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Uber Fic - Gift

Postby RogueBard » Thu Jun 09, 2005 7:00 pm

Hello!
Before you start reading my fic I feel that you should be made aware of some things:
1- I'm an inexperienced writer, so don't go expecting expertise
2- I'm Brazilian, English is not my mother language. Though I'm better than most of my countrymen and I wish to be a translator, I'm no American. So there probably will be some grammar mistakes. Don't freak, point it out to me and I'll happily correct it and thank you.
3- I'm on my last year of High School (or what is the Brazilian equivalent) and I'm preparing for various universities' entrance exams (we call it 'vestibular') so updates may be a little erratic, but don't worry, they will come. Eventually.
4- I'm no expert on the Buffyverse, I saw very little of the series (I know it mostly through fics and some downloaded episodes) so I may be accused of getting out of character. Sorry for that, some help with this would be appreciated.
5- This is an Uber fic, I'm getting the characters from the Buffyverse and putting them on the world of the X-men, which is my favorite comic slash cartoon slash movie.
6- I'm kinda unsatisfied with how things happened on both 'verses, so be prepared for some changes.
7- ... Is there a number 7? Oh yeah, I love to hear opinions, but if you're going to criticize me make it constructive. Repeat after me: 'Flaming is baaaaaad, constructive criticism is goooood.'
Thanks for bearing with my idiosyncrasies. Now if you read until here I'm assuming you really want to read my story. Enjoy yourself, brave soul.


Title: Gift
Author: RogueBard
Rating: PG as of now
Type: Uber fic
Genre: Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure
Summary: This is the story of a young mutant-in-training and her journey through life.

Chapter 1 – Dear Diary

She looked around her new room and smiled. It was simple, but she didn’t need much. She walked to the bed and put her luggage down, she would unpack later.

“Don’t sleep late.” Came a voice from the doorway.

She looked at the older woman and nodded. The woman inclined her hooded head and walked away, closing the door behind her.

Sighing, the teenager flopped onto the bed and looked at the little black book on her hand. A little cliché, but still… The teenager went to her duffel and took out a ballpoint pen.


Dear diary,

Wow, I can’t believe I’m starting to do this again. The last time I kept a diary was five years ago. I was eleven when I decided that the ‘dear diary’ thing was too silly. Oh well, Ghost told me to ‘keep a journal to report my training progress’. She’s the boss. Ghost… Well, I’d better start from the beginning then.

Up until two weeks ago I was a relatively normal teenager whose sole worry was the looming High School. Sixteen is a complicated age, mom tells me. I lived with my family in a small farm in Iowa and went to school in the nearby town. Oh yeah, I’m a honest-to-goodness farm-girl. Yee-haw.

Anyway, everything started with some stupid headaches. They were harmless at first, just a small jolt of pain that would leave me dizzy for a few minutes. I didn’t think anything of it. However, they got increasingly worse in a few days. I was fine one moment and the next waves after waves of pain reverberated in my skull.

I started withdrawing. It’s not that I was overly communicative in the first place. I was always too shy. You know the stuttering dork everyone makes fun of at school? That’s me. Still, I was always close to my family. At first they thought it was just me nervous about starting High School. They began to really worry when I started to skip meals and lock myself in my room all day, not coming out even to my afternoon rides.

They took me to the doctor, but they didn’t found anything wrong with me. I was starting to get depressed, I
knew what was going on couldn’t be normal. Then the voices started. I thought I was going crazy, hearing voices in my head. Gods, this sounds like a bad supernatural flick but it’s true. I do hear voices, even now I’m hearing someone pondering the merits of peanut butter over strawberry jelly. I wasn’t going crazy, but I’m sure if it had gone on a bit longer, I would have.

Since then not a day passed without the voices assaulting my mind. So many voices jumbling together in such a way that it was impossible for me to define what they were saying, if they were saying anything at all. It was deafening. I couldn’t sleep, I barely ate. My brother wasn’t kidding when he said I looked like a zombie

I was at breaking point and no one, not my parents nor the doctors, knew what to do. It was hopeless. Then they came and my life suddenly took a 180º turn.

