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Dance Of The Salamander

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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby jixer » Thu Nov 17, 2005 12:53 pm

Hello Kittens-


The dreaded work stretch bellows its challenge in the distance and I must face this beast for my wallet is too thin. Which is one reason the next update is a bit shorter than usual. At least I have the solace of Kitten feedback!

Darth Pacula- I'm glad to see you think I have a talent for nerd bickering! Your point about Xander is well taken. ME treated emotional things in the failing seasons as a comic book (not graphic novel, I mean comic book) with live two dimensional figures. I'm trying to show a bit more, and I think losing Willow would hurt Xander more than anyone but Tara.

Tara's mother is one of those things I've always wondered about. I think AntigoneUnbound's GSaA may be the best example of the Scoobies as family in all of fanfiction. It is superb and I recommend if any Kitten hasn't read it they should, like right now! Here though I travel a darker path, which is darn near inevitable given the @#*&# that was Season 6. I hope it will make some sense before the end.

Thanks for keeping up with this bumpy ride, Paul! And enjoy the good Doctor :)



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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby jixer » Thu Nov 17, 2005 12:56 pm

Chapter Five









Buffy gave a start as Tara lifted her head off the table and snarled “Back off!” at someone or something unseen. Buffy looked around quickly but no threat materialized.

“Sorry,” Tara sighed. “The voices were trying to get clingy.”

“Voices?” Buffy asked worriedly.

“The voices in that place he has Willow trapped in,” Tara said tiredly. “The cells are full of-of w-what used to be people.”

“Tara,” Buffy said carefully. “I don’t think you should go back in there.”

“Willow said the same thing,” Tara replied with a wan smile.

“See?” Buffy said a bit more brightly. “Not that either of us worry, you understand.”

“Of course,” Tara answered wryly. “You’re both so callous I can hardly stand it.”

“That’s me,” Buffy nodded.

Before Tara could assay her response there was a shower of false sparks and Betty appeared almost vibrating in her excitement.

“Terribly sorry about the sparks,” Betty said quickly. “But I’ve got a name!”


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“There’s another one over there!” a voice called out nearby. Anya opened her eyes and saw the after-images of the lightning. She took a deep breath and tried to stand up. With the help of the tree behind her she could lean upright. Anya could barely make out figures on the periphery of her vision. She grasped her amulet. It felt pitted and rough.

“Home,” she muttered and thought of her apartment.

The amulet felt hot as Anya gripped it tightly. For a few seconds the world swirled away, but it didn’t feel right. It felt more like flight than the smoothness of teleporting. Then Anya felt the amulet snap in two in her grip. The world snapped back into focus and she saw she was twenty feet over a well tended backyard with a pool. Just before she took a breath and hit the water she thought she saw movement.

Then nothing else mattered besides getting to the surface. Dozens of small cuts and abrasions told her the water had too much chlorine, and her lungs felt like bursting through the burning of her chest by the time she broke the surface. She tried to swim but the cost was too great for her body. After forever she got to the side of the pool. She tried to pull herself up but felt her grip slipping. I’m going to drown in a swimming pool! she thought helplessly. With a desperate hope she grasped her broken amulet and felt a touch of warmth.

“Please!” she sobbed. “D’Hoffryn! Help me!”


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“That’s two amulets she’s managed to destroy,” D’Hoffryn said peevishly. “I have to admit the resources we went through to get her back might have been used better elsewhere.”

“We’ve all had favorites that just didn’t pan out,” another senior Vengeance demon said with a sympathetic tone.

“Quite so,” D’Hoffryn sighed as he collapsed the viewing spell. “On to more important things. Is the Orb committee report ready?”


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Anya felt her amulet’s heat fade almost instantly. The crystal part of the talisman crumbled under her hands.

“NO!” she screamed. Her grip slipped and she almost took in a breath of chlorinated water. “Help! Anybody!”

There was a bark followed by a loud whine. Anya looked up to see the massive head of a Rottweiller looking down at her with a tilt to its head. Then the massive dog braced and lowereded it’s head and neck, showing an oversized collar. Anya didn’t question her fortune, she just grabbed the collar and held on with both hands with the last of her strength as the dog walked gently to the shallow end of the pool. There Anya realized the normal steps were a ramp. The dog pulled her until her head was entirely clear of the water.

“Good dog,” she said with a cough.


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“Miss Morgan?”

Lilah turned to see one of the junior office staff holding a form.

“What is it?” Lilah asked in a tone that left no doubt time was money and if hers was wasted those that were responsible would need skin grafts.

“It’s just that with your team being scheduled to be here all night there’s, ah, some details that, um...” the frumpy looking man struggled to find the right words. Lilah saw the clipboard in the office manager’s hands.

“I’ll sign for the overtime for the legal support,” Lilah said quickly.

“And the parking?” the staffer asked quickly.

“Very well,” fumed the lawyer.

Lilah signed the forms and went looking for her project’s team leaders.


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“A name?” Tara said hopefully.

“Yes,” Betty replied. “But some of the details in the case were kept out.”

“So it may not be our magic vulture?” Buffy asked.

“I believe it is, but without speaking his name we can only check with the most low key of magics,” Betty explained. “Lest he detect our efforts and ...”

“Get rid of the evidence,” Tara said as her face grew hard.

“Can you do this?” Buffy asked Tara directly.

“I think so,” Tara replied. “It’s going to take some time and someone else will have to watch the results.”

“I think this is more important than Passions,” Buffy said. “Even if it is sweeps week.”

“Proceed carefully, Tara” Betty answered.

“Buffy, do you have any money?” Tara asked with an embarrassed frown. “I’m going to need a cut crystal and I’ve spent everything on the herbs.”

“I’m good for it,” Betty said quickly. “Triple refined gold has a way of soothing shopkeepers.”

“I can see why salamanders are such a high demand item,” Buffy said as a golden light flared on the counter and a small oval of gold appeared.

“Believe me, most of the time I’d rather have Visa,” Betty sighed. “You try shopping on e-Bay without plastic.”

“No thanks!” Buffy replied quickly.

“I’m ready,” Tara said taking the faceted crystal ball and hanging it in the sunshine.

“This is the name on the docket in New Haven,” Betty said as she wrote the name in the air with flames.

Tara looked at the name and then the many colored lights in the shop. “I follow this name like I follow the colors the prism has released. Let me see.”

In the Magic Box a sepia toned picture flickered into existence.


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“I swear that old goat is going to live forever!” Gavin snarled.

