Okay, I've seen the revised
Birds of Prey pilot now. It's mostly the same thing I saw before, but there are a few significant differences.
1) The narration by Alfred the butler at the beginning is new. In the original version, the same sequence played out with no narration at all, except for a TV news reporter who gave us bits of information here and there. I guess the producers were worried that the sequence was too confusing or something. I didn't think it was, but that might be just me.
2) The scene with Barbara and the boyfriend is completely new. In the original version, Barbara was breaking up with him, not meeting him for the first time. It's the same actor playing the boyfriend, though.
3) The first scene between Helena and Harlie has a lot more exposition than it did before. Also, Mia Sara is
a lot better as Harlie. Sherilyn Fenn seemed awkward and reserved by comparison. Mia plays the role with some of the same animation (no pun intended) that the cartoon Harlie had.
4) An entire argument between Barbara and Helena has been cut. It took place when Helena got back from the apartment where she met Detective Reese, and in my initial review I described it this way:
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Helena returns to the clock tower. Barbara is upset by Helena's refusal to keep her identity secret - Helena won't even wear a mask. "You want me to dress like my parents," says Helena. "Being a crime fighter doesn't mean I have to be a fashion casualty." Helena thinks a costume is too conspicuous, which makes Barbara question the outfit Helena has on. "It's trendy," says Helena. "I could go clubbing in it." Again with the argument about their lives as crime fighters. "You sought him out and convinced him to train you," says Helena. "You chose your mentor. I don't even know if I want to be in the family business." Barbara counters that being stuck in the wheelchair isn't what she wants, but she stays because it's who she is. She says the Helena can leave, but sooner or later she'll be back, too, because it's who she is.
The interesting thing is that they kept the subsequent punch line, when the bad guy compliments Helena on her outfit and she tells him she's going dancing later. That was a direct reference back to the argument that is now missing. I'd read somewhere that the producers didn't want to make Barbara and Helena as antagonistic as the original pilot had depicted them, but I liked the argument and was disappointed that it had been removed.
Other than that, the only differences were that a few lines had been snipped here and there. Nothing significant, but because I'd heard them before I noticed they were missing. I don't think they detracted from the overall story, though.
It'll be interesting to see what happens next week. Judging from the previews, it looks like they've changed the Huntress costume already.
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