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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby SithLordWiccan » Thu Feb 23, 2006 6:45 pm

I can't believe I forgot to leave feedback for Chapter 2. The smut must have melted my brain. I guess nothing too important was damaged.

Anyways, good job. I can see that I'm gonna like this.

Also, I printed out Ubercon, and will read it this weekend. :)

Also also...I GOT MAIL! :D!

I sent off a message and got a response. Just sent off a story suggestion, too.
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby taralicious » Fri Feb 24, 2006 12:39 am

Sally,
This smut-filled session of Willow and Tara on the Warrior Board is the stuff that wet dreams are made of.
Your descriptions and usage of language to put names to intimate body parts adds a level of intimnacy to their lovemaking that it seems we are vicariously watching as well.
Tara leaning over to hypnotize Willow with her bounteous cleavage is enough to make a dead man, or woman cum.
There should be a new series commisioned on the forthcoming CW network called "The Days and Nights of Uber-Smut."
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby Boadecia » Fri Feb 24, 2006 12:50 am

dear...god....its almost too much my poor ticker (and other areas)....almost ;)
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby Artemis » Fri Feb 24, 2006 12:54 am

Mmm :drool Tara's developed into quite the vixen - Anya would be proud :D And Willow, with her rehearsed lascivious leer, managed to be cute as well sultry :lol But Tara's definitely got the upper hand in teasing Willow to distraction at the moment - though I doubt that'll last forever, Willow's quite ingenious after all.

(I do have one practical query: does Willow have two computers (quite likely), one of which Tara was using to post, or were they taking turns logging in on the one machine to post the UberSmut intro?)
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby JustSkipIt » Sat Feb 25, 2006 8:49 am

Chris wrote:
(I do have one practical query: does Willow have two computers (quite likely), one of which Tara was using to post, or were they taking turns logging in on the one machine to post the UberSmut intro?)
What an excellent question. :evil
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby FineyMcFine » Mon Feb 27, 2006 5:27 am

Hey everyone - these are some individual replies, plus a general one since a few people had the same question about whether Willow had two computers or one, were they in the same room, what was the time flow. I realized when so many folks had that question, that I didn't make it completely clear - my bad!

Did Willow have two computers? (and a note about the timeline from Part 1 to Part 2) So, Part 2 picks up immediately after Part 1 left off. Willow clicking the submit button was right after she posted that things were about to get NC-17. That's why Tara said "You seem pretty confident that things are about to get smutty" - that was in response to Willow's NC-17 comment. It was clear in my mind, but alas, not clear in the written word - I forget that you, unlucky readers, do not live in my mind. (Or maybe that makes you lucky!)

And originally I had imagined that they were both using Willow's laptop in her bedroom, but figured upon reflection after all those questions that the logging in and logging out would get onerous, so I hereby decree that Willow, the amazon_hacker, has both a desktop and a laptop in her bedroom and they were each logged into the board on a different computer. :)

How much time has passed? (and a note about the timeline from Part 1 to Part 2) Ceci was the only person to ask this one directly, but I figured it was worth clarifying for everyone. Willow and Tara met at UberCon '05 on July 17, 2005 and they posted the UberSmut project (and then did the deed) on February 14, 2006. So almost exactly seven months has gone by. They've had several months of their relationship, which I figured was enough time that they had started having sex, but not so much time that they had done everything in all kinds of different positions and situations, as it were...

On to the individual replies!

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JustSkipIt

Hey Debra, 6:21 in the morning is indeed a little early for smut (on a workday, anyway). Or to be reading smut, instead of living it. Anyway, what am I trying to say? Yes, this was El Smuttola - and it was by design for Part 2; here's why. I figured that with this story being called UberSmut, it made sense to pretty much jump right in. Not every chapter will be devoid of foreplay or afterplay, but this one was.

LOL about her third hand was where. Very humorous and coincidental that you say that! That characteristic of fan fiction may rear its head in a later chapter. My beta keeps urging me to describe less about what they're actually doing - the earlier draft of this chapter probably read like a technical manual (Insert Hand A into Moist Channel B) before I edited it. Heh.

And kissing. Well yeah, they kiss a lot - just not in this little scene! :)

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mole

Hee hee, I may have to rethink my posting schedule, since what I'm aiming for is to post every Tuesday at 7am. (I might fall behind anyway, so it could be moot.) But I suppose for maximum smut enjoyment, before work might not be the best time for readers in the Pacific-Eastern time zones, just because most often people need to go to work and stuff.

You know, my partner mentioned that "Take-Charge Tara" was something from canon, but I don't think I had heard of that phrase before. Is it from a specific episode? And yeah, I definitely wanted to make it clear what was going on (without having it read like a how-to manual). But the smut that's hard to follow will be making an appearance later on in the narrative. Heh.

Thanks Michelle!

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Candleshoe

Dear dear, I'm sorry if I contributed to ruining your lunch, Candleshoe - I certainly didn't mean to force you to spit it out! You're the third person so far to mention how it's very clear what's going on - I'm really glad to hear it! The mental gymnastics that can sometimes result when reading girl-on-girl smut fanfic are definitely something I was trying to avoid. I was trying to walk a line between very clear about who was doing what to whom without it being clinical, as my beta likes to say.

They definitely like and love each other. I see both of them in the Uberverse as having been kind of lonely before they met each other, despite having good friends in their lives, because they had never been in love before.

I hope it went well wiping yourself down, Candleshoe. My goodness, you Brits have interesting lunch hours :devil

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tarebear

Hey Ceci! Don't fret about not leaving feedback. I fear that I have led some of you astray - there won't actually be 21 total smutfics; I think that I would probably self-destruct or melt into a puddle or get taken away to jail for being a total perv. I don't think my brain could handle writing that much smut, in other words. But there will definitely be at least 9 smutty interludes between Willow and Tara.

Hee hee, TaraBladder and WillowColon will make an appearance one of these days, maybe if I need a mental break in between writing UberSmut chapters. Writing smut is both easy and hard, I'm finding - easy because you know what's going to happen and where it will end up, but hard in finding ways to say the same thing in different ways. Over and over again.

Regarding time passage, they met at UberCon '05 in mid-July of 2005, and then this UberSmut posting and interlude happened on February 16, 2006. So almost exactly seven months has gone by. Shy Tara definitely left the building. In my mind, she wasn't really shy throughout the early parts of their physical relationship anyway. I always think of her shyness as being something that manifests in social situations with many people (or even just one person) but when she's on familiar territory with someone who she definitely knows is into her, she behaves with confidence and assurance. Not that she was Take-Charge Tara from the get-go, but she wasn't necessarily a shrinking violet either. I see them as having been pretty equal.

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kisstheviolets

Yo brandy, we don't want to mince words here. :D I figured let's call a spade a spade - UberSmut is just that - smut. The dearth of smut in UberCon '05 sort of prompted me to let these two girls get some, already. And yeah, it's true that sometimes in real life you just get right down to business, as it were. Since they have been together for about seven months, at this point, I figured it wasn't out of the realm of the realistic. And yeah, it's definitely a leap of trust to tell someone exactly what you want. Maybe less so if you've been with them for a while, but then again, maybe not.

Hee hee, I hope that you either enjoyed or are enjoying UberCon '05. I know the Xena business might be a turnoff to some readers. It's not a crossover, though, just uber - Willow and Tara are fans of the show, not living in the Xenaverse (because it's kind of a lesbian-appreciated show, teehee). And I tried to write it so it didn't matter if you had ever seen Xena or not - there are many more Buffy jokes than Xena ones, I think/hope.

Anyway, yay for solving the heating crisis on the east coast!

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GayNow

Carleen, thanks for pimping UberCon'05 and I'm glad you enjoyed part 2 of UberSmut! :)

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watson

And watty, thanks to you also for pimpin' UberCon '05! Yay about hearing again that the Xena stuff is in the background - that's really what I was hoping for because I didn't want to exclude or alienate readers who hadn't seen Xena.

wattypants, smut!!! I'm surprised that you of all people didn't mark the date in UberCon '05 and then match it up to the date of the post for the UberSmut kickoff, and calculated that it was six months and twenty-five days since they first met? It's about seven months after UberCon '05, yeah - they are comfortable enough with each other to have this sort of sexplay, but they haven't been together for so long that they've done it all and would rather just watch television. :lol

Tee hee about learning HAWT!

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Irene73

How wonderful that you have made up a smut dance! I'll certainly be performing this one tonight for Mrs. McFine. Yick, milk in the coffee, you poor thing? (I drink my coffee black, so while I feel your pain, I also only empathize rather than sympathizing.) I hope that UberSmut provided a nice balance to your morning jolt of joe. And yeah, I know what you mean about Tara with the creaminess. Heh.

I totally agree with you that conveying emotion, passion, desire, love - AND what is going on with hands, mouths, bodies, moist channels - is tough. Totally LOL about the VCR instructions. Thank you so much for saying that it was a marvelous job - I am nervous about it. I haven't written as much smut as some others, and planning on doing so over and over again, well...yeah. So thank you.

Part 3 will be posted at 7:00am on Tuesday. That's my desired schedule - once a week every Tuesday. I might have to skip a week here and there depending on the "first-draft muse's" schedule, but part 3 is definitely going to be posted tomorrow.

