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 Post subject: Re: Penultimate update!
PostPosted: Tue Oct 08, 2002 11:14 pm 
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But there’s an encounter on the way, and Tara shows off a talent that amazes Willow! (No, not that! That comes a little later. And so does….Um.) *G*


Ooooo Mike, i'm really wondering about this 'talent' Tara has, u really have me stumped if it isn't that kinda talent ;) - but i'm lookin 4ward to that kinda talent later tho, so r ya givin me yer word that that talent will reveal itself? :grin



~Ashley~

Willow: We can come by between classes. Usually I use that time to copy over my class notes with a system of different colored pens. But it's been pointed out to me that that's, you know... insane.
Tara: I said quirky.

Edited by: MissQuirky  at: 10/9/02 2:16:32 pm


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 Post subject: Re: Penultimate update!
PostPosted: Tue Oct 08, 2002 11:36 pm 
Oooh Mike. Keep going...





"Oh Tara, I love it when you get object-oriented with me."



Smiling innocently but narrowing her eyes suggestively, Tara answers, "I know, you do, baby. And I love watching your expression go all boolean just as you scream out my name. But, y'know, I've got a few other methods for modifying that expression of yours if you want to maybe try them out, too?"



Willow's eyes widen and she begins to hyperventilate at the infinite loop of options Tara's words imply.



"You mean?" she blinks. "With the variables?" Blinking again. "And arrays?" Blinking two or three more times before widening her eyes to match her anticipation, she continues, hopefully, "If we?...Then you?...Else me? Oh yes. I mean yessssss...."



"I thought you might," chuckles Tara as she leans in with a seductive smile that turns Willow instantly GUI at the sight. "Prepare to initialize, love..."


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"How 'bout them Broncos..." -- Riley, saying something useful, in The Initiative



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 Post subject: Re: Penultimate update!
PostPosted: Thu Oct 10, 2002 3:46 pm 
Well, I think that you, Mike, and Big IT should consider a little collaborative technosmutfic writing. I don't understand a word so far, but I know it's sexy!



Appropriately, or ironically, I am coming so late to this great chapter because I somehow managed to make all but the first page of each forum invisible to myself for several days. Sigh.



Anyway, as usual, this was funny, and sweet, and in character, and with the usual attention to detail that I appreciate so much, as in this:



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Maybe we need something simple and direct like, like –“



“Buffy!” exclaimed Giles,


Thanks for this.


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"Run, flee, maybe skedadlle. We're not here to engage. This is strictly recon." Willow, on season seven, in "This Year's Girl"



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 Post subject: Re: Penultimate update!
PostPosted: Thu Oct 10, 2002 6:07 pm 
lmao, I didn't realise how that sounded. Get yer head out the gutter, Mike! Erm, anyway... massive amounts of scolding will ensue if we don't get an update soon. Well, maybe a little.



My hyperventilating fits have subsided since you said she'd return. Phew! I'm soooooo glad. :D



Update! Update! Update! Update!



Gettin' the picture yet? ;)



Caz

Tara: I got so lost
Willow: I found you... I will always find you



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 Post subject: Weeee
PostPosted: Thu Oct 10, 2002 6:51 pm 
While I love sexy bits with food and sexy bits with techno-talk and hyper-little-kid-with-an-overactive-sex-drive-and-willing-gf Buffy and damn-hormonal-american-lesbian-teenagers Giles, I almost died laughing at the Noxinous/Deknight/death of the innocent jokes. Which is sorta bad, because this is a public computer lab, but...



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 Post subject: Re: Penultimate update!
PostPosted: Thu Oct 10, 2002 11:30 pm 
ZvXLurkerXvZ - Whoa, complicated name! But hello, and thanks! I was going to say that I hope your poor bum soon recovers, but really, I guess I’m hoping you fall off your chair laughing at the next part too! *G*



MissQuirky - Oh, it’s only a little talent Ashley, but useful and unexpected! As for the other thing, well I think Willow and Tara are both going to find they have talents there! And yes, you have my word, you’ll see it all (well, read it all but, y’know…)



The Big I T - Oh now hold on, that’s not fair! I’ve exhausted my knowledge of computing terms, and you’re so much better at it than me! GUI indeed! That was great! Even if I can’t, I think you’d better continue, if only for Tulipp’s sake! *LOL*



Tulipp - Welcome back Juli! Glad you’ve got all your pages back, that must have been real frustrating. And yeah, I hardly understand a word in the technosmutfic either (great term though.) It’s all up to the Big IT now, I’m all tapped out! As for my little fic, I’m pleased you’re still liking it. Nearly done now. Then I can get back to finding some time to actually read some of the other great stories here in Pens. I’m sorry to say I haven’t been able to read anything these last few weeks, but I know I’ve missed many chapters of your wonderful Terra Firma, including the end. I’m going to have to start again from the beginning, which believe me, will be a real pleasure. My response may be late, but it’ll be there!



Centauri2002 - I’m afraid my head is almost permanently in the gutter, Caz! Didn’t used to be, till I found this board, now I’m a total smutkitty! Hold off on the scolding if you can. I haven’t had much time to write this week, but I’ve been off work today and typing like a maniac. I have the weekend, then another day off, so I’m hoping the final update will be ready late Monday. Till then, breathe slow and easy! *G*



Bookcat - Oh dear, death by laughter in public can’t be of the good, can it? Perhaps I should hold back with the funnies, whaddaya think? Apart from my little games with Noxious and DeKnight, I couldn’t help but notice all the bits you liked were sexy bits. Would you like some more of those? I think I have more kicking around my brain somewhere. *G* See ya soon!



--Mike.



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Always.........



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 Post subject: good lovin'
PostPosted: Fri Oct 11, 2002 6:37 am 
mike, I think we need to address this phobia you seem to harbor for addressing the r-rated smoochy goodness head-on. willow/tara lovin' is not dirty! and while words like "smut" are certainly easily equatable with tasteless porn, I have to tell you that in my 4 years at the sex-positive, lesbian feminist capital of the academic world (otherwise known as smith college!) I learned one very, very important word that I want to share with you, and it ain't abracadabra (although that word in intersting...comes from the old akkaidan, and was used by sugreons in the ancient pre-judaic world...very interesting history. it invokes the power of speech and belief in healing, and basically means "as I say it, so may it be." very witchy...ack! I'm giles! back to topic!)



the magic word is erotica. erotica is the lesbian-approved sexy narrative word. there are many possible explanations/narratives in regard to what differentiates erotica from pornography and makes it so user-friendly and self-respect enhancing rather than degrading. basically, to me, it means to artistically render sex, sexual acts or encounters, or any sensual artistic experience (I include writing here). it does not objectify; it is the subject of its own desire. the late, great roland barthes, in his final book, says of erotic photography:

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The presence (the dynamics) of this blind field is, I believe, what distinguishes the erotic photograph from the pornographic photograph. Pornography ordinarily represents the sexual organs, making them into a motionless object (a fetish), flattered like an idol that does not leave its niche; for me, there is no punctum in the pornographic image; at most it amuses me (and even then, boredom follows quickly). The erotic photograph, on the contrary (and this is its very condition), does not make the sexual organs into a central object; it may very well not show them at all; it takes the spectator outside its frame, and it is there that I animate this photograph and that it animates me. The punctum, then, is a kind of subtle beyond-- as if the image launched desire beyond what it permits us to see: not only toward the fantasy of a praxis, but toward the absolute excellence of a being, body and soul together.

