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Re: Chapter 35

Postby chilled monkey » Sun Nov 09, 2003 2:26 pm

Fascinating ideas on how magick works in the Diablo world. If only you had been a writer for the show :(



Nice that Willow gets to sing to Tara. We all know that Tara/Amber has a lovely voice but I always thought that in OMWF, Willow/Alyson wasn't that bad.

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Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 35)

Postby TemperedCynic » Sun Nov 09, 2003 2:30 pm

Marela's amulet makes it's reappearance in a crucial time for our heroines. Cat's eye, eh? How handy for Willow as research-gal. Will there be trouble in those tunnels before reaching the monestary? Let's see...



Sorry I haven't posted feedback, Chris. Real life hasn't allowed much more than reading updates (usually three at a time, more times than not). Please know that I still follow this story with continued interest.



Mike


More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

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Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 35)

Postby Puff » Sun Nov 09, 2003 2:49 pm

First of all Chris, thanks for link for the carver. They are creepy looking demons. Out of interest is there a picture of the goat men demons as well?



I really enjoyed this update and I found it really interesting with the role reversal that went on. From Tara being protector and the most aware, to Willow suddenly having the better vision and take care of Tara, even down to the spell for protection at the end. All the talk of nodes and power being diffused out was good as well. Thanks for the update, this story is such and adventure.



So, the day started and I knew my name and had my pants on. So far, so good. Yay.
Amber Benson

Puff
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 35)

Postby xita » Sun Nov 09, 2003 3:50 pm

Yes must agree with Puff, I like the change with Willow taking on some of the leadership. It's like she can show off what she knows. They make a good team. You've turned up the plot now and I am definitely into the adventure now!

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"Hard work often pays off after time but laziness always pays off now!"


xita
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 35)

Postby sam7777 » Mon Nov 10, 2003 7:59 pm

Yep as much as I love the love between Willow and Tara, I can't wait to see what happens next. I lvoe them adventuring together. Willow and Tara both have their strenghts and trade off leadership as needed. It shows the love and more the trust between them how they rely on one another. I was a Diablo junkie and this is even better. You have fit Willow/Tara perfectly into the Diablo universe. Though they are an amazon and a sorceress, they are still very much Willow and Tara in thought, phrase and deed. Thanks for a great fic!!

sam7777
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 35)

Postby Artemis » Tue Nov 11, 2003 9:44 am

Thanks everyone :) The next chapter is underway, four pages done tonight. I'm not exactly sure how far I'll get before I call a halt to the chapter - depends how much additional info shows up while I'm writing - but I've got the next few chapters pretty solidly planned, so there shouldn't be any major hold-ups with them.



Grimlock: Willow's keeping the supply situation in mind. So far she's only used one potion and one scroll, which is pretty good for an adventuring sorceress over the course of three days. Plus the runestone magic, but they can be re-used unless she does a particularly powerful spell with them. Those kinds of things can be bought without too much trouble - any alchemist will sell healing potions of one sort or another, or at least the necessary components to mix them.



Are the monks alive - well, they'll have to go take a look to find out. And yes, Carvers will eat pretty much anything, even dead people (even dead people who aren't fresh :) ).



Tara is going to get a chance to show off that spear. What impressed Willow is not just that it's magical - Sanctuary isn't exactly short of magic weapons - but that it's exceptionally well-made. Your average magic sword, for example, is just a normal sword with a bit of fire magic imbued into it, or maybe a curse or two that act on whoever it hits. Tara's spear is quite a bit better than that :) Obviously Tara hasn't really tested its power yet, not to that extent, but she did say a while ago she's got a natural talent for Amazon magic.



Some of the background Willow talks about is from Diablo, some I made up around it. Taking this chapter as an example, Diablo established that there are magical nodes in Kehjistan and that's why the Mage Clans are all based there; that there are seven Evils (three Prime, four Lesser, which they giv names and titles for) and that they hate each other, but sometimes work together; that Carvers can talk (they yell 'Rakanishu!' and 'Bishibosh!', which are the names of two Carver champions you run into in the game - Rakanishu is really annoying). I added to that the nature of the nodes and the way magic flows through them and the world (I've got more about nodes, but I'll see if Willow ends up explaining it at some point), that there are seven demon languages, that minor demons inherit the languages of their master Evil. Most of the stuff about how Carvers behave is just guesswork and inferrence, based on the fact that they're basically goblins, so I have them behaving like goblins. The tunnel/catacomb they're in is part Diablo (catacombs feature heavily in Act 1 of the game), part what I can remember of various churches and accompanying crypts, tombs and catacombs in Rome, Florence and Venice.



I like to make the world seem interesting. After all, if it wasn't they'd have nothing much to talk about, and this would be a much shorter story :)



The Cat's Eye Amulet is also a real item you can find in Diablo (if you're absurdly lucky, or play it for weeks non-stop), but I'll explain that down below.



sabina: It was? I may have vague memories of some lines from episodes (obviously the big ones, like 'I am, you know' and 'I am' [with the one I love] I remember, more from reading them in lots of fics :) ), but for the most part the TV show's lines and stories have blurred together into a general impression of what Willow and Tara are like. I only saw most episodes once, and we don't get re-runs here much - aside from Hush and Once More, With Feeling, I've only seen everything between the beginning of season four and the end of my Buffy-watching career (Entropy) once. So if I touch on a concept from an episode, either I subconsciously remembered it, or I made it up and it's just coincidence. Could be, I'm trying to have Willow and Tara cover a fair bit of ground in terms of their experiences and exposure to all aspects of adventuring and being in love (as much as I can, anyway).



jackie: Heh, 'dynamic duo', I like that :) I guess this means I don't have to feel guilty for never getting around to that Avengers story I was thinking about a while ago.



Debra: I'm glad you liked it. I was a bit worried that not enough happened, I'm glad the conversation and minor obstacled made up for the lack of big plot events. 'Walking in a tunnel' makes me think of the Moria chapters of LotR :) Don't worry, there isn't a Balrog lurking up ahead. I'm not saying there isn't *anything* lurking, mind.



chilled monkey: Thanks :) I think I'd make a terrible TV writer - every episode would be rated so that it'd have to be shown in a late-night time slot, and the effects budget would go through the roof every week. I liked Alyson Hannigan's singing in OMWF - you could tell she's not trained, but she sounded good regardless. I think she'd sound really sweet doing a simple melody/folksong kind of thing like that. I imagine it's something she would have learned when she was young - I just made it up.



TemperedCynic: (Sorry, I used the wrong pronoun - I'm always doing that.) No worries about having limited time, I understand that all too well. I'm glad you're still following the story. And yes, I suspect I wouldn't have thought of Marela's amulet as a potential magic item (rather than just a token of goodwill) if you hadn't raised the question back when it first showed up. At the time I had a vague idea that sometime in the next story Willow and Tara would meet a tribe of cat people, and be accepted thanks to Tara having proof that she's friendly. I think Marela might be a fairly well-known kitty.



As I said earlier, there is a Cat's Eye Amulet in the game - I didn't know that when I was writing the early chapters, as I hadn't found the thing, but it's a neat coincidence. The game's version is a bit more powerful: briefly, it makes your character faster, more agile, and increases your Defence Rating (armour), particularly against missiles. Oddly - given that cats are known for night vision - it doesn't do a thing about your light radius, the equivalent of how well you can see in the dark. This version of the Cat's Eye Amulet just does the vision, it doesn't have other powers attached. (Marela may have taken to Tara, but she's still not going to go handing out godly-powerful magic items on a whim.)



The vision being red is something I vaguely remember hearing about cats, that red is the only colour they can differentiate from monochrome. I don't know if that's true - I seem to remember some doubt on the subject - but I thought it was cute anyway. Willow (and Tara, who will be using it while Willow's taking a nap) are seeing exactly as cat people see. I like having nonhuman characters who actually behave and experience differently to humans, rather than just having a different appearance. I've got another one planned who I think should be quite neat.



Puff: I couldn't find any artwork of a goat-men, but here's an image of one as they appear in the game: www.battle.net/images/bat...oatman.gif I actually hadn't thought of Willow's vision as being a role reversal - it is, of course, I just didn't plan it. A lot of things in this story seem to happen on their own :)



xita: Thanks :) I think they do make a good team. I'm trying to make neither of them the 'leader' particularly - both have different abilities that are more or less useful depending on the situation, but also both are pretty versatile, and I think it'll be rare that one has to rely completely on the other. It happens sometimes though, and I like the idea that neither of them have a problem with not being completely in control on their own. I don't see either of them, given their backgrounds, as having the typical warrior need to be in control of everything all the time, and reluctance to rely on others.



sam7777: Thank you, I'm doing my best to keep them Willow and Tara among all the Diablo elements. Admittedly being a sorceress isn't that much of a stretch for Willow. I did rework the Amazons a little to make it more believable that they'd produce someone like Tara - the game's Amazons would be more fitting for Kendra, all business. Not that a more strict warrior culture couldn't produce someone like Tara, but I don't think she'd be a warrior herself in such a culture. I'm hoping to keep the theme of trust between them running through the story.

Artemis
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 35)

Postby 2DIAMONDS » Tue Nov 11, 2003 10:21 am

:wave Hey Chris!



I hate it when real life and work and just overall crap interfere with me posting immediately after an update. Grrrr :rage



I usually have more insightful and thought provoking commentary then :rolleyes



Anyway, I just wanted to take the five minutes that I have to say how much I enjoyed Willow's song. Very cool! Also, I really love how you have portrayed the Willow and Tara relationship. Tara doesn't have to be the strong Amazon all the time. Willow is equally capable of taking care of her love. Good job and I'll try for a better post after the next update! :peace



Helen

xoxo





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Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 35)

Postby Artemis » Wed Nov 12, 2003 11:36 am

Helen: Thanks, I'm glad the song didn't turn out too hokey. I'm not big on writing lyrics (well, except for Rocky Horror Slayer Show, but that's different). I like the adventuring dynamic they're evolving (more or less on their own, as I've said before I don't really plan this kind of thing). Tara knows she doesn't have to be strong all the time, and conversely Willow knows it's okay for her to rely on Tara when she had to (like before she could see anything). I'm not really big on angst :)



Anyway, on with the show...

Artemis
 


FIC: Hellebore (chapter 36)

Postby Artemis » Wed Nov 12, 2003 11:41 am

Hellebore



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: R

Summary: A headstrong sorceress and a young Amazon join forces to locate and destroy an ancient source of demonic power.

Spoilers: None.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy the Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Diablo II' by Blizzard Entertainment. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Thirty-Six

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Tara awoke gently, feeling quite refreshed. A feeling of warmth in her localised itself to the sensation of Willow's lips touching her cheek, and she smiled, imagining the fond, indulgent expression she was sure she would have been seeing, had there been any light.



"Hey," she whispered, gathering her wits from sleep.



"Morning," Willow replied, straightening as Tara sat up and slid her legs out from beneath the blankets.



"Is it?" she asked.



"I don't think so," Willow said, "I think it's sometime in the night, maybe a couple of hours after midnight."



"How long did I sleep?"



"As long as I could manage." Tara heard Willow taking off her boots, then she was lying down, all the while staying in contact with her, by a hand on her arm, or their thighs touching as she slid over the blankets.



"You looked pretty tired," Willow continued, "so, I thought, best if my Amazon gets a proper rest. Big day tomorrow, more catacombs to explore." Tara chuckled at her unenthusiastic tone. "Oh, hey," Willow said suddenly, "you should take the amulet. It's not like I need it to sleep..." Her hand vanished from Tara's arm for a moment, then she was touching her again, finding her hand and pressing the silver chain and amulet into it.



"I just put it on?" Tara asked, already lifting the chain around her neck.



"Yup, that's the..." Willow paused to yawn, "...idea. Hmm."



"Sleep," Tara said gently, "you've been up a long time."



"Yeah," Willow said indistinctly, "you needed sleep though..."



"I did," Tara replied, "I can tell you let me sleep a long time. It's your turn, so we'll both be fresh tomorrow."



"'Kay," Willow murmured, "made some notes in our journal... might be useful..." She yawned again, and Tara leaned down to kiss her just as she started falling asleep. For a few moments she sat still, just watching Willow and smiling. With the vision the amulet gave her, it almost seemed as if the room was bathed in soft daylight. Tara looked around eventually, evaluating her new sight - Willow's scarlet hair and the red-brown of her leathers may have been unchanged, but in other areas she could tell she was not seeing by normal light. She glanced at the feathers of her arrows, sticking out of the open quiver on her pack, and found their blues and greens showed up only as various shades of grey. However, she consoled herself, the amulet needed no light to see by, and thus none of the small room's details were hidden in shadow.



She moved to the small doorway and peeked outside, familiarising herself with the tunnel now that she could see it, rather than just feel it. Returning to sit beside Willow, she turned her attention to the crypts lining the walls, surprised by their workmanship. Stonework was a rarely-used art among Amazons, and the level of detail in the statues, the realism of the sleeping figures, was quite astonishing. Tara stood again and walked around the perimeter of the room, looking at the faces of the statues, noting the various symbols and decorations. Two of the coffins, judging by their carvings, contained lords of some rank, or so Tara guessed from the coronets and noble garments they were depicted with. The other four in the room were of less nobility, but seemed to be warriors of some note, all with swords held across their chests, shields covering their lower bodies, and either representations of dead foes, or minutely-carved scenes of battle in which the occupants of the coffins were shown wielding swords or halberds against a variety of demons and beasts.



Tara sighed to herself, no longer feeling quite at ease with her surroundings. The stonemasons who had carved the statues of the dead had been skilled at their craft, and at a casual glance it seemed that the old warriors and noblemen were merely sleeping. Or perhaps it was the amulet, she thought, allowing her to see the texture of the rock alone, without the telltale reflection of light that would tell smooth stone from skin. Tara sat down beside Willow and watched her sleep, focusing on the slow rise and fall of her chest. She reached out and, with the utmost care, stroked Willow's cheek with the backs of her fingers, and smiled as Willow sensed it even in her sleep and tilted her head over a fraction, pressing into her hand.



