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Re: Update: Chapter 4

Postby Jennpurr » Mon Sep 15, 2003 9:37 pm

Hee... I AM evil, what can I say?



:evil



Jen

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"One thing I don't understand," Willow went on, laying herself down on top of Tara's legs, with her head resting on her stomach, "is how you don't just lock yourself in your room and play with yourself all day."
Tara laughed, which caused her chest to shudder quite expressively, and Willow to, "Mmmm," again. "Hellebore," Chapter 20 by Chris Cook

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Re: Update: Chapter 4

Postby foreverpiper » Mon Sep 15, 2003 9:43 pm

what? huh? what just happened there...*registers* ok...that just...that just wasnt nice...at all...in fact, in most countries that would be considered mean, evil, a horrible thing to do..take your pic! :p but dont worry, its all good, ;) you're still the fanfiction queen :bow i bow to you, hee.



well, time for bed...darned homework taking up all my time *sigh* ah well! more soon!! get's me a break from stupid school ;)



Galahad: What a strange person. French Dude: I don't want to talk to you no more, you empty headed animal food trough wiper. I fart in your general direction. Your mother was a hamster and your father smelled of elderberries. Galahad: Is there someone else up their we could talk to? French Dude: No, now go away or I shall taunt you a second time. - Monty Python

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Re: Update: Chapter 4

Postby screeminguitar » Mon Sep 15, 2003 9:52 pm

Dream!!!!! OK,mmmm-dreams are good! I think this introduces the whole attraction Willow is ignoring towards Tara again. Because, she obviously thought it was best to ignore it! True to being Willow--she does have too many thoughts! Willow falling out of bed had me cracking up!!!:lol

Tara isn't gonna ignore the attraction, she knows what she likes!:wink



Me and my pup Biscuit give this chapter two paws up!!

Thanks! Keep up the great work!

Sending you lots of love,

Marie

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Re: Update: Chapter 4

Postby thebardgirl » Mon Sep 15, 2003 10:20 pm

*thebardgirl stares with mouth hanging open pointing at screen*



:shock



You....broke....me....









Last night in sweet slumber I dreamed I did see my own precious jewel sat smiling by me.

And when I awakened I found it not so; my eyes like some fountain with tears overflowed.

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Re: Update: Chapter 4

Postby Sappho » Mon Sep 15, 2003 10:55 pm

Damn, :eek that was some vivid dream! Nicely written stuff and hopefully a preview of what is sure to come... :pray ... soon? :grin

~Sappho:bounce

Willow: Yeah, that’s me. Reliable dog geyser person.

***

Anya: Give me a beer. Bartender: I.D. Anya: [Looks at him w/ disbelief] Bartender: I.D.

Anya: I’m 1,120 years old!!! Just give me a friggin’ beer! Bartender: I.D. Anya: [Sigh] Give me a Coke.

Sappho
 


Re: Update: Chapter 4

Postby shuyaku » Mon Sep 15, 2003 10:57 pm

Smoochies :applause Dream :punish :grin



But it seems they both had the same dream, perhaps. :whistle That could be good...



More soon!

-shuyaku

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"Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

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Re: Update: Chapter 4

Postby sam darls » Tue Sep 16, 2003 2:05 am

Argh..That was a dream...noo...so unfair..Evil :p But they had nvery nice smoochies...and everything...and then it was a dream..:cry ..Hopefully, real kisses soon? Love sammi xx

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Re: Update: Chapter 4

Postby 2DIAMONDS » Tue Sep 16, 2003 9:45 am

Yes you are evil :miff

But I knew it! I. KNEW. IT.

I knew it was a dream, but seeing as though I thought I was going to melt from that kiss...not to mention seeing your avatar before...GRRRR I guess you're forgiven.



I love Buffy's teasing :rollin Maybe she can knock some sense into Willow? :)



It's great how both Willow and Tara were dreaming of each other!



Great update!



Helen

xoxo

2DIAMONDS
 


Re: Update: Chapter 4

Postby Arwen276 » Tue Sep 16, 2003 11:32 am



It IS evil to conclude the wonderful moment as a dream!



now with all the dreams, awkwardness is going to mark their interactions.





and we'll never get smoochies! for real!!!



:cry :cry



MORE PLEASE!