--Roland Barthes, Camera Lucida




so, yeah. that is how I think of good erotica, and there is plenty of that on the kitty board to get down with. because when you're writing about characters you love, it's never just about the sexy bodies, no matter how much we joke and flirt about sassy eggs or willowhand. so, onward march! let's get some hot, steamy, even reverent lovin' for the slayer and her witch:blush



--jenny



ps-- if you feel the need to be inspired by other kittens' well-written erotica, I reccomend anything by lisa countryman, starting with tears of the goddess.


"I'm under your spell...lost in ecstasy, spread beneath my willow tree..."

--Tara's love song to Willow



"We find magic everywhere" --Dar Williams



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 Post subject: Re: good lovin
PostPosted: Sun Oct 13, 2002 12:31 am 
JewWitch18 - Hey, I think you may be preaching to the choir here, Jenny! I don’t really have a problem with tackling the R-rated goodness head-on (or the NC17 for that matter!) I love it, whether it’s called smut or erotica (fascinating quote from Barthes by the way, I totally agree.) And I think I’ve read enough thud-worthy material here on Pens to get a pretty fair idea of what counts for goodness.



My problem, if you can call it that, is that this story was never intended to contain anything explicit at all! It was meant to be light, funny, cute, dramatic, angst-free – oh, and funny some more! Along the way there would be kissage, and teasing, and wanting, and sensual touches as Willow and Tara got to know each other, and fall in love. Because this is meant to be just the first episode in a series, the smoochies were intended to escalate in the next episode, where the steaminess would take centre stage. But the girls got away from me!



Before I knew what they were doing, there was yearning, and naughty touching, and expressed desires, all while my back was turned! Now those two can’t keep their hands or lips off each other, and I have to let them have what they want (need, actually) before they burst!



So yes, I have accepted that their needs come before mine, and there is steaminess ahead in the last part. Full-blown, all-nekkid, I’m-yours-in-every-way, hot steam. (Of course, I may be useless at it. I’m a guy, after all!) But it’ll take a while. There’s weapons, vampires, hugs, chocolate, more vampires and the big showdown in the Bronze to come first. Oh, and never would I consider Willow/Tara lovin’ to be dirty! (Well, unless there was mud involved. Hmm….)



Now, as far as the last part is concerned, I may have been slightly over-optimistic in hoping that it would be ready late Monday. I’m already 4000 words into it, and the Scoobs haven’t even reached the Bronze yet! Okay they’re nearly there, but I’ve still got the big fight, the steam, and the afterness to do. If I hadn’t already labelled the previous part as ‘penultimate’, I’d be tempted to post what I’ve already got – since it’s coming up to a natural break – and create an Act 5, Part 4. But I’ll be working on it most of tomorrow, and we’ll see what comes up. You know, this fic was only ever meant to be about 20,000 words long in the first place, but it’s going to end up over twice that! I clearly don’t know when to stop writing! *G*



--Mike.



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Always.........

Edited by: Mike of the Nancy Tribe at: 10/13/02 3:33:12 pm


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 Post subject: (new penultimate) Update!
PostPosted: Mon Oct 14, 2002 1:00 am 
I hope I’ll be forgiven for this, but….this fic seems to have gotten away from me again! This was meant to be the last part, but it seems I love these characters so much, I just can’t stop writing them!



So, Act 5 Part 2 was not the penultimate part, this is. Definitely. For sure. Erm….



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Title: WtVS: Pilot Episode: Hellmouth High

Author:
Mike of the Nancy Tribe

Feedback: Yes please.

Rating: PG-13 throughout (except for the next part.)

Disclaimer: The characters belong to Joss Whedon and ME. I’ve taken liberties with them. So sue me.

Distribution: I don’t mind, but ask first, okay?

Pairings: Willow & Tara. Buffy & Cordelia (sorry about that!)

Spoiler Warning: Not really since it’s AU.

Summary: The REAL penultimate part of the final Act. Getting ready for the Harvest at the Bronze.





WtVS: Pilot Episode: HELLMOUTH HIGH





ACT 5, PART 3




“Ooh! I want the big shiny Excalibur!” squealed Buffy, elbowing her way past Giles and diving towards the open weapons cabinet. Her hands closed around the hilt of a huge broadsword that was taller than she was.



“Ah, Buffy….” began the librarian, with a warning tone.



“Oh hush, Big G, didn’t you ever want to play Conan? For the mighty blade of power is mine! And with it – Whoa!”



She slipped the sword from its mount – and fell backwards with the enormous weapon on top of her. “Oof! Okay. Who the hell makes swords out of lead? This weighs more than Cordy’s make-up kit. And by the way….ow!”



Willow leaned down and plucked the sword off of her, hefting it in one hand with ease. “What, this little toothpick?” she said with a grin. “I’ve seen bigger pins stuck in olives!”



“I see someone’s been eatin’ their spinach today,” said Buffy as Tara helped her up. “Okay Red Sonja, the pigsticker’s yours. Just give me something more my size.”



With a totally blank expression, Giles handed her a pair of nail scissors.



She stuck her tongue in her cheek and narrowed her eyes at him, trying to decide which part of his long skinny self to impale first.



“Nah, no swords for me,” said Willow, putting the blade back into its mount. “This gal’s strictly a stake ‘em and leave ‘em kind of Slayer. One second of spaz-Willow and poof! Headless friends!”



“I’m uh, I’m sure that’s very wise,” said Giles. “At least until I’ve trained you. And I can promise you if, if we make it through tonight –“



“When,” said Tara, folding her arms and looking at him sternly.



“Uh, y-yes, yes of course, when we make it through tonight….the next few weeks will be a very strict regime of, of exercise, weapons training and, and developing your fighting skills.”



“Ah,” said Willow. “The long-awaited honing.”



“Indeed. And we shall patrol as often as your schedule – and, and homework of course – allow.”



“Patrol?” Willow cocked an eyebrow at him. “Giles, you’re not gonna make me wear army boots and give you funny salutes, are you?”



“Willow, don’t be frivolous.”



“Sir! No sir!” barked the Slayer, standing rigidly to attention, and stomping her foot on the floor. The effect of which was somewhat ruined when she winked at Tara.



Who grinned back, leaned towards her, and murmured “Chest out, Will.”



“Only if you do too,” whispered Willow, rather loudly.



“Ahem,” said Giles. “Is anyone actually going to choose a weapon or, or shall we face Armageddon with nothing but snappy quips and bad puns? Time is getting short, you know.”



“Well,” said Buffy taking a deep breath, aware of the terrible thing she was about to inflict on them. “Ahm a-geddin’ my hands on this cute little crossbow.”



There was a chorus of groans, with added eye-rolling from Giles.



