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Part 13

Postby hermitstull » Thu Nov 21, 2002 11:20 pm

Hey all-

Hope your week is going well. I'll have another update soon, later tonight or tomorrow night. Here's the next installment...





Part 13

Author's note:

Just a short update today to set the stage for what's to come. The big battle between the forces of good and evil is still a few days away (in this story) but a lot is going to happen before then. Enjoy!









“I can’t believe you just want us to sit here on our ass and do nothing!” Faith barked at Lucas.



“I hate to admit it, but I tend to agree with Faith,” Buffy added calmly. “They’re on the ropes. We’ve got their stuff, so the zombie gravy train has derailed.”



“This,” Lucas pointed to the books the slayers had stolen from Mr. Rouse that were scattered across the coffee table. “This is nothing. It’s what they wanted you to take. It was a set up.”



“I sure as hell didn’t smell like a set up,” Faith crossed her arms over her chest. “That place was zombie lab central.”



“Did you see any bodies?” Jay asked, leaning on the frame at the entryway to Buffy’s living room.



The girls looked at each other, unsure.



“Or did you just see parts,” Jay asked, examining her fingernails. “Because if you just saw parts then I’m betting that the real workshop is in the area, maybe even someplace else in that warehouse, but not where you found that stuff.”



She looked up at the pair of slayers. “Well?”



“Shit,” Faith said under her breath, sitting down hard on the couch.



“So what now,” Buffy asked, knowing that Jay was probably right. They hadn’t bothered to look around the warehouse at all on their way out, making their investigation a cursory one at best.



“We wait,” Lucas answered. “We plan.”



“But not too long,” Jay added, looking at the trio before her. “No more than a week. Daphne and Mr. Rouse know that we won’t attack today, and they’ll use this time to create an army of darkness. We just can’t let it get too big.”



“So the odds will only be somewhat against us, not overwhelmingly against us,” Buffy replied sarcastically.



“In this business, they’re always against you Buffy. You just have to know how to use that to your advantage.” Jay gave the slayer a small smile. “Worked against Glory, didn’t it?”



“Yeah, but I spent my summer vacation in a coffin,” Buffy quipped.



Before anyone could reply, the sound of a key in the lock of the front door was heard. Willow, Tara, and Xander came in, talking and laughing.



“Hey guys,” Xander greeted. He held up a box of donuts, “Sugary goodness for all.”



“I could use a break,” Buffy said, taking the box from Xander and heading with him to the kitchen.



Tara and Willow looked at Faith, Lucas, and Jay in the living room.



“Hey, are we late?” Willow asked. “Cause Buffy called and said the meeting started at ten am, and look, it’s only nine fifty five, so were early, but it looks like there’s been a little pre-meeting meeting here.”



“No, you’re not late,” Faith replied. “I just got here myself.” She rubbed her hands together. “Donuts huh? I haven’t had a donut in a long time.”



The dark slayer quickly exited the room, heading for the kitchen.



“Where’s Giles?” Jay asked the pair of witches.



“Oh, he called. Seems Anya has a busy day of vengeance, so he’s watching the Magic Box. He said to call him and let him know what the plan is,” Tara answered, moving into the living room, but not sitting.



“Jay, what is going on here?” the Wicca asked the demon fighter.



“A pre-meeting strategy session,” Jay replied, continuing to lean on the frame.



“Why?” Willow asked, moving to stand beside Jay.



“It wasn’t planned, it just happened,” Jay replied, looking at Willow then at Tara. “It wasn’t, honest.”



“Lots of things seem to be just happening,” Willow murmured under her breath.



Jay raised an eyebrow at the red head’s comment, but didn’t respond.



“So what did you four decide?” Tara asked.



“Not to rush in,” Lucas answered. “We can’t delay indefinitely, but we certainly can’t storm the castle, so to speak, today. We need to do a tad of research and more investigation.”



“I’m down with the research,” Xander said, entering the living room from the other end. “What are we researching?”



“First, we need to find out the history of that warehouse,” Lucas began. “Mr. Rouse tends to pick hot pockets of dark magic as locations for his workshops.”



“It makes his job easier,” Jay added.



“But Sunnydale is on a Hellmouth. Isn’t the entire area a hot spot for the dark mojo?” Xander asked.



“Not necessarily,” Tara explained. “Certain areas have a higher concentration of magic, some don’t have any at all. Like the Hellmouth is a spring, and it has a few little streams that branch out of it. This area of town is pretty much hot spot free, for example.” Tara looked at Xander who nodded.



“We can check that entire area,” Willow offered. “Just in case they have a back up location.”



“Which they probably do,” Lucas was impressed. Sunnydale’s resident evil fighters were much more seasoned than he expected. “Once we can locate all of the potential zombie factories in that area, Jay and Faith will investigate.”



“I can get blueprints of all he stuff in that area,” Xander offered. “My company has done a lot of work in that part of town in the last few years.”



“Excellent.” Lucas nodded.



“I’ll talk to Anya,” Buffy chimed in. “See if she’s heard anything on Daphne and Mr. Rouse’s movements in town. Like if they are planning on bringing in some vamps as backup.”



A beeper went off, interrupting the meeting. Lucas, Jay, and Xander all looked down at their pagers.



“It’s me,” Xander said, pulling the beeper off his waste and reading the text message. “They need me at the site.”



“Good,” Buffy smiled. “You can give me a ride into work then. I told Principle Wood I’d put in a half day today.”



Buffy went upstairs to grab her stuff for work as the meeting split up.



“I’ve got class at twelve,” Willow said, looking at Tara and Lucas. “But I can meet you guys later for research fun.”



“Much later,” Jay corrected. “We have a workout scheduled for after class today, remember?”



“It’s fine Willow,” Lucas smiled. “Tara and I have to train today. We probably won’t start really researching until late this afternoon.”



Lucas stepped away and joined Faith and Jay in conversation, leaving Willow and Tara to talk.



“So I’ll see you later then?” Willow asked, taking Tara’s hand in hers.



“Of course,” Tara smiled and leaned in, giving the red head a quick kiss. “And not just for research fun.”



“All aboard the Xander express. Next stop UC-Sunnydale!”



Willow leaned in for another quick kiss. Pulling away, she grabbed her keys and backpack from by the door and followed her two best friends out. Tara moved over to the large window and watched the trio pile into Xander’s Chrysler and drive off down the street.



“You’ve got it bad,” Faith said to Tara.



“Yes,” Tara replied. Turning, she smiled at the dark slayer, “And it’s all good.”



“So what’s my job today?” Faith asked.



“You’re with me,” Jay said, pushing herself off of the frame. “We’re going to do a little recon of that warehouse you and Buffy were in last night. Then it’s research fun for you.”



“Those are two words that should never go together,” Faith replied.



“Let’s roll,” Jay looked at the dark slayer. Then added, “Sparky.”



“Uh,” Faith stopped her foot, then she followed the older woman out the door. “I hate that name.”





TBC...



"...and if you've got no other choice, you know you can follow my voice, through the dark turns and noise of this wicked little town..."--Hedwig and the Angry Inch



"Stinky herbs are a go." Cordelia in Becoming pt. 2



"I am an opera singer, I stand on painted tape, it tells me where I'm going, and where to throw my cape..." Opera Singer by Cake

hermitstull
 


Part 14

Postby hermitstull » Fri Nov 22, 2002 1:37 am

Hey all-

Back again for another update. I've decided to post this entire section all at once, so it's a tad on the long side. Why, you ask? Mostly because I realized tonight that there's a lot written that I've still got to post, so I'm going to try to pick up the posting pace a bit over the next week.



Thanks again to all who have stuck with both parts of Do Your Best. And don't forget how much I love feedback.



without further ado, I give you-



Part 14

Author's note:

Another tricky scene for me writing wise lies ahead. A parallel is drawn, a plan is partly revealed, and the near future is set. And not everyone is happy.







At the end of a busy day of work, school, and training, all of the Scoobies were assembled at the Magic Box in full research mode. Books were stacked in haphazard piles on the large round table in the center of the store. Several smaller stacks lined the counter near the cash register.



Willow and Tara had taken up a small space in the front of the store, where the only two comfortable chairs were. The red head had her notebook computer on her lap, in the corner. Tara sat across from her, head buried in a book.



“Have you told Buffy?” Tara asked suddenly, looking up.



“Told her?” Willow asked, “about what?”



“The plan,” Tara answered. “It just popped into my head. Sorry.” Tara looked down at the book.



“Hey,” Willow said softly, drawing the blonde’s attention back to her. “No, I haven’t. Yet. But I will, she needs to know, ya know?”



“She’s your best friend,” Tara said. “I’m sure she’ll take it better coming from you than someone else.”



“She’ll want to help, go with us,” Willow paused, thinking.



“But she can’t,” Tara said firmly. “This mission is just for us. The world needs her here in Sunnydale.”



“What about us?” Willow asked. “What about what we need?”



“I’ve got all I need sitting in front of me, Willow. Everything else is just, extra.” Tara smiled.



“Charmer,” Willow grinned.



Jay’s voice broke the moment, singing softly as she scanned the book she was holding, as the dark warrior paced the shop.



“I’m a fountain of black, in a shape of a girl, you’re a bird on the brim, hypnotized by the whirl, drink me make me feel real, wet your beak in the stream, game we’re playing is life, love’s a two way dream, hear me now….” Her voice faded as she turned and paced the other direction.



“What is she singing?” Willow asked, surprised.



“I don’t know, but it sounds familiar” Tara replied.



Jay’s voice increased in volume as her return trip brought her into the witches hearing.



“I’m a path of cinders, burning under your feet, you’re the one who walks me, I’m your one way street.” She began to hum.



Tara and Willow giggled softly.



“She doesn’t even know she’s doing it,” Willow said, as the humming softened as Jay turned and paced the other direction.



Anya suddenly popped into view. “She’s singing that Icelandic girl, the one with the funny name.”



“Bjork?” Willow asked.



“Yes. That’s the one. Daphne loves her, or at least she did. Dragged me to three of that woman’s shows. She should have been a Banshee. A real one, not part of that band.” Anya smiled.



“So why is Jay signing Bjork?” Willow asked.



“It’s the only good thing Daphne gave me,” Jay answered from around the corner. “My enjoyment of her.” She continued to pace, and sing softly to herself.



“Weird,” Anya said, leaving Tara and Willow to their work.



“I guess even the bad relationships give you something,” Willow said, looking back at Tara.



“But the good ones give you more,” Tara gave Willow a broad grin.



“I hope so,” Willow replied, returning the grin.















The bell above the door clanged, announcing the entrance of Buffy and Giles, fresh from patrol.



“Hey guys,” Buffy greeted.



“Hey Buffy, hey Giles,” Willow replied, smiling.



“Hi,” Tara greeted.



“And how goes it with the research,” Buffy asked. Giles nodded at the girls and continued on into the shop. “Find anything useful?”



“Some,” Willow explained, “but it’s hard. It’s not like there’s a Mapsco site of magical hotspots. There’s lot s of cross referencing involved.”



“No worries Will, I know you and Tara will find out what we need. Any other news?” Buffy looked at both girls.



“Actually Buffy,” Willow began, “there’s something we need to

tell you.”











After about ten minutes, a very irate slayer zipped around the corner and slammed into Jay, shoving and holding the older woman against the wall.



“What in the hell do you think you’re doing?”



Jay, fighting hard to keep her anger and dark power in check, replied, “Reading and singing Bjork badly.”



“Don’t play games with me,” Buffy’s fury gave her added strength. “You can’t ask them to do that, to go there.”



“That,” Jay understood, now, what Buffy was so upset about. “I thought Faith told you the other night?”



“She didn’t give the details, but now that I know them, I’m not liking the plan one bit,” Buffy pushed Jay off the ground.



“Neither do I,” Jay offered sadly, “but I didn’t make that choice. This was one option, a plan created before you were born.”



All activity had stopped in the Magic Box when Buffy attacked Jay. Everyone stood at their spots, unsure of what to do, except for Faith, who hopped up on the counter and leafed through a book.



“Did you know?” Buffy turned and glared at Lucas.



“He was one of the people who came up with solution,” Jay said to Buffy.



“Buffy, it’s okay,” Willow said from behind the slayer, Tara at her side. “I agreed to this kind of stuff when I said I’d work for the clans. Remember?”



“No, not this,” Buffy relaxed her hold on Jay, letting the woman slide back down to the floor.



“Agree to what Will?” Xander asked.



“Willow and I agreed to work for the clans.” Tara explained. “Our first mission will be to travel to one of this realities alternates, to find someone that will help Jay defeat Demetrious.”



“That doesn’t sound so bad,” Xander looked at Giles and Anya for reassurance.



“Yeah,” Faith added, looking up from her book, “except that in this reality, humans are slaves and food for the demons and vampires than run it. Most of us don’t even exist in it, because our ancestors were snuffed out millennia ago.”



“It’s not a very nice place,” Anya added. “Unless your evil, or a demon. I’ve sent a few wish victims there. They don’t last very long.”



“I’m afraid I have to agree with Buffy on this,” Giles spoke up, looking at Lucas. “This plan is too risky. There must be someone else you can send. Perhaps Buffy and Faith,”



“They would be killed in an instant,” Jay said. “They scream slayer. Every now and then one is born in that reality and don’t make it past toddler years.”



“How is it you know so much about this place, anyway?” Xander asked.



“I’ve been there twice,” Jay replied. “Once on accident in the late eighties. Again, a couple of years ago on a mission to retrieve an artifact.”



“How did you survive?” Giles asked.



“I quickly made a powerful ally in that reality. He’ll be able to help Willow and Tara. All they need to do is find him.”



“Well, that’s nice and simple, isn’t it,” Buffy said sarcastically. “Because I’m sure he’ll just be waiting with roses and chocolate when they appear.”



“No, they’ll have to find him,” Lucas explained. “But they’ll be safe.”



“How?”



“Dark magic,” Willow said softly.



“No, Willow.” Buffy was shocked.



“Will, you can’t,” Xander said.



“She’s not going to use dark magic,” Tara put and hand on Willow’s shoulder. “It’s because she used so much of it in the past. It’s part of her. And they’ll be able to sense that.”



“But what about the humans as slaves and cattle?” Xander

asked. “Both of you are still human.”



“We’ll just have to work around that,” Willow shrugged slightly. “We don’t have all the details worked out yet.”



“That’s what all the training is for,” Jay said, looking at Buffy. “To help them maneuver in that reality.”



After a tense moment passed, Buffy released Jay, and turned to face her best friend.



“I don’t like this Will,” she said softly.



“I can’t rah rah this either,” Willow stepped forward and took Buffy’s hand, “but Buffy, we’ve got to. It’s not just Jay we’re trying to save here. If Demetrious stays, he’ll let all the hells bleed together, and that will cause a heap of problems here on Earth.”



“So, why can’t Jay just win?” Buffy asked, without

malice. “Seems like this system was set up for a reason.”



“If she wins Buffy, and takes over prime, the cycle starts again.” Willow answered. “Sure, we’ll be long gone before this problem comes up again in a thousand years or so, but,” the red head looked over at Jay who leaned on the wall, watching her carefully, “something tells me when that happens, humanity won’t win.”



Jay looked down at the floor and nodded.



“So this is our last, best shot,” Buffy squeezed Willow’s hand. “Okay.”



Willow pulled her best friend into a fierce hug. “It will be,” she whispered into the blonde’s ear.







After a moment, the friend parted, with sad smiles. The room breathed a collective sigh of relief.



“So,” Buffy turned to the group, “what have we got?”



