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Re: Chapter Ten

Postby littlecrazy80 » Sun Aug 01, 2004 1:13 pm

Both pregnant!?!?!?!?! :shock



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Re: Chapter Ten

Postby BurningWhiteRose » Sun Aug 01, 2004 2:51 pm

I have one thing to say about two pregnant women, living under the same roof.



H-O-R-M-O-N-A-L!!!



And thats all I have to say about that.



Sincerely,

:flower BWR

***

If homosexuals dont reproduce, why are there so many of them?-Jim David

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Re: Chapter Ten

Postby The Rose24 » Sun Aug 01, 2004 9:48 pm

Yikes! Things are going to get even more interesting and probably crazy.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Chapter eleven

Postby musicmad10 » Mon Aug 09, 2004 2:54 am

Hello. Sorry for the long wait, I've had writers block for about 3 days, but here is the new update.



Chapter Eleven – Help!





Two and a half months have passed since Willow also found out she is pregnant. Together she and Tara have gotten through to the final two weeks of their pregnancies.



The reason Willow became pregnant was because of a reason neither could tell any doctor or nurse that asked them. They both believe that the night Tara became pregnant the spell was so strong and their lovemaking was so amazing that they both conceived. The only thing that they don’t understand is why Willow didn’t show signs of pregnancy until 6 months.



But after their initial concern, the medication that the doctors prescribed for Willow began to work and her belly began to grow slightly and although she will never looks heavily pregnant she certainly feels it.



Now both ‘parents to be’ can feel their child kick away inside their stomachs. Tara has already gotten used to it, but Willow on the other hand has not.



“OW! It hurts!” wines Willow, “When will it stop!”

Tara can’t help but smile at Willow’s behaviour, which she believes is cute. “It’ll stop when it comes out,” giggles Tara taking hold of Willow’s hand.



The pair is sitting on the sofa discussing the design plans for the nursery; they’ve had to rethink after they found out about the second child.



“I can’t believe, you can just sit there and not feel it hurt,”

“I can feel it, remember, our little secret? It just doesn’t hurt me much. Sometimes it does but not usually,”



Surprisingly they have also found out something very strange and unexplainable. Whenever the baby kicks inside one of them it also happens to the other baby at the same time. So when Willow feels kicks so will Tara. They both like it in a way, as when it hurts them both they can really say they know how it feels.



“Well anyway back to this design,” says Willow.

“Right yes, Xander’s already busy on the cots, which should be finished soonish,”

“If Anya doesn’t keep pulling him away to have sex!” laughs Willow.

“Right! Okay so we decided I’d paint a mural on the wall. But of what?”

“Oh I say a really nice garden or something?” asks Willow.

“Sounds nice. I’ll start drawing up a design then?” says Tara getting another piece of paper from the table.



“Okay, I’m just going to get some food. You hungry?” asks Willow standing up.

“Oh I’m fine thanks, you go ahead,”

Slowly Willow waddles into the kitchen and grabs an apple and a pear and sits down on the table.

All of a sudden Willow feels a rush of tiredness and her body feels all floppy.



Wow, weird. What’s going on? She thinks as she bites into the apple.



Another unexpected feeling hits Willow hard. The baby begins to kick hard and she struggles with the pain as cramps set in.

“Tara!” she streams.

As soon as she screams for help Tara rushes in also holding her stomach in pain.

“What is it? Make it stop!” cries Willow.

“I think its contractions,” replies Tara steadying herself against the table next to Willow.

“God! The babies are coming? Together? At the same time?” whimpers the redhead.

“Not yet, not until…”

“Tara? What is it? Speak to me?” asks Willow desperately holding onto Tara’s arm.

“Call Xander tell him we’re having the babies! Now!” screams Tara, as her face turns red.

Willow doesn’t understand and stares at Tara and notices blood dripping through her skirt. Once again pain crashes through Willow’s bodies and she screams as she realises her waters are also breaking. Now she understands and rushes as quickly as she can towards the phone.



She dials in the number and hopes Xander’s at home.

“Hello?” says a voice.

“Xander thank God!” gasps Willow.

“Hi Will, you sound… What’s wrong?”