“Tell me all about it,” the lanky young man across from Gavin said.

Never a strong drinker, of late Gavin had been getting drunk often enough to interfere with his final year of law school. Bathtub gin and good hooch both were easy enough to find on campus. He looked at Douglas Ambrose Wilson, his old acquaintance from prep school with less caution than usual. It was common knowledge that Wilson’s moral compass had no needle.

“I just wish the old goat would die already!” Gavin snapped.

“Let’s talk,” the other young man said easily.


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“Look, Wilson,” the scion to a banking empire said worriedly. “I’m in a bind.”

“And you need a special medical consultant?” Douglas said enjoying both the fine cigar and smuggled cognac.

“It’s Lexie,” the monied young man said in a rush. “She was more than willing to give me a rousing night out before my wedding but now the bitch claims she’s pregnant! If Alice’s family gets even a hint of this I’ll be ruined!”

“Give your doxie this,” Wilson said handing over a mall phial with a pill in it. “Luckily for you it dissolves in alcohol.”

“Then what?”

“You call me when your little chick comes down with appendicitis.”


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“I’m sorry,” Wilson smiled. “The damage was too great.”

“What if someone finds out?” the harried looking youngster whispered.

“All surgical residents lose a few,” Wilson shrugged. “And there won’t be any paperwork or autopsy findings that will come back to embarrass you.”

“What do you mean?”

“She lied. She wasn’t pregnant.”

“Blackmail?” the banking heir bristled. “She got what she deserved then!”


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“You’re sure this won’t hurt the baby, doctor?” the girl on the table asked with thickly accented English.

“Everything will be just fine,” Douglas Wilson smiled.

How could a prig as stiff as Nelson get involved with such an obviously low class foreign cow? Wilson asked as he watched the girl sink into oblivion. What a pity. She’s got good legs and great tits.


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Detective Frank Jones felt his stomach clench as the well dressed defendant came into the courtroom to hear he was being stripped of his medical license.

He’s a murderer! Jones wanted to shout. Fry his well connected ass!

But that would not happen. Too many powerful people would be called to testify. Too many discreet messages had come down to the chief and Jones had been assigned to the Olson robbery. The detective knew many of his files on this case were going to be missing forever. Officially he had no reason to be here. Across the way four residents who had come forward ready to testify about the conduct of a colleague they had no use for looked as angry as Jones felt. An older doctor with them looked on sorrowfully. Jones saw the court clerk approach them.

“Doctor Pettigrew?” the clerk asked.

“Yes,” the old man answered.

“The judge says he’s quite sure,” the clerk said respectfully. “You and your young men will not be needed.”

“Jones!” came a harsh whisper behind the detective. “What are you doing here!”

“Just early for testimony in the Browne case,” Jones said quickly.

“Bullshit!” hissed the chief of police. “Get out of here and get back to robbery detail now!”

As the detective turned on his heel he could here the clerk call out the next case.

“People of Connecticut versus Douglas Ambrose Wilson.”


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“I’ll be damned!” Wilson said watching the captain of the S.S. Virginia Palmer convulse in agony. “It worked!”

“I told you it would,” the deck-hand beside him said with a wolfish smile. “I don’t know much magic but the mojo I got is plumb wicked.”

In front of them the captain begged silently for relief.

“Now the doc here is going to tell everyone you came down with the influenza, unnerstand?” the sailor said coldly. “You keep your nose out of the special cargo or I’ll make you break your own back!”

With that the two men left the captain’s cabin. Douglas Wilson looked at the grizzled man beside him.

“Can you teach me to do that?” Wilson asked hopefully.

“Tired of being a ship’s doctor on this rustbucket?” the sailor grinned.

“I hate this ship, I hate the sea, and I hate having to be here,” Douglas said with conviction.

“Let’s discuss this over a couple of blondes,” the seaman laughed. “After all I have to check the cargo!”


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Douglas watched the girl’s eyes glaze over as the magic he’d given her hit her system.

“Perfect, you pervert,” a slinky woman of a certain age purred behind him.

“Takes one to know one,” Wilson smiled. “Now I tie her magic to me?”

“Just like I showed you,” Greta Von Manstein replied.


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“That’s her!” Betty hissed as her skin flared to bright orange. “May she freeze in an icy Hell! We have confirmation, Miss Maclay.”


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“What is it, Rack?” Greta asked as the bespelled girl simply slumped down and went to sleep.

“Sorry, I just can’t get it!” Wilson said with a exasperated sigh. “Greta, honey, I’m sorry! I just do better with written instructions.”

“It would be dangerous,” the cold eyed woman replied.

“I’ll never have enough power for the Youth Spell at this rate,” he said dejectedly. “Maybe you should just do it yourself.”

“I can’t!” the woman snapped. “Very well, but don’t say I have not warned you!”

The sorceress turned and took a key out of thin air. Then she unlocked a plain black wood box and took out a book.


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“Tara!” Buffy shouted as she gently shook the witch. “Let it go!”

“Whaaa?” Tara blinked.

“We’ve told you we had confirmation,” Betty said firmly. “You wouldn’t let go of the spell. We had to use physical interaction.”

“Which has some potential drawbacks, like sudden frog-hood for the interactee,” Buffy said with a brightness Tara knew was covering worry.

“S-S-Sorry,” Tara said sitting heavily on one of the chairs. Then she smiled at Buffy. “Don’t worry, I’d never turn you into a frog. After she got done screaming Willow would never speak to me again-”

Then Buffy was beside Tara holding onto the young woman as tears overtook the witch. Behind them Betty just shook her head sadly.


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“Danny,” Lilah said with a tight smile. “Just the person I wanted to see. Come with me.”

The young mage made a quick list of things Lilah Morgan might know about and didn’t come up with anything fatal. Even so he entered her office with no little trepidation. His eyebrows arched when the attractive woman pricked her thumb and placed a drop of blood on a small stone on her desk.

“Now that we won’t be overheard,” she said tersely. “Report.”

“It’s working,” Danny grinned. “They all think I’m too young to understand.”

“Very good,” Lilah said quickly. “How far along are we really?”

“They’ve got everything ready,” the young mage said preening. “The forensic magic spells show the flash was the book binding to Maclay. No one knows why it was so bright and powerful but there’s some speculation our little Wiccan actually managed to find a real talisman that reacted to the book’s power.”

“Interesting,” Lilah said as she wrote a note to herself:

Maclay power level?