~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

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Re: Update: Chapter 4

Postby Taras Shadow » Thu Sep 18, 2003 8:49 am

Tease...I mean, Jen :grin



I, for one, love dreams like that...gives you a sense of comfort knowing you went a night without nightmares, heh. :p



I just curse Buffy for waking Willow up. LOL. I can't wait until the next update! Arwen's right, awkwardness will ensue probably, however, it'll be cute. :grin



Thank You!



~Holly~ :heart

"How Would You Like To Live Under My Skirt?" - Karen - Will & Grace

"Ride The Waves." - Tara - Sex Journals

Edited by: Taras Shadow  at: 9/18/03 7:51 am
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Re: Update: Chapter 4

Postby TaraFanUK » Thu Sep 18, 2003 12:32 pm

There right when they say ur a big tease! I love the twist of it being a dream, very cool, and thank for the much need smoochies!! (even if it was only a dream)

ash

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Re: Update: Chapter 4

Postby singgirl » Thu Sep 18, 2003 11:07 pm

tease!! meanie!! :(

:peace Pax! -Bev

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Re: Update: Chapter 4

Postby Tempest Duer » Fri Sep 19, 2003 6:51 pm

I don't think I believe that all these Kittens hate being teased as much as they claim to. It's good for you to be teased once in a while. Keeps you hungry for more.

Choosing not to decide is still a choice.

Tempest Duer
 


Re: Update: Chapter 4

Postby xita » Tue Sep 23, 2003 7:54 am

Jenn you had me going. I kept thinking Tara had crossed some boundaries there after Willow had said she wanted to be friends, alas it was all a dream, a shared dream though so that kinda makes it better. Oh do not forsake this fic again ;)



Look forward to more!

- - - - - - - - - - -
"Freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose."


-Me & Bobby
McGee

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Re: Update: Chapter 4

Postby bluewillowwitch » Wed Sep 24, 2003 12:17 am

:bigwave Jenn :flower ,

That was just :devilish ! :boot :punish A DREAM!!!! That s sooooooo mean of you! I loved the update though! :clap :bow . I can't wait to :read mre. Update soon, please? :pray :pray :pray :pray :pray :pray I wanna see what happens between :willow and :tara next. :bounce





bluewillowwitch :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

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update

Postby willowsgirl » Wed Oct 15, 2003 6:19 am

Hey there, just wanted to remind you that we kittens are still waiting for an update! Pretty please?!

Cant wait to find out what happens when they see each other after that dream...

;)



willowsgirl xx

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Re: update

Postby The Rose24 » Thu Oct 16, 2003 8:50 pm

I just wanted to agree with Willowsgirl. I want our ladies to really do something about their attraction to each other.



It's been a while since an update, so I hope all is well.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: update

Postby Jennpurr » Thu Oct 16, 2003 11:11 pm

Beautiful kittens, :heart



I so appreciate your patience and those of you who are still reading and wanting to read more.



I haven't gotten much writing done lately. I've been so busy with work. Actually, today while AT work, my muse decided to grace her presence and I did get a page written of a fic that has nothing to do with this one. :grin I'll finished that up tomorrow or this weekend and post that. Give you at least something to read while you wait.



I have another one started too, a one parter, that I WILL finish at some point soonish.



I haven't forgotten about Lost Letters or Eyes of the Soul. They will be finished. I have the next two chapters plotted out for Lost Letters. I just need to get them written down. Same goes for Eyes. All I ask is for a little more patience. I promise to finish them and to not disappoint.



I love you guys for your patience and your support and all of your kind words about my uncle's passing. It's still very difficult for me. I miss him everyday and think about him all the time. I don't know how I get through the days at times, but I'm trying. I really am.



Thanks again and look for an update of something soon.



Sorry I haven't answered your replies yet. I appreciate them though and just so you know, next update, there might be a little awkwardness and mixed emotions, but, never fear. All will be good and I promised little to no angst. Hope that helps some. :flirt



I love you, kittens. :kiss



See you soon.



