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Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 9

Postby intricate mirage » Tue Nov 25, 2003 7:49 am

Oh boy... :thud

Cassie





I don't mind being alone

I just don't want to be alone without you





intricate mirage
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 10

Postby kindagay » Wed Nov 26, 2003 2:31 pm

Thank you for the feedback, it's very much appreciated. :)



So, if you remember, chapter 9 ended like this:



Quote:
“Taste Willow. Lap it up, it’s all for you.”



She couldn’t resist Tara’s invitation and she ran her ravenous tongue up the full length of her girlfriend’s dripping pussy.


& now, chapter 10 goes something like this:



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Pulling her tongue back into her mouth Willow savoured Tara’s sweet ambrosia, amazed that anything on Earth could taste so indescribably good.



“Oh Tara. Baby you taste amazing.” Breathed into honey blonde curls.



“Don’t tease.” Assertiveness filled Tara’s voice as she groaned her command.



Willow knew better than to disobey and had no desire to wait to pleasure her lover. Extending her tongue Willow desperately devoured Tara’s pussy. Her tongue worked over-time on Tara’s sensitive pearl as she greedily sucked and licked every drop of her baby’s juices.



“N-need to, f-feel you. Inside. Deep, in me.”



Willow instantly understood and buried her tongue as far as she could inside her lover, rotating it around Tara’s inner walls. Within seconds Tara’s muscles clamped around the expert tongue and Willow’s mouth was flooded with her girl’s release.



“Gods baby! Oh sweetie! WILLLLOOOOOOOW!!!!!!!!” Tara screamed at the top of her voice.



Willow kept her tongue inside of Tara, lapping up the escaping juices as the blonde rode out her orgasm.

As Tara finally began to relax, Willow slowly withdrew her tongue then placed small kisses on blonde curls before moving to rest her head on her lover’s gently trembling chest.



“I love you my beautiful, darling Tara.” Willow traced lazy patterns over Tara’s warm, soft stomach as she contentedly listened to the steadying rhythm of her baby’s heartbeat.



A precious peaceful silence filled the room; both girls basking in the feeling of being loved so truly and completely.



“Willow?” Tara spoke softly, not wanting to disturb the calm.



“Yeah baby?”



“Thank you.” This was said with so much feeling and sincerity that Willow lifted her head and looked deep into Tara’s eyes.



“For what baby?”



“Everything. For loving me. For making me beautiful. For, everything, every single thing you do.”



“You don’t have to thank me Tara. Loving you is the easiest, most wonderful thing to do. It’s the single greatest thing I’ve ever done in my whole life and everything I do; I do it because I love you. And you don’t need me to feel beautiful, I don’t make you beautiful Tara, you just, are.”



“I know. You made me see that, that I’m beautiful. You’re the only person, the only one since, since…” Tara faltered, unshed tears making her voice quaver. “…The only p-person apart from, from my m-mom, who’s ever made me feel b-beautiful. You m-make me feel like, like I truly deserve to be loved. So, that’s what I, why I wanted to say thank you. I g-guess, umh, thank you just for being you. For being my sweet Willow.”



“I’ll always be your sweet Willow. I’ll always be yours. I intend to dedicate my entire existence to making you know that you are beautiful and that you deserve to be loved. I love you Tara Maclay, with all of my heart, with all of my being, for all of forever.”



“And I love you my Willow.” Tears sparkled in Tara’s baby blues, so overwhelmed and touched by her girlfriend’s words that she only just managed to choke out the words.



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Posh flowers make me feel groovy - My niece



I am perfectly normal in my abnormalities

kindagay
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 10

Postby hellyeahallday » Wed Nov 26, 2003 2:52 pm

Awwww. :clap



Charlie

hellyeahallday
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 10

Postby sam darls » Wed Nov 26, 2003 3:44 pm

Aww..that was so good, and wow. Love sammi xx

sam darls
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 10

Postby Tempest Duer » Wed Nov 26, 2003 5:34 pm

How hot and sexy and yummy... :drool but it's sweet and romantic too... classic :willow and :tara

I believe in the madness called "now."

Tempest Duer
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 10

Postby Vizier Mountian » Wed Nov 26, 2003 6:27 pm

That is so sweet,and shows the love between :willow and :tara so well. Thank you for taking so much trouble over it.

