ok stay there I'll br right back with at least 50 words of smut!!!!!!She stood on it a began to unscrew the the vent cover.She removed it and placed the gun inside.She then put the cover back on.

Dammit woman I am here with you on this but I cant read the fic cause I have my hands over my eyes and all I can say is I cant look, I cant look someone tell me when its over angst is killing me throw us a rope please. 

So Grrrr...
Well ya see Juju,I did this as a favor to you.You now have a visual to go along with the feeling of Tara riding you next time.This is something you could have only imagined up till this point,but by having Donnie do the honor,you can now observe and see the true wonder of Tara's ass as it bounces up and down while she is riding...so Visual to go along with the physical?And I say your welcome in advance for that as well...It's Donnies who's riding me?!!!
Should have bitten Susn't ass off. Oooooh I have something....
Ummmmm....that's..thats ummm yea...something that is..uhhu...OOWWIIEE...poor little thing..Millo should bite Susn's center and tear off her . OUTCH.
And Juju should go back from Kentucky to bite off Susan's nipples; a girl I used to ride with had been bitten at one of her nipple, half torn... She had suffered month while it was healing, wear special bra 'cause when her breast moved it hurt like hell...
..I think that perhaps you have even frightened MissKittyB away..
Well thank you sweetie, that ming for you is:aww .More seriously (yes I can be serious sometimes I swear). I think you have got a pretty twis imag... I love it.
And yet it continues to rise, this bar of yoursSo I think Susan could have bother her nipples bitten off, as well as her. and then been tied up to Juju's saddle and make Juju gallops beautifuly... Her hair in the wind and all;.. The grace of a champion in her galop... Her thin legs, her muscular thighs... What a beautiful mar!
Yuckie..Do you know how we make foie gras? Well I don't know how to explain in English, but it would be fun to do this to Susan. Of course we couldn't make fois gras from her stomach 'cause she is just poison.
.Hannibal Lector fantasy again?
Jaws?We could also do a remake of... Huh... Errr... Don' t rememeber the English title right now... Ya know with the sharks...
IWhat a bitch... I am so disappointed by phil. Is he the one who has shot Will in the back? And fucking bitch hidding the gun at Tara's and changing her ID thing in her phone.
Great update ... even though I do hate to see the girls in so much pain!
Yes.It is rough this road but there is much goodness to come and not far off either.
Hehehehe I wasn't smut but it was a wonderful update indeed Jay..and SHE HAS SUSAN???????? ok stay there I'll br right back
with at least 50 words of smut!!!!!!
Ok I posted..welll it's not smut, but it's really sweet!!! and
there's kissage!!! pleaseeee
Thank you Jay your a little sweetie..
Yes.I know.If only someone could...perhaps Dr.Dolittle is available??Yay for update-y goodness... I hope someone could talk to Milo
so they could find out how big bitch Susan really is...
gotta say, I love that the parents are on their girl's
I think it maybe kind of fun..
.LOL
Yes..Millo and Sheila are two wonderful characters in my mind.I really love them both and I hope I am writing them as I see themAnd good old Millo. Man, I wish he could talk to Will and
spill the beans on that creep Susan. Maybe she'll get the
hint, well, if she's not too drunk.
LOL cause up there in my little brain circus they totally rock...LOL
Then to our girls, Tara's loosing weight and Willow's hit the
bottle. You really love to lay it on thick, don't ya? I swear,
the pay off for all this better be good considering the pain
they're going through.
Dammit woman I am here with you on this but I cant read the fic cause I have my hands over my eyes and all I can say is I cant look, I cant look someone tell me when its over angst is killing me throw us a rope please

hehe gotcha good SheilaMillo ,who had been watching the scene with great interest raised a paw and covered his eye's .She raised it up and spilled the water over Willow's head.

no....no....you can't do this...and did I say no??? I'll cry you a river if you do that! well, if miss-bitchy-f******-suzie does that, but since she's your character then you"Damn straight I am.That's alright though.I'll take care of him real soon."
"Oh? Well just how will you do that?"
"How do you think baby?"
Phil laughed in the background."Well I know that you'll get rid of him I meant how?"
pweaseeeee!!!There was something here though.Something that would not be revealed for quite some time.This, you see, was the day that things would begin to change forever.

