hurried down the path. A hand shot out and touched her shoulder. Tara suppressed a scream and turned, fearful. A black-haired woman stood there. “Miss Maclay?” Tara nodded slowly. The woman smiled. “I’m Shadine. I’ve come to collect you at the request of Miss Rosenberg.” Tara smiled, relieved. “Oh. You scared me.”

“I’m ever so sorry. Your transport is just ahead.” Shadine gestured forward and Tara walked on. Shadi smiled at the girl’s gullible nature and pulled out the knife, running forward and thrusting it into her back, clamping her hand over Tara’s mouth to muffle the scream as the white light flew out into the blade. Shadi stared at the body. Tara hadn’t even struggled. The job was done. The cataclysm would not occur in this lifetime. She melted back down, into the earth. Her job was done, and now she could sleep. Until the next call came.       



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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Nine - Hurt Me

Postby Grimlock72 » Sat Apr 12, 2003 12:42 pm

How interesting... Shadi absorbs something from Tara as well. Just when I was wondering if dark magic would work (long) on Shadi.... That line about preventing something was intriguing, the question is is she preventing something good or bad from happening ? I can guarantee that killing Tara in this lifetime will most definitly NOT prevent a catastrophe.



Well if anything Willow is a good researcher and generally does well on offensive spells. Just the range of them needs some looking after :-) I think Tara will be better at defense at least initially. Once Willow gets hurt thats bound to change :D .



Aren't there any high-level light-magic books ? Powerfull light-magic based spell do exist I suppose ? Always when a lot of power is required they tend fall back on dark-magic, which they don't really want to use in the first place. So why aren't there any light magic books with powerfull spells around ??



Grimmy

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She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Nine - Hurt Me

Postby justin » Sat Apr 12, 2003 1:33 pm

So it seems that Willow and Tara getting together will cause an apocalypse. That doesn't sound good.



Of course Shadi could be mistaken. Perhaps some big bad is afraid of how powerul :willow & :tara will be together and is using her to stop that from happening. If that's the case then she'd probably not going to be very happy about it.



Otherwise I'll just have to hope that there's some way to prevent the apocalypse without either of them having to get killed.



I understand, you should be with the person you l-love


I am


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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Nine - Hurt Me

Postby LostWithoutTara » Sat Apr 12, 2003 2:31 pm

Don't worry, W/T together is definitely of the good. New parts should be up fairly soon as I'm on holiday!!! :applause :party :dance

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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Sat Apr 12, 2003 10:48 pm

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The cataclysm would not occur in this lifetime. She melted back down, into the earth. Her job was done, and now she could sleep. Until the next call came.




No wonder you've written of the elements (earth wind and sky) so evocatively...Shandi seems to rise from the whole of them.:hmm



Is a "cataclysm" the same as an apocalypse in this context? In any event I'm anxious to learn the nature of what W/T's combined souls bring about.:eek



And good on Tara to stand her ground and *insist* that Willow confide in her instead of just being led by hand in ignorance.:clap



Enjoy your holiday...and thanks for thinking of us!;)



OH and get a lil' extra :dance :dance :dance in for me!



~Suse

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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate

Postby LostWithoutTara » Sun Apr 13, 2003 3:07 am

Hi!



A cataclysm is more of a huge event that changes everything, so it can be either good or bad.



I promise I'll get lots of :dance done for everyone. :bigwave :D



Woo-hoo! Now I'm up to Flaming O!

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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate

Postby Stroke of Luck » Sun Apr 13, 2003 4:07 am

Argh Shadi and Rack are such :rage i could :puke



And all that black magic books I hope Willow don´t get addicted to them and the magic:pray



I don´t like it that Tara was killed in the past but I hope she survive in the present:confused



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



There are two kinds of tears, tears for those who leave you, and tears for those you never let go - Gabrielle/The Quest

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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate

Postby LostWithoutTara » Sun Apr 13, 2003 5:45 am

Don't worry. No scabby addiction for Willow. I might cover her unhealthy interest in using dark power a bit, but I 100% promise no pathetic out-of-character addictions. :D :bigwave

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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Ten - First Wave

Postby LostWithoutTara » Sun Apr 13, 2003 9:01 am

Part Ten – First Wave



Xander pulled up outside the Summers’ house. He glanced back at the women sat behind him, clutching some books to their chests, others in Magic Box carrier bags.