Vizier Mountian
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 10

Postby intricate mirage » Wed Nov 26, 2003 11:48 pm

Aww. Lovely and sexy update all rolled into one! ;)

Cassie





I don't mind being alone

I just don't want to be alone without you





intricate mirage
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 10

Postby SJ » Thu Nov 27, 2003 2:26 am

Romantic,sexy and sweet,great update :read

SJ
 


Re: Fic: Out of Character - Part 10

Postby AxMan936 » Sun Nov 30, 2003 6:50 pm

sexy and romantic, yet touching and sweet

i totally loved it

-Chris

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"True knowledge is knowing that you know nothing" - I Forgot

AxMan936
 


Fic: (Out of Character) - Just Because

Postby kindagay » Tue Dec 02, 2003 1:59 pm

Thanks to everyone for the feedback, as always, it's greatly appreciated. :)



This fic started off as a little piece of smut, but then it suddenly became twice as long as I'd intended it to be. Now, it's evolved into something completely different, it's become a random chain of ideas that just happen to flow together quite well.

The origional title doesn't really fit very well with what I'm writing now. So, the 1st 10 parts are still collectively entitled 'Out of Character', but from now, the next however many chapters are to be affectionately entitled 'Just Because'.



This carries on directly from the last part of 'Out of Character', but it's the first part of 'Just Because'.

(I hope you managed to follow all that).



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For over an hour Willow and Tara just laid in each other’s arms. Both girls content to just be with their soul mate, luxuriating in each others’ company, enjoying having nothing to do other than be together.

Four gentle hands affectionately traced lines and patterns over warm, soft skin.

Two pairs of lips interspersed tender kisses with whispers of sweet nothings.



“It’s getting late, we should probably get up.” Tara glanced at the clock.



“Nuh-uh. I vote we stay right here in bed, all naked, all gay, all day.” Willow chuckled.



“We can’t just stay in bed all day.”



“Why not? It’s not like we have any reason to get up.”



“But, we’ll have to go get something to eat at some point.”



“I know exactly what I want to eat, no need to get out of bed for that.” Willow explained, her eyes twinkling suggestively.



Sensing further argument from her girl the redhead stressed her point.



“I have everything I’ll ever need right here.” This point was accentuated by the playfully tickling of Tara’s sides, effectively causing the blonde to giggle and writhe and eventually, to surrender.



“Okay, okay. We don’t have to get up, just stop tickling. Please.”



“Yay I won!” The triumphant redhead cheered. “Now, in honour of my victory and your unquestionable beauty, as of this moment I officially declare this day to be national treat Tara like a princess day. And I proclaim that the first act of worship on this most holy of days is to be a warm, relaxing bath with lots of bubbles and candle-light. To be followed by a sensuous massage using some of those yummy massage oils that I know you have hidden somewhere.” As she spoke Willow had made her way to the dorm room’s adjoining bathroom.



“So let me get this straight. You tickle-tortured me so I’d agree to stay in bed all day, and to celebrate, you want to get out of bed?”



“Only for a little while. Where do you keep your bath-bubbles?” Willow enquired as she turned on the hot tap.



“Under the sink.” The blonde wrapped a blanket around herself and joined her girlfriend in the bathroom.



“Hey, all naked, all day, remember? Remove that blanket at once missy.”



Tara complied, dropping the blanket to the floor then seating herself on a small stool to watch as her lover prepared the perfect romantic ambience. Candles of assorted sizes, colours and scents were arranged and lit around the room, a row of small pink and white tee-light’s arranged along the side of the bath. Lavender scented bubbles filled the bath as Willow disappeared into the dorm room briefly, only to return carrying a single red rose. She ran the rose down her lover’s torso before gently removing the head of the flower and scattering the delicate petals into the bubbles.



“Almost perfect.”



“Almost? How much more perfect can you get Will?”



“Oh baby, you’re forgetting, I am Willow Rosenberg, perfectionist extraordinaire. Now, what’s missing? Oh, music, how could I forget the music? Wait there.” Within seconds Alison Krauss’s soft, gentle voice filtered through from Tara’s CD player.



When she returned Willow tested the temperature of the water, then offered her hand to assist Tara as she stepped into the bath. The blonde instantly disappeared under the bubbles, re-emerging a few seconds later with bubbles resting on the end of her nose. Willow giggled as she lovingly reached out to wipe the bubbles away and the two girls exchanged contented, affectionate smiles.



“Miss Rosenberg, you are spoiling me.” Tara exclaimed, closing her eyes to bask in the warm, soapy water that gently relaxed and caressed her.