Keeping the still, cold figures of the dead out of her mind, in favour of the very much alive woman beside her, Tara felt warmed herself, and relaxed a little. The journals caught her eye, their own book and Ember's, sitting next to her pack with a pen and inkpot still beside them, and she picked up the book and leafed through the pages, seeing what Willow had written. She found a rough map of the tunnel, with estimates of the distance between the church cellar and the iron gateway, and little markings showing where the crypts started, leading up to the room they were occupying. Tara dipped the pen into the ink and made a few minor corrections to the early part of the map - very minor, she mused, considering that Willow had been effectively blind over that part of the trip. She wondered if the Zann Esu practised some form of tracker training, but thought it more likely - and consistent with what she already knew - that it was just another example of Willow being remarkably perceptive.



The next couple of pages were filled with notes, summarising most of what had happened to them since they had been separated from the caravan. Tara nodded as she skimmed over descriptions of the behaviour of the goat-men who had chased them, the Carvers in the village, even the blood hawk they had encountered that morning, though in that case there was little to record, and Willow had confined herself to making a couple of rough sketches, with a note to herself to check its wingspan and markings later against 'foul crows' and 'black raptors', whatever those were. Tara noticed a page number scribbled in the margin beside the entry, and on a hunch opened Ember's journal and flipped through the pages, counting as she went. She found the page marked with a scrap of paper, and spent a few minutes reading about the various types of blood hawks and their relatives, which were numerous and uniformly unpleasant.



Tara went back to Willow's writing and studied what she had been thinking after having recorded as much information as she could. Willow seemed to have been pondering the likelihood of the Carvers and goat-men being under the direction of a single leader - 'Ghoul Lord', she wrote at one point, and afterwards tended to use the abbreviation 'GL' whenever she mentioned the theoretical master demon, though in one paragraph she seemed to be pondering whether their adversary might be something else: 'GL = ghouls, but we saw none, except maybe bump-in-the-night monster' (Tara grinned) 'while Carvers suggest something else (skirmishers, drawn to trouble - not part of retinues). Other options: Liche Lord? Human? Blood Clan goat-men often seen in retinues of GL/Night Lords. Carvers just coincidental? Ghouls are slow, poor fighters (used as shields, permit GL to cast against enemies without being attacked). Maybe goat-men used for speed. Was bump-in-the-night a ghoul or a normal undead? How far from self can GL control & maintain subservient ghouls? Maybe goat-men able to travel further, sent to attack us. From where?'



Tara wondered that too, but had to admit to herself that they didn't have enough information to do anything but guess. Later, perhaps, when they had reached safety - Duncraig, if not sooner - then it would be time to take measures to rid the land of the creatures that plagued it. 'The sooner the better,' Tara thought, remembering the people who she had seen dead in the village. She glanced at Willow. 'But for now, let's just get you and me to safety. Somewhere we can lie down and rest together, and not have to worry about keeping watch through the night.'



A note on its own on the right side of the page caught Tara's eye, two page numbers, underlined. She checked Ember's journal, found at the first one another page marked with a paper, and read. It began with the last few lines of whatever Ember had been writing about previously - 'Viz'Jaq-taar shadow disciplines,' according to the title on the page before. After that, though, the next title was 'Order of Guardians', and Tara saw why Willow had noted it. She gave a half-smile - 'She was right,' she thought, 'Ember really *has* been everywhere and seen everything' - and read on. There was no reference to 'Kotram', but after a few lines it was clear to Tara that Ember had been writing about the same place they were now somewhere beneath.



'Surrounded by five small townships,' she read, 'the monastery of the Order of Guardians serves as haven, fortress and outpost of law in the upper Kingsway Highlands, which fall largely outside the influence of Duncraig's soldiers.' Tara wondered if Duncraig was less intent on protecting its borders than Shan and Kert had thought, or if Ember had been writing at a time when the city's territory was less expansive, and Kotram and Harthim had been isolated from its rule. She shrugged and read on: 'The Order dates back at least as far as the Second Founding, though the records kept by the brother-scribes indicate they may be even older. Unfortunately I have been unable to find earlier documents during my time in the library, but some elements of the monastery's stonework (particularly the catacombs, though I have not gone below first level - brothers mentioned that lower levels were much larger. Must try to find time to explore) seem to date from earlier, perhaps the third century by the Clan calendar. There isn't much left from that time, I wish I had the chance to study this in further detail. I must remember to tell Xanth, this is just the kind of thing she'd spend weeks on. The Order's main self-assigned function is the preservation of law and peace throughout the territory around the monastery, encompassing the surrounding townships, their farmlands and a substantial stretch of the Highlands. Their warriors are well-trained and well-educated, though they have no mages among them, a peculiarity that seems to have its origin somewhere in their history, and endures through ritual rather than attitude. Certainly I have been made to feel welcome, and in general the brothers seem to hold no prejudice against mages, or indeed anyone. More than can be said for most Zakarum-aligned Orders, sadly.



'The map room (ground floor, east) is of particular note, the depiction of the surrounding countryside is both exceedingly beautiful, and accurate enough that the brothers use it to plan their campaigns against the demons that occasionally infest the Highlands. The monastery maintains its own forge and armoury, which is well-equipped. The records of demonic beasts and man-hybrids are extensive, layman's observations for the most part but accurate and perceptive, and afford the brothers an excellent resource in planning their strategies, whether they be defensive or offensive. According to the brother-historian I spoke with yesterday, the monastery has held its own walls since the fall of the old Empire, and has never been taken by an enemy in all that time (though he admitted that there had been times when garrisons from Duncraig had assisted in their defence, most recently in the turmoil that sprung up around the edges of the civil wars on the peninsula).'



Tara frowned as she read, wondering what they might find when they reached the monastery. She allowed that, with bands of demons moving about freely, the villages surrounding the monastery were not defensible, and the brothers would be more likely to make their stand within the monastery itself. But surely there would have been at least some sign of battle? She couldn't imagine an Order of warriors standing idly by while such weak foes as Carvers - dangerous to her and Willow, but nothing to an organised force - roamed around during the daylight. And then there were the bodies in the village... even a non-believer would try to see that they had a decent burial, so for a religious Order to leave them, for creatures to desecrate... 'means they're in no condition to send men to a village barely a mile from their walls,' Tara thought grimly.



She checked the second page number Willow had noted, and found half-way down the page a brief note Ember had written, which by the date - Tara wasn't familiar with the calendar, but she compared the dates on the two entries - was several years later than the first. 'Order of Guardians,' it read, 'during Reckoning, under siege by forces loyal to the Evils. Only a dozen or so brothers remain. Concentrating efforts on rebuilding damaged portions of monastery.' 'Well,' Tara thought, 'that might explain it. How many more brothers could they induct and train since then? Not enough to safeguard the lands around them. Enough to safeguard themselves?' She wasn't even sure of that, but she resolved to be cautious and ready for anything in the morning, when they reached the monastery.



Willow slept soundly and deeply, too tired even for dreams so far as Tara could judge. She felt a pang of regret at having slept so long herself - she could feel, from the way her body felt now compared to her tiredness before she had lain down, that she had been asleep close to eight hours. She reassured herself that it was probably for the best, and that it was far better for Willow to wear herself out a little watching over her in an apparently safe haven underground than for she herself to be tired when her senses and reactions could prove vital. Smiling fondly at Willow, glad at least that her deep slumber kept her safe from bad dreams, Tara waited out the night. Taking into account her guess at how long she had slept, and her best estimate of how long she and Willow had travelled underground - the darkness had seemed to make the time stretch - she figured that it would be best to give Willow six hours sleep, and then hope to reach the monastery and find a passage out of the catacombs during the morning, when the sun was already high. Their experience in the village notwithstanding, Tara felt a lot safer during the day than at night, and if there was danger in the monastery, she felt instinctively that it would be greater in the dark.



Eventually Tara reluctantly decided it was time to wake Willow, for all that she looked ready to sleep through most of the day as well. She had a bite to eat from their supplies while she could see clearly, left some ready for Willow, and finally leaned over her sleeping companion, pressing a kiss to her upturned lips. Willow murmured to herself, moving her lips against Tara's, which Tara found quite enjoyable in itself, then she sensed Willow stirring to consciousness. When she saw Willow's eyes open - grey in the amulet's sight - she began to lean back, but with unexpected vigour for having so recently been sound asleep, Willow's arms went around her waist and pulled her back down, deepening the kiss instead of ending it.



"I thought," Tara said, lifting up for a moment before Willow claimed her mouth again, "you said you," another kiss, "didn't like waking up in the morning?" Willow made a non-committal noise while nibbling on Tara's bottom lip.



"You have this way of making it worthwhile," she admitted when she had finally had her fill of Tara for the moment. "Besides, we don't know how long it'll be before we have another opportunity for proper kissage... best to take advantage of the opportunity when it arises, don't you think?"



"Uh-huh, definitely," Tara agreed, doing her best to ignore her body's demand to stay wrapped around Willow, regardless of the need to get up and get moving. She took a last, long look at Willow, committing her smiling face and tempting form to memory yet again, before removing the amulet and pressing it into Willow's palm.



"Thanks," Willow said, sitting up. "You're okay without it?"



"I'll be fine," Tara assured her, "you need it more. There's rations there if you're hungry." Willow kissed her cheek briefly, then reached over to where Tara had left the food and waterskin. Tara noticed, and was grateful, that Willow was deliberately staying in contact with her all the while, with a hand on her thigh as she leaned over, and leaning back against Tara as she ate, with Tara's arms loosely around her shoulders.



"Getting low on water," Willow commented to herself, and Tara saw a faint blue glow as Willow condensed more out of the air. It lasted a little longer than when she had done it out in the wilderness, and Tara had a moment to see the outlines of Willow's hands and face in the glow.



"The air's dry down here," Willow explained, before Tara could ask, "it takes a little longer to draw the same amount of water out of it."



"Is it more difficult?" Tara asked. "There's probably a well in the monastery, you don't have to keep doing that..."



"It's not a problem," Willow said lightly, "it's just a matter of time, not effort. Besides, I'm not sure I trust the ground water around here. Get too many demons around and their energy starts affecting things."



"They poison the water?"



"Sometimes on purpose," Willow said, "the smart ones, anyway. Sometimes it's just by upsetting nature's balances. I don't know if there's *that* many demons around, but it's best not to take chances."



"The water we bathed in, in the valley," Tara said, with a worried note in her voice.



"It was fine," Willow said, "I'd have seen any leakage of demonic power."



"I thought it was okay," Tara said, "safe to drink, I mean, not that we did... I didn't realise it could be magically poisoned though."



"I think you probably would have felt it if the water was bad," Willow said, stroking Tara's arm, "magic and nature aren't separate things."



"Good," Tara replied, "I was just wondering, you know. I'd like not to be poisoned *too* many times while we're out here," she added with a laugh. She was pleased to hear Willow laugh along with her, genuinely, not a forced laugh.



"Drink?" Willow asked, offering Tara the waterskin.



"No thanks, I had some earlier," Tara said, dropping to a covert murmur, "just between you and me, I hope we get above ground and find a bathroom soon."



"Me too," Willow returned, also whispering, "let's make that priority one." They shared a giggle, then Willow gathered up the blankets and helped Tara with her pack.



"Do we have everything?" Tara asked, slightly annoyed at herself for not doing more to prepare when she could still see.



"Pack, bow, spear, staff, blankets, satchel," Willow said to herself, "that's the lot. Shall we?" Tara felt Willow offer her elbow, and looped her arm through it.



After a hundred metres more of walking along the tunnel, which Willow reported was no more interesting than the part they had already traversed, she and Tara encountered the first junction, more a crossroads as another tunnel intersected with theirs, stretching off as far as Willow could see left and right.



"We should keep on the main tunnel, I think," Willow commented, "it's larger, I think the turn-offs are just to reach more tombs. We're more likely to reach the surface this way."



Tara agreed, feeling little in the way of air currents from the other passageways. They continued on their way, passing more and more passages on either side, and even a couple of stairwells, leading only downwards.



"How big do you think these catacombs are?" Tara wondered.



"Could be pretty expansive," Willow said thoughtfully, "you read the entries in Ember's journal?"



"Uh-huh," Tara replied, "do you know if she did ever go down below the first level of catacombs?"



"I don't think so," Willow said with a shrug Tara felt through their linked arms, "at least, if she did she probably would have written about it somewhere, and I didn't find anything except that other note at the end, about the siege during the Reckoning."



"The first level would be how deep underground, from the monastery?"



"Right below it," Willow said, "mostly cellars and stuff, a few crypts. Assuming the place is built along the same lines as the ones in Kurast. The architecture varies, but the layout is usually pretty similar."



"I think we're deeper down," Tara said, "I mean, I've been a little disorientated since we went underground, but I don't think we've gone upwards enough to be right underneath the monastery, especially with it on the hill. We're probably in one of the lower levels."



"I haven't seen any stairways going up yet," Willow mused, "but this tunnel does kind of look like the main thoroughfare... and if the villagers were supposed to come along here, it would've been built so that they wouldn't get lost. I think this'll probably lead us to the stairway sooner or later. Oh, hey, did you feel that?"



"I felt something," Tara said, frowning to herself, "sort of a... like a breeze, but not..."



"Magical field," Willow said, "the library vaults back at the Order are full of them."



"What does it mean?" Tara asked, slowing her pace.



"Probably nothing," Willow said, "it wasn't recent, I could tell that, I don't think anyone but a mage would've felt a thing. Just goes to show you're special, doesn't it?" Tara grinned despite herself. "It's probably just a relic," Willow went on, seriously, "a lot of catacombs and tombs have them, mostly from having the ground sanctified at some point. If the person doing the sanctification is a holy mage, that can leave a trace that takes hundreds of years to fade."



"What does it do?"



"Demons don't like it," Willow explained, as they resumed their earlier pace, "sacred ground won't stop them outright, but it'll give them something to think about. That's part of the reason people go to the town church when they're in trouble. Of course, usually the church is the strongest building anyway, but being on holy ground helps. Carvers would hesitate to cross the boundary. Stronger demons like goat-men wouldn't care particularly, but in a close fight it could tip the scales. You know, if they don't fight *quite* as hard as they would normally, it can be enough for them to be driven off."



"It makes sense," Tara supposed, "after all, there is a monastery up there."



"Yeah, although Ember said they didn't have any mages," Willow mused. "Maybe they did centuries ago. Or maybe it's left over from something earlier. Maybe I used to be an older church or something, and the monastery was built on top of the old crypts, and they got expanded into catacombs. Some of the temples in Kurast have more than a dozen different layers of architecture underneath them, from older buildings being destroyed and rebuilt. I think there's another stairwell up ahead."



"Going up?" Tara asked, as Willow picked up their pace.