“Go on.”

“She’s tied into it completely according to the long distance scrying,” Danny said warming to his subject. “The book seems to want to be used. All her spells will soon be powered by it. She’ll be totally vulnerable when she uses the book.”

“Any dangers?” Lilah asked.

“Only if you’re totally paranoid,” Danny said with a dismissive wave of his hand.

“I’m going to be on the hook for overtime, materials, and support staff if this fails,” Lilah said coldly. “And that’s going to smart a bit, not to mention ruin whatever blouse I’m wearing at the time. Give!”

“Well, um,” Danny said more soberly. “The only thing that could go wrong would be if the Von Manstein copy is within a hundred miles when she uses the Watcher’s copy. Something about two collections of evil acting in harmony would end up enhancing the power by at least a level of magnitude.”

“Could we contain that?” Lilah asked.

“Maybe if we pulled in everybody the company has,” Danny replied. “Otherwise no. But hey, that’s a billion to one shot.”

Where is VM edition? Lilah wrote.

“And the seer?” the lawyer asked.

“It would be better if we had just a bit of information on her but so far we’ve got nothing,” Danny shrugged. “One of the wizards has an idea about chemical intake changing patterns of magic. He’s looking into it.”


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Georgia Watson looked at the clock again. Her Department Head was running slightly late as usual. She shifted the bundle of drawings again as the bemused looking man rounded the corner near his office.

“Dr. Watson?” he asked jovially. “What brings you here, Georgia?”

“It’s about the drawings of one of the patients I’m observing,” she said opening her briefcase.

“How old?” he asked.

“Four years old,” Georgia replied handing him one of Lucinda’s pictures.

“Amazing,” the older man said. “Very good technique, given her age. The subject matter is...unique. Any history of family problems?”

“Very few,” Georgia replied.

“I’ll tell you what,” he said finally. “I’ll look these over and consult with some people. Oh, there’s a new study that’s looking for input like this for some interpretation software. I’ll try them as well.”

“Thank you,” Georgia said with relief in her voice.


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Tara was pulling herself together when the back door to the shop opened. The three were moving that way when Anya shambled in. She glared at them.

“Your amulet!” Tara said worriedly.

“You’re soaking,” Buffy observed.

“Would you like a bit of warmth?” Betty offered.

“No, thank you!” Anya snapped.

“I’ll get you a towel,” Tara said turning toward the training room.

“I’ll warm it,” Betty volunteered.

“I’ve got some sweats here,” Buffy pointed out. Then the Slayer looked back. “Wet dog? Were you chased?”

“Are you all right?” Tara and Buffy asked almost as one.

“I’m wet and covered with Rottweiller slobber and I’m stuck being a human until my amulet gets replaced!” Anya snarled. “I am not feeling social right now!”

“Do you need help with the store?” Tara asked hesitantly. “You know, until you get dried off?”

“No!” Anya said glaring at Tara. “Just go home!”

“But-” Tara started.

“Now!” Anya almost cried.

“Okay, we’re going,” Buffy said with a forced calm.

“But if y-you need us you can call,” Tara added.

“Go!” Anya whispered angrily.

The three of them headed for the front door. Tara looked back over her shoulder to see Anya’ glare. The witch caught the tracks of tears on Anya’s face.


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As the door closed behind them Anya slumped against the counter.

“Everybody wants you, Tara,” she said in an angry croak. “Everybody!”

Anya picked up the money Tara had left and the gold. She put them in her pocket.


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“Now what?” Buffy asked as they headed back to the Jeep.

“I do research,” Tara sighed. “I want to check some spells out in the book.”

“I don’t like that,” Buffy said with a frown.

“I agree, Miss Summers,” Betty said. “Even through the sphere I can feel that thing. I think it’s more powerful that it was when we first encountered it.”

“I’ll be careful,” Tara insisted. Then she yawned suddenly.

“It’s not even noon yet,” Buffy observed. “You’re taking a nap before you read that thing.”

“Agreed,” Betty said in a firm voice.

“Mother...hens,” Tara said around another yawn. “Fine, be practical.”


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Willow yawned and then looked surprised.

“Why did I do that?” she wondered aloud. “I’m not tired, and I don’t have a body as such,,,but I do have a connection to Tara who has a body and is probably working herself too hard getting her stupid girlfriend out of danger, not that I deserve her help. Oh great, Rosenberg, now guilt and talking to yourself in the third person. Get a grip!”

Willow wrapped her arms around herself and wondered why she felt so cold.

“Not even an imaginary sweater,” she muttered.


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Tara struggled to make her way through the snow. Willow was lost and alone out in the deadly cold. She had to find her. The witch stumbled over a tree branch and fell and fell...

Tara started awake. She didn’t move for a few seconds hoping sleep would return. After a few moments it became evident sleep had abandoned her. Tara got up, slipped on her shoes and headed for the stairs as quietly as possible.


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“What are we waiting for?” Giles asked looking at his watch.

“She has not cast a spell yet,” the oldest witch said primly. “You will need as much power as you can carry so sit a bit longer and rest.”

The Watcher nodded and returned to his chair. The oldest witch stood up.

“Cup of tea?” she asked easily.

“Yes!” her second in both years and power said brightly. “I’ll help.”

The two of them went into the kitchen. There a clay jug covered with runes sat on the floor.

“What if he sees that?” the second asked.

“We tell him it’s a project for a tourist who is always looking for a mystic souvenir,” the oldest replied with a smile. “He’s a Watcher. He’ll accept it.”

“Bloody Watchers.”


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“I don’t think I’ve ever seen anyone enjoy their tea so much,” Buffy grinned.

On the stove the salamander popped her head out of the cup and sighed happily.

“It does wonders for the skin,” Betty said happily.


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Tara couldn’t exact explain why she was being so quiet. She could hear Buffy and Betty in the kitchen. Tara leaned forward and opened The True Path Of Magic silently just to check the spells she was worried about. The book opened without an effort and Tara was looking at a spell she did not know existed.

How To Summon, Bind And Control A Vampire Of Your Choosing

Tara frowned at the title. Then an image of a floating pallet board, blue with power came to her mind.

”He hurt my nose!” Tara said looking at Willow with unbridled joy.

“Yeah, you’re welcome.” Spike said rubbing his head.


Tara started to cry when suddenly SLEEP echoed through her. Tara’s face fell into the open book.


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“Well, look who’s come to call,” Spike said with a familiar half sneer as Tara stood upon a fiery plain. “‘Ello killer.”