Jen

||My Fan Fiction and More!|| ||My Yahoo Group||
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
"Well, I've been puzzling out magic babble," he began.
"Babble can be magic?" Willow grinned. "I must look into that more."
"We did come across a phrase Rupert donned, 'the Willow passage.'" Sandra smiled at her. ~ "Shades of Gray," Chapter 19 by the Rainbow Writers

Jennpurr
 


Re: update

Postby thebardgirl » Fri Oct 17, 2003 5:52 pm

Sweetness cannot describe what you are, Jen, if indeed you are dealing with such a loss, work, and crazy kittens. Do not fear for our pain, for yours comes first, and always know what we wish for, before anything else, is your happiness, thus so we can enjoy vicarious....happy....feelings....



i love the fic, and i hope that you will continue it, only, don't stress over it; i didn't know you had recently lost your uncle. Losing a friend/companion/family member is never easy (and i know, i say that all too easily seeing as i haven't lost some one so close as he was to you) but i do understand. And i might say you're dealing with it rather well....seeing as you're replying and keeping internet-contact with the kittens an' all.

As a small prayer for your uncle (although i am not religious), via Shakespeare's Hamlet, i say to you and him:

Here falls a noble heart. Good night, sweet Prince.



Feel better! Or at least keep going until you do. You will, you will, you will.

-elizabeth

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Re: update

Postby Tempest Duer » Fri Oct 17, 2003 6:43 pm

I wish you the best, Jenn.

Choosing not to decide is still a choice.

Tempest Duer
 


Re: update

Postby sam darls » Mon Oct 20, 2003 8:48 am

Take care Jen, and I hope you're doing ok. Our thought are still with you. Love sammi xx

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Re: New FIC: Dr. Maclay, DVM

Postby The Rose24 » Fri Oct 24, 2003 8:29 pm

Hi,



I am just wondering if all is well with. I hope so.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: Chapter 5

Postby The Rose24 » Thu Nov 06, 2003 8:56 pm

Geez. Jenn you are killing me. Why don't they just kiss already? Tara never misses an opportunity to touch Willow though. :wink She can't keep her hands off of her can she?



Edited



Quote:
“You want me to move?” The redhead immediately wanted to smack her forehead. That was a dumb question to ask. She was surprised however, by the response.




Tara has been waiting for any kind of signal from Willow. This is a very big signal, but why doesn't Tara take the hint? :hmm :confused





Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Edited by: The Rose24  at: 11/6/03 8:31 pm
The Rose24
 


Chapter 5

Postby Jennpurr » Thu Nov 06, 2003 9:25 pm

Hey kittens,



I appreciate all of your patience and all of your lovely messages. I can't thank you all enough.



I'm sorry it's been a while since an update. I was able to write this last night and I'm hoping to have another update by the end of the weekend.



We're almost there, kittens. Just hang in there a little bit longer, k? I promise smoochies and gay love and all hugs and puppies soon. ;)



Hope you like this update.










Title: Dr. Maclay, DVM (Doctor of Veterinary Medicine)

Author: Jennifer

Copyright © 2002 - 2003 by Jennifer Johnson

Distribution: If you would like to archive this somewhere, please ask my permission first!

Feedback: jennpurr@yahoo.com or willowtaralove@netzero.com"> willowtaralove@netzero.com Please, give me feedback. Good or bad. Feel free to tell me what you think.

Disclaimers: All characters belong to Joss Whedon/Mutant Enemy/UPN/FOX and whoever else owns the rights. This is solely for my entertainment. Please do not copyright this story. All original characters belong to me.

F/F romance: If the idea and depiction of a same sex relationship bothers you, please do not read this story.

Pairings: W/T eventually, X/A, G/Joyce, B, D

Spoilers: None

Angst Level: None

Summary: Willow is the Hospital Director of the Sunnydale Veterinary Hospital; Buffy is her Assistant Director. The Veterinarian at the clinic has left for work elsewhere, leaving a new Dr. to take his place.

Rating: PG to NC-17 (maybe) This part is PG

My Thanks: To Danie. Thanks for being my beta/friend and for helping me out with all the suggestions. You truly are gifted for writing. I hope you continue to do so. And D, don’t forget the catnip.

Dedication: To all the W/T fans. May we always keep Tara alive in our hearts.

Author's Notes: This story is absolutely AU. I may use some familiar dialogue throughout the story or mention things that may have happened on the show, but for the most part, the precipice of the fic comes from my imagination and former experience working with and growing up with animals. I hope you like this story and my way of having our girls meet up.

Additional Note: The ages of the Scoobies are around 25 years of age.

Story Note: Buffy has a daughter named, Brittany, whom carries the nickname of Breezy or Bre. I don’t have kids, so hopefully I will do an okay job with writing Brittany’s character. If anyone sees anything that is out of place or you don’t agree with something, please let me know.

