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Re: FFT 19

Postby sam darls » Thu Dec 11, 2003 3:30 am

Hehe..that was so funny, and really great. I loved it. Love sammi xx

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Re: FFT 19

Postby AmbeRocks » Thu Dec 11, 2003 8:03 am

great update!!!

i really like your writting, humour and ideas..!!:applause



can't wait to see what's gonna happen next





jen

:cool

There is such a variety of well-invented things that the earth is like the breasts of a woman: useful as well as pleasing - Nietzsche

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Re: FFT 19

Postby Imjustme » Thu Dec 11, 2003 8:04 am

I started reading your update last night and naturally the phone kept ringing. :cry People have bad timing...anyway this was briefly my background because I have dial-up and I was soooo scared it would get closed somehow:paranoid Anyway, the point I am trying to make is any fic that makes it to wallpaper level is VERY :applause :clap :applause

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Re: FFT 19

Postby bluewillowwitch » Thu Dec 11, 2003 1:45 pm

:bigwave onyxsundrops :flower ,

I love this fic! :clap :bow The hair jokes were :lol I'm surprised that they let them go on that long though. I kept waiting to see Buffy reach across the table and slap Anya. :wink :willow and :tara are so cute. :heart Can't wait for the 'I love you's' to start flying with those two. :grin :love Can't wait to :read more. Update soon, please? :pray :pray :pray :pray





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos



"I'm here without you baby/But your still in my dreams/ And tonight girl, it's only your and me."--3 Doors Down--Here Without You--Mine and My Baby's song

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Re: FFT 19

Postby littlecrazy80 » Sat Dec 13, 2003 11:05 am

Willow and Tara are cute. :heart

Anya´s comments are fun.



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Re: FFT 19

Postby onyxsundrops » Sun Dec 21, 2003 7:58 pm

Thanks everyone for reading and/or replying. I should have the next update posted sometime soon. I'm still a little undecided on how I should end it.



Yvonne:peace

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Update

Postby onyxsundrops » Mon Dec 22, 2003 2:05 pm

Food For Thought Part 20



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A loud, startled gasp, followed by a forced cough and stifled moan, ruptured the silence at the table.



All eyes turned to an unusually crimson Willow.



“Are you okay, Will?” Xander’s curious eyes focused on his friend. Looks of concern showed on the faces of everyone, except Tara, whose eyes held an amused glint.



“Hot! It’s hot.” The redhead gestured toward her soup and raised another spoonful to her mouth, trying desperately not to give off any signals about the real reason... or the hand on her left thigh.



“Are you sure, Sweetie?” Tara asked and smiled as she continued exploring her own little Willow-world. Willow nodded fiercely when the circles on her leg grew larger. The blonde shrugged at the other members of the table, glad that nobody noticed that her other arm had disappeared under the tablecloth.



When the coast was clear again, Willow flashed pleading eyes at her partner. But those eyes also showed a hint of arousal in them, which prompted Tara to continue maneuvering up the redhead’s leg.



With an innocent half-grin, the blonde collected bits of suede material between the ends of her fingers, and then used her palm to soothe over the creases once she released it. Her hand strayed higher. Now, wait for it, Tara thought. On schedule, Willow choked back the warm liquid as she felt long fingers gently squeeze the very top of her thigh.



“Maybe you should order something else, Willow,” Buffy frowned from across the table.



“Yeah, ‘cause you’re obviously having a hard time with that soup,” Anya said as she finished gnawing on her bread stick. “Do you need a straw?” She grabbed the plastic straw from her glass and flung the end toward Willow. Little sprinkles of soda hit Tara and flew across to Willow’s chin.



“I’m...I’m fine,” Willow wiped her face as she cleared her throat, “I’ll just start on the salmon, now.”



“Good choice.” Faith smiled, a little cautious of Willow as the redhead shifted in her seat. The brunette was sitting beside her and didn’t want to get a lap full of hot soup if Willow became spastic.



Once again, everyone’s eyes drifted back to their plates, except Willow’s, whose gaze was fixed firmly on Tara. The blonde felt the emerald stare as she focused on her pasta, and decided to tease her lover by licking a speckle of cream from the corner of her lip. Willow’s foot nervously tapped the floor, sending vibrations into Tara’s skirt-clad leg. Soft rustles were barely heard from the table as Tara crossed her legs, allowing her left ankle to briefly connect with Willow’s anxious body.