One day they just appeared on our doorstep. A bald man in a wheelchair and a dark-skinned woman with snow-white hair. They introduced themselves as Professor Charles Xavier and Ororo Monroe. I knew then that things were about to become very complicated.

I may be from a backwater town, but that didn’t mean I didn’t know about Professor Xavier’s School for the Gifted Youngsters and his crusade for mutant rights. The night that man came into my life, looking more powerful than a man in a wheelchair should, I knew I would never be the same.

It was that night, two weeks ago, that I was told I wasn’t crazy or ill. I was a mutant. I was terrified. You see, mutants aren’t exactly loved by today’s society. In fact, they’re down right persecuted. I never had anything against them, but I was already singled out because of my stutter and my shyness. I didn’t want anything to make me more of a freak.

My family was surprisingly understanding and supportive, my brother even cracked a lame joke about me not being nuts after all. I could tell they were relieved I didn’t have anything more serious and that helped to ease my fears.

The Professor was kind and patient as he explained that I was a telepath. A powerful one if the way it was affecting me after just being awakened was any indication. According to him I would probably have some amount to telekinesis as was common for every telepath.

He explained that my newly awakened gift was out of control and that was why it was so dangerous. If I didn’t learn how to control my powers I could very well hurt myself of somebody else. That worried my parents but Professor Xavier assured them that if correctly trained my gift wouldn’t be a danger at all, I could even do much good with it if I wanted. Then he offered to help me, to train me to use my powers.

My parents were reluctant at first. I would have to move into the Professor’s school and they didn’t want to part with me. In the end they decided my safety was more important and two weeks later I hugged by family goodbye and left.

That’s how I ended up here in Bayville. I’m now a mutant-in-training slash High Schooler. I have powers I still need to learn to control, but I feel almost like a super-hero. That’s what the X-Men are. Professor Xavier’s most capable students. Maybe someday…

Well, the Professor put a block in my powers for now. It’s more like a filter really. I can still hear strong thoughts, but now they don’t overwhelm me. This way I can adapt to them slowly as I learn control.

I just arrived here, so I don’t really know anyone. Just Ghost and I don’t know anything about her, not really. The Professor introduced her as one of his most talented pupils and she does look powerful. She’s supposed to be my sponsor here, responsible for conducting my training. I don’t know her real name and I’m assuming Ghost is just a nickname, I don’t think anyone short of Stephen King would name their child Ghost. I don’t even know what she looks like, she was wearing a hooded cloak. Weird. Maybe she likes to be mysterious. Her voice startled me a little. She didn’t sound very old, I guessed maybe early twenties at most, but her voice was so emotionless. She spoke in a low monotone and I got the impression that she didn’t feel anything, which is absolutely ridiculous. Right?

The Professor didn’t seem concerned by her strange behavior, so maybe that’s just the way she is. Maybe we can be friends, she mustn’t be that bad if Professor Xavier trusts her. If not, I just hope she’s a good teacher.

I should go now. School may not begin for another week, but said training starts tomorrow. Bright and early. Why do I suddenly feel like I just signed up for boot camp? *sigh* Can I really do this? Guess we’ll see tomorrow. Gee, when did I start being so pessimist? Must be the jet lag catching up with me. I’d better sleep before I start getting depressed.

T. Maclay


Tara closed the diary and put it on the bedside table. She yawned, feeling exhausted. Sleepily, she changed into her pjs and curled up on the bed. It didn’t take long for sleep to come.

To Be Continued…

What do you think? Personally I think my style needs some work and I just know I'm not characterizing Tara right, but for a beginner it's not that bad, is it? Let me know what you think.
Hey, I wanna put more Buffy characters here, anyone can give me a suggestion for interesting mutations?
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Re: Uber Fic - Gift

Postby soup-chef » Thu Jun 09, 2005 8:31 pm

Hey! I'm Brazilian too!!! I'm from São Paulo =D

I really like the idea of mixing the Buffyverse with X-men. But I guess when I'd picture this kind of mix, I'd see Willow as more of a Jean Grey kind of teacher than a cloaked-mysterious one, you know?

