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Re: Brava

Postby Tempest Duer » Wed Dec 10, 2003 6:34 pm

Everyone- I don't know myself why Willow woke up naked. The story just wrote itself like that. Tara probably undressed her to put her in bed, because Willow has no pajamas, and no clothes other than what she came to the Hellmouth in.



michellesflute: Yay! My first ever :drool !



AntigoneUnbound: It's not every day I get a really big-name fanfic writer in here telling my how good my stuff is. :blush I'm glad you enjoy my playing around with words, as that's what I like so much about writing.



Grimmy: I concur. As for Willow's alertness, she usually is, but Tara sort of turned everything upside down... after all, nobody else would dare disobey Tara. :wink



bluewillowwitch: There's just no pleasing you guys! I give you naughtiness even and you still want more! I wonder why that is. :hmm Oh, well. Update will come relatively soon.



sabina: Wow, a :thud ? You are too kind to me!



You'll find out about Tara's issues soon enough. In the mean time... I guess I really am :devilish

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

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Re: Brava

Postby TaraBaby77 » Wed Dec 10, 2003 6:56 pm

WOW!!!........Uh, yeah, WOW!!! ~~thinking thinking thinking~~ WOW!!! Did I mention the whole 'WOW' factor??? Once again, another GREAT update!!! Question, I'm not sure if I told you about how WOW that update was??? If not, well I thought it was a WOW, in my book... great stuff!!! =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'


"It's about two people,
regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and
respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: Brava

Postby onyxsundrops » Wed Dec 10, 2003 8:10 pm

Okay, I'm late... nothing new:) Very nice update/story! And well *giggles* that scene was:blush



Onyx:peace

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Re: Brava

Postby Tempest Duer » Wed Dec 10, 2003 8:11 pm

Thanks, dude. I'm glad it meets your approval.

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

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Re: Brava

Postby TaraBaby77 » Tue Dec 16, 2003 2:18 am

:whistle I was strolling through the neighbor hood seeing if there where any updates, heehee. So, you got any stashed around somewhere. Or maybe you can post it as kinda like a Christmas present, :D . I was just checkin'. Hope to see more, =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'


"It's about two people,
regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and
respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: Brava

Postby Tempest Duer » Thu Dec 25, 2003 11:53 pm

Sorry it's been so long, Aaron! Life's been bloody insane lately. I have written an update, but the last two times I tried to type it up, my computer froze and lost my data. I'll try again tomorrow and hope it works this time...

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

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Re: Brava

Postby TaraBaby77 » Fri Dec 26, 2003 12:11 am

No biggie, :D . When ever you get an update posted, I will be here waiting, patiently. =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'


"It's about two people,
regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and
respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: Brava

Postby Tempest Duer » Mon Dec 29, 2003 9:55 pm

Aaron, everybody owes this update to you, because otherwise I never would have gotten off my lazy butt to try typing this again. So everybody, this update is dedicated to everbody's favorite soldier boy.



Chapter 14



Tara left, and returned soon with my coat (and all of its coaty goodness), a clean pair of jeans and a t-shirt. I dressed quickly, and instantly felt more like myself again. The comfortihng weight of the reinfoced fabric had always helped me feel safe--especially when it stopped bullets.



Tara had gotten her hands on some delightfully form-fitting jeans and a tailored leather jacket. I worried for a moment that she'd gotten into trouble obtaining them, but I really wasn't going to complain.



So instead of asking her where she'd gotten them, I just grinned approvingly. "Looking lovely, Miss Maclay."



She gave me a mock curtsey. "Why thank you Miss Rosenberg. You're quite dashing yourself."



I gave her a shallow bow and tipped an imaginary hat. "I tell you only what I see, my dear."



"There's something missing though." She frowned and stroked her chin, like an artist surveying her work or maybe a business contractor. "You need something to complete your... image, to make you a little more heroic-looking."



"I'm not supposed to be heroic, I'm supposed to be detectivey!" I shoved my hands in my pockets, grateful for their presence, and pouted. "I'm an investigator."



"Well, you're a hero now," said Tara, and that was that. "With a flourish, she produced a dark grey fedora from out of nowhere.



