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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17

Postby hondos » Mon Jan 07, 2008 10:47 pm

HI Guys,
Part two of this update should be up in about 1 hour. Sorry about that.
I just wanted to mess with you a little. :smash
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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17

Postby MsKittyB » Mon Jan 07, 2008 10:59 pm

:wave Rosemary
:shock Cliffhanger!!! Dibs.
Oh crap! Dammit Buffy. Couldnt hold it for 3 minutes! Willow! Hurry up and press ignore lol!
What do you have against Donny's brains hum?

lol well thats a easy question. I want them to be blown out the back of his skull.
thought you would be happy to see the end. Don't you want to know how it all turns out? Don't you want many many Willow and Tara and other stuff? Not to mention in order to rid Donny of his brains the story has to end. No more villian, no more mystery.

:aww All answers to questions true, but there will be a sequel though right? :aww
Part two of this update should be up in about 1 hour. Sorry about that. I just wanted to mess with you a little

:party Yea!! Okay im waiting for the next update. I dont care how long it takes lol :read
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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17

Postby nothingtosay » Tue Jan 08, 2008 12:08 am

wow you were serious about updating regularly.

all the time i was sayIng to myself she better have her phone on vibrate or off.

oh my wonder what happens next,looking forward to it.=D
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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17

Postby hondos » Tue Jan 08, 2008 12:33 am

"Donny came back inside and closed the door . He took his time going into the kitchen and Willow stood not moving , afraid to breath. The phone rang again and then she heard , "Hello".
"Yeah , What the hell do you want Spike?"
"Right now?"
"Aright, I be down."
Willow once again heard footsteps as they headed out the door.

She heard the car pull out of the drive way and made her way back to the livingroom.

She turned to pickup her picture and she notice that it had been moved from where she had left it and it now sat on the coffee table with the TV remote on top of it.

She thought for a minute and decided that is was far to risky now. He had actually picked up the picture and moved it so he must have looked at it.

Even Donny couldn't be that ignorant to not have noticed it now.She wondered if he had noticed that it had moved from the other table and was placed upside down.

She figured if he had thought something was wrong at that point, he wouldn't have sat down and casually drank beer and watched trashy TV. It was still too risky.

She would need to leave the picture behind. She turned around and headed out the door completely disillusioned. She had just almost gotten herself, Tara and Abby killed.All for nothing.




Donny arrived back home about six hours later. They had there meeting and the meeting ended with Donny being taught "Good Judgment". He limped back into the house, and practical fell through the door. He knew that he had at least two broken fingers and possibly broken ribs.He sat down on his couch and thought about what had just taken place. He would kill them sons of bitches when he had the chance. No doubt about, he would kill them for sure.



Willow picked up her phone and saw that Buffy had called. She picked up the phone and dialed her back.

"Hey Buffy what's up?"

"Not much.Did you find anything?"

"No.I did manage almost to get myself , Tara and Abby killed by being caught by her brother though. I had a picture of Abby but It was to dangerous to take it.I thought about taking another one and desired that would be just as risky.So I didn't get what I went in for."

"Well can't you use a still of of one of the video feeds?"

:No , there not clear enough."

"Hey B. Tara has a picture of her daughter up in her cell.She just got it this afternoon.Why don't we make a duplicate of it and let Willow have it?"Faith said in the background.

"That's a good idea Hey Willow , Meet me up at the coffee shack off of
290 will ya.I got a picture of Abby for you."

"Okay sure, what time?"

"Give me a hour I see ya there."




Buffy pulled into the lot at the coffee house and walked inside.
She saw Willow sitting at the table in the back and went and sat down.
"Hey how ya doing?"

"Not to good . I don't have a thing to go on. Everything I've tried is coming up a bust. Im exhausted ,but I can't sleep. I keep waking up thinking that Im not going to be able to do this."Willow said as she stared at her hands that were folded on the table.

"This probably isn't a good time to tell you this, but you have to know.After you died, the DA put a court appointed on Tara's deal.They rejected it based on no knew evidence. There wont be a stay."
Willow sat,frozen.She wasn't surprised , but she knew it would sting to here it.

"Um I knew that was coming."she answered trying not to fall apart.She had work to do.She needed to get with the PI and see about how they would go about looking for Abby.

"Did you bring the picture?"she asked voice cracking from exaction.
"Yea, here',She's beautiful isn't she?"she said as she handed Willow the picture.

Willow picked up the picture and studied the little girls face.She was indeed beautiful just like her mama.She placed the picture on the table and continued to stare at it.And then she saw it.

"Is that. ? that's...no .It cant be .....Buffy, Buffy,BUFFY ."Willow was now yelling. She stood up banging her knees on the table top in the process but not feeling it.

She pushed Buffy over and off the booth and then grabbed her and pulled her into a hug.

"Willow what, what is it."

I know where she is ,Buffy, I know where she is.OH MY GOD .I KNOW WHERE SHE IS"

She then began to cry .Not from sadness but from glee.;

"If this is what I think it is, I know where to find her"
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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17

Postby MsKittyB » Tue Jan 08, 2008 12:49 am

:shock DIBS! :wave Rosemary Haha Donny got his ass kicked!! :party He deserves a hellava lot worse but a ass whoopin is just as good. Go Spike and that other guy lol! Does Donny have a trick under him sleeve?
Wow I really though Buffy had called Willow while Donnie was there. *signs* Horray! It wasn't. I was actually a little scared for 45 minutes hehe. :banana GO WILLOW!! SAVE ABBY & TARA! YEA!!
:aww Okay, okay i know all good things must come to an end. But, you know it doesnt have to be the end, end you know. There can be another end to this end in a sequel. :-| Okay I have just confused myself lol. Basically still asking will there be a sequel? I just cant get enouth of this story :cry lol
Cant wait for the next update!! :read
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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17

Postby hondos » Tue Jan 08, 2008 1:24 am

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Haha Donny got his ass kicked!!

And that is just the begining.He has a lot worse coming his way.It should be fun!!!

Wow I really though Buffy had called Willow while Donnie was there
That was kind of mean wasen't it.


There can be another end to this end in a sequel. Okay I have just confused myself lol. Basically still asking will there be a sequel? I just cant get enouth of this story lol


LOL!! I got it. It made sence.I think.Sequel? Sequel?I I dont know about that there. I think Im retiring from writing. This was just a one time thing.
I did it on a dare.It was fun , but I think I'll leave the writing to the writers.LOL now I confussed myself.Thanks thou .Thats really nice of you to say. Im really glad you enjoyed it.



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wow you were serious about updating regularly.


Yes.I said I would update at least one time a day even if it was a small one.So far so good. We have I think three more updates to go here.

Sorry about the phone. That was mean I know. Hehehe

I hope you enjoy the rest of this one.
Thanks again for the feedback.
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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17

Postby hondos » Tue Jan 08, 2008 3:48 am

"Wait , Willow slow down .What do you mean you know where she is?"
"Look, right here.Do you see that."
"Umm yeah its a trash can."
"No its not a trash can.That Buffy, is the most beautiful thing in the face of this earth,well next to Tara and Abby of course."
"I still don't get it.Why is this good."
"Do you see this number right here."Willow pointed to the picture just below Abby's feet.
"Oh, yeah I see it, but I'm still not with you."
"There's a lot of planed communities around here as you well know.Some of them have private services like there own utility companies, ambulance services things like that.There called mud districts.Anywaythis trash can here is issued by a private company.They charge you by how many times your trash is picked up monthly.Say for instance you only set you're cans out twice a month rather then four times,you only pay half as much.They way they keep track of you're collections is by way of the barcode that is one the side of you're can. There's a code reader on the side of the truck so when you can is emptied it scans it and sends to the main office where they processes the billing.Well you see those numbers right there above the bar code? That's the ID number for these cans. Now look right there.Do you see it? "
Yes .It says Woodlands waste something or other.I can't make out the rest."
"It doesn't matter Buffy, That's all we need."Willow was then overcome with emotion and had to sit down.
"Buffy laughed and said,"Willow , get you're ass up. Were going to the Woodlands".




