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New Fic: Wicked

Postby notl33t » Wed Jul 05, 2006 11:24 am

One day, I said to myself, "Self, why don't I write a fic and start releasing it when I reach 150 posts?" So, I wrote part of a fic and sent it to a beta, a good friend of mine. My beta has given me a lot of good feedback. I'm intending to edit according to any further feedback. Chapters are short and hopefully, sweet.


Wicked


Notes: Timewise, we’re starting in the present day, in Boston.

Spoilers: BtVS up to S3, other main arcs and characters for all seasons also included. Tara, for all intents and purposes, is very different here.

Chapter 1: WILLOW ROSENBERG

Tara Maclay stared at the storage space that the two flight walk up to her apartment had become. Meandering boxes, all marked on at least three sides with the words “WILLOW ROSENBERG,” dared her to trip on them as she began her ascent. Tara sighed and began the hike upstairs after kicking off her snow covered boots.

Four days ago, when her landlord had told her a new person was moving in, Tara had been delighted. Apparently, tired of having a menagerie of MIT students in and out at crazy hours, the landlord was renting the apartment below Tara’s to a young professional from California.

Pulling her keys from her pocket, Tara smoothly inserted her house key and swung the door open with her right arm. And nearly walked into her landlord and a tall pile of boxes.

“Hey Tara. Good to see you.” Dan smiled.

“Uh, hi.” Tara shuffled back and forth.

Tara and her landlord stood in silence for a few awkward seconds. Tara broke the silence decisively.

“Boxes. Why?” Tara finally said, gesturing with her left hand.

“Uh, well, Willow won’t get in for another hour, and, so I just thought you wouldn’t mind having some of these boxes in here for just a small while.” Dan waved his arms to the sides. “After all, this is a huge apartment.”

“”Well, I, I guess, it would be . . . “ Tara trailed off, looking down at the scrubs she was still wearing.

On Fridays, Tara usually worked all day at catching up on any mistakes she made during the week, studying hard on things she had forgotten the week before and focusing on the next round of rotation duties. Actually, that was pretty much every day of the week. Having rotations and a possible shot at a residency at Massachusetts General Hospital meant a lot of sacrifice.

“These will all be gone in an hour or so, I promise.” Dan pleaded.

“Sure, sure,” Tara offered. “I’m just gonna make some dinner.”

Tara stomped off to the kitchen. Once there, she pulled out some chicken and potatoes, and set the oven to 350 F. She switched the radio on to an oldies station and hummed along for a good thirty minutes. The chicken breast was covered with a little marinade before being placed next to a foil-wrapped potato in a little pan. Satisfied that the oven was hot enough, Tara put the little pan in the oven and set the timer for 40 minutes. Switching the radio off, Tara headed back to the foyer to see if Dan had taken the boxes away yet.

Some of the boxes were already gone by the time she reached her front door, which was, to her chagrin, wide open. Tara stood with her back to her open front door, marveling at how neat her apartment looked without boxes barricading her front door.

“Hi! You must be Tara.”

Tara turned around slowly, expecting a tall, straight, Jewish man in his 40s. And ended up staring at a lithe, green-eyed redhead in her 20s, who was, by all accounts, staring right back at her.
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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby writerfreak » Wed Jul 05, 2006 12:14 pm

its off to a good start. i like it.

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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby werewitch » Wed Jul 05, 2006 12:19 pm

:pride

i like it and it seems to be good
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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby PancakesinBellies » Wed Jul 05, 2006 1:44 pm

This is a very solid start to a promising story line. Keep it up!
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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby WillowsGirlXX » Wed Jul 05, 2006 1:49 pm

Oooooh i like the start of this, cant wait where you take this story.

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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby Emms » Wed Jul 05, 2006 1:50 pm

Wow what a wonderful start. I love the way you write. Your flow is wonderful which makes your writing very easy to read. I really like this Tara you're creating... she seem so interesting (I know it's only been one update :p) and I'm finding her to be very likable. Now we'll just have to get to know Willow, too. :D (that was my not-so-subtle way of saying I'd like another update, please :D )

well done

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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby caz » Wed Jul 05, 2006 2:50 pm

Oooh - new story! Go for it.