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SithLordWiccan

Hey, the girls told me that they heard from you at their email address, by the way, and that you have a great idea! ;)

Well, you didn't forget to leave feedback for Chapter 2 - you left it, didn't you? I'm all about leaving feedback when you have time and when you remember. No worries. I hope that your brain is okay. I'm glad you liked the smut! And I hope you're liking UberCon '05, as well! And yay that you got mail - those two are good correspondents.

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Boschi

Hee hee! I'm glad that it was good procrastination, Boschi. Let me know if any smut ended up in (or on) your grant proposal. I hear that your grant was funded for another year, right? Congratulations!!! Thank you so much - and yay for the return of wiccanbard and the rest.

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Trom DeGrey

Hey Trom, no worries on not leaving feedback - thank you so much for letting me know that you read it, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Well, not quite 21 smutty stories, but at least 9. The 21 stories will make an appearance, though, in some form or fashion. :D

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WillowRulez

Welcome back to you as well, and thanks for waiting for the sequel! Hee hee, they are confident now, yes. They weren't always, though - not a spoiler, just a hint (there will be a little flashback a little later on.) We will meet the others for sure, probably not right away, but definitely eventually. Thank you!

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Emms

Hee hee, hi Emms! Thanks for reading sweetie!

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dorksrcool

Hee hee, thanks Amy - so glad to hear this was some of the best 'smut' you've ever read. Thank you! And what potty mouth? I must have missed it when you edited the post... Never apologize for a potty mouth, I swear like a sailor sometimes. ;)

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Guppy

Hey Guppy, I hope that you enjoy UberCon '05! And I'm very glad you thought this was hot smut. Updates on this story will hopefully be weekly, although I might switch to biweekly depending on how the rest of the first draft goes (about halfway through). Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed!

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TuesBlu

TuesBlu, hope you didn't hurt yourself when you fell off the chair. No more droopy - they're back! I don't think I would be able to survive writing 21 smutfics, but they will appear in some way, shape, or form. UberSmut is definitely a different...genre than UberCon '05, yeah. :D

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taralicious

Blayne, I'm glad to hear that this fic induces nocturnal emissions. Heh. I'm glad to hear that it is like you are watching them - I worry sometimes that using the exact right name for each body part is something that I do too much. But if it created a clear visual picture, then yay! And LOL about the Days and Nights of UberSmut on the CW. That would be faboo!

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Boadecia

Ooh, take care of that ticker! And other areas, too. :lol

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Artemis

Yes, Tara is definitely quite the vixen - I think she had it in her all along, don't you? You have to know that is Willow was going to leer, she would practice it in a mirror for sure, eh? I think that Tara will retain the upper hand for the next chapter (because I wrote it, heh) but after that, all bets are kind of off and it's anybody's game. Willow is indeed ingenious and I have no doubt she will come up with some fun stuff for Tara.

Your practical query is a very good question, so I wrote an answer for everyone to read, and I'll copy and paste it here too since you asked the question in the thread.

Did Willow have two computers? So, Part 2 picks up immediately after Part 1 left off. Willow clicking the submit button was right after she posted that things were about to get NC-17. That's why Tara said "You seem pretty confident that things are about to get smutty" - that was in response to Willow's NC-17 comment. It was clear in my mind, but alas, not clear in the written word - I forget that you, unlucky readers, do not live in my mind. (Or maybe that makes you lucky!)

And originally I had imagined that they were both using Willow's laptop in her bedroom, but figured upon reflection after all those questions that the logging in and logging out would get onerous, so I hereby decree that Willow, the amazon_hacker, has both a desktop and a laptop in her bedroom and they were each logged into the board on a different computer. :)
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby mole » Mon Feb 27, 2006 6:13 am

Hi Sally,

Oh no, don't change your schedule (unless it can't be avoided). I mean, sure, it's a bit tough to get to work on time but reading a little smut in the morning sure gets the motor running .

SallyMcFine wrote:You know, my partner mentioned that "Take-Charge Tara" was something from canon, but I don't think I had heard of that phrase before. Is it from a specific episode?


To be honest, I'm not sure if it's from canon, but I have read the phrase in several fics. Hmmm...research is in order (where's Willow when you need her?).

Looking forward to tomorrow's update,
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby Candleshoe » Mon Feb 27, 2006 7:50 am

Re: Take Charge Tara

I did what I always do when I don't know the answer to something: I googled . All the links led to this site or some others that we know and love. All went to fanfic, and none to went to quotes from an actual episode. I think therefore that it must be a phrase which was inspired by actual events rather than canon!

I would love to be wrong though, and I am certainly not as word-perfect on the scripts as some here, so there is a good chance that my results are based on inaccurate research...
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby SithLordWiccan » Mon Feb 27, 2006 9:54 am

SallyMcFine wrote:Hey, the girls told me that they heard from you at their email address, by the way, and that you have a great idea!


I'm glad they like it. I hope they like the other one I sent. Here's hoping that they do something good with them.

SallyMcFine wrote:Well, you didn't forget to leave feedback for Chapter 2 - you left it, didn't you? I'm all about leaving feedback when you have time and when you remember. No worries.


Yeah, I did. But it was more "feedback to your feedback" than it was "feedback to the story".

SallyMcFine wrote:I hope that your brain is okay.


That depends on how "okay" you thought it was to begin with.

SallyMcFine wrote:I'm glad you liked the smut! And I hope you're liking UberCon '05, as well!


Thanks.
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby FineyMcFine » Tue Feb 28, 2006 5:02 am

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Title: UberSmut
Part: 3
Author: SallyMcFine
Feedback: Let the floodgates of feedback open, let the waters of your comments gush forth!
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: All disclaimers apply.
Thanks: Corey Cook from Down the Rabbit-Hole for the title graphic. And to my beta, you sweet thang. Thanks also to all y'all who are reading.
Setting: Contemporary. The characters all frequent an online message board called The Warrior, The Bard, and the Bad Wardrobe. This is a sequel to UberCon ’05.

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Part 3 – Submission

Three days later the girls hadn’t seen each other since Valentine's Day. They were both in their junior years of college, and their schedules were packed with requirements for their majors. They usually could make time to see each other, but this week had been particularly busy. Tara was looking forward to the weekend; she and Willow planned to spend the entire time together studying…and doing whatever else comes to mind.

As if on cue, the phone rang.

"Will you get that, Tara?" Anya called out from the bathroom, where she was putting the finishing touches on her makeup. Xander sat on the couch, waiting for her. He and Tara had been making small talk, although Tara's mind kept wandering.

"Sure!" she said, and picked up the phone.

“We got one, baby!” came Willow’s voice, a little crackly from her cell phone.

“Really, so fast? I can’t wait to read it. Xander's here too.”

“Ooh, is it date night? Thanks for the hint - I won't come barging in talking about the project. See you in about ten minutes, if traffic stays light.”

Soon after, Tara opened the door to reveal a beaming Willow holding her computer bag and a backpack. She stepped aside to allow the redhead to come in.

Willow dropped her bags and enveloped Tara in a hug and a warm, soft kiss. Tara felt herself melting into the embrace, losing track of time, of place, even of her own name.

A discreetly cleared throat brought her back to herself, though. "Whoops, sorry Xander," she said, having the good grace to blush.

Willow wasted no time with such niceties. "Don't apologize, only in his dreams does he ever get to see that. Hi Xan," she said to him, her grin belying her flippant tone.

"Hi Will," he replied with an answering grin. "So have you gotten any...submissions?" he asked in a stage whisper. "Anya's in the bathroom," he added.

"Yeah, one so far," Willow said.

"One what?" Anya asked, finally emerging from the bathroom in the middle of fastening an earring.

"Ummm...one code I cracked for my algorithms class," Willow improvised. "It was an encryption key that banks use to encode secure transactions."

"What?" Anya said in horror.

"Don't worry, Anya," Tara said. "Willow only uses her power for good, not evil."

"That bank encryption keys are susceptible to being cracked by a college junior is cause enough for concern," said Anya. "When I open up my own firm, I'm definitely hiring you to be chief of data security."

"I'll think about your generous offer," Willow said with a grin.

"Willow, I'll make you an offer you can't refuse, and you won't even have to think about it!" Anya said breezily. "Just like I did with Xander. Right, hon?"

"Right," he replied smartly, standing up and donning his coat. He moved to pick up Anya's coat and helped her into it. "I have no qualms about being a future kept man."

"What are you two up to tonight?" Willow asked.

"Dinner and a movie," Xander replied. "I picked the movie, Anya picked the restaurant."

"What are you seeing?"

"That new comedy, Date Movie. It seemed appropriately named."

"And then a party afterward at one of my friends' houses," Anya added.

"Stuffy banker types," said Xander.

"But I'll make it worth your while later on," Anya said.

Xander's cheery grin said it all. Tara, who had watched the byplay with amusement, said "You two have fun."

"A not-so-subtle hint!" said Anya. "Willow, I think Tara is about to make you an offer you can't refuse. But we're off, anyway. Don't wait up!"

