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update - part 20

Postby fidds » Sat Jun 29, 2002 5:01 am

hiya



Michelle hiya hun- thank you:) i'm all better now.



snuggle79 hiya - Thank you *G*



Thanatopsis thank you for the kind words :)



okay here's the next part- sorry it's been so long -dedicated to snuggle79 and kitties :)









Part 20







"Tara ?, Tara baby?," Willow asked her lover , looking worried as Tara didn't respond.



Willow brought her hand to Tara's shoulder, the blonde witch jumped with fright and inhaled sharply.



"Tara, are you okay?," Willow asked her lover getting more worried by the second.



Tara looked at Willow and realised that she must have spaced out.



"Y-yeah ,i'm f-f-fine," Tara stuttered.



Willow realised by Tara's stutter that she was scared,Willow brought her hand down to squeeze Tara's knee reassuringly, Tara smiled weakly.



"We're gunna be okay," Willow reassured her love smiling as Tara smiled back.



Willow turned her attention to Giles who was cleaning his glasses not wanting to intrude on the two witches.



"Giles, isn't there another way?," Willow asked him knowing that she nor Tara were comfortable with the actions of this spell.



"I'm afraid that this is the only way," Giles replied sympathetically.



Willow didn't reply, she needed to think.





Giles was starting to feel uncomfortable with the silence and decided that he was no longer needed at this point.



"Um,i'll leave you two alone," Giles said as he got up and made his way to the training room.



Willow turned her attention to Tara.



"Baby, do you wanna do this?," she asked concerned



"I-i don't know, will you be okay with this?- i mean that's gunna be a lot of power, i-i don't wanna see you get hurt," Tara said with tears in her eyes as shelooked deep into Willow's eyes.



"I'll be fine, it's you i'm worried about- you've only just come out of hospital, will you be okay with this?," Willow asked clearly more concerned about her love.



"I-i'll be fine," Tara replied quietly as she squeezed Willow's hand for reassurance.





They shared a moment to think about whether this was the right choice to make, if they were putting their lives at risk yet again or whether this would be their only chance to get Tara's powers back.





After a few minutes of thought, they both made their way to the training room to talk to Giles further into detail of the spell.





As soon as Xander , Anya and Dawn returned ,Giles explained to them about what was going to happen.



Giles explained to Xander that he would have to come with them incase anything went wrong, Anya was to stay at the Magic Box with Dawn.



Dawn didn't protest and knew it would be best if she stayed out of the way.



Giles explained that the spell had to be performed at midnight.

It was 8:30 pm, they had spent all day at the Magic Box , and they still had three and a half hours until they had to start the spell.



Willow and Tara were sat at the table with Anya and Dawn as Giles and Xander were in the training room gathering weapons for their safety.



The two witches were going over the ingredients they would need for the spell.



"Are you sure you want to do this baby?," Willow asked for the third time that night as she turned towards Tara and placed a hand on her knee.



"Yes love, i'll be fine," Tara soothed with a faint smile.



Even though Tara wanted to do this spell she still felt uneasy about being in contact with the creature that put her in hospital, and she still didn't feel 100% well from her stab wound, it had only been barely a week since it had happened.





They carried on getting prepared for the spell and soon enough three hours had passed , and it was time for them to set off.



"Right are we all ready?," Giles asked the two wiccans as he came out of the training room holding a bag full of weapons, followed by Xander.



Willow nodded to him and gulped as she took Tara's hand, they both got up and went to Dawn to comfort her .



Anya went over to Xander and gave him a hug.



Giles stood there waiting, but not intruding.



Soon enough the four of them set off out of the Magic Box and made their way to the crypt............







TBC









Thanks for reading

all feedback is welcome good or bad :)





*Hannah*





********************************************
I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

fidds
 


Re: update - part 20

Postby snuggle79 » Sat Jun 29, 2002 7:47 am

Great update! Poor Girls! I hope everything will be ok with this spell thing coming up!

Oh baby, want me to rub your tummy? She likes it when I ... stop explaining things.

Hi, um Tara..how are you? well...I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time...for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

snuggle79
 


Re: update - part 20

Postby pikescoob » Sat Jun 29, 2002 8:01 am

I'd be freaked to see that thing again too.....:eek Excellent update Hannah!! :grin Heh...I learned how to use the emoticons finally.



luv ya

Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: update - part 20

Postby TheWhiz » Sat Jun 29, 2002 8:40 am

Hey Hannah!

I've just read all 20 parts in one go, its one of those fics that you get hooked on. I'm just sorry I didn't find it earlier!

I think you have a great talent :)

I'll be back for the next part, I have to see what happens with the spell!