Story Note 2: Buffy IS the Slayer in this story. I’m going to try to stay as close to canon as possible. The only major addition is Brittany. Dawn may be mentioned a few times or given some dialogue, but I’m not really comfortable writing her, so you may not see much of her. Anya will probably be treated the same way. This story will mostly revolve around Willow and Tara AND Buffy, of course, since she works with Willow and is the Slayer. Joyce IS still alive and married to Giles. I just love the idea of them as a couple.







FIC: Dr. Maclay, DVM (Chapter 5)

By: Jennifer







The first thing that presented itself when Willow walked in the back door to the clinic was the ringing of the phone. She had every intention of answering it, but as soon as she picked up the handset, the red flashing light that indicated the phone call, disappeared. Most likely, it had been answered.



Replacing the hand set in the cradle, she sighed. “Thanks, Buffy,” she whispered to herself.



Letting her bag fall down her arm, it ungracefully plunked down on the floor beside her office computer as she leaned over to push the ON button to boot up the machine.



Pulling out the metal chair from under the computer desk, she closed her eyes once, sat and sucked in a deep breath. She tried to calm her nerves.



To be perfectly honest, she was nervous about seeing Tara. She knew she shouldn’t be. What happened that morning had just been a dream, she knew that. However, acknowledging that factor didn’t make the now any easier.



When Tara walked through the door, she knew she would tense up and probably become a jumpy mess.



Exhaling loudly, Willow opened her eyes and was met with the smiling faces of her two best friends. She had decided on that particular photo of Buffy, Xander, and herself for her computer wallpaper, as a reminder or a focal point for her long or horrible days.



She loved her friends and didn’t know what she would do or where she would be without them in her life.



With a bright smile, matching that of Xander’s in the picture, she cupped her palm around the base of her computer mouse and moved the pointer over to a small icon on the desktop.



Double clicking the small picture of a black paw print, she watched as a pet door suddenly appeared at the bottom of her screen and a few seconds later, a black and white cat walked through it.



With the mouse still in her hand, she left clicked with her index finger and waited for the small-computerized hand to appear over Felix. Keeping the button pushed in, she moved the hand with her mouse over Felix’s back and watched as the animated feline crouched down and lifted his backside up in the air, scratching at the ground as he was petted.



“Hi, Felix,” the redhead cooed.



This was her morning ritual. The cat kept her company whenever she was working on something and spent long periods of time at her desktop.



With her computer booted up and Felix petted, she rose from her seat and walked over to the other office computer, booting it up as well.



Stretching, she headed for the office door. It was time to start her day.



*****



Walking through the door to the front of the clinic, Willow was almost pounced on by a small, hyper ball of gray, black, and tan fur.



“Brownie!” she squealed, excitedly. Taking a small step backwards, the hospital director bent down and petted the puppy.



Brownie was over-excited, his little body twitching every which way, as he licked his friend’s hands.



Luckily, Willow hadn’t gotten very far from the door. Reaching up to her left, she grabbed a few paper towels from the dispenser and leaned back down.



“You silly puppy,” her voice purred, as the Australian Shepherd puppy tried to bite at the paper towels she was using to wipe his small puddle of urine up from the floor. His tiny bladder just couldn’t stand all the excitement that he found his world blessed with.



After doing so, she threw the soiled napkins in the trashcan and lifted the puppy up.



Grunting happily, Brownie squirmed and pawed at the girl’s face as he tried his hardest to shower her skin in kisses.



Laughing, Willow made kissing noises at him, which only excited him more. She finally flipped him over onto his back, hoping he would calm down.



The new position worked almost immediately, as the puppy calmed and just looked up at Willow’s face with two expressive blue eyes. He lifted his little head up and licked her face once.



Cuddling the puppy close, the redhead hugged him to her body and kissed the back of his head.



“Hey, Will. Finally made it, huh?” Buffy teased, hanging up the phone she had been talking on. When she received a playful glare in response, she smiled.



“That was the, Doc. She’s on her way,” the blonde explained the phone call.



“Is she okay?” Willow slightly panicked, turning around and looking at the clock on the wall above the door, before she spun back around and almost dropped Brownie in the process.



“She’s late!” she squeaked.



Snorting, Buffy crossed her arms over her chest. “Uh huh. I seem to recall someone else being late, too. Hmmm, I wonder who that could be?”