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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby mole » Wed Jul 05, 2006 9:32 pm

Great start.

So, Tara is in med school and vying for a spot at Mass Gen. Interesting. I don't think I've read many (or any) fics that had Tara in the medical field (excluding veterinary medicine). Since this is BtVS S3 there are sure to be some big differences, but I like how you've worked well-known character traits in different ways. We're all used to portrayals of Tara as self-conscience and insecure, generally illustrated by her stutter. You've given us the same insecurity shown a different way through Tara's internal monologue about spending Friday's correcting errors she made throughout the week, etc.

So, Willow isn't in Boston to attend MIT?

Looking forward to more.

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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby JustSkipIt » Thu Jul 06, 2006 4:12 am

Wow. What a very good and intriguing start.
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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby AlysonGoddess » Sat Jul 08, 2006 7:19 pm

ooooo nice.... update? :)
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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby willohand » Sun Jul 09, 2006 3:55 pm

Its just as its title...w i c k e d. Oh me think you have the making of a wicked fic indeed. More please... ;-)
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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby Sandman78 » Mon Jul 10, 2006 3:07 am

Great start to what seems to be a very promising strory... now that you have my full attention...update soon please :pray
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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby notl33t » Mon Jul 17, 2006 6:36 am

I hate to write and run, making people think I've updated, but I just wanted to let people know that my beta and I are slaving away at continuing Wicked, so there should be an update by next week. When I update, I'll respond to feedback. Thank you to all the kittens who have given me any feedback whatsoever.

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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby willohand » Mon Jul 17, 2006 2:09 pm

no thank you for this really interesting new fanfic.
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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby kytzya » Fri Jul 21, 2006 1:31 am

Woot! update coming next week! can't wait! why do my sentences end with an exclamation mark!
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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby willow_tara_always » Sat Jul 22, 2006 10:11 am

great start.

im very interested in where this goes. so moremore more xxxxx
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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby NeTGiRL » Sun Jul 23, 2006 2:54 am

You got me hooked!! :party

' be waiting for your next update :peace

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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby CrazyTaraWitch » Mon Jul 31, 2006 12:37 pm

this story's quite interesting...where's that update you promised?
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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby I'll_Always_Find_You » Thu Aug 03, 2006 10:04 pm

I am very interested to see where this goes. Update please.
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Wicked Update: Chapter 2

Postby notl33t » Tue Jan 09, 2007 4:04 pm

I am a bad, bad Kitten. But I promise to post another chapter by next week. I've had a small falling out with the original beta, and a couple of funerals happened to me in rapid succession. I will post what I had written up until my aunt died and then, start writing anew. Smiles and hugs everyone, I've missed this place.

Notes: Timewise, we’re starting in January 2006

Spoilers: BtVS up to S3. Tara, for all intents and purposes, is very different here.

Chapter 2: Being Neighborly

Willow Rosenberg stared at Tara . She smiled and bravely shuffled towards Tara.

“Hi! You must be Tara.”,

Tara shuffled a little out of Willow’s sight line, taking the opportunity to gaze at Willow’s features. Willow was pretty and slim, with a cheerful, unforced smile.

“Uh, you must be W-Willow?” Tara ventured in the awkward silence. “Do you need help with these boxes?” Tara waited for a response, eventually caving in during the long silence, “Is something wrong?”

“Oh, oh, no, nothing’s wrong. I’m fine. Finey McFine Fine.”

“Busy up there, in your head?”

“Yes, I’m. I have a lot to think about.” Willow briefly paused, taking stock of her visitor. “Doctor?”

“Oh, yes. I mean, no, no. Not yet anyway. That is, I passed my boards, but I’m, well I’m not quite.” Tara explained. “I’m just about to get to do my specialty. It’ll be part of my residency, but not rotations.”

“Residency?” Willow’s cheeks flushed a bright red as she cocked her head to the side.

“Um, it’s a long story. I guess you’re not familiar with the way med school works, huh?” Tara looked away from Willow, entirely missing Willow’s apologetic grin. Tara aimed her own smile down at the floor.