“They’re coming,”

“Who? Who’s coming?” asks Xander also beginning to panic slightly.

“The babies, they’re coming now, hurry, we need to get to the hospital, now!” replies Willow as she almost screams in pain.

Willow then waits to hear Xander’s voice, but nothing other than a long high-pitched tone.

“He’s hung up!” says Willow.



TBC.... :eyebrow



So what'd you think? I've never been pregnant so i wouldn't know what it feels like, so i apologize if some of it sounds wierd.

Luv Hannah

musicmad10
 


Re: Chapter eleven

Postby BurningWhiteRose » Mon Aug 09, 2004 11:01 am

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!



:thud



I...



HOLY SHIT!!



Wow thats just crazy,

:flower BWR

***

If homosexuals dont reproduce, why are there so many of them?-Jim David

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> Re: Chapter eleven

Postby tmr » Mon Aug 09, 2004 11:25 am

:shock okay everyone calm down there's goinh to be a good explantion for this riiight?

tmr
 


Re: > Re: Chapter eleven

Postby littlecrazy80 » Tue Aug 10, 2004 11:14 am

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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Sorry

Postby musicmad10 » Fri Aug 20, 2004 1:23 pm

Hello everyone.

Sorry for the lack of updates recently. I've been on holiday, and come back with no inspiration and writers block! Typical! :letter

Well i'll try and update soon.



Luv hannah :bigwave

musicmad10
 


Chapter Twelve

Postby musicmad10 » Mon Aug 23, 2004 6:42 am

Hi and here is an update at last! Sorry for the wait. but i'd rather wait if it means the chapter will turn out better. So here it is.



Chapter Twelve – Delivery





“I can’t believe you did that!” says Anya swatting Xander on the chest.

“Hey! I was nervous alright!”

“Well don’t be nervous again. I mean you just dropped the phone and ran out of the door almost screaming. I bet the neighbours are still wondering what the hell is going on!” she huffs as she takes a seat.

“We don’t need to worry about the neighbours dear. It’s Will and Tara we need to be worrying about!” he says as he also takes a seat.

“I’m not worried they’ll be fine. It’s only giving birth. I mean how hard can it be?”





“Oh my God! It hurts!” screams Willow, as she lye’s on the bed in the delivery room.

“I know, but it’s suppose to sweetie,” groans Tara, who is lying in the bed next to her.

“Well make it stop! I’m not made out for giving birth. That’s why we wanted you to carry it, not me. You look so cool and calm and look at me a mess! Ahhhh!”





“What was that? I wanna go and look!” Xander says suddenly standing up.

“No, you don’t! You’d faint!” grins Anya.

“Yeah okay I would, but I wanna help,”



Both Anya and Xander are sat right out side the doors to the delivery room, so unfortunately for them they can hear every scream coming from the pair. Xander’s not too happy about it, but Anya’s, well she doesn’t mind the sound of screaming occasionally.

“Where’s Buffy? She should be here by now. I rang her and everything,”

“She’ll be here. She wouldn’t miss it for the world, believe me,” reassures Anya. “Now sit down and relax, and be thankful it’s not you doing the pushing and going through the pain!”

“Thanks, that makes me feel so much better,” huffs Xander and he slumps back into his seat.





“Now, don’t worry this’ll hurt, but you’re ready to push. So when I say push as hard as you can. The harder you push the quicker it’ll be over. Okay Tara?” asks the kind doctor.

“Okay, I’ll push!” says a slightly red faced Tara.





“Oh no. Another scream! It sounds like Tara!” says Xander looking pale and as though he’s about to faint at any moment.

“Stop being such a girl, and look here come Buffy. See I told you she’d be here.”



Xander spots Buffy rushing towards them and he leaps up. Buffy runs straight into his arms for a hug.

“How are they?” she asks nervously stepping back slightly.

“Um, hard to say, all we can hear is screaming and it so sounds painful!” replies Xander.

“Right. Well that could be a good or a bad sign, right?”

“I suppose, just sit for a bit, it kindda helps,” replies Xander with a weak smile.





“Okay Willow, you’ve gotta start pushing or it’s never going to come out! It’s now or never!”

“But I’m too tired!”