"Going up," Willow happily confirmed, "and hey, look at this... oh, sorry," she corrected herself sheepishly, "um, the paving stones, they're laid out in a different pattern past the stairwell. That must be deliberate, so you can follow the tunnel either way. Just stay on the path the stones show you, and you can go from the stairs all the way through the catacombs to the village tunnel without getting lost."



"Is there a chamber up ahead?" Tara asked. "I think I can feel lots of space..."



"Can't quite make it out," Willow said, "the next archway's only a few metres, you want to take a look?"



"Well you're the one who'd be taking a look," Tara reminded her with a grin. She tugged gently on Willow's elbow, and together they walked to the archway. Tara had a sense of a great space, maybe a cavern - the air was moving naturally, not confined by tight passageways and low arches.



"What is it?" she asked, when Willow remained silent.



"See for yourself," Willow replied in an odd voice, a combination of surprise and awe. Tara felt Willow touch her hand, giving her the amulet, and wondered what was so interesting that Willow would forego her sight - even if just for a moment - just so that Tara could take a look. When she closed the amulet's chain around her neck, it took her a moment to realise that it was working properly, and that her sense of perspective hadn't been distorted.



The archway she and Willow were standing in opened onto a wide balcony, paved with huge stone tiles, each one two metres across, and bordered on either side by thick, square pillars that stretched up to support a ceiling almost ten metres above the floor. Beyond the balcony was the real surprise - beyond a stone railing decorated with gargoyles and angelic figures, massive pillars descended deep into the earth, and between them lay chasms fifty metres deep, the floors below distant and tiny. With Willow's hand in hers Tara slowly approached the railing, staring out across the stone landscape. To either side of her, barely a metre from where she stood, two of the great pillars loomed, their surfaces carved with ancient representations of gods, angels, heroes and beasts. The carvings ran as far as Tara could see - beyond that they blurred into a soft texture covering the stonework, on every pillar she could make out. At irregular intervals their surfaces were broken by archways from which bridges spanned the distances between them, and here and there supporting beams, great masses of stone, angled out into the ground.



"Gods and goddesses," Tara whispered, "who built this?" She peered to either side, trying to find the edge of the great man-made cavern, but the wall curved around, denying her a clear point of reference. Here and there were more balconies, some connected by stairways to passages inside the pillars. She guessed the whole chamber, if it was circular as the wall suggested, was five hundred metres across - larger than any single structure she had ever seen besides her home. And that had been made of wood, built among the trees that had stood for centuries, while this place had been carved out of solid rock, every stone fashioned and moved into place. The engineering, the craftsmanship, the sheer scale of the construction was staggering. She leaned toward the rail a little, careful not to move too far from Willow, who without her sight was holding on to her arm a little tighter than she had before. The floor, fifty metres down, was decorated with ornate archways and statues of all description. The bases of the pillars were all surrounded by tiny moats - tiny from Tara's vantage point, though she guessed they were each half a metre across - filled with still water, or perhaps, she thought as she peered at the shade and reflection, oil of some sort. There were pits here and there, surrounded by railings and spanned by stepped bridges, full of more of the black liquid. Some of the pits were empty and seemed to stretch down forever, so that Tara expected to see the glow of lava and hear the hissing of the fire hydras that legend said lived at the centre of the world. That was missing, though - the monumental structure was still and silent.



"Not bad, huh?" Willow said wryly. "I bet Ember'll wish she'd found time to check down below the first level of catacombs. She'll go nuts when I tell her." Tara shook her head, then quickly took off the amulet and handed it back to Willow.



"You sure?" Willow asked. "I don't mind being in the dark a little."



"No, I'm fine," Tara said. She felt Willow's arms move, and the slight relaxation in her as her sight returned.



"If I had to guess, I'd say the brothers were a little late in their estimates. This has got to be second century work, the height of the old Empire."



"How could an empire that could build this fall?" Tara wondered.



"Oh, the usual," Willow said with a shrug, "people getting too attached to power, forgetting what they were supposed to be doing with all that wealth and influence. Fighting amongst themselves. Then the mage wars, of course, but the Empire was in decline even before they started. But this has got to be second century work. Gods, I wish we had time to explore it, I'd love to know which Emperor build this. I can't believe no-one knows about this place, there's barely any structures like this in Kurast, and they've been studied so much there're more books written about them than stones used to build them." She gently led Tara back to the archway, and from there to the stairwell, which seemed positively cramped in comparison.



"What was it?" Tara asked. "I mean... it looked like a whole city."



"Maybe it was once," Willow said. "Not underground, but maybe there used to be an Imperial city above us, and this is all that's left."



"All?" Tara asked incredulously.



"The histories say all the Imperial capitals were like that. Twenty miles across, walls as high as cliffs, towers so tall they reached the clouds..." she trailed off with a shrug as they started climbing the stairs. "There's probably some exaggeration at work. Maybe not as much as people generally think, though. But yeah, the Empire built big, tall and deep. They had the best mages working with them too, it's not surprising there's a magical field down here. Probably just keeping the place intact. The weight of those pillars..." she whistled quietly.



"But what was it?" Tara repeated. "It can't just be their version of cellar?"



"Actually, it probably was," Willow replied. "The buildings that survived in Kurast are on that scale. The Zakarum library is in a temple that used to be an Imperial palace, and that's almost three miles wide, thirty storeys tall... it's pretty impressive."



"Wow," Tara breathed. "And the brothers in the monastery just... use it as catacombs?"



"They probably just left it alone," Willow guessed. "Maybe whoever built the monastery used stone from the ruins up above. But there's no way they could've taken stone out of a vault like that. Not without collapsing the whole thing... or maybe the magic holding it together made it too difficult to take apart anyway, so they just left it. I wonder if they've mapped it?"



"They must have," Tara said, "I mean, they'd... surely they wouldn't live up above and just ignore something like that?"



"They might," Willow said vaguely, "they'd know a few levels of it, to use as store rooms and so on, but as for the rest, there's probably no reason for anyone to go down there. I suppose it's not such an amazing thing if you're used to it. I mean, if you father and his father and his father knew there was a big vault beneath the monastery, and no-one really thought about it, you wouldn't either. It's just... there. Heh, when I was a kid we had a sheepdog on the farm that knew something like thirty different words. Dad would call out to it, telling it where to run, where to guide the sheep, and I just figured that's the way things are. And then I went to the Order, and some of the girls I met were born in cities, and had never seen a dog answer to anything except its own name."



"I suppose," Tara allowed. "Actually, I kind of wish we had time to explore it as well. The stonework, and the scale of it all... it's magnificent."



"Maybe we'll come back here," Willow said, "demon infestations come and go. Once Duncraig finds out about this they'll probably form an expeditionary force and hunt down the Carvers, burn out their lairs. In a couple of years' time, this whole place might be safe again, and we'll be able to take a proper look around next time we pass through." She paused. "What happened to you not liking the underground?"



"That vault hardly counts as an enclosed space," Tara said with a wry grin, "I've seen towns smaller than that."



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Willow hadn't noticed any change in the light as they climbed the stairwell, but as they neared the top she felt Tara's hand in hers relax its grip, and noticed her steps on the stairs becoming even surer than they had been. She peered up at the doorway at the top of the stairs, noticing its style was far more everyday, more like a building, than the arches of the two floors of further catacombs they had already passed on their way up.



"Daylight?" she asked.



"Yeah," Tara replied, "I can see."



"I don't see any difference," Willow said, "this thing must replace normal vision rather than add to it." They emerged into a stone room decorated with a handful of statues, monks and saints carved in traditional styles. Though Willow couldn't see sunlight or shadows, the tall glass windows lining one wall obviously looked out onto open ground.



"Morning," Tara said, "four hours after sunrise, maybe. I- yipes!"



"What?" Willow asked, alarmed that Tara had started when their gazes met.



"Your eyes," Tara said, overcoming her surprise and peering at Willow, fascinated.



"What?" Willow said again, smiling slightly, out of relief rather than any understanding of what was going on.



"Th-they look like cat's eyes," Tara said, "I mean, proper cat's eyes... vertical slits, the patterns..."



"You're kidding!" Willow protested. Automatically she reached around her neck and undid the amulet's chain. Colour and sunlight returned with a blinding glare, and she squinted for a moment.



"Are you okay?" Tara asked, her arms around Willow protectively.



"Yeah," Willow said quickly, "yeah... just... you know, when you wake up in a dark room and open the shutters and see the sunlight? Like that..." She blinked a few more times until her eyes adjusted to the light. "Now?" she asked, opening her eyes wide for Tara to see.



"Normal," Tara said. "Can I...?" She motioned for the amulet. Willow nodded and handed it to her, watching her eyes closely as she put it on. The instant Tara's hands disappeared behind her neck to join the ends of the chain, the colours in her eyes flowed into a new form, the pupil stretching up and down to form a tall slit, the subtle patterns in each iris shifting, widening, stretching almost from edge to edge of her eyes. It all took barely a second, and when it was done Tara's eyes were still her own, still the marvellous blue Willow saw in her dreams, yet they were as feline as those of a house cat.



"Wow," Willow breathed, "wow, that's... I thought it was just a sensory spell, but this it... I don't even know how that's done, it must be an entirely different branch of magic... some sort of druidic morphic flux, but I've never heard of anything so subtle..."



"How do I look?" Tara joked.



"You look..." Willow hesitated, trying to find the words, "you look... exotic," she finished with an appreciative smile. Tara smiled shyly and took off the amulet again, allowing Willow to study her eyes as they shifted instantly back to their usual human forms.



"Back to plain old me," she said with a lop-sided smile.



"There's nothing plain about you," Willow said, and on a whim she caught Tara around the waist and pulled her close. "You're the woman I love, and your eyes are absolutely... breathtaking," she finished in a whisper, realising just how true that was as she stared into them.



"In fact," she added, "the only reason I even liked the way you looked was that they were still your eyes. Same storm-blue, same deep, soulful gaze... I wouldn't have it any other way."



"I believe you," Tara murmured, with a smile of pure adoration.



"Good," Willow replied firmly, "'cause if you didn't I'd have to tell you over and over how beautiful you are, and make love to you over and over until you believe it. Of course," she added in an undertone, "I might do that anyway."



"And you call *me* perfect," Tara said, trailing a finger across Willow's cheek. They stayed like that, embracing and smiling at each other, for a long moment, then Tara blinked and glanced at the door on the far side of the room.



"Come on," she said, reluctantly disengaging from Willow, "let's see what we're up against today."



"Right," Willow agreed, though her smile remained firmly on her lips.



The door opened onto a short corridor, with sunlight streaming through an open archway at the end of it. Beyond that was what seemed to be the monastery's central courtyard, with gothic-style buildings on either side, north and south. To the east a row of smaller, more modern buildings backed onto the high stone wall, while to the west the courtyard extended right to the wall, in the centre of which was a gatehouse with a huge wooden doorway, thick and impenetrable. Curtains fluttered in the windows of the buildings, pennants flapped from poles on the walls, but there was not a soul in sight.



"Oh not again," Willow complained, before looking surprised at herself and suppressing her annoyance.



"This isn't like the village," Tara said, "the gate's closed and barred..." Keeping Willow's hand in hers she hurried across the courtyard to the gatehouse, climbing the stairs up to the battlement. She drew up short as she reached the top and looked out over the wall. "Oh damn," she muttered.



Willow stood level with her and looked out at the ground in front of the monastery, where a few dozen bodies, torn and bloody, in stained robes, lay scattered across the road leading to the gate.



Artemis
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 36)

Postby sabina » Wed Nov 12, 2003 1:21 pm

Hi :wave



Excellent update :wave

I love the way you described their journey through the catacombs :grin



And as always their interaction was really sweet :grin



Hum... so everyone is dead in the monastery too... I'm feeling sorry for the girls, every time they think they are about to reach safety, the demons have already been there and torn the place to shreds :|

I hope they'll be able to find shelter and rest properly soon.



More soon? :pray :pray




"I know I was born and I know that I'll die.

The in between is mine.

I am mine!" - Pearl Jam

sabina
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 36)

Postby justin » Wed Nov 12, 2003 2:05 pm

The last couple of updates have been great. :clap



The journey through the catacombs was very interesting, especially the underground cellar.



So the same thing has happened in the monastery as happened to that village. Though there is one difference, the bodies weren't hidden. Though this might be due to the gates being barred.



But why did the monks leave the protection of the monastery? Also did any one stay behind? If not I'm nor sure how the gates were barred.



Also does this mean that the other villages around the monastery have also been attacked?



I'm looking forward to reading more



Anya in a wimple...I'd pay full admission for that. Gods Served And Abandoned - by Antigone Unbound


You know the worst thing about people in a relationship? The fact that they're in a relationship. - Hilda Spellman





justin
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 36)

Postby Grimlock72 » Wed Nov 12, 2003 3:48 pm

The gate was closed and barred, with the monks outside ?? That sounds odd. I didn't think the monks would be alife after Willow read the village's journal entry on that brother going to visit it.. likely a very evil brother.



As Tara also notes to herself however, now is not the time to figure out the how and why of those attacks. Just make sure you remain undetected and get to Duncraig. Once you're there you can take bath, sleep loooong, and much MUCH later you can try to figure out what's wrong with this part of the world :lol .



It's interesting that so few of the monks remained and appearantly they didn't get reinforcements for the time being. What would make a monstary interesting enough to attack ? I can easily imagine lots of reasons for the village, but why the monastary ?? It looks more and more like something ELSE attacked both the village and the monastary, the carvers are merely enjoying the free food I would guess.



Later when the peace has settled a bit and the evil carvers are gone both Willow and Tara can go back and study that HUGE room they found. I can't see much of a practical use for such a room, nor would it be all that usefull to impress people with. After all, not that many people can SEE it... so thats puzzling.



I'm tired now, so I'll go to sleep before and bable incoherent stuff... :)



Grimmy





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"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Grimlock72
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 36)

Postby Arwen276 » Thu Nov 13, 2003 8:04 am

Oh not again!!



When Oh When will they find a proper sanctuary?

hmmm

Can't post proper feedback as I'm in a rush I've got an embryology exam, YIKES.

That cave looked like Moria's with the pillars and all...



It's strange that the guardians are outside, someone must have locked them out, so maybe there's evil lurking inside the monastery, UNLESS survivors are still inside and they had to lock the doors...?



That amulet is way cool! with the eyes shifting! It's amazing how you insert the things in your early chapters and then use them at the 35-36th chapters! Have you already had it all planned? that's brilliant!



