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New story: Red's Diner

Postby Reallybigpineapple » Thu Sep 14, 2006 3:24 pm

Hello Kittens!
This story will be very short, no more than say, three installments or so.And yes, it is finished, so there will be no waiting for chapters that doesn't happen...
Title: Red's Diner
Author: Reallybigpineapple
Distribution: Yup, whatever.
Rating: PG-13 to R (I think?)
Disclaimers: I own nothing blah blah, owner is the evil Joss that be and so forth
Summary: Very AU. Set during the american depression. No monsters, bar human.
Notes: This subject might seem pointless, but I went to an exhibition of contemporary art and saw a video installment of the depression which just happen to feature a series of pictures of a diner in the south called Red's Diner with a woman standing behind the counter looking sort of like Alyson H. Next to her was this person looking a little like... oh, well the rest you can guess. My fan fic injured brain wanted to write a fic about it, so I let it...
What do I know of the depression in America? Not much, so feel free too bitch if you find a lot of fault, which you're bound to...
Also, this is a feeble attempt at writing AE, so feel free to bitch about that too, since there will be errors.
Notes 2: Upon re-reading it, I've noticed that it resembles Fried Green Tomatoes a little. My subconscious did that to me, I'm innocent.
Notes 3: Those of you reading Butterfly: Sorry, my muse have been a bitch lately, but as you can see, I've given her a good work out, so there will be a new chapter 'ere long. She said hopefully...

Red’s Diner

Sunnydale, Georgia 1932

Chapter one: A Handsome Stranger rides into town.

Willow Rosemount wiped her hands on her apron, sighing. It was only quarter past eight in the morning, and it was already sweltering.
Joyce Summers had been over at seven to put another batch of her cornbread in the oven, same as usual. Willow sighed again. Sometimes she was convinced that her life would never change…

The sound of a coughing, decrepit engine breaking down made Willow gaze out through the window. Three men got out of a pickup truck, arguing in hushed voices. One of them was just a boy, judging from his height. He bent his head down like he was trying to protect himself against the scolding he was receiving from the tallest of the three.

“I don’t wanna hear another word from you about this, is that clear? Just get it fixed or you can find your own food and shelter tonight!”

The two larger men swung knapsacks over their shoulders and walked down the dusty dirt road, leaving the boy alone, still hanging his head. He took off his hat and wiped the sweaty brow with a rag, before getting a socket wrench from the back of the car and lifting the hood of the car with effort.

A few minutes later, she glanced through the window again to see the boy bent over the hood, shaking his head. He took the rag out from his pocket again and ran it over his tanned neck, probably very hot from the mercilessly gazing sun. Willow felt sorry for him, having to stand out in the heat like that. He took a drink from a worn army issue canteen, probably WW1 by the looks of it. She watched with concern as he shook the last few drops out of the bottle and into his mouth. Clutching the canteen protectively to his chest, he approached the door with hesitant steps.

“Come on then. We’ll help, just as we help all other strays who come through this town because of this miserable depression” Willow thought to herself as she looked at the figure hesitating by the door.

The little bell chimed as he entered the diner. A ray of sun suddenly showed the stranger’s face and Willow drew a quick breath.

Despite the dungarees and the man’s shirt, the boy was a girl. And she was absolutely beautiful. She smoothed her plait of honey blond hair in place and glanced shyly up at Willow with sky blue eyes. The stranger’s beauty was in no way diminished by the sorry state of her boots or the smudge of engine grease on her right cheek.

“ Morning ma’am. Sorry to b-bother you.”

The girl touched the brim of her hat in a quaint greeting and Willow’s stomach filled with butterflies. The accent was a soft southern. Alabama, Willow guessed, but she wasn’t sure.

“No bother. What can I get you?” Willow smiled a tentative smile, not knowing why she suddenly felt out of her depth.

“I was wondering if you’d mind just filling up my water bottle, if it’s no trouble, ma’am.”

Willow smiled and nodded.

The diner was filled with the delicious scent of Joyce’s bread, the pancakes sizzling away in the kitchen and a fleeting remainder of Gunn’s excellent barbeque from yesterday. The blond girl’s stomach rumbled audibly as her eyes darted involuntarily to the cooking pancakes.

“Can I get you some breakfast or something?” Willow smiled at the girl as she handed the filled canteen back.

“No thank you. I j-just ate.” The blonde looked away and moved her feet restlessly in her place as the uncomfortable lie forced its way past her lips.

Willow took the hint. The girl was obviously poor. Otherwise she wouldn’t look like that, wearing cast off dungarees from a man much bigger than her and that once-white shirt that hadn’t seen the inside of a laundry for some time. She wasn’t the first to pass through town, to poor to buy food, looking for odd jobs to make a few nickels or for a barn to sleep in. Willow poured a cup of coffee and buttered some corn bread and put in front of her.

“No thank you, ma’am. I have no money to pay you with.” The girl wouldn’t look her in the eyes as she spoke.

“It’s on the house. Coffee’s been on for too long and the bread’s yesterday’s so we would chuck it out anyway, so…” Willow lied casually, knowing full well that the stranger would know she was lying; No-one threw good bread away in times like these.

She couldn’t explain why, but she really wanted the girl to stay.

With the common sense of the poor and starved, the girl pretended to believe the lie and sat down to eat the offered food. Willow sensed that it took her some effort to mind her manners and not just wolf it down.

“How’s your car?”

Willow rolled her eyes at the lameness of her question. The car was obviously a mess.

“I don’t think I’ll be able to fix it this time. My father will be c-cross about that.”

Willow believed her full well, remembering the brutish manner of the man.

“I could ask Harris to have a look-see? He’s fixed our truck a couple of times.”

“Really? I’d sure appreciate it…”

The hopefulness in the girl voice was almost painful.

“But…” she looked down again.

“Don’t worry about money. He’s a friend. He owes me a great big pile of favors. Really huge with the favor piles, me and Harris. Yes suree bob.” (Shut up already!) she told herself sternly on the inside.

“Hope you don’t mind me asking, but whose horse is that chestnut bay in the paddock?” she asked politely between carefully measured bites

“Riley Finn’s. His farm is just up the road. That horse is lame though. He’s thinking of having him put down”

“I could take a look... I kind of know about horses”

“Well, if you’sure? That would be great. Finn really needs him for the harvest. His tractor broke and he can’t afford a new one until next year. ”

“S-sure, no problem. Tonight?”

“I’m sure that would be fine. Finn isn’t exactly the boy about town. You can usually find him on his porch at night.”

Willow sighed with annoyance, but forced herself to smile, as another customer vied for attention. Serving up pancakes, she chatted amiably with the guest, as required, but she kept looking over her shoulder at the blond girl who was deeply immersed in the simple meal in front of her. She couldn’t help staring as the girl’s angelic features transformed to an expression of absolute bliss when she had a first sip of coffee. As if savoring a fine wine, the girl took a sip and swirled it around her tongue. She waited a few seconds before letting the dark, bitter liquid make its way down her throat. The she smiled a private smile of satisfaction. Willow’s diner was one of the few that still served coffee of a decent quality. It was one of the reasons people still came round even though they were short of cash.

“Ma’am?”