Jay and I did a little daylight sweep of the area,” Faith said, setting her book down. “The rest of that warehouse was clean, so it was a set up.”



“But we did find an interesting set up in a small building behind the warehouse,” Jay added. “I think that until recently, that was the location for creation.”



“But not now,” Faith continued. “They’ve definitely moved.”



“Where?” Buffy asked.



“Well,” Xander began, “Jay was saying earlier that they’d never travel in the open, so it can only be one of three locations,” he motioned to a map spread out on a bench near the table. “Seems there are a series of underground tunnels which connect that building to three warehouses in the area. One of which the company I work for is currently working on.”



“So that ones out,” Buffy nodded.



“The other two,” Xander pointed on the map. “This first one, across the street was just renovated last year, but it can’t seem to keep a tenant.”



Willow moved to look over Xander’s shoulder at the two remaining locations. Nodding to herself, she quickly went and grabbed her lab top.



“No dice then,” Faith said. “When Jay and I were scouting today, we saw a realtor showing that place for like half the day. Kind of hard to be night of the living dead with the living hanging out.”



“That leaves this place, down the street,” Xander pointed to another warehouse on the map. “Company fixed it up around the same time as the other place.”



“Is it leased,” Lucas asked.



Giles quickly flipped through a printout he had made earlier that day at the courthouse. “Ah, yes it is.” He walked over and confirmed the address. “It was leased for one year about three months ago to a Woden Industries.”



“Woden Industries?” Xander asked. “Never heard of them.”



“Devon,” Tara said after a moment. “It’s them.”



“Huh?” Buffy asked, “How did you come up with that?”



“The American translation of the letter v in German is w,” Tara explained. “Change the W to a V, and you’ve got an anagram for Devon, Daphne’s brother.”



“Plus Woden is the ruler of the gods in Norse mythology,” Jay added. “Daphne has a master’s degree in it to go along with her god complex.”



“And,” Willow said, setting her laptop on a stack of books on the table, “there is a small pocket of mystical energy under part of that building. Look,” she pulled up a window on the small screen, “over the years there have been several strange happenings in that warehouse, including a sacrifice or two.”



“Sounds like that’s our place,” Buffy looked at the group. “So when do we go in?”



“Day after tomorrow,” Jay said. “Here’s the plan. Tomorrow morning, Faith and I will case that warehouse. Xander will find the most recent blueprint of that place and if anyone he works with knows of any modifications made by Woden Industries. Willow will run a search to see if there’s been a sudden rise in grave robberies in the area in the last two weeks. Lucas, Giles and Tara will research spells that can strip Mr. Rouse of his control of the zombies, or transfer it to one of us. And Buffy and Anya will do a shake down of the demon bars to see if there is any more news on our pair.”



Jay’s aura of command surprised most of the room. None of the Scoobies had seen Jay this way before. For Lucas and Tara, it was a glimmer of hope for the return of the old, confident, cool Jay they once knew.



Jay looked at Willow and Tara, “You’ll train tomorrow as scheduled, a last bit of review. After that, we’ll all meet back here to plan our attack strategy at 9pm. We’ll attack at sundown the next day. Any questions?”



“Why sundown?” Willow asked.



“More dramatic,” Jay replied with a wry grin.







TBC...

"...and if you've got no other choice, you know you can follow my voice, through the dark turns and noise of this wicked little town..."--Hedwig and the Angry Inch



"Stinky herbs are a go." Cordelia in Becoming pt. 2



"I am an opera singer, I stand on painted tape, it tells me where I'm going, and where to throw my cape..." Opera Singer by Cake

hermitstull
 


Re: Part 14

Postby Grimlock72 » Fri Nov 22, 2002 1:30 pm

Hmm... communication still sucks big time in the overall group. I'm fairly sure Lucas has a more detailed plan then he's telling. Doesn't really scream 'trustworthy' to me, nope he doesn't. Sounds an awfull lot like Tara and Willow get to do someone else's dirty work, dangerous dirty work even...not so sure I like that idea.



Sure Willow will *try* very hard not to use dark magic in that other dimension but if demons and other evils threathen Tara that promise ain't going to hold very long. Got to wonder what they're really supposed to accomplish in that dimension, or what they're supposed to become.



I did mention I don't trust Lucas much, didn't I ? Can't exactly pinpoint the reason, but it just feels off (bit watcher like). Worries me.



Grimmy



"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Grimlock72
 


Re: Part 14

Postby hermitstull » Fri Nov 22, 2002 3:27 pm

Hey Grimmy-

Lucas. Yes, he is a bit watcher like. In fact if you remember it was mentioned that he was at one point a member of the Council, but he left to work with the Clans. So I would say that there is that aspect to him and his character that will not leave. But, he's not the baddest guy, honest. But he is holding back some info, from everyone, including Jay.



And I can promise that Willow will not be using dark magic in this story. But she still has the aura, or feel, so to speak of someone who has used dark magic, and that will help protect them when they go to the alternate reality. Sort of like she has this bad ass reputation that can intimidate most challengers from even stepping up to mess with her. Plus, Tara will definately be able to hold her own and might not need as much protection as Willow might think. Remember, this is the Tara we know and love, but not quite exactly the same as she was before.



But will Willow be totally magic free? No, she won't because magic is still a part of her and she can still acess it's power. And what she can use will be of great help in times to come.



Again, I can't say too much because more info is coming up on what's going to happen to everyone.





thanks for reading and for the awesome feedback-

hermitstull

"...and if you've got no other choice, you know you can follow my voice, through the dark turns and noise of this wicked little town..."--Hedwig and the Angry Inch



"Stinky herbs are a go." Cordelia in Becoming pt. 2



"I am an opera singer, I stand on painted tape, it tells me where I'm going, and where to throw my cape..." Opera Singer by Cake

hermitstull
 


Part 15

Postby hermitstull » Sat Nov 23, 2002 3:13 pm

Happy Saturday to all-

I hope everyone is having a nice weekend. As promised, here's another update to Hell Bent. This is another longer post that puts us on the home strech. Just a few more days left in this story, but alot happens in that time.



Without further ado, I give you....





Part 15

Author's note: Two subsections in here. First is an update of the Chicago situation and Kim. The second a big showdown between Willow, Tara, and Jay. The scene is physical and angsty, and is the start of taking our girls into a totally AU world. (And I'm nervous as all get out about how this scene will go over, so feedback is greatly appreciated.)









Cleo slumped in her leather chair behind the large oak desk in her fifteenth floor office in downtown Chicago. It had been a long, long night of secretly moving Kim from County General to a secure location just over the state line in Wisconsin. Then, she had spent the rest of the night helping Claude, Max, his mother, and two local trustworthy spell casters set up for the attempt to break Daphne’s spell on Kim.



She had just returned to the city, at a little past eleven am to conduct some business and check in with the west coast. Billy Joe and his wife Erin were at the hidden location as lookout and protection, with several area teams on call in case of another attack. It had taken a lot out of the Chicago team leader to make it all happen on such short notice, but it was worth it. Kim and Jay were worth it.



Cleo thought as she browsed through her email.



Claude’s ring on her cell phone ended her reading.



“What’s happened?” Cleo asked a little harshly.



“Three of the crystals we need are cracked. They need to be flawless in order for the spell to work.” Claude replied, nonplussed.



“How long?”



“Tomorrow. I’ve got a rush order in with three of my suppliers, but that kind of crystal is hard to get. “



“When?”



“By three pm at the latest. That puts the ritual start time around sundown.”



“I’ll get a couple of backup teams in the area just in case. Keep me updated.” Cleo clicked off her phone.



“One more day, one day more,” she said to herself, and began to read her email once again.



A knock on the door, again, interrupted her reading.



“Yes,” she barked.



“Miss Dotzler?” Mr. Dean poked his head in the door. “Do you have a moment?”



Cleo suppressed a sigh and motioned for the young man to enter her office.



“Here is my report on the Mr. Rouse/Daphne situation,” he handed a think manila folder to his boss.



Cleo took it and set it on her desk. “You could have left this here yesterday Tom,” she pointed out. “What do you really want?”



“I want,” Tom Dean began, running his fingers through his light brown hair nervously, “that is we want to go to California to help Jay and the slayers.”



Cleo leaned back into her chair and waited.



“We’re ready for a real mission,” Mr. Dean stated his case. “And they’ll need our help out there. You know what it’s like to fight zombies, and with only Jay, Lucas, and the slayers, it won’t be enough. And when you add Mr. Rouse and Daphne into the mix,”



“What about Willow and Tara?” Cleo asked pointedly, cutting him off.



“Strong but untested, with some natural ability but in need of more training.” Mr. Dean leaned forward, more confident. “In a year they’ll be awesome, but now,”



“We don’t have a year, Mr. Dean,” Cleo cut him off again. “we have less than a month. And those two,” Cleo paused, searching for the correct words. “They are beyond what you know, Mr. Dean. If anything, I would rank them in front of the slayers, with Lucas and Jay as equals.”



Mr. Dean nodded and sat back.



Cleo studied the young man, her apprentice of sorts for the last few years. He fit the classic clan mold of a young team leader, bold, intelligent, objective, unemotional. All that Cleo had been when she had been tracked at twelve in the path that had led her here. But times had changed, and the Cleo’s and Mr. Dean’s of the clan world were going to be a thing of the past.



“I’m going to agree to your request Tom,” Cleo said. “You, Ren Mathers, and Paul Webster are ready for a full blown mission. It’s time.”



“Thank you ma’am,” Tom grinned. “I’ll have us out there by 9pm tonight.”



“Good,” Cleo stood and shook the young man’s hand. “It’s time,” she said again. “Time to see the future of our people, Tara and Willow.”





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“I’ll expect them tonight then,” Jay said into her cell phone, ending the conversation. She turned and looked at Willow who stood in the middle of an empty Bronze dance floor. It was late in the afternoon of the day before the attack on Daphne and Mr. Rouse.



“Is this going to involve more dancing?” Willow joked with Jay, “Because I’ve got a couple of new moves to show you.”



“No,” Jay replied seriously. Her blue jeans and Outkast t-shirt shimmered and changed into her fighting gear. “Can you change like I just did?”



“Hold on,” Willow looked closely at Jay’s outfit. The bottom layer looked like some sort of form fitting body suit. On her chest was a light metal chest plate, attached to short shoulder pads, which attached to a matching plate on her back. Underneath the plate, and hanging down to just above her thighs was light chain mail. On her legs were more plates on her thighs and shins. The ones on her shins covered the tops of black, steel toed, calf high combat boots.



“Got it,” Willow concentrated and her outfit shimmered and changed to one that matched Jay’s, minus the weapons.



“Excellent,” Jay grinned.



“What about the weapons,” Willow pointed to the three short swords strapped to Jay’s back, two handguns strapped to her thighs, and a two short knives tucked in the top of her boots.



“For some reason, you can never create those,” Jay turned, lifted a medium size wooden crate, and placed it in front of Willow. “Here are your weapons. When it comes time to change, they’ll just vanish like your outfit, but return when you call it.”



Willow opened the crate and peered inside. “Um,” she looked up at Jay. “Not that I’m all go with the violence, but this seems a little lacking.”



Jay reached into the crate and pulled out two swords and one long knife. “This is all you’ll need Willow. The swords go on your back, the knife on your waist.” She locked eyes with the red head, “trust me.”



“Okay,” Willow nodded and strapped on her gear. “How do I look?”



“Like the future,” Jay said softly.



“Huh?”



“Fine. Are you ready to spar?” Jay covered quickly.



“With real weapons? In here?”



“Yep, here we go.” Jay pulled out a sword for each hand, then floated the third. “Can you handle all this?”



Willow thought of what could happen to Tara if she couldn’t and put on her resolve face. “No sweat.”



Jay kept the pace slow at first, allowing Willow to get a feel for her new weapons and combined skills. Billy Joe had laid a good foundation for physical fighting, which Jay had built on during her short time in Sunnydale, but Willow exceeded expectations. And Willow’s grasp of magically controlled weapons was astounding to the seasoned fighter. It had take Jay months to get to the point where Willow was after a few days.



“I’m impressed,” Jay complimented after about fifteen minutes of fighting, “but I’ve been holding back.”



“Give me all ya got,” Willow taunted. “It won’t be enough.”



“Ooo, feisty,” Jay laughed and accelerated her attack.



Willow was able to hold her own for a while against Jay’s onslaught. Much longer that either one of them expected, but the veteran was starting to take over and win. Jay’s stamina and skill were wearing the young witch down.



“Ready to concede,” Jay asked. Willow was bending backward as she blocked both Jay’s swords with her one.



“Never,” Tara’s voice rang out through the empty Bronze as

Jay was shoved back by an unseen force.



Jay quickly flipped off her back and stood, watching carefully as Tara, followed by Lucas, made her way from the stage to where Willow stood. She wore an outfit similar to Willow’s, except that she carried no weapons that were visible.



Lucas nodded and moved off to the side to watch.



Jay looked over at Lucas, “It’s time,” he said softly.



“Know before this test that I don’t do this with a light heart,” Jay said calmly. “But it is necessary in order for you to survive what you must face.”



“That doesn’t sound too good,” Willow said softly to Tara, who squeezed her hand in response.



Jay looked down, drawing on her power. When she looked up, her eyes were a dark red and glowing. “I’m sorry.” Jay streaked across the floor of the Bronze. So fast, that Willow barely had a chance to deflect the swords in Jay’s hands from decapitating her.



Tara quickly tried to shove Jay back as she had before, but it only moved the fighter back a few steps.



With a nod of her head, Jay slammed Tara back against the stage, separating her from Willow. She sent her third floating sword at the gasping blonde witch.



Willow’s floating sword was there to block it, just in time. But the red head didn’t have time to make sure her beloved was okay, because Jay pressed her attack again.



Lucas turned away at that moment, unable to watch the scene before him. For most of his life he had waited for this moment. To find the two fated ones who could complete the coven and save the world from destruction. The two who would take the clans in a new direction, leading less with the sword and more with the olive branch.



Willow felt herself weakening against Jay’s physical onslaught, and mentally against Jay’s magical onslaught. She stole a quick glance at Tara, who was reeling. Every time the Wicca tried to stand, Jay would slam her against the stage again. She was out of breath and dazed.



Willow tripped on her own feet and fell backwards, causing her sword to fall out of her hand. She looked up at Jay’s unrecognizable face.



“It is done,” Jay hissed, swinging both her sword’s down at Willow’s torso.



“Thicken,” Tara gasped, causing Jay’s swords to bounce off of Willow’s chest and stomach.



Before Jay could recover, Willow swept Jay’s legs, causing her to fall sideways, away from Willow, who scrambled up and over to her sword in the middle of the floor.



Jay quickly flipped up but was knocked down again by a chair that Tara had sent flying at her legs.



Willow was up and made her way to Tara who stood next to the stage, breathing hard.



Jay flipped up again and jumped as another chair attempted to trip her. She tried to slam Tara down again while attacking with her floating sword, but Tara magically deflected the attack at Jay’s floating sword, embedding it in the stage floor.



Willow tapped into her magical ability and zipped across the floor and attacked Jay as Tara continued to hurl objects at the fighter with her magics. At the same time, she was protecting Willow from any blow of Jay’s that came close to hurting her.



Lucas looked up to see Willow knock one of Jay’s swords from her hand and fall backward as a barstool slammed into the back of her knees. Jay’s other sword was ripped from her hand as she fell by Tara.