To Be Continued
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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby Darth Pacula » Thu Nov 17, 2005 2:02 pm

Dibs! Back after work to add something more meaningful.

ETA: G'day, Jixer. Okay, so it's not so much after work as it is after another day's work and the entire weekend. :ashamed See, this is what procrastination gets you.

Poor Anya, back to human once again. Not that I mind too much, she's less likely to cause major trouble as a non-demon, and it will hopefully keep her out of D'Hoffryn's scheme, which is bound to not be a good place to be.

“That’s two amulets she’s managed to destroy,” D’Hoffryn said peevishly. “I have to admit the resources we went through to get her back might have been used better elsewhere.”


Okay, is it just me, or is that hinting that D'Hoffryn had something to do with the wedding-that-wasn't? Besides being a guest? Hmm. Good thing that dog was there though. He deserves a month's worth of tummy scratching. The ramp instead of steps in the pool inclines me to think it might belong to someone in a wheelchair though, so he might be trained to be a helper dog.

Tara seems to be having less and less control over her own magic. That can't be good, especially given the nature of the book that is influencing her.

“Any dangers?” Lilah asked.

“Only if you’re totally paranoid,” Danny said with a dismissive wave of his hand.


Hello! That's a definite jinx if I've ever heard one. Silly pillock.

Now, what the hell is the coven up to, and what are they concealing from Giles? Oy vey, another thread to your story!

And Spike makes another reappearance, despite apparently being staked earlier. Which raises the question; is he dead, and haunting Tara's dreams, whether as a manifestation of her own subconscious guilt, or as a bona fide ghost? Or has he been trapped inside her head, and is still alive somewhere?

The spell she found was talking about How To Summon, Bind And Control A Vampire Of Your Choosing. That inclines me believe that perhaps he wasn't dusted, and is being kept somewhere until Tara can use him. The summon part could imply a teleportation aspect to the spell, and the apparent dusting could just to throw anyone looking for Spike off the scent.

Or I could be barking up the wrong tree. :-D

Cheers for another great update, Jixer. Can't wait for the next installment.
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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby Missocki » Thu Nov 17, 2005 2:05 pm

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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby spells42 » Thu Nov 17, 2005 2:20 pm

wow Jixer

You've really picked up the pace - my mind is whirling trying to work out all that is going on and implied. Of course that could also be that it's still too early in the day for me to think straight, as I'm reading this while having breakfast.

The influence the book is having on Tara is worrying. I can't think why it would want to bring Spike in tho' so have to assume that there's another force at work here that we haven't seen yet?

Very enjoyable as usual, Jixer. I'm looking forward to more of the same.


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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby AntigoneUnbound » Fri Nov 18, 2005 9:40 am

Hey Jixer--Well damn, I missed two updates!

I'm taking little notes to try to keep track of everything, b/c there are many plot lines running through all of this and I have the feeling that when they all converage--much boomage and adventure.

Well go, Betty, not wanting to be cute! Who would ever call her cute? Heh...And Carl rescues Anya! "Good dog," indeed!

There are some wonderfully evocative lines here, Jixer, that really pull the emotions right out. This was especially lovely:
Tara just looked at her lover for a moment that could have held the life of a star, then she was gone.
Beautiful.

You know, you took a unique stance in making Tara's mother less-than-perfect. It's easy to idealize her, but here's a woman who was drawn to power, and who used a switch on her daughter. Ouch.

Note to self: Don't piss of Tara, not these days! Her power's growing, and who knows where it'll end. Lilah certainly wants to know...

And Rack--or should I say, Douglas? Ooh, what a yucky, yucky man. Spike's alive? Whoa--this should be interesting!

Wonderful stuff, Jixer--thanks for sharing it!
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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby jixer » Tue Nov 22, 2005 3:11 pm

Hello Kittens-


I sneak in from the rigors of Real Life to bask for a few moments in Kitten feedback.

Darth Pacula- That time thing is just too slippery. I've always thought it was a bit too easy for one of Anya's old victims to show up just at the right time to ruin her wedding.

You're right about the ramped pool and helping dog. Pool work is great but if your mobility is impaired steps are an obstacle. Besides, I like Rotties.

Just what's happening with Spike will be explained (if I do my job right) in the next chapter. No hints about arboreal barking :)

Missocki- Coherence over-rated is! Your feedback is welcome in any form!

spells42- Oh dear, early morning fanfic and breakfast feedback? THAT'S a dedicated Kitten!

Why Spike will be answered. Maybe even how if I can pummel the keyboard into submission. Just not soon :(

AntigoneUnbound- If the Vengeance Demon track takes off at ten-fifteen and travels toward the Wolfram and Hart plot line at thirty miles an hour, how many spells will the book hold at eleven-twelve? Sorry, there's just something about story problems that's become stuck in my brain. Maybe that accounts for the plot so far.

I have to say when it comes to W&T the emotional aspect of writing takes more effort because I want it right.

Tara's mother was a hard call. I hope she works as a real result of what she was told and the environment that made her believe she could be a demon.


My thanks to all the Kittens who have stopped by and taken time with my story.


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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby venusoracle » Sat Nov 26, 2005 12:32 am

I just wanted to pop in and tell you how much I love your stories and your writing style... It's very descriptive and succinct at the same time.

Please keep up the good work and I look forward to your next post.
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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby jixer » Mon Nov 28, 2005 1:12 pm

Hello Kittens-

I try to shake off the tryptophan overdose (yep, over did the turkey again) and make a sensible reply to

venusoracle- Thank you! I have to say Pens has been a wonderful learning experience. I'm an omniverous reader so I've had lots of examples to follow. I'm glad I'm picking the right ones.


Now back to working on the next chapter, including editing out the part where everyone wears plaid.

Thank you,

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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby Alcy » Mon Nov 28, 2005 5:28 pm

Heya Jixer,
Finally found the time to get myself up to date with your newest offering. I'm enjoying it immensely with all the angst and dark magic, two of my favouritest concepts in the Buffyverse - I'll take more of each please!! :-D

Betty is a fantastic character and I find she has the funniest lines as well as being a sort of constant and reassuring presence throughout the craziness which seems to be pervading every other character. Although I'm worried about Anya's insistence that they cannot be trusted and whether it will come back to bite the Scoobies.