They pulled into the constables office in The Woodlands common and exited their vehicle.Willow knocked on the door and an elderly officer answered the door.
"Can I help you?"he asked.
"Yes, were going to need some police backup."





They pulled up to the address that was given to them by the waste company. Willow was the first to exit the car as stopped.
"Willow, slow down there.We can't just go running in there.If they here us were dead and so is Abby.Now sit till we figure this out."
Buffy turned around and saw the two officers looking at her with just the slightest of smiles.
"Oh , sorry .That was you're job ,to say that I mean Right?"
"That's alright I don't mind."






Spike sat up when he heard the sound of footsteps walking slowly over head.He jumped up looked through the spy eye in the door and saw the two local cops slowly walking around the livingroom area of the house upstairs.
"That was quick."He said to himself.
He then walked over to the sleeping little girl bent down , kissed her on the forehead and said,"Merry Christmas Lil'Ab."
He then walked down the steps, out through the backdoor and jumped the wall.





The two officers walked slowly down the steps to the basement with their guns drawn.
One officer walked toward the bathroom door and slowly opened it.It was clear and he signaled to the other officer .
"Were clear down here."the first officer shouted upstairs.
"Well would ya look at that."He said.
"I got conformation on this here sir.There's a little girl down here in a sleeping bag."The officer radioed up.
"Roger that sir thank you".
"This is Deputy Jeff Mullins , we need to go ahead and issue that arrest warrant for one Donald Maclay.There two units standing by at four hundred yards from the main house."
"Copy that 187.Were approaching the main residence."
The officer knocked on the door and waited.When they didn't get a response they counted three and kicked the door in.
"Freeze,Put you're hands in the air and don't move.Youre under arrest."
"What the hell you doing in here.Under arrest for what?"Donny said.
"We don't have enough time to even begin to tell you what you're under arrest for, but I will give you the one I like the most.Felony kidnapping. Now move you're ass ".



Willow walked slowly down the basement steps and looked down at the little girl that was sleeping on the floor on the sleeping bag.
"Oh my God, "she said as she put her hand over her mouth.She slowly walked down the steps and over to Abby.She gently placed a hand on her back and shook her.The little girl stirred a little and then looked up."Abby,"Willow said her voice shaking."How would you like to go and see you're mama?"she was crying now.As where the two officers and Buffy.
"My mama, you know my mama?"the little girl looked into Willows face and started to cry.
"Yes Abby I know you're mama."as they bothsat there crying.Then the little girl jumped up and threw her arms around Willows neck and said"Are you Santa Claus?"
"No, baby,Im not Santa Claus,but he did send me here."Willow said.
"You ready to go?"Willow asked.
The little girl shook her head.
Willow picked her up and started to carry her away and Abby said"Wait."
"What is it Abby?"Willow asked
"I need to get Spooky"Abby said pointing to the cage that was hanging from the ceiling.
"Okay sweet.Well get Spooky for you.
"Would you mind getting that bird cage down for me?"Willow asked
"Yes, ma'am"
The officer then grabbed a chair and began to unscrew the bird cage from the ceiling.
"Hey , Alan?'He said to the other officer."You better come see this."
"What the hell?".Allan said.
Is that what I think it is?"
"Damn sure is.Its a camera.Its mounted right here on the bottom of this cage.See,someone drilled a hole right there."
"Well that is the smallest camera Ive ever seen."
"Well you know what they say.Size don't matter."






Faith walked down the hall and went over to Tara's cell. "Hey Tara ,come on."
Tara got up and walked over to Faith , put her hands behind her back and turned around.
"No need for that. "Faith said as she held the cell door open for Tara.
"What , I don't understand?"Tara said.
Faith looked up at her and said."You're a free woman'.
"You mean, are you saying?"Tara was shaking as she looked at Faith almost as though she was afraid that the answer was not what she wanted to hear.
"Willow found you're daughter. They're on the way over right now."


TBC
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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17

Postby JujuDeRoussie » Tue Jan 08, 2008 4:09 am

Hello :)

Eeeek you're fast! lol
Which is good for us, but not for feedbacking when you're a lazy lady like me. lol

That is great! You got me with the phone thing.
Did I tell you I loved Spike? lol I htink so, well I love him more and more! And Faith too.

Mmmm Couldn't they for Donny to admit his crimes on a video tape and then let him be dead in a street? :-D No? ok ^^

Now they need to hurry. Really really fast. To find Abby, and stop this deadly clock.

That is great :)

Thanks,

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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17

Postby Zampsa1975 » Tue Jan 08, 2008 5:02 am

Great few update-y goodnesses... I'm glad that Willow got out of the Donny's house without getting hurt... Was it Spike who engineered the photo to show the garbage can and their location? I hope that Donny is put in a nice cell where he would get everything he deserves... up his ass...
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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17

Postby JujuDeRoussie » Tue Jan 08, 2008 7:48 am

See what I meant by "you're fast"? I didn't check for my message once I clicked on the "submit" button, I see now that I should have 'cause you did find Abby! And freed Tara! Thank you thank you thank you!

:-D

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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17

Postby jay/wt4evr » Tue Jan 08, 2008 12:42 pm

oh god I missed an update
but now I'm there to tell you :pinky and woo-hoo and yippeeeee!!!!!!!!!! they found her!!!!!!!!! and I so love Spike right now!!! unless it was him to put the camera...uhm?
update soon?
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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17

Postby nothingtosay » Tue Jan 08, 2008 9:08 pm

waaaay fast updates

Well that is the smallest camera Ive ever seen.

spy cam?

woohoo!! were done with the a-hole, now to get some more loving from our fave couple! :pray :pray :pray
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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17

Postby hondos » Wed Jan 09, 2008 12:47 am

JujuDeRoussie

Couldn't they for Donny to admit his crimes on a video tape


Funny you should mention that. ;-)
Thank you thank you thank you!

Youre very welcome.I hope you like this update .It a little bit spicy but a whole lot of fun.Thank you for you're feedback.Its nice to get feed back.

Zampsa1975Donny is put in a nice cell where he would get
everything he deserves... up his ass...



:rofl :rofl
Well that's funny.

Spike who engineered the photo to show the garbage can and their location
"

The answer is in this update.I really hope you like this update.This is the next to last update.Thank you for reading and the feedback.
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Spike right now!!! unless it was him to put the camera...uhm?
update soon?



The answer to that is in this update.I hope you like.Its a touch smutty but you know fun

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were done with the a-hole, now to get some more loving from our fave couple

Here ya go. Lots of loving here.I hope you like it.
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Saving Us Both

Raiting NC -17

Author Rosemary

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This is my first story ever.I would be happy to get any tips or let me know how I can improve or just say Stop writing .Theres no hope for you.