With a round of good-byes, Anya and Xander left the apartment.

Willow grinned. “Good – we have the apartment to ourselves for a while.”

“Why, Willow – whatever did you have in mind?” Tara batted her eyes coquettishly.

Willow reached down and unzipped her laptop case, removing the computer. “Let’s read this story together. I wouldn't have risked it if they had been staying in tonight. Anya can be kind of nosy.”

Tara felt mildly disgruntled that Willow hadn’t noticed her flirting, but shook it off. They had all night and it was only 5:00 p.m.; she was sure that they would end up having sex sometime tonight. Ever since their Tuesday afternoon where she had taken the reins and told Willow exactly what she had wanted her to do, she had felt like she couldn’t wait until they could be together again. The experience had been immensely gratifying, in more ways than one. Not just the sex, which had been pleasurable beyond belief, but the feeling of being in control, of trusting Willow so much with her body, her desires, her emotions, the core of her being. It had been erotic and wild and completely safe, all at the same time.

Willow was booting up the computer and motioned to Tara to join her on the couch.

“Who is it from?” Tara asked.

“It’s from gabbywhipped.”

“Oh, I love her stuff – yay!”

They settled down on the couch to read the story. Per the requirements of their challenge, the fic was short enough so it would be just one post on the message board, and it didn’t take them long. At first Tara had trouble reading because of the glare on the laptop’s monitor, but switching off the light and snuggling close to Willow solved that problem.

Tara soon forgot about laptop glare as she became absorbed in the story. The author had taken their required elements and had crafted an uber tale about Xena and Gabrielle being brought together by Aphrodite, the owner of a new age sex toy shop. What they did after Aphrodite brought them together was all the invention of the author, though. As her name implied, gabbywhipped had a penchant for including some more risque elements in her stories – definitely more edgy than the kind of smut either Tara or Willow wrote.

As she finished the last paragraph of Xena and Gabrielle’s carnal romp, Tara cleared her throat. If she had been turned on before Willow’s arrival, it was no comparison to how she was feeling now. Beside her, Willow shifted on the couch, crossed her legs, and then uncrossed them. She gave Tara a sidelong glance which turned into a look of open desire when she saw Tara’s lustful gaze.

“So,” Willow said. “Good story, huh?”

“Great story,” Tara replied.

“Um…want to go into your bedroom for a minute?”

Tara nodded vigorously. “I though you’d never ask.”

Tara closed the door of her bedroom and immediately enveloped Willow in her embrace. The redhead returned her kisses with equal fervor. The throb between her legs was insistent, and Tara felt almost like discarding any foreplay and going directly for the gusto. However, an idea occurred to her.

Willow opened her eyes when she felt Tara’s lips leave hers. “Baby, is everything okay?”

Tara nodded. “Just one minute…” She went into the bathroom and emerged holding a navy blue bandana and the belt of her terry-cloth robe.

“What’s that for?” Willow asked.

“Well,” Tara began, as she unfolded the bandana and began to roll it up along the diagonal, “I was thinking about the story we just read, and how we’ve never done a couple of the things that were in it, and that we might want to give it a try. Would you be interested?” Tara felt a thrill of nervousness as she made the suggestion. She and Willow had been very intimate in the past several months, but they hadn't ever brought accessories or other props into their lovemaking, and Tara wasn't sure how Willow would react.

Willow raised her eyebrows, intrigued – and turned on, as she considered what had gone on in the story from gabbywhipped. “Very interested.”

“Good,” Tara replied. “Do you trust me?”

“Always.”

Tara planted a soft kiss on Willow’s mouth and slipped the bandana over her eyes. She tied a firm knot in the back, then stepped back to survey her handiwork. “Can you see anything?”

“A little light around the edges, but not really.”

Tara smiled, relishing the feeling both of being in charge and of being trusted completely by her girlfriend. She felt a wave of tenderness wash over her, mixing with her arousal, and she gave Willow another soft kiss as she led her to stand on the rug beside the bed. Silently, she vowed to herself that she would do everything in her power to give Willow an unforgettable experience while never once giving her cause to feel unsafe.

She unbuttoned Willow’s shirt, taking her time with each button. As she exposed more and more of the redhead’s flesh, she planted kisses on her chest and belly. She undid the final button and slipped the shirt off Willow’s shoulders, letting it drop loosely to the floor.

Willow stood there in her bra and jeans with the bandana covering her eyes. A slight smile touched the edge of her mouth. Although she had read the same story Tara had, she didn’t know what was going to come next. Would Tara follow the narrative exactly, or mix up the elements, or just use the story as inspiration for something else? The feeling of being sightless and having her clothes removed bit by bit was proving to be a huge turn-on – she felt her nipples hardening and pushing against the silky nylon of her bra, and blood was rushing to the warm space between her legs.

Tara undid the button of Willow’s jeans and tugged gently on the zipper, moving it downward about an inch. Then she knelt on the floor and took the zipper tab between her teeth, completing the unzipping. She pulled the jeans down over Willow’s hips and gently tapped one calf, then the other to signal to Willow to step out of the jeans.

Still kneeling, Tara cupped Willow’s bottom in her hands and kissed the redhead’s stomach just above the waistband of her panties. She trailed a path of kisses from one side of the round curve of her stomach to the other, and then took the waistband between her teeth. She managed to tug the panties down with a little help from her hands, and the garment fell to the floor to join the jeans and shirt.

Willow’s breath came faster. It seemed to her that her senses were heightened by not being able to see what Tara was doing, or what was coming next. The effect was erotic beyond anything she had experienced before. When she felt Tara’s warm breath on her stomach, she had to fight to control a gasp as electric spiderwebs seemed to prickle out from the point of contact, triggering a release of wetness between her legs.

Tara stood up and covered Willow’s slightly parted lips with her own. She kissed her deeply, exploring her girlfriend’s mouth thoroughly with her tongue as she reached behind Willow and took the clasp of her bra between the fingers of her left hand.

The kiss lasted for several seconds as Tara fumbled with the clasp, finding it hard to summon the necessary concentration to fold the bra straps with one hand in such a way as to allow the hook to slide out of the loop. She stilled her mouth and tongue as she finally reached around with her other hand to undo the bra.

Willow giggled. “Having trouble, sweetie?”

Tara grinned back, but assumed a tone of mock severity as she discarded the undergarments. “Hush.”

Willow now stood completely naked by Tara’s bed, and Tara took a moment to enjoy the sight. Her nipples pointed out almost proudly, and had darkened slightly to a rosy deep pink. Her waist was slim and her narrow hips curved to the top of her thighs, framing a triangle of red.

Tara walked around behind her girlfriend and trailed her fingertips lightly over her stomach, moving upward inch by inch until she cupped Willow’s breasts. Being careful not to touch the nipples yet, she licked the back of Willow’s neck, and then blew softly. Then she kissed Willow’s neck at the soft place near the top of the shoulder, nipping the skin. At the same time, she moved her hands upward to brush the nipples with her fingertips.

Willow groaned as the sensations overwhelmed her. Tara moved her fingers lightly over her nipples, while she kissed and suckled her neck, eliciting some quiet moans and whimpers, to Tara's delight. Willow leaned backward into Tara’s body while she simultaneously tried to push her chest forward, further into Tara’s eager hands.

Tara gave Willow’s nipples the gentlest of squeezes and then caressed down her sides to the swell of her hips. She bent over and kissed the small of Willow’s back and ran her tongue slowly, slowly up her spine, pausing to kiss random vertebrae, until she stopped at the nape of the neck. She gave the nape another kiss and a gentle bite, and buried her nose in Willow’s red hair, inhaling the scent of her shampoo. She loved to smell Willow's hair and body - it never failed to remind her of the first night they had spent together at UberCon '05. They had both been somewhat shy - after all, they had just met for the first time in person - and hadn't done more than kiss that night, but the way Willow's hair smelled still triggered the memory with dramatic clarity, along with all the attendant excitement she had felt.

Willow, for her part, felt as if her mind had developed tunnel vision and wherever Tara’s hands or lips were, that part of her body was the only part that existed. Every caress, every kiss, every lick generated a wave of pleasure that radiated throughout her body and ultimately ended up between her legs, adding to the already considerable warmth and wetness there. She relished every sensation that resulted from Tara’s gentle hands and mouth, but also was becoming restless for Tara to touch her sex, which was beginning to call out louder and louder for some attention.

Tara seemed content to take her time, for all the world acting like she could stand there and do this all day, but she eventually did lead Willow to the bed. She turned the blindfolded girl around and helped her sit down, and then with gentle pressure of her hands, indicated that she should scoot over to the middle of the bed. She took Willow’s hands and led them to the headboard, wrapping them gently around the slats.

Willow lay on her back, taking measured breaths as she tried to listen to what Tara might be doing next. She heard Tara step around to the foot of the bed, and then back to her side. The bed dipped as Tara climbed up and knelt beside her. Warm lips covered her own, and then lightly kissed the tip of her nose and forehead. She felt Tara’s breath tickle her ear as the blonde whispered, “I love you.”