I for one am looking forward to you delving further into this story and to an eventual resolution which will no doubt be masterful.
Thanks jixer,
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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby jixer » Thu Dec 01, 2005 3:36 pm

Hello Kittens-

I'm tired of this reality thing throwing it's titanium and graphite monkeywrenches into my cast iron life. Most unfair. But then I have to remember how man people out there don't get Kitten feedback. Poor bastards.

Alcy- Angst refill? Seconds on dark magic? Okayyy.

Betty has been a great character to use. For some reason I imagine her words with the accent of a British governess. Is she worthy of trust? That remains to be seen.

I hope the resolution will be masterful. It's going to be delayed a bit by the evil forces of real life (mall, hard to find gift, and work) , but in the end it shall appear on the board! And the epilogue too!

Thank you for taking time with my story,

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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby jixer » Thu Dec 01, 2005 3:37 pm

Chapter Six






Tara looked out into what she thought must be Hell. Spike lounged there against an ancient pillar, still in his duster and still smoking a filterless cigarette.

“Spike?” asked in horrified wonder.

“Yeah,” Spike said with a sneer. “Where did you think I’d be? Demon, remember?”

“Yes,” Tara said with a wince. She looked down only something was wrong. Her hair was black. Tara lifted it away but stopped when she saw her ebony fingernails.

“On me they look good,” Spike said lazily. “You need a different color though.”

Tara just stared at her glistening black nails with a rising horror.

“Oh, come on now!” Spike said impatiently. “You think you’re going to be up to gettin’ Red out of her hocus-pocus prison going around like a bloody ingenue? You’ve touched the dark before.”

“I-I-I d-d-didn’t know-”

“Well now you do,” Spike snapped. “You go into this all scared and boo-hooin’ and you’re going to get eaten up right bloody quick, and you know I’m right.”

Tara looked up at the vampire and really saw him as was now. The duster was scuffed and the vampire inside looked threadbare and ill-used.

“I’m sorry,” Tara began.

“Watch your words,” Spike warned. “Sorry’s got elements of guilt running in through it. That charming word regret holds guilt too. Not that ‘I’m sorry’ does any good here.”

Tara just winced. Spike sighed.

“I’m sorry too,” he said tiredly. “Tell Buffy, well, just tell her I was a vampire and we don’t really know love. Except I came damn close with her and when she said no the vamp couldn’t take losing the best thing he’d ever had.”

“I’ll tell her,” Tara promised.

“You’d better get some spine then if you’re gonna keep your promises,” Spike warned.

“Promises?” Tara asked looking at him closely.

“Yeah,” Spike said calmly. “I want one too.”

“W-W-What do you want?” Tara asked warily.

“After you get your girl back I want you an’ her to do the same mojo Red did to Angel for Dru,” Spike said meeting Tara’s eyes. “I want you to give her a chance to stay out of here.”

“But if she gets her soul won’t she still be, um,,,

“Fruitier than a pineapple plantation?” Spike asked bitterly. “Don’t know, luv. Angel was truly fucked up by that soul or what ever it was. Maybe it’ll knock some sense into Drusilla. It’s about the only hope I’ve got ‘round here.”

Tara winced inwardly at the resigned, almost broken tone in Spike’s voice. She just nodded.

“Promise me,” Spike insisted.

“I-I promise,” Tara said softly. “And-and thank you.”

“You better get back,” Spike said curtly. “Buffy and her flying Zippo have their knickers in a twist.”


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Buffy’s panic was building. She still don’t know why she’d looked in the living room. She’d seen Tara slumped over the damned book with her face on the open pages. Now that Buffy was trying with a desperately gentle force to separate Tara from the book the Slayer could see the printed words crawling over Tara’s skin. Suddenly Tara seemed to awake and sit up. Buffy tore the book from Tara’s hands. A blue-white flare of light knocked the Slayer to the ground. Betty flared a bright yellow and hovered over the book with her sphere full of flame. The pages rippled in a snarl.

“That’s enough!” Tara barked. “Be still!”

The book riffled it’s pages and then stayed closed and silent.


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“What the HELL kind of wish was was that?!?”

Spike turned and lifted an eyebrow as a young Vengeance Demon appeared turning magenta in his fury.

“You stupid fucking vampire!” the demon bellowed. “Do you know how dangerous she is? Why do you think I went through the trouble of finding you? Vengeance, remember? She killed you!”

“I took my vengeance,” Spike shrugged. “Guilt trips are bloody nasty rides.”

“GUILT TRIP?!?” the demon shrieked. “I use up a month’s worth of magic to act around the manna field of the single most dangerous magic book in the multiverse and you lay a piss poor guilt trip on her? A bunch of doddering old fools are going to give her the bloody Orb of Petbe and you-ACKK!”

Spike shifted into his hunting face as he added a bit of pressure to the hold he suddenly had on the young demon’s throat. He leaned forward and grinned with too many very sharp teeth.

“I was wondering why a Vengeance Demon came to Hell and offered me a shot at my killer,” Spike growled. “Now listen to me, boy! You’ve gone and broken all sorts of rules, and they’re big on rules down here. I used my wish, got it?” In the distance a black cloud appeared, moving across the desolation with red lightning. “Looks like somebody’s noticed. Now unless you want to talk to management I’d suggest you take your leave.”

Spike opened his hand. The demon looked beyond the vampire and vanished with a frightened squeak.


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“You commanded the book and it obeyed,” Betty observed in a dry tone.

“It’s the way it has to be for now,” Tara said with a quiet resolve.

“What does that mean?” Buffy asked as she picked herself up off the floor.

“It means I’ll be dealing with dark magic,” Tara explained meeting Buffy’s eyes. “Definitely blood magic and probably death magic. I am going to have to touch those magics to get Willow back. I may even have to command them because I have to break the spell, and breaking a spell means anything bound to Rack will then bind to me.”

“Is there a return to sender option?” Buffy asked hopefully.

“I can’t just let those spells and forces back into the world,” Tara said firmly.

“Have you faced these magics before?” Betty asked with a forced calm.

“Yes, ma’am,” Tara answered. “I’ve done the kind of magic needed on a working farm in a valley full of magic.”

“I see,” Betty nodded. “But harvest blood and calming the passing souls are not true black magic. They are the night to the day, not the darkness of the soul.”

“I was part of bringing Buffy back from Heaven,” Tara said with a frown at the memory. “It was wrong but I did it. That’s where this all started.”

“Impressive,” Betty said. “Unfortunately in a most unpleasant way.”

“Yes, ma’am,” Tara agreed.