“Thanks, Xander.” Willow pushed the door open, staring up at the grey sky. It was still bucketing down with rain, each drop feeling like a hard pellet as it hit her skin. She grabbed her bags and edged out, fumbling for her keys in her jacket pocket. Tara followed her, scooting out, flashing Xander an amicable smile as she got out, tugging her bags after her. They ran to the front door and Willow unlocked it, gesturing for Tara to enter. She did, and Willow waved at the car. Knowing they were in safely, Xander drove off. Willow glanced at her watch. It was one in the afternoon, so Dawnie was probably still out with Janice. When she got back they’d have to inform her about everything and take her to Xander’s. It was a hassle she really didn’t need, but considering Buffy had sacrificed her life to save Dawn, Willow figured she’d better take damn good care of her. Tara sat at the coffee table and emptied one of her bags, methodically sorting the texts into piles. Willow pulled the front door shut and stared at Tara. Her blue stop was soaked and had stuck to her chest, like a wet T-shirt contest entrant. She suppressed a chuckle, noting that funny boob-revealing jokes and the resulting big gay love would have to wait until they weren’t dead and stabby. She moved to the coffee table with her bags and emptied them, rooting through the volumes. She hadn’t bothered to check them as she’d taken them. Hopefully something would be of use. “Oooh”. One text caught her eye – “Darkness Reborne”, which was sitting on the top of one of Tara’s piles. Willow grabbed it, feeling the power within the book, its black leather binding and gold script sucking her in… Willow blinked and shook her head.

“You okay?” Tara asked, glancing up from the spellbook sitting in her lap.

“Yeah, I’m fine. I just went all spazzy for a second.”

Tara nodded and resumed reading her book. Willow pulled open the cover of “Darkness Reborne”, flicking to the contents. Spells of Memory, Resurrection, Illusion, Destruction… Destruction sounded good. She turned the pages to the appropriate section, running her fingers along the lines as she read them. Some spells were in English, some Latin, some French, and there were a couple in a language she didn’t recognise. They sounded pretty cool. Slow Torture, Summon of Serpents, Advanced Telekinesis… but Black Lightning sounded best. No-one could mess with her if she was summoning big bolts of dark mojo and hurling it in their face. It didn’t need any ingredients per se, just general chanting and – ugh, a blood ritual. It wasn’t like the white lightning spell she’d used against Glory – it was much stronger. It’s a shame she hadn’t found this before – maybe she could have even saved Tara from being brain-sucked by that bitch. When that had happened, she’d sworn to herself that she’d never let anyone else hurt Tara, and if they did, they would sure as hell pay for it.

“Penny for them.” Tara smiled at her sweetly.

“Huh?” Willow frowned, confused.

“Penny for them,” Tara repeated. “You know, your thoughts.”

“Oh! I looked in this book and found some really cool offensive spells for, y’know, violence without the violence and disfiguring bruises. You?”

“I’ve got a couple of good defensive spells. The barrier, like the one we used before to protect Dawn from Glory. Big alarm bells will go off if any nasty things attempt to enter the house. There’s also a couple of good shielding and distortion spells in here, too.” She paused briefly. “Can you remember anything else from this morning? I mean, a lot of these spells are really specific and it might help if we had a better idea of whatever nasty wants to… to… you know.”



Willow nodded. “Um, it looked like a woman, but I don’t think it was human. Her eyes, they just looked like, like, when you do a powerful spell. Completely black.”

“Witch?” enquired Tara.

“No. Definitely of the demon family tree. Or something else evil. But not slimy or squirmy, which is kind of nice. I swear, part of the evil-monster package is that when you kill them, they still get the last laugh as their entrails go all over you and ruin your clothes.”

“Right.” Tara flicked back a few pages in her text. “This one is a general keep away, but it’s not very powerful. If we can’t lock whatever it is out, then we’ll have to fight it off. That, or run away.”

“Stay and fight it is then. Last time we ran away, we ended up trapped in an abandoned gas station with big knights trying to impale Dawn. Plus, there were lots of horses.” She shivered. “Sorry, I was channelling a bit of childhood trauma there.” Tara smiled. “Okay, the lock-out requires, um, burba weed…” She leant over and examined the book more closely “… a few rose petals, sage and, oh! The classic, newt eyes.”