"How do you do that?"



"Do what?"



"Make things appear from out of nowhere. I never mastered it."



"Oh, that." she winked. "Magic."



I balanced it rakishly on my head and put on my best "badass" expression, but it soon dissolved into a big goofy grin. "Thank you so much, Tara. I love it. I've always wanted a fedora."



"I'm glad you like it. Much as I'd love to watch you pose all day, darling, we do have business to attend to." She kissed me on the cheek. "Come on, let's get going before Giles decides to throw us out for overstaying our welcome."



"Right." I removed my hands from my pockets and held her hand in mine. "But there is one plus--now that just about everyone knows I'm here, I should be able to use my powers without attracting too much attention."



"What do you plan to use your powers for?"



"Finding a solution." I put the hand that wasn't holding Tara's back into my pocket, not noticing at the time that I had serious hand-in-pocket issues that I'm sure Freud would have had a field day with. "We need a plan, but to make a plan we need information, which we don't have and need to get, like fast, and oh my god I just said 'like' without comparing things."



"Willow? How do we get this information that we need so badly?"



"I don't know, but it's sure as hell not by standing here. Let's go to the bar, I need a drink."



Tara just sighed at that, but she led my back to the bar. We sat together on stools at the far end. Giles was there in an instant.



"Willow, you've recovered remarkably."



"Yeah," I said. "I really have, haven't I? Personally, I think it's the influence of the lovely Miss Maclay here. If it weren't for her I'd probably still be sick in bed, bemoaning my miserable fate."



"Well, you are a genius at bemoaning your miserable fate," said Giles a bit dryly. "Particularly when you've had too much to drink."



"I'm going to pretend you didn't say that, Giles."



"Of course, of course. So do you know what you're going to do now that you've found this lovely young woman?" He handed my my namesake drink and turned to Tara. "What'll you have."



"Scotch and soda."



I arched an eyebrow, which I'm told is a very cute thing to do. "I didn't know you drank, Tara."



Giles brought Tara the scotch in a suspiciously clean-looking glass. She gulped back a mouthful, gagged, and wiped her mouth with the back of her hand. "I don't."



"Why are you starting now? It's not a very good habit to get into, you know." I took a swallow of my own drink.



"I don't plan on making a habit of it. But I wasn't born here, Willow. I can only take so much weirdness."



"Willow," said Giles testily, "What are you going to do?"



I smoothed a stray wisp of Tara's hair. "Well, I've fallen in love with Tara, and we're going to stay here and save the world. After that, I think I'll kill her father and brother on general principles."



Giles removed his glassses and cleaned the lenses. "Dear me."



I turned back to Tara. "That is, if you don't mind."



She didn't answer, just shook her head, took a swig of scotch and gagged again. "I hate this stuff." She took another swallow.



Giles put his glasses back on. "Well, at least you have a plan."



"Assuming that saving the world won't be any trouble, then yes, I have a plan." I took another swallow, as if it would help me. "What am I going to do? I don't know how to save a world, Giles, I'm no hero."



"There comes a time in each life when we must become more than what we are," Tara mumbled into her glass.



Giles whisked what was left of the scotch away, which admittedly wasn't much. "You're absolutely right, but that seems to be the first sign that you're getting a bit tipsy, so no more for you."



Tara didn't protest.



"Giles, how do I go about being a hero? Doesn't Buffy tell you what she does over drinks or something like that?"



"Not often, but what I have heard seems to be little more than killing the right people at the right time."



"So there's nothing on fighting faceless entities, then."



"Not that I'm aware of."



"Faith," Tara mumbled.



Giles and I both stared at her. "What?"



"Faith," she said again, a bit more clearly now. "She's seen more than Buffy ever will."



I considered for a moment. I really didn't want to see Faith. I didn't want to have to face her and admit that she'd been right about Tara and me. But at this point, I needed all the help I could get.



"All right." I stood up carefully. "Let's talk to Faith."

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

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Re: Brava

Postby michellesflute » Tue Dec 30, 2003 6:39 am

A big THANKS to Aaron!! So, American soldiers are good for something after all. :D

Sorry, bad joke. Don't :smash me, please!!