~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 36)

Postby 2DIAMONDS » Thu Nov 13, 2003 12:17 pm

:wave Hiya Chris!



Whoa! The underground city sounds fascinating. If you ever meet Lady Amber, you should try to team up and write comic books or something...Cuz you describe everything wonderfully, but I'd love to be able to see some of it...the cat eyes, in particular!



And when are Willow and Tara going to have some contact with some actual living creatures? Seems like forever that they've been among the living! I don't think the demons count...then the night at the abandoned cabin...and the catacombs....too much death! :paranoid



Can't wait for more! :clap :clap :clap



Helen

xoxo

2DIAMONDS
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 36)

Postby JustSkipIt » Thu Nov 13, 2003 5:24 pm

Hi Chris,

I actually read this within minutes of your posting but I was at a training and couldn't respond. Then I forgot that I hadn't. Sorry for the delay. I'm loving it now. Now it's a genuine adventure and they are both showing and utilizing their amazing talents and knowledge. Ok, so not so great with all the monks dead and bloody... but what can you ask for? I love all their discussions of magic. The chamber they found sounds wonderful. Great job. Debra

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"I was working on a proof of one of my poems all morning and took out a comma. In the afternoon, I put it back in again." - Oscar Wilde

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Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 36)

Postby TexanZeppo256 » Sat Nov 15, 2003 9:42 pm

Hallo!



I realize that most of my posts recently have been kinda bitca-ish, but I'd like to make up for that by saying that I absolutely love this fic: it is one of the great fics on this board that I check the board daily for updates.



I love this fic because of the universe that you emerse both us and our girls in: So rich in detail, engaging in its action scenes, and facinating in its segues, that Willow and Tara, when together, add such a spark of romance to the story that it is impossible for me NOT to get swept up in the action and the emotion of the writing. But at the same time, I also love the humanity that Willow and Tara have, how they look upon the broken bodies of the dead and see not just someone who died for the cause, but an actual human being that had their life cut short for a really stupid reason.



If its the romance of the story that sweeps me up in its passion, its the realistic humanity and love of our girls that keeps me waiting impatiently for more.



Anyways, just wanted to let ya know that I adore your fic.



Dosvidaniya!

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There she is! There she is... ahh... Not so wounded as we were led to believe... So much the better.
--Khan, "Star Trek II: WOK"



From The Land of Tolerance,

---The Texan Zeppo

TexanZeppo256
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 36)

Postby Artemis » Sun Nov 16, 2003 8:45 am

Thanks everyone :) I've just been working on the next chapter, which is about 2/3rds done. It's another one of those ones that I feel unsure about the level of random detail as opposed to relevant plot information, but I think the end of the chapter will turn out okay.



sabina: Yeah, the whole area's turning out to be a bit of a no-go zone. If nothing else, their decision to just head for Duncraig will help there - if demons have overrun *that*, it's basically end-of-the-world time. But of course there's still more journeying to to before they get there :)



justin: It's all a big mystery, but I promise there is an explanation. Whether it's a *good* explanation remains to be seen, but I'm hopeful :)



Grimlock: Oops, I didn't intend to imply that guy in the village journal was suspicious - he was the brother of a villager, returning to the village (not the monastery). Monasteries are full of good reasons for demons to attack them - being big strong buildings, there's usually where people store their valuables and supplies in uncertain times, and demons love to loot. Of course they don't do anything with gold and jewels and so on, but they know people value them, so they hoard them as trophies. Also, demons tend to go out of their way to destroy anything sacred, so churches, graveyards, monasteries, temples and so on are prime targets. Not necessarily easy targets - Carvers often shy away from holy ground, unless there's a lot of them, but demons in large numbers will make a point of destroying any holy places they overrun.



Carvers do, as you note, enjoy the free food nonetheless :)



The huge cellar wouldn't have much of a practical purpose for the monastery, but the monastery is a much smaller building than the old Empire structure Willow was imagining. If the monks did ever go down there, they'd have lit torches on the walls as they went.



Arwen: Actually I didn't plan the amulet thing at all :) I had Marela give it to Tara with the vague idea that, sometime in the next story, she and Willow would encounter more cat people, and use the amulet to show they were acknowledged friends of the tribe (a lot of cats, particularly the ones who don't get much contact with humans, are highly suspicious of them). It was TemperedCynic's question back then about whether the amulet was magical that planted the idea in my mind, and then that idea turned up again when I was contemplating wandering around underground. Sometimes I plan ahead, sometimes it just turns out that way :)



The huge cellar was inspired in part by Moria, and also various Egyptian temples, some of the more impressive underground sections of Diablo the game, and (of all things) the Pyramid Mine alien machine in Total Recall. Lots of big columns. My mind works in strange ways.



Helen: Don't worry, I do have more living, human (and non-human) characters planned. It'll just be a little while :) Sadly, the life of a Diablo adventurer (even an unintentional one) does tend to involve a lot of trekking around unpleasant places with only demons and monsters for company. At least Willow and Tara have got each other - in the game, the best you can do for company is a Rogue mercenary whose vocabulary is limited to 'I'll put that to good use' (whenever you give her armour or a new bow to use).



If I ever meet Lady Amber? *The* Amber? I doubt I'll be able to remember to ask about co-writing comic books :) More like doing the Wayne's World thing, down on the ground bowing and saying "I'm not worthy, I'm not worthy". However, I promise if I ever develop some artistic skill (not that that seems likely) I'll give this a go.



Debra: Thanks, I'm glad the adventure is coming along well. I've got various other Amazon and sorceress skills to explore along the way, so that should keep things interesting. And there's still some new and surprising elements of magic out there.



TexanZeppo: Thanks :) I'm finding it important to have Willow and Tara react to the death and destruction they're encountering a lot more than a traditional Diablo hero would. After all, neither of them are experienced adventurers. Also, Willow's a magic-user, and they're not really used to getting up close and personal with fighting and its aftermath, and while Tara is technically a warrior, she's also the most gentle person imaginable, so I can't imagine it being easy for her to put her feelings aside. She can do it, of course, as can Willow, in order to get through what they're going through, but it's not easy, nor (I think) should it be.



The traditional Diablo hero, on finding the slain body of a fellow human, would tend to loot it :)

Artemis
 


Re: Hellebore

Postby chilled monkey » Sun Nov 16, 2003 1:29 pm

Very impressive visuals. I agree, it would be cool to have this story as a comic (or a movie).



I especially liked the part where Tara was going through Willow's notes. The style was pure Willow- quirky but still practical and informative.

chilled monkey
 


Re: Hellebore

Postby Artemis » Sun Nov 16, 2003 11:42 pm

chilled monkey: Thanks :) I enjoyed coming up with Willow's writing style. I imagine her thinking at the same time as she writes, putting her thoughts in order more or less. She's so bright I think she'd probably absorb all the information she needs all at once, and what she does when she ponders a problem is sorts through her thoughts and figures out what's relevant and what isn't. And seeing as she's writing just for herself and Tara (I imagine she'd edit it before sending a copy to the Zann Esu to put in their library), she basically writes down exactly what she's thinking, quirkiness and all.

Artemis
 


FIC: Hellebore (chapter 37)

Postby Artemis » Sun Nov 16, 2003 11:46 pm

Hellebore



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: R

Summary: A headstrong sorceress and a young Amazon join forces to locate and destroy an ancient source of demonic power.

Spoilers: None.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy the Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Diablo II' by Blizzard Entertainment. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Thirty-Seven

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Willow slowly sat down with her back against the parapet. Tara shook herself back to awareness after staring at the bodies for a moment, realised she would be silhouetted against the sky if anything happened to look towards the monastery, and crouched down. She did her best to put the sight of the bodies out of her mind. 'Not now,' she thought, 'later on, then you can be sad for them, be frustrated at the existence of evil, be angry at whatever did this. Not now. Now, think. You're not going to die here, and neither is Willow. That means there's a safe way out. Find it.'



Tara took a deep breath and glanced at Willow. She was staring back across the courtyard, seeing nothing. Tara gently put a hand on her shoulder, which made her start briefly. She glanced at Tara, as if she had been in some private world and was surprised to find anyone sharing it with her, then closed her eyes and laid her head down on Tara's hand.



"What's happening," she said in a small voice, "all this... why is it..." She took a slow breath and turned to Tara. "I-" she began, but as soon as she spoke her voice cracked and she flung her arms around Tara, hugging her fiercely, burying her face in her hair and crying.



Tara automatically soothed her, stroking her hair, her other arm tight and reassuring around her waist. She wanted to tell her everything was alright, that there was no need to fear, but she couldn't lie, so she said the only thing she could.



"I'm here," she whispered, "I've got you... I promise I'll never let go."



"Never?" Willow's voice was that of a child, tiny and frightened by an incomprehensible world.



"Never," Tara repeated. Willow nodded against her shoulder, and her embrace became less desperate, more accepting of comfort than pleading for it.



"Of course, I mean that in the metaphorical sense," Tara said, trying to inject some levity into her voice, and surprisingly succeeding, "it'd be kind of difficult to get around with me wrapped around you all the time." Willow snorted, paused, then giggled.



"I think I'd be willing to put up with a little inconvenience," she said in a wavering voice, which gathered strength as she went on: "and besides, I'd be the envy of all the other sorceresses."



"Before they know it," Tara added, laughing along, "back home they'd be knee deep in sorceresses, all looking for an Amazon of their own." Willow laughed too, and finally relaxed, leaning back against the parapet again.



"Oh..." she said, recovering, "I... I'm sorry, I-"



"Hey," Tara said gently, "remember what you said in the tunnel? I don't need an all-powerful sorceress either. Just you." Willow glanced at her, meeting her gaze, and then took her hand and tenderly kissed the palm.



"So," she said, "we're here... do we get out as fast as we can, or search the place, or... what do we do?"



"I don't think we need to run for it just yet," Tara said, "the gate's solid. I can't imagine a Carver getting through that, can you?"



"No way," Willow said, "I think maybe even their fire magic wouldn't be strong enough. Not without a lot of work, anyway."



"Alright, so we're safe from anything coming through the gate. Do places like this have other entrances?" Willow raised an eyebrow, then frowned in thought.



"Sometimes, a back gate," she said, "we could check, I suppose... but that's usually so people can get out if the gate's attacked, but they've got the tunnel in the catacombs, even if there's just the one that's better than a back gate. You're not thinking of staying here, are you?"



"Not longer than we have to," Tara said, "but I don't think we should leave before we find out what's here. We might find something that'll help us. You think there might be more than one tunnel?"



"There's five villages," Willow said with a shrug. "You're right, we should get our bearings. It's just this place is reminding me of the village... all empty."



"Me too," Tara said, "so the first thing we do is search it and look for any sign at all that any demons have been in here. If we find anything - broken doors, storehouses raided, anything like that - I think we should leave at once. If not, then I think we can take our time, maybe spend the night here and set out again tomorrow."



"Okay," Willow nodded, "okay, it's a plan. Where do we start?"



"Well, we're on the wall," Tara said after a moment's thought, "we might as well check the perimeter. We're pretty high up here, we should be able to get a good view of the countryside as well. Maybe see a route to the river."



They made their way along the wall to the north-west corner. To the south and east, the corners of the monastery were marked by squat, solid stone guardhouses. The other corners, where Willow and Tara stood, and the south-east opposite them, were just wooden platforms set against the walls, enough to give a good vantage point, but little else. Willow looked sadly down from the platform, where a small garden was laid out, vines and vegetables all in rows, in the shadow of a row of old sheds backing onto a stone building.



"That's quite pretty," she said distantly.



"Yeah," Tara agreed quietly. She took Willow's hand and they moved on, along the northern wall. The roof of the monastery's largest building met the wall just beneath the level of the walkway, and continued most of its length. Half-way along there was a large skylight, and Willow peered through it.



"Looks like barracks," she said. "Beds and cupboards... nothing out of place."



"There's a stairwell up ahead," Tara pointed out, "we'll check inside."



"Okay," Willow agreed. She glanced out across the wall, to where a second village lay, two miles from the one they had arrived at. "I've got to start carrying a telescope," she said flatly.



"It's too close to the western village," Tara said, "I don't think it's safe. Same goes for the one further down the south road, the Carvers must've gone past it on their way up towards us. They wouldn't have left it alone, or gone near it if it was defended." Willow nodded.



"So that leaves two?" she asked.



"Uh-huh," Tara said, "out to the east somewhere. If there's a tunnel, we might be able to cover some ground that way without being seen. If the villages look deserted. We'll have to be careful."



The stairwell led down to a small patch of ground up against the bulk of the north-east guardhouse, home to a pair of dilapidated bee hives that seemed to have been long empty. The guardhouse was likewise empty, the sturdy door unlocked, so they entered the barracks by a side door.



Within there was no sign of disturbance. The long hall of beds Willow had looked into was on the first floor, and Tara counted thirty-two beds out of fifty neatly made, the others bare with their sheets and blankets stored away in closets beside them. The occasional book and candle on the bedside tables were the only sign of the former inhabitants.



He lower floor contained kitchens, the stoves cold, the pots and pans all washed and hanging from hooks on the walls. The store rooms nearby were full of supplies, their shelves packed with dried foods, sacks of grain and flour, tins containing spices and seasonings. One was full of heavy sacks and barrels, divided up into five stacks, which Willow guessed were the supplies sent up from the five villages for safe-keeping. There was a ledger on a wooden pedestal just inside the door, and Willow flipped through the pages until she found the receipt of the delivery they had read about in the village's record-book. Lining all the previous pages were thousands of similar entries, deliveries and collections, but only two more lines came after it - flour from the south-west village, and a sack of grain delivered to the south-east, and then the pages were empty.



At the end of the building's central corridor was another stairwell leading down into the catacombs, and opposite it a doorway leading out into an alley between the barracks and the back of the building Willow and Tara had first emerged from. Willow poked her head around the corner, finding the garden she had seen from the wall, then followed Tara back inside. As well as the stairwell they had come up through, they found another, leading straight down rather than circular, and a large room where piles of old books lay, gathering dust.



"Library?" Tara guessed.



"Probably a store room for the library," Willow said, "places like this usually have reading tables in the proper libraries, so the monks can study their texts and make new copies of them. There's nothing here but shelves." She blew a cloud of dust off the spines of a stack of books, shoves haphazardly on a shelf, and sneezed quietly.



"Okay?" Tara asked.