Anyway, about Tara... she sounds very teenage-y, which is the whole point, right? So that's good. But at the same time, I guess she sounds... I don't know.. kinda "too open". Or maybe I just think she'd be a little hesitant when it comes to dealing with the mutant factor.

And speaking of the mutant factor I just thought Xander should have a funny sort of mutation. Or something funny should trigger his mutation. Like maybe he's like Nightcrawler, but he doesn't know how to control his power so when he sneezes he ends up somewhere else, or something like that =P

I hope you continue this fic, as I said before, I really like the idea of a X-Buffy world.

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Re: Uber Fic - Gift

Postby RogueBard » Thu Jun 09, 2005 8:52 pm

soup-chef: Coolness! Another Brazilian! I'm from Rio de Janeiro but I have some cousins from Sampa too. Well, you see, there already is a Jean Grey (she'll appear later), so I thought it would be better if Willow were different. I'm basing her on another character I like very much, but it's not from X-men. See if you can guess who.
As for Tara, yep, I intended for her to be very much a normal teenager, but she's still Tara. I always sensed a deep wisdom from her, you know? But you're right, I guess she's taking it too well, huh? Oh well.
Heh, I like the sneeze idea, I think I'm going to use that. :-D

E respondendo a sua pergunta, eu vou prestar vestibular pra Letras Português-Inglês (de preferencia na UFRJ), eu quero fazer bacharelado e trabalhar com tradução. E você? Já fez, está fazendo ou vai fazer facul?

See ya!
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Re: Uber Fic - Gift

Postby TemperedCynic » Thu Jun 09, 2005 9:05 pm

Wow, an uber fic pulling BtVS and the X-Men together. I wonder what Chris (Artemis) will have to say about this? Not sure if he's an X-Men fan, but he'll certainly appreciate a well-written uber!

This is very good, and don't worry about Tara's characterization - so far, only her diary has been used, and this can be the place where Tara feels most brave. A farm girl with telepathy. Sadly, I wonder what she'll think over time - better to be insane from the voices or known as a Mutant.

So Tara has an amazing talent and a new "friend" in Ghost - wonder who this might be? Some may say Willow, but who knows in this reality?

Please continue - this is gonna be a great read!
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Re: Uber Fic - Gift

Postby Still Waters T » Fri Jun 10, 2005 1:13 am

Finally!! Someone's writing an X-Men/BtVS fanfic. :bow I love sci-fi of all kinds; I love the X-Men; and I love the BtVS - so YAY! :party You've started one! :bounce I've been wishing for someone to write one for sooo long. There is one fic where mutants are involved, but the writer hasn't written anything in at least months from what I remember. This one looks really promising - I hope to read lots of this fic. :D :bounce

Sowwy, just excited when I read this. :p

The start is really good; gives us a summed up history if what's been happening to her before arriving at the school. Yeah, you do write Tara as a very open person, but it is in her diary, so it makes sense. Besides, there's nothing bad with writing Tara as open and more confident than the show's Tara character - this Tara seems to have a loving and caring family, so it's understandable if she's not as painfully shy here. :)

Hmmm potential BtVS characters as mutants, hmmm. Ooh the potentials! :D While I read the fic I had a thought of Willow as Cyclops - BUT then Tara wouldn't be able to see her eyes...so I donno about that idea. But yeah, I like the idea of Willow as a telekinetic telepath as well. :bounce And the suggestion of Xander as Nightcrawler just rocks; I love Nightcrawler! :D Have you thought out how many, and which, BtVS characters to write into the fic? Wonder what kind of mutant Buffy could be.... Hey, couldn't Xander be considered for being Cyclops too? Cos he'd be cool. Just suggestions though; thinking out loud...or in this case writing out loud. Have you thought of Buffy as Wolverine maybe? If it wasn't for the fact that Oz is such a stoic, and not likely to give into his animal side of him (when he's not in full-out werewolf form I mean), I would have suggested that he be Wolverine, but I don't know well that would fit him. What about Dawn; could she be Rogue? Oh oh, do you plan to have anyone as the ice guy (don't know if his name is correct - but Bobby?) Okay, I'll stop pondering this now, but awesome fic - it's made me curious of what'll happen next. Thank you, thank you for writing this! :applause Hope to read more soon.