:peace



The update was great, you made my day!! :dance

I love Willows plan, I like the part where she kills Taras father and brother on general principles the best, lol! Go Willow!

Now I can't wait for the talk with Faith. I always love interaction between Faith and Willow!



Pleeeease, don't let us wait too long for the next update :pray !



Wie soll ich meine Seele halten, dass sie nicht an Deine rührt... - Rilke

How can I keep my soul in me, so that it doesn't touch your soul...

michellesflute
 


Re: Chapter 14

Postby Betinha » Tue Dec 30, 2003 5:57 pm

All together now: Thank you Aaron!!



And thank you TD for listening to Aaron! Great update! I don't know if I've mentioned this but I'm enjoying bartender Giles (though I hope he's given up on the tweed!!). And drunk Tara... this could get interesting! :p



Hope we'll be seeing some more soon.

(Hey, Aaron. Do you think you can work your charms again?;) )



Take care

Betinha

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Re: Chapter 14

Postby Tempest Duer » Tue Dec 30, 2003 10:06 pm

michellesflute: Hey, it's the government that sucks, not the soldiers. And I just had to have the Maclay men die. It wouldn't sit well with my muse to do anything else.



Betinha: I think he's given up on the tweed, but it's really up to you guys. That's why I never bothered to describe his wardrobe. Hmm... maybe I'll give him a beret.



Guys, thanks again for being so supportive. I've got about half of the next chapter done so far... it should be done soon.

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

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Re: Chapter 14

Postby Grimlock72 » Wed Dec 31, 2003 9:59 am

Well I do like miss Rosenberg's principles :-)



I still find it hard to plan for something that was only very vaguely alluded to by the brother-person... how on earth do you plan for something you know nothing about ? ?Assuming there even IS something to plan for of course, still not much with the trusting of the source of that bit of info... nope.



Heh, loved how Willow still is very much Willow-like even when she plays a hard-boiled detective :) As in the 'I used like' remark and such.. :lol



Happy new-year !! :wave



Grimmy

--
"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

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Re: Chapter 14

Postby Tempest Duer » Thu Jan 01, 2004 2:17 am

Happy new year to you too, Grimmy. I think we're all going to get sick of the saving the world idea and get into some real issues. Sort of. Yeah.



And I'm actually incredibly flattered that everyone thinks I write such great Willow, because I've never seen an episode of BtVS in my life.

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

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Re: Chapter 14

Postby sabina » Thu Jan 01, 2004 4:52 pm

Hi there :wave



I'm a little late, but I thought that it was better to reply late than never right? :lol



I LMAO when I was reading W/T conversation with Giles, the part about Buffy discussing (or not) her heroic actions over a drink cracked me up... :lol



More? :bounce




"I know I was born and I know that I'll die.

The in between is mine.

I am mine!" - Pearl Jam

sabina
 


Re: Chapter 14

Postby Tempest Duer » Thu Jan 01, 2004 5:23 pm

I got a bouncy smiley? I got a bouncy smiley! Yay for bouncy smileys! Glad you liked it, Sabina. More soon, really!

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

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Re: Chapter 14

Postby TaraBaby77 » Fri Jan 02, 2004 8:57 pm

Hey TD -



I am so sorry for not reading this sooner. I am sooooo soooo glad to see any update and what an update it is!!! Willow's plan..... GENIUS!!! Save the world and if there is still time in the day, take care of Tara's father and brother. All in a days work. Anyway, once again, a great update. So, do you forgive me??? If you want, after i get on the plane in a few hours, I will go back and read the whole fic again and then give a 'To-this-point' review.... Anyhoo, I have to go and catch my plane. Thanks for updating this fic, just for me. Hope to see more soon. And, now that I am on my way home, I will have all 4 of my computers to keep an eye out. Great stuff. =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'


"It's about two people,
regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and
respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: Chapter 14

Postby Tempest Duer » Fri Jan 02, 2004 9:12 pm

Of course I forgive you, doofus! I wouldn't have dedicated the chapter to you if I wasn't prepared to cut you a little slack. You're a cool dude, after all. I'm also glad that you approve of Willow's plan.