“I love you too,” Willow responded, squirming slightly from the tickling sensation, but mostly from her building desire. She felt Tara’s hands stroke her wrists, and then the slightly rougher feel of the terrycloth belt encircle her wrists and pull slightly as Tara tied a knot, securing them to the headboard.

“Is that too tight?” Tara asked.

Willow tested the knot, tugging slightly. “Nope,” she replied.

“Good,” Tara said. She stood up and backed away from the bed, taking in the sight of Willow lying naked on her back, blindfolded, with her hands tied to the headboard. It was frankly erotic, and she pulled her own shirt off over her head as she gazed at her girlfriend.

Willow cocked her head, trying to assess what Tara was doing by the sound. “You’re not going to leave me here, are you, baby?”

“Oh, no,” Tara replied emphatically as she unzipped her pants and stepped out of them. Next came her underwear and then her bra. She stepped on the toe of her sock with her other heel, pulling the sock off her foot, and then repeated the process with the other one. Finally she, too, was completely naked.

“You have a job to do,” she said as she climbed back on the bed, straddling Willow and settling her sex down gently on Willow’s stomach. She leaned down and kissed her bound girlfriend hungrily. Willow returned the kiss with enthusiasm, lifting her head up off the pillow to take more of Tara’s tongue into her mouth.

Tara braced herself with her hands on either side of Willow’s upstretched arms and moved her torso up a little higher. Her breast hung down enticingly next to Willow’s cheek, and she maneuvered herself in a shimmying motion to stroke the redhead’s cheek with her breast.

“Mmmmm,” Willow said as she moved her face into the caress. “Is that what I think it is?”

“Yes,” Tara murmured. “It’s my elbow.”

“You have the softest, most pliable elbow of anyone I’ve ever met,” Willow said as Tara moved her torso to run her nipple over Willow’s forehead, nose, chin, and her other cheek.

“Have you studied a lot of elbows?” Tara asked as she bumped her nipple up against Willow’s mouth.

Willow obliged by opening her mouth to take the nipple in, licking it languorously. “Well, not in person,” she said, pausing. “But I’ve read a lot about elbows.”

“Reading is good,” Tara said in a throaty voice. “And so is talking. But right now, less talking and more sucking.”

Willow obeyed, taking Tara’s nipple back into her mouth and suckling gently but deeply. Tara inhaled harshly as Willow’s tongue began a swirling motion around her nipple. She closed her eyes, appreciating the sensation, and then lifted herself up to give Willow access to her left nipple.

The pleasurable sensations rippled through her nipple and found their way to her sex, and she thrust her hips forward involuntarily. She always enjoyed the attention that Willow paid to her breasts, but watching her do it blindfolded seemed to multiply the effect. Right now, Willow’s sole purpose in life was to pleasure Tara, and she took to the task eagerly.

When her stimulated nipples could take no more and the throbbing between her legs was too strong to ignore, Tara straightened up and grasped the top of the headboard in her hands. She walked forward on her knees and gently lowered her sex on the redhead’s mouth.

Willow was able to tell from the shifting weight and the sounds what was coming, but she still found the experience heightened by the blindfold’s cutting off of her sight, and the belt of the robe rendering her arms immobile. She knew that Tara would never take advantage of her and that all she had to do was to say the word and Tara would free her, but she still found the sense of being bound and at Tara’s mercy a huge turn-on. Literally anything could happen next.

As Tara lowered her moist sex onto Willow’s mouth, Willow thrust upwards into Tara’s channel with her tongue. She strained to reach as deeply into Tara as she could, and exerted pressure along the walls. Tara’s moan let her know that her actions were both well-timed and very appreciated.

She continued thrusting with her tongue, and Tara answered by gently bucking her hips in time with Willow’s thrusts. Tara gripped the headboard, glad that her legs had had three days to recover from their chair-sex earlier – they had felt weak for the rest of the day, and sore the next.

Willow removed her tongue and licked slowly along Tara’s folds, coming tantalizingly close to her clit, but not actually touching it. Tara groaned in frustration as Willow continued her agonizingly slow tour, leaving no fold unexplored, no crevice unlicked. Finally, she sighed in rapture as Willow’s mouth closed gently around her clitoris.

Willow enclosed Tara’s throbbing nub in her lips, licking gently around the outside before increasing the pressure of the suction slightly. Tara’s breath was coming steadily and heavily as Willow established a rhythm, and she moved her hips gently in concert with Willow’s mouth.

Willow sensed that Tara was nearing the edge of her orgasm as she felt her girlfriend’s legs begin to tremble on either side of her head. She quickened the rhythm and suckled her clitoris with a little more force. Tara’s legs trembled and she gripped the edge of the bed as she focused her attention solely on Willow, Willow’s tongue, Willow’s lips, the pressure her mouth was creating that built up so deliciously in her belly.

Willow flicked her tongue rapidly against Tara’s clit, and that pushed Tara over the edge. With a cry, she thrust her sex down into Willow’s mouth, flexing her leg muscles to keep her quivering sex in contact with the heavenly friction as wave after wave broke over her body. As the last wave diminished, she stretched out her torso and with a shuddering sigh, raised her hips up from Willow’s mouth.

She laid herself down gently next to Willow, kissing the redhead deeply, tasting herself. She wiped Willow’s glistening mouth and chin with the back of her hand, and snuggled up, nestling her head on the redhead’s shoulder, sighing blissfully.

“I’d like to hold you, but my hands are tied,” said Willow with a hint of a grin.

Tara reached up and undid the knot. The redhead’s right arm went around her, while her left hand reached for the bandana that covered her eyes.

Tara’s hand covered Willow’s. “Uh-uh,” she said, kissing the redhead’s cheek. “I still have plans for you. I just need to rest for a moment.”

Willow smiled and gave up her attempts to free the bandana, and instead pulled Tara closer, stroking her hair. “I see how it is,” she said. “You keep me here in durance vile, then you pleasure yourself without a thought for my needs. And then, when it’s my turn, you make me wait.”

Tara planted a kiss on Willow’s collarbone. “Or maybe it’s all part of my nefarious plan to get you good and riled up so the payoff is that much better.”

“The ‘payoff’?” Willow said with a giggle. “Is that what you English majors call it?”

Tara nodded, also giggling. “Sometimes,” she said. “Because ‘climax’ is already taken, along with ‘rising action’ and ‘denouement’.”

“Well, ‘payoff’ is a very sensual term,” Willow said.

“I’ll show you sensual,” Tara replied, disengaging from their embrace.

“Oh, are you all rested up now?” Willow inquired innocently.

“Pipe down, Rosenberg,” said Tara. “I’m in charge here.” She lowered her lips to Willow’s left nipple, taking it into her mouth without preamble and sucking deeply.

Willow gasped at the unexpected sensation. “Yes, you are.”

Tara took her time suckling Willow’s nipple, relishing the moans she elicited. She moved a hand between Willow’s legs and cupped her mound, but didn’t move her fingers at all other than to apply gentle pressure to the whole of Willow’s center. This had the desired effect – Willow strained against Tara’s hand, impatient for her to pay more attention to the area.

Tara pressed her face down in the space between Willow’s breasts and gave her a loud, wet smooch. “Something you want, love?”

“Mmmm…yes…touch me.”

Tara wiggled her fingers a little. “But I am touching you.”

Willow writhed a bit, pushing her hips up into Tara’s hand. “Touch me more.”

Tara smiled at Willow’s impatience. “Maybe I will,” she said, “but not until you change your position.”

“My position on what?” Willow asked. “Gun control? Free trade? Nationalized health care? Because okay, I think I’m just about ready to have a coming of age anyway – my worldview is expanding all the time.”

“Not your political positions, honey,” Tara said mirthfully. “I want you to turn over.”

“Oh,” said Willow. She rolled over onto her stomach, a fleeting grin crossing her lips.

“I think,” said Tara, placing a hand under Willow’s stomach and urging her upward so that she was on all fours, “that you knew that, and you were just being sassy.” She got up from the bed and took a moment to savor the sight of her girlfriend’s lovely naked body perched on the bed, with her small and shapely breasts just visible underneath her torso, and her blindfolded face, a little gleeful about her joke.

“Possibly,” Willow replied.

“You know what I do to sassy naked women who are kneeling on my bed?” Tara asked, walking around to the foot of the bed and lying down so her head was underneath Willow’s spread legs.

“You take pictures and post them on your blog?”

Tara’s mouth was just inches away from Willow’s sex when the remark registered, and she dissolved into paroxysms of helpless laughter.

“Now I regret being such a card,” Willow said, “if I’m guessing right what you were about to do.”

After a few moments, Tara’s giggling tapered off as she regained control of herself. She cupped Willow’s cheeks in her hands and slowly guided her girlfriend’s sex down to her mouth.

As Tara’s tongue made an initial foray over Willow’s folds, the redhead moaned. Her prolonged time wearing the blindfold had doubled her anticipation, and pleasuring Tara had inflamed her own desires. But nothing compared to the contact of Tara’s tongue, which was both gentle and firm, and after seven months of their relationship, it knew her so well – the right amount of pressure, suction, friction, and the perfect tempo. She knew that her orgasm was not far off, after such a long buildup.