“What?” said Buffy. “Oh, tell me you didn’t see that one coming? Hey, who’s got the pointy arrow things?”



“I think you’ll find that’s mine,” said Giles, taking the miniature crossbow from her. “Somehow, I can’t see myself trusting your aim.” Ignoring her enormous pout, he handed her a couple of stakes and a small spray can. “Try these. I’m sure I’ll feel a lot safer.”



“Mace? You’re giving me a can of mace? These are vampires, Giles, not muggers. I don’t think they’ll be going for my purse.”



“Holy water with essence of garlic. Very effective at close quarters.” He pursed his lips in a prim smile. “Just a little squirt. Seems appropriate, don’t you think?” he said smugly, looking down at her scowling expression.



She bunched up her face at him, determined to get in a last shot. “Hm. You sure it isn’t weak English tea with essence of old woman? Seems more your style, huh, Jeeves?”



He cleared his throat and turned to Tara, leaving Buffy smirking at his back. “How about you, Tara? Care to um, try the axe again? It seemed to work well for you last night.”



Tara shook her head. “Oh, no thanks, Mr. Giles. Just the stakes for me, I think. I, I want to keep my hands free as much as I can.”



Giles just nodded, and started to load weapons of various types into an old leather bag. While Buffy wandered out of the book cage, Willow slid closer to Tara, and hooked her arm through the witch’s.



“Ooh, is that so you can work the wild mojo, baby?” said Willow. “Has that beautiful brain of yours cooked up some wicked hell spell that, that’ll make their fangs fall out so they’re all, y’know, gummy? Or, or, or – I know! You’re gonna go swoosh! and turn ‘em all into roaches so we can stomp ‘em or, or let ‘em get fumed with all the rest!”



“Well,” said Tara, “I, I have been looking through my mom’s old books again and, and I do have a couple of ideas that might help. But….mostly I want my hands free so I can grab a hold of my girlfriend.” So saying, she slid her other arm around the redhead’s waist, and pulled her close.



“I like the way your mind works,” said Willow, hugging her just as tightly.



“Just my mind?” said Tara, taking the tip of Willow’s left earlobe between her lips and sucking on it ever so softly.



“Unnnh,” shivered Willow. “I, I um, well I don’t really know how the rest of you works yet. But, but if you let me, I’m gonna.



She gently extricated her ear from Tara’s mouth, and looked deeply into those stunning blue eyes. “And, and I want you to know how I work too,” she whispered. “Every little bit of me. All the, the nooks and crannies. ‘Cos they’re all yours, forever.” Then she lowered her eyes and added, “Even if forever only means the next couple of hours.”



“Hey,” murmured Tara. “Don’t m-make me spank you right here. ‘Cos I will if I have to.” Willow looked up again with a smile. “Forever means just that. I’m telling you, we can do this. You, me, Mr. Giles, Buffy. But especially you, my beautiful brave slayer girl.” She touched her lips lightly to Willow’s. “W-We’re going to kick some vampire ass tonight. Then….it’s just you and me. Alone. Learning everything there is to know about each other. Okay?”



“Okay. Muchly okay with the learning.”



“A-And you know every part of me is yours forever, right?”



“Nooks?”



“Oh, a-all the nooks.”



“And crannies?”



“Definitely the crannies.”



At that point, lips came together, and the talking stopped.



Giles closed his weapons bag and left the book cage, pretending he hadn’t heard the whole exchange. He looked back over his shoulder, saw the two of them kissing, and smiled. Dammit, but even he was starting to believe that they could pull it off. Tara’s utter faith in Willow was contagious. The sex talk, he tried hard not to think about.



His heart was a little lighter as he put his bag on the table, but the darkness outside the windows sent a chill through him.



The lights in the library couldn’t erase the eclipse that had been going on for more than two hours. It was totally impossible, of course. Natural eclipses couldn’t last that long. But this was far from natural. On the Hellmouth, hardly anything was. At least the rain of stones had stopped after a few minutes. And when he popped his head out of the side door soon afterwards, most of the worms, eels and snakes had disappeared.



But it was all a reminder of the dark and deadly forces arrayed against them. Could such powerful evil really be stopped by a teenage girl, her friends, and a middle-aged librarian? He breathed heavily, and wished there was time to make another pot of tea.



But the Harvest wouldn’t wait for such niceties.



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“My blood is your blood,” intoned the Master. “My soul is your soul. But Luke? If you take any more, my thumbs will be in your eye sockets.”



Luke slipped his fangs out of the Master’s wrist and looked up from where he was kneeling in front of the ancient vampire. “Sorry Master,” he said contritely. “Got a little carried away there. That’s good stuff! I-I-I mean, my body is your instrument,” he added, remembering the spiel.



“Damn straight,” said the Master, dipping his thumb in the dark blood still flowing from his wrist. “We must observe the niceties of ritual, you know. Now hold still.”



With the blood, he began to draw a three-pointed star on Luke’s forehead. “On this….most hallowed night….we are as one. Luke is the Vessel!”



Amongst the assembled vampires, Darla’s smile broadened the most. Behind her, sitting gingerly on the edge of a rock with his knees wide apart, Xander Harris glared daggers at her back. He shifted painfully as she turned, grinned at him, and hissed, “Need a rubber ring, ballboy?”



“Quiet at the back!” snapped the Master. “You kids aren’t going to ruin my little speech, now are you? Now where did I put my notes….ah, yes.” He pulled a scrap of parchment from the pocket of his black leather coat, cleared his throat, and began to read.



“Every soul he takes will feed me. And their souls will grant me the strength to free myself. Tonight I shall walk the earth, and the stars themselves will hide!” He cried out the last word, and flung his arms to the heavens.



He held the pose for a moment, then: “Was that too OTT?” he asked. “Not too camp? I had more, but I thought, you know, keep it short and sweet, for effect.” He looked at their blank faces. “Jeez, everyone’s a critic.”



The Master sighed, rose from his throne, and flexed his claws. “Okay, move it out, minions,” he said. “The blood’s not getting any fresher. And I need lots of it, Luke. Remember, at least twenty or the party’s over. I don’t want to spend another night in this damned cave – that blood pool’s getting icky.”



He pushed at the unseen barrier around him, which still held, and shimmered at his touch.



“Set me free, my children,” he called as the vamps began to shuffle out of the cavern. “Set me free, and we shall feast on this world for eternity!”



Then he settled back into his huge carved chair, to wait for the blood to start flowing.



“Hey!” he said to the empty cave. “Who took my Soap Opera Digest?”



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Giles hadn’t noticed Buffy was missing until she came back through the main doors with an armful of candy bars.



“You um, you had enough small change for all those, did you?” he asked, with a hint of suspicion.



“Me and vending machines have an understanding,” said Buffy. “They play nice with me, and I don’t beat the crap out of them.”



“Buffy, that’s stealing, a-a-and as an appointed officer of this school, I-I cannot condone such, such wilful behaviour.”



“What can I say? My need for the sugar rush in the face of impending doom outweighed my sense of giving a crap.” She dumped the candy on the table, and nudged his leather bag, making it rattle.