Disclaimer:Not mine They're Joss Whedons

WARNING THIS IS A VERY NAUGHTY UPDATE NC17




"and he was really nice.All the other ones were yuckee. He gived me Spooky and told me he would find Santa and that Santa would bringed ,oh sorry, I mean bring, Mr. Bill told me that was the wrong word , back to you.So anyway he let me keep him and now he's up to J .He has treats but if we run out we can get more right? Is my room still the same?.Oh , and I don't want to talk to Uncle Donny anymore cause he is yukee.Big big time yuckiee. Mr.Bill lives in England . I can show you where that is on the globe if you want. Oh and if you don't know what a globe is I can tell you. .It's a ball but you can't bounce it cause it breaks. Anyway after I learned that Mr. Bill got me a new globe and a globe is a ball that has pictures of places on it.I can show you where we live and where Mr. Bill lived and that's called Geograly or something like that but I'm really smart to know any of that cause you learn that stuff in like the third grade.Do you gonna live with us Willow or just come visit?. Either way is good but I think you should live with us. Oh mama can we order a Pizza?I want pizza . I haven't had Pizza for a lot, lot, lot of days. Its my favorite Willow. Do you like Pizza Willow ?. Mama likes pizza but I don't know if Spooky does. Oh , Oh I know what else can I watch Little Mermaid when we get to home? Are we almost home yet cause I gotta go potty.
When she finally stopped Tara and Willow looked at each other and began to laugh.

"What?"Abby asked from the back seat.



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Donny sat across the table from the detective who was interrogating him. He had yet to say a word to the officer and had no intention of doing so.
"Okay , so you're going to make this difficult I see.Look , Donny , you're in a lot of trouble here. Do you know how much?"
"I aint worried about it. I got my lawyer on the way."
"Fair enough , but I think you might want to look in that phone book there and see if you can't find a couple more numbers."
"And why is that? I already gave you the number for my lawyer , and I want to talk to him.No one else , just him."
"Well you see Donny, there's a small problem with that. At this very minute he's on route here , but it's not to see you.He's been placed under arrest with about , oh I don't know,Libby ,what's that warrant count up to now?"he asked the young woman who was busily typing away on her keyboard.
"Seventeen"she answered, "And that's only from the first hour of video."
Donny looked up ,his smirk slowly disappearing."What video?"he asked.
"That , Mr.. Maclay, would be the video we recovered from the house where you had stashed you four year old niece"he answered unable to keep the disgust from his voice.
The detective then hit the call button on his desk and asked the person on the other end to bring the cage in."Does this look familiar to you Mr... Maclay?"
Donny looked at the cage , not a hint of his smirk remained and didn't say a word.
"Well, does it?"the officer repeated.
"No , I don't know nothin about that. I aint never seen it before."
He was squirming around in his chair a bit now as he was beginning to realize how deep in this he was.
"Well that's funny? You see, there's something here I would like you to see."the officer then got up ,went over to the TV across the room.He pointed a remote and a video began to play on the screen.


"Donny, we have somethings we want to talk to you about. But keep it quite,we don't want to wake up the kid."Leo said.
"Alright then what ?"Donny asked.
"Well we were just sitting here thinking about how reckless you've been."Leo answered.
"What do you mean reckless?" he asked.
"You're taking unnecessary risks Donny."
"Like what?"
"Well for one, when you and you're boys did the hit on that lawyer Jenkins , you used the police data base run the tags.You and I both know how dangerous that was."
"Well it didn't make no difference did it ?Ain't nobody found out about it did they? Garrison and Rogers used the suicide cover up deal.Aint nobody questioning it ?"
"Not the point Donny. Like Spike pointed out here, every problem we have is because of you.This whole mess started when you killed that cop on that drug bust.If you hadn't done that you're old man would never have started snooping around now would he?"
"Well ya I see you're point there but it didn't hurt us none. I handled that there.Thats goinna be solved here in about twenty two days right?"
"Yeah , you lucked out pretty good there. If you're sister hadn't have showed up when she did , we would have never been able to cover you're ass on that.You shot him with you're own bloody service weapon.You should have let the people who where supposed to kill you're father take care of that.Hell, Were lucky we got the judge and lawyer we got on you're sisters case."Spike added.
"Lucky my ass. We got half the third district Judicial in our back pocket and you know it."
"What do you mean half.As I see it we got four."Spike said counting down on his fingers as he went thru the list mentally."Harris , Kline , Orteze and Kittridge."
"No, see you forgot LaVeete, and Stasion.That's six outta ten.Thats better then half."Donny answered.
"Say that's true ,well take you're word, why on Gods green earth would you have Walker and Taams beat you're sister nearly to death only one day after you called the hit on the lawyer?This is what were talking about here.Reckless."Leo said.
"Not just that", Spike added, "Harling is thinking about cutting it off with us.Finding a new lot.If he does that were all up a creek.You know how he handles loose ends."
"Awe bullshit. He aint gonna pull out a nothing.Were the best thing he's got goin' here.I've gotten him re-elected twice already.That districts as sure as his if he keeps us on.""
"Well Donny, I think you need a lesson in good judgment. You're one lucky man I will tell you. If it weren't for us needing this thing to stay low, we would just as soon kill you where you stand."Leo said.
"Guys take Donny here up top and teach him some good judgment ."Leo said.
"Hey now wait a minute here. Look I'm sorry, .I made some mistakes.sure, but hell I done good work for you're people too."
"Boys get this chicken shit punk ass up top and teach him some good manner now."Leo said.
The two members took Donny one on either arm and began to escort him up the steps..
"Hey, hey come on now, Spike help me out here huh?"
"No, sorry mate..But I do want to watch."




The detective then hit the stop button."How about now? Is it coming back to you? Come on now Donny according to the time stamp here this just happened twelve or so hours ago. And judging by the looks of you , I think you would probably remember"the detective said referring to Donny beaten appearance.
"Well there is one other thing I'm curious about. Now we know you gave that picture to you're sister.We got it on the prison video tape , along with you paying off three of the guards, who , by the way ,are also being arrested right about now.Why did you take that picture outside when , from what we can tell the rest of them were taken on the inside? Not that I'm complaining, we never would have found her if you hadn't have done so, and why would you take it right in front of something that would give away her location?"
Donny's mind began to replay the steps that led to this .




hammer in the hook to mount Spooky's cage on.
his hammer missed its mark smashing into the light fixture overhead throwing the room into almost complete darkness.
Alright , why don't you just get your bloody picture and get the hell out."Spike said.
"Can't get a picture in the dark now can I."
"Then bloody well go up top and take one out by the dust bins.
If I were you , I would seriously think about lettin' her hang on to that picture instead of showing it to her.


Spike you son of a bitch.You set it all up.The camera, the picture , the meetingDonny thought to himself.

"The other thing is this. Of all the footage here we haven't got not a frame of the English fella.Do you have a name on this guy?"
Donny sat and thought.No.He had never heard Spike call himself anything but Spike.Donny shook his head and said to himself,"He got us all.And they'll never find him."

Spike stood at the Virgin Airlines ticket counter at George H.Bush airport in Houston.
"Okay then , that's one way to London Heath Row, first class and you'll be paying cash. Is that write Mr... Marsters? "she asked.
"Yes that right."
She collected his ticket and went to board the Airbus320 .
He got to his seat , sat down and ordered a beer.
He sat for a minute thinking about all that had happened in the last couple of weeks. He would miss his Spooky, but more than that he would miss his "Lil Ab"He reached into his pocket and took out the picture of the little girl with the parrot on her shoulder, and a smile broke across his face.He put the picture away and then thought about what would happen to Donny once he got to prison.Donny was
1) a cop
2) a cop killer
3) would have been willing to kill a child.
There was not a group of people in that place that wouldn't want to make him pay.From the guards to the inmates, he would be in for a world of hurt on a daily basis until the State ends his miserable life.. His smile grew wider and he tilted his head back and laughed harder then he had ever laughter in his life.