Willow smiled to herself. If Tara wanted to tease her, so be it, fortunately for her, she wasn’t above a little payback. Cutting away a piece of salmon with her fork, butter dripped from the pink flesh as Willow suspended the fork an inch away from her lips, smiling when Tara glanced up. Light lemon drops splashed onto the plate, and a single, yellow tear clung to the edge of the salmon. Knowing that Tara was watching, the redhead’s tongue curled from her mouth and slowly flicked the tiny bead, repeatedly swiping over the spot to make sure she got it all.



Tara’s mouth fell slightly open, and then widened when Willow finally slipped the fork in, letting the juice coat her bottom lip. Adding insult to injury, her girlfriend moaned at she pulled the fork from her mouth.



“How’s the salmon, Will? Is it good?” Buffy’s question momentarily brought the blonde back to her surroundings.



“Delicious.” The darkened arousal in her eyes was lost to all but Tara. The blonde cleared her throat and took a large gulp from her water, to moisten her dry mouth. Happy with herself, Willow grinned and continued eating.



Tara’s hand clinched the napkin on her lap, before she suddenly shucked it onto the floor slightly behind Willow’s chair. Carefully, she twisted to retrieve the fallen cloth, allowing just the right amount of cleavage to spill from her top as she reached for the material. Her blouse was cut just below her collarbone, but effective enough to give Willow an eyeful. Which is exactly what the redhead received when she followed her girlfriend’s movements.



Sapphire eyes caught Willow’s ogle while the redhead mouthed several words that were too low to reach Tara’s hearing. Finally grabbing the napkin, the blonde’s gaze briefly darted to the side and she noticed one of the male waiters checking her out with a smile. Embarrassed, Tara quickly straightened back into her chair and blushed as she used her hand to cover her face.



Willow whimpered when the display was abruptly taken from her. Her frown only deepened when she expected to look up and find Tara’s smug half-grin, but found that she couldn’t see the blonde’s face. A simple glance to her side, filled in the question mark when she saw a young man giving her partner the once-over. However, upon noticing the redhead’s squinty eyed expression, the waiter quickly moved his sights elsewhere.



Sliding her fingers through Tara’s hand, Willow gently pulled it from the blonde’s face and clasped it within hers. Her embarrassment forgotten, Tara smiled at the warmth radiating from Willow’s body and allowed the feeling to sink into her skin. Despite being momentarily thrown off her quest to tantalize her lover, the blonde rested their joined hands on her thigh and resumed her task, by softly rubbing over Willow’s knuckles.



“So Xander, what are you guys doing for your birthday?” Buffy asked.



“Ooh, we’re getting strippers,” Anya excitedly cut in and leaned into her boyfriend before he could answer. Xander accepted the gesture, but hastily shook his head at Anya’s reply.



“Honey, I thought we agreed that there weren’t going to be any male strippers at my party.” He gently patted her hand, ignoring the questionable gazes they received.



It was, at the moment, when Xander took Anya’s hand that Buffy finally noticed the display of affection that went around the table. She figured that since both Tara and Willow were apparently missing a visible arm, that the couple was holding hands beneath the table. Her palm itched for contact, and with a little hesitance, she bolding reached for Faith. The brunette responded immediately, completely unaware of the relieved sigh she let out as she firmly twined her fingers with Buffy’s. Now content, both women tuned back into the conversation.



Anya pouted again, since the first time didn’t get her off the hook. “Fine,” she huffed, “we can tell them to throw in a female, too. Happy?”



“Anya, do you remember the last time you had strippers at your party?” Buffy’s eyebrow quirked.



“Oh yeah,” Anya whispered dreamily as her eyes took on a faraway look. Because Xander was confident in his relationship with Anya, he ignored the look, but decided to say something if the blonde started to drool.



“How could anyone forget?” He shuddered as he remembered getting the phone-call.



“Yeah, well you’re lucky they agreed to drop the charges, Ms. Grabby-hands.” Buffy shot a look toward Anya, knocking the other woman from her daydream.



