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Postby thebardgirl » Sun Aug 15, 2004 12:46 am

Tempest Duer-You like shiny, eh? *gives you piece of glittery glass* have fun....oh, but first read the update.





Same disclaimers, same notes...same strange writer....*shrugs*...









Chapter 11







A figure strode forward deliberately towards the looming outline of a large tree. Its elongated limbs seemed to kneel down to the ground, in reverence of oncoming travelers. The dark, while splashed over every creak and crack of the tree, could not hide the awkward scratch that smoke and fire had left.



The lithe yet strong body walked up to the rugged bark, examining it slowly. A quick movement of one hand into a side pouch and soon powder was sprinkled over the large burnt marking.



“Obscu’ure.”



A dim shine on the tree’s skin and the scratch ceased to exist.



A low grumbling could be heard from within the tree. But the intruder took no heed to the groan; it retreated, feet crinkling against the leaves of the ground.



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Voices, many voices, bubbled to in and out over the sea of worried faces. Thea stood there, at the helm of her throne, waiting for the noise to calm down. But the voices would not cease. Cries, moans, softer whimpers sounded out over and over again. The eyes, though, spoke louder than the voiced words. Her people, her daughters, were in pain.



Imagine a forest floor filled with every kind of floral and fauna. Then imagine the rain to come down in torrents upon every leaf. Now hear the pat-pats multiplying by every leaf, with every new drop.



The noise was deafening.

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Tar’airah had entered with her companions, and despite the looks of disgust and disdain from several of her sisters, she ventured forward to the front of the room. Thea caught the girl’s eyes and noticed a simmering spark beneath the natural gloom that seemed to always coat Tar’airah’s aura. She scrunched her brow in curiosity, but decided to push it aside. More important issues were at hand. The time had come to speak to her people.



She raised her hands in command for silence.



They obeyed.



“Daughters, I have heard from many of you, and the sky as well, “ she added with a smirk, “Of heightened terror. But why so frightened? What ails your ears, so as to frighten you all to coming here? We have had rain since hour of each of our births.” The voices rose up again in protest.



“The trees were burned!”



“The sky is furious! It rails against us!”



“This is no rain! The airflames are back!”



“They’re back!”



“Calm! Calm!” Thea shouted sternly, “Peace, daughters. Your captain and protector, Caranthia,” as she said this, the bold looking brunette stepped forward behind the throne into Thea’s outstretched palm,” has personally ventured forward to the Trees. She tells me that a fire had started, but not by the sky,” Thea soothed, “it was merely a floor fire. Possibly by a traveling foreigner.”



The women seemed unconvinced. An anonymous spoke up, asking the question burning in the back of each woman’s mind.



“Then why did the sky scream and flash?”



“Rainstorms are common here. We all know that,” Thea reasoned, “The protective spirits placed on our perimeters do not prevent the storms from coming within a foot of the boundaries; it was bound for one storm to approach us so close, eventually.”



The faces were skeptical.



“Please, the spirits have not, nor ever will fail us,” Thea said slowly and calmly, “Unless we no longer need them; that is the only way our borders can be intruded upon. And as Caranthia informs me from past rendezvous with the locals that time is yet here,” she shuddered at this, and then recuperated to say, “You all have been under my care, most since birth,” the old woman said quietly, “I have kept you under my wing for so long—I would not let that protection die so easily. And neither, I believe,” Thea said patting the shoulder of her captain, proudly, “would Caranthia.”



The brunette smiled smugly, allowing the awe of her people wash over her like a drug. But one in the crowd was not doing their duty to admire—as usual, ignorant of what was needed, and too proud to do what was expected—the same face she’s had to look at, unwillingly, since birth.



Tar’airah stood there, frowning up at the captain of amazon warriors.



“Now, I’ve heard that one girl had been near the trees at the time of the fire. Is this true, Caranthia?” Thea asked bringing her out of her reverie.



“What? Yes, Akhia.”



Buf’aneah and Fa’aithlia walked up behind Tar’airah upon hearing the name.



“Bring her forth.”



“Madame, she is in shock, I do no—“



“Bring her forward,” Thea said sternly, “for the women’s sake,” she waved her hands at the crowd.



“Right,” Caranthia said through clenched teeth, and swiftly turned. Soon she was hidden among the curtains of Thea’s back room quarters. A few moments passed and silence encompassed the room. Buf’aneah and Fa’aithlia stood there, interested at what the girl could possibly say that was different from what they first heard. But before either could comment, the brunette returned triumphantly, Akhia in tow.



“Tell them,” Caranthia said patting the shoulder of the little girl, “tell them what you really saw.”