"I am a whiz...If ever a whiz there was"

TheWhiz
 


Thanks for the feedback :)

Postby fidds » Sat Jun 29, 2002 1:59 pm

heya - thank you all for the feedback :)



snuggle79 Thanks *G* they'll hopefully be fine - hey i don't even know yet ;)



michelle hey you - Thank you so much - heehee well done! ;) luv ya too :)



TheWhiz hey there - read the whole thing in one go?i think that deserves a round of a plause! :p - thank you so much *G* i'll get writing tonight- i'll try to get an update up soon :)



Thank you all for the feedback :)



*Hannah*

********************************************
I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

fidds
 


Re: Thanks for the feedback :)

Postby TheWhiz » Sat Jun 29, 2002 2:09 pm

*Accepting my round of aplause* :blush

Yep, read it in one go, my eyes were kinda sore afterwards but it was worth it! :grin

Look forward to the next part!!

"I am a whiz...If ever a whiz there was"

TheWhiz
 


Re: Thanks for the feedback :)

Postby fidds » Sat Jun 29, 2002 2:15 pm

aww- sorry for the sore eyes

i haven't started writing the next part yet (shame on me)

but i will try

thanks for the kind words :)



*Hannah*

********************************************
I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

fidds
 


Re: Thanks for the feedback :)

Postby foreverpiper » Sat Jun 29, 2002 10:56 pm

Wow! Tons of stuff has happened in two weeks! I just read the last couple of parts and I have to say I just love it!!! It's totally awsome and I can't wait for the next part!

~Piper



---------------

Willow, check you out. Witch-fu. -Buffy





foreverpiper
 


Re: Thanks for the feedback :)

Postby TareBearRS » Tue Jul 02, 2002 11:42 am

Wow facing that creature again huh, i wonder what you have in sore for us now.

Better not another huge scare again.. i need my sleep haha.

Really sweet to see how they care for one and other so much, and way to go to the rest of the gang.

Keep it comming!

R.

TareBearRS
 


Re: Thanks for the feedback :)

Postby fidds » Sat Jul 06, 2002 6:58 am

Piper Thank you very much :D



TareBearRS hehe- hmm i'm not sure cuz i'm full of surprises ;) - thank you for the feedback :)





okay kitties here's the next part- (sorry it's taken so long - but when i break up from school i'll put up updates more often :) )

dedicated to snuggle79 and kitties :)







PART 21









It was pitch black as the four of them made their way down the street.

Willow and Tara were infront holding hands as Giles and Xander walked behind carrying the bags full of weapons.



Willow carried a crossbow , it was not needed for the spell , but was an essential weapon to carry on the streets of Sunnydale.



It was quiet as the walked along.





Willow stopped and put her hand out behind her motioning for Giles and Xander to stop , her brow was furrowed and it looked like she was concentrating on something.

Tara stopped and looked at her lover.



"What's wrong Willow?." Tara asked concerned as she studied the redhead.



"Sssh, i think i can hear something," Willow hushed .



Willow pushed Tara behind her , still with clasped hands , as she held the crossbow alert.



Giles held out an axe that he took from the bag as Xander also held his weapon.

It was a death quiet and they were still.





All of a sudden , a small , skinny vampire came out of the shadows.



They all let out a sigh of relief , as Xander began to laugh.

"Why don't you run along back to your hole , you scrawny little vampire," Xander teased.



The vampire snarled as 3 huge six foot vampires came out behind the tiny vampire.



Xander's eyes grew wide, "Um i'm sorry Mr. Vampire sir," Xander apologized becoming nervous.





Tara gasped as she saw the four vampires.



Willow squeezed Tara's hand tight as she kept a stern face.



The four vampires growled as they began to charge at the group.



Xander and Giles both had one six foot vampire each attacking them.



The small and large vampire both went at Willow , who quickly tried to fire her crossbow .



The small vampire knocked it out of her hand as it skidded across the floor.

It struck Willow across the face as she fell to the floor.



"Willow!" Tara shouted as she saw her lover fall .



The large vampire began to walk slowly towards Willow's prone form.



Tara saw this and ran towards the crossbow, she bent down and reached to pick it up , but was stopped as the vampire came and stood on her hand, she winced in pain, as he snarled feeling pleased with himself.





Meanwhile Xander was on the floor throwing punches at the vampire , Giles smacked his opponent in the jaw , it fell to the floor with a thud.



He ran towards Tara and caught the small vampire unaware as he plunged a stake through it's chest.



Giles helped Tara up as she thanked him.



He could see the other vampire slowly getting up out of the corner of his eye, he picked up the crossbow and ran towards it.



Tara scanned the area trying to find Willow, she saw her pushed against an oak tree with the vampire strangling her neck.



Tara ran towards it , she tapped the vampire on the shoulder, he turned around and growled , angry at her for disrupting him.