Walking over to her best friend, Willow just looked at her. “I’m sorry, Buffy. I know I’ve never been late before. I mean, I’m usually here like an hour before we open. I can’t believe I overslept. It was just… this dream I was having. I didn’t want to wake up from it a-and…”



Unfolding her arms, the Slayer grabbed the other girl by the shoulders, interrupting her ramble. “Hey, it’s cool. We don’t have any patients in the back or anything, so it’s fine. Okay?”



Her voice was calm, trying to soothe away Willow’s panic. “All’s forgiven.” She squeezed her shoulders and gave her a soft smile, sliding her left hand down the hacker’s arm to pet the puppy, which was panting happily from being held.



“Thanks,” Willow replied, gratefully. “I-I wonder why Tara’s late though?” she spoke aloud.



“Well, funny you should mention that. Apparently, she overslept as well. Maybe it’s contagious.” Buffy smirked at the redhead.



“Tease,” the director quipped, lightly pushing the blonde with her puppy filled arms. Seconds later, her eyes widened and she really had to contain herself from jumping up in down with glee.



“I have to tell you about my dream,” she began.



*****



Buffy was leaning against the freezer, occasionally glancing through the door to up front, watching for customers as she and Willow were talking in the back, waiting for Tara to get there.



The blonde was having fun teasing Willow about the juicy details she had been privileged to, regarding her friend’s dream.



“You’re not going to let this go, are you?” The hospital director leaned her head back, resting it on the cabinet. She was sitting on top of the counter beside the surgery computer. Her arms were crossed over her chest while the backs of her shoes tapped the cabinet below occasionally.



It was going to be a long day.



“Nope. Not at least for… a week!” Buffy teased, drumming her fingers against the tiled surface. Her palms cupped over the edges of the freezer top on either side of her body.



Hearing the back door opening halted their conversation, as both sets of ears perked up at the noise. They didn’t have to wait long until they could match the noise to a face.



“I-I’m so sorry, I’m late. I can’t believe I overslept…” Tara’s voice trailed away towards the end, as she looked over at Willow. Her heart started to sing immediately at the sight of her crush, her dream coming back to her full throttle. What she found ironic however, was the fact that the redhead was sitting on top of the very same counter, in practically the same position as in her dream.



She would have blushed, but when she noticed that the other girl hadn’t even looked at her, she frowned in confusion.



“Hi, Dr. Maclay. Don’t worry about it. Willow overslept, too,” Buffy confessed and received a glare from her best friend. She gave her an apologetic look and smiled lightly.



“Oh,” Tara whispered and then noticed the slight tension from the redhead when she looked at her again. She turned her eyes to Buffy and motioned towards Willow with her head.



“Is everything okay?” she inquired, pensively.



“Yeah. We’re cool.” Smiling, the Slayer looked at her friend briefly before turning towards the front and leaving the room.



Frowning once again, Tara wondered why Willow was being so quiet. It definitely wasn’t something she would expect from the other girl. She was always so outgoing and smiling about everything.



Turning away, she walked back into the office to put her stuff down.



Willow blew out a breath when the doctor left the room. “Rude-o,” she said to herself, wondering why she couldn’t even bring herself to acknowledge the other woman. She would have to talk to her eventually.



Steeling herself, she tried to push aside her unease and she actually did look at Tara when she walked back through the door.



Chancing a smile, she tentatively spoke. “Hey,” her voice was soft, almost inaudible.



“Hi,” the young doctor offered back with a smile. Taking this as a good sign, she walked over to where Willow was and leaned against the side of the sink, her body facing the redhead’s.



There was about four inches between them.



“You okay?” Tara’s question was filled with concern.



“I’m good,” Willow immediately answered with a smile, noting for the first time that she felt comfortable and once she had allowed herself to actually look the other woman in the eyes, she really didn’t feel weird at all.



“You?” the director held the blonde’s eyes.



“I’m good,” Tara opted for Willow’s use of words. They were safe.



Her attention was pulled elsewhere when a voice spoke to her from the door.



“Doc, can you look at something for me, please? I had a client call earlier, wanting us to refill her dog’s medication. It’s been almost a year since we’ve seen her though.”



Buffy wondered to herself if she should have interrupted, but she felt better once Tara started to walk towards her.



Willow smiled at Tara as she walked away, watching her go through the door.



