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Re: Thanks!

Postby Grimlock72 » Wed Nov 26, 2003 5:59 pm

Thoughts of a true drunk idiot alright... sheeeesh. How much planning does he (it? :-) think is nessecary to run away ? I hope he's arrogant enough to stand in front of Willow's car IF he finds them at all. Pedal to the metal, yeah!



It's spelled Good Riddance I think, yeah... lets safe the world a drunk idiot. Some idiots really think they're important, as if. He had lots of years to earn himself a very important place in Tara's life, needless to say he didn't do a thing to get it.



Undoubtly he'll blame the rest of the world for all his troubles, grrr :rage



Grimmy

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"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

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Re: Thanks!

Postby StrangeQuark » Wed Nov 26, 2003 6:25 pm

Very good characterization. I like how this, kind of, winds the 'ticking clock' of the story for us. Conflict and the anticipation of more conflict pretty much define drama. Keep up the good work.



-SQ

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Thanks for replying!

Postby Blue Channel » Fri Nov 28, 2003 11:04 am

Grimlock72:...ditto, yeah him getting run over by Willow is a pretty thought. Drunk idiots are um...idiots that way; they blame others so they don't have to take the blame or change themselves...sigh...sad story.



StrangeQuark: Yeah, there's so much stuff going on in this story it kinda makes my head feel all achy.



Thanks for replying! I'll be updating soon, promise!

Blue Channel
 

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