“But of course, you are the fairest princess of them all; you deserve and shall have nothing but the very best.”



“You’re not joining me?” The blonde observed disappointedly as she watched her lover walk towards the bathroom cabinet.



“In a second, I wanna wash your hair for you.” Willow located a bottle of honey-dew shampoo and inhaled the scent before carrying it over to her girl.



“You can’t wash my hair while you’re in the bath with me?”



“Well, I could, but I don’t think that that’s the proper way to do things. How many princesses do you know who let their maids get into their baths with them?”



“Hmm, just one.”



“One? Who?”



“Me silly. Princess Tara insists that her maid join her in this bath.”



“I will baby, when I’ve washed your hair.”



Willow poured out a small hand-full of shampoo and began gently massaging the liquid through her lover’s long blonde hair. As she washed Tara’s hair, the redhead began reciting a rhyme she remembered from her childhood.



“Goldie-locks, goldie-locks, wilt thou be mine?”



“I thought it was curly-locks?”



“Everyone’s a critic.” Willow grumbled playfully. “Technically, yes it is, but you’re hair’s straight, and golden, so I’m allowed to change it.”



“Okay, sorry. Please continue.”



“Thou shalt not wash dishes, nor yet feed the swine. But sit on a cushion, and sew a fine seam. And feed upon strawberries, sugar and cream.”



“You’d make me sit and sew?”



“Actually, no, unless that’s what you wanted to do. It’s a silly rhyme; I only like it for the first and last two lines. Maybe I could change it, re-word it slightly so that it’s just for you.”



“Thou shalt not fight demons?” The blonde suggested as Willow rinsed her darkened hair.



“Hmmm, that’s not really nursery rhyme-y. But it sounds kinda cool, and it’s relevant. Yeah, I like that.” Willow thought for a moment, then began reciting her modified version of the children’s poem. “Goldie-locks, goldie-locks, wilt thou be mine? Thou shalt not fight demons, nor yet feed the vamps. But sit on a pedestal, and tell me your dreams. And feed upon strawberries, sugar and cream.”



“Perfect.” Tara grinned, placing a small kiss on Willow’s cheek.



“I aim to please.” Willow smiled proudly. “Okay, your hair’s done.”



“Goody, now get that gorgeous body of yours into this tub.”



“Yes m’am.”



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Disclaimer: I have no idea who wrote the nursery rhyme, I just found it in one of my nieces story books & thought it'd be quite sweet to use & change for our girls.







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Posh flowers make me feel groovy - My niece



I am perfectly normal in my abnormalities

kindagay
 


Re: Fic: (Out of Character) - Just Because

Postby sam darls » Tue Dec 02, 2003 3:50 pm

Aww..I liked this update, and the bath sounds perfect :heart . And I loved the nursery rhyme too..cute. love sammi xx

sam darls
 


Re: Fic: (Out of Character) - Just Because

Postby PJ Freak » Tue Dec 02, 2003 3:58 pm

Wow... I LOVE this fic.. I've had to take SEVERAL cold showers... It's not healthy i tell you :p



But anyway please update soon.. I wanna see what happens on the tub ;)



Kudos to you!



Isa




PJ Freak
 


Re: Fic: (Out of Character) - Just Because

Postby AxMan936 » Tue Dec 02, 2003 6:53 pm

i love it!:applause

the nursery rhyme being chnaged just for Tara...

and "national treat Tara lieka princess day"

totally cute and sweet

can' wait to read more!:bounce

-Chris

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"True knowledge is knowing that you know nothing" - I Forgot

AxMan936
 


Re: Fic: (Out of Character) - Just Because

Postby SJ » Wed Dec 03, 2003 2:45 am

Cute update :read

SJ
 


Re: Fic: Just Because - part 2

Postby kindagay » Mon Dec 15, 2003 5:30 pm

Hi all,



First off, thanks for the feedback, your kind, encouraging words mean a lot to me.



Secondly, I'm sorry this update's taken so long.

Exams + Christmas shopping + a slight case of writers block = lack of writing.

Now, all my exams are finished & I'm getting back into the flow of this little fic of mine. So, update's should be posted more regularly now.



Anyway, hope you enjoy this part.



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Previously:

Quote:
Willow smiled proudly. “Okay, your hair’s done.”



“Goody, now get that gorgeous body of yours into this tub.”



“Yes m’am.”