Most of the women in the tent did not even notice the slight accent Caranthia placed on the word ‘really,’ nor the slight twitch in her eye as she asked the girl to tell her story.



Most, except for three sets of eyes, located at the front.



“I-I-I…” the girl said slowly, voice cracking under the pressure.



Caranthia knelt down next to the little girl and lovingly caressed the teary face of the girl, “It’s okay, you’re safe here; you can tell us.”



“I-I saw…” the girl faltered again, but with the encouraging look of Caranthia’s, she continued, “a fire.” The amazon’s eyes seemed to light up instantaneously, but she remained still, as the girl continued, “o-on the forest f-floor.”



“There, was that so hard?” Caranthia said rising as Akhia looked up fearfully, “See? Akhia herself has realized her mistake, and I’m sure met no harm in her wild assumptions,” she chuckled, patting the girl’s back roughly, “the fear of a little girl has been known to start more than one fire in the past.”



“I-I-I didn’t star—“



“It’s okay, Akhia, we do not judge you,” Caranthia said soothingly. She turned to the crowd again, “we are all family here.”



Akhia however, seemed to want to make herself as little as possible with the looks she received from the older women. Caranthia did not notice though, and continued smiling at her masterful handling of the situation.



Thea nodded, approving and then faced her daughters once more.



“Go home, go back to your lives, for they await you eagerly,” the old woman said encouragingly, “sleep easily with your families, your children and do not fret. For remember, you have the best of the best guarding us.”



The crowd slowly, but surely dissipated.



Thea retreated behind her throne, back to her bed quarters, most likely to discuss further precautions with Caranthia. But the brunette in question lingered at the helm for a moment, glaring still, at Tar’airah, who seemed as convinced of her safety as a water buffalo would be in the middle of a lion’s den.



But with a tugging on her arm, Caranthia looked over to a girl that had approached her from behind.



“Tar’airah, let’s go, Thea told us to,” Buf’aneah called from the entrance of the larger tent.



Tar’airah turned, but out of the corner of her eye she noticed a short flash of gold pass between the hands of Caranthia and the girl. A small whisper from the brunette, a charming smile and the young amazon was off in the direction of the rest of the women at a fast pace.



“Come on, Tar’” Fa’aithlia came up behind, ”What’s the problem?” Tar’airah turned to look at her friend to answer, but was cut off before able to start.



“She’s probably frightened,” came a sharp voice, “Like the weakling that she is.”



“Back off, Caranthia, we’re all frightened,” Buf’aneah said walking in front of Tar’airah, “Not one among us is at fault for tonight.”



“Yes, well, I have no quarrel with her—for now—as long as she knows this is no excuse,” the brunette replied.



“Excuse?” Fa’aithlia asked.



“Yes, an excuse. This will not make you exempt from the Sacrament,” she said coldly, “you can not take this…mishap…as a chance to escape your duty to your tribe.”



“She wasn’t planning on—“



“I don’t want to hear it. Your sisters have had a hard enough time as it is, and stopping the rituals will not make it any easier for them to return to normal once more. For once,” Caranthia spat at Tar’airah whose eyes were cast down, jaw set in a firm line, “put your tribe before yourself.”



With that the fiery brunette walked past, roughly bumping into the blond.



“Man, if power trips don’t make her more of a bitch, I don’t know what does,” Fa’aithlia said angrily.



“Fa’aith,” Buf’aneah said warningly.



“What? She has no right to attack Tar’airah any time she feels the need to reload on anger.”



“Yes, but we can’t really do anything about it right now can we? Tar,’” Buf’ said turning to her old friend, “if you don’t want to continue tonight’s ritual, we’ll let it slide and Caranthia doesn’t have to know.”



Willow.



“No.”



“What?” This confused Buf’aneah. One moment her friend was scared stiff of hurting a fly, the next she wanted to perform the death rituals?



She needs me.



“Lead me back to the cell,” she breathed, “I will continue the ritual,” she said slowly.



“Okaay,” Buf’aneah sounded out, “if you want to.”



“Tar’ you don’t have to prove anything to Ms. Psycho.”



“I’m not proving anything,” Tar’airah almost shouted.



“Okay, Tar’,” Fa’aithlia said hands in the air, “no need to get upset, we’ll take you back there,” she looked at Buf’aneah who nodded in concerned agreement.



“Then, let’s go,” Tar’airah said marching forward. The two guards had to speed up to follow after the retreating blonde.



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The tree stood ominously. The low grumble had risen to a slow creaking of the old limbs, and as the slight form of a girl approached its roots, the tree seemed to awaken with a new bout of groans.



A click.



Another click, and a flame came up from the two rocks a pair of hands held.