Jay tried to flip up, but Tara’s mind held her down. Willow, breathing heavily, stood above her with a sword to her throat. Tara joined her, eye’s full of fire and power, as were Willow’s. But unlike Jay, their power came from their love, not from hell.



“This won’t hold me forever,” Jay hissed, her red eyes pulsing. “You’d better end it now or else I will.”



Willow felt the dark forces whispering to her to do it. To kill Jay for attacking her, for trying to kill Tara, for being on the brink of ultimate evil. the sinister voice in her head asked.



“No,” Willow said quietly, stepping back. “It’s over.” She looked at Tara who smiled.



“I knew you could do it honey,” Tara said softly and took Willow’s hand.



“Beat Jay? I wasn’t so sure myself,” Willow replied, looking down at Jay whose eyes were slowly returning to their normal brown color.



“I was talking about not listening to the darkness,” Tara said. “I always knew you could beat her.”



“Oh, that too,” Willow smiled shyly. Her battle gear shimmered and changed back to her normal clothes, as did Tara’s.



“Well done,” Lucas said, pleased, walking over to the pair.



Jay sat up and groggily shook her head. “I guess you won,” she looked up at the couple.



Without responding, Tara and Willow turned and walked away hand and hand from one of the most powerful warlock in generations and one of the greatest demon fighters in the world, victorious.



“We’ll see you tonight,” Willow called, not bothering to turn back as they headed out the door.



“I think we’ve lost them Lucas,” Jay said, slowing standing up.



Smiling, he put an arm around Jay’s shoulders. “No. We’ve found them Jay. We’ve found them.”







TBC....

"...and if you've got no other choice, you know you can follow my voice, through the dark turns and noise of this wicked little town..."--Hedwig and the Angry Inch



"Stinky herbs are a go." Cordelia in Becoming pt. 2



"I am an opera singer, I stand on painted tape, it tells me where I'm going, and where to throw my cape..." Opera Singer by Cake

Edited by: hermitstull at: 11/23/02 1:15:30 pm
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Re: Part 15

Postby Grimlock72 » Sun Nov 24, 2002 8:37 am

Yeah thats the way to ask people to do your dirty work for you... try to kill them :rage . Idiots :rage . I have yet to hear a good reason not to kill Jay btw. Lemme guess, this will be justified by calling it a test, right ? Never mind that the test could easily have gone wrong of course.



Willow and Tara really should have (tried to) join(ed) hands a bit sooner, I would expect them to be more powerfull when combining forces. As for Willow being able to fight of Jay with the swords... it makes for nice reading but it's kinda hard to see how Willow would gain so much experience with swords so fast to handle a fight like that. I'm all for strong Willow though, no doubt about it.



You mention you were nervous about the showdown scene (next time, please just say you're nervous about the "final scene", less spoilery) but didn't say about WHAT exactly. If you're worried about Jay becoming unlikable... well she did. She is an active threat to both Willow and Tara and you do NOT just turn your back to a threat like that, you neutralize it. Lack of training or experience there, both ought to know better.



Saying whatever (e.g. 'sorry') before you try to kill someone doesn't make it right, it really doesn't. Never mind if Jay actually meant what she said in the first place. Buffy is going to have a fit when she hears about this...which makes three usefull allies turned neutral (at least) or hostile, smart move.



Sooo... Jay joins the evil ppl list, just below Lucas who just stood there watching. (hmm... Jay is almost sorta like s7-Spike now)



Quote:


“I think we’ve lost them Lucas,” Jay said, slowing standing up.






I would hope so, but they'll probably be talked around with some bogus arguments and such. At least next time Jay (or Lucas for that matter) is in trouble she'll have less allies to count on, serves her right. Heck, I would NEVER turn my back to Jay EVER again... I'll say goodbye to her walking *backwards*... I like my life see ?



Then again, stories need evil or semi-evil people. People I can dislike to my hearts content, heh. Guess who fit the bill quite nicely ?? Goody, now I can diss two people in this story for several chapters, heh....: -->>:



I guess I just don't like people attacking either Willow or Tara, whatever that reason. Thats what it boils down to anyway.



P.S. This sounded awfully familiar: “This won’t hold me forever”, coincidence ?



Grimmy

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Edited by: Grimlock72 at: 11/24/02 4:18:34 pm
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Re: Part 15

Postby hermitstull » Sun Nov 24, 2002 10:36 pm

Hey Grimmy-



This most recent post is the first step into an alternate universe for our girls that's been slowly developing over the course of this entire tale. The world of the clans is harsher and gritter than the Buffyverse, and is bound by traditions and beliefs that won't always be in the best interests of those working in that environment. Which put people such as Jay and Lucas in tough spots and a bad light. I'm not making excusess for Jay's character at all. She's not the best of people, no, and is a little too beholden to such traditions. Lucas even more so. And yes, tests are part of that tradition.



One thing that I'm trying to show about Jay's character in particular is how there are two sides to her. The dark side, for lack of a better phrase, that she's been showing a lot in Hell Bent. And her light side, which has made small appearances in Do Your Best and Hell Bent. She's not a villian or evil at heart, but her decisions and actions don't show that necessiarly. At least not yet. Jay really does feel bad about having to fight Wilow and Tara, but it's part of her job.



The power of Willow and Tara, to me, has moved beyond the need for physical contact-clasping hands. Yes, they are more powerful that way, but they will need to be able to operate independently sucessfully as well. Willow's fighting skills have been developing over the course of a few months, both by working with Billy Joe and Jay. She's been training just about every day with someone, so she does have some fighting skill by this point. (Plus, after years of fighting vamps, she's picked up a few moves as well. At least that's where I'm coming from.) This is the same Willow we know, but not exactly the same. And definately not NotWillow from the show.



Finally, the reason that I was nervous about this scene is that it is taking what has been a more traditional Willow and Tara and moving them out of that. They are still the core of who they are, but they're in a new world and in Tara's case, a new life. Time and circumstances can change people, it will affect Tara and Willow just like it does anyone. And this part is just another step towards the end of this tale and the start of the next one.



And yes, I love that 'hold me' line, I just had to use it. :)





thanks for reading and the great feedback-

hermitstull

"...and if you've got no other choice, you know you can follow my voice, through the dark turns and noise of this wicked little town..."--Hedwig and the Angry Inch



"Stinky herbs are a go." Cordelia in Becoming pt. 2



"I am an opera singer, I stand on painted tape, it tells me where I'm going, and where to throw my cape..." Opera Singer by Cake

Edited by: hermitstull at: 11/24/02 11:53:33 pm
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Part 16

Postby hermitstull » Sun Nov 24, 2002 11:17 pm

Hello again-

Here's the next installment of Hell Bent. We're in the home strech on this tale. I'd estimate a wrap up of somewhere in the early twenties part wise. Thanks again for reading-over 2000 views! Yay!



Without further ado, I give you...





Part 16

Author's note:

Tara and Willow collect themselves after the big fight with Jay, and learn a little more about the "after" Lucas spoke of. Back up arrives from Chicago and the plan is made for the showdown with Daphne.







“That was intense,” Tara said finally. The pair had taken Jay’s car back to Xander’s apartment, where the cuddled on the couch. They hadn’t spoken since they left the Bronze, too in shock over the afternoon’s events.



“You can say that again,” Willow replied, resting her head on the blonde’s shoulder. “The dark power coming off of Jay was, well, it felt as bad as last spring.”



“It’s prime,” Tara replied.



“How do you know?” Willow looked up at Tara.



“I can sense its origins,” Tara explained. “She does have magical ability, but not THAT much. Plus, I just can’t believe she could be that evil.”



“Baby, I know she’s one of your oldest friends,” Willow began, taking Tara’s hand. “But people change. Maybe after all of these years of fighting evil, using dark magic to help her, it’s finally caught up to her. I mean she seemed pretty intent on killing us back there.”



“I know, I was there,” Tara squeezed Willow’s hand, “ But that’s not her, Willow. When this is over, you’ll see the Jay that I grew up with, the one that Kim fell in love with. She’s a sweetie, I promise.”



“Okay,” Willow wasn’t convinced. “I’ll just have to believe you.”



Tara leaned down and gave her girlfriend a kiss. “Do you believe me now?”



“No fair,” Willow pouted, “you’re using kiss bribery.”



“Is it working?” Tara smirked.



“I think I need a little more to help me make up my mind,” Willow replied.



Tara leaned down again and kissed Willow more thoroughly. After a moment, the kiss intensified, and Tara leaned more into Willow.



A knock on the door ended the moment too quickly for both girls.



“I wonder who that is,” Tara said, getting up. “Xander said he was going out with some work buddies before the meeting tonight.”



Curious, Willow stood as well and followed the blonde to the door.



Tara opened it, revealing Jay.



“What,” Willow snapped. “Haven’t we seen enough of you today?”



“Look,” Jay replied calmly, “I need to talk to you, both before the meeting, okay? I’m not here to start anything.”



“Fine,” Willow spun and headed into the apartment.



“How are you Tara?” Jay asked in a soft tone. Her face was full of concern for her friend.



“Physically, surprisingly okay.” Tara replied, then looked down for a moment. After a beat, she raised her head quickly, eye’s blazing, “But why? Why this way?” She moved back and allowed Jay into the room and shut the door behind her.



Jay waited for Tara to join Willow on the couch before she began. “I hate this, all of this, I want you to know. But this is the way, the way of my blood, my kin. Everyone has to go through some sort of physical test before they’re allowed to go on a mission. It’s always a surprise, and it always is done by someone you know or love.”



“But we’re not part of that Jay,” Willow replied hotly. “All we did was agree to work for the clans. We’re not related to any of you.”



Jay paused, searching for words. “No, not in a DNA way, neither you nor Tara share blood with any of the slayer lines. But you are part of us, part of our history and future.”



“How?” Tara asked.



“In 1522 one of our legendary seers saw a time when the clans we’re teetering on the brink of darkness. The ancient prophecy of Iantha’s line would come to pass, one of the chosen ones would fall, and the way of aggression and power would dominate over diplomacy and restraint. It would set the clans at each other’s throats, creating chaos, and allow the powers of darkness to surge and sweep across the Earth. In that time, the two fated ones, one who overcame darkness and one who was touched by light would come to the clans and lead them in a new way. A way of strength tempered with wisdom. A way led by love and light.”



Jay stood tall and looked deeply at both women before her. “You are the two the seer spoke of. I know that now.”



“Whoa,” Willow stood and began to pace.



“Yes, it’s true. After this battle with Demetrious, you will be announced as the fated ones and will be asked to take your place on the assembly of elders who lead the clans. You will also be given a team of your own to lead, as an example, of the new way.” Jay chuckled. “I, for one, am ready to see some changes in the way things are handled, but others are not, so it will be difficult.”



“But this prophecy isn’t complete,” Willow pointed out. “Who is the chosen one who has fallen? You haven’t even faced Demetrious yet.”



“Daphne,” Tara said, looking at Jay.



“Yes. She turned to darkness after her brother died. She isn’t the first from the clans to do so, but hers is the key. It fell so close to Iantha’s prophecy and she fell far, right into Demetrious’s sphere of influence.”



“What about your darkness?” Willow asked. “You seemed pretty in tune with the powers of hell this afternoon. How do we know that you’re not being unduly influenced by that?”



“They’re being forced on her,” Tara said, focusing on Jay, letting her other senses read the demon fighter. “I can almost see it. It’s like you’re tethered to prime and its intrinsic powers. But you don’t access all that’s there. And it doesn’t control your actions.”



“But their pull and influence is increasing,” Jay’s eyes filled with sadness. “When I enter prime and face Demetrious, I will have to let those powers have full reign over all of who I am. For a time, the real me, so to speak, will still exist, but it will be lost eventually. And pure evil will take over.” Jay sighed.



“Why did you wait so long to tell us, Jay?” Tara asked. “Why not come clean right from the start?”



“I didn’t know for sure, although I’ve always suspected that you were one of the fated two Tara,” Jay gave Tara a small smile, “But when you met Willow, Lucas and I were sure about you. And after last spring, all seemed lost.”



“Because of what I did?” Willow asked, a bit ashamed.



“No, we knew then, after you stepped back from the brink that you were most likely the fated par. But Tara was killed. Thankfully, she wasn’t our last hope.”



“There was another,” Willow looked down at Tara seated on the couch, eye’s full of love.



“Yes. With your history together, and being able to defeat me together today, it’s confirmed. And in classic fashion, it’s at the worst time with the most at stake possible.” Jay gave a wry grin, “So you know its fate.”



Willow plopped back down on the couch and took Tara’s hand. “What now?”



“Now we go forward as planned. We still have Mr. Rouse and Daphne to face tomorrow, and our missions into hell after than. If neither is successful, it won’t matter.”



Jay turned and headed back towards the door. “I know that I’ve just dropped a bomb on you guys after a pretty shitty day, and I’m sorry, but you need to know now so you can decide what you want to do after. The clans may try to force you to do something and I want you to be prepared with all the information. Also know that myself, the Chicago team, and Lucas will stand beside you no matter what.”



She grabbed the knob and opened it, looking back she sincerely offered, “and I wanted to tell you how sorry I am that I had to put you through that today. And that someday you will forgive me for what I’ve done.”



Jay stepped through the door and pulled it closed. She took a moment to collect herself and headed down the hallway of Xander’s apartment building towards the stairs. After about ten paces, she heard a door open behind her.



“Jay!” Tara’s voice called out, causing her to stop and turn around.



The blonde woman hurried to her friend and pulled her into a hug. “Don’t worry Jay,” she said, pulling back and looking up at her oldest friend, her blue eyes warm and full of love, “I’ll always be there to take care of you.”





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“How do you feel?” Faith asked Tara as the pair sat waiting at the Magic Box for Jay and Lucas’s arrival. “I know that today was the big test.”



“Sore, but better than earlier,” Tara replied, looking at the dark slayer. “I didn’t realize that we would have to go through that. I would have tried to prepare.”



“That’s why they did it, Tara. You can never be totally prepared.” Faith looked at Tara. “But you won, right?”



“Yes,” Tara replied with a satisfied smile. “We did.”



The jingle of the doorbell announced the arrival of the last group of people for the meeting. Lucas led the way, followed by a young man around Tara’s age with light brown hair that hung slightly over his bright blue eyes. He wore a form fitting dark green turtle neck and black jeans. Behind him was a short girl with spiky blonde hair wearing leather pants and jacket over a black loose Ramones t-shirt. The last of the trio of new people was a tall black man with a shaved head. He wore a loose tan sweater and blue jeans that didn’t hide a very muscular physique. Tara noticed all three had some sort of tattoo on the back of their right hands, that looked like some sort of snake, maybe a dragon.



“Who’s that?” Tara asked, looking at Faith.



“I dunno,” she replied. “They look like members of the clan though.”



Jay brought up the rear of the group, wearing a pair of black dress slacks, and a dark blue button down long sleeved shirt. She carried a black coat that matched her pants.



“You’re all spiffed up,” Buffy commented.



“I have somewhere to be later,” Jay replied.



“Everyone,” Lucas spoke to the assembled group. “I’d like to introduce Tom Dean.”



“Hi,” the man with the light brown hair said.



“Ren Mathers,”



“What up,” the short blonde greeted.



“And Paul Webster,”



“Hello,” the handsome black man replied.



“They have been sent from Chicago to assist us with the Daphne/Mr. Rouse situation.”



“The more the merrier,” Xander said cheerily. “I’m all for more big guns.”



A quick round of introductions were made. Willow had recognized Mr. Dean and Ren when they walked through the door. She had met Mr. Dean before her meeting with Cleo at her law office. Ren had been the bar tender at The Spot, Max’s jazz club.