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

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Re: Chapter 14

Postby bluewillowwitch » Sun Jan 04, 2004 6:31 pm

:bigwave TD :flower ,

I love this fic! :clap :bow So :tara takes to the drink huh? :hmm That is not a good thing. :willow is going to look for Faith to learn how to save the world. :lol This should be fun! Can't wait to :read more. Update soon, please? :pray :pray :pray :pray





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos



"I'm here with out you baby/But your still with me in my dreams/And tonight girl, there's only you and me."--3 Doors Down-Here Without You----Mine and My Baby's song.

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Re: Chapter 14

Postby Tempest Duer » Tue Jan 06, 2004 10:38 pm

bluewillowwitch- Hmm... you may be right. She's not much of a drinker though, and I think she'll stay with what she said, and not get into the habit of drinking. After all, with what it does to Willow, with her high tolerance...



Will be updated tomorrow.

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

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goodstuff!

Postby nika » Tue Jan 06, 2004 11:07 pm

Hey Tempest:bigwave This is one hell of a story, pardon the bad pun:p I just love it and I'm really looking forward to an update.

nika
 


Re: goodstuff!

Postby Tempest Duer » Wed Jan 07, 2004 7:53 pm

nika: Glad you're having fun, I'm hooked on puns so it's no trouble. Here's the update.



Chapter 15: Fangs



We left the Bronze without finishing my drink, and stood together in the alley, beneath the sputtering neon sign. Frost had coated the stones of the alley floor, the walls, and the Bronze's heavy metal doors. Only the sign remained untouched.



Tara shivered. "Is it winter already? It wasn't this cold when I arrived."



I shook my head. "There aren't seasons here, or weather. It's too close to Hell for that. Instead, it sort of has... attitudes. Or moods. If tht makes any sense. So while there aren't any seasons, the Hellmouth is definitely in a wintery mood."



"Why's it in a wintery mood now, of all times?"



It was my turn to shiver. "I don't know."



We began to walk, hoping to keep warm, but the cold grew sharper, cutting even through my coat.



Suddenly, Tara stopped. "W-Willow? I think w-we're..."



"Being followed?" I pulled her to me, trying to warm her. "Yes, I see what you mean. You're right of course. I don't like this, Tara. I don't like this at all."



We turned slowly toward the sudden clicking sound of shoes on stone. Four men were walking towards us. Four men in long, white robes, with heavy white hoods that shadowed their faces. Four men who really weren't men at all.



"The White Fangs." I tried to keep the naked norror out of my voice. "Nobody's eve seen under those hoods... at least, nobody who's lived to tell of it." I put my hand on Tara's shoulder. "Run, Tara. I'll hold them off."



Tara said nothing. Her face was pale and her hands shook. She shook her head and grabbed my hand. We faced the Fangs together, shaking in our clothes as the menacing click-click of the white shoes beneath white robes on the white-frosted flagstones of the alley came nearer and nearer.



I released Tara's hand and sprinted toward the four Fangs, screaming a battle cry much, much older than myself. My hands became fists without my thinking about it and they struck out so quickly they only registered to my eyes as blurs.



The robes billowed as I hit them, but quickly snapped cack to their smooth, unconcerned rippling. I summoned up my magic and lashed out with it. The robes of the Fangs caught fire.



A high-pitched keening sound filled the alley. The Fangs wre crying out in rage, and... pain. I could still hurt them, that was good. But then they reached inside their burning robes and pulled out slender silver sickles and descending on my, the blades gleaming in the light of the fires.



They wouldn't die. They couldn't really die, could they? They weren't even really alive, they were murder personified, given the guise of men. They were the Authorities' special forces, and even the legendary Red Rosenberg was no match for them.



A metallic whistle cut through the air and one of the Fangs collapsed, its robes tearing, splitting and finally coming to rest on the cold ground in a pile of charred fabric and thick black blood. If I hadn't been in immediate danger, I'd have wondered where the blood came from, since they clearly didn't have flesh.



The blood splattered and steamed on the frosty ground, glowing like, well... like something black glows, which means it shouldn't, and this language doesn't have any words to describe it. A small booted foot splashed in the puddle, and the remaining three Fangs went the same way.