The flame fell to the forest floor, and as soon as it burned a few leaves, small feet stamped it out. A wisp of smoke rose to the air—nothing too noticeable—and the small form ran quickly away, a shimmer of gold clasped in a hand.















tbc........



-elizabeth :spin and so the mystery begins...*cackles because she has noone else to pick besides defenseless kittens*...hope you enjoyed. If not, well, I'll just be sitting in the corner, moping, then.



Last night in sweet slumber I dreamed I did see my own precious jewel sat smiling by me.

And when I awakened I found it not so; my eyes like some fountain with tears overflowed.

thebardgirl
 


Re: Click.

Postby veiled isis moon » Sun Aug 15, 2004 6:44 am

Ohhhhhh, interesting...........who's the firestarter?? I think it might be that young amazon girl because of the shimmery thing.........but then i think you might just be trying to confuse me and it's in fact someone completly different! Suppose i'll just have to wait and see.



Okay, okay...........so your insane not crazy............join the club!



No straddling for now i guess .............but i want some as soon as possioble(story of my life!!)



Oh, i went to Malia in Crete for a week with my mates and i can't believe i'm home. I mean please........where would you rather be, Malia or England??? Exactly!



Great upate.

veiled isis moon
 


Re: Click.

Postby Artemis » Sun Aug 15, 2004 6:53 am

Caranthia's up to something. And she can't stand Tara, so whatever she's up to won't be good... Caranthia might have been looking pleased with herself, but I wouldn't bet much money that Thea was convinced by that little speech she intimidated out of that poor girl, especially if she's heard the original version. So yeah, put me in the camp that blames Caranthia for everything :) The question is, what's Tar' going to do about it? She's got little standing in the tribe, a pair of guards shadowing her every step... but she's got a fiesty redhead, that's a pretty big plus :)

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

Artemis
 


Re: Click.

Postby taramagic » Sun Aug 15, 2004 8:39 am

oh no what is happening now?

your writing is so great! please go on soon!

(sorry for my bad english)

taramagic
 


...

Postby RaVeN » Sun Aug 15, 2004 1:50 pm

great update even if I am a little lost with the fire starter.. and if your mind is twisted sweetie I would hate to hear what mine is... :peace

Edited by: RaVeN at: 8/15/04 12:52 pm
RaVeN
 


Re: ...

Postby Tempest Duer » Sun Aug 15, 2004 1:59 pm

Shiny!



*reads update* Ooh... why do I think that Caranthia put the little girl up to starting fires? I'm very suspicious of her... but maybe that's just because I'm :devilish and you know, so are you.

It's insulting to the whole gender[sic] of rap.



~Eminem

Tempest Duer
 


fire, run!

Postby WTtruelove » Sun Aug 15, 2004 2:56 pm

Ooo, excellent update, that Caranthia is a tart isnt she? i dont understand the fires but im still sticking with my idea thats gonna get Willow out of there, but im probably way off base. im thinking the classic opossom tactic. and then sneak off when no one is watching, but maybe thats justa bit obvious... i dunno.

*hands update back* you can have it, im no good at writing



yay for more soon!

WTtruelove
 


Re: fire, run!

Postby Arron CFF » Sun Aug 15, 2004 4:09 pm

Grrr ok this last update only left questions

Whats wrong with Willow

Who started the fire or was it because of the lightning and what was the girl doing with the fire and the gold splash.

please update soon.

Arron

She walks in beauty, Like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies; And all that's best of dark and bright Meet in her aspect and her eyes. ~ by Byron ~

Arron CFF
 


Re: fire, run!

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Sun Aug 15, 2004 6:08 pm

:bounce

an update! woot! This made my mood go from shitty to very happy! YAYAYYAY! Ok about the posting rule...there was this thing...its a long boring story...im over it! ;)



why does carth...something something....why does she have to be so a biatch to tara? Cripes man!! She needs to lay off...I think willow should kick her ass...cause someone needs to gosh darnit!! stories goin great!! Keep at it!!

:pride

-rose

So I found out some things about you. You're not the girl I thought i knew. I found out I wasnt perfect enough for you. I found out that my love will never be good enough.

Spikeizmine87
 


Re: fire, run!

Postby amazonaa » Sun Aug 15, 2004 7:48 pm

i really hate that Caranthia! She's up to something and I wanna know what it is.:mad





Please?:D :flirt





Great job.





brittney









~Kiss this axe, bitch!---Tara 'Bargaining part 2"~

amazonaa
 


Re: New Fic: Tar'airah

Postby LunaMuses » Sun Aug 15, 2004 10:18 pm

hehehe. 5' on the dot. does that mean we tied?...cause I can always throw on my platforms ;p



I like this update. It was very *throws on a dark cloak*...mysterious. And Faith made me laugh, lol...