“Not really. I’ve been bopping back and forth, traveling and whatnot for the past two odd years. And here I am, programmer. Getting ready to, uh, join the corporate world.” Willow paused dramatically. “Or enslave myself to it. Have to pay those student loans off.”

Tara giggled. “Student loans, yeah, I know those.” Tara gave Willow another long once-over. “How about I help you with these boxes? Did Dan already skedaddle?”

Willow bounced up and down for a moment, then placed her hands behind her back. Tara, trying desperately to not notice how cute Willow was, starting randomly shifting her eyes around her own apartment. Willow jumped into Tara’s view and started slowly advancing on Tara, until Tara squeaked, ending the short dance break.

“Willow? I, uh, I mean, duh-did did Dan already leave?” Tara blurted out, still going further away from Willow.

“Yes!” Willow exclaimed guiltily, unsure of why she herself was acting so strangely. “I mean, yes, he left. He said he’d help, but he, just, poof! Up and gone. And me all alone, too. Oh, well, I’d better get to it.”

Willow knew she had one more chance to use her weak flirtatious methods on Tara and settled for grappling with the nearest box. Not wanting to look like a complete fool and a weak one at that, she attempted a dead lift and managed to hoist the box up. Due to her herculean efforts, she completely missed Tara’s appreciative gaze.

“Willow, do you need any help?”

“Sure, if you don’t mind.”

“Not at all.” Tara smiled and leaned over for a conveniently placed box. “After all, your place is only down the stairs.”

Tara stayed down, gauging Willow’s reaction and finding it more than favorable. Tonight would be interesting after all.
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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby Willowtree252 » Tue Jan 09, 2007 6:09 pm

Sorry you had such a bad time as of late but I am glad you are back
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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby Red Phoenix » Tue Jan 09, 2007 10:15 pm

yay, a story in Boston! It's one of the few cities that I know pretty well. I really like this fic alot already.
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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby Pinocchio1940 » Tue Jan 09, 2007 10:29 pm

Very cute. I'm interested in what is going to happen. ;-)
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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby willohand » Wed Jan 10, 2007 10:04 am

No your not a bad kittie. Real life has a way of popping up at the worsst of times. Sorry to hear about your beta problems. But YESSSS! and WOOHOO! Your back. So hope all is getting okay for you. How is your new year so far? update when you can.
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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby shyamberlover » Wed Jan 10, 2007 6:29 pm

i'm liking this! more please

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Wicked Update Chapter 3

Postby notl33t » Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:27 am

I promised an update, and an update I will give! I want to thank all of the Kittens who have been/are/were encouraging me as I put this fic out. There's no W/T togetherness in this chapter, but when there will be, I'll warn people. I'm not expecting this story to head into NC-17 territory, but if it does, I'll give readers fair warning.

Disclaimer: I own nothing. Purely for entertainment purposes only.

Chapter 3: Working Stiff

Life, Willow had decided, was good. More than good. More than all right. The only thing that needed to happen was a check-in call from Xander and Buffy in the next week. The immediate concern was Tetris, and namely, making it past Level 13 before 6pm rolled around.

“Willow! Good, you haven’t left yet.” Bob ambled through Willow’s door towards Willow’s desk.

“Hey Bob. What’s up?” Willow glanced up from her third monitor, closing Tetris just before Bob got to her side. “Have you got a problem?” Willow tried to sound cheerful and helpful, but Bob had already stopped by three times this week, each time with an increasingly flimsier excuse to talk.

“I know its Friday, but could you program this module for me? I just didn’t have the time to figure out the interface this week.”

“No, Bob. I’m packing up. Maybe I can do it for you next week, if I have the time.” Willow tried to emphasize the if while shutting down her computer.

“Please? I really need it ready for next week Monday.” Bob pleaded.

“Then you should probably work on it this weekend, Bob.” Willow stated while slipping her PowerBook into her messenger style pack. “I’ll see you on Monday.”

“But . . . you’re a really amazing team member, I just thought . . . ”

“I have to close up my office now,” Willow waved her arms around and included her now blank monitors for good measure “Good night, Bob.”