He released Willow , who gasped for air as she reached for her neck.



The vampire was now facing Tara , she was outraged with him as she swung her arm and punched the vampire smack in the eye.



He fell to the floor unconscious, as Tara stood there cradling her hand.



Willow looked in amazement at her lover, and smiled breathing heavily.



Tara smiled back "Nobody messes with my girl," she said as she went forward and embraced Willow.





They separated to see Giles and Xander walking towards them , they both looked dusty and tired.



Xander held the crossbow and shot the unconscious vampire in the heart as it turned to dust.





"Are you two alright?," Giles asked the two wiccans.



"We're fine Mr.Giles," Tara replied smiling.



"Good,good," Giles said as he readjusted his glasses.



"Are we ready to proceed?," Giles asked knowing they couldn't be late for the spell.



They nodded as Giles and Xander lead the way as the two wiccans followed behind clasping hands.

Willow leaned towards Tara's ear "I quite like butch Tara," she whispered.



"Vixen," Tara replied as she smiled at her lover.



The four of them carried off into the night as they made their way towards the crypt.





tbc







Thanks for reading- all feedback is welcome :)





*Hannah*







********************************************
I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

fidds
 


Re: Thanks for the feedback :)

Postby snuggle79 » Sat Jul 06, 2002 7:25 am

Hiya!



Great update! and ...Tara butch... :grin



Oh baby, want me to rub your tummy? She likes it when I ... stop explaining things.

Hi, um Tara..how are you? well...I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time...for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

snuggle79
 


Re: Thanks for the feedback :)

Postby shootingstar » Sat Jul 06, 2002 8:12 am

Great update, hope your feeling all better now :)



*sigh* how we love butch-Tara



Luv Star x

***
'I know what it's like to want to die. How it hurts to smile. How you try to fit in but you can't. How you hurt yourself on the outside to kill the thing on the outside'
-Girl, Interrupted.

shootingstar
 


Re: Thanks for the feedback :)

Postby foreverpiper » Sat Jul 06, 2002 11:30 am

hehe. butch-tara rocks! loved the update!



~Piper

foreverpiper
 


Re: Thanks for the feedback :)

Postby fidds » Sat Jul 06, 2002 12:43 pm

snuggle79 Thanks -hehe i knew people would think that :p



shootingstar Thank you and yes i'm feeling better now thank you :) -thanks for the kind words



piper Thank you -more up next weekend or maybe sooner ...............



hehe thank you guys for the feedback - and everyone loves butch Tara ;)



*Hannah*

********************************************
I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

Edited by: fidds at: 7/6/02 11:44:01 am
fidds
 


Re: Thanks for the feedback :)

Postby pikescoob » Sat Jul 06, 2002 12:45 pm

Damn....Tara knocked a vampire out.....cool :cool . I thought it was funny when Xander started making fun of the scrawny vampire and then his huge vampire friends came out....hehe. :grin



:love Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: Thanks for the feedback :)

Postby fidds » Sat Jul 06, 2002 12:52 pm

heya michelle



hehe i thought it'd be good for Tara to do some action ;) -thanks- glad that you are enjoying it - Thanks for the feedback :D



luv Hannah****:love

********************************************
I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

fidds
 


Re: Thanks for the feedback :)

Postby TheWhiz » Sun Jul 07, 2002 6:04 am

Hey Hannah!

Wonderful update :)

Go Tara!! Good to see her get a bit of action (of the fighting kind!) :grin

"I am a whiz...If ever a whiz there was"

TheWhiz
 


Re: Thanks for the feedback :)

Postby TareBearRS » Sun Jul 07, 2002 7:25 am

Woohoo, Great move Tara, punching him out like that.

Really cool. Gotta love her.

And Xanders remark, he can be so funny, being bold and then taking it back a few seconds later. He's a big sweety.

Hope the spell goes alright.....



R.

TareBearRS
 


Re: Thanks for the feedback :)

Postby fidds » Mon Jul 08, 2002 9:56 am

The Whiz heya! - Thank you *G* - yeah she needs to get a bit of action goin ;)



TareBearRS - I'm glad you liked it- Thanks for the nice comments :D - and you'll have to wait and find out about the spell ;)



Thanks for reading and replying,i'll have more up by the weekend :)



*Hannah*

********************************************
I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

fidds
 


Re: New Fic :Stolen Magic

Postby maudmac » Sun Dec 29, 2002 8:16 pm

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Re: Thanks for the feedback :)

Postby kiwi6969 » Sun Aug 03, 2003 4:25 am

hannah great story ...loveing it....







kiwi/teresa

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

"shes out ther,our souls have meet,our hearts have meet,just not ourselves"

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