“Well, as I remember, you weren’t exactly prim and proper either.” She challenged. Buffy chuckled nervously when her joined hand shifted and Faith smirked, raising an eyebrow as if to say, ‘Oh really?’



“Thought so,” Anya continued. “Anyway, what are you getting my Xander for his birthday?” She expectantly went around the table, bypassing Willow and Tara, who were still in their own worlds. “Oh, and a two-dollar coupon from Dirt Café isn’t going to cut it,” she meaningfully looked toward the cook.



Xander grimaced at Anya’s nickname for the restaurant. Buffy looked as if she were about to comment, but she let it go and turned to the young man instead.



“So Xander, is there something you’ve been eyeing lately?”



“Buffy, you don’t have to-.” An elbow to the ribs quickly shut him up.



“Are you crazy?” Anya stared at him as if he’d grown another head. “You’re never supposed to turn down gifts, least of all, expensive gifts,” she innocently smiled toward Buffy.



“Okay, how about this... I give you the money, and you can get whatever you want.” Buffy smiled toward her friend, not noticing the flash of green in his girlfriend’s eye when she mentioned the M-word. “I mean, I know it takes away the element of surprise, but I stink at present buying.”



Despite himself, Xander agreed as he remembered the electric sock ‘thingie’ he received the previous year.



“Great,” Buffy nodded, happy with her idea. “I’m low on cash right now, but we get paid soon, right Will?” When there wasn’t an immediate response, she glanced across to the redhead.



“Yeah,” Willow huskily whispered, though she was responding to what Tara said as the two continued to giggle and talk in a hushed tone. Tara’s knuckles rested against her cheek as she leaned in toward her girlfriend, and the proximity of their faces made it impossible to clearly hear their conversation.



“Slap her. It always works in the movies when the person won’t wake up,” Anya told Faith, since the brunette was within arms reach of Willow.



“Maybe, but she isn’t sleep or unconscious,” Faith frowned at the blonde’s request.



“Your point?” Anya smirked. “Okay forget it. I have another idea.”



“Leave ‘em alone, Anya,” Faith glanced over at the couple as she gave Buffy’s hand a light squeeze. In all of her years, she’d never thought she’d ever become such a softy.



“But I’m ready to go,” she whined before rolling her eyes, “fine.” It looked as if she were finally giving up... or so they thought. Settling back into her chair with a slight lean, Xander was the only one to notice the cheeky grin she was unsuccessfully trying to hide.



Less than a minute later, Tara yelped in surprise and spun to face the blonde with a bewildered expression as her cheeks flared.



“Look, they’re awake. Can we go now?” Nonchalantly, Anya began gathering her coat and purse. However, the entire time, she was consciously oblivious of Tara’s embarrassment and the curious gazes emitting from the table.



As they left the restaurant, the blonde shot Anya another jumbled look, but this time Anya wiggled her eyebrows and winked at Tara before exploding with laughter as she skipped toward Xander’s car.



“What was that about?” Buffy asked the question Willow had been musing since leaving.



Tara shrugged, dumbfounded and still a little lost on Anya’s motives. Figuring that Tara would tell her if it was something important, Willow put aside her curiosity. Gradually, the group began to split up, leaving Faith a little hesitant to release Buffy’s hand.



“Wanna ride?” A faint glow of red crept up Buffy’s neck.



“Nah, I’m not too far away,” Faith nodded down the street and reluctantly let her arm drift back to her side.



“Oh.” Buffy briefly followed the brunette’s gaze, a little disappointed when she no longer felt Faith’s hand within hers.



“Ready?” Willow and Tara stood a little away from the other couple.



“Actually, Will, you guys go ahead. I’m going to walk Faith home.” Faith’s head snapped toward the blonde in surprise.



“It’s late, you shouldn’t be out by yourself,” Faith half-heartedly protested, “I’ll be fine.”



“I insist,” Buffy flashed her resolve face, “besides, I invited you out. What kind of date would I be, if I let you go home alone?” She froze. “Uh, not that we’re... I don’t mean...,” she trailed off.



“Okay,” Faith caved.



