Poetry in Dog Years

[bulldog tidnab]

morning everybody.



Diana - Thank you very much. That's quite a bit of compliment. gonna have to move my ego to a bigger pocket i think. I'm impressed that you read the entire thread. Don't think I've even gone back and done that. Again, thank you and feel free to pop in anytime. Oh and your sig?



something new here, kinda. wrote this a good while ago and i'm choosing to post it as opposed to the other things i have, since i feel they could use a bit more work. so this for now and something really really new soon.

summary for this one? hmmm well... it's and and it's rather... erm... nc-17ish... that said...





oh damn you

(bless you)

now I'm hot

(burning up)

wet for you

(touch me again)

why torture me

(such sweet teasing)

when I must wait

(damn time)

when the day is so long

(an eternity)

and I miss you already

(deep breath)

tonight my love

(goddess I ache)

i will make your body scream

(my name)

like mine is screaming now

(for you)

tonight my lover

(are you ready?)

I will make you mine

(again and again)

do you hear me?

(oh, you will...)



*howl*

edited cause: i dumb. i mean come on... how many people do you know that can misspell i'm?

Edited by: Warduke at: 7/14/03 7:52 pm

[The Pineapple Head]

Andi, sheesh! I was howling right there with you. Why don't we have an emoticon for that? Me likes....me likes a lot! Definately time to move your ego to a bigger pocket.



As for the sig, it was a good way to shut up a co-worker. It happens.



Diana

"No, I'm not cold. I can engrave glass with my nipples, but I'm not cold."
Me

[barnabasvamp]

Andi Sweetie, So glad you're back!



My god girl, you should take a break more often if it means creating such beautiful words!



How could any woman ignore such touching thoughts.



Jean

"When choosing between two evils, I always like to take the one I've never tried before"-Mae West

[SquishyTrishy]

LOL...and Hey! You know atlest one person that can miss pell I'm *points to self* so nah! *sticks out tounge* And um..i loved the poem, i liked the whole thought thing going on in the brakets..*wonders all the new ways she can use brakets* you know your one of my fav poets! Top 5!



Love you Andi

Hope your doing well

Miss you

HUggles

~ Did you know that when you go its the perfect ending to a a bad day I was just beginning ~

[funkyasian]

*runs into the thread*



hey there dawg...what's up? sorry i missed the two latest ones...but you know...melodrama...anyway...great words as usual...i think i may need to pick my pen back up and write too...what do you think? give you a little run for your money?



love you



steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

[tiredsoul]

That last one was a great poem. Well, they're all great. I loved the structure of that one. why torture me (such sweet teasing) and and I miss you already (deep breath)



Awesome. Thanks for that.



--celia

---------------------------------

When innocence is shattered
... madness is inevitable
www.gotlicky.com

[SJ]

Always enjoy reading your poetry

[bulldog tidnab]

thought i'd reply to the feedback you lovely people have left here. gosh but i just love you guys.



Diana - hee. howling with me huh? good to know. i personally feel that we should have a howling emoticon myself. i mean, come on, we have a dancing banana. Thanks so much for the feedback. *slides ego into it's own seperate bag*



Jean - it's kinda good to be back. aw.. shucks.. beautiful words huh? why thank you my dear.



Trish - well yeah.. alright so now i know 2 people that can misspell i'm. always good to know. glad you liked the bracket use. figured we often say one thing while thinking another so it might come in handy. glad you liked this. top 5 huh? you flatter me. love you trishy.



Steph - thank you my dear. so you wanna give me a run for my money huh? i do believe that is a bit of a challenge there. tell you what... i'll match you poem for poem. see if you can keep up. love you too. be good.



tiredsoul - or do you prefer celia? i never know. thank you for the praise. i enjoyed playing with the structure of it. it was quite enjoyable to write. heh. thanks again.



SJ - Thank you. i always enjoy getting feedback for said poetry.



i'm still working on a couple things... one is more a prose rant-y thing, but i haven't decided what to do with it yet. might post as is, but i dont know if anyone would be interested... we'll see....