And now:



Within seconds Willow had joined Tara in the bath. She placed herself behind the blonde, her legs stretched out and resting over those of her lover, her arms wrapped around Tara’s midsection.



“Mmm, that’s much better.”



“Agreed, I can wash you easier from here. Now, lean forward so I can do your back.”



Tara complied as Willow squirted some strawberry body wash into her hands and worked up a thick lather over the blonde’s smooth back and shoulders before rinsing the bubbles away with a soft wash cloth.



“Okay, lay back again.”



More strawberry lotion was rubbed over Tara’s taut stomach and ample breasts. The blonde moaned as Willow’s nimble fingers played with the hardened nipples.



“Legs please.” The redhead requested.



Tara shifted a little before gracefully lifting her right leg out of the water and bending it up slightly to allow Willow easier access. Willow caressed the offered leg with foamy suds from hip to ankle, and then she paid special attention to the foot and toes.



“Switch.”



Tara’s left leg and foot were then given the same treatment, as the honorary princess continued to moan her appreciation.



Once Willow was satisfied that her baby was squeaky clean her arms returned to their home around Tara’s stomach. Tara adjusted herself so that she could lay with her head against Willow’s chest and placed her arms on top of the redhead’s.



“I think this is what heaven would be like.” Tara relished the feeling of being wrapped in her soul-mate’s warm embrace.



“Oh yeah, this is definitely what heaven would be like. I can’t think of anything better than being snuggled up in a warm, relaxing bath with my baby. And the being naked part is definitely a plus.”



“It’s not just a plus Will, it’s a necessity. I love the feel of your soft skin against mine, especially when it’s all wet, makes me all wet.”



“Oh really?” The redhead enquires, a mischievous glint appearing in her eyes



“Oh yeah.”



Moving her arms from around the blonde, Willow manoeuvred herself and her lover slightly so that she could reach between Tara’s legs. Stroking her hands lightly over the inside of Tara’s thighs, the redhead worked her way up to the girls golden curls. She ran the fingers of her right hand along Tara’s slit, and finding that her girl was more than ready for her she easily slid two fingers deep inside Tara.



“You’re right baby. You’re so wet.” Willow began thrusting in and out of her lover at a leisurely pace, savouring the warmth and softness of Tara’s inner walls. “Gods Tara, you feel so good.”



“I love having you inside me. You make me whole.”



“I’m a part of you Tara, and you’re a part of me. We belong together.” The thrusts became stronger and faster.



“Two halves of the same soul.” The blonde gasped, completing her lover’s declaration.



“That’s right honey. You’re mine.” The redhead whispered in Tara’s ear before lowering her mouth to the blonde’s neck, liking along the jaw line down to her pulse point. She took the soft skin into her mouth, nibbling gently.



“Take me Willow. Please.”



“What my lady wants, my lady shall have.” Willow pledged as her fingers dove deeply into Tara. Deep, long thrusts followed as Tara’s breath came in desperate, shallow gasps. Bending her fingers up Willow located her girl’s sweet spot, and began massaging small, firm circles.



“Harder baby.”



Willow obeyed, increasing the pressure on Tara’s g-spot while her other hand gently stroked the blonde’s engorged clit.



“Oh yeah baby. Just like that.”



“I love you so much Tara Maclay.”



Those words were all Tara needed to push her over the edge.



“I. Love. You.” The blonde gasped as the force of her orgasm wracked through her whole body. Her hips bucked forward uncontrollably, causing Willow’s hand to thrust deeper into her, sending her spiralling over the edge once again.





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Posh flowers make me feel groovy - My niece



I am perfectly normal in my abnormalities

kindagay
 


Re: Fic: Just Because - part 2

Postby AxMan936 » Mon Dec 15, 2003 6:48 pm

hehehe:thud

:drool :drool

off to take a :shower

because of that... hehe

wodnerful writing skills tho!:applause

-Chris

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"True knowledge is knowing that you know nothing" - I Forgot

AxMan936
 


Re: Fic: Just Because - part 2

Postby Tempest Duer » Mon Dec 15, 2003 11:26 pm

Not only was that insanely sexy, it was sweet and loving as well... nicely done.

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

Tempest Duer
 


Re: Fic: Just Because - part 2

Postby SJ » Tue Dec 16, 2003 2:45 am

That was hot :thud

Great update :read

SJ
 


Re: Fic: Just Because - part 2

Postby sam darls » Tue Dec 16, 2003 3:21 am

That was soo lovely and really hot. Loved it. Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

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