“And of course, keeping lethal weapons on school grounds is just slap-worthy compared to candy rustling. My bad. I must be punished. Oh wait – I’m about to risk my biteable ass against a horde of blood-suckin’ Evil Dead rejects who want to end the world. Are we seein’ the irony here, Giles?” She looked him square in the face.



“Um….I-I’ll be having one of those Payday bars then.”



“Peanutty caramel for Mr. Prim. Anyone else for a blast of nutrition-free yet tasty fun?”



This she said to Willow and Tara, who had just emerged from the book cage, still with their arms around each other. In the absence of scrunchies, both girls had used rubber bands to put their hair out of the way. Willow’s long red tresses now hung in bunches on either side of her head, while Tara’s dark-blonde mane fell behind her in a ponytail.



“Woo hoo! Chocolatey goodness!” piped Willow, latching on to a 5th Avenue. Tara took an Almond Joy, and grinned at the redhead around a mouthful of coconut.



As Giles chewed, he took a moment to look around him. He breathed in the smell of books old and new, knowing in his heart that this was where he belonged. The finest collection of occult knowledge on the west coast. In a high school on a Hellmouth. Perhaps the Hellmouth. Weirdness Central, Willow had called it. It was where he was born to be.



If he had to die here too, tonight….then so be it. But he really wanted to come back here again. To be the Watcher his Slayer deserved. To help her grow in strength and skill. To guide her, to prepare her for what might lie ahead. To protect her.



But he knew that if the price for stopping the Harvest were to be his life, there would always be another here to watch over her, in ways that he never could.



He looked over at Willow and Tara, at the way they were standing, so close, so lost in each other’s eyes, even while they ate. He chuckled to himself as he imagined taking a stethoscope to them, right now. Would he hear two hearts, or just the one they seemed to share?



He knew that Tara would give her life to save Willow, and vice-versa. What had Buffy called it? A once-in-a-lifetime thing. He was beginning to believe it. He’d never before thought of forever as being a concept you could apply to people. But looking at them, he knew it was possible.



The biggest battle was still to come - but somehow, with those two together, already he felt the world was a safer place. Now, it seemed, he had two Slayers.



And an annoying yet brave blonde who had just started on her third candy bar, and who was now poking him in the ribs.



Mouth otherwise engaged, Buffy pointed at her watchless wrist, then at the wall clock.



“Uh yes, yes of course,” he said, gathering himself. “Ladies? I, I think it’s time to be going. We um, we have less than an hour.”



Giles hefted his weapons bag and headed towards the corridor. Buffy tucked her skateboard under her arm, and followed him. Tara and Willow hung back, just for a minute.



“Is the ankle okay now? No more um, achy bruises or, or anything?”



“You kissed them all away,” said Tara with a smile that gave the redhead aches of her own. Good aches, in good places.



“You have chocolate on you,” said Willow, wiping it away from the corner of Tara’s mouth with her thumb. Then she took both of Tara’s hands in her own, and looked into that beautiful face.



“Are you ready for this, baby?” she asked softly.



“A-Are you?”



“No.”



“Me neither. But w-w-we’re going to do it anyway, right? Are you, are you scared?”



Willow took Tara’s left hand, and placed it on her chest. “Feel that? My, my head’s having a major wiggins….but my heart….it’s so calm and happy. A-And that’s because of you.”



Tara nodded, her eyes glistening. She could feel the slow, warm beating of Willow’s heart beneath her breast. Then she put Willow’s hand above her own heart. “This, this is yours,” she said.



Through her fingers, Willow could feel a pulsing almost as steady and strong as her own.



“E-Every time it beats,” said Tara, “it says I love you. Everything I am, a-and everything I have is yours, Will. To watch over you and, and protect you, and love you. Now and always. I’m your guardian angel, remember?”



“I remember,” Willow whispered.



“Feel like kicking some demon butt?”



“I-In a minute,” said Willow, drawing her into a deep kiss, their hands still on each other’s heart.



Then Buffy ran back into the library, still clutching her skateboard.



“Hey you guys, come on!” she yelled. “This is no time to cop a feel!” Then she paused and slapped the side of her own face. “Holy crap, I can’t believe I just said that! Don’t tell Cordy! Come on!”



As she disappeared again, Willow and Tara ended their kiss with a final, barely-grazing touch on the lips, and a murmured Love you. Stakes were slipped into pockets, and they entered the long corridor hand in hand.



“O-Okay then,” said Tara, with a smile and a deep breath. “I-I guess, destiny awaits.”



“Screw destiny,” said Willow, grinning. “I just want this over with so I can get started on the learning!”



“Oh,” said Tara. “N-Nooks and crannies?”



“Every darn one!” said Willow.



*



“Bloody hell!” said Giles.



After picking their way through fallen stones and the occasional sleepy snake, Willow and Tara rounded the corner next to the library and caught up to Giles and Buffy, who were just standing there, looking at Giles’ car. It was the only one in the lot that evening.



The eclipse had turned the air cold and weirdly dark, but all the nearby lamps had snapped on in response. They could see what the stony rain had done, and Giles just stood there with his mouth open.



The hood and roof of the ancient Citroen looked like the face of the moon. Fist-sized dents had erupted all over it like a disease, with little flecks of grey paint heaped up in dusty piles all around them. The windshield and rear window were crazed with cracks, spider-webbing out from a dozen impact points.



“Bloody hell!” he said again. “I-I-I just had that detailed!”



“Shoulda used a tougher wax, huh?” said Buffy.



“Still, i-i-it should be driveable. Providing the um, the rust is still holding it together.”



Giles moved to the driver’s door, where a small garter snake hung from the handle. He picked it off and absently handed it behind him to Willow, who went ‘Gaah!’ at the touch and flipped it to Tara. She just smiled, stroked its scaly body once, and set it on the ground. Willow tried hard not to look embarrassed.



“Uh, Giles?” she said. “Do you think the Watcher’s Council will spring you for a new car? ‘Cos um, ‘cos I think this one was headin’ for the twilight home even before it went all pockmarky.”



“What? Oh, she, she won’t let me down - will you old girl?” he said, patting the hood, and trying to sound convincing. He grimaced as he plucked a sliver of glass from his thumb.



Giles looked triumphant when it started at the fourth attempt, and he shouted at them to pile in. Willow and Tara got into the back, with the bag of weapons on the seat between them. Neither of them thought there’d be time for smoochies….but the bag sure as hell wouldn’t stop them. Buffy took the passenger seat, wedging her skateboard into the well next to the gear stick.



“Giles?” she said. “If this thing doesn’t do more than forty, I’m takin’ the board. You’ll have to pay the med bills, but I’ll wedge the door open with my broken buns till you get there.”



The Watcher raised an eyebrow at her, put his foot down, and watched her slam back into her seat as the car barrelled out of the parking lot, tires smoking.



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Apart from those streaming to the Bronze, the streets were almost empty, even though it was early.



The sudden eclipse, the chill, the falling stones, the carpet of crawling invertebrates – the residents of Sunnydale had learned over the years that these were the kind of things you just didn’t want to be out in. They didn’t talk about it, but they knew their town was….different.