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Re: Uber Fic - Gift

Postby robotguru » Fri Jun 10, 2005 2:13 am

Ooh, you're combining two of my favorite universes :D

The first chapter was pretty well written, if you hadn't have told us that English wasn't your mother tongue, i don't think that i'd have guessed it, it really is that well written.

Tara does seem a little more open than many write her, but she has had a good family background in this one, it seems, and it is her diary afterall, pretty much the one place you can be totally open because there is no point in hiding form yourself.

I like a lot of the ideas suggested for X Men so far, maybe Giles for Beast? I think that might be a good match there.

Anyway, i hope you keep this going, i'll be keeping an eye on it.
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Re: Uber Fic - Gift

Postby Sn0wflak3 » Fri Jun 10, 2005 4:31 am

Hey :)
Great start! I'm loving this- just yesterday i was thinking about how good it would be to stick buffy peeps in the x-men world!!! And now i find this fic :bounce
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Re: Uber Fic - Gift

Postby Animism » Fri Jun 10, 2005 8:46 am

You have made a great start with this fic, and I look forward to seeing how you develop the characters. This was a wonderful idea, combining the Buffy verse with the X-men.
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Feedback Answers

Postby RogueBard » Fri Jun 10, 2005 10:04 am

Hey guys!
Wow, I'm surprised I got so many good reactions. I was kinda nervous about posting this fic, but now I feel more confident. Thanks. I was afraid of making Tara sound like Buffy or something. It's a pity they never showed Tara as a teenager on the show, I wonder how she would be like without that terrible family of hers.
Now onto individual answers:

TemperedCynic: Chris? Who's this Chris guy? Some uber-fic God? Where is he? Can anyone introduce me to him? *bouncing excitedly*
Er, sorry about that. *blushes*
Again, majorly relieved you liked Tara's characterization. I think the whole mutant thing opens for a good deal of angst. Her family didn't react badly, but there are still other people out there. School's gonna be tough for our Tara, that is for sure.
Ghost... Hm, I though she could be Willow, but I tend to change my mind very often, so I'm keeping her very mysterious. Maybe we'll vote, who wants Ghost to be Willow?

Still Waters T: Yay for X-Men/Buffy! I've never seen one of those and I really love both shows, so I thought, why the hell not? I've always loved the X-Men comics and the movies are just great. X-Men Evolution is good too, I love doofy Nightcrawler. And Rogue, she's my most favorite character ever. *swoons*
Oh, Tara's still shy, she's just had a nice childhood this time. So no major traumas to cause her suffering (yet). She's happy, but not very confident. Ghost will help with that, won't it be interesting? :eyebrow
I liked the ideas for the mutations, but keep in mind that there won't be just Buffy characters here, the X-Men are going to be part of the fic too, so I'm trying not to copy their powers too much. I'm still deciding over the time frame, though, I think I'll do it like the movie.

robotguru: Really?! *bouncing* Oh, thanks! I pride myself in my English, but I'm kinda insecure about writing, ya know? My vocabulary is mostly from fics (I read a LOT) so i tend to mix American English with British English. I try not to as it gets a bit confusing.
You know what? I think Giles will be the most difficult decision I'll have to make? I mean, I think of Dr. McCoy and well, it would be interesting but Giles doesn't look like the feral type. I think his mutation could be more mental then physical. I just don't want to put another telepath in the story, that would be too repetitive though I think it is the most common mutation (I mean, look at how many telepaths they have: Jean, the Professor, Psylocke, Emma Frost...). Choices, choices...

Sn0wflak3: Thanks! I've already written some more. I write mostly during my breaks at school, so it won't take much longer, my muse is working overtime.

Animism: It's such a pity that there aren't many Buffy/X-Men cross, isn't it? I've found some on Fanfiction.Net, but no W/T pairing. I mean, Willow/Wolverine is just... *shudders*

Well, anyway, thanks for taking the time to feedback, guys! I really appreciate it. A very good friend of mine said you shouldn't write fanfic only to get reviews, I'd continue writing even if I didn't get ay, n but it's good to know you like my story anyway.
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Re: Uber Fic - Gift

Postby robotguru » Fri Jun 10, 2005 12:29 pm

Rogue has always been my fave character too, i think she was probably better in Evo, loved that series. Gambit was also a fave and X-23 in the Evo series.