Faith and Buffy stood in the hall as they watched the HPD lead the four crooked guards that were on duty to the station for booking.As they saw them walking by, Faith made special note of when Sherry passed. She turned to Buffy and gave her a long slow kiss on the lips.She broke the kiss and they both stared at Sherry. Faith lifted her hand into her uniform pocket , took out her note pad , turned to Buffy and said "See I told you Tara's lines would come in handy some day."Then Faith repeated them to Sherry and the rest as they left the prison.

ONE MONTH LATER

"So she's finally asleep ?"Willow asked as Tara came down the stairs.
"Yeep."

"So what did the doctor say today?"Wilow asked.

He said that everything looked great and has seemed to have healed up just fine."

"Well that's good news then isn't it?"

"So you ready for bed Tara?"Willow asked.

"Well you could say that."

Willow looked at Tara a bit confused 'What do you mean?"

Tara stood up walked over to Willow put her hand out for Willow to take it and helped her to her feet.

"I mean everything is healed."she said as she pulled Willow to her.She leaned forward and placed a gentle kiss on Willows lips.

"OH", Willow said her eyes widening..They had yet to makelove because of Tara's injuries.They had kissed and and touched a little but not what they really wanted to do.

"So you mean we can..with the .I can.to you and you for me you know..That stuff?"

"Im not sure what you just said but I think you got it."

Willow was the first to move and she led Tara by the hand and walked slowly to their bedroom. She closed the door and turned around. Tara's eyes where looking directly into her own but she didn't move.

"Im nervous a little."Willow said as she played with the hem of her shirt and looked downward.

"Why are you nervous sweetie? Its just me."

"Well the last time we did this I was really loud.And I said something's that I wouldn't normally say."

"Willow, sweetie, We've never done this."

"Oh yes, yes , we did. You weren't there but you know ..I Promise ,I was loud and you know..sorry.I'm a little insane at times."

Tara felt a shot of arousal hit her body as she realized what Willow ment.Her throat felt suddenly dry and she swallowed hard.

She waited for Willow to look up and when she did she began to move toward her slowly.

"Are you talking about a dream?"Tara asked still moving forward..
"Yes , one of them."

"Oh, so you dreamed about loving me ?"Tara said her voice barely a whisper.She was surprised at how arouse this was making her.

When she reached Willow she continued to move till she had Willow backed up against the door.

She lifted Willows head up with her fingers under her chin.She wanted to look at Willow when she asked her next question.She did a quick inventory with her eyes of Willows face, her gaze stopping at her mouth.
She felt her heart beginning to beat a bit faster and her breathing was becoming slightly labored.

The tip off her tongue came out of her mouth and slowly licked first her bottom then her top lip.

"What did I do to you ,Willow ? In you're dream."her voice low and hushed , her eyes now leaving Willows mouth and landing on her eye's"how did I make you scream?"

The fingers of Tara's hand where now on the move over Willows face.She ran them up behind Willows ear and then weaved them into Willow's hair and allowed her palm to cup the back of Willow's head.

She moved her head down and her lips latched on to Willows throat and she gently began to kiss her there.

Her mouth was moving now .kissing her way upward till it landed at her ear."Did I touch you Willow?"she whispered into her ear as she moved a hand between Willows legs and pressed her fingers downward sending a jolt of pleasure into Willows body."Did I touch you there?"

"Oh God",Willow whispered out and thrust her hips forward into Tara's hand."Yes."

Tara slowly pulled her hand upward , pushing the seam of Willows pants against her clitoris,and then slid it back down again.

"Yes? Yes what Willow?"she said as she began to rub her hand up and down and then around Willows clothed center.

"Yes," Willow rasped out, her words barely audible ,"You touched me there."

The hand at the back of Willows head slowly made its way downward till she reached the first button on Willows shirt.The hand that had been pressing into Willows center then made its way upward to join the other as she slowly began to unbutton Willows shirt.

She continued to undo the buttons on Willows shirt.Her eyes never left Willows.
She could see that Willows breathing was beginning to come quicker and the sight of her chest rising and falling raised her arousal to a greater level.

"Is that all I did Willow/? Is that the only way I touched you?"Tara's hands were now beginning to shake.

"No,you touched me other ways",.the last word coming out on a shuddering breath and she hade to close her eyes for a moment.

Tara continued to undress Willow and she pulled the shirt free of Willows body and dropped it to the ground.

"How else did I touch you Willow/"

It was Willows turn to swallow now as her mouth became completely dry.
"How else Willow?" Tara repeated the question as she pulled the straps of Willows bra down her shoulders.

"You.. umm, you were inside of me."Willow whispered.

"Is that what made you scream Willow? Me, being inside of you?"Tara asked as she now began to remove Willows jeans.

"Yes, when you started moving inside of me."It was becoming near impossible for Willow to talk at this point as she was so aroused.

Tara slowly slid down Willows body as she removed her jeans and underware.
She saw the wetness that was covering the inside of Willow's thighs and she moved her mouth to the space in between them.She ran her tongue up the inside of one thigh collecting the evidence of Willows arousal with her tongue and then the other.

Then she slowly made her way back up and once again lock willows eyes with her own."Moving ? How was I moving Willow?"Tara said thinking if she wasn't careful it would be over far to soon.She couldn't stop the questing now.
She had taken it to far and she had to hear Willow say it.
She removed her hands from Willows body and held her gaze while she began to undress herself.

"How Willow ,? How was I moving?"Tara asked as she removed the last bit of clothing from her body.

She once again returned her hands to Willows body placing them on Willows side and she again began to desend.
She stopped at Willows chest and began to taste her breast.

Her hands went behind Willow and she placed them on her ass, one on each cheek and began a light kneading rhythm.

She pulled the nipple of one breast into her mouth and held it still with her teeth.She began to stimulate the nub with rapid , light movements of her tongues tip.

She opened her mouth a little wider and took as much of the breast into her mouth as possible.Willow was moaning loudly now and thrusting her hips forward desperately searching for some form of contact to her soaking center.

Tara slowly began to pull her mouth away from Willows breast and whatched as it bounced against Willows chest when she release it from her mouth.

"Oh God, Tara, please."Willow begged as she placed her hands on the door behind her.


Willow once again thrust her hips forward still searching for contact.

Tara moved one hand from one cheek and placed it flat on Willows stomach and pressed the searching hips to the door, stilling there movements.
Then she stood up again and placed one hand on the door and one between Willows legs.
"How was I moving Willow? Tell me what I was doing to you."Tara whispered into her ear.

The sound of Tara's voice so full of desire as she spoke directly into her ear caused Willow to become even more aroused.

"You were , pushing, pushing in with you're fingers and...and out again then in and up and faster, all the time faster"Willow panted out.

"Like this Willow?"Tara whispered into Willows ear she slid two fingers up into her.The feeling of sliding into Willow caused her breath to hitch and she pressed Willow farther into the door with her body."Like that ?"

"God yes , like that , just like that."Willow said.

Tara began to thrust upward into Willow and pressed her harder into the door.
"Is this how I did it Willow?"Tara asked as she quickened the pace.

"Yes but ..a lit ..but harder.You did It harder then that."

Tara then moved back a step in order to get a better angle.She slipped her fingers out momentarily and when she pushed back in she used her hips to help push further into Willow.

She was moving now.Pulling back and then pushing back in.She increased the pace and pressure with every thrust.