After saying their ‘goodbyes’ to the couple, Buffy and Faith headed down the sidewalk. The retreating silhouettes inched closer, the further they disappeared into the night, until the shadows resembled a single form.



“Looks like it’s just us, now.” Willow counted her lucky stars. “Ready?” She held her palm out, suppressing a shudder when Tara’s hand slipped into it.



Upon entering the vicinity of Tara’s apartment, Willow found it extremely hard to keep her eyes on the white lines of the road. The reason being, the echo of Tara’s breathing while the blonde’s head rested against her shoulder. Logically, she knew that it wasn’t exactly the safest position to be in, but they were almost there, and who was she to object.



Tara purposely smothered the side of her face into Willow’s shoulder, trying to catch every iota of her lover’s scent. She closed her eyes and envisioned the familiar contours, valleys, and corners of Willow’s body and bit her lip in anticipation. The previous night was great, but nothing could compare to physically being with her partner. Categorizing every gasp and twitch, Tara felt the glow of arousal illuminating her entire body.



The car rolled then stopped completely beside the sidewalk, which led to the front gate.



“Do you want me to come up?” Willow’s question prompted the blonde to snap out of her reverie. When Tara raised her head, Willow felt herself melt in Tara’s dark, hooded eyes.



“Should you even have to ask?” Tara whispered and arched an eyebrow, which only complimented her sexy half-grin.



Willow gulped, put the car in drive, and wheeled around the parking lot before Tara had time to blink. Desperately trying to minimize her giddiness and quiet the throbbing in her core, Willow willing followed Tara up the path.







Edited by: onyxsundrops at: 12/22/03 1:20 pm
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Re: Update

Postby amazonchyck » Mon Dec 22, 2003 3:30 pm

Love the under-the-table interaction - well-written. And I'll just bet what Anya did under the table to Tara. *Snickers*



amazonchyck

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Re: Update

Postby littlecrazy80 » Mon Dec 22, 2003 3:34 pm

Great update!

I loved the teasing part. More please?



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Re: Update

Postby Arwen276 » Mon Dec 22, 2003 4:01 pm

Lovely!

Anya is SO annoying! Sometimes I have to fight an urge to slap her, right after I had wished she was standing in front of me! She's got the power to irritate I tell you!!



Buffy and Faith are cute in a strange way, as they're still hesitant towards each other.

Willow and Tara, they're deep into the teasing...that must have been a very 'exciting' meal!



More!!



~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

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Re: Update

Postby sam darls » Mon Dec 22, 2003 5:13 pm

Aww, that was so lovely..and so cute. Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

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Re: Update

Postby AmbeRocks » Mon Dec 22, 2003 7:11 pm

i like were you're getting with this..! absolutely sexy and cute:) :applause



jen

There is such a variety of well-invented things that the earth is like the breasts of a woman: useful as well as pleasing - Nietzsche

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Re: Update

Postby intricate mirage » Mon Dec 22, 2003 11:09 pm

Yo dude! :bigwave



Totally digged the last two updates, that was some dinner mann, with Anya being all... Anya-like :lol But I'm glad all ended well and everyone's all happily coupled up ;) Looking forward to reading more! :D

My whole life I've loved only one person, that person was you.

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Re: Update

Postby warriorlove » Tue Dec 23, 2003 8:15 am

Great work!!!



:applause

I can take care of her...even if she never...she's my girl.

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Re: Update

Postby Tempest Duer » Tue Dec 23, 2003 5:10 pm

I totally dig under-the-table action, and I totally dug (digged? Nah, they both sound wrong... I hate conjugating irregular slang) this bit, especially with Anya being, well... Anya.

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

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Re: Update

Postby SJ » Wed Dec 24, 2003 2:46 am

Tara teasing Willow like that :p

Great update :read

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Re: Update

Postby bluewillowwitch » Wed Dec 24, 2003 12:34 pm

:bigwave onyxsundrops :flower ,

I love this fic! :clap :bow :willow and :tara are getting kinda lusty there aren't they. :wink Buffy and Faith are so cute. :heart OMG! I can't believe that Anya did that! :rofl Poor Xander. :lol Can't wait to :read more. Update soon, please? :pray :pray :pray :pray





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos



"I'm here without you baby/But your still with me in my dreams/And tonight girl, there's only you and me."--3 Doors Down--Here Without You----Mine and My Baby's song.