Tara could sense it too. Willow’s sex was wet and slick, coating Tara’s chin with lubrication as she licked and nuzzled her girlfriend’s clitoris. She reached up with her right hand and probed Willow’s opening with two fingers, enclosing the hard bundle of nerves with her lips as she did so.

Willow felt the pressure and rocked backward, encouraging Tara. Without further delay, Tara slid both fingers into Willow’s slick channel.

The effect was instantaneous. Willow felt as if the sensations, already almost unbearably pleasurable, had been magnified. Tara’s fingers and the pressure and friction they created provided a counterpoint to the electric feelings her tongue was creating. She felt filled by Tara, consumed. Her breath came harshly as she felt herself roaring toward the crescendo, the pinnacle, the confluence of all the physical feelings that Tara was creating in her. She had never known that she could have this depth of feeling, of love and wild abandon, that she felt when she was with Tara.

Tara could sense the exact moment that Willow went over the edge. She didn’t even need to hear the cry that tore from her throat – she could tell by the squeeze of Willow’s vaginal muscles on her fingers, the throbbing of her clitoris, and the change in her taste as she reached orgasm. She kept the pressure of her lips and tongue gently on Willow’s pulsing sex, and gradually broke the contact as she eased her fingers out. She helped Willow roll over onto her back, and tenderly removed the blindfold as she kissed the redhead’s forehead.

Willow opened her eyes, her pupils incredibly dilated. She captured Tara’s lips in hers, tasting herself, and pulled the blonde down beside her.

She only broke off kissing to say “I love you."

"I love you too, baby," Tara murmured back.

Willow snuggled more deeply into Tara's arms. "That was...indescribable." She hugged Tara closer.

"Was it okay?" Tara asked, cradling Willow in her arms.

"Oh, yes," Willow said. "More than okay. It's like...it felt so wild, and unrestrained, and not knowing what was going to happen next felt so exciting. Does that make sense?"

"Yes," Tara replied, planting a gentle kiss on her forehead. "I think I know what you mean."

"I'd like to give you that experience sometime," Willow said shyly.

"You do, every day, baby," Tara replied.

"Well, yeah," Willow said, with a self-deprecating giggle. "I'm definitely on the wild and crazy side. You never know what's coming next. A new password for the IRC channel? New wallpaper for your computer? Maybe even a new e-mail address? I mean, buckle up."

Tara smiled. "You're a goof," she said. "What I meant was, being in love with you feels so exciting, and I feel like I can be unrestrained and wild with you. You see me for who I am, and you love me, and I don't have to hide or pretend to be someone else around you. You just love me for me - and that's so amazing. Every minute that I'm with you, I feel like I'm flying." She felt herself choke up a bit at this - it was so true And it made her life before Willow stand out in sharp relief as being lonely, feeling cautious and self-conscious so much of the time. She was so lucky to have found Willow, and she felt amazed every day that Willow loved her the way she did.

Willow was overcome. Tara's statement was so tender, so honest - she could tell that her girlfriend was speaking from her soul. And the thought that she, Willow Rosenberg, erstwhile shy lesbian computer hacker, could be responsible for making someone so wonderful as Tara feel that way - well, it was almost too much happiness to bear. She gave Tara a fierce hug, unable to put her thoughts into words but trusting that her body could convey what her voice couldn't.

Concurrent with the hug, her stomach growled - a loud sound in the otherwise quiet apartment. It helped to break the intensity of the moment, and both girls started giggling.

"Dinner, sweetie?" Tara asked.

"I guess we should eat," Willow said.

"I thought we just did that," Tara said devilishly as she pulled the covers back and went to her pile of clothes on the floor.

Willow smirked and got out of bed as well. One thing was certain, she mused to herself as she donned her own clothes. She was definitely looking forward to the rest of the UberSmut stories.
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/28/06)

Postby Candleshoe » Tue Feb 28, 2006 5:13 am

DIBS!!

Coming back when I've read it...

Back now:

I laughed, I blushed, I laughed again, and in fact I even might have cried a little at the end. And I laughed. Laughter is such an important part of sex and you captured it so well, what with the elbow palaver and the wild'n'crazy definitions. My favourite lines though?
Being in love with you feels so exciting, and I feel like I can be unrestrained and wild with you. You see me for who I am, and you love me, and I don't have to hide or pretend to be someone else around you. You just love me for me - and that's so amazing. Every minute that I'm with you, I feel like I'm flying


I just want to be the first of many (I'm sure) to congratulate you on capturing this exhilarating feeling so well.

And it was hot. Did I mention it was hot too? Hot and funny, a truly devastating combination....
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby mole » Tue Feb 28, 2006 6:44 am

Hiya Sally.

Thanks for once again warming up my morning. The world looks just a little bit brighter after yummy Willow and Tara smut :wink

I completely agree that laughter is an important part of sex and intimacy. Without going into too much detail, some of my most memorable experiences have involved A LOT of laughter. Okay, that was probably more than you all wanted to know :blush ::clears throat:: On to the feedback, eh?

So, Take-Charge Tara seems to be a fixture. Yippee :applause Our hacker is quite the lucky woman. Again, you've created a very hot scene without sounding technical and without being incomprehensible.

“Um…want to go into your bedroom for a minute?”

Tara nodded vigorously. “I though you’d never ask.”


A "minute"? Willow, Willow, Willow...don't limit yourself. :-D


Tara smiled at Willow’s impatience. “Maybe I will,” she said, “but not until you change your position.”

“My position on what?” Willow asked. “Gun control? Free trade? Nationalized health care? Because okay, I think I’m just about ready to have a coming of age anyway – my worldview is expanding all the time.”


HA! I think I laughed the loudest at this bit. What a time for Willow-babbled to resurface. Not to mention, just a wee hint of spicy talk, what with the coming and expanding. Geez, it's warm in here :blush

“You know what I do to sassy naked women who are kneeling on my bed?” Tara asked, walking around to the foot of the bed and lying down so her head was underneath Willow’s spread legs.

“You take pictures and post them on your blog?”


Okay, I lied. That was my loudest laugh.

"Oh, yes," Willow said. "More than okay. It's like...it felt so wild, and unrestrained, and not knowing what was going to happen next felt so exciting. Does that make sense?"

"Yes," Tara replied, planting a gentle kiss on her forehead. "I think I know what you mean."

"I'd like to give you that experience sometime," Willow said shyly.

"You do, every day, baby," Tara replied....

Tara smiled. "You're a goof," she said. "What I meant was, being in love with you feels so exciting, and I feel like I can be unrestrained and wild with you. You see me for who I am, and you love me, and I don't have to hide or pretend to be someone else around you. You just love me for me - and that's so amazing. Every minute that I'm with you, I feel like I'm flying."


Ah, herein lies the emotion behind the play. This exchange is very sweet and perhaps very telling. We learn that Willow is enjoying exploring her wild side and would like to return the favor to Tara. However, we also learn that Tara is already receiving this gift. That just being in love with and loved by Willow gives her the strength and confidence to explore her desires. Ack. I'm not explaining this very well. This bit just really brought into focus the inherent power exchange involved in a loving, physical relationship.

Wonderful update, Sally. Looking forward to next Tuesday morning.
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/28/06)

Postby binky » Tue Feb 28, 2006 9:25 am

I did advise pacing, didn’t I? Who knew pacing meant start fast and keep going fast and fast and fast and fast and end up fast, too. These characters will be dead by the 21st story. I’ll leave more meaningful FB later, but, damn, Sally!
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/28/06)

Postby JustSkipIt » Tue Feb 28, 2006 2:20 pm

Sallypants – I actually forgot until about 7:30 today that it was Tuesday. Seriously, all day yesterday I thought it was Tuesday so today? I had no idea what day it was. Then I remembered and someone else had already called dibs. Oh well, with 21 parts or whatever, I guess there's plenty of dibs to go around. How very wonderfully smutty! Tara certainly seems to be the more vixenly of the two girls, at least from our first two glimpses of them. Actually she was the one who figured it all out and then initiated contact in UberCon also so yay, Tara.
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Gabbywhipped – lol!

You do a really fantastic job here of alternating your POV so that at times, we're seeing this from Tara's perspective including the amount of love and care she's putting into her actions and then from Willow's limited perspective. It allows the reader to empathize with Willow while also staying very safe because we see what Tara is doing and seeing. I'm thrilled to hear them both pull out the "I Love Yous" cause, well, I'm a sap… And the humor: it wouldn't be a Sally fic without it would it? Really a very wonderful first foray into kink for the girls.

But…

You know I love you right? Well, here comes the lecture. The girls are just starting out in their kink and it's pretty light. Even so, they need a safeword. It doesn't have to be explicitly stated as such. No stop the hot action to say, "your safeword is ice cream, blah, blah, blah" but some statement at the start of the action that all Willow has to do is say "Stop" or "no" or "red" and it all stops. Some prior reassurance. I know that there's a reference to their knowing that Tara would stop but it should be said. I'm particularly troubled that they have no safe movement for Willow's eating Tara. At that point, her hands are tied above her head and her mouth has Tara on it. She can't easily say anything to stop Tara nor can she motion to her. If Tara were sitting and Willow kneeling and eating her, then Willow would have the option of lifting her head; here she doesn't. A few suggestions include allowing her to have one hand free to "tap out" or putting something in her hand (a bell or scarf) that she can drop. End lecture.