“Yes?” Willow wished intensely that the girl hadn’t noticed her staring.

“Could I ask you for a mighty big favor?”

“Yes.” Willow answered promptly.

“Would you mind terribly coming with me to Mr. Finn’s? My father would just kill me if he found out that I went to visit a man at night on my own. S-sorry to have to ask, but he’s convinced that men are up to no good…”

“No, problem, I’d be happy to.” For some reason, it made her really excited to think about spending an evening with her.

“Thanks a lot, ma’am.”

“I’m Willow.”

“Tara.” She extended her hand.


When Willow took the girl’s hand, it was more of a caress than a handshake. New sensations rushed through her body when they touched. The blonde’s hand stayed in hers, Tara making no effort to remove it.

Looking down, she was shocked at how cracked and sore the over worked hand looked.

“Your poor hands… They look awful.”

Quick as a snake, Tara whipped them away and tucked them under the counter.

“TARA!!” The rough sound of her father’s voice made her stand up abruptly to leave. And she was waking quickly towards the door, before Willow could regain her composure.

“Tara, I didn’t… mean for it to sound like that.” She finished feebly to herself, as the other girl had already made it out the front door.

She spent the rest of the day kicking herself for her clumsiness and trying to ignore the strange new thoughts going through her head when she thought about the blonde.

“Tara.” She rolled the name around her tongue, tasting it. She liked the taste of it. She liked the taste of Tara very much…


Chapter two: Of Women and Horses.

Slowly, like molasses, the hours went by and by eight she had almost managed to convince herself that Tara wasn’t going to show. Eight thirty, the bell chimed. The blonde walked in, rubbing her tired eyes.

“Hi…Sorry if I’m late, but there was a lot more work than I thought”

“No biggie!” Willow tried to sound breezy and casual, like she hadn’t been waiting anxiously for the last two and a half hours.

They left the diner to walk towards Finn’s place, leaving Joyce in charge.

Tara had some straw tangled in her hair and a big mud stain on the back of her trouser leg that she was probably unaware of. She was still the most beautiful woman Willow had seen.

She wasn’t sure why Tara made her feel slightly on edge all the time, but she just tried to not to talk too much. She knew that was a trademark of her nervousness. She tried light conversation.

“So, old Hank says that you are working for Mr Snyder up on Principal Farm. He seems like a bit of a grouch to me. Is he a good employer?”

“The grouch bit is true…”

Tara smiled. Willow felt like she lost her footing for a little while.

“Are you staying at the farm?”

“Sort of.”

Tara hesitated.

“We sleep in the barn. His prize bull is away at the fair, so there was a free spot for us.” Tara spoke levelly and shrugged her shoulders.

Willow stopped.

“Tara that’s horrible! He really makes you sleep in the barn?”

“It’s ok. At least we have a roof over our heads.”

Willow felt how her anger turned her stomach acidy. Tara was wonderful and shouldn’t have to live like this…

They walked in silence for a bit, Willow’s brain busy processing the truth about how Tara was forced to live. She stopped again.

“But does he at least pay you decently?”

Tara shrugged again.

“Daddy and Donnie get a few cents an hour. I don’t.”

“What, he doesn’t pay you at all?”

“I aint spending my hard earned money payin for a scrap of girl to do work that my coloured men could do with their little fingers; Heck, she doesn’t even look strong enough to lift the basket!”

The imitation of Snyder was surprisingly well found. Willow couldn’t help but smile. Tara smiled back and Willow decided to keep the mood light.


When they reached the paddock, the horse whinnied softly. Slowly, stiffly, it limped its way toward them. Willow waved at Riley Finn, who had spotted them from a distance.

“Good thing we managed to get some daylight.” Tara said, looked at the limping horse with a troubled frown.

Riley came strolling up, chewing on a piece of straw.

“I’d like to t-take a look at your horse, sir, if you don’t mind.”

“Sure would appreciate it.” Riley was not a man of many words.

Tara climbed in to the paddock and walked up to the horse. For a few minutes, she just stood there, murmuring softly to the horse, stroking its nose and gradually moving her hands further back, away from its head; with slow motions her hands worked their way down the horses neck and shoulder to its front legs. The horse rested its head on her shoulder.

I bet that feels really good” Willow thought, stopping herself before crossing a mental line she was trying to avoid going beyond.

Tara began making her way down the horse’s side, all the time still talking and moving her hands over it in broad strokes.

“I’m not sure what she’s up to, but old Butler sure seems to be enjoying it.”

Willow just nodded, mesmerized by the confident movements of Tara’s hands and the obvious communication between woman and animal.

“Mr Riley?”

“Yup?”

“I think there’s something embedded in the muscle tissue in his shoulder here. Like a thorn or something. I’d like to try and get it out.”

“That’d be great ma’am.”

“Is there any chance of some hot water and alcohol to get it cleaned up? And maybe some strips of cotton fabric?”

“Well, I don’t really keep alcohol in the house…”

“Riley…” Willow rolled her eyes.

“I’ll just go and see if old Hank left some when he was here last week” the farmer mumbled and set off toward the farm house.

Tara climbed out of the paddock and walked over to a wide-eyed Willow.

“How did you do that?”

“D-do what?”

“That…thing? With the horse? How did you know what was wrong with him?”

“Well, my mama was this great horse woman. I guess she taught me what a horse was supposed to feel like, so I guess I can just tell when they seem… wrong somewhere. If you see what I mean?” Tara shrugged and looked down.

“Yes, I do. Magic. You can do some sort of horse magic.”

“Not really. There’s nothing much to it. Mama was amazing though. Never wrong. I’m not very good compared to her.”

“Sorry, but I still say magic. You’re really talented.”

“N-not really.” Tara repeated, dodging the subject by pointing to Riley coming back with supplies.

“You coming?” Tara turned to Willow.

“Me!? Oh, no, I don’t do horsies, me. Nope, they don’t like me one bit… Had my arm half half-eaten by this really vicious pony when I was five and horses are just to big and have to many teeth and feet, and oh, did I mention that one tried to eat me?”

“I’m sorry, but I kind of really need your help? I promise to make sure you’re safe?”

“You promise?”

Tara nodded.

“Ok. I trust you.”

Willow followed her very gingerly, her heart pounding like a jackhammer. But she couldn’t say no to Tara…

The blonde made Willow hold the horse’s head while she talked soothingly to it and pulled out her pen knife. Old Butler was very good about it on the whole, Willow thought. He flinched a little when Tara cut what turned out to be a small shard of glass out of his shoulder, but he seemed to share Willow’s trust in the other woman, since he still remained patiently standing still. When the wound was cleaned out and bandaged, Willow even patted him a little awkwardly. When Tara said goodbye to the horse, he affectionately rubbed his head against her side, making soft sounds in response to Tara’s mumbling conversation with him.

Her relief when it was over was immense. She gave herself a mental thumbs up for bravery.

Tara was very uneasy when Riley gave her money, but accepted it, since he wouldn’t take no for an answer.

“Would you like to come back and have some dinner with me?” Willow held her breath, waiting for the answer.

“I’d love to. Thank you”

The redhead walked back to the diner childishly elated, babbling about everything and nothing, aiming to make Tara smile as much as possible.