Faith stood in front of us, holding an enormous axe dripping with the eerie black blood. "Hi there, Red. How ya doin'?"



"Oh, scared shitless," I said drolly, "but otherwise great. How are you?"



"Been better." Faith wrinkled her nose as she looked at the blood dripping thickly from her axe. "This stuff's a real bitch to clean off, you know."



"Actually, I wouldn't, but it doesn't matter. Clearly you're dealt with the Fangs before. Much as I hate to admit it, Faith, you have yet to cease impressing me."



Faith winked. "I used to be Public Enemy Number Two, Red." She winked. "Right after you."



"Of course."



"I've dealt with the Fangs before, and I know you have too. Hell, I'd even bet money on it, if I had any." She pulled a tattered piece of cloth from her pocket and began to clean the blade. "Don't bother lying to me, I'll be able to tell."



I interlaced my fingers with Tara's and stared at my feet. "Obviously I've lost my touch. They'd have gotten us if you hadn't shown up. I guess I should thank you."



Faith shook her head. "Don't thank me."



Tara let go of my hand and took a step forward. "Y-you did it. You told them. You s-sent them after us."



I gave Faith my best hard look, which is pretty damn hard if I do say so myself. "I should have known better than to think for a second that I could trust you."



"You can trust me. Most of the time, it would be a stupid thing to do, but according to B you've done a lot of stupid stuff in your time. And that was just from before we met.



"I've got my own way to go and my own shit to take care of Red, but if helping you is convenient I'll do it. But I so do hate to be in anyone's debt."



"So if you arranged this to make me cash in my favor, why'd you wait so long to finish them off?"



Tara retreated to my side. "I w-was wondering that m-myself."



Faith shrugged, tossed the bloody rag to the ground and shouldered her axe. "Dunno. Guess I wanted to see if you still had it."



"Well, you have your answer. We need your help now, Faith, so you wouldn't have owed me a favor after this anyway."



"The great legend Red Rosenberg needs help from little old me?" Faith smirked. "That's kind of funny when you think about it."



"Didn't know you thought about anything."



"Funny, Red. Real funny. What do you want?"



"Maybe you can tell me how the fuck I'm supposed to save the world when I have no idea what it needs to be saved from."



Faith's smirk twisted into a fully fledged sneer. "It's your own fault for coming back, Red, so you might as well admit that to yourself. If you'd stayed away none of this would be happening. But at least you've got your girl there. Quite a hottie, don't ya know... fucked her good, I assume? Want me to take her off your hands?"



I felt my powers flare up of their own accord, which is what happens when I'm about to lose my temper--suddenly and violently and all over the place. "No and no."



She didn't seem to notice my rising fury, or if she did, it didn't faze her. "Thought so. She's a virgin, ain't she, from the looks of her. You've always had a thing for experienced women, Red. Want me to break her in for you?"



I would have lashed out, but I found I couldn't reach my power.



Tara stepped toward Faith, her normally gentle eyes, flashing with uncharacteristic anger. "I don't think so, Faith. I really don't." She took another step forward.



Faith fell back a step. "Easy blondie, I was only kidding!"



Tara took another step, and Faith fell back another. "I'm not interested in excuses, and I'm not interested in lies. You'll tell Willow what she needs to do, then you'll leave. Is that clear?"



"Okay, okay."



"I trust you won't be breaking in any other inexperienced girls." Sparks were crackling and flying around Tara's body and flying from her eyes. "I've neer been keen on predators."



Faith was frozen. Her eyes bugged out and her jaw hung slack. It didn't do much for her skanky glamor. "Go to the Maze. You'll learn all I could tell you and a shitload more."



Tara's sparks were gone in an instant, and Faith sprinted off into the night.

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

Edited by: Tempest Duer at: 1/8/04 4:03 pm
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Re: goodstuff!

Postby sabina » Thu Jan 08, 2004 5:25 pm

Hi there :wave



Great update :wave



I just love it when Tara gets all large with the butch protecting Willow :wink

Hum... Well actually I love it when either one of them gets all large with the butch protecting the other :grin



I really dislike Faith but at least she was useful and gave those two girls a lead... I'm curious to see what will happen next.