She moved her mouth to Willows and darted her tongue inside her mouth.Willow was beginning to come apart and Tara heard her whimpering.She ripped her mouth from Willows and Whispered to Willow"Is this what made you scream?"

She increased her pace even more and the strength of her thrust were lifting Willow slightly off her feet.

Willow let her head fall forward and her head rested on Tara's shoulder and she knew she was going over.She turned her head and she was gasping now into Tara's ear.

Tara curled her fingers slightly and quickened the pace just a little bit more.Willow grabbed at Tara's ass and pulled her in tighter while slamming her hips against Tara's hand.

She put her head down again on Tara's shoulder and then it happened .Willow cried out as she exploded into a shattering release that was unlike anything she had ever known.

Willow was trembling now.Her entire body flushed with arousal and she couldn't take anymore.

She grabbed Tara's face and began to kiss her passionatly.She thrust her tongue into Tara's mouth and Tara let out a slight moan.

"Willow said."Let me show you."
"Oh yes , Willow. Show me."

Willow reversed there positions and pressed Tara back into the door.Her hand found its way between Tara's legs and began to search for the entrance.

Once she found it she placed two fingers against it and placed another desperate kiss to Tara's mouth.

There tongues danced and clashed against each other and then Willow thrust two fingers up and into Tara. Tara's eyes flew open and she looked at Willow .

She was waiting for Willow to begin moving and was starting to roll her hips against Willows hand yet Willow remained still.

"I'm going to tell you Tara, Im going to tell you what else made me scream"

"Tell me then, tell me what it was?"Tara said breathlessly.

"You told me you loved me."

Then Willow began to move inside of Tara. She began a slow thrusting pushing her fingers as deep into Tara as she could be.

She was slowly beginning to speed up and Tara was grasping at the door behind her desperately in need of something to help her remain upright.

Willow stepped back and removed her fingers from inside of Tara and led her to the bed.She slowly guided Tara down onto her back and crawled up the bed and rested herself between Tara's legs.

She then pushed back into Tara and started thrust in and out.She kept her eyes on Tara's face and then she moved her leg over one of Tara's so she could straddle it

She moved her free hand down under Tara's knee and guided the thigh between her legs to the spot that she desired.

She pressed herself down on Tara's thigh and began to grind herself against it.She continued her thrusting into Tara with a quicker pace.

Tara was meeting her thrust with her own counter thrusts.She could feel the orgasm building inside of her and she was desperate to find release.

She placed her feet flat on the bed and the palms of her hands against the back board of the bed .

She raised herself up arching her back and franticly thrust herself into Willows hand.Her head was turned sideways and her eyes were closed tight.She was sure that with ever thrust she made ,it would be the one that bring her to release.But she was wrong.

The feeling was so intense that she felt that it would be impossible it to grow any stronger.But it did.It was growing stronger yet and she was sure she would blackout from it.

Still it continued and she was out of controll.Her body was being taken to a pleasure she could have never imagined. was possible.She was pumping her hips against Willow so franticly that she thought she might break Willows hand.

This has to be it she thought to herself and yet again she was proven wrong.

She was incapable of speech yet the sounds that were coming from her mouth were helping her to convey to Willow just what was happening to her.

Her body was no longer hers.The movements she made now were erratic and rythemless.

She felt it now, it was beginning to break.She could here the sounds of Willows fingers as they pulled in and out of her soaking sex and it added to the building of the orgasm that she was sure would be the end of her.

Willow watched as Tara began to release.Her eyes where closed tight and her mouth was open in a silent cry.She watched as their pace grew to an impossible level and was fascinated at the way Tara's breast looked as they moved with each push .The sound that they made as they slapped her chest ,and she moved her head down and sucked one into her mouth.

Tara felt Willows mouth at her breast and that was all that it took.Her body exploded sending her spiraling into a blissful oblivion as the muscles of her sex squeezed and released against the fingers inside of her.

She was out of breath as she desperately sucked air into her lungs. She was still descending when she felt it again.Willow had changed positions and was now kneeling with each one of her legs over one of Willows shoulders.

Willows mouth connected with her sex and she felt Willow suck her clitoris between her lips.Her tongue flick rapidly over the bundle of nerves and Tara was going to come again.

"OH FUCK...GAAAHH."and She exploded yet again into Willows mouth.
Willow sat there a moment with her head resting on Tara's stomach.
"Are You okay Tara?"Willow asked.

She wasn't sure actually , she though that perhaps she had died from the plesure.She had to concentrate on forming words and her answer came just a slight bit delayed.

She opened her mouth to answer the question , but all that came out was a giggle that soon sent the both into a laughing fit.

"Do you have the slightest idea of just how much I love you?"Tara asked.

"Yes baby, I think I do.. Tara?"

"Yeah sweetie"

"Will you marry me?"Willow asked as she leaned over to her bedside table and pulled out a ring box from the drawer.

TBC
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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17

Postby Zampsa1975 » Wed Jan 09, 2008 2:33 am

Excellent update-y goodness... Yay for Donny's long stay in prison.

:wtkiss was great, is the next update-y goodness W/T wedding?
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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17

Postby LittleBit » Wed Jan 09, 2008 5:42 am

WOW!

I just found this fic and you have a talent for writing smut scenes! :D
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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17

Postby jay/wt4evr » Wed Jan 09, 2008 6:36 am

wow
that was wow
that on of a bitch now will pay :pinky
and :aww awwwww that was romantic
"Yes baby, I think I do.. Tara?"

"Yeah sweetie"

"Will you marry me?"Willow asked as she leaned over to her bedside table and pulled out a ring box from the drawer.


I loved it
and update soon?
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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17

Postby hondos » Wed Jan 09, 2008 1:29 pm

Zampsa1975
is the next update-y goodness W/T wedding?


I think so. I had a very strange experience when I wrote that last update. I had no intention of even having that happen there. That was supposed to be the last update , the story was over. Like I said, I don't know where that came from. :yikes :hmm

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WOW!

I just found this fic and you have a talent for writing smut scenes!


Thank you . I think.LOL. :rofl

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that on of a bitch now will pay

Yes he will. I detail in the next update >:) :whip :devilish
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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17

Postby JujuDeRoussie » Wed Jan 09, 2008 2:23 pm

Hello :)

Awwww that was a very nice update ^^
Both with the cuteness and the naughty... great :)

I can't wait for the next.

And yeah, I know what you mean about feedback :) well in feedback there is feed, and to feed is important to "live".. as a writer :)

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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17

Postby MsKittyB » Wed Jan 09, 2008 6:36 pm

:wave Rosemary
THAT...WAS....AMAZING!! :applause
I absolutly loved the lastest updates! Abby is simply adorable.
Wow, :thud Willow and Tara's love making was beautiful. :drool In a VERY naughty >:) and loving way.
Yea! :party Donny got what was comming to him. Na-na-na-na-nana! :lmao Cant wait to hear the details about him in the next update.
Sooo, Will there be wedding bells in the next update? I saw TBC. But I have a feeling its comming to an end. :sob
Again I give you an :applause I cant wait to see what happens next! :read
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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17

Postby hondos » Thu Jan 10, 2008 1:00 am

[JujuDeRoussie
Awwww that was a very nice update ^^
Both with the cuteness and the naughty... great


Thanks.Im glad you like it.Thenaughty parts were fun to write.I don't know why, but they were.lol
I hope you enjoy this last bit.
Thanks for resding this story.and for feedback
well in feedback there is feed, and to feed is important to "live".. as a writer

That.s true.hehehe
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Willow and Tara's love making was beautiful. In a VERY naughty and loving way.