“Happily, we have all of that. I guess we should get it done now, keep the entire house evil free?” Tara nodded. “Okay, but first we need to get changed. After we kill this thing, the last thing we want is to die of pneumonia from sitting in soaking wet clothes all day.”



**************



“Okay?” asked Willow. She was sat cross-legged in the hallway by the front door, Tara opposite. She was wearing her comfy pink sweater and jeans. Tara had opted for a similar outfit, none of her usual long flowing skirts or dresses. But that was because skirts were hardly helpful when fighting for your life, as they hindered you when you ran. Willow leaned over, taking Tara’s hands. A bowl was between them, with the ingredients inside. Both witches shut their eyes and concentrated. A ring of purple energy began to form around them. Tara spoke: “Isis, goddess of Egypt, keeper of the hearth, protect this home from all those who dare enter into it with evil hearts. May your siren’s sound give warning to those who supplicate thee, with this offering. The wave of energy flowed away from them, permeating the house and flowing into the walls. The ingredients smoked slightly. Both girls relaxed and opened their eyes. Tara tentatively picked up the bowl and placed it into the kitchen, returning to meet Willow in the hallway.



“Shall we get back to the offence?” Willow nodded, and they linked arms, moving back into the lounge.



Suddenly, sirens started to blare, the high-pitched noise echoing through the house. “The spell!” cried Willow, running to the door, checking outside for any sign. Tara moved to the kitchen, looking outside at the back garden. There was nothing there. She shut the door and ran back to the hall, where Willow was stood. “Anything?”

“No!” cried Willow over the noise. “There’s nothing outside.” A look of revelation crossed her face.



“Tara, it was already here. It’s in the house.”



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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Ten - First Wave

Postby Washi » Sun Apr 13, 2003 9:12 am

Holy Hell! You can't leave us hanging like that! :grin



This whole fic rocks, and now u totally got me hooked. Please, more, soon! :grin

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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Ten - First Wave

Postby justin » Sun Apr 13, 2003 10:29 am

That was an evil place to end :evil



It was interesting the way Willow was looking at the offensive spells while Tara was interested in defensive magic. Though I guess that Willows going to get a chance to try out that black lightning spell.



Looking forward to reading more.



I understand, you should be with the person you l-love


I am


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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Ten - First Wave

Postby LostWithoutTara » Sun Apr 13, 2003 12:11 pm





:devilish



Sorry, but I had to do that :D



Thanks for your feedback. More soon!

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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Ten - First Wave

Postby Grimlock72 » Sun Apr 13, 2003 4:02 pm

well since a cliffhanger just isn't any good without readers demanding a next part to get over it....



where IS the next part ?? More, more... mooore :D



There, now you have a nice cliffhanger :-)



How much time does a blood-ritual take ? Doesn't sound like it can be done on the spot really. With some evil in the house that might be a problem.



Or is Spike sleeping in the basement ?? Heh... depends on what you define as evil I suppose, lets ask Isis :-).



Grimmy

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She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Eleven - Us

Postby LostWithoutTara » Mon Apr 14, 2003 8:02 am

Part Eleven – ‘Us’



Willow’s heart began to race, her breathing growing faster. They couldn’t risk shouting over the sirens in case whatever it was heard them. Willow tried hard to focus, concentrating hard as she tried to communicate telepathically. “Tara, can you hear me?”

“Yes.” Tara answered her immediately. That kind of mental attunement was one of the benefits of having your soulmate. “What should we do?”

“I don’t know! There’s no way we can fight it off. We need more time!”

“But we can’t risk leaving it in the house. What if Dawnie came back and it hurt her?”

“You’re right. We have to check it out. I’m scared, Tara. This thing wants to kill us and we may be walking into a trap.” Tara took Willow’s hand reassuringly.

“I trust you, Willow. Even without those dark spells you’re still an amazing witch, and I can handle myself. We have to do this.” Willow nodded and they slowly began to pace up the stairs, edging their backs up against the wall. The sirens did a good job of silencing their footsteps. Tara raised her hand and a blue, shimmering barrier formed in front of them, a makeshift shield. Energy crackled and filled the stairway with a pale hue. The sirens cut out, filling the house with comparative silence, only the rain pounding on the windows providing any noise. Tara moved level with Willow on the second-to-last step and they moved together onto the first floor, each facing a different direction.