Edited by: bluewillowwitch  at: 1/26/04 6:51 am
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Re: FFT 21

Postby onyxsundrops » Sat Dec 27, 2003 9:46 am

*Thanks to all, for reading and/or replying. This next part is a bit short, but I hope you enjoy it*

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Food for Thought Part 21 (NC-17 warning)



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Tara sat on the bed and motioned for Willow to join her. The redhead dutifully accepted the offer and sat beside her girlfriend, hip to hip. The earlier teasing had been enough to set her system on overdrive but the soft caress of Tara’s lips against her neck, flooded her body anew. Her fingers walked from Tara’s thigh to her hip, before settling on the curve of the blonde’s breast. However, it didn’t stay long as Tara brought the hand to her lips while she nuzzled down from the redhead’s neck to her collarbone.



“Not yet,” Tara’s cool whisper formed small bumps on Willow’s flushed skin. She wasn’t yet finished with baiting her lover, though she was already well aware of Willow’s potent arousal.



Willow’s lip stuck out in the cutest way, and Tara had to stop herself from giving in. The redhead’s pout grew more defined, but quickly disappeared under the gentle weight of Tara’s kiss. Sucking the stubborn lip into the warmth of her mouth, the blonde nibbled first and then used her tongue to further explore the smoothness along Willow’s cheek. All thoughts forgotten, Willow relaxed into the gentle probing until Tara pulled back and began kissing around her face, leaving no portion untouched.



Tara leaned forward until her body followed Willow’s into the mattress. She kissed her partner as if she were imprinting memories into the redhead’s skin, one inch at a time. Happy when she felt Willow unwind and release herself into her touch, the blonde lowered her sights. But as she reached the slope of Willow’s breast, she paused and wordlessly admired the beauty before her. Tara’s eyes found green orbs curiously gazing into her blues, and she reached up to place a small peck against Willow’s mouth. Although chaste, the kiss held every ounce of passion Tara felt for the woman beneath her.



Shifting back to her previous spot, the blonde rested her head against Willow’s chest. Pillowed by Willow’s breast, she listened to the soft rhythmic thumps of the redhead’s heart, smiling when it skipped a beat. Tara felt arms wrap around her back as Willow kissed the crown of her head, and for a moment, she was completely lost. But it was too early to surrender into the safety of the embrace. She reminded herself that she had other plans’ first, then... then it would be okay.



Fingers spread, her palm traced the curves of Willow’s stomach, eliciting a groan from above. Tara reluctantly left the presence of Willow’s neighboring heart and rose from the bed. Willow, whose eyes had been closed, looked up at the sudden lose of Tara’s body. But the blonde merely smiled at her lover.



“Scoot up onto the bed.” Willow’s legs had been dangling over the end of the mattress, and Tara needed her further up for her next move. The redhead complied and used her arms to slide up the bed until her head rested near the headboard. She waited for the blonde to rejoin her, but Tara continued staring down at her. Mixtures of admiration and arousal swam across Tara’s features, but still, she didn’t move.



“Turn over onto your belly,” the blonde softly requested. Tara’s unmoving stance and the desire in her eyes only heightened Willow’s anticipation as she rolled onto her stomach.



Tara’s breath hitched when Willow turned and without further words, she crawled up until she straddled the back of the redhead’s thighs. Willow moaned when Tara’s breast pressed into her back, her own breast pushed into the sheets as her erect nipples made grooves in the material. The blonde brushed red locks to the side, kissing along the back of Willow’s neck, and then trekking down to sharp shoulder-blades. With her tongue, Tara traced the outline, placing kisses on the wings of her angel.



Lifting Willow’s arms from her side, Tara gently laid them on the pillow beside Willow’s head, leaving her knuckles grazing the wood of the headboard. The blonde’s hands traveled down, making the redhead giggle when she softly tickled her underarm. Long fingers scraped over the round edges of Willow’s breast, which peeked from the sides, before stopping to massage her lover’s flexing back. While her hands worked, her mouth kept busy along Willow’s spine and the curve of her ass.