The kids knew too, but they didn’t care. They just wanted to party.



As did the vampires who started emerging from sewers and tunnels within a two block radius of the Bronze.



In twos and threes they lurked in the darkness on street corners, while the main pack headed straight for the club. With their game faces hidden for now, Darla skipped happily before them, Luke prowling right behind her….and Xander Harris walking like a cowboy with haemorrhoids, slowly bringing up the rear.



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“Right, here’s the plan,” said Giles.



“There’s a plan?” said Buffy, as the cold air rushed through the empty windshield and streamed her golden mane out behind her, straight into the face of Willow, who was leaning forward to listen.



“What plan?” asked the Slayer, spitting out hair. “You have a plan in the car, but not in the library where it’s warm and we can sit around going ‘Uh-huh Giles, great plan’ instead of freezing in this bucket going ‘What plan?’ So….what plan?”



“Well, I-I-I um, I thought….while, while you and Tara fight the uh, the vampires, Buffy can rescue Miss Chase a-a-and lead the others to safety and, and I will um, guard the door. T-T-To prevent others from uh, getting in. With, with my crossbow. You see?”



The girls looked at each other in silence.



“That’s a plan?” said Buffy.



“I guess it’s the only plan we’ve got,” said Willow, looking worried.



“I-I-I have a plan,” said Tara, to the redhead’s obvious delight and pride. “We, we get to the Bronze first, a-a-and I put a Felosian Sphere round the whole building.”



“Um….” said Willow, puzzled.



“You can do that?” asked Giles. “A-A Felosian Sphere? It, it’s remarkably advanced for a witch of your youth a-a-and inexperience. Are you sure….?”



“Okay, I’ll bite,” said Buffy. “What’s a Fallopian Sphere?”



“Uh, Felosian,” explained Tara. “I-It’s a spell I got from my mom’s books. It’s like um, it’s like you put a, a bubble of power around something and, and it stops people getting in. I-I tried it out at home last night, just, just a little one. My uh, my brother Donny couldn’t get into the bathroom for nearly an hour.” She smiled in a coy, secretly-pleased way. “He uh, he nearly wet his pants.”



“Wow,” said Willow, taking her hand. “My girl’s really got the magic.” In every way, she thought.



“But, but I don’t know how I’ll do with a whole building,” said Tara. “I-I-It might not last too long or, or be very strong.”



“Nevertheless,” said Giles, “i-it’s an advantage we didn’t have before. And, and if it collapses, well, at least we can attack them while they’re coming in. Good, Tara, very good!”



Willow lifted the blushing girl’s hand, and kissed it. “Then let’s speed it up, Giles. Put that foot down!”



“Jesus!” yelled the Watcher, as the brakes squealed and smoked.



“Wrong foot!” shouted Willow, then shrank back in her seat as a body hit the hood of the car and came almost through the open windshield.



They came to a screeching halt in the middle of an intersection, where Buffy screamed as the body turned itself around and snarled at her through a mouthful of fangs.



As she beat its clawing hands back with her skateboard, the driver’s door was wrenched open, and Giles was dragged out into the street. Willow and Tara leapt from the car, to see the Watcher struggling with a vampire against the hood, and another coming at them from the other side.



“Tara! Help Giles!” cried Willow, taking up a stance against the third vamp.



Tara kicked the demon hard in the back, giving Giles a chance to floor him with a two-handed punch to the jaw. Buffy’s attacker caught the edge of the skateboard full in the face, and rolled backwards off the hood. She leapt out after him with a stake, but he sprang to his feet, knocked her aside, and went after Willow.



With a vamp coming at her from both sides, Willow did the only thing she could think of at that moment. She fell flat on her back, and as the second vamp leapt at her, pumped her legs up and propelled him straight into the first one. And for my next trick…. she thought.



Then Tara was there, helping her up, and once more they stood back to back as vampires circled them.



Buffy and Giles seemed to be tag-teaming against the third one. But that ended when he snap-kicked Giles in the chest, sending him back against the car, where he crumpled, and smacked his head against the doorframe. “Uhhhh….not again,” he mumbled as he passed out.



The vamps came for Willow and Tara at the same time.



“Arms!” said the Slayer, thinking fast.



Tara thrust her arms back to meet Willow’s, where they linked and locked together. Willow leaned forward, pulling Tara up onto her back. The witch bent her legs, then shot them forward like pistons at the face of the attacking vamp. But as he fell poleaxed to the ground, the other one kicked at Willow, sending them both crashing.



Meanwhile, Buffy was whipping out her can of demon-mace and giving her opponent an eyeful. As he thrashed about, screaming, she knelt beside Giles and slapped him – not very gently – about the face.



“Giles!” she yelled at him. “This is fun, but you gotta wake up! Believe me, you don’t want me driving your car! Giles! Tea-time!”



Willow found herself on top of Tara and thought – if only for a nanosecond – how so very nice that was. But then claws fastened round her throat, and she started getting cranky.



“Mister,” she rasped. “I’ve…already…been choked…once…this week…let’s see…how…you…like it!” She managed to pry the vampire’s fingers from around her neck, hearing little bones snap as she did so. He howled, but that stopped when her own hand clamped onto his throat.



“Heh! But I don’t need to breathe!” grinned the vampire, wriggling in her grasp.



“Then why does your breath smell like a dog’s?” said Willow. “Eww! What the heck have you been licking?



He didn’t get a chance to answer as Tara’s stake suddenly appeared in his chest, and Willow was left with a handful of dust.



On the other side of the car, a vamp with a ruined and smoking face was running from Buffy. She went after him with a stake in each hand, but paused when she heard a groan from Giles. The vamp headed straight for Tara.



“Sweetie, are you okay?” Tara was saying, stroking the red finger marks on Willow’s neck.



“I’m fine. Thanks baby,” she said with a kiss. “You?



Tara nodded, but said in a hurt voice, “Bruised butt.”



“Aww, now that I can – duck!” Tara moved her head just as a clawed fist came in. It was aimed straight at Willow’s face, and she caught it square on the chin. It rocked her head back a little, but she countered with a backhand punch that sent the creature reeling.



“Oh, we so don’t have time for this!” exclaimed Willow, watching both remaining vamps climb to their feet and close in. “They’re just trying to delay us!”



“Y’know, I really think they might be trying to kill us!” chimed in Buffy, joining them and panting hard.



“Well, that too,” said Willow. “Tara? You’ve got to get to the Bronze now! Do your, your whosis with the heynow! Buy us all some time!”



“Willow! No!” said Tara. “Y-You need me here with, with you!



“Oh, I know, baby, but me and Buffy can handle these two chuckleheads.”



“You betcha!” added Buffy, taking a firm grip on both her stakes.



“Baby, you gotta go now!” pleaded Willow. “Or all our gooses are cooked! Please? We’ll be right behind you!”



Tara sighed. “O-O-Okay. But, but if you get k-k-killed I’ll, I’ll never forgive you! I-I can’t run real fast, so….Buffy? Do you mind?”