“So what do we have?” Jay asked.



The group each gave a brief summary of what that day’s work had brought.



“They’re definitely using that warehouse,” Faith said. “Not to much in the way of perimeter guards of defense. But it was hard to tell what was inside. I was able to watch from a skylight in the roof, but I could only see part of one floor. It didn’t tell me anything.”



“The tunnels underneath was clean as well,” Jay added. “No signs of recent activity or habitation by Sunnydale’s sub dwellers.”



“The bars were a bust,” Buffy said. “No one knew anything.”



“Or they weren’t telling us,” Anya added. “I checked with a couple of demons I know, and they couldn’t tell me anything either.”



“I was able to get this,” Xander said, laying out a blueprint of the warehouse on the table. “This is the most recent renovation of that location. This is from a year ago. None of the other companies in town have worked on that site recently either, so I think it’s pretty accurate.”



“We have several spells which could greatly weaken Mr. Rouse’s power over his creations,” Giles said. “But I think this one,” he set the book he was holding down on top of the blueprints. “That is we think that this would be our best chance.”



“What do you need?” Buffy asked.



“We’ve got all the ingredients here at the shop,” Tara answered. “All we need is a location close to the warehouse to set it up and perform the ritual.”



“All good,” Jay nodded. She looked over at Willow. “What did you find out about numbers?”



“High,” Willow said. “But I can’t give you an exact number. Somewhere between fifty and three hundred.”



“That’s quite a range there Wills,” Xander commented.



“Let’s hope it’s closer to fifty,” she replied, shrugging.



“I’ve researched Mr. Rouse’s past activities, cross referencing with his former master’s, looking for patterns,” Mr. Dean stepped forward. “I would guess that they have around one hundred and fifty zombies, scattered about the warehouse. If past patterns hold, there should be higher numbers on the first floor here and here.” Mr. Dean pointed on the blue print to near the front entrance and the center of the building. “The highest numbers will be in the basement, where the workshop would be.”



“How come the basement?” Faith asked.



“Zombies don’t do stairs well,” Jay said. “At best, they can slowly make it up or down only one flight. And it takes a lot of energy to create a zombie, which would be seen from outside on the first floor.”



“Not to mention the bodies and the smell,” Buffy added.



“That too,” Jay winked at the slayer.



Jay looked over the spell Giles, Lucas, and Tara had come up with. She looked again at the blueprints, thinking.



“Okay,” Jay looked up, “here’s what we need to do.”



After three hours of strategizing and planning, the group was ready for tomorrow at sunset. Everyone was tired, nervous, but felt confident that they would succeed. The Scooby gang was again impressed with this side of Jay, as well as with the back up from Chicago.



“So we meet back here at four,” Jay said, “go over the plan again and suit up.”



The group split into smaller clumps winding down.



“It’s nice to see you again Willow,” Mr. Dean said, sitting down next to her.



“You too,” she smiled. “But I never thought that a researcher would be into field action.”



“For most, that’d be true, but not me,” he smiled back. “Ren, Paul, and I have all been training together for some time so that we could get an opportunity like this.”



They looked over at Jay who stood talking to Tara and Giles.



“Do you know why she is so dressed up?” Willow asked. “It seems odd.”



“Some sort of tradition,” Mr. Dean replied. “All the members of her team have all sort of superstitious traditions they perform before a big battle. I’ve heard that when they all go on a mission, it can get quite elaborate.”



“Really,” Willow was amused.



“Whatever it is, it works,” Mr. Dean replied. “The Chicago team is one of the most successful teams in the history of the clans. All but ten of their missions have been successful.”



“Out of how many?”



“Team missions, around three hundred over the last fifteen years. As individuals, probably close to five hundred.”



“All successful? Wow.” Willow was impressed.



“But you have to remember, that’s by the standards set by the assembly of elders. That’s the people who assign teams and missions. I’m not so sure that the Chicago team would necessarily consider all those jobs completed well.”



The pair looked on as Jay checked her watch. “Anya,” she called. “Are you ready?”



“Just let me change,” the demon replied, teleporting out of the shop. After a few minutes, she was back wearing a dark red cocktail dress.



“Let’s go,” she said cheerily.



The pair said their goodbyes and headed out the door.



“So,” Willow said to Tara when she joined her and Mr. Dean. “Do you know where Jay and Anya are off to?”



“Some club that Jay always goes to before a big fight,” Tara shrugged. “It’s not in Sunnydale, that’s all I know.”



“Well I should get going,” Mr. Dean said, standing. “We still have some things to take care of before tomorrow with Lucas. It was nice to meet you Tara,” he nodded at the blonde. “And to see you again Willow.”



“Bye,” Willow gave a small wave as the man joined his friends and they headed out the door.



“So what do you want to do now,” Tara asked.



“Maybe start a few traditions of our own,” Willow replied, leaning in for a quick kiss.







TBC...

"...and if you've got no other choice, you know you can follow my voice, through the dark turns and noise of this wicked little town..."--Hedwig and the Angry Inch



"Stinky herbs are a go." Cordelia in Becoming pt. 2



"I am an opera singer, I stand on painted tape, it tells me where I'm going, and where to throw my cape..." Opera Singer by Cake

hermitstull
 


Re: Part 16

Postby Grimlock72 » Mon Nov 25, 2002 6:52 am

Tara has known niceJay a lot longer of course, so it's to be expected she still trusts her. Willow on the other hand hasn't seen all that much of Jay worth trusting, neither have I :)



Maybe it helps living in Sunnydale for several years but I would be waaaaay more weary of Jay and sceptical of anything she says. It's all talk by Jac after all, telling Tara and Willow to be aware of other clans trying to influence them. How interesting, and Jay is doing *what* hmmm ?? What exactly does make the 'Chicago team' better then other clans ?



I wonder what would have happened if Willow had answered the door. Heck, I surely wouldn't let Jay in so soon after she tried to kill me :D



As for the forgiving part; it *might* be possible to forgive Jay for what she did but that doesn't restore trust. I myself tend not to trust people who turn against me so easily, explanations after the fact don't fix that.



None of the other scoobies reacted to what Jay and Lukas did ? So much for true friends then :( I'm all puzzled here, I certainly would be severely pissed if someone tried to kill MY friends.... leave alone continue happily working with them. Odd to say the least, dissapointing too.



Grimmy

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Edited by: Grimlock72 at: 11/25/02 4:54:35 am
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Re: Part 16

Postby hermitstull » Mon Nov 25, 2002 1:53 pm

Hey Grimmy-



Tara may be more trusting and forgiving, but Willow is not. That's all I can say.



The Chicago team is different from the rest of teams that work for the clans. We're going to learn more about them and the roll they're going to play in Willow and Tara's future in part three of the Do Your Best saga.





And the other Scoobies don't know, yet, about what happened. Otherwise they would be quite angry at Jay and Lucas for what happened. Only Faith knows because she's sort of in the loop with Lucas. And she has no idea about the 'fated ones' and about Tara and Willow's role in the clans. To her, it was just some test.





thanks again-next part will be up by tomorrow night-

hermitstull

"...and if you've got no other choice, you know you can follow my voice, through the dark turns and noise of this wicked little town..."--Hedwig and the Angry Inch



"Stinky herbs are a go." Cordelia in Becoming pt. 2



"I am an opera singer, I stand on painted tape, it tells me where I'm going, and where to throw my cape..." Opera Singer by Cake

hermitstull
 


Part 17a

Postby hermitstull » Tue Nov 26, 2002 12:45 am

Hello all-

Here's the next installment, split into parts, of Hell Bent. It worked out that I can post some late Monday and on Tuesday as well, so 17b will be up sometime Tuesday night.







Part 17a

Author's note: It's the day of the big battle, and everyone prepares for it a little differently.









It was a bright, cheery fall day in Sunnydale. The perfect day for a life and death struggle between the forces of good and evil. The town’s residents went about their daily lives, mostly unaware of the events that could change their lives forever.



But that’s how it always was for a town on a hell mouth. People knew that there seemed to be a high number of deaths due to an ongoing epidemic of neck ruptures. And that some of the townspeople only seemed to come out at night, or had strange skin condition, or had retired from a life in the circus. But that was Sunnydale. A swell place, Mayor Wilkins had always said, before he disappeared a few years ago.



Willow looked across the table at Tara, who was looking out the apartment’s window at the pretty day ahead of them.



“Looks like a nice day out there,” Willow said, taking a bite from her toast.



“Yeah,” Tara smiled and turned back to her girlfriend. “What do you have to do today?”



the red head thought. Aloud she said, “Well, I do have class, but the life and death struggle of later today warrants the skipping of said classes.”



“Wow,” Tara was stunned. “I’d never thought I’d hear you stay skip and class in the same sentence and be talking about yourself. The eternal struggle between good and evil has never made you purposely miss class before.”



Willow paused, thinking. “Yeah, you’re right. But it’s different now.” She shrugged and loaded her spoon with sugary cereal goodness. “After last year, I’ve learned that there are other, way more important things than class. Even more important than tonight.”



Her eyes filled with love and devotion, tempered with just a hint of sadness. “You.”



Tara’s heart melted at Willow’s statement. She knew she was falling in love, just as the other Tara had with the red head. Willow was the person Tara had always been looking for, intelligent, fiery, beautiful, but quirky. It had always seemed like a strange combination of traits, but it had led her to this Willow.



“Thanks,” Tara blushed and grinned.



The door to Xander’s bedroom opened and the young man emerged. He wore a gray business suit with a Fred Flintstone tie.



“Good morning ladies,” he greeted, heading into the kitchen. “Sleep well?”



“Best ever,” Willow said around a mouthful of cereal.



“You look nice today,” Tara commented.



“Business meeting at ten,” Xander explained, sitting down at the table with a bowl of the same cereal Willow was eating. “Luckily it’s the only thing I have to do today. I hate having to work and then prevent an apocalypse all on the same day.” He dug his spoon into his bowl, “Although this isn’t an apocalypse per say. It’s more of a demon uprising.”



“True,” Willow nodded.



“So any big plans for you guys or are you just going to take it easy?” Xander asked, looking from Willow to Tara.



“Nope. Big plan free here,” Tara said, looking at Willow.



“I’m still a little sore from training yesterday,” Willow said. She and Tara had decided not to tell the Scoobies about the trial they had endured the previous day. They both felt the news would be too upsetting to them and could splinter the group before tonight’s events.



“Me too,” Tara added.



“So we’ll probably just laze about and watch TV. Maybe go to the park for awhile later.” Willow added.



“Sounds nice,” Xander smiled. The trio ate in silence for a moment.



“So,” Willow asked. “Has anyone heard from Anya and Jay yet? I know that Buffy and Faith were going out patrolling late.”



“Nope,” Xander said. “I checked my voicemail this morning. Buffy said it was all clear.”



“Where ever they are,” Tara said, “I hope they’re having fun.”





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“And the lady wins again,” the dealer said for the tenth time in a row.



The crowd around Anya clapped and nodded approvingly. After a quick explanation by Jay earlier that night, the vengeance demon had sat down at one of the Blackjack tables in the casino, and had been on a mostly hot streak ever since.



Across the huge room, filled with table games of all sorts and several varieties of slot machines, sat Jay with one of her favorite demon friends.



“So I hear that Lorne is doing well in L.A.” Jay said, sipping her whisky sour, asking about a mutual friend.



“You know how he is,” the green demon replied. “Only he could pull off that Karaoke bar. He also works with your boy Angel these days.”



“Really,” Jay replied. “You seem to be doing pretty well yourself, Simon. The place looks great.”



“Thanks,” Simon smiled, revealing perfectly white teeth. “I was afraid that Dad would never give it to me.”



“Well, it’s great,” Jay smiled. “And moving it here was brilliant. With Sweet’s connections, you’ll be in talent forever.”



“I know, that’s the best part,” Simon leaned back in his stool. “This dimension is the swingingest realm in existence.”



“Your friend seems to be doing rather well,” Simon nodded towards the Blackjack tables. “Are you two serious or is she just another fling?”



“Anya,” Jay laughed. “Oh no, she’s just a good friend. And probably the only one of my current associates who could truly appreciate the need for tradition.”



Simon looked across the room, assessing Anya’s strength. “She’s one of D’Hoffryn’s, isn’t she?”



“Yep, recently back in the fold.”



“Sort of an odd friend,” Simon leaned forward and rested his elbows on the bar. “With what’s coming up, I’d figure you’d be hanging with a more powerful crowd.”



“I am,” Jay emptied her drink and motioned for another. “They just don’t have the mindset for this,” she waved her free hand in a small circle, “yet.”



“And what about you,” Simon leaned a little closer to Jay. “Will I be seeing you again soon? And I’m talking about you, Jay, not the ruler of prime.”



“So the words out finally,” Jay looked over at her friend.



“It blew up a couple of days ago,” Simon took a sip of his Manhattan. “I can’t believe you never told me.”



“Family secret, sorry,” Jay took a drink from her sour. “I’ve only known for a few years myself.”



“So when’s the big day,” Simon asked.



“End of the month, my time,” Jay replied, swirling her drink in her hand. “But I’ve got this business with Daphne first. That’s why I’m here.”



“Ah, the tradition. I thought so.” Simon nodded.



“This place keeps my hot streak going,” Jay grinned at her friend, patting him on the back. “I know that we just started talking, but it’s been a long night.”



“I understand,” Simon stood, offering his hand to Jay. “Now that I’m legit, I have to keep business hours.”



“You legit,” Jay chuckled. “Wow.”



“Shut up,” Simon joked and pulled Jay into a hug. “Listen you,” he said, pulling back. “Next time, give me a heads up so we can really talk.”



“Will do,” Jay nodded. “I’ll make a special, non-traditional trip.”



With a smile, Jay turned and made her way across the casino floor to Anya’s table.



“Anya,” Jay slipped next to the demon.



“I’m winning.” Anya beamed, “Lots!”



“I know sweetie but we’ve got to go. Big day today, remember?”



“Oh,” Anya said, remembering. She looked at the dealer. “I’ll collect my winnings now.”



Jay and the dealer exchanged looks.



“Um, Anya, one thing,” Jay said, “the money here isn’t good in our dimension. It’s only good in certain demon realms.”



“What!” Anya spun on her stood, angry.



“I’ve got an account here you can put your winnings into,” Jay offered. “When you come back, or travel to other dimensions, you can pull it out of there to spend.”



“Fine,” Anya huffed. “I’m only agreeing to this because of your potential future as a hell god. I don’t want to have you pissed off at me.”



Several heads and tentacles swiveled and eyebrows rose at Anya’s loud statement.



Jay, embarrassed, took Anya by the elbow. “Thanks, let’s go.”





TBC....

"...and if you've got no other choice, you know you can follow my voice, through the dark turns and noise of this wicked little town..."--Hedwig and the Angry Inch



"Stinky herbs are a go." Cordelia in Becoming pt. 2



"I am an opera singer, I stand on painted tape, it tells me where I'm going, and where to throw my cape..." Opera Singer by Cake

hermitstull
 


Re: Part 17a

Postby Grimlock72 » Tue Nov 26, 2002 6:09 am

Ah, the famous LockJaw decease rears its head again:



Quote:


She and Tara had decided not to tell the Scoobies about the trial they had endured the previous day. They both felt the news would be too upsetting to them and could splinter the group before tonight’s events.






Description of said decease: keeping information from your friends because you think it's better for them not to know. Most common in and around Sunnydale CA, most severe case known: Summer, Buffy.