I still like Giles for Beast to be honest, Hank Macoy never looked feral either, until he changed, otherwise, dunno, i guess he would be a telepath.

If you want Spike in, i think you have a good candidate from the Buffyverse :p

When it comes to Willow, dunno, Psylocke was cool on the game, other than that, Kitty from Evo? That's a possibility, or Jubilee from the original series? Ghost would be good also.

What are you going to do for the bad guys? :p

If you want any ideas for characters, found this site ages ago, might come in useful http://www.uncannyxmen.net/db/characters/
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Re: Uber Fic - Gift

Postby negraoreo » Fri Jun 10, 2005 6:11 pm

Hi! :wave I've been re-reading all the replies and everything and I think Willow should be Ghost. I like fics where she's all serious and badass or sad and stuff cuz of a dark past or something and then Tara comes into her life and just changes her life and everything about her or just cheers her up. Anyways...that's just my opinion. Eitherway I'll still read this fic cuz as of right now it's one of the most intruiging ones i've read in a while. Keep going. :)
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Dilemma

Postby RogueBard » Fri Jun 10, 2005 6:23 pm

robotguru: Personally I prefer the rogue from the movies, she's a real cutie. There's three characterizations for her, really: from the old cartoon and comics she's pretty much normal if you don't count the whole I-can't-touch-anyone drama. There's the Evo one who is a goth and has the bad girl thing really going for her. And the one in the movies is a teen, full of angst, really cute and all that. I like all of them really. But not Gambit, I never liked him. I think I have something against guys with french accent.
The bad guys... That's a real good question. I don't know if I keep the X-men bad guys or put slightly altered Buffyverse villains. I dunno, what do you think?

IMPORTANT:
Well, guys, I seem to be in a bit of a dilemma now concerning Willow. The original plan was Willow as Ghost, but now I don't know if that's such a good idea. I mean, that would add some heavy angst and with the mutant angst already I'm thinking it will be too soap opera-y. So here is the deal, help me chose: Willow as Ghost, dark past, angst and all or Willow as a brand new character, being the bubbly 'n' babbling spaz we all know and love (and with a very interesting mutation that I'm planning)?
What should I do?
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Re: Uber Fic - Gift

Postby soup-chef » Fri Jun 10, 2005 7:07 pm

Willow as a dark angsty Ghost!
Because if we have a happier Tara, it would only make sense that we have a darker Willow, right? So they can help each other grow and everything.

I mean, I guess it could work with a happy Willow too, but you would have less conflicts - which could be a good thing. Or not. Well, in screen writing we're always looking for conflicts to make the story move forward so I might be a little biased there.

Still, I believe a more mature and darker Willow will contribute to your story, because it would mean a further exchange between her and this Tara.

And "YAY" for Tara having a decent family!! =D

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Re: Uber Fic - Gift

Postby GayNow » Fri Jun 10, 2005 7:24 pm

Willow as Ghost could work. But be careful of how you write it. You've put Tara at 16 years old. And Tara mentioned in her diary that she thinks Ghost sounds like she's in her early 20s. With Tara being under 18 years of age, this could be tricky. So you would need to make some adjustments when we learn more about Ghost -- maybe she *sounds* like she's older, but, in reality, she's only 17.

Of course, that could lead you to the other option of having Willow as a completely different character.

Either could work. One will just be more delicate than the other because of age issues.

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Re: Uber Fic - Gift

Postby willowtree114 » Fri Jun 10, 2005 9:02 pm

i love the storie so far, and i think you could go either way with willow and have it work, can't wait for the next up to see which way you choose for willow tho.
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Re: Uber Fic - Gift

Postby Lonewolf22 » Fri Jun 10, 2005 11:27 pm

RogueBard: Very Interesting fic, I've always been a big fan of X-Men so I'm naturally curious to see where this is going. On the whole Willow thing, I personally think you should have Willow as another mutant, I wanna see what "interesting mutation" you give Willow, but I'm kinda bias because I ABSOLUTELY LOVE babbling Willow and wanna see how her and Tara get together. I can't wait to see what happens.