When they reached the diner, Willow held the diner door open and let Tara pass her. Closely. When she passed an inch from her nose, Willow’s senses were flooded with the scent of horse, hay, peaches and something much more disturbing. She inhaled deeply and closed her eyes.

When she opened them, Tara smiled a crooked little smile that made Willow not quite sure what to do with her self.

“Hungry?”

“A little.” Tara tried to sound casual.

Idiot”, Willow thought to herself.

She’s been working all day, of course she’s hungry…

Willow sent a grateful thought to Gunn for being such an excellent cook while she piled up his famous spare ribs with Joyce’s black-eyed bean stew and ear of corn from their kitchen garden. When she came out from behind the counter carrying their full plates, she noticed how Tara’s eyes darted involuntarily and hungrily to the plate. Willow put the sizeable portion in front of her with a pleased smile.

They didn’t talk so much during dinner. Tara was obviously famished and Willow found she enjoyed the companionable silence. It also gave her the opportunity to observe the blond girl more closely.

“Thank you” Tara said sincerely and pushed her clean plate away.

“You’re welcome.” Willow answered with equal sincerity. She got up to go and make them some coffee.

“Would you like a mocha?”

“P-pardon me?” Tara’s looked at her with a politely confused frown.

“Coffee and chocolate. Kind of my specialty”

“You have chocolate? I haven’t had that in a long time...” Tara looked at her with wonder.

Willow nodded proudly.

“Yup. This place sort of has a stash.”

“Thank, you, I’d love some.”

When Tara tasted the steaming goodness, covered with an off-white hillock of whipped cream from Riley Finn’s cows, she closed her eyes and let a throaty sigh of pleasure escape her lips.
Willow felt some sort of unfamiliar tightness form in her body looking at the enraptured face. She wasn’t sure what was happening to her. She had been feeling so… physical lately.

“That sure is good coffee…”

Willow didn’t think to answer. She felt almost mesmerized by a droplet of perspiration that was making its way down Tara’s long neck and along the valley between her breasts. The blonde had opened the top two buttons of her shirt to combat the heat, which made her soft, rounded bosom partially exposed to whoever was sitting in such close proximity as Willow. The sight made her feel… disturbed. She had seen Buffy, Anya and even that horrid Faith Lehane half naked and it hadn’t given her this distressing feeling of urgency, like she needed… Well, something. She wanted to act on an impulse she didn’t quite recognize.

“Willow? Is something wrong?”

Tara shot a glance down to where Willow’s eyes were resting with a puzzled expression on her face. Being caught staring made the red head snap her head up, embarrassment shooting through her like an arrow.

“We’re out of pie!”

“Come again?” Tara looked even more confused.

“We’re out of pie. Otherwise we could have had, you know, pie. For dessert. Pie’s nice, don’t you think. Joyce makes really nice pie. Yummy.”

Willow heard her own nonsensical babbling and willed herself to stop.

“I like the way you talk.” Tara smiled at her. Willow breathed out in relief that the blonde hadn’t mentioned her staring.

“I sound like a babbling idiot, you mean.” Willow returned Tara’s smile with a self-deprecating one.

“N-no. Just interesting...”

“Thanks, I think…” Willow smile widened and their eyes met. Tara was the first to look away, dipping her head and hiding her face behind her hair in what Willow began to realize was trademark fashion.

“Oh, I’ve got something for you!”

Willow walked away and came back with an expensive hand lotion out that she had taken from her mother’s dressing table. She held her breath, hoping that Tara wouldn’t misunderstand her like this morning.

“For your hands.”

She put it on the table and waited for a reaction.

“Thank you.”

Tara’s tone of voice didn’t reveal anything but politeness, so Willow let out a little sigh of relief.

“Hmmm… Sticky”

Tara smiled apologetically as she tried not to get the unusually rich lotion on everything.

“Want some help with that?” Willow said hopefully.

Tara nodded, giving Willow a look that the redhead didn’t know the meaning of.

Willow sat down next to her and cradled her lotion-covered hands in her own. Very slowly, she began to work the rich moisturizer into Tara’s thirsty hands. Her own hands felt really funny, like Tara’s touch was electric, energy flowing between the two them. She looked down on their joined hands. When she lifted her head, Tara looked deeply into her eyes. Her facial expression was inscrutable, but there was no mistaking the intensity behind the sapphire. Willow poured more lotion, wanting to prolong the moment. Needing to prolong it. When Tara’s hands wouldn’t assimilate any more, she slowly moved upward, under the pretense of having to use up the excess skin cream. The skin on Tara’s wrists was still impossibly soft despite her laboring. Willow’s hands roamed gently but firmly up Tara’s arms, turning touch to caress. She avoided looking at Tara’s face for a while. When she finally looked up, Tara had leant forward a little; their faces suddenly close. Willow’s eyes stumbled on the blonde’s full lips, slightly parted, letting a hint of sweet smelling breath flow over the red head’s face.

Willow though hazily that she ought to stop staring and say something, when the blonde jumped to her feet and swore under her breath, staring at the wall clock with a full panic face on.

“Pa’s gonna kill me! I should have been back hours ago. I’ve got to run!”

Willow was still trying to comprehend the sudden and unexpected loss of physical contact when Tara rushed out of the diner. The red head came to her senses a moment later and ran after her.

“TARA!”

The blonde slowed down and stopped.

“Can I see you again?”

The blonde nodded her head vigorously.

“Tomorrow? By Witches lake? At eight?”

Willow nodded and waved goodbye as the blonde took off again. As she was walking back to the diner, smiling, she turned in surprise as she heard the sound of Tara’s heavy work boots increase in volume again. The blonde put her hands on her shoulders and placed a feather light kiss on her cheek.

“Thank you.”

Then she was gone again.

TBC. Next chapter will have have Smut.
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby db » Thu Sep 14, 2006 4:04 pm

oooh. I'm going to really like this story...

looking forward to witch's lake (and wishing I could have had willow's view of a little bead of perspiration...)

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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby WillowRulez » Thu Sep 14, 2006 4:11 pm

I'm already in love with this story.
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby cutiepatootie » Fri Sep 15, 2006 1:18 am

Amazing!!! At first I wasn't sure, but now I'm hooked! Please update soon.
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby RageMore7 » Fri Sep 15, 2006 7:35 am

wow. i feel like i always say the same thing when i reply to stories, but i dont care. this is good, fried green tomatos is my favorite movie. my gramma had me watching it when it came out when i was little. and i always thought, man i wanna live with my best friend for the rest of my life. like 8 years later i realized i was just gay, oh well. GOOD STORY! KEEP IT UP!

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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby Artemis » Sat Sep 16, 2006 11:01 am

Weird coincidence about that photo - but it made for a great story, so who's to complain? Nobody, that's who. I too don't know squat about the depression, aside from the opening of King Kong, and The Sting, but I feel like you've really captured something real, in the image of sweet, poverty-stricken Tara, and Willow knowing - undoubtedly from experience with the many, many people coming through who've fallen on hard times - how to offer her a helping hand while letting her keep her dignity. And the sad contrast between how Tara's treated by her family, and her 'employer' (good use of Snyder, there), and how Willow looks at her as a human being, and discovers her amazing talent with horses.