“Tara, I realize you’re only being polite,” Betty said gently. “But my mother is ma’am.”

“So you can do this?” Buffy asked with more worry in voice than she knew.

“I can do this,” Tara said. “I have to.”


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“What’s the commotion?” Lilah asked as the wizards scrambled around her.

“The book!” Danny said in a voice just a bit too high for calm. “It’s had a weird power surge.”

“Did Maclay use it?” the lawyer demanded.

“No,” an older mage said worriedly. “But she did command it later.”

“What does this mean?” Lilah asked the assembled magical staff. “Anybody?”

The looks back and forth coupled with hidden shrugs were all the answer she received.

“Not good enough, people!” Lilah snarled. “My ass is on line here and I want answers even if I have to light a fire under all of you and believe me I know where the dolls are buried!”

“It’s not that simple,” a mage said hesitantly.

“I’ll make it easy,” said in a tone flat with anger. “Can you get the new seer?”

“Yes, but that’s provided we have the power,” the magic user replied.

“Power,” Lilah nodded. “I’ll get you some more. How about the book and Maclay?”

“The book will be the hard part,” a more senior mage explained. “Maclay is just a Wiccan hedge witch. The book will not want to part from her since it seems to be bonded. Our strategy is simple and fool-proof.”

“How fool-proof?” Lilah demanded.

“We burn out the witch,” he shrugged. “The little Wiccan will be torn apart by the dark magic we’ll pour into The True Path Of Magic and then we’ll pull the power and the book back. It should only take a few seconds. Once we have the book there are spells that will bind the seer to...Wolfram and Hart forever.”

“Why won’t she just drop it?” Lilah asked with a frown.

“It will be bound to her,” the mage explained. “So will we while we’re trying to take it from here but that will hardly be an issue. A college dabbler in witchcraft will do little beyond make a brief torch.”

“Are we ready in case she uses it right now?” Lilah asked pointedly.

“We have a team standing by but we know when she’s going to use it,” he shrugged.

“Oh?”

“Tonight there will be a half moon,” the mage said smugly. “Good for controlling evil. I’m sure she’s out buying an impressive amount of herbs and crystals right now.”

“And that’s not going to work, right?”

“My dear Ms. Morgan,” the oldest mage wheezed in a delighted manner. “Every time one of our clients signs our forms or uses our services in any way we tie them gently to our power base. It’s just a matter of using the right shade of invisible ink for each species. Then there’s the many favors owed to us by powers one would think our enemies, but who still need help in a world of human laws. It all adds up to a considerable amount of power. And since the benefits greatly outweigh any reasonable cost in this case we have carte blanche to tap that pool.”

“As long as you document how much you use,” Lilah said sharply.

“We have the forms already filled out!” he cackled.

“Why don’t you use some of that power to find the seer now?” Lilah asked suspiciously.

“The Senior Partners are, ah, shall we say waiting for us to prove our theory,” he said with a bit of embarrassment.

“Before they give you the pass to the power piggy-bank,” Lilah finished. She turned, pulled out a PDA and looked through the files. The lawyer made a note and faced the mages with a smile.

“You will be the last part of Mr. Peterson’s probationary period,” she said briskly. “I’m sure he’ll never make the same mistake again.”

“Most assuredly not,” the Black Griffon Society sorceress said with a predatory smile. “If I may, just how did he get on probation in the first place?”

“He tried to cut a deal for himself,” Lilah replied pleasantly. “We try to discourage that.”


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“Ladies and gentlemen,” D’Hoffryn intoned. “I have the result of the Orb Committee’s findings. They confirm what we all know.” He looked out at his senior council and smiled. “We’re a growth industry. What we started is now being carried out by forty-seven full Vengeance Demons and twenty-three probationary Vengeance Demons. Unfortunately we have a limited resource. The Orb of Petbe has indeed lost seventeen percent of it’s power just in the last three hundred years. Teleporting efficiency is at an all time low. In short, we’re facing a power crisis. My question is do we proceed with our current course of action?”

The senior council nodded sagely.

“Of course,” one harrumphed with a frown. “Despite what some of the younger generation thinks, we do know what we’re doing.”

The other council members just nodded sympathetically.

“By the way, where is that youngster, the one who keeps worrying?” D’Hoffryn asked as an afterthought.


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“You sure about this?” the human asked. “Vengeance Demon’s a good gig.”

“I’ve topped out in my field,” the young demon replied. “And I’m expecting a downturn in my section.”

“Well, with your qualifications and certifications we’ll have no trouble placing you,” the man in the rumpled suit replied. “Mind you, being an actuary won’t be as exciting as your old job.”

“Do any of your clients travel in a burning cloud?” the demon asked.

“No,” the human replied sympathetically. “For the most part they use cars.”

“I’ll adjust.”


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“How long will this take?” Buffy asked.

“Hours,” Betty said softly.

Buffy looked out the window at Tara standing in the backyard with bare feet. The witch held her eyes closed under the sun. Her hands were open and she had been lifting them by a tiny fraction every few minutes. Next to Tara a small brazier burned low while on it’s surface the ashes of a handful of herbs became white ash.

“Shouldn’t there be more chanting or smoke or something?” Buffy asked worriedly.

“No,” Betty said quietly. “I can see her aura in the white part of my flame. She’s an earth witch all right. I’ve never seen such a sturdy connection.”

“She’s all right?” Buffy wondered.

“As much as she can be,” Betty said in a tone that did not make the Slayer relax very much.


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Dr. Watson spread Lucinda’s most recent drawings on her desk. She looked over them and began to notice a pattern.

“Good thing I took art courses for my humanities requirements,” she muttered.

She shuffled the papers a bit until they formed a five paged diorama in crayon.

All the way on one side by themselves a sad man with oversized teeth reached out for two people, a woman with glittery silver crayon eyes and an angry boy that were beyond his reach...


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Angel felt every decade as he hurried along the sewer, trying to hear again the one heart that he had known for such a short time. Connor didn’t know how dangerous this world was with its firearms and freeways. Or how to act around cops. Cops made the vampire think about lawyers and the thought of his son in the hands of Wolfram and Hart chilled him.

There was so much he had to do for the child he did not really know.

Why try? part of his mind chided him. Did you ever think you could be a father? Or a lover?

Now he was again with Buffy, feeling hope and joy truly for the first time. Then Buffy became Cordelia and Angel stopped in his tracks. Angel shook his head and began to run again, hoping that listening to the world above would drown out his traitorous inner voice.