"Yeah," Willow grinned, "but my sense of knowledge-girl-ness is acting up. Disorganised shelves sort of call to me, 'come here, catalogue us.' Not exactly the right time, though."



They walked back into the main courtyard and crossed it, arriving in front of an impressive-looking building fashioned something like a church.



"The old keep," Willow suggested, "I bet the real library's in here." Inside they found a handful of offices, bare and apparently little used, and as Willow had predicted, the library proper. Lit by skylights, the chamber contained rows of books covering the walls of two storeys, with ladders on wheels that ran along brass railings secured to the shelves. Tara glanced at one of the books open on a table, and found it to be a half-finished volume of prayers, with colourful borders and illustrations painstakingly copied from the original sitting on a display stand a few feet away. Beside the open book, a row of pens and ink pots lay, as if the owner had just stepped out for a moment. Tara picked up a pen and studied the tip, noticing that it had been cleaned of ink before it had been left.



"And all the pots are closed," Willow noted, watching Tara, "whoever was doing this didn't run out in a hurry. I mean, if you're racing to defend your home, you don't stop to close your ink pots first, do you? And look at this," she gestured around the library. "Gold leaf on the crosses, and those medallions look like solid silver. If demons had been in here, they'd have torn the place apart. What are we dealing with here, obsessively tidy evil?" Tara stifled a laugh and shrugged.



They left the library - Willow with some reluctance, though Tara suspected she was playing it up for comical effect, to keep both their spirits up. Through a side door they came to another building backing onto the south wall, containing a forge and, behind an iron-bound door that was nonetheless unlocked, a small armoury. Tara ran a speculative eye across the rows of halberds, short swords and crossbows lines up neatly against the walls.



"It looks fully-stocked," she said with a puzzled frown, "they didn't take any weapons?"



"I'm not liking this," Willow said grimly. Tara took her hand reassuringly.



"Do you want to see if we can find the tunnel out?" she asked. Willow shook her head.



"I just mean in general," she explained, "I like things I can understand. Even if they're not good, like Carvers attacking the caravan, at least I can figure out why it happened, what they want, what to do about it. This is just," she shrugged, "none of it makes any sense. Something comes through here, kills the villagers and leaves the villages open for Carvers to wander in, kills the brothers outside the monastery but doesn't come inside... I don't get it."



"I don't either," Tara said gently, "we just have to do our best. And I know the moment all this can be figured out, you will."



"I hope so," Willow said uncertainly.



"I know so," Tara replied. Together they walked along the narrow alley between the library building and the south wall, and came to another small garden, this one just empty soil, apparently waiting for planting. To one side was the back of a circular building, like a low tower, that Tara had noticed when they first looked out over the courtyard.



"What is that?" she wondered.



"The decorations are more religiously significant than on the other buildings," Willow observed, "I'd guess it's where the brothers did their praying."



They entered by a side door and found the interior of the building hollow, just a round space with benches arranged in a circle beneath the low domed roof. Old, thick candles hung in iron rings supported by thin chains from the ceiling, and near the main door a censer hung on a hook. The decorations on the walls were what caught Tara's attention - from within, the building's circular wall was divided by stone columns into flat segments, two occupied with doors, two blank, the other six painted with beautifully detailed representations of fantastic scenes.



"Creation," Willow said, pointing to the wall directly to the right of the main door, which showed light streaming from beneath a shimmering archway, forming mountains and rivers as it flowed out.



"I've seen places like this before," Willow explained, "each panel is part of the history of the world. The edited highlights version," she added with a grin, "otherwise they'd need a few more walls. That one's the Crystal Arch in the centre of heaven. On one side there's all of us, heaven, the world, the burning hells, the whole lot. On the other side there's the Power That Is. According to the Zakarum legend, the gates in the Arch opened to create the world, so that Her power could take material form and shape the world and all the planes around it." She turned to the next panel, where an army of angels was sweeping down out of the sky to meet a rising tide of dark, malformed creatures.



"The Great Conflict," she went on, "in which the Lords of hell collectively lost their temper and waged war on heaven. The Lord of Destruction actually set foot in heaven itself before the Archangel Tyrael led a counterattack that drove the demons back to hell. And then," she turned to the next panel, where an army of men was marching towards a force of demons and monsters.



"The Sin Wars," she said with a grimace, "which is what happened when the Lords of hell lost the Great Conflict. The Lesser Evils decided the Prime Evils weren't capable of leading hell to victory, so they joined forces and exiled them to the mortal realm. Up until then everyone had pretty much ignored us."



"It looks terrible," Tara said quietly. In the background of the painting the sky was black, streaked with blood-red clouds, and the lands and cities in the distance were burning.



"The histories from that time are myths and legends," Willow observed, "but even if half of what they say is pure exaggeration, it was still about as bad as it's possible to get, short of completely destroying Sanctuary and everything living in it. The leaders of the armies of humanity were the first of the Horadrim mages. They learned how to wield magic, and used it to fight back against the Prime Evils and the armies they raised. That's when hybrid demons were created, by the way," she added.



"There's an angel," Tara pointed out, "is it?" Willow nodded.



"Tyrael again," she said, "he defied the command of the Power That Is and joined in the war against the demons here. Some legends say he gave the Horadrim the magic to defeat the three Prime Evils. Of course, some legends say that the Horadrim would've got them anyway, and Tyrael's intervention actually prevented the Prime Evils from being banished properly."



"Which is it?"



"I guess both sides have a point," Willow said with a thoughtful expression, "on the one hand, Tyrael helped the Horadrim end the Sin Wars and bring peace to Sanctuary. On the other hand, the Prime Evils were contained here, not banished back to hell, which is why they rose up again during the Reckoning. The Zann Esu always believed that we'd only be rid of them once we defeated them ourselves, without being helped."



"If you want something done properly, do it yourself?" Tara quipped.



"Yeah, pretty much," Willow laughed, "though I think the old Esu witches were given to more dramatic language. All about prophecy and destiny, but that's what it boils down to. Anyway, after the Sin Wars, we have... a door." She skipped the section of wall containing the side door, and moved on to the next, which showed a great city of temples and towers, basking under the setting sun.



"We're probably supposed to ignore the door," she went on, "unless it's some weird metaphor or something. That's the old Empire before it went into decline. The Sin Wars united all the peoples of Sanctuary, and they got a long way before it all degenerated into politics and civil wars, and we ended up back at the familiar, frustrating level we're at now. There was probably one of those temples on this very spot back then."



"And now all that's left is the catacombs," Tara mused.



"Yeah," Willow nodded, "this is why the Vizjerei philosophers call free will a two-edged sword. We're free to achieve anything we want, and free to make a mess of it too. Speaking of making a mess," she turned to face the fifth panel, which showed towers standing over a bleak landscape, and the sky torn by fire and lightning.



"The Mage Wars," Willow said, "the Vizjerei clan split and almost destroyed itself. This was about the time the Zann Esu formed, and went into self-imposed exile. You can see why."



"What were they fighting over?"



"There were two brothers," Willow explained, "Horazon and Bartuc, the most powerful of the Vizjerei of the time, maybe the most powerful of all time. Both of them were worried that the Sin Wars hadn't finished properly, and that they'd have to face the Prime Evils again. Horazon wanted to use force to bind lesser demons to his will, so he could study them and find out how to defeat them, and eventually how to defeat the Prime Evils. He built a huge fortress called the Arcane Sanctuary, which was supposed to exist partly in the world, and partly in the ethereal planes. He did experiments there, summoning demons and binding them, testing out ways of controlling and banishing them.



"Bartuc got impatient, and according to some of the legends, envious of his brother's achievements, as Horazon never let him enter the Arcane Sanctuary. He decided that, seeing as the Lesser Evils had exiled the Prime Evils, it would be easier to make an alliance with them."



"And the demons got control of him?" Tara guessed.



"More or less," Willow said, "but they were manipulating Horazon as well, somehow. Both of them rallied their supporters and the Vizjerei started fighting each other... not really their finest hour, collectively. The Esu witches went into exile, and none of the other clans were strong enough to get involved without getting wiped out. All the Vizjerei factions accused each other of being in league with demons, most of the panicked and started haphazard research into summoning and banishing and got corrupted themselves... the whole clan structure more or less collapsed. Meanwhile everyone who wasn't a mage was busy just trying like hell to stay alive, what with magic flying around as the factions tried to destroy each other."



"How did it end?" Tara asked.



"Horazon killed Bartuc," Willow said. "Everyone thought Bartuc would win, he had more power, he had huge armies of demons following him, and Horazon's allies were deserting him. Bartuc used his power to enter the Arcane Sanctuary, and he and Horazon fought. In the end, Bartuc was dead, and Horazon vanished. The surviving Vizjerei picked themselves up and started again, with new laws forbidding any summoning of demons, for any reason. That's when they created the Viz-Jaq'taar order, the Mage Slayers, to enforce the laws."



"Are they mages as well?"



"No," Willow said, "no-one knows that much about them, but supposedly they don't use any magic at all, so they're impossible to corrupt. They're supposed to have developed other skills that let them defeat mages, though they're pretty secretive about what they are." Together they turned to the next panel, which was largely blank, with only a few patches of detail, and sketched lines extending out from those.



"Not finished yet," Willow observed quietly, "these sorts of paintings are usually done a tiny little bit at a time, they take years to complete. I guess one day someone'll finish this one."



"What's it supposed to be?"



"The Reckoning," Willow said, pointing to two dark outlines, "look, those must be two of the Prime Evils. The third one's just being sketched in, you can see some of the lines." She shivered looking at the painting. The vaguely-drawn figures had only a few patches of detail on them, including their eyes, so that they glared hatefully out of half-finished faces.



"Diablo, Lord of Terror," Willow said, indicating the figure on the left, which was sketched as being bulky and bestial. One half of a pair of curved horns had been painted, and a third horn on its forehead, straight and glowing, had only a few details painted onto it, and was largely just a blotch of bright red. Tara took in the vague shapes of claws and spines.



"And the others?" she asked. Willow pointed to the other clear figure, on the right, which was thinner and taller then the first. Four horns adorned its narrow, angular head, two pointing up, two downward and curling around the thin jaw. The eyes and forehead had been painted in, showing yellow eyes brooding under pale, sickly-looking skin covering the brows. One arm was almost complete, showing more of the unearthly skin tone, as well as long, bony talons ending in razor-sharp nails.



"That's probably Mephisto," Willow guessed, "the Lord of Hatred. He corrupted the leaders of the Zakarum church, and nearly destroyed it. The church is still rebuilding. Luckily - if you can call it that - all the corrupt members were killed during the fighting, so what's left of them aren't a danger." She shook her head. "Hell of a way to reform the system. That last one must be Baal, then. Lord of Destruction."



The third figure, looming over the other two, was defined only in the vaguest terms, a few sketched lines here and there to mark the position of head and shoulders. Only the eyes had been painted, a pair of black slits with tiny trails of blue and grey in them, like an oil slick.



"Why do they all have the eyes painted?" Tara wondered. "It's kind of creepy."



"It is, isn't it?" Willow agreed, peering at the work in progress. "I don't know if it's the same down here, but further north they always start paintings of religious figures - angels and demons - with the eyes. I'm not sure why, it's just the way it's always been done. Superstition." Tara glanced at Willow slyly.



"And your theory?" she asked.



"What makes you think I have a theory?" Willow replied. Tara raised an eyebrow. "Okay, yes, well, I think it's to do with depicting figures of supernatural power. The eyes are the link between an angel or a demon's true form, which they inhabit in heaven or hell respectively, and their physical form which they assume when they're summoned or manifested here in Sanctuary. I think the reason for painting the eyes first is that otherwise you're depicting a supernatural form without a link to its true self, which might be viewed as blasphemous, or disrespectful or something."



"Interesting," Tara observed.



"That's not based on solid evidence," Willow cautioned, "just, you know, guessing. I don't like not knowing the answers to things, so even if I don't have a clue, I like to try to find a theory that fits the facts, even if it is just guesswork."



"I've noticed that about you," Tara said with a smile. "Actually, when I draw people the first part I do in detail is the eyes."



"Really?"



"It's an old habit," Tara went on, "I used to think if I could get the eyes right, everything else would just sort of fall into place." She shrugged. "It seems to work."



"It does," Willow agreed.



"Why are there two blank walls?" Tara wondered.



"I guess, in case any more world-changing events happen, and they need space to paint them."



"Does that mean," Tara glanced at the various panels, "the history of the world is three-quarters over?"



"Not necessarily," Willow said, wandering around the worship hall, inspecting various details. "The Empire rose to power less than a hundred years after the end of the Sin Wars, and the Mage Wars happened right afterward the fall of the Empire. Then it was centuries until the Reckoning. On an earth-shaking global scale, nothing much happened between them, so no painting. Then again," she shrugged, "maybe if they get two more paintings done and then, I don't know, a new sun appears, or there's a huge flood or something, they'll just start on a new set of walls. They did that in Kurast, you know. The Zakarum church's baptistery doors were cast bronze with a dozen panels on each one, all showing the church's history. Holy wars, mainly," she added with a scowl. "Once it was finished, they waited until they'd accumulated enough extra history, and cast up a new set of doors for the cloister outside. Of course the whole place was demolished during the Reckoning. I'm not sure if they're rebuilding it now, or trying something different."



She walked from painting to painting, studying them vaguely as she talked.



"Of course, it's possible that this Order really does think there's only two great events left in the whole history of the world," she went on. "A lot of the Zakarum sects have fairly elaborate prophetic writings. Some more accurate than others, of course - the monks of Khanduras are said to have predicted the Mage Wars. Then again, there's a sect way up-river in Kehjistan that used to believe the world was going to end in fifty years, two hundred years ago. Ember told me about them. They had this strict warrior culture, preparing for the battle at the end of the world, and then it didn't happen."



"What did they do?"



"Well, all things considered, I suppose they took it fairly well," Willow said. "They're farmers now. The central coven of the Zakarum believe that in the end the Crystal Arch will open again, and the Power That Is will bring all the faithful to Herself. Most demons believe that one day the Great Conflict will resume, and they'll storm heaven and get through the Arch, and become the Power themselves. Armageddon, they call it. Do Amazons have any prophecies?"



"Not really," Tara replied, "not fate-of-the-world kinds of prophecies. Zerae gives visions now and then, but they're vague. They're all written down by her priests and priestesses. Some of them are clear, once you know what it is they're talking about, the ones that have already happened. The priests study all the unfulfilled prophecies, and all the history they can get their hands on, trying to figure out what they might mean. None of them have ever been about the ultimate end of the world, though. They're just, you know, enemies coming, times of peace and prosperity, heroes showing up in times of danger."