In spite of my lecture, it's fantastic and I can't wait for more next week.
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/28/06)

Postby dorksrcool » Tue Feb 28, 2006 2:33 pm

:drool Yum! I can't wait for the rest of the Ubersmut stories either and I second binky's "damn!"
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/28/06)

Postby SithLordWiccan » Tue Feb 28, 2006 5:00 pm

I gotta hand it to you, Sally. You certainly know how to write smut. (Dare I say that you're better than Chris? Um...no, I'm not gonna shoot myself in the foot.)

I gotta admit. I have a weakness for Willow and Tara in BDSM situations, particularly when Tara is the Top. Take Charge Tara is someone I dream about often, and I'm glad to see you managed to do her justice here.

So Xander and Anya are going to see "Date Movie", eh? Gotta wonder how they'll react to the fact that a Willow lookalike is the lead in the movie. (Or is someone other than Aly playing Julia in your world?)

I'm eagerly awaiting the next update (and to see if Willow and Tara mention any of my ideas. I did send them another one. Have you heard from them?)
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/28/06)

Postby WillowRulez » Tue Feb 28, 2006 6:06 pm

She was definitely looking forward to the rest of the UberSmut stories.

Uhm yeah... me too! Especially if it makes WT react like that :-D
Another very well written update!
I was surprised that they could fool Anya that easily... well, i guess there will be more hints and she might get suspicious.
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/28/06)

Postby Willow Watcher » Tue Feb 28, 2006 6:37 pm

:bounce UBER SMUT...UBER SMUT!!! LOVE IT! WANT MORE MORE MORE :bounce
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/28/06)

Postby taralicious » Wed Mar 01, 2006 12:06 am

Sally,
With an apropos shout-out to "Date Movie", pause to picture Aly in that black dress being large with the leggy goodness, yum... Xander and Anya leave for a evening as a happy couple and Willow and Tara can get down for some happy coupling.
The very title of this update, "Submissions" is very clever in a metaphorical Society of Professional English Majors sort of way.
Uber computer-geek Willow makes herself known since she is too keyed up with the promise of vicarious Xena/Gabrielle smut to see the signs of promise of real-life smut that Tara is dangling in front of her and coquettishly is a wonderfully genteel descriptive adjective, isn't it?
Tara again reveals hidden depths, giving rise to the veracity of the claim that it is indeed always the quiet ones and she gave rise to something else while I was reading this latest attempt of hers to emulate some spicy talk.
I would add "rising damp" to the list of euphemistic codes for 'release'.
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/28/06)

Postby Artemis » Fri Mar 03, 2006 10:18 pm

Holy moley... with the... uh... they... drooooool :blush

So... yay to Gabbywhipped for inspiring that :D I really liked the mix of inexperience and confidence Willow and Tara had - pausing and making sure everything's alright, and joking and giggling and goofing around (elbow :lol ), but at the same time completely getting the trust aspect of their play.

(I just have to say it again: elbow! :lmao )
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/28/06)

Postby justin » Mon Mar 06, 2006 1:33 pm

Great update

, I'll make you an offer you can't refuse,


Gulp, that had me imagining Anya putting a contract in front of Willow then putting a gun to her head and saying, "In the next five seconds I'll have either your signature or your brains on the contract"

There are some very funny moments such as

“My position on what?” Willow asked. “Gun control? Free trade? Nationalized health care? Because okay, I think I’m just about ready to have a coming of age anyway – my worldview is expanding all the time.”



“You take pictures and post them on your blog?”


:lmao

Though mostly the update can be summed up by :thud
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/28/06)

Postby tarawhipped » Mon Mar 06, 2006 9:27 pm

Sally! Bad me for not stopping by sooner. Feel free to punish as you see fit. :-D

I was wondering how you were going to tie in the fic submissions, and wowzers...well done! Gabywhipped...cool name. The sex was definitely of the hot, but I think I liked this best for all the banter. It really makes it obvious how much they like each other, have fun with each other (besides the obvious). I'm not sure this makes sense...I think a lot of sex scenes (my writing included), tend to separate the action from the action, if you know what I'm sayin', yo. ;) You really show them connecting on multiple levels at once: physically, emotionally, and intellectually (if quips about 'elbows' and synonyms for 'payoff' can be called intellectual). It's just damn sexy. Can't wait to see what's next!

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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/28/06)

Postby FineyMcFine » Tue Mar 07, 2006 5:15 am

Hey everybody, happy Tuesday morning at 7am Eastern time! Chapter 3 isn't quite ready for primetime yet, it needs a little more work and fleshing, um, out. And my muse was up late watching the Oscars on Sunday, which has thrown us both off a bit.

So I think that from now on I'll probably be off the regular weeking posting schedule, alas, poor Yorick, but hopefully it won't be much longer for the next part.
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/28/06)

Postby Candleshoe » Tue Mar 07, 2006 5:17 am

I got all excited 'cos I thought that was an update. I guess I will just have to stay excited a little longer!

That didn't sound so rude in my head....
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/28/06)

Postby Tues » Tue Mar 07, 2006 12:15 pm

Mz. McFine -

Glad I made here before your next installment! And this time, I started out sitting on the floor, so as to avoid any unnecessary falling while smut reading.

Smut aside (did I just say that?), the banter and dialogue is what really struck me this time... so playful, awkward (in a good way) at times, and very sweet.

Well done!!!

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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/28/06)

Postby FineyMcFine » Tue Mar 07, 2006 8:14 pm

Candleshoe

Candleshoe, I'm so glad that you laughed and blushed and even cried, wow, really? I definitely agree that laughter is an important part of sex. And you can thank my beta/wife for your favorite lines - the first draft was pretty smut-only, and she insisted that there be some snuggling and talking between them afterwards. And after I did my usual moan and groan (not THAT kind) I wrote that and ended up with a good feeling, and I knew she was right, that it had been crucial to show that part.

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mole

Hey Michelle, I'm glad that Willow and Tara could help warm up your morning! And some of my most memorable experiences have also involved a lot of laughter too.

Take Charge Tara has been a fixture in Chapters 2 and 3, I'm not sure if that will continue to be the case the whole time. I think that something just got into her on Valentine's Day. :) Thanks for saying it was neither too technical nor incomprehensible - I'm continually aware of that line and I'm trying to tread not too far away from it on either side (and thanks to my beta, I'm not...in the final drafts, anyway - there are plenty of comments on Draft 1 that say "This sounds clinical, you're telling us what they're doing but not what they're thinking." So again, I must thank my amazing beta.

Tee hee, I'm glad those two parts about changing position and blogs made you laugh. They made me laugh too when writing it. And yes, the emotional exchange between the two of them is the heart and soul of their relationship. I think that both in canon and in this story, there is something about Willow's love that sets Tara free and lets her be herself, because Willow sees her for who she is, instead of overlooking or ignoring her like so many others have done, assumedly.

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binky

These characters will be dead by the 21st story.


binky, I think you're psychic (she said in a mysterious voice). Not that I'm planning for them to be dead! Stay tuned...

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JustSkipIt

Yo Debra! Last week was like that for me too, I thought it was Tuesday when it was Wednesday, or possibly vice versa. I'm so confused I can't even remember what day I mistakenly thought it was! And I seem to have blown it with my Tuesday morning posting schedule anyway (I blew who?) so now it's all up in the air when I'll post next. Thursday 7am? Friday 3am? Saturday at noon? Your guess is as good as mine.

Yeah, I think that Tara is quite the vixen - you know what they say about watching out for the quiet ones, right? I always thought that was sort of true to canon - Tara was shy and all but she initiated hanging out with Willow and the Doll's Eye Crystal and all that, so her shyness didn't really hold her back one-on-one, just in larger groups, at least in my view.

Feedback: Let the floodgates of feedback open, let the waters of your comments gush forth!

I'm trying to decide whether to be amused, impressed, or a little grossed out...


Grossed out by water? ;)

Thanks for mentioning the POV here, that was deliberate. Since Willow was blindfolded I wanted to try to describe what it was like for her, since she couldn't see, by talking about her other senses to some extent.

Your comments about safewords are well said and I take them to heart. I didn't write a safeword into this update because I don't think it occurred to them (and more to the point, it didn't occur to me while I was writing it). But yeah, I definitely hear what you are saying.

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Amy, glad you're enjoying it and yay about "damn!" Hee hee.

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SithLordWiccan

Hey Sith, even if you tried to say that I'm better at writing smut than Chris, I would deny it. So I'm glad you didn't shoot yourself in the foot. Chris writes some daaaaaaaaaamn good smut and I'm sure that reading his stuff has either consciously or subconsciously given me a lot of ideas.

Heh, I'm glad that Willow and Tara were able to feed your BDSM weakness. I think this is the furthest they'll go down that path in this story, although I guess one should never say never, because you never know.

"Date Movie", eh? Gotta wonder how they'll react to the fact that a Willow lookalike is the lead in the movie. (Or is someone other than Aly playing Julia in your world?)