You're not late at all! Any update is enough to keep me happy :p you know, you've got me all hooked now, so don't do anything rash like...stop :D

"I was disappointed. I had thought I would have some revelation of specific evil. I wondered if all women did with other women was lie and hug."
The Bell Jar - Sylvia Plath

LunaMuses
 


Re: New Fic: Tar'airah

Postby Disastered » Sun Aug 15, 2004 11:01 pm

I have to jump on the "what the hell is up with Caranthia?" bandwagon. Definately a suspicious character. And I gotta agree with faith (pretend I spelled the amazon version heh), she does seem to like the power trips.

Oh and the fire person. Another intriguing addition. All these new angles, I'm going to end up never leaving the computer waiting for an update.

I'm not so sure I want to meet an amazon despite my thinking they're cute, at least if they're going to treat me like willow. Of course if I get my own Tara as part of the deal i might risk it.

:dance I send tiny dancing dudes in hopes of a quick update



The Master: Some claim that death is our art. I say to them - well, I don't say anything to them because I killed them.

Disastered
 


Re: New Fic: Tar'airah

Postby mollyig » Mon Aug 16, 2004 7:30 am

Caranthia certainly seems to be a skilled manipulator. Typical, though, that Tara the wise would know her true nature. I'm surprised that Thea fell for it though. Maybe she is blind to it because Caranthia is the warrrior she'd prefer Tara to be.


Sheacht mh'anam déag do bhéal, do mhalaí's do ghrua

mollyig
 


Replies....

Postby thebardgirl » Mon Aug 16, 2004 9:34 pm

Hello kittens! Apparently I have this incredible itching to write. It's probably because I watched Dopplegangland and well, now I've got a spankin' new idea for fic--not this story--and as soon as I finish this one, I'll be off starting something new...here's hoping it's what I thought up last night! But on to the story at hand....here are replies, and soon...an update!





veild isis moon-Hmm...the firestarter? I don't know *looks away unknowingly* The young amazon girl, you say? That's a pretty good assumption...the shimmery gold thing = payment to start that fire...the question is, why would a fire be needed to start? Oh! I wanna join! *gets nametag: Elizabeth the insane one* Sorry, no straddling, but how 'bout something close to straddling? Um....I'd rather be in England, but that's only because I live in the U.S. and well...*grumble ihatebush grumble* where would YOU rather be in, England or the U.S.? Exactly!



Artemis-Caranthia's always up to something, I've decided. Even if it's tea, she's still up to tea...and well, that's never of the good. Ha, I like your camp idea. Cause this one time, at band camp (cause I've come quite close to going to one)...hee...feisty redhead? I like that description, in fact, I think I'll make Willow live up to it. *cackles*



taramagic-Please read on, and see! Thankyou, because of your eager reply I decided to post sooner, than usual. And dude, *reads over your post* I see no bad grammer, mispelling or...anything wrong with your english. You lie! :p You said you have bad english...psh...It's pretty fine from what I can tell. :peace



RaVeN-Thankyou, and Oh...you're lost? Hmm...



*grabs gorgeous redhead away from mystified blonde for a second and places her in front of you*



"I will always find you!"



*puts redhead back in front of slightly annoyed blonde once more*



Ah, but your mind is reading that which I have created...which is even worse than what my mind has INSIDE of it--at leas those thoughts can be hidden...but once on paper they can do all sorts of damage. Oh the humanity...





Tempest Duer-You think Caranthia made a girl start a fire? Which girl, the Akhia one or the one you saw Caranthia giving gold to...I mean....wait, she didn't give her gold, she gave her...umm....*whisltes* You're suspision is perfectly okay with me and--hey, wha? I'm evil, you say? Well, then. I'll just have to live UP to that name, won't I? *hands over horrible update* Enjoy....*cackles*



WTtruelove-Tart, eh? True. And not the deliscious kind, either. Ooo opossom, eh? Good plan. That's what I'd do. Course, I don't know that. It's not every day you're attacked by amazons...*shrugs*...Sneaking off is always a good plan...but where would they go from there? *looks at tourist maps* Bermuda. Bermuda looks good. *hands update to you, again* Okay, this time, just read it!





Arron CFF-Erp. Sorry, if you're all questiony. I merely meant to prod your brain to no end...I mean...*smiles nervously* Willow's alright, as far as I can tell. Well, there's two fires, technically...the one that obviously got all the women scared at first (that is, if it really happened) and then there's the second one that oopsydaisy I'm not sure Caranthia wanted anyone else to see...Thanks for reading!