*****



The redhead was sat up on the counter top again. She was bored. The day had been so unbelievably slow, which was odd for a Friday afternoon. They chalked it up to the weather, which was very beautiful.



The sun was shining brightly and there was a nice breeze outside.



Buffy was up front doing something on the computer and Tara, well; she was walking through the door as Willow eyes looked up from their study of the floor.



The blonde was headed straight for her, a firm smile gracing her features. She paused when she was a step away from the director.



“Um, I need up in that cabinet. G-gauze… we n-need more,” she stuttered, knowing it was Willow’s presence that caused it. She felt nervous around her at times. She really hated it.



“You want me to move?” The redhead immediately wanted to smack her forehead. That was a dumb question to ask. She was surprised however, by the response.



“No. You’re f-fine. I-I just need to reach around you.” She felt a certain deja-vu when she stepped closer and actually ended up standing between the other woman’s legs, reaching with her right hand up into the cabinet. Her left hand planted itself on Willow’s knee, helping with balance.



Taking in a sharp breath, the redhead froze. The familiarity of this position was fresh in her mind and she found herself wondering briefly if Tara would kiss her.



Their faces about two inches apart, Tara looked down at Willow when she heard the intake of breath and she froze herself. She couldn’t believe that she had actually done this. It’s not like she couldn’t have gotten to the cabinet if she had stood to the side of the director.



Pulling her arm down, package of gauze in hand, she closed the cabinet and stood still for a brief moment, her eyes still locked on sapphire ones. Finally, squeezing Willow’s knee, she smiled and backed away.



“Thank you,” her voice whispered, as she found herself leaving the room in a hurry.



Groaning, the hacker closed her eyes and let out the breath she hadn’t realized she’d been holding.



*****





TBC...



Questions? Comments??



Jen



||My Fan Fiction and More!|| ||My Yahoo Group||
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
"Well, I've been puzzling out magic babble," he began.
"Babble can be magic?" Willow grinned. "I must look into that more."
"We did come across a phrase Rupert donned, 'the Willow passage.'" Sandra smiled at her. ~ "Shades of Gray," Chapter 19 by the Rainbow Writers

Jennpurr
 


Re: Chapter 5

Postby shuyaku » Thu Nov 06, 2003 10:00 pm

Groaning, the closed her eyes and let out the breath she hadn’t realized she’d been holding. Pout - we need real smoochies :bounce :bounce :bounce



Great update :D

-shuyaku

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"Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

shuyaku
 


Re: Chapter 5

Postby bluewillowwitch » Thu Nov 06, 2003 10:16 pm

:bigwave Jenn :flower ,

I second The Rose24! Why don't they just kiss already? :boot You are killing me with the suspence here! :thud I love the update! :clap :bow :willow and :tara are just racking up those sexual tention points. :wink They have to :bigkiss soon, right? :pray Can't wait to :read more. Update soon, please? :pray :pray :pray :pray





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

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Re: Chapter 5

Postby intricate mirage » Thu Nov 06, 2003 10:52 pm

Quote:
Pulling her arm down, package of gauze in hand, she closed the cabinet and stood still for a brief moment, her eyes still locked on sapphire ones. Finally, squeezing Willow’s knee, she smiled and backed away.




**groans** You have got to be kidding. :sigh Still no smoochie time yet? Oh god, what is it going to take for those two to just put those two pairs of lips together? :rolleyes



I want smoochie time between them two :miff



Great update though hehe :read Can't wait to read more :D

Cassie





Ask me if I loved you yesterday. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I love you today. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I'll love you tomorrow. I'll say 'Always'





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Re: Chapter 5

Postby Arwen276 » Fri Nov 07, 2003 7:07 am

YOU ARE SUCH A TEASE!!



They want each other BADLY!! It's so obvious and tense and...

Okay I'd settle with MORE!!!



~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


feedback

Postby slayral » Fri Nov 07, 2003 8:03 am

I love this fic....



great update! :applause



but it's really time for smoochies!!!!



slayral

:party





slayral
 


Re: feedback

Postby the vamp nurd » Fri Nov 07, 2003 9:15 am

Damn girl we need smoochies! No stop starts :spin



the vamp nurd pouts.

~Rachael~



Sorry I missed church, I was busy becoming a lesbian and worshiping Satan





Bardlet no #27



the vamp nurd
 

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