“I told you not to get hysterical but you did, now I can’t help that so you’re just gonna have to do it,”

“Right, okay I can do this!”

“You can do it!” shouts Tara.



“It’s coming! It’s coming! I can see the head!” shouts the doctor as Tara continues to push.





“I just heard them say something like, you can do it! Do you think the babies are coming already?” asks Buffy.

“Already? We’ve been here for ages!” moans Anya.

“And we’re staying until the bitter end!” says Buffy.

“You don’t wanna get on Willow’s bitter end I tell you. I feel sorry for those poor poor doctors. They’ll have their heads bitten off by the time they finish!” says Xander.

The gang hear one final cry and then nothing. Everything goes quiet.



“Okay that’s weird,” says Anya.

“I heard a baby! I heard a baby!” squeals Buffy jumping up.

“I heard two, oh my God, they’ve done it, really really! Ah!” laughs Xander as Buffy and Xander hug in pure excitement and delight.



“I wonder if they’re girls or boys or one of each?” says Anya.

“I don’t know. They told the doctors when they had the scans they didn’t wanna know. They wanted it to be a surprise,”

“Well… Oh here comes a doctor,”

“Hello? Are you here for the Rosenberg-Maclay’s?” she asks.

“Yes! Are they okay?” asks Xander.

“Oh they’re very okay,” she smiles.

“What have they got? You know girls? Boys?”

“They’ve got….”





TBC....



*evil grin* :bigwave



What do you think?

I'll try and update sooner this time.

Luv Hannah



musicmad10
 


Chapter Twelve

Postby DreamLover » Mon Aug 23, 2004 7:59 am

Ooooooo myyyy god both at the same time that's like code red! I just started reading this fic how did you come-up with this idea. Thank god I'm not in that waiting room than I definitely need a shot of something... breath OK I'm breathing again. But what I wanted to say is I love the story and your are evil, letting us hang there.









DreamLover
 


Re: Chapter Twelve

Postby littlecrazy80 » Mon Aug 23, 2004 12:13 pm

Heh I wanna know what they have. :rage



Great update! But giving birth at the same time is :gnome



*lil´c*

"I am S-E-X-Y" Amber at the FedCon



Sweet Amber ~~~ Amber Board ~~~ Danielle Benson ~~~ Danielle Benson France ~~~ Danielle Board

littlecrazy80
 


Re: Chapter Twelve

Postby The Rose24 » Mon Aug 23, 2004 8:47 pm

Heeeeeyyyyy!!!!!! :gnome That was mean! Please update soon.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Edited by: The Rose24  at: 8/23/04 7:49 pm
The Rose24
 


Re: Chapter Twelve

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Mon Aug 23, 2004 11:05 pm

:pride evil hannah eviiil!! That is soo not fair....yes i think you ARE EVIL!! You better update soon or else ill um....not read it and leave feedback!! so there! :p

:no

-rose

I didnt know what being happy was till i found you, i didnt know what love meant till i loved you.

Spikeizmine87
 


Chapter 13

Postby musicmad10 » Wed Aug 25, 2004 1:30 pm

Hey everybody! Sorry for the cliff hanger, but i just wanted to keep people guessing a little longer! I promise you'll find out in this chapter. And i tried to update quickly for you all! :cool



Well here you go:



Chapter Thirteen – Something’s Gone Wrong!





“Hello? Are you here for the Rosenberg-Maclay’s?” asks the doctor.

“Yes! Are they okay?” asks Xander.

“Oh they’re very okay,” she smiles.

“What have they got? You know girls? Boys?”

“They’ve got…”



Before the doctor can carry on her sentence a nurse runs up to her in a panic.

“Quickly, something’s gone wrong. You have to hurry up!” she says jumping up and down slightly.

The doctor moves her and the nurse to one side and they whisper to each other.



“Did you hear that? Something’s gone wrong!” repeats Xander.

“It won’t be Will or Tara, trust me,” says Buffy calmly.

“How do you know? Look they’re heading right into the delivery room. This is bad, real bad! Oh God, Will. Or Tara, whoever,” sobs Xander.

Quickly Anya takes Xander into her arms and comforts him the best she can.

“It’ll be okay, honest. And if anything has gone wrong, at least the babies are already born, so they won’t die!” she says.