I wonder who decided most of that though, can't imagine Willow not telling *her* friends about Jay being not-so-nice and such. Ah well, fighting with allies around is boring anyway, heh :D



Yep, trust is a BIG thing with me... and Jay kinda lost mine, can you tell ? :)



I liked how casually Xander and Willow talked about the upcoming apoclypse/events, just business as usual.



Grimmy

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Grimlock72
 


Part 17b

Postby hermitstull » Tue Nov 26, 2002 9:17 pm

Grimmy-

Yes, the famous Scooby trail of withholding info from each other continues. But as always, it will come out, and most likely at a the worst time possible. It's a thing.





Hey all-

Here's part b. It's a little longer than part a and will take us through the end of the after noon. I'll be going out of town for the holiday, so the next part, (also known as the start of the conclusion of Hell Bent), probably won't be up until late Friday or Saturday.









Part 17b

Author's note:

The day unfolds as everyone learns a little more about the people around them .









“So, this is nice,” Willow said as the pair sat hand in hand on a park bench. After breakfast, the pair had decided to go for a walk before the day got too hot. Not that a fall day would get very hot, but it could get uncomfortable in southern California.



“Yeah,” Tara agreed. “I like just hanging out with you.”



“Me too,” Willow squeezed Tara’s hand.



“I just,” Tara began, then stopped. “No, no bad thoughts today. It’s bad luck.”



“Baby, if something’s bothering you,” Willow squeezed the blonde’s hand, “I want you to tell me about it. I don’t want any secrets between us.”



“I’m,” Tara paused, “I’m just worried that’s all.”



“What about?”



“I’m worried that after we beat Daphne, ‘cause I know that we will, that,” Tara paused again. In a sad tone, she continued, “I’m worried about Jay. That we won’t be able to save her. And I so do want to save her, Willow.”



“We’ll do our best, so don’t worry,” the red head pulled Tara closer, so the blonde could rest her head on Willow’s shoulder. “And together we’ll get the best outcome possible.”



Tara sighed, letting Willow’s warmth and love calm her frayed nerves.



“Do you feel a little better now?” Willow asked, looking down at her love.



“Yes,” Tara nodded. She looked out at the park, watching the people walk by. “It’s funny, sometimes, I still can’t get over what we do. Being monster fighters and stuff for the last seven years. And the beat goes on, oblivious.”



“I know how you feel,” Willow looked out at the people gathered in the park. It was close to lunchtime. Many people in business clothes sat on benches reading and or eating. There was a cluster of small children on the playground, under several mother’s watchful eyes. A few students from either the college or high school sat at a table, laughing and gossiping, enjoying time away from books and inside.



“But it’s what we do,” Willow looked down again at the gold locks spread on her shoulder. “Someone has to.”



“I had hoped,” Tara said, not looking up, “that after Jay had been rescued that, I don’t know, that I could settle down some. Maybe start a life that didn’t involve late nights and hospital visits. Especially now that I’ve gotten to know you for myself.”



“We can still have that sweetie,” Willow pulled Tara a little closer to her.



“But it’ll be tougher now, with the clans rapidly becoming involved in our lives. It was the same in my reality. Jay, Cleo, Billy Joe. It was almost all the same there as it is here, except,” Tara paused.



“What Baby?” Willow could tell that whatever it was, it was painful for Tara to say.



“When I left Minnesota and moved to California, Jay and I were still very close. She came to see me whenever she could. I was lucky, I guess. Jay and her entire team had stopped by to see me on the way to some mission overseas during the middle of eighth grade.”



Tara looked up at Willow with damp eyes. “And that’s the last time I saw them. They were all killed on that mission.”



“Oh sweetie,” Willow used her free hand to wipe away Tara’s tears.



“And when my mom died, and my family life turned to crap, it was remembering Jay’s words and love that helped me be strong and survive.” Tara took a deep breath. “And nobody knew, Willow, nobody knew what Jay and her friends had done. Or why they had died. They had saved the world, and nobody knew. And their lives, they were so young, so young to die. They never got a chance to live.”



Tara sat up, looking intensely into Willow’s eyes, her soul. “That will never be us,” she took Willow’s hands and squeezed. “We will live our lives, Willow, the way we want. And many years from now, when we pass on, we will have a family to remember us and know how well we lived.”



Willow was overcome. She pulled Tara into a fierce hug. “Oh Baby,” she whispered into Tara’s ear. “We will, we will.”





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Buffy watched from across the park as her best friend and her girlfriend hugged after what looked like an intense moment.



“Everything okay Buff,” Xander asked, looking at his friend. He and Buffy had made a lunch date for today, and Willow’s suggestion of the park had sounded like a good one.



“Yeah,” she turned and looked at her other best friend.



“Do you think we should head over there and make sure,” Xander nodded at Tara and Willow.



“Nah,” Buffy waved her hand. “They need some quality alone time. We can catch up later.”



“Okay,” Xander unwrapped his sub and took a bite. After chewing for a moment, he said, “Did you ever think we’d get here Buffy?”



“The park?” the slayer asked, tilting her head.



“No, in the more general ‘look where I am life, what am I doing’ sort of way,” he leaned back into the bench. “I’ve got to admit Buff, over the last few years, I wasn’t so sure.”



“Neither was I,” Buffy admitted. “With Adam, Glory, Dawn’s creation, my mom’s death, and Tara’s and mine.” She shook her head, “And lest we forget Willow’s near apocalypse, I wouldn’t be too sure myself.”



“But hey, at least we’re not the eye of the storm on this one,” Xander shrugged.



“Yeah,” Buffy nodded slightly. “But this is the one that will change us all the most Xander.” She looked over at her friend. “Tara and Willow won’t be part of the gang so much anymore.” Buffy looked away and back at the couple across the park. “But it’s time, I guess. It’s not like it can stay like it was forever.”



“In our hearts Buffy, it can and it will,” Xander smiled. “It will.”





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Cleo looked at her watch. It was just past noon and the she was headed north to Wisconsin. After putting a short day in at her firm, the veteran warrior made an executive decision to be there for the ritual that would break the spell over Kim.



She had always enjoyed this drive north on the interstate, watching the city fall away into smaller and smaller groups of buildings. Soon she would exit the large road and head down smaller, winding paths deep into the countryside.



“And lucky me, no snow just yet,” she said to herself as her green Boxter zipped past a semi. “Just a typical fall day in the Midwest.”



Claude’s ring pulled Cleo out of her musings. She hit the speakerphone button.



“Good news?” she asked.



“The crystals have arrived and they’re perfect.”



“Excellent.” Cleo grinned.



"And since they’re here, we can start the ritual on schedule.” Claude paused. “C, where are you?”



“I’m in my car, heading to your location.”



“Are you sure that’s best,” Claude asked, a little concerned. “What if something happens?”



“Claude, what could happen in Chicago that could be more important that this?” Cleo asked. “And if something does, fuck it. This is way more important.” She could her Claude sputter just a little.



“Oh my God Cleo. I daresay that sounds like emotional investment in this situation. Deep investment.”



“It is,” Cleo admitted. “Maybe I’m getting soft in my old age, Ice, but I’m tired of watching the few things I really care about go to shit. And I want to make sure that the buck stops here on this one.”



There was a pause on the other end of the line.



“Good.” Cleo could see her friend’s smile even though they were still miles apart. “I’ll see you in a couple of hours then.”



Claude clicked off, but her phone rang again.



“Why is it these calls always come in clumps?” Cleo said to herself. She looked down and recognized Lucas’s number.



“Well?” she asked.



“And hello to you too, Cleo,” Lucas joked. “How are things on your end?”



“Moving along. There was a delay with the ritual, something about bad crystals, but it’s been taken care of. It should start in a few hours, probably just past sundown central time. And you?”



“Your people arrived without incident,” the older man informed. “And I must say, I’m surprised. I’m not too sure about this younger generation coming up through the clans, but these three have been most impressive.”



“And how are Tara and Willow?” Cleo asked. “Jay called me this morning and told me about yesterday’s revelation.”



“It was remarkable,” Lucas’s voice held a touch of awe as he remembered the fight at the Bronze. “I am sure they are the fated two.”



“So was Jay,” Cleo paused. “But we can’t focus on that now, Lucas. We have more pressing matters to deal with this day and in the days to come.”



“You’re right.” Lucas said, turning away from Faith who sat, resting, on a pile of mats in the training room of the Magic Box.



Faith leaned back, trying to stretch her back out, watching Lucas chat with Cleo out of the corner of her eye. She noticed Giles standing in the doorway.



“What’s up Rupert?” Faith asked the watcher.



“Anya’s back,” he said, looking down at the dark slayer sprawled on the floor.



“So did she say where they went last night?” Faith sat up Indian style. She glanced at the clock on the wall that read two thirty. “That must have been some trip.”



“She was grumbling something about money and stupid demon rules,” Giles said, “but that could mean anything.”



“So what’s your deal these days,” Faith asked. “I heard you left town a couple of years ago and are back in England.”



“I did, and I was,” Giles stepped into the room and put his hands into his pockets, “but the longer I’m in Sunnydale, the more I’m thinking about staying.”



“That’s cool,” Faith replied. “I know that B really misses you. Especially with her mom gone and all.” She shook her

head. “I’m sure that really sucked.”



“It wasn’t the best of times,” Giles agreed. “And what about you Faith? You seem, better.”



She looked over at Lucas, still on the phone. “I guess. Better living in Singapore than rotting in jail. Lucas is cool too. He’s used to dealing with little shits like me.” Faith grinned.



“So that’s where you’ll be staying then?” Giles asked curious.



“Maybe, I don’t know,” Faith looked up at the older man. “Clans have already offered to take me in all the way and continue to train me, but I don’t know if that’s what I want.”



“And the Council? You’re still the slayer, you know.” Giles pointed out.



“Nope. Lucas worked some mojo or something. Made the line move along. Some girl in India is the current slayer. So I’m free, sort of. Can’t escape those forces of darkness trying to take you down no matter who’s the new slayer. Just look at Buffy.”



“She has changed quite a bit since you last saw her,” Giles admitted.



“She has, but she hasn’t, ya know?” Faith unwound her legs and stood. “More with the angst, sure, but still the same little tight ass prime and proper girl I met four years ago at heart.” She took a step closer to Giles. “Now, Red, on the other hand,” Faith gave Giles a sideways grin, “she’s another deal all together.”





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At that moment, Willow was showing Tara how much she had changed from the bookish, shy, insecure teen that Faith knew to the savvy and confident woman she had become. Willow had pinned Tara to the bed in Xander’s guestroom, enjoying near full access to all of Tara’s treasures.



“Willow,” Tara gasped as the red head descended on her neck, kissing and nibbling the flesh before her.



“Hmm?” Willow asked.



“We….” Tara paused as another wave of lust swept through her. “I can’t believe I’m about to say this, but we should rest,” Tara finally got the line out.



Willow pulled back and looked into the blue eyes below her. Eyes shaded with love and lust, but tempered with reason.



“Ugh,” Willow relented and moved down Tara, resting her head on Tara’s chest. “Your right,” she glanced over at the clock on the nightstand. “It’s almost three.” Willow snuggled in closer. “But it’s hard, ya know? You being the vixeny goddess that is you and all.”



Tara chuckled. “It’s hard for me too sweetie, but we do need to rest.” She absently played with Willow’s hair. “And when we do finally make love, I want it to be perfect.” Tara looked down at Willow’s head resting on her chest. “I’ve had enough frantic, sweaty encounters in my life. I want something more substantial than that.”



“Excuse me?” Willow looked up, resting her chin on Tara’s chest and quirking and eyebrow.



Tara blushed a little. “Well, yeah,” she admitted slowly. “Like I said before, I wasn’t a nun in my reality. I knew a lot sooner that I was gay, and explored that part of myself.”



“Oh,” Willow replied a little worried.



“Hey,” Tara gave Willow a warm smile. “There’s a few things you need to know about this Tara: One, that I may have not been a nun, but I wasn’t easy either. There were a couple of relationships in my past. But that’s what they are now, past. Two, when I was touched by part of this reality’s Tara, it was confusing, yes, but her love for you was crystal clear. And after seeing you through her eyes, I knew that if we ever had anything, it wouldn’t even be in the same hemisphere as what I had before. Three, I had to know, though, for myself, just how special you truly are and if I could feel for you independent of the lasting emotions of this reality's Tara.”



Tara paused.



“And?” Willow squeaked.



Tara’s expression changed to one full of love and awe. “It’s not even on the same planet, Willow. What we have, what we will have, is beyond all that I’ve known.”



“Good,” Willow gave Tara a sly grin and scooted up for a kiss.



After a moment, the red head broke away and settled back down. “My feelings for you haven’t changed Tara. To me you’re the same girl who helped me move the soda machine against the Gentlemen.”



Tara stoked the top of Willow’s head, “I’m that girl Willow, and more.”





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It was three forty five and Jay sat at the top of the stairs to the dark arts loft in Magic Box waiting for everyone to arrive. She was honoring one of the most important traditions she had before a battle, quite reflection, which was difficult in the middle of a busy shopping day.



Several customers browsed the store, with Anya’s and Giles’s helpful assistance. They were closing the shop in fifteen minutes and wanted to get those last few sales for the day.



Jay’s brown eyes followed a bored looking Faith trailing Lucas as they left the training room. Lucas appeared to be giving the dark slayer some last minute advise which she accepted, eye rolls and all.



Her eyes shifted to the trio of youngsters sent from Chicago, who were seated in the small nook at the front of the store. She couldn’t make them out clearly, due to the bookcase in the way, but she knew their feelings. Excitement, mixed with nervousness, spiced with arrogance all layered on a flaky, fearful crust.



The door opening drew Jay’s attention to Buffy, followed by Xander. They were talking and joking easily, as most friends do. They exchanged pleasantries with the three in the corner, waved at Giles and Anya, and headed into the shop. Both plopped down at the large circular table in the center of the shop and continued their upbeat looking conversation.



Jay adjusted the headphones she was wearing. This part of the song was soft, and she didn’t want to miss it Every situation required different motivational and focusing music.The song has always reminded her of past failed relationships, the worst of which she was about to face for the last time. But at the same time, it left her hopeful for the future. A hope that had led her to a certain dazzling blonde doctor in Chicago.



Jay missed the next phrase when the door opened again, allowing a smiling Willow and Tara into the shop. They, too, were laughing and chatting, happy to be alive and together.



Jay thought smiling, hoping that she and Kim could attain that level of joy. Jay mused, then frowned, as the weight of their present situation settled back down on her shoulders.



< I swear that no outside force will stand in the way of them being together> She shuttered, thinking of what that could mean for her, but she didn’t care. Tara and Willow would be happy.



Just then Tara, wondering where Jay was, looked up at the top of the stairs where the demon fighter sat.



“Jay!” Tara mouthed and grinned, motioning for her to join them.



Returning the grin, Jay nodded and hit stop on her CD player.





TBC.....

"...and if you've got no other choice, you know you can follow my voice, through the dark turns and noise of this wicked little town..."--Hedwig and the Angry Inch



"Stinky herbs are a go." Cordelia in Becoming pt. 2



"I am an opera singer, I stand on painted tape, it tells me where I'm going, and where to throw my cape..." Opera Singer by Cake

hermitstull
 


Part 18a

Postby hermitstull » Fri Nov 29, 2002 11:30 pm

Hey all-

I hope everyone is having a nice holiday with family and friends. I just got back with plenty of time to post this first bit. This is the start of the conclusion of Hell Bent. I've already started writing part three of the Do Your Best saga, as yet untitled, but it will be a couple of weeks before I'll start posting that. Thanks to everyone who has been reading and posting. As always, feedback is welcomed.





without futher ado, I give you....