I like her"Oh shut up.Don't be such a big whinny baby.I thought you were a "Officer" Elina said using finger quotes.

Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 1:22 pm
Bad Rosemary!!!
Juju will not see her ass bouncing but she will be able am sure to see her boobies bouce.

I must say, I am very sad to not have MissKitty smart assing in this , the very first KittyB less update..I sure hope all is well...
thou must be spanked and pecked at!!!
Okay, I dont think that'll be a punishment, I'll just enjoy it sooo... Oh, I will take all the smart assed remarks from you! That's not gonna work either because I like that. Humm, damn, I cant think of anything. Well if you think of a good punishment, I'm all for it Queen Rosemary. Please forgive me. Is Spooky mad at me too? Tell him he can peck at me when he's threw pecking at you. lol I love you Spooky come peck away!
lol
MILLO!! Please dont hurt Millo! Please!! Pretty please!! I love him!!
Dont hurt him! PLEASE!! Leave him be! Not Millo!
Still loving the way your writing her. See we really needed her for the story. Who else is going to help Officer Rosenberg and get off her ass, try to get better, and get back to being Willow? Only the great Sheila Rosenberg. (Hopefully Tara, eventually)
Dont cha think she'd do the same to you? Again I say what a dumbass. But what goes around comes around. SO I'm not complaining.
Loved both updates Rose. This time, I'll be here cheering for the next update. Promise! SO I'll just say on my computer till you update.
There was something here though.Something that would not be revealed for quite some time.This, you see, was the day that things would begin to change forever.
Like Tara, Willow too was unaware of the significance of this day.But as it was for Tara, so it was for Officer....




Dear Rosemary, greet the brand new day
The sun is up, the sky is blue
It's beautiful and so is your fic
Dear Rosemary won't you come out and write...
Dear Rosemary open up your eyes
Dear Rosemary see the readers' wait
The wind is low the birds will sing
That you are part of the kitten board
Dear Rosemary won't you write an update?
Look around round
Dear Rosemary let me see you write
Dear Rosemary like a little child
The clouds will be a daisy chain
So let me see you write again
Dear Rosemary won't you let me see you write?
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Please Rosy I will send my bikini clad msn wife to clean your pool. 