“Thanks, for getting everything into perspective…”

“Good,”

“…They’re gonna die!”



“Who?” smiles the doctor re appearing from the doors.

“Will? Tara? I don’t know!” cries Xander.

“For peat’s sake you cry like a woman!” groans Anya.

“Die? How’d you get that idea? They’re fine,” grins the doctor.

“But, something’s wrong and you going in there and…”

“Oh, sorry, it was a different patient and she’ll be fine now, oh and by the way they’re two girls!” she beams as she gives them the good news.

“Girls, both? Yes!” shouts Buffy as she punches her fist in the air in happiness.

“Happy, then?” asks the doctor.

“Oh yes, can we see Will and Tara?” asks Buffy.

“Oh yes, sure. We’ve put them in a room together in the recovery rooms, so come through,”



The gang follow the doctor through a tight corridor and into an open space with doors lining one side of the wall.

“They’re in room number one. I’ll just knock and see if they’re okay. Follow me,”

Lightly tapping the door, she pokes her head in and asks if they wouldn’t mind seeing some very excited visitors.



With a yes from them both the doc lets the gang in.

“Will! Tara!” exclaims Buffy as she races up to Willow and then Tara and hugs them both.

The doctor silently walks out shutting the door.

“How are you?” asks Xander also hugging them both.

“Good, just very tired and painful!” smiles Willow.

“I’m just relieved,” sighs Tara happily.

“Well I gotta tell you, you two have a pair of lungs on you. My God, we could hear you outside the room!” says Xander.

“And Xander nearly fainted. Well a couple of times actually!” grins Anya.

“I bet he did!” says Willow with a giggle.

“Thanks guys,” replies Xander.



“Anyway, glad you’re both feelin’ fine. So have you seen you’re new family yet?” asks Buffy excitedly.

“Well only very briefly. We got to hold them after we gave birth, but the nurses will be bringing them round soon,” says Tara.

“Will they be in those little plastic tank looking things like on TV?” asks Xander getting rather excited.

“Yes, I guess so,”



“Was it really bloody and gross?” enquires Anya.

“What?”

“The birth?”

“I suppose so I mean I couldn’t see. Thank God!” says Willow looking a little pale at the thought.



“What are you going to call them?” asks Buffy.

“We’ve decided on Gemma and Jane, but we’re not sure which one should be which. So It’ll be up too you to choose which one we call Gemma and which one we call Jane. Is that okay guys?” smiles Willow.

“Wow! Really?” gasps Xander.

“Sure, why not?” grins Tara, happy that everything has turned out perfect.

“Wicked. Can’t wait to see them now!” says Buffy, as the group begin to discuss what will happen next.





TBC....



Ahhh, see it all turned out alright in the end! :luv



Feedback please! i luv feedback! :eyebrow

Luv hannah

musicmad10
 


Re: Chapter 13

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Wed Aug 25, 2004 4:26 pm

:bounce :bounce :heart :banana

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAAAAAY! Girls girls girls! "bounces up and down" Man Anya cracks me up!! haha lovely update hannah!! Update more damn you! "shakes fist" :)

:pride

-rose

I didnt know what being happy was till i found you, i didnt know what love meant till i loved you.

Spikeizmine87
 


Re: Chapter 13

Postby The Rose24 » Wed Aug 25, 2004 10:18 pm

Congratulations to our ladies!! :bounce Having two girls is amazing.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: Chapter 13

Postby littlecrazy80 » Thu Aug 26, 2004 12:19 pm

YAY they have girls!!! :bounce



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Sweet Amber ~~~ Amber Board ~~~ Danielle Benson ~~~ Danielle Benson France ~~~ Danielle Board

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Chapter 14

Postby musicmad10 » Tue Aug 31, 2004 2:31 pm

Well here we go again, another chapter and another piece of love for those two lucky babies! :baby :luv



Chapter Fourteen – Getting All Maternal.





“Ahh, aren’t you just the cutest!” coos Buffy as she hols one of babies, tightly in her arms.

“They’re both so cute! Xander I want one!” says Anya as she holds the other baby.

“You can’t kidnap the baby, especially seeing as we’re all stood here!” replies Xander nervously.