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The next page was a little girl looking tiny in a big bed with huge IV pumps and boxes all around her. Near the bed two adults cried.


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Lucinda clutched Ollie her panda bear as the three channel pump at the side of her bed chimed. On her finger the pulse oximeter glowed red as it checked the oxygen in her bloodstream. Wires on her chest led to a tiny box on the bed. She had had an odd reaction to the first chemo dose and since then she had been monitored on EKG telemetry. Nearby the crash cart loomed just in case. The heart rate numbers on the oximeter increased as Lucinda felt the first harsh wave of nausea.

“Last time, honey,” her mother said with urgency of a prayer as her daughter’s hand clenched hers.

“You’re doing great,” her father said in a tight voice as he fought back the tears his baby girl didn’t need to see.


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On the edge of the other side of the connected drawings the red haired girl in the red octagon cried blue tears all alone.


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Willow turned away from the view into Rack’s inner sanctum, sat on the red floor and wrapped her hands around her legs. She felt completely helpless.

Maybe Tara should just let me go, she thought as tears began to well up in her eyes. She could do better...


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On the border of that sheet and spilling onto the next was the form of a sad black and white cat.


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She sniffed around the territory for safe, familiar scents. She felt unsettled and not even rolling lazily in the sunlit patch of rug could make her feel better. She could scent one mother, but the other’s was fading again. She had been feeling so safe with both of them back together, but now the scent of that one brief return was fading back almost to where it was too faint even for her nose to catch. Miss Kitty went to the door.

“Mmeowrr?”

There was no reply. She turned and began her circuit again.


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On this page a man carrying an outsized bottle in one hand was reaching out to an angry, crying woman who turned away.


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Anya looked up at the bell as the door of the Magic Box opened. Her smile died almost immediately as Xander stepped into the store.

“What hurtful things have you come to say today?” she asked bluntly. “Go ahead. You’re safe. I’m human again, and abandoned. I should be getting used to it.”

“Are you okay?” Xander asked as Anya unconsciously rubbed her shoulder.

“I’m fine,” she said shortly. “I love being hit with magic lightening and almost drowning.”

“Lightening?” Xander asked with a worried frown. “Drowning? You should be in the hospital!”

“Thank you for your concern,” Anya replied acidly. “By the way, Buffy and Tara aren’t here, which is why you came in the first place.”

“Yeah, but-” Xander started.

“But you missed me so much you had to come the day after Willow was shot to check up on me?” Anya almost hissed.

“Kind of,” Xander admitted after a second. “Losing Willow made me...”

Silence grew in the shop as they stared at each other trying to find the elusive thread of conversation. Finally Anya really looked at Xander.

“Your face is puffy,” she said sternly. “Have you been drinking? Your face always gets puffy when you drink.”

“I’ve...I’ve got to go,” Xander said hurriedly as he turned.

“Damn it, Xander!” Anya snapped as he fled the store. The bell rang again. She shook her head and sighed. “Men! Can’t live with them and now I can’t yank their out their livers and feed them to hyenas!”


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Georgia stopped and stared at the drawing, the next one in from the man with large teeth, now on her desk. She could make out a man with a mean smile


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Warren Meers strode along the sidewalk with a smile on his face and his hand on the pistol in his pocket. He couldn’t believe his luck. Warren hadn’t known the weird girl from the magic shop was a witch as well. He had hoped to run into Summers’ other little witch friend sooner rather than later. At least his stray round had killed the powerful one of the Slayer’s pair. Warren smiled at the memory of viewing the live feed from the robot as the girl, Anna or something like that, took a bolt of green electric fire to her chest. He hitched the pack now on his shoulders up a bit and smiled. The magic surprises in this backpack were even more devastating the weird, scarred sorcerer had promised. As for the Slayer he now knew she could be stopped with bullets. Next time he’d stay and finish the job.


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She didn’t recognize the new figure. It appeared to be a man with glasses.


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Giles looked at his watch and yawned. He felt one more time for his passport and tried to remember his Watcher’s training about crossing borders via magic. Giles glanced at the phone but turned his attention away after a second. He picked up Garwood’s Guide For Portal Travelers and forced himself to concentrate on anything other than the thoughts that Willow Rosenberg was dead and what he might find in Sunnydale.


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On the other side the salamander hovered between the brown and the yellow haired girls. All of them had worried faces...


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Dawn pulled out the last of her school things from her backpack in a rush, but it was too no avail.

“My compact, my brush, and-hey!” Buffy said as she almost pounced. “I wondered where that scarf went!”

“You never wear it!” Dawn groused.

“That’s because I can’t find it because my little sister keeps pillaging my closet!”

“Siblings,” Betty sighed. “Excuse me, but can we call a truce for a few hours?”

“Sorry,” Buffy said in a not very sorry voice.

“Fine,” sulked Dawn.

“Girls, please!” Betty snapped in an exasperated tone.

Buffy sighed and shivered as she looked down.

“Dawn, I’m sorry,” she started in a very subdued voice. “I’m just...tired.”

“I know,” Dawn admitted shyly. “The only way I could make it through class was staying busy and trying not to think about-”

“We’ll get her back,” Buffy promised with a fierce urgency as she hugged her little sister.

“Okay,” Dawn said in what she hoped was a steady voice. “But why do we need these sweats and the long skirt? Won’t Willow be warm if a salamander is making her body?”

“It’s very complicated,” Betty explained. “But no. Her body temperature will be at human normal, but she will lose it quickly. The best analogy would be tempering a blade by quenching it in a snow bank and then leaving the new blade in the melted snow.”

“And she may be confused or exhausted after the transformation,” Buffy added. “I’d bet salamanders don’t make clothes.”

“Sorry, we salamanders have no real experience in weaving clothes made of anything but fire,” Betty answered politely.

“People wear fire?” Dawn asked incredulously.

“They try to by using fire protection spells,” Betty explained. “Sounds good and the weaves are spectacular but salamander fires tend to go through most spells rather suddenly. Not to mention you never get any offers to dance.”

“A big no on the flamey clothes,” Buffy said with a nod. “That’s why we’ll need things we can more or less get Will into fast.”

“And a blanket,” Dawn said turning and pulling hers off her bed.


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But it was the central drawing that made the doctor pause. The blue eyed woman now had darker hair and her feet were below the line of brown the others stood on.


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Tara opened her eyes and looked at the odd trio waiting for her on the back porch in the fading light of the afternoon. She felt their hope and worry for her. Tara accepted those emotions and let them wrap around her like favorite sweater on a chilly morning.