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Re: Uber Fic - Gift

Postby hells bells » Sat Jun 11, 2005 3:51 am

hey just thought i'd add my two cents worth...but OMG how much do i love a buffy/x-men uber fic? this is soooooooooooooooooooooo cool...especially since i've always loved the xmen cartoons when i was a kid.

as to your dilemna...i was hoping that Ghost wouldn't be willow...because well the Ghost character just sounded darker and broodier than i imagined willow...but hey..it's your fic...bring us down this journey if you want to...i'm sure it'd still be good. Or if you choose for Willow to be the babbling-spaz like person that we all know...well that'd be cool too. theres just so many possibilities with this fic...mutants and all ooo this is SOOO cool. i'm very very excited to see what you're going to come up with.

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Re: Uber Fic - Gift

Postby Still Waters T » Sat Jun 11, 2005 4:41 am

I've read up a bit on Ghost Girl, and I think WIllow would be good as her. :D I'm no expert though; I don't know much about her, but it sounds interesting. So I vote for Ghost Girl.

And like Car (GayNow) said - the age thing; 16 is a minor isn't it? Can't remember with all the different age limits in different countries. Just so you pay attention to it - cos I think there's a rule on the Kitten Board against certain stuff involving minors in fics.

Which other character do you consider Willow being btw? I'm curious. Like what powers would she have? Both alternatives seem good - Ghost Girl or another more bubbly character. :)

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Re: Uber Fic - Gift

Postby sam7777 » Sat Jun 11, 2005 1:56 pm

Willow and Tara as mutants in the X-menverse. What a fantastic idea!!!

Love the X-men and love W/T. I vote for Willow as the bubbly 'n' babbling spaz with that very interesting mutation that your're planning? The age thing is an issue with Willow as ghost, the dark past thing is overdone IMHO (especially in the X-menverse) and I got too much of dark willow angst and soapy stuff on the show. Also the idea of a new mutation really appeals to me. Being hated mutants should provide lots of angst and darkness all on it's own.
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Decision

Postby RogueBard » Sat Jun 11, 2005 2:18 pm

Hello all!
I can't stay long cuz I'm going out with my big sister soon, so I can't give individual answers this time. I've read all your opinions and I reached the conclusion that all of you are right. Ghost Willow would make for an interesting angst-filled plot, but there's the whole issue of the age thing (though I hadn't really planned on they doing anything... illegal, ya know?). I've decided on Willow not being Ghost, though I won't get rid of this character, she's just too cool. :blush
So Willow will appear on the next chapter. Her mutation is already decided and it will be, hopefully, very interesting too. I'll give you a hint: it's not like any mutation of the X-Men (that I am aware of). Other Scoobies will appear too but I can't for the life of me think of a good mutation for Anya. Ideas, anyone?

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Re: Uber Fic - Gift

Postby Boschi » Sat Jun 11, 2005 2:53 pm

Yeah...Anya was the first character that sprang to mind for me.

Gotta have the Anya. Hmmm ... Anya traits:

blunt
sex obsessed
mediocrely, oddly perceptive
oblivious
bunnyphobic
money obsessed

hmmm....can inspire lust between two people? - sort of a related hobby to the whole vengeance thing?

Can bring folks to orgasm remotely? (Has anyone here abouts seen Orgazmo by Trey Parker???? Hysterically funny, but unfortunately not released in the States.)

Maybe a whiz at calculations? Can figure sales tax and profit margins with blinding speed?

How about just able to incite desire? For a person or an object - would be a great ability for a marketer - I can just see Anya infiltrating advertising everywhere and using it to boost her position in the world. Everyone would have an overwhelming need to own a bunny eviscerater...which her company just happens to make.
So maybe make her a bad guy?

Your English is excellent, and I think your Tara characterization is a little open and kind of Dawnish - but you seem to be having her come from a happy home, so that would make a difference.