Part 18a (conclusion part 1)

Author's note:

This is it! The big showdown between the Scoobies, the Chicago team, and the big bads. The entire post is split between Chicago and Sunnydale, and does contain some action. Some stuff is explained, but more questions are posed.

Oh, cliffhangers abound.









Cleo walked the perimeter of the large lodge in the middle of nowhere, Wisconsin. The sun had set and the moon was rising. It was almost time for the ritual to begin. Everything was prepared inside the one hundred year old structure, purchased by the clans in the early 1900’s as a retreat, but lost some thirty years ago in the bureaucracy that the upper echelon of the clans had become. Cleo’s firm happened upon the site a couple of years ago and had maneuvered it out of the clan’s hands in general and into her own secret holdings.



She had pulled in several favors as well to get the area secured. Three teams also patrolled the area, again, unknown to the clan’s assembly of elders. Such secretive actions were becoming more commonplace, Cleo knew, and flew in the face of what the clans stood for. But times had changed over the millennia, and the old ways weren’t always the best ways.



Cleo recognized the pattern of Billy Joe’s footsteps as she rounded the corner.



The pair looked at each other in the dim moonlight.



“Heard you were heading up here,” Billy Joe said, crossing his arms and leaning on the wall of the wooden structure.



“Situation seemed to warrant my personal attention,” Cleo replied, crossing her arms.



“I guess,” Billy Joe looked down. “But it’s not like you, Chief. To rush up here, leaving all those projects….”



“I don’t care, Sport,” Cleo uncrossed her arms and ran her fingers through her long black hair. “That shit can wait.”



“Can it?” he looked up at his friend. “You know what we’re preparing for. What’s gonna happen after we take that asshole down.” He gave a dry chuckle. “In some ways it’ll be worse than facing Demy in prime.”



“And that’s why,” Cleo’s voice rose just a little. “this has to work.” Cleo took a step closer to her other best friend. “Damn it Billy Joe! Jay, of all of us, deserves a little bit of happiness. Don’t you think?”



“Honey, I know,” Billy Joe shook his head. “But it just might not be possible.”



Cleo calmed a little and let her arms hang limply at her sides. “And for the first time, I’m afraid,” she admitted. “For the first time in my life, I’m afraid of failure.”



Before Billy Joe could respond, a faint chanting could be heard from inside the lodge.



“It’s started,” Cleo said softly.



Billy Joe reached over and took Cleo’s hand in his and joined her on patrol.





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The sunset was beautiful, one of the better ones you could get in this part of California, but no one in the group seemed to notice. They were too focused on the buildings whizzing by them in the fading light. Three cars full of life on their way to a warehouse in the bad part of town to fight death.



Jay drove her Mercedes, listening to her headset once again, unaware of the conversation between Faith, Lucas, and Anya. Not really caring what she was missing.



Xander drove, as usual, most of the Scoobies. Normally chatty, the group was silent. Willow and Tara holding hands quietly in the back seat.



In the third vehicle, a large dark red Excursion, rode the fresh-faced trio from Chicago, along with Giles, who provided driving directions to the group. That quartet was mostly silent as well, mentally going over their roles in the fight to come.



Jay slowed and stopped the lead car about half a block down the street from the warehouse, the other cars following suite. Soon, everyone was standing in the cooling night air, stretching, gathering gear, and collecting themselves.



“Any last minute questions?” Lucas asked the eleven people in front of him.



“Do you have it?” Anya asked, looking at Jay.



“Hold on,” Jay said, opening the trunk of her car. She pulled out a long wrapped object.



Anya smiled and hurried over to Jay, quickly pulling the cloth off the object, which turned out to be a rifle.



“Jesus,” Xander said, as Anya lifted the weapon, checking its sight.



“Anya’s the best marksman in two dimensions,” Jay replied. “Taught me a thing or two.”



“My favorite” The demon smiled. “The Izhmesh Dragunov SVD with an adjustable gas based semi-automatic regulator. Open sight range of twelve hundred meters, maximum fire rate of thirty rounds per minute. The best the Russians have to offer.”



“She’ll be able to cover our backs,” Jay looked at Anya who was doing a quick check of the gun. “Bullets are still the easist way to take down a zombie. And she’s the best one here with a gun.”



“Why does that scare me more than anything I’ve faced on the hell mouth,” Buffy whispered to Willow, who nodded in agreement.



Lucas looked at the determined faces before him. “Let’s go.”



As most of the group headed began down the street, Willow lingered a moment with Tara. Willow had been elected to go to the warehouse, Tara to stay and cast the spell with Lucas and Giles.



“Good luck,” Tara smiled.



“You too,” Willow pulled Tara close and kissed her passionately, then reluctantly pulled away. With a small wave, she hurried to catch up with the rest of the warehouse bunch.



“Tara,” Jay’s voice echoed in the blonde’s head.



“Yes.”



“Nothing will happen to her, I promise.” Jay said.



“I know,” Tara replied, turning and heading with Giles, Lucas, and Paul from the Chicago team into the building where the spell would be cast.









Jay paused and waited for Willow to catch up. She and the red head were at the back of the pack.



“I want you to know that I haven’t forgiven you. Tara says that this isn’t really who you are, and I’d like to believe that. But I won’t until I see it for myself.” Willow said, looking over at Jay. He voice was calm, but her eyes held very little warmth.



“I know. It’s okay if you don’t like me,” Jay replied. “But I’ve swore to myself that I won’t let anything happen to you.”



“For Tara’s sake,” Willow said and moved to catch up with Buffy at the front of the group.



“And yours,” Jay said to Willow’s back.













Jay began to pull on her dark power, so that by the time they were at the warehouse, she was the red-eyed monster she had been the previous afternoon. Everyone stepped back, nervous about the kind of power Jay was displaying, except for Willow.



The pair looked at each other for a moment. Jay nodded and stepped forward, heading towards the front door. Faith, Tom Dean, and Ren Mathers followed.



“Are you ready?” Buffy asked Willow.



“Let’s go,” she replied calmly.



Willow led Buffy, Xander, and Anya to the fire escape on the other side of the building Faith had used to access the roof the other day.



“Willow can you hear me?” Tom’s voice crackled in Willow’s earpiece. She adjusted the headset she was wearing so that the speaker was closer to her mouth.



“Loud and clear Tom. Are you guys ready?”



“We’re at the front door. No signs of zombie activity yet. Are you in position?”



“Getting there,” Willow said, pulling herself up the rusty ladder that led to the first floor escape platform.



Buffy was already there looking in the window cautiously. She gave the thumbs up.



“We’re ready to go,” Willow said to Tom.



“Then let’s unleash hell,” Tom replied.



Willow could hear Jay blowing open the door with magic. Shots rang out in Willow’s ear as the group at the front door attacked the zombies that greeted them.





TBC...









"...and if you've got no other choice, you know you can follow my voice, through the dark turns and noise of this wicked little town..."--Hedwig and the Angry Inch



"Stinky herbs are a go." Cordelia in Becoming pt. 2



"I am an opera singer, I stand on painted tape, it tells me where I'm going, and where to throw my cape..." Opera Singer by Cake

hermitstull
 


Part 18b

Postby hermitstull » Mon Dec 02, 2002 12:28 am

Hey all-

One holiday weekend down....

Here's the next part of Hell Bent. I'll be posting the another part of this story either Monday night or Tuesday night. Enjoy!











Part 18b

Author's note: A short update: More action, more mystery. And another cliffhanger.







“Will?” Xander asked, hefting the large double-headed ax to his shoulder.



She nodded and Buffy forced the window open, shining a flashlight into the dark hallway before them. With no signs of activity, the quartet headed inside.



Their first objective would be to secure an office that overlooked the main floor of the warehouse. Anya would set up there and use her vantage point to destroy the undead with her sniper rifle.



According to the blueprints, the office was located on the first floor, close to the part of the building they were currently in. The hope was that on the way, Willow’s group would take out any of Mr. Rouse’s creations.



Willow, holding the other flashlight led the way, followed by Anya, then Xander. Buffy, who’s main weapon was her favorite broadsword, brought up the rear. They paused, as the sound of heavy gunfire echoed through the warehouse.



“Sounds like one hell of a fight,” Xander commented.







“Shit,” Jay cursed under her breath as she quickly changed clips. Luckily for her, guns were okay in the warehouse district. Jay was down to her last round of ammo, having emptied the rest into the unmoving corpses that littered the floor. Jay, Tom, and Ren each carried a handgun in one hand, a sword in the other, and it seemed they had barely made a dent in the crush of zombies coming at them.



Faith, with her large ax, was holding her own, but not fairing much better. They had managed to make their way into the main part of the warehouse, not allowing any zombie to survive, but were stalled.



The foursome had secured a small office just off to the side of the main floor. Zombie beat on the door and walls and they tried to catch their breath. Jay was magically holding the plywood walls and doors together, otherwise they would have collapsed long ago.



“So much for research,” Ren hissed. “Tommy Boy, there are a hell of a lot more than one hundred zombies out there.”



“No shit,” Faith agreed. “We must have taken down that many already. No telling how many B and her group have bagged.”



“I’m telling you,” Tom protested. “There can’t be that many more.”



Jay reached out with her senses, trying to assess the situation. “Tom is right. We’ve cut down a good number of the zombies on this floor.” She paused. “They’re something else, too, but I can’t put my finger on it.”



“We need to move,” Faith said as the pounding and grunting got louder.



“Willow,” Tom asked into his radio. “Status.”







“Anya’s almost in position,” Willow said as she wiped her sword on the carpet. “We just ran into a little pack of zombies up her, but they’re almost gone."



“Can you see the main floor from where you are,” Tom asked.



Willow walked around the corner to the end of the hallway, leaving Buffy and the rest of the group to take care of the few remaining zombies. The hallway ended at a walkway that lined the entire building providing a full view of most of the ground floor.



“I can see you,” Willow said. There was a large group of zombies, maybe thirty or so, pressing against a small room at the far corner of the warehouse. The rest of the floor was empty of everything.



“Shit,” Willow gasped as she looked at the opposite end of the warehouse from where Tom and his group were.



“What!” Tom asked frantically.







Giles, Tara, and Lucas sat in a triangle around a small fire, chanting in Sumerian. The spell to strip the zombies of their artificial life was almost done. So far, everything was going to plan.



Paul looked down the street towards the warehouse, wishing he was there. Someone had to stay behind and protect the trio working the spell, and he had lost rock, paper, and scissors to Tom and Ren.



He glanced back at the trio, checking their status. he thought, having never really grasped the intricacies of Sumerian.



Paul looked back to the window just in time to see it shatter in his face.









“Willow!” Tom shouted into the speaker. “Willow!” He looked at the group in the room. “The signal’s dead.”



“That’s it,” Jay said, summoning more power that she ever had used before. “Get down,” she hissed. Ren and Faith pulled Tom behind the desk as the office exploded outward around them.







TBC.....

"...and if you've got no other choice, you know you can follow my voice, through the dark turns and noise of this wicked little town..."--Hedwig and the Angry Inch



"Stinky herbs are a go." Cordelia in Becoming pt. 2



hermitstull
 


Re: Part 18b

Postby Grimlock72 » Mon Dec 02, 2002 1:04 pm



hmmm.... if Jay (or Willow) have enough power for things like that, why bother with guns and such in the first place ? Heck, torch the place and the zombies will die nicely :) .



I hope Anya has good ammo for that sniper rifle or she might end up shooting a friendly in the process. Still having trouble imagining Anya as a marksman though :D .



As usual the person guarding an area gets bored and feel useless so he gets distacted at precisely the wrong time. Won't feel to sorry when he gets killed, his own bloody fault.



Something else I don't entirely follow; if that spell robs zombies or their life why do the other groups even bother fighting them ? Just use all force you can muster to protect the spellcasters and wait till their spell is done... sounds MUCH easier. (also makes for a boring story I assume :) .



Grimmy

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Grimlock72
 


Re: Part 18b

Postby hermitstull » Mon Dec 02, 2002 10:24 pm

Hey Grimmy-

Hope you had a nice holiday!



Zombies. The reason either Willow or Jay doesn't blast the place is they need to make sure they take out Mr. Rouse and Daphne. And the only way they can make sure is to be there to see it happen first hand. This also goes with why didn't the gang protect the spellcasters. (No one expected Daphne and Mr. Rouse to split up.)



Plus, it would make for a rather dull ending :)



And Anya. She has many skills.





hermitstull

"...and if you've got no other choice, you know you can follow my voice, through the dark turns and noise of this wicked little town..."--Hedwig and the Angry Inch



"Stinky herbs are a go." Cordelia in Becoming pt. 2



hermitstull
 


Part 18c

Postby hermitstull » Tue Dec 03, 2002 7:44 pm

Hello all-

Here's the next update to Hell Bent. The final part of Hell Bent will be posted later this week. Then I'll be going on a hiatus (like Firefly :wink ), but I'll be back in a few weeks with part three of Do Your Best and Don't Worry: Deep. (Finally figured out a title!)



Feedback is most welcome.





Without further ado, I give you...



Part 18c

Author's note: More action, mixed with a little insight into some of the characters. And another cliffhanger.







“Willow,” Daphne grinned. “How nice it is to meet the famous dark witch. I’ve heard so much about you.” The evil blonde stood sauntered towards the red head on the walkway.



“Can’t say the same,” Willow said, taking a step back.



Buffy, Xander, and Anya rounded the corner just then, having finished off the last of the zombies.



“And look, you brought your little friends,” Daphne noted. “The Slayer, the boy, and,” she paused, surprised. “Anya!”



“Hello Daphne,” Anya greeted tersely. “Send anyone to hell lately?”



“Working on it,” Daphne replied, smiling again.



An explosion from the floor below caused the walkway to shake slightly. Everyone looked down to where an office once stood.







Zombies were laid out in various states of disrepair around the epicenter of the explosion. Dust and debris swirled, obscuring the view for those above. After a moment, a figure started to become clear, moving through the dust, away from the center of the destruction.





Daphne knew who it was immediately. She turned and looked at Willow. “There was a moment when I almost turned back from this path,” Daphne began calmly. “For a while I was in love with Jay, and it almost caught up with me at the end.”



She looked down as Jay became clear in the fog, starting to taking out the last of the zombies.



“We were at that stupid party at the musty old lodge in BFE Wisconsin,” Daphne remembered. “It had been a fabulous night. Jay was her most charming, her most beautiful, the happiest anyone had ever seen her. All because of me,” she gave a small smile. “I felt my resolve weaken. Maybe vengeance wasn’t the answer. Sorry Anya.”



“It’s okay,” Anya replied unfazed.



“And Jay,” Daphne looked down at her former lover. “Had been through so much already. Losing both her brothers and her parents. Almost being assassinated twice by demon hit men. And of course, the loss of my brother.” Daphne turned back to Willow. “She still feels bad for that.”



“Anyway, call it pity. Call it love. Call it alcohol.” Daphne said wistfully. “Whatever, I was seriously thinking about how good we could be together. How she could redeem me. Take me off the path of evil and put my feet on the road to good. I mean, I had only dabbled a little in the dark arts, and my deal with Demetrious,” Daphne paused. “There are always ways to get out of those things. One of Wolfram and Hart’s specialties.”







Jay looked up at the walkway, her breath caught. There was Daphne, talking and moving oh so slowly towards Willow.