Lemme revise that, Willow looks at her as an incredibly gorgeous human being :blush I really, really like the mix of attraction, hesitation, and just plain confusion going on there. I'm really looking forward to more - worrying about Tara's family, and looking forward to seeing her and Willow stay together, of course :x
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby JustSkipIt » Sat Sep 16, 2006 6:34 pm

Well you already know what I think about your writing. I went back and reread (again) the first love scene in Butterfly. It's not that it turns me on so much as that it's just so sensual and tender and beautiful that I love to imerse myself in it. (and I would have linked to Butterfly if I were you when you mention it...).

Anyway, this is such a different kettle of tea with the setting. But the thing is that your descriptions are still so full and vivid that it's possible to picture it all in my mind. I feel like I can feel the heat and dirt and hunger and fullness and longing. And that is very great.

I can't wait for the next part. Thank you for writing this.
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby ceridwen » Sun Sep 17, 2006 11:19 am

Me likes very much.

More soon please.
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby willohand » Sun Sep 17, 2006 1:18 pm

oh yiiippie smut on the way. WOOHOO!
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby taralicious » Sun Sep 17, 2006 11:07 pm

As someone with a University of Iowa degree in History, let me state categorically that you have intimately captured the Depression in all of its squalid Dustbowl tragedy.
Willow and Tara's characterizations are spot on with Willow essaying the diner employee role and Tara as the "hey, 'he's' actually a girl and not just any girl" role.
The scene which moved me the most and made my heart beat faster with pleasure was the visually descriptive scene of Willow gently and reverently rubbing lotion to smooth Tara's shopworn hands.
Very beautifully evocative of love blossoming in the midst of such poverty and hardship.
I hope they both get covered in flour during a foodfight and then go at it hammer and tongs.
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby Reallybigpineapple » Tue Sep 19, 2006 5:47 am

Chapter 3: Of Frogs and Mermaids

Willow found it difficult to sleep that night. She felt agitated and restless. Unsuccessfully, she tried to blame the heat.

The following day, she found it unusually hard to put on her perky persona for the customers. The hours passed slow as molasses. At six-thirty, Joyce looked at her and sighed.

“Willow, would you just go and do what you’re so eagerly awaiting to do. “

“I don’t really have to go for another hour…”

“Go. You’re a pain in my rear.”

Willow smiled and gave her a peck on the cheek on the way out.

She was so deep in thought on her way to Witches Lake that she was almost out of the woods before noticing that someone was already there. She stopped dead in her tracks as Tara resurfaced with a splash, flicking her hair back over her shoulders, walking out of the water with a blissful smile on her face. And nothing else.

Lust got Willow like a dagger in the pit of her stomach. A wave of panic followed. She’sagirlshe’sagirlshe’sagirlsostopit! But no thought could remain in Willow’s mind as the naked glory of Tara crouched unawares in front of Willow. In the redhead’s mind, the battle between lookawaylookaway and thank god she can’t see me behind these bushes, began.
The latter won, of course.

Tara squeezed excess water from her long hair. Willow found that something was pressing on her chest as she followed the rivulets of water down smooth neck, snowy shoulders and between rounded breasts.

Willow Rosemount wasn’t religious. Still, ohmygod, was the only word that went through her head at the sight. She hadn’t been this close to praying in years.

Her eyes kept chasing the streamlets. A feminine waist, deliciously rounded hips, ivory stomach almost untouched by the sun. And… Willow’s cheeks burned hot and there was an intense throbbing in her lower abdomen as the water reached the patch of light brown curls in the apex of Tara’s thighs. Willow shocked the hell out of her self by wondering what Tara’s sex would feel like against her fingers.

The blonde was crouching down to wash her clothes. Hardly daring to breathe for fear of exposure, Willow clung to every movement of Tara’s as the blonde moved with an ease that comes only from the supposed certainty of solitude which makes you loose self consciousness. There was nothing shy about Tara’s body language. And the only thing that stuttered was Willow’s lust hazed mind. She realized that the butterflies which moved in to her stomach sans invitation every time she was near Tara was a crush the size of the Milky Way and that’s what her body had been trying to tell her all along.

Tara rose from her crouching position and turned to face Willow. The wailing alarm signal of discovery that resounded in the redhead’s mind was turned off at the realization that the blonde merely intended to hang her wet clothes on a thick tree branch in front of her hiding place.

Tara’s limited access to food showed on her body, which told a tale that it was meant to look just a little different. However, it seemed impossible to Willow in that moment that anything could be more delicious than the sight in front of her. Having a girlish body herself, the drinking in of Tara’s womanly shape did nothing to quench her thirst. It just created a bigger one. Her eyes wanted to look closer, her lips wanted to touch and taste. She tried to imagine what the rose colored fullness of the blondes lips would taste like when kissed. Her eyes strayed towards the pink nipples, still hard from the cold water. She wanted to take one of them into her moth and suckle it like a baby. As Tara turned, images of pressing herself against her shapely backside, kissing her way up her spine flashed through Willow’s mind.

She was rudely awakened from her reverie when Tara turned again and stared right at Willow, unawares. With a pang of guilt, her green eyes looked straight into unsuspecting blue. Suddenly, she felt like a real shit for looking at Tara like that without her permission. Before finding the time to regret it, she silently stepped a few steps back through the soft moss and turned to walk back in a wide circle. She started to whistle Man of Constant Sorrow loudly and tunelessly, to alert Tara of her coming.

“W-Willow?”

“Yup, it’s me!” she hollered back.

“Could you just hang on for a moment there? I’m kind of n-naked…”

“Yup! Sure thing”

Willow had assumed that Tara had brought a change of clothes, since she was washing the other set. When the blonde called out to her, she stepped out of the foliage and desperately tried to avoid staring at Tara, wearing nothing but a pair of men’s shorts and the moist shirt clinging to her body in all the right places. Or wrong ones, if you tried not to stare… The redhead’s eye’s landed involuntarily on Tara’s breasts, clearly visible through the wet material. She decided on the spot to look no lower than Tara’s forehead for the rest of the evening.

“Sorry I’m not exactly decent, but I reckoned this would have time to dry off a bit before seven…”

“I can, you know, leave for a walk and come back later if you’re bothered. There’s plenty of really exiting plant life around here. All about exciting plant life, me. That’s why I’m here so early, because of the plant life…Yup. And a large frog colony over by the swamp, but I have frog fear, you know, so I’ll probably stay away from there, but just say the word and I can…”

Tara shook her head and smiled shyly.

“I’m ok as long as you are. We’re both girls, right?”

Willow felt disappointed that Tara saw her as harmless.

Well, what do you expect? She doesn’t think of girls that way, dummy…

But she was relieved that she could stay. She brought out the blanket and the fruit she had brought for them in lieu of dinner .

“You sure? I’ll drip on that…”

“No problem. This is old…” And how I wish I was that blanket…

Willow started out carefully trying to scan the territory:

“Tara? How come you and your family…travel…?”

“Why we’re bums, you mean?”

Tara said it levelly, without rancor.

“That’s not what I meant. I just wondered, how came you came driving this way? Where are you heading?”

Tara shrugged.