WickedReds-You have got that feeling too? Good, I'm not alone with that. Our girls doing something more, you say? Well, Tempest Duer told me that I was evil, and I figured I had to live up to that name...but I also wanted to satisfy your dancing fruit, there...so well, I guess you'll just have to read to find out what that makes for an update.





Spikeizmine87-Hee. You wooted. That's just fab. See, now you've peeked my curiousity over that long story. But I won't ask any more. Just saying, you know how to get a girl's brain going, "huh??" Yeah...Caranthia has some...issues. Let's see where they get her, though, without throwing Willow into the ring with the deadly amazon. That'd just be bad for Tara and Willow. Then again, Willow might disagree with me....who knows?



amazonaa-You wanna know what that gal is up to? Hmm....well, so do I. You'll find out soon enough. For now, here's an update. Enjoy!



LunaMuses-Well, alas, we did not tie. See, I am actually 5' 1''. `Tis true. But, I swear, that's only if I put socks on...*snicker*...Oooo nice impromptu caping. Faith has a way of making me crap up...so we're going to see a lot more of her. Oh rash? I'd never do anything rash! Well, actually, this one time, I got a rash and that was horrible because I woke up scratching my hand thinking that there was a devilish mosquito out there to get me with the West Nile Virus well into my system and you probably don't care so I'm going to stop. Right now.



Disastered-Erp, first it was a camp with Artemis, now it's a bandwagon! Pretend? Done and done. You're never leaving the computer for fear that I'll update? Hmm....me likes this new power. Me update! (Just to scare you into waiting patiently again.) I have received said tiny dancing dude, and now update with ferocity! Enjoy! And thanks for reading...and like the sig...fun fun fun the master is.



mollyig-Yes, manipulation was used...but, never fear, my dear! Tara and anyone else that isn't brain dead will most likely work to figure out why. Thea...she's an interesting character in that I think she can be blind to her own laws. The poor woman isn't as sharp as she used to be...OOoo that's a good assessment. But, I don't think Thea would even try to compare the two very different warriors to each other. Because we all know Tara most definitely is NOT a Caranthia..Thanks for reading!













Last night in sweet slumber I dreamed I did see my own precious jewel sat smiling by me.

And when I awakened I found it not so; my eyes like some fountain with tears overflowed.

thebardgirl
 


More than four letter words are more fun to say...

Postby thebardgirl » Mon Aug 16, 2004 9:35 pm

Similar disclaimers...same characters....same story...same evil writer *shrugs*....











Chapter 12







Again, the arms of a frantic redhead overlapped the blond.



Willow arms…



“Okay, one time I can understand because, well, hello! you didn’t know that I was all with the bondage and not in the know about certain ritual rules. But twice, twice in the same day you feel the need to test my strength of character under extreme situations. This leaving me thing—I am in no way of the okay with it. If it’s some sort of cosmic joke for you to keep leaving me, even when it seems you’re here for good, then I most certainly believe…”



Tara just stood, staring.



She’s adorable.



“…From now on it should be mandatory for all amazons, no, no, all Terror’s, to let the prisoner know when and where they intend to go. Terrors shouldn’t be allowed to go “la-la-la” around a tribe, neglecting certain terrified redheads. What’s so wrong with saying ‘I’ll be back in a tick, have to go hunt a jaguar’ and then proceeding to stick to said promise? Personally, if I’m to be in the know, I’d like to know, you know if knowing was known and if you had known, or been in the know about my knowing, you know?”



Confusing, but adorable.



“Willow—“



“And the fact that amazons kept running back and forth—one girl, ran past really fast, twice—In both directions! Either she’s the slow one of your tribe that you’ve yet to tell me about, or she’s highly confused about where everyone else was running away to…”



“Willo—“



“And then! Then after you left the rain just seemed to just stop, out of nowhere. I guess I’m not used to tropical weather but it makes me wonder if the sky here is either bipolar or going through a menstrual cycle—“



“WILLOW!”



That got the redhead’s attention. Her curls bounced with the jerk her head gave at the sharp tone of the blonde. The redhead blushed, and the once serious-Tara took on a softer side immediately. Who could resist Willow-blush?



“I got kind of carried away there, didn’t I?”



“There might have been some carrying,” came the smirking reply.



“Well, it was all for a good cause: worry over one amazon’s antics.”



The girl’s face curled into a lopsided smile.



She worries for me.



A comfortable silence enfolded the two, Willow’s arms slowly sunk down to the amazon’s hips, unconsciously. The hug had ended a while ago, but the redhead seemed to have forgotten hugging etiquette—for the moment, anyway—after the hug ends, generally the hugger steps away from the huggee. But Tara hadn’t said anything to pull the hands off, either. Willow soon realized, slightly disappointed, it was because a troubled look was forming on the blonde’s face. Her brow knitted together in slight discomfort at whatever thoughts that were crossing her mind.