Jay thought, looking up at her former lover for the first time in years. reaching out, she mentally skimmed Daphne’s essence .



Jay felt the conflicting emotions roll through her, heightened by the large amount of dark magic she was channeling. The pain was there, as it always was when she thought of Daphne. As was the anger, which pushed itself to the forefront, powered by prime. Mixed in both was the love that Jay had felt for the fallen woman. The first real taste of love she had ever known.



It was all rapidly becoming too much and she felt herself begin to mentally shut down.



“Jay!” Faith’s harsh voice rang out across the warehouse, but it was only a distant echo in Jay’s mind as she sank deeper into herself.









“Well, what do we have here,” Mr. Rouse said, stepping through the broken glass. “Three little bitches trying to take my power away.”



Tara, Lucas, and Giles scrambled to their feet. Tara looked at Paul, unconscious and bleeding on the floor. she thought.



“But not for long,” Mr. Rouse said. Tara looked up quickly, shocked and disgusted that Mr. Rouse had read her mind.



“Tara your mental shields,” Lucas reminded.



“And if it isn’t the famous Lucas Patee,” Mr. Rouse looked at the other man. “The sweetheart of the council of elders.” He took another step into the small building. “But they don’t know do they. Any of them.”



“Know what?” Giles asked.



“I don’t need you,” Mr. Rouse said, waving his hand, sending the watcher into the wall. Giles grunted and slumped down unconscious. He turned and looked at Tara and Lucas.



“Should you tell her or should I?” Mr. Rouse asked.









Cleo and Billy Joe sat at the entrance to the lodge, waiting. The ritual had started almost an hour ago and should be almost done.



“Listen,” Billy Joe stood suddenly.



Cleo paused, “The chanting’s stopped.” She said standing. “How long before we know?”



“I'm not sure,” Billy Joe replied, shrugging. “Ice said it could be seconds, or days. No telling.”



The pair sat back down at waited for twenty seconds before the doors to the lodge burst open.



“Cleo, Billy Joe,” a disheveled Claude rasped. “Come. Quickly.”







“So anyway,” Daphne smiled again and looked down at Jay, who stood on the floor, unmoving as Faith shouted at her. “The night was winding down and someone, probably that pesky Billy Joe, pushed me up to the stage for a toast or something. It was all planned, of course, a party designed by Cleo would never allow spontaneity.” She smirked, “ I looked at her, sitting with a couple of her demon friends, smiling, and I knew,” Daphne looked up, locking eyes with Willow. “That we would destroy each other if we stayed together. That no matter how good it may seem, that it would end in misery for us.”



“You sent her to hell,” Willow said, noticing Jay for the first time.



“And that’s when I was in love with her,” Daphne chuckled and lunged forward.







In the back of Jay’s mind, she heard someone screaming, someone familiar. Who was it? Tara? Willow? Faith? She couldn’t quite tell who, but they wanted something. Wanted her to do something, but what? She felt herself sinking again as the screams became part of the cacophony of the noise in her head. Wait, something else was there too, nudging her to do something, go get some one. Who was that, talking to her with those warm words of encouragement. Tara? No, she would never use that tone with me, only for Willow. And Faith only yells. Willow? She hates me. There’s too much love in that noise. Who….



Oh my God, Kim.







TBC...

"...and if you've got no other choice, you know you can follow my voice, through the dark turns and noise of this wicked little town..."--Hedwig and the Angry Inch



"Stinky herbs are a go." Cordelia in Becoming pt. 2



Edited by: hermitstull at: 12/3/02 5:47:43 pm
hermitstull
 


Re: Part 18c

Postby Grimlock72 » Wed Dec 04, 2002 2:32 pm



oooowww for feck's sake Jay, you *knew* you were going to see Daphne... don't tell me you can't handle that. Besides that I don't see an immediate problem, Tara and Lucas should be able to handle mr. Rouse who probably relies heavely on his zombies to his work for him. (and most of those are gone)



Willow should be able to at least hold Daphne of a bit, she would have noticed if Daphne had powered-up already. Kind of hard to do that unnoticed :) . Anya should concentrate on shooting zombies since she's not much good against Daphne probably. Buffy and the other scoobies can continue their floor sweep as long as they stay away from mr. Rouse since they don't have a defense against magic.



Daphne's story doesn't make sense at the end. Either she really believed that they were going to destroy each other or she's just trying to play Willow. The former makes no sense anyway; we would destroy each other so I send her to hell.....right. Sounds mighty self-centered to me.



Didn't Willow and Anya *know* Daphne did that by-the-way ? Heck, why actually *listen* to your enemy in the first place ? Probably only distracting you and stop her from moving forward.



Grimmy

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Grimlock72
 


Re: Part 18c

Postby sheila wt » Wed Dec 04, 2002 7:34 pm

Oh my... cliffhanger much? :shock

I just hope that, feeling Tara in danger, won't mess up with Willow's concentration to fight...

Can't wait for more!





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"She had tasted Willow on her tongue, and she had worn Willow on her skin. There wasn't a shower in the world that could have washed that away." (Terra Firma, by Tulipp)

sheila wt
 


Part 18d (Conclusion)

Postby hermitstull » Thu Dec 05, 2002 9:35 pm

Hello all-

First replies-



Grimmy-

Jay is a mess. She's already a little unstable, and now fueled with the super dark power, it's pushed her over the edge. I see it as one of those things where imaging it isn't the same as actually doing it.



Daphne's story. It's a little mix of everything. Yes, all along her plan was to send Jay to hell, but part of her did actually love Jay. That caused her to have a moment of weakness at the end, but she knew that ultimately it wouldn't work, so she went ahead and set Jay to hell. Plus, she is trying to distract and rattle Willow.



Shelia wt-

A new reader, yea! Sorry, I love stories with cliffhangers, and I purposely wrote this last scene so that I could break it up the way I did. I'm a bad girl.







To all-

Kittens are great!



Thanks to everyone who has been deeping up with Do Your Best and Do Your Best: Hell Bent. It's almost up to 3,000 views which is awesome, more than I thought it would get. I've had a great time posting and replying and am looking forward to finishing this saga with Do Your Best: Deep, which I'll start posting towards the end of the month. (I've got the first chapter and a half completed.)



And all feedback is greatly appreciated. Keep it coming.



Thanks-

hermitstull







without further ado, I give you....



Part 18d

Author's note:

A wrap up and a set up for things to come.

Songs quoted: "Hell Bent" by Kenna

"Wicked Little Town" from one of the greatest movies I've seen, Hedwig and the Angry Inch.









Tara looked at Lucas, then back at Mr. Rouse, not knowing who to believe. The story they had just told was unbelievable, but parts of it rang true. And if it was, by the Goddess, so many people would be hurt, so many worlds destroyed. And all in the name of what? She looked back at Lucas, seeing him perhaps for the first time.



He looked over at her. “Sleep,” he said. “And forget.”



Tara’s mind yelled as she felt the spell take control.



“Finally alone,” Mr. Rouse said, watching the young blonde woman fall to the floor.



“Yes,” Lucas glanced down at Tara. “What you’ve said, I can’t allow it to leave this room.’



“I know,” Mr. Rouse replied. “Daphne is finished. I need a new partner.”



“No,” Lucas’s eyes were hard as steel. “You need to die.”









“Back,” Daphne waved her hand, sending Buffy, Xander, and Anya flying and knocking them unconscious. She grabbed Willow by the wrist, twisting it, forcing the red head to her knees.



“I have seen it all, my pet,” Daphne hissed, “and I know what you’ll be, and I can’t let that happen.”



“Let go,” Willow said, struggling to stand. With her free hand she reached for the knife that hung at her waist. Grabbing it, she took a swing at Daphne.



The evil rogue slayer let go of Willow’s wrist and flipped backward, landing with a sword in her hand. Willow stood and quickly drew her own weapon.



“Shall we dance?” Daphne asked.









“God damn it Jay!” Faith shouted directly into her ear. “Get the fuck up there. Red’s ass is gonna get kicked and Tara’s gonna be pissed.”



Tom and Ren, after finishing off the last of the zombies, were racing towards a set of stairs that led to the walkway.



“Jay!” Faith screamed. “Mother fucker,” she hissed and punched Jay in the jaw as hard as she could, sending the demon fighter flying. Much to Faith’s amazement, she watched as Jay flipped in mid air and landed on her feet, looking quite lucent and angry.



“Finally,” Faith said looking at Jay. “What the fuck happen just now?”



“Shut up,” Jay rasped, looking up at the walkway. Daphne had Willow on the ropes.



“Tom and Ren are on the way up there,” Faith began.



“I said shut up,” Jay shouted, looking at the dark slayer.



Faith took a step back, afraid.







“Think of it this way,” Daphne taunted as she toyed with Willow. “At least you got a chance to see Tara one last time.”



“Shut up,” Willow’s sword was too slow, entering the space Daphne had stood in two seconds too late.



“And hey,” Daphne reigned down a series of bone numbing blows on Willow’s sword, causing her arms to shake. “Maybe after I kill you, you’ll get to join her where ever she is.”



“No!” Willow’s desperate voice rang out as her sword was knocked from her hand, over the railing and to the floor below.



“Oops,” Daphne mocked, watching the sword fall. When she looked back, Jay stood in front of Willow.



“Willow,” Jay said, glancing back over her shoulder at the stunned red head. “Please get everyone out of here. It looks like Buffy, Xander, and Anya may need medical attention.”



She nodded at the slayer and her friends who were just waking up from what Daphne had done to them.



“Um, sure,” Willow replied, moving to help Buffy stand. Tom and Ren came racing around the corner just in time to help.



“Get them,” Willow nodded at Xander and Anya.



“What about Jay?” Tom asked, looking over Willow’s shoulder.



“Leave her, she’ll be fine,” Willow replied.



“What happened,” Buffy asked as they made their way back down the hallway.



“You got knocked out,” Willow replied.



“Duh,” Buffy said, wincing, “while I was out.”



Willow’s reply was drowned out by an inhuman scream that rang through the warehouse.



Tom and Ren paused, looking back.



“Less stop, more go,” Willow urged. The group made it back to the window they had entered from. Faith was waiting for them.



“Here, let me,” she said, taking the other side of Buffy.



Once outside, they headed down the street, not looking back on Willow’s strong urging. When they finally reached the cars, Buffy, Xander and Anya were moving, albeit slowly, under their own power. Lucas was there, waiting for them, with a battered Paul and Giles.



“Where’s Tara! Willow asked.



“Sleeping,” Lucas said, pointing to the back seat of Jay’s car. “Mr. Rouse hit her with a sleep spell. She’s fine,” he smiled reassuringly. “Tara should be waking up any time.”



“What happened to you guys,” Faith asked, looking at Giles and Paul.



“Mr. Rouse attacked us,” Paul said, a little ashamed. “I was k.o.’d with the first punch.”



“Myself shortly thereafter,” Giles grinned weakly. “Although Tara was conscious before I was attacked.” Giles thought aloud.



“Where is Mr. Rouse now,” Buffy asked, looking at Lucas.



“Dead,” the older man replied.



“Quite,” Giles added. “I wouldn’t recommend using that building for anything in the immediate future,” He looked at Xander who cringed and nodded.





Willow sat in the back seat, Tara’s head in her lap.



“Come on Baby,” Willow implored, “wake up for me.”



“For you,” Tara whispered, slowing opening her eyes, “anything.”



“Hey,” Willow smiled, fighting back tears. “How ya feeling?”



“Um,” Tara pulled herself more into the world of the awake. “Like I had too much to drink last night.” She slowly sat up.



“What happened?” Tara asked, looking Willow over for injuries.



“The usual,” Willow replied, trying to be nonchalant. “The plan worked, mostly. We beat the bad guys.”



“What else?” Tara asked. She could sense there was more to the story.



“Not now,” Willow replied, leaning in for a quick kiss. “I need to make sure you’re okay.”



“Same here,” Tara nodded, feeling her connection with Willow surround her.





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Jay stood, arms crossed, on the merry go round, the center of the playground in the park, as she slowly spun it magically. Her feet rested on the exact center of the bars, in perfect balance, allowing her to stand. The magic helped her to stay in place, along with Jay’s slayer like abilities.



At any other time, people would have most likely crowed around to see the strange woman in all black standing on the top of the merry go round, but it being almost midnight in Sunnydale, most residents were asleep. Or just plain knew better not to go out. But that was the time Buffy has told Jay to meet her for the final sweep of the town for the night.



It had been three days since the warehouse, three days since she had killed Daphne. Three days since she felt, for the first time, lost in the power that prime had offered. And just for a moment, a split second that felt like an eternity, she had welcomed it. Relished the power, the omnipotence, the control. Enjoyed the moral oblivion that it had offered.



Softly, she spoke Iantha’s words, “Am I awake? The morning star, that brings me here, sets everything in me between Pluto and God. All is Hell Bent. My walls are closing in. I feel the claim, controlling me, control of me, is losing me, you’re losing, control of me, control of me, you’re losing, your losing. Yes, I’m naked and broken, my world caves in, and I can’t find myself or my way out.”



But in that darkest moment, one she was sure of many to come in the days leading up to her journey to prime, she had felt something. Something that had pulled her back from the edge. The same something that had pulled her out of her own head in order to save Willow.



There it was. What had pulled Willow back from the brink almost seven months ago. Giles and the others had said it was an infusion of good magic that caused Willow to remember her humanity. That could be true, but Jay suspected that there was more.



A soft, achingly familiar voice came out from under a heavily shadowed tree. Jay slowed the spinning merry go round to listen.



“The fates are vicious and they’re cruel. You learn to late you used two wishes like a fool. And then you’re someone you are not, and hell mouth city ain’t the spot. Remember Misses Lot and when she turned around. And if you’ve got no other choice, you know you can follow my voice, through the dark turns and noise of this wicked little town.”



Kim Legaspi stepped out from under the tree and Jay’s heart sang. For the first time in months, she felt alive, felt human. And the worries and pains of what was happening around them faded, as the lovers rushed into each other’s arms. Letting the eternal struggle between good and evil take the night off.





Willow, Tara, and Buffy watched from a distance, each smiling. Lucas had told Tara that Kim was awake and in good health, and the Wicca had insisted that the doctor come to California. Jay was in distress, and wouldn’t discuss any part of what happened in the warehouse after the others had left.



She looked over at Willow, who despite her misgivings about Jay, was smiling and squeezing Tara’s hand. There was more that Willow wasn’t saying about what happened three days ago. Something she had seen or heard that was keeping her silent. Tara got the same sense about Faith, and the dark slayer was no more forthcoming on those events than Willow was.



Tara paused, thinking about her own experiences with Lucas. Her memories told her that what he said was true, but her heart told her no. Maybe Mr. Rouse had done something more to her, and Lucas was afraid to tell her. Afraid it might jeopardize the mission she and Willow were about to embark on. Or was it something else entirely?



“Are you guys ready?” Buffy asked hopping down from the back of the bench the trio was sitting on.



“Our work is done,” Willow said smiling, glancing over at Jay, who held Kim as they talked on the slowly spinning merry go round. From across darkened park, Willow could have sworn Jay looked at her and winked.



“Shall we then?” Buffy began to walk towards Xander’s apartment.



“Buffy,” Tara said, stopping the slayer. “Is it okay if we stay at Willow’s tonight?”



“Really?” Willow beamed.



“Sure,” Buffy smiled. “One super slayer escort to Casa de Summers at your service.”



The trio turned the other direction and headed to Buffy’s house.