“Anywhere we can make a few bucks. Pa lost our farm after the big crash, so we didn’t really have anywhere to go. Had to leave in the middle of the night to escape the creditors.”

“Tara, that’s horrible! Have you lived on the road since then?”

“We lived at my cousin’s place for a while. She married a rich fellow from the next county who didn’t mind some cheap manual labor. But he got sick of us eventually. To tell you the truth, I was glad to get out of there. He’s not a nice man. And cousin Beth’s real religious. Ain’t nothing that’s not a sin to that woman. “

Tara smiled. Willow really wanted to do some sinning too when she did that…

“That’s why my daddy likes me to dress like this. He said that Beth’s husband used to l-look at me wrong and that made her upset. She said it was my fault, so Pa made me dress like a man. He says no one’ll look twice at a girl looking like this. I guess he’s afraid I’ll run off and leave him. Don’t know why he’s worried, though. What man would want a bum, except for another bum…” Tara smiled self deprecatingly at Willow and shrugged again.

“Well I guess he got that wrong, then…”

“Pardon me?” Tara shot her a confused look.

Willow became acutely embarrassed when she realized that she would have to explain herself.

How do you explain to someone that they’re the most beautiful thing you have ever seen? How to you tell someone casually that you expect to drop dead from the electric shock that goes through your system every time they touch you?

“I just mean that men will probably look at you anyway, since you’re really pretty and all…”

“T-thank y-ou.” Tara’s stutter was suddenly back with a vengeance.

Silence fell between them. Willow tried to find something else to say.

“And your mother? Is she on the road with you?”

“Ma died before we lost the farm. Just as well. Her family lived on that land for centuries.
It would have ruined her to loose it.”

“I’m sorry.” Willow felt like a prize idiot for bringing it up. She gently laid her hand comfortingly over Tara’s. Or at least she had intended it to be comfortingly. But it really just made her more worked up and physically aware of the other woman. The blonde looked her deeply in the eyes and Willow was seriously worried that she would swoon like an Austen heroine.

“Listen to me all self absorbed.” Tara looked embarrassed.

“What about you? Your accent isn’t from here, is it?”

Willow shook her head.

“My dad used to be a businessman. He bought a group of big companies down here and brought the family here to live. He thought they wouldn’t like jews here, so he changed our name to Rosemount. It’s Rosenberg, really. But as it turned out, that didn’t matter anyway. The companies went belly-up when the depression came. The diner is the only thing that survived. Ironic, since he didn’t even want that one, it just came with the package. Dad had to go back up north and take a low pay job at General Motors. Mum went with him. She’d be useless in the diner anyway. I’d be useless too without Joyce.”

“What did you do before the diner?”

“I was at Brunsford College, when dad lost our money. Since I was a girl, I couldn’t get a full scholarship. So I came back here to run the business, thinking I might make enough money eventually to go back to school. Didn’t happen that way… I guess no-one thought things would stay this bad.

“You were at college? They take female students down here?”

“I was the first female student to study engineering. Some of the boys in my class had a hard time with it. There was one guy called Warren Mears who kept making speeches on women’s sacred duty to take care of husband and home. I guess it just bugged him how he kept flunking exams when I made top of the class.”

“You were top of your class?” Tara looked at her with wide eyes.

Willow felt mortified that she had been caught boasting like that. She just nodded curtly and started picking nervously at the hem of her skirt.

“Is the diner named after you?”

“After me?”

Tara reached out and touched her hair with a tentative smile.

“Oh, right… No, it’s funny actually. It was called Red’s Diner when he bought it and it just cost too much to get a new sign. Red is really the grandfather of the former owner.”

“It sure is red, though…” Tara tugged gently at one of the red tresses.

“What’s it to you, Blondie?” Willow nudged her shoulder gently and playfully, feeling at once nervous and elated by Tara’s fingers in her hair.

“It’s beautiful…”

Color rose in Willow’s face at the compliment.

“I’m making you wet…”

Willow stared at the blonde in utter surprise before realizing that she was talking about moisture dripping from her sleeve onto Willow’s shirt.

“Come swim with me?” Tara urged impulsively.

“But I don’t have a swimming costume… And there might be frogs!”

“I’ll protect you.” Tara swore solemnly, placing her hand over her heart, causing Willow to break her promise not to look down on her chest.

“Well, if you promise to take care of me…”

When she started to undress, she felt at once both awkward and aroused. Naked. In the water. With Tara…

Tara politely turned her back and waded into the water ahead of her. Willow turned away from her not to be tempted to stare again. When Tara’s form was safely immersed in the deep lake, back turned to the shore, Willow hesitantly followed, frog fear temporarily over won by the enticing sight ahead of her. She sighed with pleasure as the cool water washed the sweat and kitchen smell away.

“Don’t you just love water?” Tara came swimming gracefully past her.

“Yes…” Willow managed to croak out as Tara’s body came within inches of hers.

She swam after her, forgetting to look for frogs, forgetting everything but the naked mermaid in front of her. They swam in companionable silence for a while, both casting tentative glances at each other. Eventually, they started to make their way out of the water.

That’s when Willow turned her head and saw a huge frog sitting on a moss clad stone just a yard away. She screamed like she had just seen the grim reaper. Tara came running back through the water and caught her in a firm embrace.

“It’s ok, sweetie, I’ve got you. What happened?” She caressed her soothingly and held her tight.

“Frog!” Willow managed to croak out, clinging to Tara like she was drowning.

“Don’t worry, darling, it’s gone now. See?” Tara pointed to the empty stone.

Willow nodded and tried to catch her breath. But she still trembled and refused to let go of Tara.

Gradually, as Willow calmed down, they became aware of the situation. Flesh against flesh, limbs entwined.

No one was sure who made the first move, but suddenly they were kissing. Passionately, sexually. Willow had never been kissed properly by anyone, let alone the one she desired. She found it difficult to remain standing, her body trembling from the sensations. Tara’s tongue felt like velvet in her mouth and she gasped with arousal when Tara’s chest pressed against her own. Her hands started to roam over Tara’s cool flesh of their own accord, knowing what places they wanted to touch.

A little voice in her told her that maybe she was behaving badly? After all, she was the one who had thrown herself at the blonde and maybe Tara would feel like Willow had made her do things she really didn’t want to?

“Is this wrong, Tara?” she murmured into the kiss, not wanting to break it off.

The blonde froze and immediately stepped back, leaving Willow cold and confused.

“I’m s-sorry. It was my fault.” Tara walked the last few yards up to the shore, shoulders tense. She picked her discarded shirt up from the ground.

Willow quickly ran after her and embraced her from behind, stopping her from getting dressed.

“I’m sorry, I didn’t mean it like that. I just threw myself at you and I’ve never kissed a woman before. Actually, I’ve never kissed anyone like that before and I just didn’t want to make you feel that I made you do something wrong.” Willow held Tara tight, desperately hoping she could make this right again.

“We live in a world were children starve to death and good people live in the streets like animals and you’re worried about kissing being wrong? This is the only t-thing that hasn’t felt wrong to me in a long time, Willow.”

“I know…”

She turned Tara around and made her look up. Then she kissed her again, tenderly, to make her point.

“You mean…?”

“I mean.”

