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Starting Right Now

Postby Morganlafay88 » Sat Dec 20, 2003 3:17 pm

Hi y'all y'all. This here is my first real, individual fic. It's been in my mind for ages, and I finally got to writing it down.

fyi:

Title: Starting Right Now

Author: Morganlafay

Feedback: Of course

Spoiler Warning: S4 through NMR

Disclaimer: Not mine but those of Joss and ME, etc.

Pairings: You have three guesses

Rating: PG

Distribution: Sure, if ya want it

Summary: What happened after they blew the candle out.



So, here it is:



“Starting right now.”



“Right now?”



“Mmm hmm.”



Tara blew the candle out with a gentle blow, leaving the two girls cradled in darkness. Quickly, their eyes adjusted to the dark, and they gazed upon the steady stream of smoke rising from the extinguished flame. Then, both women were surprised to witness not one, but two columns of smoke emerging from the candle.



“What the-,” Willow started, taking a step forward.



But Tara chided her with a gentle “Shhh,” as she watched the smoke.



They both observed the curious strands of smoke ascend towards the ceiling, not sure of what to expect. Then, smoothly, the strands started to intertwine together. They continued to weave, becoming tighter and closer together as they progressed. Finally, they seemed to form only one single thread of mist before forming a heart and quickly dissolving.

Now the girls looked from each other, to the candle, and back to each other- Willow’s mouth agape, and Tara’s brow crinkled. Both knew that something magickal was involved, and they momentarily realized that it was a sign from a higher Power. It seemed as though something had acknowledged their growing connection, and both girl’s anxieties were swiftly washed away.



Now, Willow and Tara found each other’s eyes, and as blue met green, all apprehension was washed away with the foreboding smoke. They both realized that they had found their one true love, their soul mate, and that from now on everything would be all right.



With a silent, mutual understanding, the young women stepped forward into the other’s arms. Their lips connected, and happiness was found.





So, what do you think? Should I lamely try to continue?

~Morgan



There's nothing very merry about going round and round. Heart's in your mouth, hands in the air. Head is spinning as you tumble to the ground.

Morganlafay88
 


Re: Starting Right Now

Postby sam darls » Sat Dec 20, 2003 6:17 pm

Morgan..yes continue..but not lamely, cos that wasn't at all..It was soo good. Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: Starting Right Now

Postby The Rose24 » Sat Dec 20, 2003 10:58 pm

I have read several variations on what happens after Tara blows the candle out. I never grow tired of reading another.



Please continue.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: Starting Right Now

Postby peggy of sunnydale » Sun Dec 21, 2003 5:57 am

please continue this is so cute i like it

im thinking this is going to get nc-17 am i right

Edited by: Warduke at: 12/22/03 9:22 am
peggy of sunnydale
 


Re: Starting Right Now

Postby Lavenderangel85248 » Sun Dec 21, 2003 6:11 am

Aww... wonderfully fluffy. More! Nice writing as well, BTW.

"I am, you know."
"What?"
"Yours."

Lavenderangel85248
 


Re: Starting Right Now

Postby justin » Sun Dec 21, 2003 7:49 am

That was an interesting start.



The bit about the candle having two streams of smoke was interesting. I guess it's symbolises them being soulmates.



Looking forward to reading more.



I find it kinda funny, I find it kinda sad
The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had.
- mad world

justin
 


Re: Starting Right Now

Postby TaraBaby77 » Sun Dec 21, 2003 11:25 am

Please, please, and another please..... continue. Sounds very interesting. Can't wait to read more. Hopefully soon, =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'


"It's about two people,
regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and
respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: Starting Right Now

Postby Stroke of Luck » Tue Dec 23, 2003 6:31 am

OH that was so *sigh* i want to read the next chapter ASAP. Hope u wont let us wait for too long:p



CU:wave

SoL/Natti

This is a duet, Amber! You need to sing!"- Tony

Stroke of Luck
 


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Postby MellindraX » Wed Dec 24, 2003 9:50 am

Short but sweet, loving it. More please, soon? :pray

I’ve never purposely gone out to take somebody out. Well, maybe, in elementary school I once did try to trip somebody. –Amber Benson


I'm an idiot. Ask me how.

MellindraX
 


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