And sooo much fun to write.

But I have a feeling its comming to an end.

Yes Im afraid so. This is the end. Thank you so much for youre feedback. I just had a blast with this.




Okay so this is the last update. I hope you enjoy .Thanks to all who read it. I had a blast writing it



"God Willow. I can't believe this. How could we let this happen? What are we going to do?What am I going to tell her happened? She's coming back from you're moms in two days.Two days!"

"I don't know Tara.Look maybe we can just go and buy another bird. They all look the same. Maybe she won't notice."Willow said looking down at her hands that were folded on her lap.

"Are you kidding? Were talking about Spooky for Gods sakes . Of course she'd notice .That trick might work for Goldfish Willow.Not for parrots that know their alphabet up to M.."

"Well Tara , I think that you should just be honest with her .Tell the truth. Tell her what happened.It's something you'd have to explain to her eventually anyway right. I'm mean it's part of life.It part of nature."

"Me? Me? What about you? It's your fault.This never would have happened if you'd have just closed the damn door."

"Yes I know,I know .You're right , Im sorry."Willow said as she kept her eyes on her folded hands.

"No , no , Willow I'm sorry. I had something to do with this to."

"Something?" Willow said quietly under her breath, "It was a little more than something."

"What did you say Willow? If you have something to say , say it."Tara said.

"Well it's just, I'm not the one that said that. You're the one that said it."

"Are you joking here ? I never said that. I say sweetie. You're the one that says baby. You know it."

"Ohh baby, baby, that's it , right there, right there. Is that very good? Spooky get treat?"

"NO."Willow and Tara yelled at Spooky simultaneously.






ONE year LATER
"Hey Willow. Are you ready?"Buffy asked.
"As ready as I'm ever going to be."
"Are you nervous?"
"No, I'm not actually.This is the one thing I've done in my life that I've been sure of."
"Ya I know what you're saying."
"How about Abby? Is she ready?"
"Yes Faith has her in the reception area.She saved you're cake I have you know.It was about to have a long finger shaped piece of frosting missing."
"Abby tried to do that ?"
"No.Abby stopped Faith."
"Oh"
"Well let's do this."
"Okay, I'm ready".
Willow walked out of the small room and made her way to the Hotel lobby.She had on a long green dress with white roses on it. Tara had picked out their dresses herself.

She had seen the dress at the bridal shop and she was in shock. It was the very dress she had seen Willow wearing in her dream. Abby wore the same pattern.

Willow looked in the room and began to see who had shown up.She saw her parents sitting in the front row and Abby was sitting on her dads lap. She smile when she saw that. Abby had missed her Grandfather very much.Tara's dad had spoiled her and they were very close.

It was wonderful the way her parents had just excepted Tara and Abby from day one.They loved them both and Abby would spent at least one weekend a month with them.


It was hard for Tara some times .Willow understood why of course. She knew that Tara knew that she had become just as much her parents daughter as she was.

THe music cued and Willow looked up and saw Tara walking in from the other end of the lobby.God, she was beutiful.Willow was amazed by this women.

Everyday she was near her the more she loved her.She remembered the first time she had seen her.She remembered thinking that she had felt some kind of connection to her.

Tara and she had so much to learn about each other when this whole thing had finally ended.The last year they had had some difficult times. It had nothing to do with their relationship and the difficult times where in fact made easier by the love that they shared.The difficulties came when all the trial began.

They were lucky that they had the video tapes because it meant that Abby didn't have to testify at all.Willow always hated it when kids had to testify against family members.Being an attorney she knew that it was sometimes unavoidable.
Still she would try to avoid it when ever possible.

The most amazing thing of this was this women unbelievable goodness. Her inability to hate or be spiteful.The absence of the desire for revenge. Her unbelievable ability to forgive.When the trials took place IWillow would see that Tara would turn her head away whenever her brother was brought into the court room.Willow had assumed it was because of how angry and hurt she was or even because he disgusted her.

The truth off it was that the site of her brother caused her pain. Not for heself but for him. During the trials Donny would enter the court room and most of the times he showed signs of having been beaten. Black eyes , swollen lips , even a broken nose.

He would usually be limping and you could see in his face that he was suffering the pain of these attacks. Even after all the things he had done to her , this woman was still capable of feeling compassion for him. He was her brother and that was that. She couldn't stand to see him suffer.

She remembered the night of the execution. Willow had woken up , and found that Tara was not in bed. She had gone downstairs and she saw Tara standing outside looking up to the sky and leaning against the Oak tree in their backyard. She had gone to Tara and she spoke her name quietly as to not startle her.

Tara turned to her and smiled.Willow walked up behind her and wrapped her arms around her waist and let her head rest on Tara's shoulder.
"What going on up there? Willow asked referring to her mind.
"I was just out here thinking about Donny". She took a quick glance at her watch.

"He's going to die in about twelve minutes."

Willow had forgotten about that. She wasn't sure if she was supposed to be sorry. She certainly didn't feel sorry.

"Well is a good thing right?"Willow said.

"I remember one time when I was seven. We had gone to an Easter egg hunt at our parish. There was about twenty kids there. I was the youngest. When it was over I was sitting on the ground crying. He came over to ask me what was wrong. I told him that I didn't find any prizes. He told me to stay where I was and close my eyes and he would be right back. So I did. .."Tara paused for a minute and pulled in a quick breath.Willow could tell that Tara was crying now.

Tara continued "And when he came back he told me that he thought I had made a mistake.That I should go and look around some more. Then he took my hand and we went to the playground and he started pointing and saying "See Tara there's one" so I was running around and I was finding prizes everywhere. I looked at Donny and he was smiling a great big smile and clapping for me whenever I would find one. It wasn't until about two years later that I realized he had taken all of his prizes and hidden them so I could find them.

When I think about Donny , that's what I want to remember ."
It was in that moment that Willow realized Tara had forgiven him.She also then realized Tara had just lost her brother.

The next day when the news story was out they said that when Donny was asked if he had any last words he said yes,"Please tell my sister Tara that I'm sorry."

She heard her cue and began to walk up the isle to the front of the room where her beautiful Tara stood.It was an amazing thing that was happening to Willow at this moment.The room was now empty to her save one person.

This, Willow thought , is amazing.How can I possibly love this woman anymore than I do now? But it was happening now. She was falling more in love with her by the moment. Suddenly the walk to the make shift altar seemed to be far to long , so desperate was she to go to her love, her life , her everything.

When at last she did make it there she gave a sigh of relief. She walked to her and turned to face her. She placed her hands in Tara's and the thing that happened to them whenever they were together began. No one else, there was no one else in this room.

They stood hands connected , eyes seeing into each other. They were no longer Willow and Tara , they were each other.So connected that this love had made them one.One single being that occupied one single body mind and soul.
They were so much a part of each other that Willow thought they would cease to exist if one of them were no longer there.

The thought chilled Willow when she would sometimes think about how close she he'd come to losing this woman.When the thought would come it would parallelize her. She would be momentarily lost.
She would have to close her eyes and literally shake it out of her mind like one would shake away a bad memory. And in those moments she would have to , not chose to , find her where ever she was and just look at her to make sure that she was still there.

As she stood here now, ready to commit herself for the rest of her life to this woman she thought about how it came to be. She had gone to the prison to try and find a way to save this woman. Instead this woman had saved her.