The two vamps rushed in at that moment, fists and feet flying.



“Huh? What? Mind what?” said Buffy, putting her head where the fists weren’t, as Tara backed away towards the car.



She reached in and pulled out Buffy’s skateboard, then gave a last look over to where Willow and Buffy were holding their own against the two vampires.



“I love you, Will!” she called out, then flung the board down ahead of her, leapt onto it as it rolled, and pumped herself forward. She picked up speed really fast, then crouched low and shifted her weight like an expert to slide effortlessly round the corner and out of sight.



Blocking and ducking, Buffy and Willow watched her go in amazement.



“Holy halfpipe!” said Buffy. “That girl’s gotta give me lessons!”



With a high punch and a side kick, Willow felled her attacker and dusted him. “Oh, she’s got things to teach me first!” she said with a proud smile. “Now, let’s finish off Krusty the Klown here, and go after my girl!”



*



Tara was less than two blocks from the Bronze, rolling smooth and fast.



Long time since I’ve done this! she thought. Then, Oh god I hope I make it! Willow needs me to do this. I don’t wanna do this! Be safe Willow!



A vampire stepped out the shadows ahead of her as she came to the next intersection. Oh god, be safe me!



She jammed her foot on the tail of the board, leaned, and jinked around the creature’s outstretched hands. Then another appeared, carrying something that looked like a broom handle or a metal pole. He swung it at her legs, but she leapt over it, landing goofy-foot on the board as it carried on rolling.



Too close! she thought, switching feet and kicking hard to gather speed. She could hear music ahead, then the lights of the Bronze came into view. The guy on the door was checking two more people in. Not fifty yards away, she saw a pack of vampires emerge from the darkness into the street. The short, unmistakable figure of the creature called Darla danced in front of them



No time for the elegant dismount! thought Tara, steering towards a heap of cardboard boxes stacked badly against the wall. She ground the board’s tail down hard, slowing enough not to be winded when she hit. Thank the goddess there’s always cardboard boxes! she thought, as she struggled up.



To the puzzled gaze of the doorman, Tara stood panting with both hands at shoulder height, palms outward, and began to chant. “S-S-Spirit of Felosia, lady of, of ice and stillness, be with me here in this place. E-Enfold thy wings about us, I pray thee. Earth and breath, sky and silence, enfold! Enfold!



Something passed through her, through her hands and into the air. Across the face of the Bronze, stretching over the roof and around the sides, a quivering envelope zipped into being, rippling and shimmering like a soap bubble. Through it, she saw the doorman frown and say “Hey!”, but she couldn’t hear him. Or the music.



Uh….shouldn’t I be on that side of it? she thought suddenly.



The growl of approaching vampires made her back away into the street. They were wearing their game faces now, and really didn’t look pleased. Darla touched the bubble, her hand sliding off it with a squeaky, soapy sound. She snarled at Tara, moving aside for Luke, who looked at her with contempt.



“I haven’t forgotten you, witch,” he said. “The Vessel shall be filled with your blood before this night is over.” Grinning, he punched his fist at the bubble which gave like elastic, and closed his hand around the throat of the terrified doorman. The bubble stretched, wavered….and ripped apart, disappearing with a quiet pop!



“His power is in me,” said Luke. “Bring her.” He dragged the doorman inside, with Darla and the other vampires behind. Xander Harris winked and cocked an imaginary gun at her as he followed. Then the door closed, and two vamps who had been left outside came for her.



At which point the throaty rattle of Giles’ car surged into the street, hit the kerb, bounced back, spun in a full circle with the brakes locked and screaming, and smashed into the vampires head-on. When it shuddered to a halt, Willow leapt from the car, sprinted thirty yards, dusted them both, then ran back to Tara, hugged her, and covered her face in kisses.



“Baby! Baby! You’re okay! Are you okay? You gotta be okay! Say you’re okay!”



“Uh, I’m okay Will!” said Tara, reeling under the barrage, but infinitely glad that Willow seemed okay too. “Th-The spell was a bust, though. I’m sorry.”



They hurried back to the car, arms around each other. “You mean it didn’t work?” asked Willow.



“Oh it worked,” said Tara. “But I-I-I stretched it too far. I’m sorry, Will. I, I wasn’t strong enough to stop them.”



“You did your best, baby,” said Willow, stroking her arm. “You knew it might not work, but you tried. We can still do it.”



“But they’re inside, Will. I-I bet they’ve locked the doors by now.”



“Then we’ll get inside too. Somehow. C’mon.”



At the car, Tara raised her eyebrows at the sight of Giles stepping groggily from the back seat, while Buffy sat in shock behind the wheel, clutching it in a death grip and muttering, “I told him. Didn’t I tell him? Sure I told him. Buffy and cars don’t mix. No sir. They just don’t mix. Cars and Buffy, nuh-uh. I told him that. Sure did.”



Willow explained. “Giles was still feeling too zonked, so he told Buffy to drive. She’s only taken the written. I don’t think he knew what he was saying. He does now! I think he’s gonna up his life insurance.”



The Watcher, having shaken himself back to reality, prised Buffy’s fingers off the steering wheel, and helped her out of the car. “So….” he exhaled. “I, I take it we’re too late and they’re already inside?”



“Hi Giles!” chirped Buffy, snapping out of it – and into something else.



“W-W-With the Vessel,” said Tara. “It’s, it’s that big one, Luke. He’s got the star, here.” She pointed to her forehead. “I-I’m sorry Mr. Giles, I couldn’t stop them.”



“What a ride, huh?” said Buffy. “Is Cordelia here yet?”



“Presumably the, the door is locked against us?” said Giles.



Willow tried it. “Uh huh,” she said. “And there’s no way I can bust it down, not that thing.”



“I looove Cordelia,” said Buffy. “She’s a hottie. We get naked!”



“Then, then we’ll try round the back,” said Giles, “while you try to find….Oh dear lord!” Buffy’s words finally registered in his brain. “You, you mean you and, and M-M-Miss Chase? You mean you’re…? They’re…? Bloody hell!”



“Forget you heard that, Giles,” said Willow. “I think she’s looped.”



“Are we going dancing?” said Buffy. “Sometimes we do naked dancing!”



“W-W-With pleasure and great speed!” said Giles, who seemed to be blinking a lot.



“Okay baby, this is it,” said Willow, taking Tara’s hand and looking scared. “I, I guess we find our own way in. You and me, together. This time, I’m not letting you out of my sight. It, it hurts when you’re not here.”



Tara once more put her hand on Willow’s heart, and said “I-I’m always here, Will. You know that. Ready?”



“As, as I’ll ever be.”