More please? :pray




"I know I was born and I know that I'll die.

The in between is mine.

I am mine!" - Pearl Jam

sabina
 


Re: goodstuff!

Postby Tempest Duer » Thu Jan 08, 2004 6:09 pm

sabina: Heh, I liked the idea of large with the butch Tara as well.



I actually like Faith as a character, but she's done some seriously shitty stuff in her time, and I felt the need to reflect that, at least a little. Faith will proceed to be bitchy for a while, I think, but I'm not totally sure. Oh well, I'll think of something. I always do.

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

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Re: goodstuff!

Postby TaraBaby77 » Fri Jan 09, 2004 12:33 pm

TD -



I loved that update!!! I know that this feedback is a little late... and I am sorry. But, what great update. And the Tara stepping toward Faith, yeah, I loved that. And crackling even made it better. Anyway, love the update and can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work, TD. =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'


"It's about two people,
regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and
respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: goodstuff!

Postby Grimlock72 » Sat Jan 10, 2004 8:54 am

Hmmm... got to wonder where Tara's sudden power-surge came from.. she might consider asking Willow next time, heh :) . That's assuming that those pretty lights surrounding Tara indicate power at all, could be a mere illusion trick ;-). In any case it is good to see Tara (assuming it was Tara doing that) stand up for herself.



Besides, it wouldn't have been sooo bad to see Faith reduced to a neat pile-of-ash : -->>: . Still not sure I get her reasoning for sending evil hooded thingies to Willow and Tara (nor how Tara guessed it that fast). Why was Willow in danger from 4 hooded hoodlums anyway ? If Faith could kill them that easily it should have been a piece of cake for Willow, assuming you would have kept her distance of course :-)



It's not as if they need Faith to tell them to look around at the former-maze-site, thats an easy thing to guess yourself. But there's no maze anymore... what can be learned from maze-pieces ????



Given the overal bad attitude of most hellmouth inhabitants I would have left the damned place, let them sort out their own mess/maze :) . Doing so will at least force Steel Inc. to tell Willow what they want her to do, being vague won't help safe the world you know.



Grimmy

--
"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Edited by: Grimlock72 at: 1/10/04 8:29 am
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Re: goodstuff!

Postby Karmah » Sat Jan 10, 2004 12:52 pm

Hey I loved the update and wow scared of Tara

that rocked looking forward to more soon

arron :kitty



What lies behind us, and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us.

~ by Ralph Waldo Emerson ~

Karmah
 


Re: goodstuff!

Postby Tempest Duer » Sat Jan 10, 2004 11:33 pm

Aaron- hey, it's all good. I'm glad you enjoyed.



Grimmy- Willow's all out of shape. She's certainly not what she used to be, but perhaps the biggest issue is that she's afraid of the Fangs, and that gave them an extra edge.



Basically, Faith's reasoning was this: I owe Red a favor. I don't like being in debt. So I'll send the Fangs after her, then take care of them so I owe her nothing.



Karmah- Faith sent the Fangs to attack Willow. Anybody would be right to be afraid of Tara when Willow's in danger.

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

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Re: goodstuff!

Postby Grimlock72 » Sun Jan 11, 2004 6:29 am

I wonder what Tara herself thinks of how she handled Faith. It's not like she usually is all aggresive and stuff :)



(though such behaviour is sorely needed around Faith, heh)



Even though Willow had indeed been in danger due to Faith, I got the feeling Tara was mostly responding to Faith taunting Willow. One can wonder if it's actually smart to taunt Willow of course :lol



Grimmy

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"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

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Re: goodstuff!

Postby Tempest Duer » Tue Jan 13, 2004 10:27 pm

Actually Grimmy, it's neither of those things. I should have the next chapter up soon, and that will explain what exactly pissed Tara off so much.

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

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Re: goodstuff!

Postby bluewillowwitch » Sun Jan 18, 2004 10:42 am

:bigwave TD :flower ,

I love the fic! :clap :bow Dude, :tara was pissed. It was like she took her anger and :willow 's on top of that. :glasses Faith is very :gnome . Can't wait to :read more. Update soon, please? :pray :pray :pray :pray





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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