Oh, I don't know who is playing Julia in the Uberverse, heh. I just put that in there as a little nod to the present day and time.

I think that Willow and Tara will definitely mention at least one of your ideas, not sure when, but stay tuned!

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WillowRulez

Hee hee, the reaction of WT to the stories is pretty much the whole foundation of this fic. Glad you enjoyed the update! Yeah, I was surprised that they fooled Anya that easily too, usually she's more suspicious. I chalk it up to her being in the middle of getting ready for her date and being HORRIFIED that anyone could hack into a bank's secure transactions. There's nothing to distract Anya like money, after all. TBD if she will continue to get suspicious or not. Thanks for staying tuned!

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Willow Watcher

Heh! Thanks! More will be forthcoming hopefully sooner rather than later. :)

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Yo Blayne, ha ha about happy coupling! Yeah, I knew that if anyone would comment on the title Submission that it would be you, and of course it was deliberate. ;) Speaking of which, "computer-geek Willow" being "keyed up" was also deliberate, wasn't it, you sly dog? I do think that coquettishly is a good descriptor, heh - in that context it conveyed not only the meaning but also a slight sense of the ridiculous, if that makes sense. HA about rising damp. Hidden depths is another laugh-worthy phrase from you. Tee hee, reading your feedback is like reading a letter from someone from the Society of Professional English Majors, in fact. Durance vile, Blayne, durance vile. Thanks for reading.

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Irene, how much do I love it that you continue to do the dance? A lot, that's how much.

And not only does Mrs. McFine know that I write this stuff, she edits, proofreads, and helps me beta-test the smut. Yes, every smut scene I've written has been beta-tested - she has many skills.

Hee, they are indeed inexperienced, and I think that there's no better person to try new things out with than your soul mate, because they won't laugh at you for being awkward or shy. They'll probably laugh with you, though. Heh. And how you managed to work Dr. Seuss into a paragraph about kink, I'll never know, but congratulations to you for doing it.

Aw, no sniveling, Irene, unless it's the good kind. Thanks for reading, feedbacking, and of course Ritmo De Smut dancing!

Paz out, yo.

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Hee! Yeah, that gabbywhipped can write some inspirational stuff, all right. Praise from you, Chris, for smut, is like praise from God for religion! ;) I'm glad that both their inexperience and confidence/love/trust came through. That was important. And I'm also sooooo glad that you liked the elbow joke. I beta-tested that one as well. :devil

And THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for the cool-as-shit title graphic! I mean, all thanks go to Corey Cook of Down the Rabbit-hole, of course, but I know you guys talk from time to time. :D

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justin

LOL about Anya putting a contract and a gun in front of/to Willow's head. Maybe in canon when she was an ex-demon she would do that, but in the Uberverse she's not quite as disconnected from human mores since she's actually human. I think and hope that she was referring to a very large salary and a full benefits package, including 401(k), profit-sharing, and dental.

Glad you liked the updates and the funny moments - thanks for reading! :D

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tarawhipped

Cam, your punishment will be, um. Not getting whipped? Yeah, gabbywhipped is a pretty cool cat. You'd like her if you met her, I think.

It makes sense - I know exactly what you mean. The real meat, so to speak, of the Willow and Tara relationship in canon and in fanfic is how they love and have fun with each other (like the scene in whatever that episode was where Willow said "I don't need to be snuggled" and Tara said "Vixen" - it hinted at a pretty regular pattern of loving banter between the two of them). Anyway, I'm glad that you liked the overlay of sex and banter and talk - it's pretty true to life, in my experience. Thanks Cam!

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Hee hee, glad you took the precaution of sitting on the floor. No falling, no injuries! I'm glad you liked the banter and dialogue - it was a lot of fun to write. :) Makes me happy to hear that you liked it. Thank you very much! And I heard from Willow that she got your e-mail, yes. ;)
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/28/06)

Postby GayNow » Tue Mar 07, 2006 8:38 pm

Sally wrote:like the scene in whatever that episode was where Willow said "I don't need to be snuggled" and Tara said "Vixen"


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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/28/06)

Postby FineyMcFine » Tue Mar 07, 2006 8:47 pm

Carleen wrote:Family


That's right, yeah. They got all their sisters with them.
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/28/06)

Postby watty » Tue Mar 07, 2006 8:55 pm

sally 'melonballs' mcfine wrote:I seem to have blown it with my Tuesday morning posting schedule anyway (I blew who?)

chunks!!! you blew chunks, naturellement.

I know, I need to read and feedback. We've talked.
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/28/06)

Postby FineyMcFine » Mon Mar 13, 2006 10:16 am

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Title: UberSmut
Part: 4
Author: SallyMcFine
Feedback: I would like long, lingering feedback with some tingling and electrifying comments.
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: All disclaimers apply.
Thanks: Corey Cook from Down the Rabbit-Hole for the title graphic. And to Candleshoe for some researchy goodness - thanks, old bean. And to my beta, you sweet thang. Thanks last but definitely not least to you who are reading.
And a nod (or is it called theft?) to(from): AntigoneUnbound (those who have read Your Not-So-Private Dancers will catch the reference)
Setting: Contemporary. The characters all frequent an online message board called The Warrior, The Bard, and the Bad Wardrobe. This is a sequel to UberCon '05.

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Part 4 - First Time

From: ubersmut@gmail.com
Reply-to: amazonhacker@gmail.com
To: wiccanbard@gmail.com
Subject: FW: The First Time

Hey hon - I was just checking the ubersmut account and there were a few new stories today, yay! This one is a first time fic and it's sooooooooooooo sweet, I just had to forward it to you right now. It reminds me of our first time. See you tonight?

All my love,

Will

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Willow pressed "Send", and the e-mail was on its way to Tara. The story she had forwarded was set in all-girls English boarding school, and chronicled how Aphrodite Priddy, a headmistress with a Cupid complex, had arranged for two clashing students to find each other. Xena Gilly was a brash senior on a scholarship from South London, and Gabrielle Ainsworth-Eggleston was the privileged daughter of a minor member of the English peerage. The tale was of two girls from radically different backgrounds with not a little animosity between them whose punishment for a name-calling hair-pulling catfight on school grounds was several intensive community service sessions together. Sparks flew all over the school grounds during their community service, followed soon after by sparks of a more...extracurricular variety.

Willow felt pretty sure that Tara would enjoy the story as much as she had. Over the last seven months, she had developed a good idea of Tara's likes and dislikes. This story felt in many ways like a British version of The Facts of Life, which had been a favorite television program of Tara's during childhood - although Aphrodite certainly cut a different figure in this story than Mrs. Garrett had. Willow wished she had known Tara as a child - she always listened with fascination at Tara's stories of growing up in a small town, shy and isolated, and how coming to college had expanded her worldview tremendously.

As had attending UberCon '05. Though Tara's friendship with Anya had afforded her a lot more social interactions than she would have had on her own, it was her discovery of Faith's mistaken identity ruse and her subsequent "coming out" to Willow that had really shattered the last vestige of the reserved, anxious girl that had lingered, whispering thoughts of self-doubt and urging her to hang back in the shadows. As Tara had told her so many times, it was Willow's love that helped to set her free and discover a whole new world inside herself. Willow was always amazed at the things Tara attributed to her and their relationship - how she felt free to be the person she was, that she wasn't afraid to show her quirks, and how she felt desirable.

Thoughts of desire mixed with thoughts of the story, fresh in Willow's mind, and she daydreamed about her and Tara's own first time. Though it was only three months ago, in many ways it felt like they had been making love forever, and Willow couldn't remember a time when they hadn't been intimate. But in other ways, that night seemed like it was just yesterday...

[blockquote]It was a Tuesday night at Tara's apartment, and it had become part of their routine that Willow would spend the night since she didn't have morning classes on Wednesday. They usually went to bed early, but didn't actually go to sleep right away. Willow loved their Tuesday evenings together - they spent time talking about how their weeks were going, what projects and tests they had, and what they wanted to do during the weekend.

Of course, they spent a lot of time kissing, too.

"I have to tell you something," Tara said, pulling away from a long kiss as they were lying together on her bed.

"Something wrong, baby?" Willow asked. Tara's cheeks were flushed, and Willow was sure there was an answering glow in her own. "Are you sick?"

"No," Tara replied. She caressed Willow's cheek with the back of her hand. "I-I want you." She looked searchingly into Willow's eyes.

Willow gave here an affectionate, if slightly confused smile. "You've got me. I'm right here."

"No," Tara said, blushing slightly. "I want you. You know. I'm - I'm ready. To make love. And I wanted to tell you, in case you feel ready too."

Comprehension dawned on Willow's face. "Oh!" She smiled again, as her heart threatened to overflow with feeling. Suddenly feeling shy, she looked down at their linked hands, watching as Tara stroked her fingers. She looked up into Tara's eyes, finding warmth and love there.

"I feel ready," she said. "I think I have for a while."

Tara smiled. "When should we, uh...go for the gusto?"

"Um, now?" Willow said. She laughed. "Just kidding. Sort of. But with Anya and Xander in the next room, maybe this isn't the best time."

"Especially with what I intend to do to you," Tara said, with a quick nip at Willow's ear. "I'm not sure you could keep quiet."