"The Zann Esu Oracles are like that," Willow nodded, "they're recording prophecies all the time, but only the really big ones are solid enough to plan for. They saw the Reckoning coming centuries away, but hey, all three Prime Evils rising at once. That sort of thing probably stands out pretty plainly on the fortune-telling horizon, or however they see things."



"What do they foresee now?" Tara wondered.



"Oh, the usual," Willow shrugged, "there's still evil in the world, so the Zann Esu are still needed. Nothing so solid as the Reckoning, just, you know, general evil. Like we're stuck in the middle of," she added with a pout. "Where it's all going, they're not sure. Supposedly they see bits and pieces of everything, but there's apparently a lot of history happening, so it's not easy to sort it all out." She paused, and glanced at Tara. "What do you think? Just you personally, I mean?" Tara shrugged and put an arm around Willow's waist.



"I think we make our own fate," she said. "I think there's tides and forces at work that can move history in ways that can be foreseen, but that doesn't mean things *have* to go that way. If you stand against the tide... well, probably you'll end up being carried along by it," she grinned, "but, you know, maybe in a slightly different direction than if you'd just given in to it. Or maybe you'll change everything." She looked at Willow, who was smiling at her. "What about you?"



"Oh," Willow said, thinking, "well... I never really thought about prophecy and fate, apart from in the theoretical sense. I mean, no-one's ever told me," she adopted a deep voice, "'You, Willow, shall do so-and-so at this time, and such-and-such will happen,' so I never really gave it much thought," she finished in her own voice. She cocked her head as a thought occurred to her.



"Than again," she went on, "that house you told me about down on the edge of the lake? Waking up together in the sunlight, bathing in the lake, picnics in the gardens, making love by the fire..." She grinned at Tara. "That's a future I can believe in." Tara returned her smile, and gently touched their lips together.



"Me too," she whispered. After a moment simply enjoying each other's presence, Tara gave Willow's waist a squeeze and looked around.



"Are we done here?"



Willow looked around here and there, looking for anything significant. She had half-turned towards the main door when she noticed something, and peered at the floor.



"What?"



"There's a piece missing," Willow said, crouching down. The centre of the hall, which all the benches faced, featured a mosaic of angels circling the Crystal Arch, and in amongst the miniscule coloured tiles were two dozen golden medallions, each set solidly in the floor. Willow ran her finger along the edge of a vacant indentation, where a single one of the medallions was missing.



"The demons did get in here?" Tara asked.



"I don't know," Willow said slowly, "it's... I mean, obviously someone's taken the gold, you can see here where the tiles on the edge are chipped. Probably used a knife to pry it loose, but... well, why stop at one?" She gestured around. "There's plenty more, and none of them have been touched." She glanced upward. "And that cross up there looks gold-plated, and all you'd have to do to get it would be drag one of these benches over and stand on top of it." She stood up and inspected the hanging ornament above them. "It's not even melded with the chain it's on, it's just hanging on a hook."



"Not a demon then," Tara mused, "but someone has been in here."



"Yeah," Willow said with a frown. She and Tara went through the hall's front door, returning to the main courtyard. Tara glanced around, making a note of the buildings they had already searched.



"Just storerooms and sheds," she said vaguely, "and those rooms at the end. They look newer than the rest of the buildings." Willow followed her gaze to the small one-storey buildings up against the western wall.



"I've seen that kind of thing before," she said, "some of these monasteries and temples get a lot of scholars passing through, studying the old texts and so on. The more tolerant Orders put them up in little apartments of their own, rather than make them live with the monks or priests or whoever maintains the place. Monks are usually up an hour before dawn to pray and stuff like that, and scholars value their sleep."



"A scholar," Tara said thoughtfully, "maybe a mage... with magic the brothers didn't know about and couldn't fight?"



"Someone who might want something other than just to loot the place," Willow added. Tara returned her spear to its place on her back, and readied her bow, while Willow aimed her staff at the silent buildings. Together they walked closer, keeping close to each other. They reached the doorway leading in to the apartments without any sign of life from within.



"We're not being paranoid, are we?" Willow asked quietly.



"Normally," Tara replied, "or after three days of being chased by demons and finding deserted villages?"



"Good point," Willow conceded.



"I don't sense anything inside," Tara said, "but we shouldn't take any chances." Willow nodded.



"Stay beside me," she said, laying her free hand on Tara's shoulder. A fine blue mist enveloped both of them. "So long as we're in physical contact I can keep us both shielded," Willow went on, "it'll stop and arrow or a sword. If there's magic I'll increase the chill, it might be a bit disorienting but it should hold."



"Okay," Tara said, "ready?"



"Ready," Willow confirmed.



There were four separate apartments inside, and the first three were empty, containing nothing more than a bare wooden bed, a trunk of sheets, and a table and chair positioned underneath trapdoors in the ceiling, to let the light in. Willow and Tara edged along the corridor to the final door.



"Either this is it," Willow murmured, "or we're making fools of ourselves."



"If we are," Tara suggested, "at least there's no-one here to see us."



"True," Willow said. Tara held up her bow hand, with three fingers raised. She counted down, and together she and Willow rounded the edge of the door, her arrow and Willow's staff pointed into the room beyond.



It was empty, but had obviously bee occupied. Books lay scattered across the bed and floor, most of them open, some with pages torn out and spread out in seemingly random patterns across the floorboards. A pile of tangled blankets in the corner indicated where the previous occupant might have slept. The ceiling trapdoor was open, with a ladder leaning against it, and the sunlight shone down on the table. More books were piled high on it, as well as papers and charts, and a single volume lay open next to a fallen pen and inkwell, which had stained the papers beneath and dripped onto the floor. There was also a black rod, like a sceptre, resting against the chair, and Willow froze when she saw it.



"What?" asked Tara in a whisper, her eyes darting around the room, taking everything in.



"That rod," Willow said in a hoarse voice, "don't touch it. Don't even go near it." She stepped around Tara and held her staff in both hands, as if she meant to strike someone with it.



"Willow?" Tara asked.



"Stay back," Willow warned, "I have to destroy it."



"Willow," Tara said again, concern in her voice. Willow glanced back at her.



"It's all right," she said, "I'm okay, but I have to do this." Tara studied Willow's features, looking for an explanation for her sudden odd behaviour. She saw none, but was reassured by what she did see - her Willow. She nodded, and Willow turned back to the table, readying her staff.



She whispered beneath her breath, a strange language that Tara only caught a few syllables of, and didn't understand at all. The colour and grain of her staff faded, the wood seemingly turning to something like metal, with hints of a dark, rough blackness beneath it. Willow braced herself, and without warning swung her staff. It met the rod half-way along its length, and with a great crack shattered it. Willow jumped back as the end of her swing caught the chair and sent it crashing into the wall.



"Willow?" Tara asked urgently.



"I'm okay," Willow said automatically. She turned back to Tara, and took two steps to stand against her, her free arm going around her waist and her head resting on her shoulder. "I'm okay."



"We should check the roof," Tara suggested gently. Willow nodded against her shoulder, then steeled herself and stood ready again, staff in hand. She let Tara climb the ladder first, so she could keep a hand on her ankle as she climbed up after her, forming a new chill armour around them both. Tara noticed it was a great deal stronger than the one she had cast before, but she could tell just by the tension she saw in Willow's body how anxious the sight of the sceptre had made her. She was curious, but knew Willow would tell her when they had time.



The trapdoor led onto the roof, which was just a step down from the top of the western wall, lower than the other three walls of the monastery, as the ground dropped sharply away beneath it, making it impossible to approach from outside. Tara looked around, straining her senses, but she found no trace of a presence.



"No," Willow said, "he has to be here somewhere."



"Who?" Tara asked, her eyes scanning the monastery buildings.



"The man who used that rod," Willow insisted, "anyone who would use something like that would never give it up, he couldn't! They bond with the wielder, the only way to be free of it would be..." she trailed off, and slowly walked to the parapet, leaning cautiously over.



"There he is," she said quietly. Tara looked also, and saw a mangled, broken figure on the rocks far below.



Artemis
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 37)

Postby Grimlock72 » Mon Nov 17, 2003 5:46 am

Was the scholar an amateur who got too far involved into something he just didn't understand the strength of ? Much like the demon summoning back in the Zan Esu library... studying stuff CAN be dangerous if you don't know how to look for signs. Good thing Willow has a staff which is specificly made to counter dark magic and the like.



Or was it an evil plan to begin with ? That doesn't match with the man on the rocks though, which looks like suicide or a very odd fall. The sceptre itself likely needs someone to do anything at all so it wouldn't kill it's summoner without having another victim (assuming it controls it's summoner someway).



The monks didn't do magic right ? So any sourcerer or magic object could have killed them. Were there really 31 dead bodies outside the gate ?? I read like it were 10 at most, if so where are the others ?



And the remaining questions are of course; what was so special about the gold mediallion taken ? (maybe someone took it for protection?) And obviously Willow has to tell whats up with that spectre, which she destroyed fairly easily. Why the need for an increased armour after having destroyed that scepter by the way?



It's good they can show/share their fear with each other. That way they can at least provide some comfort to the other.



Although it was wise to enter the barracks pretty much in full-battle-mode it's hard to come with a reason for that. The barracks aren't that much different from the other buildings they searched and they didn't enter those fully prepared for battle, so why the change ?? What good is a spear in a barrack anyway?, use a short weapon.



As usual I love your detailed background and history stuff. You're really creating a world of which you happen to tell just this story aren't you ?



Grimmy

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"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Edited by: Grimlock72 at: 11/17/03 4:48 am
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Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 37)

Postby sabina » Mon Nov 17, 2003 2:06 pm

Hey Artemis :wave



This was a great update :applause (I know, I know... I sound like a broken record, but I love your story so I can't help myself :blush )



I love the detail you always give about everything, it's amazing the world you have created :grin

I'm curious to see how did the owner of that staff fall off the roof... Maybe he summoned a demmon and then he was pushed out of the roof and into his death by that some demon?

(or then again maybe that's just my hyperactive imagination working :lol )



I'm really curious to see what will happen next :bounce



More soon? :pray :pray




"I know I was born and I know that I'll die.

The in between is mine.

I am mine!" - Pearl Jam

sabina
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 37)

Postby Ziona » Tue Nov 18, 2003 11:29 am

Hi Chris,



I really like this fic. You are good in describing all the things, the landscape, buildings so it is very easy for the reader to imagine everything. And I also vote for a movie or comic of this fic.

Ziona
 


Re: Chapter 37

Postby chilled monkey » Tue Nov 18, 2003 12:37 pm

Great update. The part where Tara reassures Willow while still managing to inject some levity is very good. Just like Tara to be able to make Willow laugh in the midst of horror.



The mythology you have created for this world is fascinating. I assume that some of it is based on various real-world myths?





chilled monkey
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 37)

Postby JustSkipIt » Wed Nov 19, 2003 6:32 pm

Chris,

Excellent. What stood out to me was the paintstaking way they made their way through the place and then the determination and knowing that Willow showed in destroying the rod. Can't wait to hear more about that...

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"I was working on a proof of one of my poems all morning and took out a comma. In the afternoon, I put it back in again." - Oscar Wilde

JustSkipIt
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 37)

Postby Arwen276 » Thu Nov 20, 2003 5:16 pm

Hey Chris!

Sorry for the late-titude of the feedback... RL EXAMS Got in the way, :rage @ Pre-med!



I loved the history course Willow so willingly gave us! I am not familiar with the whole DIABLO-Verse (looks down ashamed) and I wondered about the origins of the historical facts and stuff...

I also love the way you describe everything...the monastery, the church the paintings... it's like I'm there!



I wonder now what's up with the thing Willow destroyed...and who's that dead guy?



More soon please!!



~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 37)

Postby Artemis » Sat Nov 22, 2003 6:22 am

Thanks everyone :) The next chapter should be finished tomorrow - I was going to finish it today, but some not-very-nice personal stuff came up and didn't leave a lot of time. Still, I'm on track for finishing the chapter tomorrow.



Grimlock: Willow's staff isn't specifically keyed to dark magic, just any magic. There isn't really dark and light magic in Diablo, though that said, there's really nothing positive you can do with demonic power, given that you have to deal with demons to access it. But the power itself doesn't carry evil with it, it's the form it's put into that does that.



All the monks were on the ground outside the gate. At the time I hadn't come up with an exact number so I just said 'a few dozen' - later I narrowed it down. The medallion will show up, and Willow is going to explain all about the sceptre. She did destroy it easily, but that's because no-one was wielding it- as you'll see, if its user had been holding it, it would've been a whole different matter. Her casting a powerful armour after destroying the sceptre was partly caution (the sceptre, to her, implied the presence of a powerful mage, as we'll see), and partly seeing the sceptre gave her a nasty shock and she went all defensive. We'll see why.



Tara choice of weapons was dictated partly by her surroundings, and partly by her proficiencies. Either of her main weapons would have worked - she can fire an arrow and draw her spear very quickly, which essentially gives her a free shot before a fight starts, and once using the spear she's able to cast bolts of lightning off it. It's not very manoeuvrable in a confined space, but the magic makes up for it. On the merits of the weapons themselves, a short sword or similar would be better for indoors fighting, but Tara's trained with the spear (enough to make it useful, even in a corridor), plus she can do the lightning magic, which she wouldn't be able to do with a sword had she picked one up.



I love finding ways to work history into the story (even if, as sometimes worry, it does come off as being a bit gratuitous). Now and then I slip in something I'm going to use later, but seeing as I also recount historical events that are entirely irrelevant to the story, hopefully it's not obvious what's background and what's set-up.



sabina: The next chapter will be all about the ex-mage down on the rocks, so many questions should be answered by that. I'm absurdly pleased that people are trying to figure it out, though :)



Ziona: Thanks :) As I said, if I ever develop any artistic talent, this is where I'll be directing it. Sadly that doesn't seem likely... but you never know, perhaps when I finally get a copy of Poser and get through TARA, I'll have learned enough to have a go at this.



chilled monkey: Thanks, I like trying to give Willow and Tara little jokes and laughs now and then, despite their grim circumstances. Same goes for being flirty and teasing - both of them are reminding themselves and each other of all the good stuff they've got, which hopefully balances out the less than ideal situation they're stuck in.



