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Re: The War of London

Postby watty » Tue Mar 20, 2007 4:46 am

You go about your daily business, without a care in the world. Then one day you're suddenly dumped into a completely out of this world situation and when you ask, you're first told
It's complicated

then you're given an explanation utterly beyond your brain's normal activity. And to top it all, you're told that you are a part of this unknown. Oh, and you have another name. And some hot chick called you by that name.

Poor Danielle.

Great exposition-y chapter, Chris. Much needed for us unsuspecting readers and Danielle / Willow. Though there is a sense of unknown about Mem and Lamia -- in Lamia's case it's even suspicion -- they both seem to want to help, and are not malicious. Interesting.
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Re: The War of London

Postby JustSkipIt » Tue Mar 20, 2007 6:50 pm

Chris - I somehow missed that there was another update. Sorry for the delay. How wonderfully you portray Willow's confusion and Lamina's cryptic nature. Mem is there to balance the two but it's so... "to be continued..." you know? Can wait for more.
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