The truthfulness to Tara’s words was obvious to her as she knelt on the blanket and wordlessly asked Tara to join her. This was the only thing that really made sense…

She pulled Tara on top of herself and gasped at the soft beckoning of the blonde’s body. It made her feel things she had only read about in forbidden books her mother never knew about. She moaned lustfully as Tara’s full lips explored her shoulders and her neck. Cupping a soft breast in her hand, she felt a jolt of excitement at Tara’s intense reaction to the touch. They kept kissing, drinking each other up. She felt overheated and tight like a bowstring, craving to be released. Tara moved slightly, so that her leg ended up between Willow’s and their centers touched briefly. Willow pushed her body into Tara’s wanting more contact all the time.

Tara’s hands controlled Willow’s body like an obedient marionette that danced under the puppet master’s skillful direction. She had once believed that she desired Alexander Harris, but she wasn’t sure why now, her sweat mixing with that of this dreamlike apparition moving on top of her, the last sunlight blazing like a halo around her head. The redhead took a deep breath to inhale the scent of the mane of blonde hair surrounding her face. She filled her hands with it, pulling Tara’s head slightly to the side to access the long, creamy neck, sucking on the sweet smelling neck ohmygodthankyou not caring if she left a mark, Tara moving down, brushing one of her breasts with her lips, Willow almost screaming with the intensity, yesyes please more? Her nipples encircled by pink lips, the pleasure making her shake and pull the blonde closer. She needed to taste her too, gently changing their position so that they faced each other and bending her head down to kiss Tara’s breast. She heard the other woman’s breath become labored and saw her throw her head back and surrendering to her lips. Tara nudged her hips closer to Willow and tentatively let her hand slide down the lithe body and place a feather light caress on the inside of a white thigh making the redhead move closer to her hand, urging it on. Willow felt the anticipation turn almost to pain as the softest of hands touched her sex so gently that she wasn’t sure it had happened if it hadn’t been for the tiny arrows of pleasure shooting through her body. She felt no trepidation as the hand come nearer again, she just wanted as much as she could get, just deeper perhaps? And definitely more…

yes

“Yes” she murmured and pulled Tara’s tongue into her mouth again as the hand became bolder and ran it’s fingers along her folds. Willow pushed her thigh into Tara’s center, eliciting a gasp and a fiery response from the body next to her. Tara’s caressing became more confident by the minute and Willow couldn’t have stopped moving against her hand if she wanted to. She bit Tara’s lips and raked her nails along her back, intensifying the rhythm of their passion.

Just when she thought they would be moving against each other for ever and the tension in her belly would only get worse, she felt a wave crest within her, making her sound as if she was sobbing, clinging to Tara like she was afraid of sinking.

She opened her eyes to see her new lover raising her fingers to her mouth, smelling and then tasting her. As Tara licked her fingers with curiosity and then delight, Willow felt her satiety turn back into desire at the sensuality of the act and of the smoldering look on Tara’s face as she took the taste in her mouth.

Willow wanted to make Tara feel it too. She pushed the blonde back against the blanket and caressed her way down her curves, feeling pressure building up between them. Tara’s thighs felt like velvet against her palm and she suddenly felt she had to bend down to kiss her there. A carving from a book on ancient Japan flashed before her eyes. Would Tara like that, or would she think it perverted? It felt so right… She made the split decision to follow her instincts and let her lips brush over Tara’s sex, her tongue darting out quickly to taste her. The blonde become very still, before burying her fingers in the hair at the nape of her neck and shoot her a quick, hungry look. The redhead lowered her head between Tara’s legs and closed her lips around her. Gradually and instinctively, she found the way to move her tongue and lips to make Tara’s body tremble. She felt deliciously wicked for taking another woman’s essence in her mouth. This morning, even the dream of getting to kiss the blonde seemed unattainable.

She sensed an increased urgency in the blonde’s subtle movements against her lips and responded. It was Tara’s turn to shudder. The redhead lovingly kissed the blonde’s sex one more time, before edging back up her body to lie spent in her lover’s arms.

They lay like that for a long time, kissing and talking about anything that came to mind, snuggled tightly together. No one wanted to leave, even though the sun was setting behind the horizon. Willow saw Tara cast a glance up into the darkening sky with a frown on her face.

“Do you have to go?” she heard the trepidation in her own voice.

“Don’t care.” Tara answered firmly and let her tongue brush over Willow’s lips.

“But your father…?”

“Don’t care.” The blonde repeated, intensifying the kiss.

“Do you want me to touch you like you touched me?” Tara breathed in her ear, moving her hand slowly down Willow’s body.

Willow nodded, suddenly very awake. Tara put her hand on Willow’s sex and felt how ready she was. She wasted no time teasing.

Willow realized why Tara had seemed to enjoy this so much and why someone had bothered to make an instruction manual with engravings. It didn’t take Tara long to figure out where the redhead’s sweet spots where. Willow crashed over the edge with an intensity that could never be matched by what she had felt touching herself.

Unwillingly, they gathered their clothes up and started the long walk home, aware that it must in the middle of the night. They walked still embracing closely, both women with the same hotly blushing cheeks and sated smiles on their faces.

Tara stopped at the crossroads, kissing Willow deeply, lingering, putting off the farewell

Suddenly a bright white light blinded them, as Tara’s father’s truck came skidding round the corner.

Willow felt paralyzed as the man jumped out of the driver seat and started to shout at them

“You get your hands off her, you perverted little harlot!! You will burn in hell for seducing my daughter with your filth!” His face was menacingly close to Willow’s, twisted up and deep red with anger.

“Get away from her…” Tara’s face was ashen and the knuckles of her tight fists chalky white as she threatened her father.

“Be quiet WHORE!” The dull sound of his fist impacting with her face made Willow’s stomach turn as Tara’s father roughly pushed her out of the way and dragged her bleeding lover into the truck that she cursed herself for making Alexander Harris fix.

“TARA!!” She screamed helplessly as Tara’s father revved the engine up and drove away.

She started running after the truck.

“DON’T GO! STAY WITH ME!! DON’T LEAVE WITH THEM!!” The car disappeared too quickly for Willow to be able to decide if Tara had heard her or not.

She half-stumbled, and half walked back to her home above the diner.

The redhead got so far as the edge of the property with the shotgun before Joyce came running out of her house in her dressing gown to stop her physically with the weight of her body.

She spent the rest of the night pacing, sobbing and throwing things before falling into a fitful sleep just before morning.

Chapter 4: Of Redemption and Pie

She woke up at seven, judging from the scent that Joyce had started without her in the diner. As she stiffly walked down the stairs blinking the sleep out of her red rimmed eyes, she heard Joyce gasp an “Ohmygod” and snapped her head up to see a broken faced Tara, black and blue on the right side of her face, eye swollen shut, coming through the door.

“Yes.” The blonde said simply and put a ragged canvas bag on the floor.

Willow half carried her out into the kitchen, where Joyce stuffed her with aspirin and fussed over her with cups of tea. Tara shook her head at food and Willow suspected it was too painful for her to eat. But she still insisted on trying to make Willow sit in her lap and kiss her until Willow forced her to bed, afraid it might just be half as bad as it looked. The doctor come that afternoon and reassured her that Tara would be fine.