“Tara?”



When the blonde didn’t respond immediately, the redhead decided to ask further, “Did something…did something happen at the big amazony powwow? A-are you okay?”



The knitted brow soon changed into a frown.



Tara’s not happy. If Tara’s not happy, the world is just wrong. Must make world right. Make. World. Right.



“I-is there anything I can do? Did I say something wrong? Well, of course I did, I say so much in one go, sometimes that everything from really good to really bad comes out, and I don’t mean to say them when I say them—“



A pair of fingers, softly found their way up to Willow’s babbling mouth, and instantaneously stopped it from causing further damage.



“No, I was just thinking. The ‘powwow’ was…interesting. I-I-I…” Tara stopped for a moment, wondering if she could say the words. No matter how much she disliked Caranthia, it was hard to imagine she would betray her tribe—in any way. The questioning look from Willow, though, pulled the words out, “I think one of my sisters is hiding something from the tribe. Something big.”



“Like apocalyptic-storm big?”



“Yea,” Tara sighed.



“Well, what was the decision of the head honcho?”



“Thea,” Tara supplied easily, “said not to worry, as of this particular woman’s judgment call. Apparently she went and ‘checked things out’ for us all.”



“Check things out? You can check out a storm?” Willow asked confused.



“No, no, there was a girl, a witness to the accident at the Trees.”



“There was an accident?”



“Yea, apparently what got everyone so scared was that this girl, Akhia, saw the sky-light…”



“Also known as lightning,” Willow supplied.



“The lightning,” Tara smiled, “had hit the largest tree—burned it.”



“And that’s never a good sign for you ladies, I’m guessing?”



“Well, they are our protection. Supposedly, they were meant to keep these storms, floods, and men away from us.”



“Ah, storms, floods and men: nature’s three largest catastrophes,” Willow giggled.



“Well,” Tara said giggling, “before my time, they were,” Tara said, her face turning serious again.



“I don’t understand this…hatred for men,” Willow said simply, “While a lot of women are still fighting for the vote, the boundaries, they are a lot less restricting—much more of a freer world than it used to be. I guarantee, within this next century, things are going to change—majorly.”



“Oh, and how would you know?”



“I charted it out.”



“What?”



“I charted our progression out. All the way back to 1848 at the Seneca Falls Convention,” Willow said proudly. “It was part of my history thesis at Oxford. The professor got angry with me for writing about it, but I did it anyway. And I got an ‘A’!”



“Um…” Tara didn’t know half of the words that Willow had just said, but she figured Willow bouncing on her heels, smiling, could only mean good, so she replied uncertainly, “yay?”



“Big yay.”



“Well, the male-fear,” Tara said slowly, “it…it comes from Thea’s experience as a child. Way before any of the younger generation had been born. She was hurt…badly,” Tara swallowed, “by her father,” Tara noted Willow’s face scrunch up in sadness, “This was in the earlier half of the last century, when the world was not as populated, or overrun with explorers…in the days when women were more of a prize rather than a person. B-but they could hide…effectively, in the jungle’s depths.”



“There were more?” Willow said horrified.



“Hundreds…” Tara whispered. “I-I-I do not know why, why the locals treated their women so poorly, I-I only know that I was brought here with my mother…” Tara hesitated at this. Willow calmed her, though, just with her presence. Her breathing, in and out, in and out, softly and slowly calmed her, “…She died shortly after my seventh birthday, I was t-told by an illness, but I s-saw for myself, a s-s-shadowed f-f-figure…”



“Oh, Tara,” Willow slowly, ever so slowly, reached her hand up to the newborn tears coming out of the amazon’s eyes. Crying in front of the redhead was no longer an embarrassment. Willow had the ability to make anything she had to say perfectly fine—normal.



The redhead leaned in, and let her forehead rest on the blonde’s. Silent tears rolled down her face, as she allowed her hands to rest on the blonde’s shoulders. She could not explain her forwardness, how every time she was near the blonde she managed to do the impossible each time—so openly be affectionate with her. But it didn’t matter. Tara was in pain, and no matter the cause of her feelings for the girl, Willow wanted to heal that pain. Whatever it took, she wanted to heal it.



Tara sniffed, and her blue eyes slowly looked down at Willow’s face—right next to hers. She barely heard the whispers of the redhead: a continuous mantra of ‘it’s okay, it’s okay.’ She only saw her lips moving in sync with the words’ sounds. Rosy lips, and cheeks, forming comfort—for her.



For me.