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END OF ACT 5, PART 3



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 Post subject: Re: (new penultimate) Update!
PostPosted: Mon Oct 14, 2002 3:37 am 
That image of Tara all hunkered down and hellbent for leather on that skateboard, Mike, well, I was having so much fun watching her in my mind that I couldn't even concentrate on anything I was reading after that. Much less remember anything that had come before it. So damned cute. Now there's an image I'll carry with me for a long, long time. Heh. But, not to worry, as I did go back and re-read this whole chapter over again and I'm still cracking up over Giles handing Buffy a pair of nail scissors as a weapon "more her size"...and the crack about the "weak English tea with essence of old woman"...the nooks and crannies innuendo...Buffy trying to roust Giles from unconsciousness by yelling "Teatime!"...the imagery of "the carpet of crawling invertebrates" plus Xander walking like a cowboy with hemorrhoids...and then there's Willow and Tara, still and always lovestruck and mooning over each other, even in the midst of all the mayhem. Perfect.



And there you go -- still spoiling us with the fun and the W/T devotion. Keep going Mike. Don't ever stop.

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"How 'bout them Broncos..." -- some guy, saying something useful, in The Initiative

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 14, 2002 4:53 am 
and now i have to say Mike that was a great part... Tara and the skateboard.. and just when i thought skateboarding couldn't get any more fun u come along... thank u thank u thank u. i like giles reaction to Buffy saying they dance naked so funny. love this fic

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 14, 2002 4:58 am 
That rocked Mike, I giggle so much during your updates. Skateboarding Tara is a nice visual image and I'm glad that you are extending this story I don't mind if it goes on a lot longer. Although I am really looking forward to Willow and Tara exploring each others nooks and crannies :grin

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 14, 2002 5:38 am 
Mike, Loved the update! Even if it wasn't the huge battle yet i still Loved it! I finally find out Tara's hidden talent - Skateboarding! OMG i died when she hoped on it and took off - very nice talent! :D I'm still lookin forward to her other talents as well. :grin Thats comin soon, right? :D



Well Buffy surely doesn't need to drive ever again, but she did crack me up when she got all w/ the crazy. :lol Giles findin out bout her and Cordy like that also gave me a chuckle :lol - guess he didn't like that image popping into his head, very much! :)



Ok the Harvest Battle is next, right? Well whatever it will be - even if its a whole update bout them trying to get in the Bronze i'm sure it will be great! ;) Can't wait!! :D



~Ashley~

Willow: We can come by between classes. Usually I use that time to copy over my class notes with a system of different colored pens. But it's been pointed out to me that that's, you know... insane.
Tara: I said quirky.



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PostPosted: Mon Oct 14, 2002 10:01 am 
Dammit, but even he was starting to believe that they could pull it off. Tara’s utter faith in Willow was contagious. This from the usually pessimistic Watcher.



Goofy Buffy is much fun, love her teasing Giles all the time.



You portray such a wonderful devotion between our girls, its really touching.

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls



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PostPosted: Mon Oct 14, 2002 2:59 pm 
Mike, this was a great chapter: Willow with her hair in bunches! Buffy stealing candy bars! Buffy yelling "tea time" at Giles to wake him up! Big I T said some other ones, so I won't repeat!



I noticed something else here, too, and that's how you take care with your bad guys. It's so easy to just let the bad guys present a cardboard threat, you know, let them just remain a kind of vague reminder every few pages of Evil, but you take the time to give yours personality and character development and good lines. I loved this:



Quote:
“My blood is your blood,” intoned the Master. “My soul is your soul. But Luke? If you take any more, my thumbs will be in your eye sockets.”




And he reads Soap Opera Digest. I loved that.



I'm pretty tickled that this isn't the last chapter after all! I'm with I T! Keep going! Keep going!






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"Run, flee, maybe skedadlle. We're not here to engage. This is strictly recon." Willow, on season seven, in "This Year's Girl"



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PostPosted: Mon Oct 14, 2002 4:44 pm 
Hey, Mike. Haven't posted in a while, but I loved the update. You've given the Master a sense of humor that he didn't really show during S1 of BtVS, and I love it.



Favorite line from this update: “My blood is your blood,” intoned the Master. “My soul is your soul. But Luke? If you take any more, my thumbs will be in your eye sockets.”



Second-favorite Line from this update: “Hey,” murmured Tara. “Don’t m-make me spank you right here. ‘Cos I will if I have to.” Willow looked up again with a smile. “Forever means just that. I’m telling you, we can do this. You, me, Mr. Giles, Buffy. But especially you, my beautiful brave slayer girl.” She touched her lips lightly to Willow’s. “W-We’re going to kick some vampire ass tonight. Then….it’s just you and me. Alone. Learning everything there is to know about each other. Okay?”



I LOOOOOOVE Tara. She sure does know how to reassure her slayer-girl, doesn't she? :D :wink



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PostPosted: Mon Oct 14, 2002 5:01 pm 
great update :grin i liked the banter between Buffy and Giles. Tara skateboarding was cool. when the Master was giving his speech, i suddenly had an image of Mayor Wilkins giving his speech at graduation. Xander walking like a cowboy on hemorrhoids, the Master reading Soap Opera Digest, and Buffy's reaction after driving was too funny.

Dude, we're surrounded by perverts!

2nd place??? That's just a fancy term for loser!

Screw you triangle thief!



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PostPosted: Mon Oct 14, 2002 8:12 pm 
I always end up giggling like a psychopath when I read this fic. It's great, and should never end.



Putting Tara on a skateboard was inspired, if slightly bizarre, but I do find myself wondering what she is wearing, cos I'm thinking any kind of long skirt type thing would hinder her skateboarding progress.



And I think you write Buffy brilliantly. She has me in hysterics



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“Are we going dancing?” said Buffy. “Sometimes we do naked dancing!”








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 Post subject: Re: (new penultimate) Update!
PostPosted: Mon Oct 14, 2002 9:15 pm 
Brilliant update! Absolutely brilliant! You've got everything in this update... humour and such cuteness with Willow and Tara. Buffy's always great for a good laugh. Heh. And this isn't the last part. Yay. But the next part is. Boo.



Oh well, I'll enjoy it while I can. :D



Caz

Tara: I got so lost
Willow: I found you... I will always find you



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PostPosted: Tue Oct 15, 2002 12:00 am 
The Big I T - Oh yeah, Tara is hell on wheels! I’m impressed by the list of parts that cracked you up – guess I must still be doing something right then! But I’m afraid it has to stop with the next part – well, at least until episode 2.



mocha fiend 22 - No, thank U for loving this fic! It gladdens my heart!



Puff - Nooks and crannies in the final part, Puff, after the slayin’ is done. Well, we gotta have some reward after all the terrible jokes I’ve put everyone through!



MissQuirky - Hi again Ashley! So pleased you loved the update. Other talents coming up soon, oh yes. And if Buffy ever recovers from her little shock-spasm, I don’t think she’ll be driving again any time soon! Especially not when she realises what Giles now knows!



mollyig - On a serious note – and I thank you for saying it - the devotion between, and faith in, each other, is for me the heart of Willow and Tara, and will always be, in any fic I write, whether it’s angst-ridden or funny. I love them too much not to let their love shine through, even in the direst or wackiest situations. It’s just the way they are for me – well, that and the naughty touching and insatiable desire for smoochies!