“Anything?”

“Nothing.” Willow sensed the relief in Tara’s voice. Tara raised the shield to form a protective orb around them. Willow looked up to the ceiling. Nothing there, except for a few spider webs. They moved slowly down the corridor, pacing in unison towards their bedroom. Willow stared at the door and it swung open, revealing an empty room. She frowned, her brow furrowing as they moved in. “It’s clear.” Tara nodded. The room was fine – although Willow reminded herself that they should have tidied up. Her moomoo pajamas were lying scrumpled on the floor together with Tara’s nightdress, a result of their antics this morning. She smiled at the memory, then remembered that they were in a life-or-death situation and went back to intense concentration.

“Bathroom?” enquired Tara.

“Okay.” They resumed the movement, checking the bathroom, Dawn’s room, Buffy’s room…

“There’s nothing here.” Tara’s voice was a mixture of frustration and happiness.

“Then why did the spell go off?”

“Maybe it was just a false alarm.”

“Wait… we checked downstairs, up here… that still leaves…”

“The basement…” finished Tara. Willow nodded in agreement and moved to the top of the stairs. Tara grabbed her arm. “As we’ve gone up a floor there’s no way we can tell it hasn’t too. If we were caught on the stairs, we’d be forced up here and it would be harder to escape. I couldn’t do it downstairs, but in our room we have those crystals. We can do a ‘lost-traveller’ spell and get an emissary to check first.”

“Good idea”. Willow remembered that spell. She’d tried to do it when they were trapped inside the frat house with the Irish fear demon, but it’d gone all wonky due to his influence – plus, she had later learned, you needed crystals to help maintain summoning spells. The witches cautiously moved back into the bedroom. Tara dropped the shield, walking to the little peacock by the bed and opening it, taking out two entwined crystals. Willow watched her: “You need any help with that?”

“N-no thanks. Y-you keep w-watch.” Willow noticed Tara’s nervous stutter had made a reappearance. She’d come such a long way, you wouldn’t even know she had a stutter if you met her now. Willow stood by the door and kept watch as Tara sat in her typical cross-legged style by the bed, the crystals in her palm. Tara dropped her voice so that it was barely audible and began to whisper: “Aradia, Goddess of the lost, the path is murky, the woods are dense. Darkness prevails. I beseech thee, bring the light.” The crystal shimmered and a small green light hovered in front of Tara’s face. Willow felt apprehensive, even though she knew it was okay. But then again, last time she’d done this spell, the guides had attacked her like a swarm of bees. Tara continued to whisper: “Guide us to the true path. Evil lurks within these walls. Lead us to it.” The light flashed and hovered towards the door, past Willow and to the top of the stairs. They followed it down the stairs, through the dining room to the kitchen and basement access. Willow placed her hand on the doorknob and pushed it open slowly. The door creaked as it swung, in true horror movie fashion. The light flew down the stairs, and hovered, waiting for them. Willow held up her hands and formed a bolt of poppy-coloured energy, ready to hurl it at anything that dared approach. She slowly moved into the blackness. Tara formed a similar bolt, flooding the basement with light. The messenger moved into the middle of the basement and vanished. Willow carefully looked around, frowning. “There’s nothing here”, she spoke out loud. There was a sudden flash as something moved, a dark, shadowy form flying at her. Willow cried out as she was thrown to the floor, the energy bolt flying away and smashing into a bookcase, sending debris throughout the room. The blackness smothered her face and she fell back, head colliding painfully with the floor. She heard Tara cry her name before sliding into blackness.





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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Eleven - Us

Postby justin » Mon Apr 14, 2003 8:07 am

Again with the evil cliffhangers :evil



Well I guess that every story needs a bit of tension.



I'll just have to trust that things work out okay :pray



I understand, you should be with the person you l-love


I am


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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Eleven - Us

Postby LostWithoutTara » Mon Apr 14, 2003 8:08 am

Sorry, but evil cliffhangers are too much fun. Promise the next part will start to resolve things slightly.

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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Eleven - Us

Postby Stroke of Luck » Mon Apr 14, 2003 11:36 am

Just another cliffhanger teaser!!! You :evil



Hope that nothing happens to Willow:pray

Wonder what that black shadow thing would be:hmm



Hmmm hope you update really soon want to :read more!