Willow didn’t notice the sudden stare that was fixated on her, in fact, her eyes were closed attempting to push the image of an in-pain-Tara out. Tara just stood, her left hand rising of it’s own account.



I think I love her.



The hand slowly cupped the redhead’s cheek, lifted her eyes open, to stare at the blonde’s face. Willow looked questioningly at the now tearless eye, and immediately was fixated—drowned—by the deep blue. She was lost. And found by Tara…only Tara.



I think I love her.



Ever so slowly, Tara tilted the girl’s mouth up to hers—mere millimeters between them. Her breathing hitched as she felt Willow’s breath on hers.



“Tar’airah, hey, before you start the ritual, Buf’aneah and I were wondering—HOLY AKAMELIA BALKEISHIA!” came a surprised yelp.















tbc......





-elizabeth :devil *is evil...totally, utterly evil...could it be the oreos?* :spin





Last night in sweet slumber I dreamed I did see my own precious jewel sat smiling by me.

And when I awakened I found it not so; my eyes like some fountain with tears overflowed.

thebardgirl
 


Re: More than four letter words are more fun to say...

Postby tarawhipped » Mon Aug 16, 2004 9:49 pm

Quote:
HOLY AKAMELIA BALKEISHIA!


I'm not sure what it means, but I'm pretty sure I second that! This was wonderful. The trust they have in each other and their feelings despite being from mutually unintelligible worlds is really touching.

Quote:
Confusing, but adorable


That pretty much sums it up. And the less confusing it gets, the more adorable.:bow

Keep it up (and I can't wait to see what you've got in mind for your next story).

-Cameron



edited because I shouldn't try to spell at night



What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

Edited by: tarawhipped at: 8/17/04 8:00 pm
tarawhipped
 


Re: More than four letter words are more fun to say...

Postby WickedReds » Mon Aug 16, 2004 10:28 pm

Quote:
HOLY AKAMELIA BALKEISHIA!


i third that.. yeah.. i'm guessing it means holy shit or something along thoughs lines... Ummm... Ooo an almost smoochie... damn interruptions... anyway i'll agree with Tempest Duer u r evil.. but i like it.. yeah my banana wants some satisfaction... nice up date..



-reds:willow



my banana dances for smut :banana

Tara in a wet shirt, Tara in a wet shirt. Tara in. A. Wet. Shirt. “Of course.”-Willow From Remember to Breath By Yellow Crayon



Now that just sucks- me

Edited by: WickedReds at: 8/16/04 9:36 pm
WickedReds
 


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Postby RaVeN » Mon Aug 16, 2004 10:44 pm

Quote:
Ah, but your mind is reading that which I have created...which is even worse than what my mind has INSIDE of it--at leas those thoughts can be hidden...but once on paper they can do all sorts of damage. Oh the humanity...




umm uhh you can invade my mind anytime but I can't promise you what you'll find.. great as ever..



kicks ground.. great.. and umm thanks for making me blush...:flower



------------------

To see her was to love her, and love no one but her.. and to love forever...

RaVeN
 


Re: ...

Postby Arron CFF » Mon Aug 16, 2004 11:04 pm

Nice update

I still think you are evil. Heh Buffy saw them almost kiss and freaked huh too funny. I still don't like Cordy though. She is up to something and needs to be hurt cause well she is mean to Tara and thats a no no.

Great update Hope to read more soon.

Arron

She walks in beauty, Like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies; And all that's best of dark and bright;Meet in her aspect,and her eyes. ~ by Byron~

Arron CFF
 


Re: New Fic: Tar'airah

Postby Sheba » Tue Aug 17, 2004 12:20 am

This is a brilliant fic woman! And yes, you're pure, undiluted evil...but hey, you know we love ya anyway! Great job! Cheers! :sheep

Sheba
 


Re: New Fic: Tar'airah

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Tue Aug 17, 2004 1:35 am

:gnome

"runs around in a panic" holy taraness CRAP! arrrrgh! they were soooo close!! They were THISCLOSE!! BAd faith! Bad I say!!!!! BAd cliffhanger baad! I thought we talked about this? I thought we agreed that they were bad??!! See now I wanna know what faith is gonna do...is she gonna clip out and tell the head honcho or is she gonna be cool about it? I think shes gonna be a lil freaked...then ok with it, am i right? Man i hope im right! Ok so it WAS lighening! good good....ok great update of course, as you can probably tell! haha sorry...ok more more more!

:pride

-rose

So I found out some things about you. You're not the girl I thought i knew. I found out I wasnt perfect enough for you. I found out that my love will never be good enough.