Willow shivered. "This weekend, then? Buffy's going to L.A. to see Angel, so we'll have my apartment to ourselves."

Tara nuzzled Willow's neck. "That sounds perfect."

Willow had been simultaneously struck by two conflicting feelings - overwhelming excitement and anticipation that she thought would surely kill her before Friday arrived, and almost crippling nervousness. What if she didn't know what to do? For all that being with Tara felt like the most natural thing in the world, what if when the time came she didn't know the right way to pleasure her? What if she wasn't any good at...oral sex? She also felt a little self-conscious. Even though she couldn't wait to feel Tara's lips and tongue on her sex - had fantasized endlessly about it, so it seemed - what if Tara didn't like the taste? What would she do then?

Since Willow couldn't do anything about the latter, she threw herself into preparing for the former with a vengeance. The first thing that came to her ordered, logical mind when confronted with a problem was to research it. So all week, whenever she wasn't in class or otherwise occupied, she read fan fiction. Smutty fan fiction - more smut than she had ever read before, poring over and over the love scenes between Xena and Gabrielle with an almost clinical eye, taking extensive notes about technique on a pad of paper. She used blue pens for fingers, pink for lips and tongue, and green for "other." She didn't spend too much time on "other" - for their first time, Willow felt pretty sure they would stick to the basics.

When Friday arrived, Willow felt like her head might explode with all the facts, helpful hints, and different methods she had read about. I feel like the biggest perv in Sunnydale. She had finished up her classes and was busy straightening up her already clean room, trying to work off her nervous energy. She glanced at the clock; Tara was due to arrive in ten minutes. She surveyed the room, and picked up the pad of paper with her notes on it for a quick, final scan. As the doorbell rang, she dropped the pad on the floor and nudged it under the bed with her toe, then hurried to open the door to greet a smiling, excited Tara.

Dinner was a blur. Willow had cooked the meal, but she hardly tasted the pasta and vegetables, and couldn't eat more than half her serving. Afterward, she excused herself to go the bathroom, where she surreptitiously brushed her teeth. She had purposefully left the garlic out of the recipe, but she wanted everything to be perfect that night. She walked into her bedroom, where Tara had lit several candles and turned off the lights.

"Wow, it's all candle-y," Willow said as she entered.

"Is it too much?" Tara asked.

"No, it's perfect," Willow said. Tara smiled and excused herself to use the bathroom as well.

When Tara returned, Willow was sitting on the bed. She had butterflies in her stomach - though she and Tara had spent countless hours in this room, tonight was special. She looked up at Tara, coming through the doorway, and was overcome by a wave of love and tenderness. Tara's face was so familiar, and yet every time she saw her, her heartbeat sped up and a thrill laced its way from the pit of her stomach all the way up to her ears and down to her toes.

Tara came a few steps forward and bent over the bed slightly to reach Willow's lips with her own. Willow smiled as she tasted Tara's minty breath.

"You brushed your teeth too?" she asked.

Tara laughed. "I figured you probably had, and I didn't know if you put the garlic in that recipe or not."

"Nope. It's like we're a couple of vampires - no garlic."

"And no steak," Tara said, climbing onto the bed next to Willow. "That means I can do...this." She nipped Willow's neck lightly with her teeth.

Willow jumped. The sensation, while unexpected, was pleasurable. And for a while, there was nothing but Tara, and her world became filled with her lips, her tongue, her hands, her body. It seemed like she had never done anything in her life except to lie on the bed and to kiss Tara, and she didn't think about it consciously when she unbuttoned Tara's shirt and slipped it off her shoulders, and Tara did the same with her pullover, tugging it out of the waistband of her pants and pulling it over her head. Bras soon followed, and then all of their clothes seemed like an unnecessary distraction.

Her butterflies were all of a sudden back with a vengeance, accompanied by moths and what felt like a few caterpillars as well. This was it. They were about to make love for the first time, and it would always be their first time, whether it went well or poorly, and there was no going back. She fumbled a bit with the button and zipper on Tara's skirt.

She felt insecure. That's what it was. She had finally put her finger on it. She wasn't sure if she was going to be good at this. Her track record so far in life was decidedly mixed - give her a computer problem to figure out, a science experiment to perform, or a fan fiction story to write, and she was on familiar ground. But there had also been several things she had tried at one time or another in life that she hadn't been good at. Sports, for example. Singing the lead role of Maria during her high school's production of "The Sound of Music." And dating boys - the angst from which had resolved itself when she figured out that she didn't want to date boys, but still, those feelings of inadequacy had taken their toll.

What if I can't please Tara? Oh god, as much as I want to do this, it was different when it was something that we planned to do sometime in the future.

Willow's hands began to shake as she tugged at the zipper, which stubbornly appeared to be stuck. She hoped Tara didn't notice.

"Are you okay, sweetie?" Tara asked.

Willow thought of shoving aside her nervousness and just plowing on through, but the concerned, warm look in Tara's eyes convinced her otherwise. There was no doubt about it - Tara was a safe haven. Willow mentally kicked herself a bit for not just talking to Tara right off the bat, but she didn't spend too much time in recriminations.

"I'm a little nervous," she admitted.

Tara's face immediately took on an expression of concern. "Baby, are you not ready for this? I don't want to do anything you're not one hundred percent ready to do." She enclosed the shaking girl in a hug.

Willow returned the hug gratefully. "It's not that, Tare. I want this, honestly, more than anything I've ever wanted in my life. Stupid zipper."

Tara sat on the bed, pulling Willow down after her and urging her to lie down and stretch out. She propped herself up with an elbow and gazed down at Willow, gently stroking the redhead's hair out of her eyes and tucking it behind her ear. "Then what is it, baby?"

"I'm afraid it's going to sound silly."

"Never." Tara punctuated that comment with an emphatic kiss.

"Well...it's this. You know I've never done this before, obviously. I'm just a little nervous...that I won't...know how to please you."

Tara gazed at Willow seriously, taking some time to consider her statement and its implications. Finally, she said, "Well, you know that I've never done this before either, so we're even there. And you know - just being with you, no matter what we're doing, is the most magical, wonderful thing in the world. I love you so much. I can't imagine that anything that we do tonight, or anytime, won't please me."

Willow gazed up into Tara's blue eyes, getting lost in the love and trust and confidence that she saw there. She felt all her doubts and fears melt away. This was the answer - just being together, and trusting each other. It wasn't about how much experience she had or didn't have. It wasn't about memorizing a list of instructions or a technical manual. It wasn't about anything external at all - the answers she had sought came from inside herself and from tapping into the love that flowed between her and Tara. She didn't have to think - she just had to be.

She laughed a little, with relief and amusement.

"What is it?" Tara quirked an eyebrow at her.

"Well, it's just that I did all this research, and I think that all the facts and ideas were kind of crowded all together in my head and were freaking me out a bit. I couldn't see the forest for the trees."

"Research?"

Willow laughed, a little embarrassed. "I've been, um, brushing up on my NC-17 fan fiction to get a few, uh, tips. On technique."

Amusement brought out Tara's dimples. "Did you find anything interesting?"

Willow reached down under her bed and grabbed her pad of paper where she had taken notes. "A few things."

Tara took the pad of paper and leafed through it. "Good god, Willow, this reads like The Joy of Gay Sex! 'Tongues, lips, the alphabet method' - wow."

"Okay, okay," Willow said, reaching for the pad. "Wait, when did you read The Joy of Gay Sex?"

Tara twisted away, laughing. "'Fingers, no fingers?' 'Positions.' Whoa, are we ready to use this yet?"

Willow laughed despite herself, still reaching for the pad. "Give me that!" She tickled Tara's inviting, curvaceous side.

Tara couldn't stand tickling - it instantly reduced her to a shrieking, giggling mess. She dropped the pad on the other side of the bed, grabbing at Willow's hands to try to make her stop. She finally succeeded in capturing her hands, and turned over on her back to gaze up at Willow.

And it happened again. Willow became lost in Tara's eyes, and her world focused on Tara. Just her eyes, her hair, her lips, her cheeks, her chin, her trusting gaze looking back. And her body. Her half-naked body. Without another thought, Willow lowered her lips to Tara's and became lost in a kiss that seemed to last forever. But it must have ended at some point, because another kiss followed, and then another, which led to the hasty removal of the rest of their clothing, touching, stroking, more kisses in new places, and then the gentlest licking which built like a crescendo and was accompanied by soft cries that grew in intensity until the rapturous peak, two voices intertwined, breathing, clinging to each other, and then more lazy, languorous kisses as the two bodies wrapped around each other and slid into sleep.[/blockquote]

Willow shivered. The memory was evocative. Not only did she feel overcome by love, tenderness, and an urge to find Tara right now for a prolonged smooching and snuggle session, she had to admit that the English boarding school story had also...stirred her in other ways.

I wonder if Tara still has that old field hockey uniform, she thought as she packed up her laptop. It's probably similar to the school uniform in this story...especially the kilt.

"Bother the headmistress," she said aloud, trying out a British accent. "She bloody well scheduled this meeting during cricket tryouts! Bugger."

I think tonight is going to be fun.
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