A lot of the Diablo mythology is based on 'real' mythology - Christian mainly, but the makers of the game do seem to have grabbed ideas from all over the place. Apparently the original Diablo was very big on background, but I never saw the manual for that (I've only played it on a friend's Playstation now and then, whereas I have my own Diablo 2). I've taken whatever mythology I can find and either used it or reworked it to suit whatever I wanted - for example, the Sin War was originally the war between demons and angels, but I liked the name so much I wanted to use it for the war between demons and humans, which (as you'd have noticed) gets talked about a lot more. The Mage Wars are discussed briefly in the Diablo 2 manuals, in relation to the assassins, and that's where Horazon and Bartuc are mentioned (which is why, all the way back in chapter 3, I think it was, I already knew Bartuc's name and history enough to have Willow make a passing reference to him). I've elaborated on things wherever I felt like it. Seeing as the Reckoning (my name for it) is the events of the Diablo games, all the post-Reckoning history is stuff I've made up. The Crystal Arch, incidentally, is mentioned in the Diablo background, but I've elaborated on what it is and why it's important.



Debra: I wanted to give the impression of them being thorough - neither of them, given their backgrounds, would be incautious at a time like this - and I'm glad it didn't turn out boring. After all, searching an empty monastery... :) Luckily I had those paintings to amuse myself. I just today realised I'm heading into the third chapter for this day alone, since they spent the night in the catacombs. Yipes :)



Arwen: Those paintings were a real mix of things. I had The Neverendign Story in mind a little, showing one event after another as they move along the wall. Various religious paintings sprung to mind as well - the roof of the Baptistry in Florence, with its circular arrangement of all the levels of heaven and all the angels, arch-angels and so on (and Lucifer and his crew packed into a corner) came to mind, in the sense that it's art, but also a depiction of the structure of the world. I took a more chronological approach, of course. When Willow mentioned the doors of that temple in Kurast with the histories cast in bronze, that was the Baptistry.



Hopefully the explanations I gave up above will have satisfied your curiosity about where I'm getting all this history from. In the tradition of all historians (I've got a degree, so trust me) I ignored anything I didn't like, borrowed anything I did, and made up a bunch of stuff around it :) Don't worry about not being familiar with the Diabloverse, I'm making sure (I hope) not to take any background for granted.

Artemis
 


FIC: Hellebore (chapter 38)

Postby Artemis » Sun Nov 23, 2003 9:07 am

Hellebore



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: R

Summary: A headstrong sorceress and a young Amazon join forces to locate and destroy an ancient source of demonic power.

Spoilers: None.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy the Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Diablo II' by Blizzard Entertainment. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au

Note: This chapter's a bit shorter than usual, hope you don't mind.



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Chapter Thirty-Eight

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Willow felt Tara's arm go around her shoulders, and she instinctively leant into the embrace, relief and dismay draining all the strength from her body.



"Are you sure he was the one?" Tara asked gently. Willow nodded.



"I can see it," she said, "the power from the rod, it's... it's like a stain. He was the one who used it."



"We shouldn't let our guard down," Tara warned, "but I don't think there's anyone else in the monastery." She paused, and Willow sensed her patience silencing the questions she wanted to ask. She sat down wearily, with Tara kneeling at her side, one arm around her shoulders, the other on her waist.



"It was a rod of command," she explained, "they're... very powerful demons create them for their servants. Using it on someone is... it strips the soul away from a person's life. You're alive, but not really alive, not a, a spiritual life anymore. The wielder can command anything, anything at all, and you can't disobey."



"It could have been used on the whole village?" Tara asked quietly. "To make them leave the gates open, let the Carvers in?" Willow nodded again.



"There wouldn't have been any way they could have fought it," she said bleakly. "A mage might have a chance, but... farmers and shopkeepers, no. The brothers here, too."



"Do you think Shadai created it?"



"I can't be sure," Willow said warily, "no-one knows enough about the rods to identify their creator, just from looking at them. But..." she sighed. "I wouldn't put my money on another demon. Not many are strong enough to make them, the rod is a massive concentration of demonic energy. Interfering with a living soul is almost impossible, even for a Lord of hell. One of the books I read once said it takes a demon a thousand years and a day to create a rod of command."



"But it's gone now?" Tara asked. "The one he used," she added, inclining her head towards the wall.



"Destroyed," Willow said firmly, "the Zann Esu developed spells for each of the three elements to break the magic in demonic weapons. Lightning works best, but cold is good enough. Ember said it's tricky to do with fire." She shrugged. "My staff probably helped, too," she admitted with a weak smile.



"Are you okay?" Tara asked, holding her closer.



"Yeah," Willow said, laying her hand over Tara's forearm reassuringly, "yeah, it was just a bit of a shock, that's all. I mean, we're - sorceresses - we're trained to recognise a rod if we see it, do the spell to break it, but... well, it's been over five hundred years since anyone's even seen one. I guess I never really expected to see one. I could've done without it, actually," she added with a wry laugh.



"Do you want something to eat?" Tara asked. "There were some dried goods in the store rooms that won't have spoiled." Willow paused and considered.



"You know," she said with a shrug, "that doesn't sound too bad. You'd think all this would kind of put a girl off her appetite, wouldn't you?"



"Just because the whole world's out to get us doesn't mean we can't snack," Tara replied with a straight face, managing to get a genuine laugh out of Willow.



"Let's go," she said, stroking Tara's arm, "we'll grab whatever looks good, then we should get back here and see what our late friend has been writing."



"You don't want to wait a while?" Tara asked. "I don't think there's any immediate hurry."



"Nah, I'll be fine," Willow said, as both stood. "Besides, you know me. I'd sooner get stuck into a problem than sit around worrying about it."



"Even when it's an icky demon-infestation problem?" Tara asked with a lop-sided grin.



"I'm incorrigible," Willow replied, taking her hand.



"Well I knew that," Tara said, raising an eyebrow.



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"Okay," Willow said, squaring her shoulders as she and Tara entered the corridor outside the apartments again, "let's see what we can see."



"Should we do this the same way as we did with Hydris' room?" Tara asked.



"Pretty much," Willow nodded, pausing momentarily at the doorway before stepping through, "don't touch anything weird-looking, or anything you don't recognise, don't read anything you can't understand..." She shot Tara an amused look. "We're kind of getting experienced at this, aren't we?"



"Evil mage clean-up crew," Tara smiled, "it's a dirty job..." She glanced around the room, her gaze drawn to the fragments of the rod left scattered across the far side of it. "Is that safe?"



"Oh, yeah," Willow said, clearing a few books off the bed to create enough space to sit down. "They're made out of common materials, as a vessel for the demonic magic. Once the magic's gone they revert back to whatever they were made of." She leaned over and picked up a fragment that had landed by the bed. "Huh. Wood," she noted, tossing it over her shoulder.



Tara picked up the chair Willow's staff had knocked over and righted it, sitting in front of the cluttered table. She carefully tilted the inkwell back onto its base without spilling any more ink, and tested the damp papers it had stained.



"I don't think this is more than a few hours old," she said. Willow looked up, surprised.



"He was still alive while we were down in the catacombs?" she wondered.



"Do you think he knew we were coming?" Tara asked with a frown.



"Maybe," Willow admitted with a shrug, "it's hard to tell. Depending on how subservient a mage becomes to a demon, he can develop all sorts of powers. He can't have been *that* dominated, if he was able to kill himself. Or maybe he really was insane. Demonic power has been known to cause madness sometimes, true madness, I mean, not just the demons-are-good sort of madness. Some scholars think that an insane mind is impossible for demons to properly control. It's all just theory, there's no mortal magic that works like demonic magic, and it doesn't do much good asking a demon how they do it, they're not known for giving honest answers. Hello..." she finished, fishing among the books scattered on the bed.



"What?"



"Look at this," she said, holding up a medallion, "it's the missing one from the floor of that hall." She peered at it, reading the tiny markings on it.



"One more mystery solved," Tara noted.



"Yeah," Willow said, "but another one to take its place. Why take this, and not one of the others? It's not magical." She turned it over, reading the inscription. "In fact, it's not even relevant."



"What does it say?" Tara asked, turning around in the chair to face Willow.



"'Noble warriors of light, swords raised, in flight,'" she read, "it's part of an old poem about the angels going out to meet the demon armies during the Great Conflict. I didn't read the others, but I wouldn't be surprised if each of the medallions in the floor had a line of the poem. I've seen some designs along those lines in churches and temples. But why would he have taken this particular medallion? Why not the central one, that was bigger, and I got the impression it may have had a tiny bit of holy magic in it. This is just an expensive trinket." She frowned. "I mean, if it had been inscribed with something describing the demons, then maybe it would have some significance... though I'm not sure what."



"Maybe he just needed any one of the medallions?" Tara suggested. "To do a spell on it? Is gold useful in spells?"



"A bit, if you use fire magic," Willow replied, "not as much as bronze, in most cases. If that's right, whatever he was going to do he hadn't done it yet. I can't see even a trace of magic in this... unless it's very, very subtle, and you wouldn't think someone carrying around a rod of control would be that interested in subtlety." She shrugged, and flipped the medallion in the air, catching it and dropping it into a pouch on her belt. "When we get to Duncraig I'll buy some potions and do a full set of detection spells on it, just in case. Probably a waste of time, but you never know." Tara nodded absently and turned back to the table.



"This looks like a diary," she said, reading the spidery writing covering half the page, ending in an illegible scrawl. "It's dated yesterday." Willow put aside the book she had picked up and went to look over Tara's shoulder.



"'My Mistress is coming,'" Tara read, "'tomorrow at noon she comes and she will kill me.'"



"That's today," Willow said with a worried frown.



"It's well past noon," Tara said, "his Mistress? Do you think...?"



"Shadai," Willow said flatly.



"It is possible she was going to force him to summon her?" Tara wondered. "He knew what was going to happen, and knew she'd kill him after the summoning?"



"It could be," Willow said, "if he was in contact with her, he might have glimpsed bits and pieces of her thoughts."



"When she was summoned before, she killed the mage who did it," Tara reminded Willow, who nodded.



"Yeah," she agreed, "yeah, a demon of her power would practically drain any mage who summoned her. He'd be useless to her for days until he recovered... she'd probably consider him a liability more than a servant. Plus there's the whole thing with demons just enjoying killing for its own sake." Tara nodded grimly, and returned her attention to the page.



"'I know what I must do,'" she read, "'just this and I will be free of her at last. I will be free of everything. I have given her pain today, and she feeds on it. She gorges and ignores my thoughts for now. I have this one chance. May the gods forgive my soul and let me find oblivion.' Well, that seems to explain what happened."



"We were lucky," Willow said, leaning against the chair with a hand on Tara's shoulder, "gods, the whole world was lucky..."



"Do you think he could have summoned her, if he hadn't died?" Tara asked. "The way you've talked about it, he'd have had to be an extraordinary mage to do it, wouldn't he?"



"He would," Willow said, the tiredness disappearing from her voice as she latched onto Tara's train of thought and followed it, "he might have been. It's difficult to tell once a person's dead. Magic is in the soul as well as the body. Then again, I'm naturally predisposed to cold magic. There's a theory that some people are predisposed the same way towards demonic magic. In whatever discipline he studied openly, he might have been nothing special, but doing a summoning spell... I didn't get the impression Hydris was that powerful, for that matter, but he tried to summon Shadai, well enough that I could hear her voice for a second. I just don't know." Tara stroked the back of her hand.



"Maybe we owe that man out there our lives," Willow said softly. "He wielded the rod of command, let all those people die... and then he killed himself, and saved us."



"The way he writes, it doesn't sound like he had altruistic motives in mind," Tara commented, "it's more like serving her was a living hell."



"Well, yeah, there is that," Willow nodded, taking a deep breath and steadying herself. "Demons are generally only cooperative as long as they need to be to overpower their summoner. After that... feeding off his pain sounds about right. Jumping off the wall probably would seem like the best option." She and Tara shared a bleak look, then Tara returned her attention to the diary, flipping back through the pages. She gave up after a moment and opened the book to its first page.



"Beginning of the year," she said, as Willow gave her shoulder a squeeze and went back to searching through the other books and papers. "According to this he was in Namon back then."



"North of here, isn't it?" Willow asked.



"Along the river Marien from Duncraig," Tara replied, "that's where the ambassadors were discussing making another detour. Kert's map made it look like a fairly prominent town, the same size as Sorenstad. He lived there..." she read on silently. "He was part of something called the Order of Lightshapers?"



"Oh, yeah," Willow said, her brow furrowing in concentration, "I know that one, we learned all the mage clans and their orders... gods, that was ages ago, let me think... they're part of the Ennead clan, I think. They mostly stay in Kurast... no, I remember, the Lightshapers, they're wanderers, they travel to cities and towns that the clan hasn't had contact with before, stay there until they've learned all they can, then up and move somewhere else."



"What are the Ennead like?" Tara asked, skimming through the text at the same time.



"Pretty decent as mage clans go," Willow said, "not that powerful in military terms, but big on knowledge. They've spent most of their history... well, basically learning and staying out of everyone's way. There's nine orders in the clan, one for each of the nine planets in the sky. The Lightshapers... if I'm remembering this right, it's been ages since I studied clan history, but it fits with them being out here, not back in Kurast... the Lightshapers are supposedly linked to the planet Lorelei, which is the wanderer."



"Which is that?" Tara asked, looking up.



"Her orbit is hugely erratic," Willow explained, "depending on the time, she could be anywhere between the sunward side of Domina and Amica - that's the pair sunwards of us - to the starward side of the Triad, three planets out from Sanctuary."



"Oh, we call that one Zerae," Tara offered.



"After your goddess?"



"Yes. All of the 'old worlds', the ones our priests could see centuries ago, without powerful telescopes, are attached to one of our gods. Zerae travels all over the skies so she can check up on all her devotees, but she always returns to be near her husband Hefaetrus. That's the closest world to the sun."



"We didn't have telescopes handy where I grew up," Willow said, "when I went to the Order I learned all the planets according to the Horadrim cycles. Anyway, Lorelei - Zerae - is the wanderer, and the Lightshapers are modelled after her nature, so they travel around a lot. Does it say anything about them?" Tara returned to her study of the diary.