Late that evening, Tara’s father came to the diner, raging and threatening with everything between heaven and earth. Willow had anticipated it, so Charles Gunn the chef, who was not a small man by any means, and Liam the local sheriff was waiting for him.
In the middle of the night, Tara’s brother Donnie showed up, bellowing outside the window about the horrid punishment that would befall Tara if she didn’t go with him. Tara just scooted closer to Willow who tightened her spooning hug and waited for him to leave, so they could go back to sleep.

The following morning, Tara got up at six and started work in the diner’s kitchen like she had never done anything else.


THREE YEARS LATER.

Tara was in the kitchen making some of her now famous pecan pie and humming to herself. Willow walked past her and lovingly caressed her shapely hips. She and Joyce had made it their labor of love to feed Tara back to a healthy weight again. The blonde’s rosy cheeks and womanly curves underneath the raspberry colored dress bore witness to their success. A young man with a moony look on his face was sitting by the bar nursing a cup of coffee. He was just of many whom had crushed on Tara since she came to town. Willow had gotten used to it, but she still gave herself the privilege of giving them bad service and lukewarm coffee. Most of the townspeople realized the nature of the relationship between them, but some would just never take a hint…

Tara walked out into the back yard to leave food for the bums that used to sleep in the shed out back sometimes. Willow understood why Tara had to feed and shelter these men and never said a word, even though she secretly kept a pistol in the top drawer of her bedside table.

Since the blonde’s arrival, Willow had a lot more time on her hands. She was even teaching science subjects every Friday at the local school. Mr. Giles, the school teacher, was only grateful for the help. He was more of a humanities and language man anyway.

And it had been discovered that Tara could sing. Very well. She had just come back from a three week tour of the state doing background vocals with the Carter Family. Willow had been so proud she thought she would break something when she had seen Tara on stage. The great Jeanette Carter had told Tara she should be doing it full time. But she had just shaken her head and said she was looking forward to going home.

When the blonde walked back in, Willow caught her up in an embrace and pressed her against the counter top. Tara laughed and kissed her, before being rudely interrupted by a tiny hand tugging on the hem of her skirt.

“I want pie, mummy! Please?”

“And you just might get some pie, too, but not until after dinner.” Tara picked the chocolate colored cherub up and kissed him on the forehead.

“Now, go help uncle Gunn in the yard for a while.” Willow lovingly stroked the boy’s head, before he ran out the door.

Through the door they could hear Gunn starting a lecture on The Perfect Barbecue.

Isaac had just come to them one night from god knows where. There had been a big storm brewing, when they had heard a baby cry in the garden. Someone had probably left him there, or he had managed to walk into their back yard on his own. Either way, Tara hadn’t even considered not keeping him. Willow had been a little concerned that someone might be looking for him, so she had made the local police ask around. But no-one knew anything about him, so Willow and Tara was now the mothers of a two-year-old.

Of course, they had had a visit from the Klan. Willow had heard them coming and had waited with her father’s huge moose hunting gun and a lot of ammunition. Tara had been up on Riley’s farm, helping him with a sick cow. She had seen the fire from a distance. Like a Fury from hell, she had come galloping at breakneck speed on old Butler without reins or saddle, just carrying a thick leather whip, which she had made skilful use of. Joyce had taken the boy across the street to her house during the ensuing confusion. The following morning, Mr. Snyder had a mark on his face suspiciously like a whiplash. They didn’t come back after that.

“He has your brains” Tara used to say. Isaac was a very bright boy. And beautiful.

“And your looks” Willow used to add. She never grew tired of just watching Tara…

Yesterday, they had had their first argument. Tara had discovered that Willow had been able to put a fair amount of money to the side, kept in an old coffee jar under the bed to protect it from the instability of the economy.

“I want to try to buy back your farm eventually”, Willow had explained when Tara had asked her about the money.

To her immense surprise, Tara had been angry.

“It’s just a damn piece of land, Willow! This is my home now, I don’t need any of that! I’m not that person anymore, don’t you see? I wouldn’t dream of letting you waste your life on some farm! You’re getting out of here. You’re going back to college, to make something of yourself!”

Butler wasn’t the only horse in the neighborhood healed by Tara and most people would insist on giving her money for her help. Tara wanted Willow to use that money, and the money in the jar, for school fees.

Willow had refused point blank. There was just no way she was going to go off and leave Tara and Isaac to fend for themselves, spending their hard earned money.
Besides, that didn’t matter anymore, she was happy. Just plain happy. But Tara wouldn’t believe it.

There had been some door slamming and shouting. Tara had shouted at her that she was wasting herself here. And Willow had said that so was she, so maybe she should be the one getting out.

Finally, after several hours they had agreed how to use the money. They were going to start a college fund for Isaac.

When the agreement was reached, Willow had bolted the door to the kitchen.

“No more fighting, Tara.” She walked slowly towards the blonde.

“No more” Tara whispered in her ear as she started to unbutton her shirt.

Willow showed Tara that everything she needed was right here. Tara had dragged her up the stairs half naked, since they where getting flour all over themselves, leaning against the kitchen counter.

Tara had pinned her hands over her head and looked at her.

“Your know I want you to stay, really, don’t you?” Willow nodded and left a mark on Tara’s neck, kissing her passionately.

“I’m not going anywhere.”

Willow tore a few buttons on Tara’s favorite dress, but the blonde didn’t care. She was too distracted by the redheads tongue following her tearing hands.

“And you’re through traveling. No more.”

“No more…” Tara moaned as Willow was making her way down. She entwined her fingers in Willow’s red curls and pulled her almost painfully close.

Luckily for them, Isaac was a sound sleeper…

When the first sunlight came in through the window Tara was resting half on top of Willow, still overheated from their nocturnal exercises. Willow raked her fingernails along her back and smiled at the almost purring sound that Tara made when she did it.

“It was a crazy thing to do, really, wasn’t it?”

“What?” Willow looked down on her with raised eyebrows.

“Inviting a perfect stranger to come and live with you like that.”

“You weren’t a stranger. I knew you in the biblical sense.”

Tara laughed and placed a light kiss on Willow’s shoulder.

“Besides, you were just as crazy, coming to live with me on the spur of the moment like that.”

“It wasn’t on the spur of the moment. I knew I had to have you from the first moment I saw you, standing behind that counter in that transparent dress.”

“Transparent? You bitch. You’ve never told me that.”

“And why would I want to spoil my fun like that?” Tara looked up at her with a mock confused expression.

“Anyway. It worked out ok, didn’t it?”

“I think it worked out a little more than ok, Willow Rosenberg!” Tara turned and kissed her.

“Yes. Heaps of more. And not all lesbians die at the end of the story, do they?”

“They certainly don’t.” Tara said contentedly, snuggling closer to the redhead.

The End.
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby Reallybigpineapple » Tue Sep 19, 2006 6:09 am

Sorry, guys, hit the submit button and forgot to add the feedback...
So here goes, better lte than never, eh?

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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby PancakesinBellies » Tue Sep 19, 2006 6:41 am

This was great. I enjoyed it immensely.