*woof*

"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness." -Friedrich Nietzsche

[tanniyn]

Oh dear...I am the ever late dragon...I am so sorry. I meant to reply sooner...I just...well... . We dragons are not known for our punctuality. I just wanted to stop by and tell you that words, your work....is well....quite moving. . You are an amazing talent and I feel honored to have read your work here. I do so hope that you continue to express yourself in words and to allow us to read them...You are a gift..never doubt that...you are....*drifts back into the shadows.* Thank you kind bulldog, thank you.



tanniyn

"The minute one utters a certainty, the opposite comes to mind..." -May Sarton

[tkheaven]

*puurrrrr* WOW..ok..umm, nice? no, not nice...hell that was some good writing. *hugs da bulldog*

Tk's new and improved "GrrArgg"...

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Tara ate her, devoured her from beneath. -The Edge of Silence giving new meaning to season seven's catch phrase.

[bulldog tidnab]

got something new for everyone. but first:



tanniyn - thank you. you're praise means so much to me. don't worry about punctuality. we have all the time in the world here. frankly, i'm not so punctual myself. but tell no one.



Katy - thank you darlin'. glad you liked it. hopefully you enjoy this next bit of somethin' as well. take it easy eh?



alright.. as promised... here's something new. again with the risque here. it's from the POV of . hope you like.



that look of desire reflects

in her eyes

soft smile spreading across

sensuous lips

smoldering lust burning deep within



my hand slowly

trailing between her breasts

caressing the soft curves

of her belly

gently resting on her hip



fingertips play on her

taut thighs

hips

rock slowly in small circles



nails tracing upturned breasts

nipples pushing out into firm buds

straining the confining fabric

breasts swollen in anticipation of a touch

she pauses just out of reach



her fragrance weaves its way through me

this dance is

for

we two alone



*woof*

"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness." -Friedrich Nietzsche

[tkheaven]

you know I think I'm gonna have to drag you down here myself...



dat waz naiiiiccee

Tk's new and improved "GrrArgg"...

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Tara ate her, devoured her from beneath. -The Edge of Silence giving new meaning to season seven's catch phrase.

[barnabasvamp]

Jeeze Girl, I think I'm speechless!!







Jean

"When choosing between two evils, I always like to take the one I've never tried before"-Mae West

[The Pineapple Head]

Working on something that isn't non-verbal. Andi that was all sorts of incredible. If you need help getting your ego into a size appropriate pocket, my best friend is just fabulous with alterations.



Take care,

Diana

"No, I'm not cold. I can engrave glass with my nipples, but I'm not cold."
Me

[Drakkenfyre]

*the Lady Dragon glides into the thread landing softly* Well thank the Goddess you stopped waxing the bloody floor!!! Hello my dear bulldog...I see you have been quite busy since my departure. Your words are as impressive as ever...the emotions conveyed simple and pure. Well done my friend, well done...However....now that I am back I believe we were in the middle of a poetry war...you still game? Of course, I am a little rusty and haven't written in awhile but well...as you know we dragons love a good challenge!!! So dear one....what do you say? Challenge the old dragon or not? Sorry, but what the bloody hell is that? tee hee...



The Lady Dragon

I am the dragon that hides from the sun and flies in the moonlight.

[VicariousSmoochies]

Wow...the...um...last one...um...was...very, very...vivid...and...um...I...think...I need...to...um...get something to quench my thirst...yes, that would be it.



Great stuff!



Loved the flow (of the poem, if I should 'splain myself better) and it just rolls of your tongue. Think I'll stop now...

[SquishyTrishy]

Hey Andi



Love the poem, its all steamy and vivid. I have to say if your gonna talk naughty talk I would much rather this then "thongs" cuz....cuz..and It doesnt sound as poeticit..hehe..*hugs you* i am glad to see you that your writting is becoming more frequent. I missed it. Hope all is going well for you.