"He - I don't see anywhere where it says his name - he seemed to be ostracised from the others of his order. Or perhaps he just thought he was... 'they deny me my rightful place among the shaper-magi'... 'they should have consulted me before making such a decision,' something about exchanging knowledge with a Vizjerei mage." She read bits and pieces over the course of a few pages. "He seems to have thought all his fellow mages were only interested in ancient history... ah, here: 'dusty old fools with their dusty old books.'"



"And he was more ambitious?" Willow guessed. "I wonder how he ended up in the Ennead, it doesn't sound like he'd have been their type. I'm not sure how they choose their apprentices, the Zann Esu really haven't dealt with them that much."



"Here's something," Tara noted, "have you ever heard of a book called the Black Tome?"



"Black Tome?" Willow said to herself. "There's been a couple of books called that... the Order's actually got one in the vault libraries supposedly written by a servant of Azmodan, one of the Lesser Evils. What does he write about it?"



"Um, 'the paths have been revealed to me, in the pages of this tome my destiny is charted'... he kind of goes on like that for a bit. It sounds like he found it, and thought it would lead him to something important."



"Yeah, demons and insanity," Willow muttered darkly, "if it was important to him, maybe it's around here somewhere... I don't suppose there's a description?" She got up off the bed and started picking up the books scattered across the floor, checking their spines.



"I don't see anything like that," Tara said, "just references to the secrets in it... spells, sources of power..."



"This might be it," Willow said, "it's black, at least." She held up a book bound in cracked black leather.



"Might it be dangerous?" Tara wondered.



"I don't think so," Willow said, sitting back down with it, "there's very few books powerful enough to be dangerous without help. You have to read their spells aloud, or pour blood on the pages, stuff like that. I can't feel anything that powerful in here." She dusted off the black cover and studied it.



"No title," she observed, "let's see..." She opened it and leafed through a few pages. "Oh, I think I've heard of this. There was a Black Tome found briefly during the Reckoning, and then lost again somewhere in Khanduras. If this is it, it's a record of the places of power for all the significant demonic mages in the last few hundred years. I guess that makes sense, if you were insane and wanted to get involved in demonology, that'd be a pretty useful find."



"What should we do with it?" Tara asked. Willow looked up and thought for a moment.



"I think we should take it with us," she said, "one, it could be useful to figure out what was going on here, and two, if we get this to the Zann Esu it'll help track down a lot of potentially dangerous artefacts and so on." She leafed through the pages. "Oh, gods, that's ugly. Why would anyone worship *that*?" She looked up again. "It doesn't say what, specifically, he was interested in, does it?" Tara turned back and searched through the next few pages.



"He went on a journey," she said, "on a boat... left his order, went downriver and then on a merchant ship bound form Lut Gholein... but he got off before it reached there. Somewhere in the Tamoe mountains..."



"The Kingsport-Lut Gholein shipping lines run off the coast of the southern Tamoe ranges," Willow offered.



"'The living darkness guides my footsteps,'" Tara read, "'I know beyond a shadow of a doubt that tomorrow I shall cross the threshold of the broken circle, and the power of the storm casters will be mine.' What does that mean?"



"He was going to summon a storm caster," Willow said, snapping her fingers as the pieces fell into place, "they're a kind of creature created by one of the factions during the Mage Wars, and then they all got cast into hell after they turned on their creators."



"Why would anyone want one?"



"For a mage jealous of his fellow mages, and not above using demonic forces to get what he wanted, it'd be tempting," Willow explained, checking books and piling them beside the bed as she searched for something. "Storm casters were created to disable enemy mages, they can latch onto any mage and drain his power. The mages who created them made them a bit too smart though, and they learned to feed off the magic that was supposed to be keeping them under control. If this guy thought he could summon one back from hell and control it, maybe he was going to use it to seize control of his order."



"Using the rod of command to control it?" Tara wondered.



"No," Willow said, "no, it wouldn't work on a demon, even an artificial one like a storm caster. Besides, if he had a rod, he wouldn't have needed anything else to help him." She sat back on her heels and looked around. "I don't see any texts on storm casters, not even anything that might be vaguely relevant to them. What does he say next?"



"Lots of stuff about the broken circle," Tara replied.



"A place where it's easier to summon," Willow interjected, "there's a few hidden here and there."



"There's records of spells and rituals he did, you might want to look over them later... some of this definitely falls into the 'don't read out loud' category," she added, with a wry grin over her shoulder at Willow.



"You know, I don't think he got his storm caster," Willow frowned, "it doesn't fit. I don't think there's any way one of them could create a rod of command, no matter how much power it soaked up, rods need pure demonic energy..."



"'My life is over,'" Tara read out, "'I cannot say how I erred, but my trap has snared a prey far greater than I could control. How could this happen? It is impossible, yet I reached her, and now she holds me in her palm, and drives me onward.'" Willow stood and came up behind Tara again, looking over her shoulder.



"It's her," she whispered, "he made contact with Shadai."



"By accident?" Tara asked.



"Like he said, it should be impossible," Willow replied, "but if it happened... I'm starting to see how this all comes together. He went to summon a minor demon, and somehow made contact with Shadai instead. She made him serve her, created the rod for him so he'd be able to do her will... and made him come here. The Tamoe ranges are a long way away..." she stared off into space. "He was practically heading right for me. And he must've commanded the goat-men and the other demons here-"



"I thought you said a rod wouldn't work on demons?" Tara asked.



"He wouldn't need it," Willow replied, "they'd have seen him as being under her command, and obeyed him. Hybrids are almost incapable of defying true demons, even if they're working through a mortal servant."



"So he came here," Tara summarised, "with the goat-men following him? Or here already?"



"Maybe a few were already around," Willow guessed, "and he could've gathered more as he travelled."



"He killed everyone in the monastery and the villages," Tara went on, "and then... stayed here researching something, while the goat-men went out to look for us?"



"Well, me," Willow corrected.



"Us," Tara insisted, "nothing is getting to you without facing me." She looked up and Willow and gave her hand a protective squeeze. Willow opened her mouth to say something, but couldn't.



"So," Tara resumed, "the plan was to bring us here... capture us, or maybe just drive us here, for the mage to command with his rod. And then, summon Shadai?"



She might've expected me to attack her the same way I did before," Willow guessed, holding Tara's hand tight, "and then she'd defeat me, gain my power... and there'd be a major demon loose with elemental magic."



"Only her plan failed," Tara pointed out. "Her servant's dead, the rod's been destroyed, there's no-one left to summon her."



"We were lucky," Willow said again.



"We'd have found a way," Tara said, "even if things had gone differently. I promise you Willow, I would not have let that happen to you. We'd have found a way to escape." Willow sighed, and at Tara's urging sat gently on her lap.



"Willow," she said softly, "there's a single rule at the core of all Amazon belief. I love you completely, and I know you love me just as much. That means that together we can defy any force set against us. All we need to do is believe, completely believe, in our love. I do, Willow. Amazon lore says that love like ours can defy armies, demons, even gods. I truly believe that."



"I..." Willow started, her voice trembling, "I do too... gods know everything I've ever learned goes against it, a-and says this is just, just wishful thinking, in the face of the kind of power a demon like Shadai can wield... but I believe you." She looked at Tara, her eyes full of tears. "Why is that?" she asked, with a faith smile.



"You know why," Tara whispered, catching the tears with her lips as they rolled silently down Willow's cheeks.



"I love you," Willow said.



"That's why," Tara replied. She tightened her hug, then let Willow go and stood up after her.



"Do we know what we needed to know from here?" she asked. Willow looked around.



"I think so," she said, "most of these books are copies of old manuscripts, the Zann Esu has copies as well. Maybe even the court mage in Duncraig, he might have quite a library. I should make a note of which books are here, which pages have been removed and marked... otherwise I think we're done."



"Should we take this?" Tara asked, closing the diary. Willow frowned at it, then sighed.



"We probably should," she said, "the Ennead will want it when they find out what happened, assuming they don't know already. And ickiness aside, I'd actually like to go through it in detail myself, once we're somewhere safe. Might find something significant, you never know."



"Okay," Tara nodded, "we'll take it."



"The Black Tome as well," Willow added, "the Order could learn a lot from studying it. Help me check through the others quickly, just to make sure there's nothing apart from the the mage wrote himself. You'd recognise his handwriting?"



"Yep," Tara said. She started going through the books, reading the titles to Willow who noted them in their journal, then stacking them in a corner.



"What do you think we should do next?" Willow asked, while she flipped through the pages of an old copy of a Vizjerei text on demons, matching the missing pages to those torn out and left on the floor.



"When I read that passage you found in Ember's journal," Tara said, handing Willow any pages that looked to be the right size to have come from the damaged book, "she mentioned a map room in the monastery showing the whole area. It might be useful if we could find that. We still have two days' travel to the river, and I'd like to see where we're going in detail."



"Two-twenty, two-twenty-one..." Willow counted under her breath, noting the page number, "yeah, okay," she continued out loud, "she said it was... ground floor east? That's here, isn't it? These rooms?"



"There's no decoration here," Tara said thoughtfully, "but these are recent... what if when Ember was here, these apartments hadn't been built yet? What would be the east-most building then?"



"Um, the armoury," Willow suggested, "or maybe the guardhouse in the northeast tower, that had an adjoining room that was up against the eastern wall, that'd be pretty close."



"Alright, we'll check both of those. It's probably attached to the guardhouse though, I don't think there were any decent-sized rooms we didn't check around the armoury, and I can't imagine anyone painting a map of the whole region on the wall in a closet." Willow grinned.



"So, we find the map, and see what the land looks like between here and the river," Tara went on. "If we can find the entrance to the tunnel leading to the eastern village we'll use that, that'll cut out a mile of travelling over exposed terrain, and we won't have to go around the edge of the cliff we're on. From what I saw there's forests and low valleys beyond the village, so we won't have to worry about being spotted from miles away."



"We'll have to make sure we find the right tunnel," Willow warned, making a final note in the journal and putting the other book aside, "the one from the western village came up facing south, and the passage in the catacombs twisted and turned around a fair bit. I don't think we should just guess which way to go."



"How many entrances to the catacombs did we find?" Tara asked.



"I counted four," Willow said, "including the one we used. There's probably more around though, plus trapdoors and stuff."



"The passage we followed was marked, wasn't it?" Tara went on. "You said the paving stones had been set like a path."



"Uh-huh," Willow nodded, "so if we know which entrance to use, and the passage is marked the same way, we won't get lost in the catacombs."



"I don't suppose there'd be any plans of the monastery back in the library?" Tara asked. Willow sighed.



"Maybe," she said warily, "but I wouldn't count on it. Maybe the recent additions might have plans, but the other parts would be hundreds of years old, and they don't typically keep building records from that far back. At least, not in the churches I've seen."



"Maybe the map room might show something," Tara mused, "anyway, we'll check the library again if we have to."



"Should we stay here tonight, or set off?" Willow asked.



"If we have to travel above ground, we should do it in the day," Tara said, "maybe we wouldn't be spotted at night..."



"But maybe we would," Willow finished, nodding, "Carvers prefer moving around at night if they have a choice."



"And during the day we'd have a better chance of defending ourselves. But if we find the tunnel to the east, I think we should start into it, and try to find a room like the one we spent last night in. We can sleep half-way, and come up above ground during the daylight tomorrow."



"It's a plan," Willow nodded, grinning at Tara. "Add one more to the billions of reasons I'm glad you're here with me."



"Wouldn't want to be anywhere but with you," Tara smiled back. "And hey, this way when I finally get back to the islands, I can tell Solari I've been on a genuine adventure."



"Don't forget you'll have me with you," Willow said, "you can show her me and go 'and look what I found.'"



"I haven't forgotten," Tara said, picking up the last pile of books and bringing it over to Willow. "You're unforgettable. Remember?" Willow did her best to conceal a giggle, and busied herself with the books.



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Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 38)

Postby sabina » Sun Nov 23, 2003 10:12 am

Hi :wave



This was a great update :applause



So Shadai was about to be released... Good thing the other guy decided to jump to his death.

Well, at least if Willow and Tara are right and he was the one who was leading the carvers and goat men to attacking the villages that should have stopped now.



Although I do have the feeling that this is not the last time we have heard of Shadai... :hmm



How did Shadai managed to be summoned anyway if the mage was trying to summon another demon?



Anyway, thank you for a great update :bow








"I know I was born and I know that I'll die.

The in between is mine.

I am mine!" - Pearl Jam

sabina
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 38)

Postby Grimlock72 » Sun Nov 23, 2003 1:11 pm

Rod of Control, sounds positivly evil indeed. Not sure why Willow persistently seems to think Shadai is behind all of it. Surely there are MORE (in number) powerfull demons around then her ? What is the range of that rod (i.e. span of control) ?? An entire village sounds a bit large. Btw. demons need to get smarter and actually play nice until they REALLY don't need the human anymore, something Shadai obviously failed to understand.



I also don't agree that there was a plan what-so-ever to lure Willow to the monastary. To many coincidences for a demon to plot, I'll agree the goatmen were send to kill or hurt her though. We haven't actually seen the goatmen attempting to hurt Willow, only Tara... could be significant.



The scholar's diary will be very valuable in understanding HOW a higher demon like Shadai or alike get control over someone who should have known better. Come to think of it, even the Storm Caster which was the scholar's goal would have been dangerous. After all, it's known that Storm Caster turned against their master years ago. Why is that some powerfull mages have such huge ego they think they can do better ???



It was sweet of Tara to say that Shadai was after her as well as Willow, even though thats not strictly true (yet). It might very well become true, since Willow wouldn't exactly like Tara being hurt by Shadai and because Shadai seems to thrive on pain... well do the math. I like Tara's faith in how them being together can conquer all by I tend to think more rational like Willow :) . It's a sweet thing to say but not very realistic and potentially fatal.



I know Shadai is pissed at Willow but this seems like an awfull lot of effort to get back at one petty human. I'm rather suspicious about other motivations. Willow is a nice girl and probably a powerfull sourceress for her age but surely she's not all THAT powerfull to be such a high priority target, hmm...



It's a shame Shadai can't be dealt with permanently, even if they twart her current plan (whatever it is) she can always come back with yet another one. Unless they make it very costly in which case it will take years for her Evilness to recover from the attempt, heh.... yeah maybe that will work.



Mobile phones would have been soooo usefull to Willow right now. She has lots of things to tell Ember and her other. Lots of questions too, and a little magical support and knowledge wouldn't hurt either. She'll have lots of new stories to tell at home thats for sure :-)



Grimmy

--
"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Edited by: Grimlock72 at: 11/23/03 12:13 pm
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