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



There are two kinds of tears, tears for those who leave you, and tears for those you never let go - Gabrielle/The Quest

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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Eleven - Us

Postby Grimlock72 » Mon Apr 14, 2003 11:54 am

Heh,



Nothing SHOULD be in the basement right ? Why not pre-emptively clean it up using an nice broad-range spell ?



Besides, who says that the evil-siren-spell limits itself to the house ? Maybe there are evil zombies beneath the house, build on a former graveyard or such. Wait a sec.... wrong movie :-)



That make-me-fast-and-strong-spell would have been helpfull right now :D . Still can't picture exactly how something can attack Willow frontal and still miss the fireball like that, bit strange. Then again, dark shadow who want to kill people are generally considered 'strange'.



Grimmy

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She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Eleven - Us

Postby LostWithoutTara » Mon Apr 14, 2003 1:07 pm

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Then again, dark shadow who want to kill people are generally considered 'strange'.




:rofl



There is a reason why the fireball didn't hit, but it's a nice simple one. All is explained next part. :D

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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Twelve - Black Lightning

Postby LostWithoutTara » Tue Apr 15, 2003 7:06 am

Part Twelve – ‘Black Lightning’



Willow opened her eyes as she slowly regained consciousness. She was aware of a warm feeling on her upper chest. Tara was knelt by her, holding a compress to her head. She looked worried. Willow felt dazed and confused. She slowly sat up, Tara placing her hand on her back to guide her, the other hand maintaining its position with the compress on the back of her head. Willow felt scrabbling movements on her chest, which then subsided. She could make out something black, but her vision was a bit blurry from the fall. “What happened?” she asked slowly.

“You-you were only out for a minute.”

“I fell… Something hit me…”

Tara looked nervous but slightly amused. Willow was startled by a loud noise coming from her side. She looked down to see Miss Kitty staring at her with big, innocent eyes, purring contentedly. “Huh?”

“Miss Kitty… she was up on the pipes…” Tara said sheepishly. “I think the magic bolts must have scared her… so she jumped down… and from that height, the force was enough to knock you down…”

Willow foggily remembered the shadow flying towards her. That must have been why her bolt missed… Miss Kitty was too small for it to hit.

“Oh…” She was suddenly aware of the pain in her head.

“When you fell, you hit your head. There’s a little blood…” The cool compress felt nice against her skin, which felt burning hot. Tara stared at her. “I think we should get you to a hospital, get you checked for concussion…”

“No… I mean, I’m fine. Being knocked unconscious is like a Scooby rite of passage. But if anyone asks, it was a big, flesh-eating demon, and not a… kitten.” She wrinkled her nose, lost in thought. “Then why did the sirens go off? And the traveller spell lead us down here? Miss Kitty… hardly evil, is she?”

“I don’t know, but there aren’t any big evil people with light-sucking knives of death, so I’m happy.”

“I suppose, but I don’t get it. Perhaps the house is built on an Indian burial ground or something. The amount of stuff that happens here, it wouldn’t surprise me.”

Tara was nervous at the anger in Willow’s voice. But then again, if she’d been the victim of a flying feline she’d be annoyed too. But at least the Miss Kitty theory didn’t result in gory death. It made more sense, too, After all, they’d been sat in the living room like sitting ducks for an hour. If Willow’s black-haired woman had been in the house then, she wouldn’t have passed up the opportunity to deal out some slice and dice. Willow turned to her.

“Did you say there was some blood?”

“Oh, no… not much, you have nothing to worry about, sweetie.”

“No, some blood is good… I saw a spell in the book. It needs blood, and now we have it…”



Shadi was annoyed. She’d had the perfect opportunity to kill them. All she had to do was rise from the earth beneath the basement and they’d have been dead. But she’d been stupid and let herself be caught by that stupid spell. Her knife was useless against that. Sure, if someone wanted to throw magic bolts at her, then fine, but passive defensive spells were harder to step around. She’d become shadow as soon as the sirens had begun to blare, moved onto the roof. She had to get a talisman to protect her from any more shielding or barriers they’d put up. She didn’t have much time left before it would happen. She cursed. Forty years of slumber had left her careless, lacking her previous skills. But every minute she was acclimatising to the new world, growing stronger. She’d be back at night, under the veil of darkness. And she’d bring some friends.