Bob left sadly, tail down. Willow shook her head and slung her pack over her right shoulder, adjusting the bulk of it at her left hip. Willow had already completed her assignments for the meeting next Monday by Thursday, but that didn’t mean she was feeling generous. Her assignments were hard enough as it is, and if she was lucky, she would get to design and not just code monkey the new GUI for the computer attached to the new scanners. Willow kept her head down as she closed her office door.

“Weirdo,” she muttered under her breath.

“Yes, yes he is.” Shaun started, smiling indulgently when Willow jumped half a foot into the air. “Ah, Willow, before you go, could we just have a second to catch up?”

“Sure thing, boss.” Willow threw in a big grin for good measure. “Fire away.”

“Did you complete the work I gave you last week?”

“Yes. I emailed it to you.”

“Did you complete the presentation for next week’s meeting?”

“Yes, I emailed it to you.” Willow scowled. “Do you check your email?”

“Sometimes, and I’m not done with you yet.” Shaun raised his right eyebrow. “Feisty.”

“It’s all that California sun, sir.”

“Noted. You’re still a great employee, so far, even with that California strangeness.” Shaun cleared his throat, and stared at the wall above her head. “With that said, Bob’s taken an interest in you. The fact that you both graduated from Stanford means that you are the closest person to him in the office. And he must be getting persistent if he’s trying to get to know you at 6pm on a Friday.”

Willow, uncomfortable at his words, shifted her gaze to her feet.

“He tends to pester a girl in the office until they either scream at him or jump on him, which makes it difficult in general because we’ve got, well, we’ve got fifteen employees total.” Shaun paused for maximum impact. “If you could let him down quickly or decide to date him quickly, I’d really appreciate it.”

“Yeah, well, I think dating shouldn’t be done in the workplace. Not that I haven’t, I mean, I’ve dated people I worked with, but, I think, well, it’s just . . .” Willow waved her right hand around indecisively and decided to point out the door. “He’s really not my type. Really. At all. First off, he’s a --”

“Well, in any case, if you could tell him that, I’d appreciate it.” Shaun turned to go, cheeks blazing.

“Actually, boss?”

“Yes, Willow?”

“You’re my boss, right?” Willow began.

“Yes, I am.” Shaun waited patiently for Willow to start again.

“Well, he makes me feel . . . uncomfortable. It’s not that he isn’t nice and attractive, he is. He’s been really bugging me, you know? I can’t seem to work on something for two hours and then he’s there, all ‘you’re such a wonderful team member, Willow,’ ‘you’re so pretty, Willow’ and all the while I’m just thinking ‘Why won’t this dork just ask me out?’ and ‘Why can’t he just leave me alone?’ and he’s been like this for two weeks . . .” Willow trailed off thoughtfully.

“I’m your boss.” Shaun cut in with a measure of decorum.

“Yes, yes you are.” Willow put on her best resolve face. “So can’t you tell him something?”

“I’ll try to say something.” Shaun sighed. “This is a small company. Word gets around fast and, . . . well, it can get complicated. I’ll say something and keep you posted.”

“Thanks boss.” Willow smiled gratefully and headed out, her mind churning.

“Have a good weekend, Willow.” Shaun set his sights on Bob, who looked quite sheepish packing up in his office.
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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby Willowtree252 » Fri Jan 12, 2007 9:02 am

Dibs Ok I don,t like Bob at all he is a jerk and Willow is right her boss should handle it fast but I did love the way Willow told him to bug off can,t wait for more
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Wicked Update Chapter 4

Postby notl33t » Tue Jan 16, 2007 8:22 am

Dianneswillowtree - Don't worry. Bob's not getting within kissing distance of Willow. Ever. Hopefully, the young doctor is.

I wanted to thank people for receiving this fic so well, as its my first fic on DCP. Here's another update.

Chapter 4: A Brighter Future

Tara woke to a bright August sun. The rays warmed her bed, which was not as warm as the person lightly holding her from behind. Tara shifted, trying to turn over.

“Hello there, sleepy head. No need to get up so soon. Let’s just lie here.”

Tara moaned as the hand lightly holding her middle tightly loosened, groped higher, and then lightly stroked her, feather-light, down to her hip. The stroke was repeated several times. Tara could feel herself growing hotter than the summer sun.

“Or do you want to do more than lie down?”