Ohhh.Its okay Jay.I promise...............no....no....you can't do this...and did I say no??? I'll cry you a river if you do that! well, if miss-bitchy-f******-suzie does that, but since she's your character then you
pweaseeeee!!!
I like her
And here we go.Ya see,you people do this.Not me.You like her.No.She is a scrappy little thing and she is going to be some fun in here for sure...Willow really needs is a kick in the ass to get her up and moving.
And she is going to get one very soon.More then one...
And I love her therapist too, who also isn't taking any shit.
LOL...Yes.Her plans havent been going to well as of late.There is a bit of a turn coming in the update after this one,which by the way,will not be to far off, and this is going to really get heated up for many people..Its a fun thing for sure to write the next bit after this update.I expect some severe lashing out from people at her next move.....but it is all in the name of plot right?Seems Susan has some complications with her little "plan" to off Phil. Well, I'm glad her plans don't always work out. She tried to have Willow killed, but it didn't work, tried to have Sheila killed, but that also didn't work. And now, whoever her evil partner is also failed to finish the job on Phil. Oh, I love it when she doesn't get what she wants.
I won't.It is going to be clear here soon.I say about three more updates and this will all come together...Now I can't wait to see why this day is so significant for both our girls. Please don't leave us hanging too long.
Yes.They are both a couple of tough cookies...I like writing Shelia for sure.The PT is going to be a big player here as well so I think you will enjoy it for sure.Go Sheila! Tough love is definately the route to go with Willow, and her PT ain't gonna take that feeling sorry for herself shit either.
Sorry for that.The teasing does indeed suck.It is a little bit clearer here but not to much.Can't say I like the tease with the whole significant day thing. Dammit, I hate being left hanging, so you better tell us soon Missy
This,I can say with confidence to you.No,nothing to bad will happen to Millo....I like him too much..Looks like Susie's plans are starting to go just a tad wrong, for that I'm pleased, but please, please please, leave Millo alone. Promise nothing or no-one is gonna hurt the little doggie?
Its not is it? I will have to be careful to not do this again..it was unintentianal I assure you...Interesting that in this update neither Willow or Tara made any reference about the other. That is not of the good.
Sheila will soon have a thing happen that is going to kick start this game and very soon this story is going to be moving at a very quick pace.Good that Sheila isn't taking shit from Willow... I hope her memory comes back soon... I really really hope that the bitch monsters plan to kill Milo fails miserably and her part in shooting Willow and trying to kill Sheila comes to light...
Bad Rosemary
Bad?
Really ?
Who,Juju,have you been talking to ?
How are ya today?
How're the kids?
Yat is fine...lonely but fine..no dusty .she is in the dark to as too the how are they thing.We know theyre fine cause they call at odd hours and leave messages..How's the bird?
I dont know.I wish I did.Its scarry really to be left in the dark.They never tell me anything....WTF will happen to change things forever, and will it be changed for good or for bad?
You got me all worried.
Sorry for that Sweetie.Don't worry...Its me.I always write happy things.you know this..
Im sure they do.Poor mar... Foaling that way is owie.. And yes, often it is death... For one of them at least... But miracles happen don't they?
In nice fics.....
It is.Its failing badly.I will warn you.The next update after this?Badness for the good guysSusan Bitch's plan is frailing somewhat
......Goddness for the badguys....
LOLOoooh maybe Phil has seen reason and has turned himself in? Yeah?
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...No
Yes.She will.And it will be bad....sad and bad...oh...there is no way to combine these two words eo do that funny thing like spork or spuffy or bragolina....you know...that thingOr mayb esusan bitch has tried to kill Millo! But she can't 'cause he's the Heroe here.
Now, to the serious. I frighten you?
Ok maybe I can't of am firghtening sometimes... Not now though 'cause I have no idea of how to kill Susan..
Really?. Painfully...
Well may a little scarry but nothing majorWell, maybe she could be thrown injail wearing an Iron Mask and ending unknown of her own jailer 'cause nobody will never name her or see her face and seh'll die of infection on her face...
Well a lot really.You do frighten me a lot
Tottally frightning you are.well if she's wearing an Iron Mask, sealed, she can't wash her face... yucky yuck)
..and a bit twisted too.
...kinnda sexy and ggrroowwlll really..
...to a nutjob..
..mental instute escapy,serial killer,strange torchery person..
.but still juju,sexy non the less..Death by stampeding Pole Goddess worshippers...yummieshe could also be walked on by thousands of hysteric Mylène fans... That'd be nice
LOL LOL LOLAnyway, no I don't lik ethe visual of Tara's ass bouncing off while riding, 'cause she is ridign another horse, I want her to ride Juju!!! Don't worry about the visual, horses have a large view Juju will not see her ass bouncing but she will be able am sure to see her boobies bouce.
LOL LOL LOL
LOL LOL..
..youre a perv...Its clear to me....Juju is a perv...I had no idea...but there it is....PERV....
Juju wrote Beatles at me..Dear Rosemary, won't you come out to write
Dear Rosemary, greet the brand new day
The sun is up, the sky is blue
It's beautiful and so is your fic
Dear Rosemary won't you come out and write...
Dear Rosemary open up your eyes
Dear Rosemary see the readers' wait
The wind is low the birds will sing
That you are part of the kitten board
Dear Rosemary won't you write an update?
Look around round
Look around round round
Look around
Dear Rosemary let me see you write
Dear Rosemary like a little child
The clouds will be a daisy chain
So let me see you write again
Dear Rosemary won't you let me see you write?
..I can die happy now.
No one has ever done this.
.Im touched..
...really...I kid you not.and the dancing guys.
..
.
You Juju,are after me in a sexual way arent you??
I know it now.
..its obvious..
.No????
You don't???
Really???
Okay...
..and songs LOL
Thank you.I hope you like the rest...so for this is a great story
Okay.I willI'm here. I'm here, I'm here!!! See, I work overtime and miss my favorite fanfic update. Twice! Sooo Smart ass me! I'm here!! lol
I dont know....where?Where the hell have I been?!
Ohhhhh..I'm a bad fan, thou must be spanked and pecked at!!!
..yummm.....We aim to please Kitty...
...both of us
Oh, I will take all the smart assed remarks from you!
Really? I dont beleive you.
Your credibillity has been damaged here...
.missing updates is sinful To the GQR...
as is changing the name on your beast...
That's not gonna work either because I like that. Humm, damn, I cant think of anything. Well if you think of a good punishment, I'm all for it
You Kitty,have just left the gate wwwiiidddeeee ooopppeeennnn
Sorry...hes run off with a band of rats to play music in a coffee bar in Vegas..Queen Rosemary. Please forgive me. Is Spooky mad at me too? Tell him he can peck at me when he's threw pecking at you. lol I love you Spooky come peck away!
...for money.
well theres a visualThou must comence with the feedback.... Here's it goes. I think I might start off on my knees begging...
Yea...okay.MILLO!! Please dont hurt Millo! Please!! Pretty please!! I love him!!"Dont hurt him! PLEASE!! Leave him be! Not Millo!
See, I said this before in one of your updates and what did you tell me "Humm, you'll just have to wait and see." I was right wasnt I. I knew it. Susan hell bitch is going to try and frame Tara. Am I right? Hun? Hun?!
..she is indeed.I would hate to be a criminal in your district...Iumm, when are we going to see Susie hell bitch get disemboweled or get ran over by and SUV? Gotta say the more I read her dialogue the more I want her to die in the most horrible, painful, gruesome way ever.
suggest you get with Juju on this.She is into this face thing to now.Like the mask of flesh you where weilding about a while ago?She has this metal one going now..intresting to see what you will come up with.
P.S Boobs... Dont ask lol
Thanks Kitty,for the feedback.Well thanks for this...I am inspired to write volumes due to this unbeleivable feedback....LOLlove you bunches but I have nothing to say to you right now
Kidding Dia,you know right??
Oh well....tell you what,keep the bikini,send the hot chick and we'll call it square....Please Rosy I will send my bikini clad msn wife to clean your pool
LOL...Thats funny.I have done this very thinfg as well.I am glad your enjoying the story.I am enjoying writing it.Hey I didn't even realise that this story had been updated ... great work. And Willow has to get out of her funk and sort her shit out - but it's good plot development. But I'm sure you will fix this up soon??? And get our girls together???
Hopefully Millo wont get killed... That'll be tragic really. I like him.
Please update so we can find out what happens next.
The thought crossed her mind then that perhaps this was of issue,Sneaking actions in order to drink screamed problem drinker at her but she chose to ignore this.She had that thought cleared away from her mind as she heard the clerk ask for ID.
Willow turned her head to her mother sharply and said"What?"
"yes,she thinks its her fault.She sent you to the store,was angry you were late.This is why she is gone.Not any other reason."
"Did she tell you this? When did she say...Did She?"