Love

Trishy

[SquishyTrishy]

*walks into the room and pounces on andi giving her a big hug, glareing slightly* some one jealous? *smoothers andi in huggles and Trishy love* You know I adore you and your poems. I think yours are amazing and deserve fire works. *gives andi magic pill to make her, her normal age*



Love, and Huggles



Trishy



Ps. *makes thinky face* I cant belive its true that i am the youngest freaken one of you all. *shakes head and gives andi another hug before walking out of the room*

[funkyasian]

and as usual, you've left me breathless andi...bravo...great words, love it...



okay, so poem for poem huh? well, i have my muse...just need the time now i suppose *grin*



so when are you coming down here to visit us in civilization?!



steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

[SJ]

Great poem,very sensual

[bulldog tidnab]

wow i suck.

just wanted to thank all of you for the wonderful feedback you've left me.

was going to post, but i'm really niot happy with the things i've come up with. call it stage fright i guess.

i'm hoping to leave something newish here relatively soon. we will see how it goes.

my apologies for the delay. (heh.. the extended remix. oy.)



*woof*

"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness." -Friedrich Nietzsche

[tkheaven]

lmao..the extended remix, huh..now was that for the pig or what was it again.

anyhoo, glad to see you back in here. relatively soon? wow, and to think I was about to post something up as a cry to see the bulldog in action again (now that didn't sound right), maybe that 'dream' poem, or 'crystallized image'? your poems surpass mine...you'd have kittens crying for your return *chuckle*

well, good thing I didn't have to...and have I mentioned how darned cute that avitar is??



*looks at watch..is it October yet?? I'd never thought i'd ask that with different reason*

Tk's new and improved "GrrArgg"...Crazy? Crazy?? I do not talk to myself...it's called thinking aloud.

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Tara ate her, devoured her from beneath. -The Edge of Silence giving new meaning to season seven's catch phrase.

Kill the snake of doubt in your soul, crush the worms of fear in your heart, and mountains will move out of your way. -Kate Seredy

[bulldog tidnab]

yep kiddies that's right. got a new one for you. little rough, but it serves my purposes here. this one is post TR but pre Entropy... but not too pre Entropy.. if that makes sense.

and Katy... might've been for the pigs... and october... october is right around the corner. it's kinda nice to be wanted.

oh and also... a quick shameless plug: I now have a thread over in The Inward Eye. you should go see. no really you should. it's fun... no really it is... please? oh hell.. do what you want.





love is most difficult

to behold

especially

in these dark times

but i’d rather die

than lose hope



often i envision her smile

her touch

gentle as ever

while lost within her eyes

a realm

of infinite beauty



virtue her utmost treasure

absolute perfection

i find in her

a truly

precious being



even though it seems so far

i murmur a prayer

for us

for the moment

I embrace her

once again

and return to

loving her

forever





*woof*

"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness." -Friedrich Nietzsche

Edited by: bulldog tidnab at: 8/29/03 10:11 am

[Drakkenfyre]

The dragon lands gently...oh thank god, no wax or oil to ruin my landing. My dear, you remember how once you said your writing wanted to be my writing when it grew up? Well, I do believe you have grown up and passed this old dragon. This was lovely, just lovely. I loved the pace of it. The emotions right there in full view. Excellent!! The beauty of the poem is not in the words but the emotions it conveys. The dragon bows to you. Well done, my dear.

Neither a lofty degree of intelligence nor imagination nor both together go to the making of genius. Love, love, love, that is the soul of genius. -- Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart

[ExtraFlameyWT]

*enters timidly*...*waves* Hi Andi...I know it's been a while...but I have to say how much I love the poetry you've been posting...I miss you...*hugs* Drop me a line sometime if you have a chance...



Love,



Aimster

It's hard to be precise, though. Alternate universes don't stay put. Sending him to a specific place is like, like trying to hit a puppy by throwing a live bee at it. Which is a weird image and you should all just forget it. -Willow in Triangle

[funkyasian]

as usual andi, bravo...very very well done.



so i guess october is the time huh? well, i await the month with bated breath...*grin*



hope all is well...drop me a line...



steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

[SJ]

Love that poem

Great writing