Gathering her own strength, Tara forced the arm over and flipped its owner on her back.

“Willow.” Tara said huskily.

And it was Willow. She lay beneath Tara with her red hair slightly disheveled, green eyes warm with desire. Willow slowly slid her body against Tara’s until Tara’s resolve broke.

“Oh, Willow, please.”

“I’ve been waiting for you to wake up.” Willow smiled lasciviously.

“Maclay!”

“Maclay! Wake up!”

Tara bolted awake, knocking the textbooks she had been using for pillows to the floor. Doctor Henderson stood next to the table, arms crossed.

“Doctor Maclay, could you tell me what the uses of the on-call room are?”

Tara blearily wiped her eyes, trying to discern whether she was awake or asleep. Tara decided that she must be awake. Doctor Henderson might have been a woman, but she was no Willow. Last week she'd dreamed that Willow had wanted to use the on-call room for sexy reasons while reciting the on-call room rules.

“Maclay! The uses of the on-call room, please.”

“Uh. Reh-residents and interns often use the on-call room to sleep or shower, duh-during long shifts or whenever they need to.”

“And now, can you tell me why you aren’t in the on-call room?”

“Well, I’m not on call tonight?”

“That is a good answer, Doctor Maclay. In fact, as of 12pm, according to the rotations list, you were supposed to leave this hospital. It is now 6pm. You’re not supposed to be here, Maclay.”

“I was just checking on something.”

“You’re always checking on something every Friday, even though your Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday are spent wearing yourself down because of the Gods of rotations.” Doctor Henderson sighed, uncrossing her arms. “Look, we’re in the lounge, so this isn’t a completely public statement. I don’t have to tell you that Medicine is competitive and getting ahead when you can is essential to having a good career. But you have to take better care of yourself. Sleep in the on-call room. What happens when you’re tired and you fall asleep in the hallway? Or a patient’s room?”

“Sometimes, people get tired, I guess.” Tara admitted grumpily.

“You guess? Lockhart here," Doctor Henderson indicated the young doctor lounging on the couch by the TV. "fell asleep in a bed and ended up in the morgue for half a day before he woke up and realized he was really, really cold.” She stopped, looking at Tara, sitting crestfallen at the table. She said more gently, “Sometimes, people should use the on-call room. Go home, Maclay. Enjoy your weekend. Pick a day other than Friday to be ‘checking on something.’ Oh, and use the on-call room for napping.”

Doctor Henderson walked out of the lounge, muttering epithets against newbie doctors.

“Hey, Tara.” Lockhart turned. “Who’s Willow?”

Tara groaned and stalked off.

“Was it something I said?” Lockhart fired at Tara’s back.

Tara slammed her locker closed, and laid her head against the cool metal. The week had been especially hard. One of her young patients, a kid with Type 1 diabetes, had nearly died, deliberately pushing himself into a diabetic coma.

Tara walked out of the hospital, feeling forlorn and miserable. The state of her Toyota Corolla was also pretty pitiful. Tara started the car, enjoying the familiar vrum of the engine. Inevitably, her thoughts turned to Willow.

Tara usually made the first move in her relationships, such as they were. And Tara had been making a lot of moves lately, backrub offers, sly hugs that lasted a little too long, constant dinner offers. She had even made Willow funny shaped pancakes after Willow had pulled an all-nighter. Even though Willow had been at her workplace for only three weeks, she talked about it as if she had been there for years. Sometimes Willow seemed to notice Tara romantically, but the signals had been decidedly mixed. It was…Frustrating.

Exiting the parking lot, Tara felt a surge of bravery. Willow had definitely been checking her out, a couple times. She knew that for a fact. Hopefully, she would have time enough to plan out a some nice romantic getting to know you conversation before Willow got back from work and before Tara could pass out from sheer exhaustion.
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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby PancakesinBellies » Tue Jan 16, 2007 8:32 am

I like this. I feel ike I might have missed something by not witnessing the tentative passes and relationship development between Willow and Tara, but I don't think it will harm the story. More please!
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Re: New Fic: Wicked

Postby willohand » Tue Jan 16, 2007 8:39 am

now shes talking my language...go sleepy tara
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