Willow sat on the couch, holding the tea towel Tara had been pressing against her head. There was some blood, but not much. But she was always one to be resourceful. Five years of Scoobydom had taught her that everyone was useful. She could use the blood in the black lightning spell. It was exciting. She’d felt the pull of the magic volume as soon as she’d picked it up. And now she could try a super-powerful spell. Tara sat next to her.

“I don’t know if you should do this, Willow.”

“Why?”

“Because you just had a bad fall and you’re hurt. You shouldn’t be playing around with powerful magics in your condition.”

“Don’t worry. I’ll be fine.”

“Willow, I mean it. The spell requires a blood ritual for a reason. ‘Darkness Reborne’ is a rare and guarded text for a reason. I don’t even know how Giles got hold of it. It’s just that the spells are old and powerful. Black magic at that level… it’s dangerously luring. People can get sucked in by the power and completely lose themselves.”

“Tara, it’s just one spell. Besides, we need it if we don’t want to be dead. It’s not like I’m some weakling witch who can’t handle a simple spell. I’m powerful. I managed to fight a God and hold my ground.”

“I know that, Willow. I know you’re powerful, and I trust you. But you don’t… you don’t always have the proper… respect… for magic.”

“I do! You know I do! Okay, I might have messed up a couple of times, but I’m not an amateur any more. I totally respect the dark forces.” Tara bit her lip. The last thing they wanted to have was an argument right now. And she didn’t want to upset Willow. But what she’d said was true. Willow looked at magic like a science experiment – if you go wrong, just do another spell. As much as Tara loved her, she had to admit that Willow was very defensive when it came to magic. She didn’t like to be questioned, felt it was like a direct attack on her. Tara wondered: why did Willow feel that she had to be an uber-witch? What was she compensating for in her life? Willow had always been sweet, funny and smart, and confident… or had she?

“I didn’t mean to question you, Willow. Just… just let me help, okay? I trust you with everything, but this magic is strong. If we’re both present we can control it better… no nasty surprises.” Willow nodded, appeased.

“Okay, we need a bowl to put this in, and some salt to spread around” she said, holding up the tea towel. “And then it’s just an incantation, in English – so no funny words to pronounce.” Tara nodded and got up, going to the kitchen to fetch the things. When she got back, Willow was sat on the floor, the book in her lap. Tara sat down opposite her, placing the bowl in the centre. “Ready?”

Willow nodded. “Okay, let’s do it.”



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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Twelve - Black Lightning

Postby justin » Tue Apr 15, 2003 8:03 am

Great update. I see you decided to give us a break from the evil cliff hangeryness :D



This part shows some great insight into the characters



Quote:
I managed to fight a God and hold my ground.




Willows obviously forgotten the saying about pride coming before a fall.



Quote:
why did Willow feel that she had to be an uber-witch? What was she compensating for in her life? Willow had always been sweet, funny and smart, and confident… or had she?




This is very true. I'd always felt through learning magic Willow had been trying to compensate for the lack of attention when she was younger, and the resulting low self esteem.



It's ironic that by concentrating on just powerful offensive spells Willow is ignoring the magics that would do them the most good. I.E. defensive spells that wouldn't be blocked by Shadi's knife.



I understand, you should be with the person you l-love


I am


justin
 


Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Twelve - Black Lightning

Postby Stroke of Luck » Tue Apr 15, 2003 10:39 am

:applause another great update :applause



Shadi is damn clever, wonder when Willow and Tara see her again!:hmm And maybe the next time with a more powerfull spell



But I dont like to see Willow so much in that black magic, I don´t know, but I still got that feeling, that she is to deep into that magic:tear



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



There are two kinds of tears, tears for those who leave you, and tears for those you never let go - Gabrielle/The Quest

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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Twelve - Black Lightning

Postby Grimlock72 » Tue Apr 15, 2003 12:38 pm

Nah, Shadi isn't all that clever. She just uses methods the scoobies haven't encountered before. I they knew about demons floating out of the ground and such they would have watched their step in the basement. Good thing miss kitty didn't get fried though, kinda difficult to get over that :-).



Soooo Shadi doesn't like defensive spells much. I suppose thats good as in it helps to remain alive long enough to do a good offensive spell to get rid of Shadi once and for all.



Willow didn't stand her ground against a God all that long btw. The first time she tried she did some damage, true... but still had to be rescued by Buffy. The second time around was (a) a suprise attack and (b) involved rescueing Tara, both provide some extra power/concentration.