"Why do you have to be so sarcastic all the time? What's wrong with you? Are you worried that maybe it is really why?And that you may have to get over this self pity kick of yours? Or are you scared? Afraid to keep her down because of the accident? Whatever it is,you need to get over it.Or you will never get better"

"Yea,I agree.God ,I hate this. Im just so tired of all of this sadness everywhere I go.I must be some kind of bad luck or something."Tara said as the tears started to sting her eyes.
Something he never wanted to use,but knew was necessary to save this poor animal from the suffering she was enduring.
She did this.It had to be her.She was the one who maneuvered this baby and she must have done something wrong when she turned him around in order to allow him to be delivered.No.I wont run.Not again.She spoke to herself.I can't.

Save him and he'll save her.I promise

"Oh Fuck...I Don't believe this.."She said to herself as she realized she had just been busted..Shop lifting...liquor
Tara looked up,smiled at the colt and said,"Officer".


[/quote]After a few moments ,Tara made her way over to the colt,kneeled down , and began to wrap the bad foot.It was the left front foot and she knew that this was a difficult injury to hope for success.
She also knew that he would recover.She knew this .At least she wanted to beleive.She still had a bit of doubt,but her positive thinking was far stronger then this due to the clear messages she had picked up from his Mama.
"What are ya going to name him?"Donnie asked.
Tara looked up,smiled at the colt and said,"Officer".
As always I loved the update well worth wanting for .



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