Willow clinched the muscles of her behind when she felt Tara’s nipples sliding across her skin. Her body was like wax, melting from Tara’s fiery kisses, and she felt herself pooling onto the sheets. She fretfully jerked her leg, signaling for Tara to stop torturing her, but to no avail. In fact, the little movement only strengthened the blonde’s resolve as her hands moved lower down Willow’s back, down her butt, and rested on the backs of her legs. She placed feather-light touches on the skin behind the redhead’s knee, and smiled into the small of Willow’s back when her lover wiggled.



The redhead groaned in playful frustration, but yielded and let herself drown in Tara’s lazy strokes. When she thought Willow couldn’t take much more, the blonde rose up into a kneeling position over Willow’s calves. Shortly after, she gently tugged on the side of her lover’s stomach until Willow mimicked her pose.



Both women were now resting on their knees as their bodies pressed into each other. Blonde hairs prickled against Willow’s ass as the redhead braced herself against the brim of the headboard. Allowing her head to drop back onto Tara’s shoulder, Willow gasped as the blonde’s lips left trails from her jaw to the patch of skin behind her ear.



Still adoring her partner’s face in kisses, Tara’s hand snaked around Willow’s front. Cupping the firm breast into her palms, she moaned when the stiff nipples bounced back into place as she repeatedly massaged up and down. A single hand strayed lower, coming to hover over dewy, red curls. As Tara ground her own wetness into Willow’s behind, she twisted a few, short red hairs between her fingers before sinking the tip of her longest finger into Willow’s warmth.



Once she reached the slippery tunnel, she curved the probing digit upward and slowly rubbed the inner rim. While Tara continued her agonizingly slow massaging of Willow’s core, the redhead rocked her hips back, desperately trying to take more of Tara into herself.



“Shh,” Tara soothed as she sensed Willow’s frustration, “relax, Baby.” Her breath washed over Willow’s body, and the redhead shook as the chill ran down her spine.



Willow’s pout twisted into a straggled moan when Tara lightly pinched her nipple, the delicious sting making her shiver and quake. Tara felt warm liquid dripping through her fingers and onto the bed, as Willow’s body pulsated around her. Releasing the breast she was teasing, her hand trekked to the damp apex of Willow’s legs. Repositioning herself so that one of Willow’s bent legs rested between hers, Tara spread the redhead’s knees further apart, careful not to lose her own balance. Satisfied with how her body aligned with Willow, Tara used two fingers from her left hand, to pull the honey coated labia apart. Dipping into the folds, the blonde circled the inner wall as she leaned into her lover.



Willow gasped, her lungs searching for air as Tara finally pushed further into her body before adding another finger. The blonde whispered words of encouragement when Willow’s hips bucked back, allowing her fingers to reach deeper. Closing her eyes and moving her head beside Willow’s, Tara sighed when the redhead sweetly captured her lips. As Tara’s thrusting digits moved faster, Willow loosened her grip on the board and reached back with her left arm.



With a sweaty hand, she pulled Tara’s body more into her as the blonde began rocking harder against her body. Knowing that her lover needed release as bad as she did, Willow found the small pebble jutting out between Tara’s labia and with ardent fingers, she dove in. A loud groan echoed in Tara’s throat. Willow’s erratic breathing and the blunt nail scraping the underside of her clit, was now becoming too much for the blonde.



She pressed closer into her lover, dimly aware that Willow was now supporting the majority of their combined weight. The blonde curled her fingers, rotating the soreness from her stiffening wrist, while at the same time, continuing to pleasure her trembling girlfriend. Grinding faster against Willow, the blonde layered her partner’s shoulder with wet kisses as she struggled to keep her eyes open.



It felt as if tiny grains of sand were trapped behind her lids, as her core fluttered and her fingers sped up, taking the sounds in the room to a crescendo. They released simultaneously, colors flashed before their eyes as dozens of tremors made every nerve in their bodies, twitch and cry out. Willow was the first to calm as her sluggish limbs gave out, causing her to topple onto the bed. Seconds later, Tara followed, her quivering body sprawling out halfway on Willow’s back and the mattress.