It would be interesting to know to WHO Willow wants to look like such a good witch. It can't be Tara because Willow should know that Tara loves her anyway and besides that she doesn't judge being a witch on the spells one can do.



Quote:


Willow had always been sweet, funny and smart, and confident…






She has always been sweet, funny and smart... true enough. The trouble was/is the she doesn't display that well. She keeps to herself much which doesn't help to get self-confidence of course.



I wonder if doing the blood-ritual together is the enjoining Shadi seems to want to prevent so much. If it is, I don't see Shadi coming back in time to stop it... she has to fetch an amulet first and then to break the protection-spell.



P.S. To Willow: please don't use that lightening spell inside the house, ok ? :)



Grimmy

--

She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

Edited by: Grimlock72 at: 4/15/03 11:40:19 am
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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Twelve - Black Lightning

Postby LostWithoutTara » Tue Apr 15, 2003 1:45 pm

Yes, Willow should know that Tara loves her regardless, but she doesn't really. The main flaw in Willow's character is that she's never really understood why people would love her for her as she doesn't love her for her. She thinks that Tara at least partially loves her because of the magics she can work. That will be her problem and that's why she sank so low in S6. Once I've resolved the Shadi story, I might continue and rewrite S6, but make it in character for her.



Willow held her ground okay against Glory, but then again Tara doesn't know the whole story of what happened, what with the being crazy and all :)



Yes, Ms Kitty not being roasted is always a good thing. :D



Finally, nope, it's not the blood ritual Shadi wants to stop...

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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part Twelve - Black Lightning

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Tue Apr 15, 2003 6:00 pm

Since you're an updating maniac (which only makes me like you *more*:clap ) I'll remark on your zinger from one or two ago:
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The door creaked in true horror movie fashion.
You give me visions of "The call...it's coming from inside the house!" and "Don't Go In the Basement!"Brrr.:shock :D



Personally I don't find Willow that different from a lot of folks who define themselves by what they DO. I think our identity can get wrapped up in titles and jobs sometimes. Tara is a strong woman who (among other things) helps stop apocalypses; makes pancakes (funny-shapes and rounds); feels deeply about other people; thinks outside the box about art and astronomy and love; practices Wicca. Willow is a powerful witch - not an *amateur* any more! It's not ALL she is to Tara or others - but it does seem true that it does come down to self-image and definition.:hmm



Thanks for giving me things to think about in between the devilish cliff-hangers and worry over any upcoming show-downs.;)



~Suse

Cindy Lou Who
 


Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part 13 - The Crackwhore In Me

Postby LostWithoutTara » Wed Apr 16, 2003 8:13 am

Sorry, but I just couldn't resist the pun on S7...;)



Part Thirteen – ‘The Crackwhore In Me'



Willow lifted up the volume. “First, we need to spread the salt around the bowl in the shape of a pentagram.” She paused. “It always bugged me why people think pentagrams are all big with the evil. I mean, hello? Do these people ever talk to real witches? Stupid media and hack writers… blecch.” Tara stood up, holding the packet of salt. She was really nervous. This would be the most dangerous spell she’d ever done. She was a more heal-y, balancing witch, and this black magic did not sit well with her. Why did all the really powerful things always have to be evil, and why weren’t there any super-powerful white magic spells? Good always seemed to be several steps behind evil. In a world of vampires and demons, the powers that be sent one teenage girl to fight them. To be honest, it was ridiculous. Willow continued. “The salt acts to purify, you know, forming a sacred space to contain the magics as they form and prevent everything being zapped.” Tara poured carefully, forming the pentagram. In their haste, they’d forgotten to lay any newspaper down. She hoped the salt wouldn’t get trapped in the carpet. Then again, she’d washed a fair amount of blood and demon pus out of it, so a few salt grains shouldn’t matter. From behind her, Miss Kitty leapt up onto the sofa, perching on the edge and watching intently. Willow got up and picked her up. “Sorry, Miss Kitty, but we can’t have you in here while we do this. The last thing we want is for you to enter the sacred space and turn into a six-foot fire-breathing monster. Again.”



Five minutes later, Miss Kitty meowed indignantly at being stuck in the pet carrier. “It’s okay, sweetie,” Willow called. “Promise, we won’t be long. And you didn’t want to go outside in the rain, so this is the best compromise we could make.”