“I don’t mean theirs. I want one Xander!”

“Okay, let’s not talk about this just now can we!” blushes Xander.



As Buffy, Xander and Anya fuss over the babies, Tara and Willow watch them with amused faces.

“You do realise that they are going to be so spoilt!” giggles Tara.

“Yeah, if not by us, by everyone else. But it will be both no doubt. I can’t wait to be a proper parent!” grins Willow proudly.

“We already are, ‘proper parents’ look our kids are over there now,”

“We really need to get those three to name them soon, I mean how hard can it be?” says Willow.



All of a sudden one of the babies begins to cry a little, not too loud thankfully. Buffy looks at it in her arms, suddenly feeling all maternal she realises straight away that she’s hungry.

“Hey Will! I think you’re kid’s hungry, you might wanna help her,” she sighs with a happy smile.

“Bring her over here please Buff. Looks like you’re getting attached to her already,” says Willow so pleased that everyone likes her daughters.

“I am. They’re so sweet. Auntie Buffy gonna spoil ‘em when they get older, believe you me. And if they’re anything like you Will, they’ll be finding sneaky ways of getting money and sweets out of me, you wait!”

“I can believe that!” giggles Tara.

“Hey! Now pass me over my innocent baby!” she pouts.



As soon as the baby is put into Willow’s arms she began to calm down. After seconds she quieten downs considerably.



Then the other child starts. Anya passes her over to Tara.

“I think we’d better leave the proud Mums to it then,” says Xander.



“Thanks. Oh and by the way, when we’re done, can you choose which one is Gemma and which is Jane please? So we can call them by name,” says Willow.

“Sure we can. It would be a good idea. We’ll be in the cafeteria or something, having a coffee or something. We’ll come back after, okay?” replies Buffy.

“Great,”



“This feels so weird,” giggles Willow.

“It shouldn’t!” replies Tara with a cheeky grin on her face.

“Ha ha. I mean you have to agree. Because, when you do it, it makes me hot and sweaty among other things. But this, it just feels different,” beams Willow as she looks down at her newborn daughter then at her wife.



“I know, I was just teasing! It still feels nice, just in a different sort of way, thankfully!” Tara and Willow have a light giggle at this thought.

“So which one do you think will be Gemma?” asks Willow.

“Don’t have a clue, I suppose we’ll find out soon,”



“I’m just gonna take a trip outside to catch my breath, be right back,” says Buffy as she leaves Anya and Xander talking baby talk.



Buffy turns the corner and through the doors, then she gets hit with flashes of bright lights and loud shouting.

“Buffy! How’s Willow and Tara?”

“What have they got?”

“What are they called?”

These are the only things Buffy can actually pick out from the rabble.

“Can everyone please be quiet!” shouts Buffy.

Slowly the paparazzi quieten down.

“Right all I’m going to say is they’re both doing fine. They’ve had the babies, but there will be no further news until the parents say so, okay?” she says as she turns around and heads back inside.



tbc..



Hope you like it. I decided to add the journalists in as they are still famous, and that would probably happen in real life.

Luv Hannah:eatme

musicmad10
 


Re: Chapter 14

Postby The Rose24 » Tue Aug 31, 2004 10:20 pm

Tara and Willow are going to be such good parents.



The press is always interrupting at inappropiate times! :rage

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: Chapter 14

Postby littlecrazy80 » Wed Sep 01, 2004 10:56 am

So cute! :heart



*lil´c*

"I am S-E-X-Y" Amber at the FedCon



Sweet Amber ~~~ Amber Board ~~~ Danielle Benson ~~~ Danielle Benson France ~~~ Danielle Board

littlecrazy80
 


Sorry

Postby musicmad10 » Fri Nov 05, 2004 3:47 pm

hello everyone!



I'm sorry i haven't updated for ages i have been really busy with starting college fancying the straight girls ( what a drag!) :tear and recently hurting my arm badly, so all in all not such a good time.



I'll try and write an update as soon as poss. I'd also like to say to all the writers, i have been reading all the stories on the board recently and they're all fab! :laugh :bow



So i'll try my bestand see what happens!



Luv Hannah :bigwave

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