However it works out, I look forward to reading more.

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Re: Uber Fic - Gift

Postby cperrins78 » Sat Jun 11, 2005 2:56 pm

I love the idea of a X-Men/Buffy story. Your characterization of Tara is right on the mark. I'm interested to see how you are going to introuduce Willow. I thought making Willow Ghost would make for an interesting story. But I see you are going to go with something different. So I eagerly await that as well. Please update soon.


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Re: Uber Fic - Gift

Postby SpinCycle » Sun Jun 12, 2005 1:49 am

Buffy people in the X-men universe is very intriguing to me. All the mutations and mutant hating angst seems like a great setting for the group. And getting Willow and Tara together should prove very interesting.

I'm glad that you decided to not make Willow ghost. That could have made for some great darkness and angst, but as someone else said there will be plenty of that anyways.

As for Anya maybe you could do something related to her Anyanka powers? She had the ability to grant wishes so you could do something along those lines. She created new realities with certain wishes so an ability to alter ones perception even for a few moments wouuld be cool. Have you ever seen Roswell? Cause one of their powers is sort of the one I was thinking about. Or because she switched back and forth between demon and human so much she could be normal perky money loving Anya most of the time but morph into ass kicking demon-like Anya when she needed. As more of a joking idea I thought about mentioning an ability to change her appearance since Anya was constantly dying her hair. Heh, yeah I love Anya so that's why I've gone so long about this.

I can't wait to see what you do.

Also, your english is amazing! I've grown up with english and still have never used the word idiosyncrasies. I can barely spell it.
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Answers

Postby RogueBard » Mon Jun 13, 2005 8:09 am

Boschi: I just love Anya, she's the kind of character that's fun to read and to write about. Irritating in a kind of loveable way, that's our Anya. I thought a lot about her mutation and your ideas are interesting (specially the orgasm one), but I just can't see Anya as a villain, ya know? Anyway, I think I've decided on her mutation and I'm going for the comic slash ironic factor. It will be the last thing you'd EVER associate with Anya. :hmm Can you guess?
I hope you keep reading, I'm kinda new at this, so I'll probably mess up at sometime, I just hope you guys don't give up on me. *pitiful puppy dog eyes*

cperrins78: Thanks, I'm eagerly awaiting for my brain to produce more ideas too, it seems to be working well lately. Dunno how long it's gonna last, though. :wink Willow will appear on the second chapter, I just hope I do the babbling right, I've read some fics here and people seem to have a snack for Willowbabble. I don't know if I'll get it right.

SpinCycle: Yeah, should be interesting, specially with all the mutant drama. It'll will take some time for them to get together, they'll be friends first. I think the best base for a perfect romance is a good, solid friendship.
Willow as Ghost would be interesting, but too dark and Tara already is a little more introspective than the normal teenager. They'd probably brood on their dates. If Tara was a bubbly character it could work, polar opposites work very well in my understanding. And Tara being a telepath, well, I think it would work better with someone more innocent, ya know? I've been thinking about telepath's relationships, I don't think they would be completely happy with someone who can't open up to then 100%, because it would be obvious to them, right? They would always know that there's something their partner is holding back and they would eventually resent them for it. And Ghost certainly has things she won't want to share. Willow as a new character, being more herself, would have a better chance with Tara, don't you think?
Anya was a though one to decide, but as I said before to Boschi, I'm going for the comic slash ironic factor. Her mutation already exists on the X-Men world and with her unique personality... heh, should be interesting.
Also, your english is amazing! I've grown up with english and still have never used the word idiosyncrasies. I can barely spell it.
Seriously?*preening* Aw, thanks. I'll let you in on a secret *whispers* I've never used 'idiosyncrasies' either, but it's such a nice word, eh?
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Re: Uber Fic - Gift

Postby sam7777 » Mon Jun 13, 2005 7:38 pm

I'm glad that you are keeping Ghost as Tara's sponsor while letting Willow have a new mutation. Can't wait to see what it is!!! A mutation for Anya. Hmmm! The only thing that I can think of is x-ray eyes. Imagine all the inappropriate things she could say with that. Looking forward to the next bit.
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