She and Tara sat around the bowl and tea towel, joining hands and shutting their eyes like they had done earlier for the siren spell. Willow felt her heart start to beat faster with excitement. This was it, she was sure. If she could do this, she’d be super-Willow. No one could ever hurt her or Tara again. And she’d be able to help Buffy better with the slaying when they brought her back. Instead of being a sidekick, she could be an equal to the Slayer! The thought was enticing, but first she had to do the spell.



“The blood has been shed, born from living flesh. By Satanus, we offer this to the dark ones, a gift from those who wish for the power…” Tara’s eyes flashed open. Satanus!!?? Willow hadn’t mentioned anything about that. They were getting in too deep. “… Grant us the power, the strength of the black lightning, the tool by which battles are won. Take our offering, the gift from the sisters of Gaia, those who walk the earth in leverage to thee.” Wind began to blow into the house. Tara tried to pull away, but it felt as if her hands were sealed to Willow’s with superglue. Miss Kitty hissed angrily from her cage. Huge black sparks emerged from the bowl, flooding out in an explosion, bouncing back as they hit the magical walls from the salt barrier. “Grant us the power!!” A huge flash lit the room, blinding Tara. It subsided, and she could see again. The bowl was empty, except for the ashes of the now-roasted tea towel. She stared at Willow and suppressed her shock, staring at her blankly. Where Willow’s hair had once been red, it was now a rich black, with waves of purple and electric blue. Her eyes had become fully pupil, skin covered in rich black veins, lips also blackened against her pale skin. Willow stared at her: “What?” Tara felt a wave of panic rise through her body, her heart pounding. There was another flash, and suddenly Willow was returned to normal, red hair, pale skin – but this time, thankfully veinless.

“Your face…” Tara uttered softly. Willow looked worried, putting her hands to her face.

“What do you mean?” Willow jumped up and ran to the mirror, thoroughly checking her reflection. She turned back. “There’s nothing wrong, Tara. You scared me.”

“The spell…”

“I don’t know what happened. I didn’t feel anything. I don’t even know if it worked.”

“There was this wind, and flashes…”

“Huh?” Willow frowned. “No there weren’t. We were just sat there the whole time. I think I’d have noticed if there were gale-force winds in here or whatever.” She paused. “Are you sure you’re okay? You look really creeped.” Tara really was creeped. Something had happened during the spell, or had it? Maybe she’d imagined it. Willow’s aura seemed the same. When Buffy and Faith had switched bodies, she could tell easily. Willow seemed fine. Her aura was at it should have been. Willow held out a hand to help Tara to her feet. Tara accepted it and stood.

“I have to say I’m a little disappointed. I got all knocked out for nothing.”



Rack had felt a surge of power go by a minute before. It was Red, he could tell. His little strawberry was getting into the dark stuff. She’d be right back with him soon. Tasting power changes you. You can only run hot so long before you crash back down. That’s where he could help. He’d aided her lust for power. And soon she’d come to him for more.





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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part 13 - The Crackwhore In Me

Postby justin » Wed Apr 16, 2003 9:32 am

A great update



I have to say I don't much like that spell or the effects it had on Willow.



I really don't like the fact that she lied to Tara about the spell they were casting.



I can understand Willow's reasons for wanting to cast the spell, wanting to protect Tara and be more help to Buffy, but I don't think this is the right way to go about it.



I understand, you should be with the person you l-love


I am


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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part 13 - The Crackwhore In Me

Postby LostWithoutTara » Wed Apr 16, 2003 11:22 am

I don't really know if Willow would have lied per se, she just omitted a few details Tara should have known. This is kinda the start of the second story arc for this fic, and I'll start developing it further soon, but of course they have Shadi to deal with...

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Re: New Fic: Hand of Fate - Part 13 - The Crackwhore In Me

Postby Stroke of Luck » Wed Apr 16, 2003 11:47 am

Willow havend told Tara the hole spell!!:shock Oh oh I hope Willow wouldn´t get to much into that black magic. And why doesn´t she remember anything that happens when she was black magic Willow:hmm



Is she in two different worlds when she turns into black magic? I am curious:paranoid



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



Man sieht nur mit dem Herzen gut, das Wesentliche ist für die Augen unsichtbar - Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

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