Truly awesome. :)
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby Boadecia » Tue Sep 19, 2006 6:49 am

*trembling lip* thats....thats it? It was wonderful! But but but but....*trembling lip*
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby Reallybigpineapple » Tue Sep 19, 2006 7:07 am

Yup, that's it. I'm actually quite proud that I've written something that short. Short is not my forte, so good for me!
Too short? Or am I missing something?
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby willohand » Tue Sep 19, 2006 7:59 am

That was more than just smut. It was passionate and sexy and steamy and dreamy and for a moment scary but you did it with such care. thank you for this. So when is the next fanfic from you coming?
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby db » Tue Sep 19, 2006 8:40 am

That was beautiful... the writing rich and descriptive, the story well rounded, the characters developed and believable... and the nekid bits were, ahem, very nicely done as well *clears throat and blushes*.

I believe that your 'short story' deserves an A+ (plus a large serving of blackberry pie with vanilla ice cream on top).

thank you.

I loved it.

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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby Thianne » Tue Sep 19, 2006 11:58 am

well, wow! first of all, i loved it. i really liked the setting, which, if i have to be honest, reminded me a little of fried green tomatoes....but much more lesbian, much more descriptive and much more satisfying. and, of course, with our beloved willow and tara....

i felt for willow when she did that absurd gaffe about tara's hands....and i felt for tara when she was soo poor that she had to lie and say that she had already eaten.

i loved the part where they were making love....cause it was so beautifully written! it was sensual, and wet, and hot....wow!

of course, i loved the ending. two happy lesbians in a diner.....and neither of them dies! that's just about the perfect ending. i think i should probably find myself a woman, and buy me a diner....i would probably be very happy :hmm yes, i should.

anyway, it was a great story. i wouldn't mind a sequel, to be honest, but works equally well as a stand-alone piece.

Lovely, good job!
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby BigBlueEyes » Tue Sep 19, 2006 2:56 pm

I loved it, so awesome! :pinky You get the pink elephant because I love it! Looking forward to more from you!
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby ceridwen » Tue Sep 19, 2006 3:06 pm

Very sweet, very hot and just reaaally nice all around :bow

Definitely reminded me of Fried green tomatoes, which is good cuz i love that movie :D

And a sequel definitely wouldnt hurt :p


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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby WillowRulez » Tue Sep 19, 2006 4:59 pm

“Transparent? You bitch. You’ve never told me that.”
“And why would I want to spoil my fun like that?”

Haha, I could quote the whole update but that would be just crazy.
Kinda sad to see it end already but it ended on such a great note that I cant stop smiling.
So cute with them finding Isaac and living together.. and I cant forget the smut :smash
Thanks for sharing this lovely story with us.
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby taralicious » Tue Sep 19, 2006 8:02 pm

RBP,
Yay for Willow and Tara being covered in flour, see how I subliminally influenced you there, planting that seed.
I'm one of the guys who would receive bad service and stale coffee as I'd moon over Tara and want to plant my seed in her.
Maybe if they wanted another kid, I could offer my services.
The story taken now as a whole has a very novel quality about it.
you have a way with conveying the emotions and the spirit of the time without it becoming like a dry recitation of historical facts.
That was the appeal of both the book and film adaptation of "Fried Green Tomatoes" as they portrayed these two people who found each other in the midst of degredation, misery, and squalor.
Circumstances had robbed them of a great many things but drawn together they found that when deconstructed down to your very soul, all you need for a full and satisfying life can be found in another person.
The scene at the lake was so beautifully written that I had tears in my eys as well as a throbbing in my jeans.
Evocative of a bygone era, this is cinemtatic in quality and should be made as such.
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby JustSkipIt » Wed Sep 20, 2006 4:54 pm

Hey RBP,
I didn't even realize you'd updated again let alone completed the story. How wonderful. I just reread FGT after you started this one. Got me in the mood I guess. I love the way you describe Willow's initial guilty lusting and then the seamlessness and curiousity of their joining. They seem so incredibly natural about it that it's just beautiful. And I'm glad that you didn't drag it out but had Tara come right back. Isaac is a nice addition to the story.

Now if you'd just update Butterfly...

Thank you.
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby spells42 » Thu Sep 21, 2006 4:20 pm

RBP
What a pleasure to read this story! Yes, it was short, but it was complete: you gave the characters of W &T depth, set the scene so well it was like watching a movie, and gave us a great story. And boy was it HOT! I confess I read and re-read the bit down by the lake a number of times. :blush Plus, bonus happy ending - I always like that.

I was confused by Tara just saying "yes' when she returned to the diner, until I read on and remembered Willow shouting out 'stay with me' when Tara's dad hauled her away. Very neat.

thanks so much.

Like JustSkipIt, I'd be really happy to see the Butterfly pair come to a similarly happy conclusion.
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby Willowtree252 » Thu Sep 21, 2006 5:25 pm

:pinky I love this story you are suce a wonderful writer can,t wait for another :kitty
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby Thianne » Thu Sep 21, 2006 6:27 pm

yes, i would like to see Butterfly updated too...it's one of my favourite stories even if i probably never left you feedback :blush sorry about that.

but please, please continue writing it :pray :pray :pray
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby badkitty » Tue Sep 26, 2006 6:41 pm

RBP:

That was just lovely! Thank you for sharing it with us. I especially loved the part where Willow was watching Tara washing her clothes, all nekkid. And then of course the part right after that part, with all the nekkid swimming, and then of course the part right after that one, which was yummy indeed. I have this thing, where I know I'm reading excellent facfic (smutty parts in particular) when my heartbeat gets really loud, and my mouth goes dry. There was a lot of that going on, reading Red's Diner.

Uhm, maybe now that you're done with this story, you could maybe sort of have some time to update Butterfly maybe? A little? [insert batting eyelashes emoticon here]

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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby hin768 » Thu Sep 28, 2006 2:04 am

I loved it.

Like others have already said, you really gave the characters depth. I am a huge fan of FGT also and definately had that in the back of my mind whilst reading this.

Fantastic - now I'm off to check out your other stories :)
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby PancakesinBellies » Thu Sep 28, 2006 5:58 am

This is just a great story. I know that it really addresses some heavy-type issues (poverty, racism, child abuse, etc) but it feels like a lot of fun at the same time. I really enjoyed it a lot, especially the interactions between Tara and Wilow (and Joyce in a peripheral sort of way). I hope that we see more stories (and updates *hint hint*) from you soon, since you're on such a role lately!
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Re: New story: Red's Diner

Postby Artemis » Sat Sep 30, 2006 8:39 am

How sweet :blush Not to mention hot - Willow and Tara certainly didn't waste the opportunity to get to know each other 'Biblically' :lol Wow! Funny... if only the Bible did have parts like that ;-) I liked the bonds of family and friendship that were shown, the way not just Willow but everyone at the diner rallied around when Tara needed them, and saw off her odious 'family'.

And the ending was, as I said, so sweet... the way Willow and Tara found this sort of equilibrium where they're really, truly happy, even though just running a diner isn't what either of them expected out of life. I like how they resolved their argument that way - recognising that, while there are other goals they might have the chance to pursue, they have the chance to just be together, and that's what's really making them happy. And that twist on the beginning of the story was glorious :D Transparent indeed :drool
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