Still panting, the women lazily stared at each other in awe, neither one had the strength to kiss the other, so they settled on satisfied grins. Willow’s eyes drooped as she fought to stay awake, but it was useless. Seeing the same conclusion on Tara’s face, the redhead allowed sleep to overcome her.



“I love you,” she managed to whisper before darkness took over.



At those three short words, Tara’s eyes snapped open, her tiredness completely forgotten. She gazed over at Willow, wondering if the woman was aware of what she’d said, but Willow was fast asleep. Tears quickly filled her eyes and she leaned over, pressing her lips to Willow’s, before rising to hover above her ear.



Although, she knew that Willow was probably too far gone to hear her, Tara softly recited her heart’s message. Sinking back into the pillow, a warm, single tear ran down her face as Willow subconsciously wrapped her into a loose hug. Surrendering to sleep, she missed when Willow’s lips twitched and the redhead smiled, taking Tara’s words into her dreams.









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Re: FFT 21

Postby AmbeRocks » Sat Dec 27, 2003 10:47 am

man that was beautiful!!!:applause

i was thinking christmas was over, and there you go giving us a present like this! reallly amazing update:thud



jen

There is such a variety of well-invented things that the earth is like the breasts of a woman: useful as well as pleasing - Nietzsche

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Re: FFT 21

Postby Marilda » Sat Dec 27, 2003 11:09 am

That was absolutely amazing. It was so sexy and yet very sweet at the same time. I loved it.

Marilda
 


Re: FFT 21

Postby Washi » Sat Dec 27, 2003 11:47 am

Hey Yvonne!



First of all, that was hot at the beginning, we ould totally picture it, and the end was just aww worthy. Great job! :grin

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Re: FFT 21

Postby bluewillowwitch » Sat Dec 27, 2003 12:39 pm

:bigwave onyxsundrops :flower ,

I love this fic! :clap :bow I think i need to find my girl or a :shower . :lol :willow was awake when she said it. :grin Oh please tell me she is gonna let :tara know. :pray :pray Can't wait to :read more. Update soon, please? :pray :pray :pray :pray





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

------------------------------------------

"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos



"I'm here with out you baby/But your still with me in my dreams/And tonight girl, there's only you and me."--3 Doors Down-Here Without You----Mine and My Baby's song.

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Re: FFT 21

Postby intricate mirage » Sat Dec 27, 2003 12:47 pm

Wow now that was just simply amazing and beautiful! Well written! :clap

My whole life I've loved only one person, that person was you.

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Re: FFT 21

Postby littlecrazy80 » Sat Dec 27, 2003 12:57 pm

Great update! More please!?!?!?!



*lil´c*

I´m an actress... I don´t pee. Amber in Augsburg



Check this out

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Re: FFT 21

Postby sam darls » Sat Dec 27, 2003 2:50 pm

Awwwwww..that was soo good. I loved it. Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

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Re: FFT 21

Postby SJ » Sun Dec 28, 2003 4:06 am

That was very :thud

Great update :read

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Re: FFT 21

Postby Arwen276 » Sun Dec 28, 2003 4:47 am

Great update!

and it amazes me that I can find the words to comment...I SO BADLY NEED A COLD SHOWER!

The last lines were beautiful...





More soon?



~Arwen



Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

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Re: FFT 21

Postby Fuzz WT » Sun Dec 28, 2003 2:15 pm

OMG! the end of the part was really really really beautiful. :blush Oh how I love it!



*Fuzz*

*******




Hey! You're gonna back off! She said no and that's it. ~ TARA

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Re: FFT 21

Postby 2DIAMONDS » Tue Dec 30, 2003 3:50 pm

:wave Hey, onyxsundrops - Happy New Year!!! :party



:shower



I haven't used the shower emoticon in a good long while. Then again, I haven't read anything as steamy, sexy, and as hot as that in just as long.



I can't wait for the next part to see the impact of those three words - Will Willow remember telling Tara she loved her? Will she remember what Tara whispered to her before she fell asleep? What the heck did she whisper anyway?



Beautifully written!!! :clap



Helen

xoxo

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Re: Re: FFT 21

Postby soluna350 » Thu Jan 15, 2004 7:56 am

Hi:bigwave (delurking again)Totally amazing update:drool . I cant wait for the next chapter :gnome please update soon.

Sol





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