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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17 complete 01/09

Postby musicmad10 » Thu Jan 10, 2008 3:36 am

Dibs!!!
Beautiful ending. I really enjoyed this story. Thanks for sharing it. :blush

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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17 complete 01/09

Postby Zampsa1975 » Thu Jan 10, 2008 3:41 am

Excellent ending... good that Tara could forgive his brother and Donny to ask for Tara's forgivenes... beautiful wedding :wtkiss
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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17 complete 01/09

Postby jay/wt4evr » Thu Jan 10, 2008 7:18 am

:happycry that was beautiful, and Tara forgave her brother, that's so...Tara. are you planing a sequel? right? RIGHT? pweaseeeee!!
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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17 (complete 01/09)

Postby JujuDeRoussie » Thu Jan 10, 2008 2:39 pm

Hello :)

That is a sad thing when a fic is updated so much, it ends faster :(
But it ends very well :)
Tara will always be surprising. Always forgiving. Isn't she the most wonderful woman? :-D

Thank you for this beautiful story.

A thing I have really appreciated, but I don't think I have mentioned it yet, it is, at the beginning, this lesson about, as I have understood it, giving a second chance. To everybody. As long as they have paid for their mistakes. It is beautiful.

Faith and Buffy's roles made me this of, I believe the english title is The green line? With Tom Hanks? Well, anyway, it made me think of this beautiful movie.

I hope you will write other fics in the future, hopefully near future? lol
But I know that writing is not that easy, and depending on how you like to do it, it can take several weeks, months sometimes before to post. ( Like I prefer to post when I am at least half done with a fic before to post it... seeing as I have posted only short fics so far, it says long on my writing! lol)


Anyway,

Once again thank you for this beautiful fic. Abby is the cutest. I hope she'll receive a post card from old England.
And Spooky? Give him some treats! ;-)

Friendly,

Julia
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Re: Saving Us Both First fic NC 17 (complete 01/09)

Postby MsKittyB » Thu Jan 10, 2008 3:46 pm

:sob I told myself I wasnt gonna cry. But here I am :sob. You should have told us to have a box of tissues next to us lol.
After all Donny did Tara forgave him. It was beautiful. :cry I hate to say it but I kinda felt a little compassion for Donny. I dont hate him as much as I did. :cry
YEA!! :party Willow, Tara, and Abby Together 4 Ever!! (Poor Spooky lol. I think Willow did it lol. She does seem to use the word 'baby' a lot in bed :laugh)
This story was absolutly beautiful and amazing. :read Are you really gonna stop writing? :miff lol Hopefully its not your last story, but, if it is, your an amazing writer. :aww And I really enjoyed this story. :sigh
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Re: Saving Us Both AU First fic NC 17 (complete 01/09)

Postby hondos » Thu Jan 10, 2008 7:31 pm

It has been brought to my attention, that it is not fair to have a wedding and no wedding night naughtyness. Sooo.Would anybody care for a little wedding night naughty?
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Re: Saving Us Both AU First fic NC 17 (complete 01/09)

Postby JujuDeRoussie » Thu Jan 10, 2008 7:40 pm

*raises her hand... both her hands!*

*tries to look innocent*

*keeps her hands up... Adds her feet in case it would count*

*falls on her bottom*

*exits the thread all blushing, but hoping to have a wedding night soon*
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Re: Saving Us Both AU First fic NC 17(Smut update)

Postby hondos » Thu Jan 10, 2008 11:02 pm

This chapter has nothing to do with this story. I actualy laughed my ass off the whole time I wrote it. It's just so bizzar. I've now frightened myself.Anyway I hope you don't think I'm some kind of wierdo person. I hope you guys get a laugh out of it also.

The hotel room was huge. There was a living area , two bathrooms and a enormous bed. The two women probably couldn't tell you about the living area or two bathrooms but they damn sure could tell you about the bed.Love making was pretty much a nightly occurrence for them and on the weekend Willows parents had Abby they would frequently have marathon sessions.

They had enjoyed the freedom to be able to have sex any where in the house while Abby was gone. That was until Spooky started to repeat the impassioned words and sounds of said sesions.They made love in many different fashions. They had wild sex , slow drawn out loving sex , and yes some very kinky sex. Willow was indeed a kinker tinker .Tonight however the had chosen to have slow , passionate , sex.


Willow was on her hands and knees at this point and Tara was behind her on her hands and knees as well. She had been teasing Willow for a good fifteen minutes with frequent entries with her fingers , giving one or two quick probes and rubbing at the rough part of her sex , just enough to maintain Willow in the state of desperation .

They had chosen to use the wedding gift that Buffy and Faith had given them and Tara was the first to strap it on. She had just finish giving it a quick lube with the tube of lubricant that had been provided with their new toy and she was ready to stop the teasing and get on with the penetrating. She placed one hand on the bed to support her and she used the other to guide the tip of the pleasuring devise (a word Willow had insisted on using because the word dildo just didn't get it done for her)at Willow's entrance.

"Are you ready sweetie" Tara gasped out.The devise was designed to provide pleasure for the prober as well as the probee.The little bit of teasing that Tara had been giving to Willow had brought her to a point where she wanted inside almost as much as Willow wanted her in.

"Yes , yes baby, I want it. I want it right now. Please stop messing with me and just ..ummm oh God:"She had never finish the sentence as
Tara suddenly without warning slide it up into her about half way.

"Oh Tara , I oh God ,this , this , oh God.."

Tara had stilled herself with the first entry and was trying to regain some kind of control of this situation Her aroused state was telling her to just thrust up into her and get to the fucking but her mind wanted it to last. She had now put both hands , one on either side of Willow on the bed.Her legs Where resting in between Willows spread ones and her hardened nipples were grazing the flesh of Willows back causing an amazing sensation that ran from them straight down into her center.

She took a few calming breathes and opened her eyes as much as har aroused state would allow them to be and she slowly began to pull out of her. Her eyes looked down at where she was connected to Willow and as she saw the toy coming slowly out of Willow , she had to once again close her eyes. Her mouth hung open and her breath was coming in short slow pants.

She opened her eyes once more and asked "Is that hurting you sweetie, tell me if it is.I don't want to hurt you"

"No , no hurt , please go"

With those words Tara pulled back almost all the way out and she slowly pushed back in. Again she pulled back slowly and again she went back in.She was putting it into Willow a little deeper with every re rentry and she had now been three quarters of the way in.
She pulled out yet again and held there for a moment. This time when she went back in she pushed it to the hilt up into Willow.

"Oh fuck yes"Willow screamed and Tara pulled out and then thrust back in. She was building a rhythm now and as she began to rock back and forth into Willow her breast began to sway across Willows back.and it was stimulating her nipples and she had to bite her lip too keep from screaming.

"It , its good then sweetie?"
"Yes it ..umm... yeah it's... good."
I'm going to go faster now, is that okay?"
"gjjjekkktnnnskkwsss"was what came out of Willows mouth which lead her to the conclusion that it was indeed okay.

She began to move a little bit faster and she could here Willows approval. She was letting her weight be slightly supported by Willow's back and she was trying to concentrate her movements to just her hips.with rapid short thrusts. She was tightening the muscles of her ass to provide a firmer jab as she again increased her pace.

She slowly began to raise herself up and she was now on her knees upright .Her hands now held onto Willows hips trying to keep them still as to better increase her level of pleasure .The curved tip of the devise was now sitting directly on her clitoris and with ever thrust the her own pleasure increased.

She yet again changed her placement of her hands. She now wrapped one arm underneath Willow and her hand set flat on Willows stomach.The other hand sought out and found one of Willows nipples and she held on to it with her middle finger and thumb , lightly rolling it in between them.
"Oh God Willow. Do you know that I love you baby? Do you?"
"Ummm oh yes I know I can feel it.I can feel it with what you're doing to me right now. I know what you want You want me to cum I know that."