Spikeizmine87
 


Re: New Fic: Tar'airah

Postby taramagic » Tue Aug 17, 2004 3:14 am

what a great update! i enjoyed it so much!!

the both are so cute together!



and thanks, well i think my english is bad..german is much better..but thanks!! :kiss1

taramagic
 


Re: New Fic: Tar'airah

Postby visual fallacy » Tue Aug 17, 2004 5:02 am

Aww that was wicked!! Boss floating around too much recently so was dead pleased to see two updates waiting for me (yes just for me!)!!



I will have to admit I'm getting a bit scared! I dont like it! Well I like the fic that is, I just dont like the being scared bit!



That caranthia chick needs to be shot through the head (was that uncalled for?) actually that may be a bit too quick and easy! And Faith...oh, sorry, Fa'aith will be a good girl for once! Well they were willing to kill Willow and say Tara had done it, lies, so you know, this will be fine (convincing myself!)



Think my addiction is getting carried away... I'd check myself into a clinic to get it sorted...but hey, I dont want to!!

visual fallacy
 


Re: New Fic: Tar'airah

Postby LunaMuses » Tue Aug 17, 2004 7:41 am

lmao, you five-foot-one-with-socks tease! hehe. of course we'd have to see alot more of Faith *with bad timing* :p



aside from the sudden lack of kissage, I forsee the revealing of Willow as a....*gasp* woman! to Buffy and Faith. Hopefully they can help in The Great Escape plan :D



and watch out for those mosquitos. frustrating little boogers ;D ...unless they gave you the itch to write...hm....

"I was disappointed. I had thought I would have some revelation of specific evil. I wondered if all women did with other women was lie and hug."
The Bell Jar - Sylvia Plath

LunaMuses
 


Re: New Fic: Tar'airah

Postby Artemis » Tue Aug 17, 2004 9:13 am

Eep! Now, how will Faith react? She could get all huffy about Tar' smooching with the supposed-to-be-condemned prisoner... then again, once she gets a good look at Willow, I can see her grinning and thinking "Go Tara go!"

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

Artemis
 


Re: New Fic: Tar'airah

Postby Arwen276 » Tue Aug 17, 2004 3:25 pm



okay, one line had me sprawled on the floor for laughing so hard:



Quote:
guess I’m not used to tropical weather but it makes me wonder if the sky here is either bipolar or going through a menstrual cycle—




menstrual cycle?? :laugh :rofl



you're just GREAT!



umm now what about this whole conspiracy against me huh?? and WHY am I so DUMB trusting ppl like Calanthia?!



AND WHY DID YOU HAVE TO BREAK THE KISS AND END IT WITH TRAUMA? WHY???? (there should be an emoticon about a smiley pounding its fists on the floor in despair... wait maybe there is! :smash _close enough_ )



Anyway,



MORE! and that's an order! :p



~Arwen or the queen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


Re: New Fic: Tar'airah

Postby amazonaa » Tue Aug 17, 2004 5:30 pm

I am so sick of the interuptions, DAMNIT!!:mad :rage





But your writing is great and I still love this story.:D So more, more, more!:bounce :bounce :bounce





Great job.





brittney







~Kiss this axe, bitch!---Tara "Bargaining part 2"~

amazonaa
 


Re: New Fic: Tar'airah

Postby Tempest Duer » Tue Aug 17, 2004 8:50 pm

Yah, you're evil. :wink But I love you anyway.

It's insulting to the whole gender[sic] of rap.



~Eminem

Tempest Duer
 


Re: New Fic: Tar'airah

Postby Kajun » Tue Aug 17, 2004 10:42 pm

Hey, sorry to be so very late with the feedback. I started to post earlier but discovered new updates so naturally I had to go back and read Chapter 10 again before reading number 11 and 12, which certainly wasn’t a hardship by any stretch of the imagination. I mean.. pudding, stripping and a bit O touchy-feely? Not a problem to read that. Not a problem at all. Hee. Anyhoo.. Chapters 10 and 11 are really intense. What the heck is up with this Caranthia chick? Why can’t Thea sense that Caranthia is up to badness? When will Tar’ kiss the safari-traveler? Who are you? This fic is making me very Restless. I need answers! And more rituals! Huh.. I’m on chapter 12 now. Hmm.. that is some really good Willow babble, ya know? So this fic is not only fun but educational too. But then.. with the sadness.. and the pain.. I don’t do angst well. Please get rid of Fa’ and get back to the thinking and the sharing of breath and getting found... erm.. get with the kissing already. Please.. pretty please.. Thanks!

Kajun
 


...

Postby Tibbs » Wed Aug 18, 2004 1:07 am

So, I've sat here trying to think of just the right way to praise this great fic, but I can't...



My mind just keeps floating back to Amazon Tara. :drool



For that alone, I thank you.





Tibbs

:pride

Tibbs
 

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