A pair of dark eyes followed the girls exit from the park. The eyes looked over to Jay and Kim who still spun contentedly on the playground equipment.



“It makes no difference,” a sinister voice said, as the eyes blended back into the night.





TBC....













A preview....Do Your Best: Deep



“Must be a popular place,” Tara said, looking at Willow as they reached what looked to be the main entrance.



“For who?” Willow replied, opening the door.



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“Fine,” Spike said, straightening his coat. “But if anything happens to her, I’ll show you how I got my name. Up close.”



“Don’t worry William,” Lucas replied coolly. “This is personal business. The Council and the slayers will never know you were in London.”



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"Stinky herbs are a go." Cordelia in Becoming pt. 2



"Oh, poor Watcher. Did your life pass before your eyes? Cuppa tea, cuppa tea, almost got shagged, cuppa tea?" Spike, Barganing pt. 1



Xander: "What's with the hand move? Does that like mean something?"

Willow: "It's code. I think it breaks down to 'choo-choo'." Fool for Love



hermitstull
 


Re: Part 18d (Conclusion)

Postby Grimlock72 » Fri Dec 06, 2002 6:05 am

Well take guess.... I still don't trust/like Lucas, aren't you surprised ?



At least Jay attacked in plain sight, as opposed to using sneaky forget spells :rage . I sure hope that comes back to bite Lucas later on. Maybe Willow will help Tara figure it out, maybe she felt it through their connection. I want to know what was said as well. (or maybe Giles wasn't as unconcious, heh)



Hehe... if Willow ever finds out... Lucas is in trouble. He hasn't seen Willow in full protector mode yet : -->>: .



What I didn't understand how Willow just walked out of the building to the cars instead of rushing to check on Tara.



Did I miss the Daphne/Jay fight ? Chapters spend building up to that and neither of the two fights (Daphne/Jay and Rouse/Lucas) described. I can understand skipping the latter to keep us readers on edge, evil writers tend to do that :D



For that matter; who's to say Mr. Rouse is dead ? Lucas just moved up on my dislike-list (trading places with Jay), I don't plan on trusting anything he says or does anytime soon.



Kim getting Jay out of her dark-dark place was nice to see.



You sure left enough for a sequel/next chapter :D



Grimmy

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

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Re: Part 18d (Conclusion)

Postby hermitstull » Fri Dec 06, 2002 6:27 pm

Hey Grimmy-



I purposely left the fight scenes (Jay/Daphne and Rouse/Lucas) out. They'll be described in the next story. Why? The Lucas fight will be remembered by Tara at some point, and that will change her attitude about several things. Jay's scene will be flashed at a key moment, and you'll see why she's the prophecy girl. Family ties have a lot to do with it, but not all.



Mr. Rouse is dead. Giles is the confirmation. He saw enough to know.



And the Willow/Tara connection is there, but not as strong. They still haven't reached the 'I can sense you' kind of level they had before, but they're getting there. Plus, Tara really was just sleeping. Nothing more, other than the loss of memories, happened.



And we all know how Tara feels about that.



Thanks for reading and the great feedback-

hermitstull





ps-

I'm not liking Lucas much these days either. :whistle

Edited by: Warduke at: 1/2/03 8:28:10 pm
hermitstull
 


Re: Part 18d (Conclusion)

Postby WonderAnt » Tue Dec 17, 2002 8:21 pm

hey there

i just finished reading this and wanted to say it is absolutely amazing.. you managed to make it really interesting despite all the new characters.. i cant wait to read more from you! :)

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These endless days are finally ending in a blaze --------------

WonderAnt
 


Re: Part 18d (Conclusion)

Postby xita » Wed Dec 18, 2002 2:06 am

I've caught up! I was concerned at first because of this different Tara but you've managed to bring it full circle and joined both tara's in a way that makes sense. Plus you brought in her past with Willow and why it hadn't work there, more a thing of circumstance rather than feelings or attraction. I look forward to more!

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Buffy?

Let's change it, the Discovery channel has koala bears.

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Replies

Postby hermitstull » Thu Dec 19, 2002 3:55 am

Hey all-

I hope everyone has all their shopping done! (I haven't even started it yet.)



First replies-



Wonderant-

Thanks! New characters are tricky in a well established story, but I wanted to come up with a different way to get Tara back with Willow and at the same time, set up something different with future potential. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.



Xita-

Thanks for checking back with this story. Tara will always be the girl we all fell in love with from the show, but this Tara is that plus a bag of chips. :wink She's a little further along in understanding herself and has all of the Scooby experience from high school. And we'll see some of those skills show in the next story.







Second, an update on the update-

The first part of Do Your Best and Don't Worry: Deep, will be up next week. It's been a little trickier writing this one. I already have the ending, but how to get there and make sense, that is the question. But I think I've got it worked out.





Thanks again to everyone for reading. And feedback is still greatly appreciated.



Happy Holidays-

hermitstull

Edited by: Warduke at: 1/2/03 8:28:16 pm
hermitstull
 


Do Your Best and Don't Worry Part 3: Deep

Postby hermitstull » Sat Dec 21, 2002 11:12 pm

Hello all-

I know that I said next week, but I've got enough done that I can now start posting part three of Do Your Best, called Deep.

This is the big one, the one where everyone spends a little quality time in hell. It's going to start out light, but will get dark in places. But rest assured, Willow and Tara will still be together and happy.



I'm going to try a few different things with this story. One will be the attempt at giving each chapter a title or little header. Another is a little more time on some inner monologes that hopefully flow in and out of the story. The third is more subplots and storylines that all swirl around our girls, some of which are hinted at in Hell Bent. This is going to be a long one, so hang in there.



PLEASE give feedback on what you like or don't. What makes sense or doesn't. What I've gotten so far has been very good and has helped me shape this story quite nicely.



SPECIAL THANKS:

To everyone who has kept up with this tale. It's been more sucessfull that I'd hoped.

To the talented writers on the Kitten who have inspired my own little corner of fan fiction.

And last but not least, Alyson and Amber, for so many great moments.





without further ado, I give you....





Deep



Author's note:

Just a short prologue to set up part of this tale. Don't worry, we'll see Tara and Willow on part 2.



Part 1





Oh so many many ways for me to show you

How your dogma has abandoned you

Pray to your Christ, to your god

Never taste of the fruit

Never stray, never break

Never---choke on a lie

Even though he's the one who did this to you

You never thought to question why




from Judith by Perfect Circle





1967

Lucas Patee stepped passed the recently drained young black man, noting that he would rise by the end of the night as a vampire. Pausing, he looked down at the tall, thin fellow and shrugged.



“Oh well,” he said to himself as he pulled his cloak tighter around him and headed further into the large Victorian mansion on the outskirts of London. That was the way some of these swinger parties went these days, with the mixing of human and demon in a lust filled, drug hazed frenzy. Someone always got bit. And despite his status as one of the top up and coming watchers in the Council, he really didn’t care.



At twenty-five, his life was almost as he had pictured it. Liberated, as he called it at age four, from the Paris slums by a young woman who had saved him from what he later learned was a vampire. She was a slayer, he had also learned, and that was her job. To save people from the creatures of the night. Unfortunately, the young lady, Julia, had arrived to late to save his drunken father and abusive mother, but that was alright with Lucas. To him, that vampire had saved him almost as much as Julia had that night.



The girl in her late teens had taken little Lucas to a wonderful flat that had a view of the Eiffel Tower. There he had met her teacher, called a Watcher, named Mr. Brody, a middle aged American who taught Lucas many things. The trio lived in Paris as it recovered from German occupation until he was eight.



Lucas shrugged off the bad memory of Julia’s death and quickly moved through the house, ignoring various unseemly deeds going around him. He was looking for the seer, the strange vampire who was holding this party. Lucas had questions. Questions about something he had read in the musty stacks of the Council Library two months ago.



A strange laughing and singing drew the young watcher’s attention to a closed door on the second floor of the house. Light streamed out from underneath, as well as the smell of blood. Gathering his courage, he knocked.



“Well, well,” a blond haired vampire said, opening the door. “What do we have here?” He roughly pulled Lucas into the room.



Lucas gulped, quickly noticing several drained or almost drained bodies scattered around the den. At the center of the room sat a thin and pale looking woman with long black hair and unusual eyes.



“Spike, love,” Drucilla cooed, “this is the one I was telling you about.”



“Right,” Spike replied. “The Watcher.” He smiled sinisterly. “Do you have it?”



“Here,” Lucas replied, pulling a large envelope out from under his cloak. “Just as we agreed. Half now, half after you tell me what I want to know.”



“How’s about all now,” Spike stepped closer, “and maybe we’ll let you live.”



“Hold,” Lucas whispered, raising his hand. Spike was frozen in place by magic.



“What the!” Spike spat. He turned and looked at Drucilla. “What the bloody hell is this Dru? A warlock?”



“Shh,” Drucilla gracefully stood and walked towards Spike. “Deary, do be good and wait outside for a bit. Mr. Watcher and I have story to tell.” She looked over at Lucas who released Spike with a nod.



“Fine,” Spike said, straightening his coat. “But if anything happens to her, I’ll show you how I got my name. Up close.”



“Don’t worry William,” Lucas replied coolly. “This is personal business. The Council and the slayers will never know you were in London.”



With a nod from Drucilla, Spike swaggered out of the room, shutting the door behind him and leaving the two alone.



“I want to know more about this,” Lucas said, handing a dusty, worn book to Drucilla. "I’ve searched all the Council records and there’s nothing. Only vague references and missing books or missing pages from the Watcher Diaries.”



Drucilla took the book, holding it briefly. She let out a musical laugh, which would have been quite attractive if she hadn’t been one of the most feared vampires currently on the planet.



“Barking up the wrong tree, little dog,” Drucilla replied. “You need to see the pissed on side of the tree. The one that split and walked away, they’ll tell you. Open their branches and cover you.”



“Other side?” Lucas was confused.



“The other ones,” Drucilla stood and began to sway back and forth. “The other little acorns that fell away and started their own forest. This is their book.”



Lucas paused for a moment, thinking. “You don’t mean that bunch that calls themselves slayers, do you? The clans?” Lucas scoffed.



Drucilla smiled and clapped. “You win a dolly,” she walked over to a young woman, drained earlier that night. “This one?” she asked, in all seriousness.



“No, thank you,” Lucas replied politely, suppressing his nausea. “But what about what’s in this book?”



“She’s coming,” Drucilla replied in a much more serious tone. “Soon, she’s coming, but not the right one. Oh, she could be. Such songs, such vengeance. Such glorious hell. But no, she’ll die too soon, too young,” She looked down sadly.



“So the girl mentioned in this prophecy involving Iantha’s line. She’s going to be born soon, and could be the one, but she’s going to die before it comes to pass?”



“Gone too soon, lost in the jungle, her and the scarecrow and the tin woodsman. Little Dorothy and Toto too. All gone.” Drucilla looked back at Lucas. “She’ll come later, again, at a better time. What things may come. Flying cars, spaceships, little green men, the prophecy girl. And she’ll win, then the dark ones win.” The vampire smiled, then frowned. “But you’ll be long asleep by then.” The vampire’s eyes lit up. “Or not. I can make you young forever. And you can be there to see her then, if you careful.”



“Again, thank you for your offer, but I can change things now so that this is the right time,” Lucas said standing. He knew that the longer he stayed, the closer to death he came. And being dead, or worse, a vampire wouldn’t suit his needs.



Drucilla paused and looked carefully at the young man before her. Nodding to herself, she turned and went back to her chair.



Lucas spun and quickly headed out of the room, bumping into Spike who leaned casually on the wall just outside the door, smoking a cigarette.



“Here,” Lucas said, tossing the blonde vampire another envelope of money. “There’s the rest plus a little extra.”



“Thanks mate,” Spike replied. “Did you get what you want?”



“Yes,” Lucas replied and hurried down the hall.



“Spiky,” Drucilla called from inside the room.



“Yes love,” he replied, stepping into the opened doorway.



“Tell the young watcher that he must watch out for red and gold on his quest. They will make things hard for him. Stop him from slaying the dragon, finding the Grail.”



“Um, okay pet,” Spike replied, shaking his head. He stepped out into the hall in an attempt to catch Lucas, but he was long gone.



“Oh well,” he said to himself. “He said he already got what he needed. What difference can that little bit make anyway?”







TBC...











Edited by: Warduke at: 1/2/03 8:37:29 pm
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Re: Do Your Best and Don't Worry Part 3: Deep

Postby Grimlock72 » Sun Dec 22, 2002 7:21 am

Argh.... Dru's lines are hard to read and understand as usual. They tend to make sense after the fact but that's a bit late.



Who's to say Dru told the full truth anyway ? What does 'dragon' refer to and is it evil (and is evil to Dru, good to us ???), why would one want to find the grail ? I recall a movie about that and it didn't end well for the ones wanting to get it, heh.



Lucas doesn't have much feeling left does he ? And that was back in '67 .... hmm.. I doubt he has improved. Probably caused by his not-so-loving parents and his watcher training, they like non-feeling robot types... those listen better : -->>:



Grimmy

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Grimlock72
 


Re: Do Your Best and Don't Worry Part 3: Deep

Postby hermitstull » Sun Dec 22, 2002 2:38 pm

Hey Grimmy-

Drucilla. You've got it. She never will directly tell you what you want to know, and it doesn't always make sense at first. She does it in her own way. Dru is telling Lucas the truth about everything. Lucas sort of understands what she is saying, but will have to think about it for some time.



Her ending message, about dragons and the Grail is more metaphorical about Lucas's quest. He's not looking for a real dragon or the Holy Grail. It's his personal holy grail.



And Lucas. We'll learn a little more about him and his motivations as the story progresses. He's not as unfeeling as he may seem.



One of the over riding themes in this story is what is good and what is evil and what makes them the way they are. Sometimes it's about perception, other times it's motivation, sometimes it's about the end result, or it could be about how you reach that end result and the trouble it can cause along the way. And evil for some is not for others.



Thanks for the great feedback.



Happy Holidays-

hermitstull

Edited by: Warduke at: 1/2/03 8:29:31 pm
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Re: Do Your Best and Don't Worry Part 3: Deep

Postby maudmac » Mon Dec 23, 2002 4:05 am

hermitstull, a thousand apologies for coming into this so late.



This story is humongous! You've obviously put an great deal of thought into your characters and the mythology. It's a whole new universe.



So many original characters took me some time to get used to, but I feel like I know them now. They're rich, round, dynamic characters and I like that. It is tricky, but you've pulled it off.



And you write the Scoobies exactly as they should always have been written.



I wasn't sure how the whole AU Tara thing was going to go and I was prepared to be disappointed. I didn't like the idea that she might have to struggle to develop feelings for Willow. I'm glad I didn't give up on your story, though, because you've brought them together in a totally organic way, and it's clear that it matters not that this Tara isn't exactly the same Tara Willow originally met - she's still Tara.



Which brings me to my next point: I love that you're letting them grow and change as individuals, and as a couple. Each of them is changed by her experiences both inside and outside the relationship. You're not afraid to take them to new places and I like that. Especially so, because it's obvious that you understand what it is about each of them that makes them who they are; you know what makes Willow Willow and what makes Tara Tara. So you can allow them to grow, while keeping them true to their essential natures. This is especially evident in your writing of Tara.



I can see a lifetime of possible adventures for W/T and everyone else in your creation here. This is an excellent story and I thank you for it. I'm definitely looking forward to more.



Happy holidays, too.

Don't lick my EYE!---Margaret Cho

maudmac
 

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