"Oh Willow, God, Im ...Im almost I'm Oh God "

"What , what's happening to you Tara ?Tell me? ".

"I have I have to stop. I want to be in you I want to do it myself. Can I please?"

"I want that to baby. I want it to be you too'"
Tara then stopped and undid the strap and flung the toy across the room. She retook her position and thrust three fingers up into Willow.

"That's it .Tara..I want it like this . You, its you now. I can feel you in me.That's what I needed."

Tara was still positioned upright on her knees and she raised a hand to her own chest. She ran it downwards an began teasing the nipple of one of her own breasts all the while trusting powerfully into Willow.

"Tara, Tara are you.. are you doing it to yourself . Are you?"

"Nggh ohh no...no not yet.Should I? Do you want me to?"Tara answered Willow as she continued her assault on Willows sex and her own nipple.

"Oh fuck yes. Do it and tell me how you're doing it."

Tara slowly ran her hand down her stomach and paused as she reached the curls of her own sex. She shifted on her knees and now she placed them one one either side of Willows open legs as to gain access to her own sex.

She placed two fingers directly on her clit and began swirl them in a circular motion.
"Oh God ,mmm , uhh , God okay , okay, there Im, Im ,ohh fuck Willow. I can't, I can't...I'm to close...gotta wait.You first "

Tara stilled her fingers and then took them off of her own sex completely.
She placed a hand flat on the bed and pressed her hips to the hand that was inside of Willow."

She bent forward and spoke into Willows ear."Tell me when you're ready. Then I'll ...I'll do it ...I'll do it to myself for you."

She then raised the free hand and placed it on the headboard so she would have improved leverage.

Then she began to thrust her hips against the hand that was inside Willow.She was moving faster now and the headboard was knocking against the wall behind it..To Tara's own confusion the sound caused her to become more aroused.

"Oh God Tara, Im there ..almost there. , please , harder , please a little harder" She increased her speed yet again and the banging of the headboard grew louder.

"Thats it .God , you know just how I like it.God your're good, baby , so ,so good"

She could feel the muscles of Willows sex beginning to grow tighter.She knew Willow was almost ready'

"Are you ready Willow. Are you ready for me to touch myself."Tara asked as she push her knees apart preparing to pleasure herself.

"Oh yes yes I'm ...I'm ready .Do it Tara .Do it now"

Tara then placed her two fingers back in the position they had been in before.She again began to swirl around and around ,applying light pressure to her clit.

"I'm doing it now Willow. I'm doing it for you.I'm I'm Oh God Willow, Im going..going"Tara then pressed her fingers down harder and added an up and down motion to the swirling.She could feel Willows sex growing tighter and she knew it would be only seconds now.

Willows head was up and her neck was stretched out as far as it could go.She now had one hand on the bed and her other hand now pressed into the headboard. She was slamming back into Taras hand now and her legs where beginning to shake.The knocking of the headboard grew louder and Tara cried out .She held back for a moment and tried to wait for Willow.

Willow was thrashing now pushing back against Taras forward motion and she was flying at the fingers inside and then she froze. Her mouth hung open and her eyes shut tight and then she erupted. The scream escaped her lungs and she trashed wildly against Tara's hand and then she collapsed flat down on the bed.

Tara was grunting now as she continued rubbing herself with her fingers. She to became frantic and she screamed out in a shuddering moan that seemed to go on for minutes.Then she to collapsed atop Willow.
They both lay there now Tara resting on top of willow. She rolled over and turned to face Willow.Willow smiled at her and moved her mouth to Tara's and gave her a deep passionate kiss.

"Well that was... whew. Oh boy.I love you .I love you so , very much.ThankYou for marrying me."Willow said.

"I love you to baby.And I am honored to be married to you. You never need to thank me.

"So, what do you want to do now?"Willow asked.

Tara rolled slightly over and grabbed the list off of the nightstand.

"Seven?"she said pointing to the list.

"Good choice baby.You wait here.I'll go get the whipped cream."

Really the end this time
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Re: Saving Us Both AU First fic NC 17(update 01/10/08)

Postby MsKittyB » Thu Jan 10, 2008 11:52 pm

:thud Sweet...mother...of...all...things...holy! :drool
Whoo-hoo! Way to end a story! :pinky
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Re: Saving Us Both AU First fic NC 17(update 01/10/08)

Postby hondos » Fri Jan 11, 2008 12:10 am

musicmad10Thank you so much.Im glad you enjoyed it. I sure had fun writing it.
Rose


Zampsa1975 Excellent ending... good that Tara could forgive his brother
and Donny to ask for Tara's forgivenes... beautiful wedding

Gosh.Thank you so much. Thanks for the feedback thruout the whole thing. It real was very much appriciated.

Rose
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hat was beautiful, and Tara forgave her brother, that's
so...Tara. are you planing a sequel? right? RIGHT?
Thank you so much. It was so nice to have your feedback thru this story. I dont think ill do a sequel. I do have an idea for something I think could be kind of cool but who knows..This was just a one time thing. It was fun but , I don't know.I just enjoy reading the storys so much here .Thanks for the wonderful compliment. Ive had a blast.Really.

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Tara will always be surprising. Always forgiving. Isn't she
the most wonderful woman?
Yes she is.I can't tell you how much fun i had writing this.


A thing I have really appreciated, but I don't think I have
mentioned it yet, it is, at the beginning, this lesson about,
as I have understood it, giving a second chance. To everybody.
As long as they have paid for their mistakes. It is beautiful.

Yes. That was the thing here. You see, Willow took that case to try to learn or a least be able to attempt to forgive those she held responsible for Jenny's death.The other thing is I had no intention of writing the last update but when I got to what I had planed on being the final chapter it seemed incomplete to me.So that last chapter was just an afterthought that I just kind of adlibed thru . What was amazing to me is I beleive that last chapter made the entire story. It was strange.I have no idea where it came from.Anyway Im rambling.Sorry.

Faith and Buffy's roles made me this of, I believe the english
title is The green line? With Tom Hanks? Well, anyway, it made
me think of this beautiful movie.

And WOW! What a compliment. That is an amazing movie. The Green Mile so you were very close.Thank you again.

And Spooky? Give him some treats!


Spooky is my hero. He is actually my real live pet parrot and he does in fact say the alphabet and the is that very good? Spooky get treat? So he get the credits.

I hope you will write other fics in the future, hopefully near
future? lol

I was thinking of not writing another one but I do have an idea in my mind of something I think could be a lot of fun.So maybe pretty soon Ill try it again.
MsKittyB

I told myself I wasnt gonna cry. But here I am . You should
have told us to have a box of tissues next to us lol.


Im sorry. Like I was saying before, that last update came from I dont know where. I had intended on it ending with the previous chapter but when I looked at it I felt it was missing something.So out came that one.
Thanks so much for all youre womderful feedback. I'm eeally did appriciate it.


his story was absolutly beautiful and amazing. Are you
really gonna stop writing? lol Hopefully its not your last
story, but, if it is, your an amazing writer. And I really
enjoyed this story.
Again, Thank you so so much. That is so very nice of you to say. I don't know really, I did have one idea for something but it is a different story. I'll see what happens in my head and who knows I just may write another one.
Poor Spooky
lol. I think Willow did it lol. She does seem to use the word
'baby' a lot in bed )


I think so too.Willow is guilty.
Spooky Rocks. He's my hero!!
Thank again so, so, much.
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