Tulipp - Thanks, Juli! Y’know, I never really liked the Master very much until ‘Prophecy Girl’ (which to me, is when the show ‘grew up’ anyway.) I always saw him as a typical one-dimensional cut-out villain, full of portentous bluster, and in serious danger of twirling his black moustache (if he had one.) If I can give him and Luke a few funny lines to flesh them out (so to speak), all the better. Thanks for noticing. And I can only promise to “keep going!” for one more chapter. I seriously need a break!



DigificWriter - Hey, welcome back DW! Glad to see you’re still with me, and lovin’ the update! Heh, that Master really needs a sense of humour, don’t you think? And boy will he be pissed when his boys get dusted! And Tara really is reassurance-girl, isn’t she? Willow needs every ounce of lovin’ Tara can give her, and then some – but Tara gets payback pretty soon!



Grimaldi - Oh yes, Mayor Wilkins! Do you know, I never thought of it, but you’re right, there is an echo of the Mayor in the Master’s little speech! I miss the Mayor. Great villain! Pleased you liked the update, hope you stick around for the last one in about a week.



jaycatt23 - Hello, giggling psychopath! So, this fic is great and should never end, huh? Sadist! My brain needs a rest! And damn your eyes, you found the one flaw in skateboarding Tara. Back in the library, she was wearing a long brown skirt! I could say that she changed into jeans before getting into the car. (Or I could say that I forgot!) The truth is, it wasn’t a heavy skirt, and she was able to hoist it and bunch it up in one hand while she sped along. Tara has exceedingly good balance. How’s that? And thank you for liking my Buffy. I like her too!



Centauri2002 - Brilliant, moi? Aw shucks, you’re just too kind, Caz. Yup, enjoy it while you can, it’ll be a looong while till the next episode. Can I get another boo there?



Well, I’d better go shift into my Cordelia mode now, and get started on the last part. Now, where did I put that can of snark….



--Mike.



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 Post subject: Re: (new penultimate) Update!
PostPosted: Tue Oct 15, 2002 12:32 am 
Mike there is no way the jokes are terrible, almost every line you have the master say ends up with me giggling. It's wonderful.

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 Post subject: Big Shiny Excalibur
PostPosted: Tue Oct 15, 2002 6:24 am 
Quote:
She bunched up her face at him, determined to get in a last shot. “Hm. You sure it isn’t weak English tea with essence of old woman?




aaghh! LMAO at that whole scene. oh mike, I luuuuuv your buffy, so very, very much. and tara's hidden, inner tony hawk...oh, damn, that is sexy. I've always pictured your 16-year-old tara a lot more like early tara anyway, you know, kinda punk with the army pants and the baseball shirts and maybe streaky hair...so the skateboard fits quite well with that image, much better than it could with later tara in long peasant skirts and whatnot. and again, with the hotness.

:shower

don't apologize for making it longer! long is good! more willowy goodness and tara teasing is nothing to aplogize for (and damn, does tara ever know how to lay it on! It's not hard to see how willow could be inspired to save the world a hundred times over with no training or weapons at all, just for the promise of nooks and crannies in her future...) will you make me a tara of my own?



--jenny






"I'm under your spell...lost in ecstasy, spread beneath my willow tree..."

--Tara's love song to Willow



"We find magic everywhere" --Dar Williams



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 Post subject: Re: (new penultimate) Update!
PostPosted: Tue Oct 15, 2002 8:01 pm 
ok, a big BOO to that! I have to wait a "looong while" for my next fix? How can you be so cruel? *flails arms about dramatically* I mean, I've gotta go to therapy now and try and go cold turkey so I won't end up a useless bum coz your fic's not around at the moment.



Ahem, well, maybe it won't be that bad, but it'll be close! *wags finger sternly* You better not keep me waiting too long or you'll truly know the meaning of harassment. :p



Caz

Tara: I got so lost
Willow: I found you... I will always find you



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 Post subject: Re: Big Shiny Excalibur
PostPosted: Tue Oct 15, 2002 8:24 pm 
lol I love this!! "She bunched up her face at him, determined to get in a last shot. “Hm. You sure it isn’t weak English tea with essence of old woman?""





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 Post subject: Re: (new penultimate) Update!
PostPosted: Tue Oct 15, 2002 9:48 pm 
The whole thing was freakin' hilarious! :lol The Master's speech made me laugh too...:rollin '

Tk's new and improved "GrrArgg"...Tk's Heaven

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Tara was similarly riveted, her body on slow burn as Willow's lips parted and her mouth opened, the food slipping inside and being consumed. Never in her life had Tara ever wanted to be a chicken casserole so badly...Later that night..."It's good to be a chicken casserole," Tara murmured, before passing out. ~ Answering Darkness by Sassette



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 Post subject: I can beg and i might!
PostPosted: Fri Oct 18, 2002 5:53 am 
Write more right now! I can beg, i really can! it's kinda sad, but i'll do it!



*falls to knees in clumsy manner, wobbling slightly as she tries to bend over a little*



Well, i can try to beg anyway!



Write more now!

"This is normal tenn stuff. You join chat rooms, you write poetry, you post dooky hours of fanfic... It's all normal, right?" -Willow, "Help"



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 Post subject: Re: (new penultimate) Update!
PostPosted: Fri Oct 18, 2002 5:56 am 
I'm with MellindraX. I too can beg.



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 Post subject: Re: I can beg and i might!
PostPosted: Fri Oct 18, 2002 9:07 pm 
Puff - Oh, okay! I’ll accept your compliments gracefully (and gratefully). And yeah, if the good guys have funny lines, why shouldn’t the baddies?



JewWitch18 - Oh wow, yes! Tara in army pants and with streaky hair! Now that I wanna see in the next episode! So glad you liked the whole skateboardy thing – and oh yes, the hotness! And Jenny – I’ll make you a Tara of your own, if I can have Amber. Deal?



Centauri2002 - Yay, I got a BOO! But we’re back to the threatening of harassment are we? Uh-oh. I’m really gonna be in for it. Especially as I won’t have the final update this week. Sorry.



singgirl, tkheaven, MellindraX - Thanks! *G* Beg away, but I’m afraid I haven’t been able to write a damn thing this week. Why does there have to be a real life to deal with? Amongst so many other (unexpected) things, I’ve been working over a hundred miles from home the past couple of days, and only got back late last night. Very tired now, and about to flake out. If I can write at all this weekend I will, but again we’re at least a week away from the end of the story. Blehh I say, blehh!





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Always.........



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 Post subject: No, no update yet
PostPosted: Sat Oct 26, 2002 7:45 pm 
Well, this thread looks dead on its ass, doesn’t it?



‘Fraid it’s likely to stay dead for a while yet too. I’ve had the flu for most of the past week, and I’m still recovering, so a final update is still some days away. I always seem to be apologising for my lateness, don’t I? I tell you, the next time I do a story, I’m gonna write the whole damn thing before I even start posting it! Thanks for your continued patience.



--Mike.




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Always.........



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 Post subject: Re: I can beg and i might!
PostPosted: Sat Oct 26, 2002 9:32 pm 
Get well soon, Mike. Take care of yourself and don't worry about updates. If a fic's worth waiting for then it's well worth waiting for. :)



You exquisite little tart!" ~ Diana Letharby



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