“Are you okay?” Buffy asked. “I mean, you know, standing around with no sunscreen for hours, arms in weird positions...”

“You make it sound like tai chi in a tanning booth,” Dawn interjected.

“I’m fine,” Tara said with a smile. “It’s been a long time since I centered myself to the earth.”

“Amazing,” Betty said over Dawn’s shoulder. “I believe your hair is more brown now.”

“Like dirt-I mean soil, err...” Buffy started.

“Mother Earth,” Dawn added smugly.

“I am not wearing Birkenstocks and socks!” Tara said in mock horror. Then she laughed. “Oh, sorry. Centering brings out silliness in me.”

“Well, as long as its good,” Buffy said in a relieved tone. “When do we start?”

Before Tara could answer Buffy the phone rang in the house. Tara gave a start and then rushed towards the door. The others looked at her as Tara hurried by and picked up the phone just before the answering machine kicked in.

“Hello, Sheila,” Tara said gently. She nodded and bit her lip as the others gathered around. They could all hear the worry in the tinny voice even if the words were indistinguishable from their positions. Finally Tara brushed an errant tear away.

“She’ll be home late tonight,” Tara said surely. “I promise.”


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Dr. Watson unrolled the next set of drawings and just stared at them for a second. Her recorder sat nearby but her only words for many minutes were “Oh my.”






To Be Continued
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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby Missocki » Thu Dec 01, 2005 5:47 pm

:bow This just keeps getting better and better!!!!!!

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby jixer » Sat Dec 03, 2005 12:19 pm

Hello Kittens-

Thank goodness for this place! Real life just dodged a speeding semi but took another bump (roughly equivilant to a foot deep pothole) and then the work weekend shows up. In all of this though there is Kitten feedback. Spots of sanity still remain...

Missocki- I hope the upward curve continues! Or at least levels off at a high plateau if I remember my pre-graphing calculator math classe :)

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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby Alcy » Sun Dec 04, 2005 3:14 pm

Hi jixer,

Thanks for what was a very interesting update.
I enjoyed the piece with Spike, even more so when it was revealed he used his wish to lay a guilt trip on Tara rather than anything more spectacular. Interesting that the vengeance demon was a guy - and I liked the corporate nature of the Vengeance demons with downsizing and what-not.

I have the heebie-jeebies thinking about Tara picking up the book and being burnt to a crisp. I do however find satisfaction in your portrayal of her strength and ability. I am enjoying the premise of this tory centred around Tara striving to bring Willow back from her state of limbo rather than vice versa. Although it would be good to see more of how Willow is coping with her imprisonment and despair.

Poor miss Kitty!!

Cheers very much!
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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby spells42 » Tue Dec 06, 2005 6:54 pm

Jixer
I'm enjoying your fic. Using Lucinda's drawings to tie the pieces together is very neat, and a quick way to cover a lot. Things are heating up - I hope Tara is careful, and I hope Willow keeps her faith in Tara. I get the idea that despair in that place is the way to final oblivion.

What on earth is wrong with Xander? He needs to pull himself together.

I feel sorry for Miss Kitty too.

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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby Darth Pacula » Fri Dec 09, 2005 12:45 am

G'day, Jixer.

First off, sorry I've taken so long to leave feedback for this last update. Procrastination has taken a bit chunk out of my ass lately. In point of fact, the little bugger might still be back there.

So that's why Tara ended up in Hell's visiting room with Captain Peroxide. Nice twist, Spike using the VD like that. By which I mean the vengeance demon, not the STD. :-D

“We burn out the witch,” he shrugged. “The little Wiccan will be torn apart by the dark magic we’ll pour into The True Path Of Magic and then we’ll pull the power and the book back. It should only take a few seconds. Once we have the book there are spells that will bind the seer to...Wolfram and Hart forever.”


Huh. Did anyone else notice the little pause before that mage said Wolfram and Hart? Methinks these bearded and be-robed poindexters are up to something. Isn't it always the way. You just can't trust evil lackeys.

Oy vey! Now Angel, Cordy and Conner seem to be thrown into the mix. Blimey, Jixer! Are you trying to go for a record here for the most characters used in a single story?

Ugh. That little bit with Lucinda in hospital getting chemo raised some unhappy memories. I had a cousin die of Leukemia before she even made double digits last year, and I've had cancer myself so ... unpleasant associations.

Still, great update. Can't wait for the next one, especially given that little cliff hanger you ended on.

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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby AntigoneUnbound » Fri Dec 09, 2005 1:23 pm

Hey Jixer...Sorry for the delay, but I've been battling my own muse of late. Again, you've woven so many threads into one story, and they all seem to be converging. I have a soft spot for Spike, though heaven knows why. But I do find myself pulling for him.

Buffy and her flying Zippo? Please promise me you'll start a band by that name, and cut at least one album.

In the midst of all the Machiavellian magic and double-dealings, one thing really stands out to me: how do you use the forces of darkness w/o letting them use you? How do you maintain a sense of innocence when facing corruption? It would be handy if there were clear-cut road signs that say, "Now Entering Evil," but Tara has to rely on her own knowledge of good (esp. what that looks like in her) and her closest friends for anchor.

Nice work, Jixer!
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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby jixer » Fri Dec 09, 2005 1:31 pm

Hello Kittens-

Real Life truly sucks

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With Kitten Feedback


Alcy- This is definitely Tara-centric but the update does start with Willow. That's all I'm saying for now!

I can't see vengeance being an all female calling. I see the cubicle serf Vengeance Demon as male so the rest of it just kind of fit.

MKF is kind of my reminder about the mute victims of relationship problems. They don't understand and can't, they can just feel.

spells42- I'm glad you're along for the ride, Anne. You're quite right, despair is always dangerous and especially so around magic. As for Xander, he's dealing with a lot of stress in a very familiar and dangerous way. Where it takes him will have to be seen.


Darth Pacula- Now what can you possibly mean about the reliability of W+H's mages? :)

I hope the reason I'm giving Angel and group a passing mention will become clearer.

I hope you've conquered your opponent for good Paul. Vampires, demons and monsters are cartoons, the real lurking evil hides in a single word horrifying word. I've worked with sick kids and its always the most devastating part of my memories. Kind of one reason I do adults almost exclusively now. Lucinda's drawings come from the many I've seen over the years.


And that's all for now, Kittens. I'm off to drop off a bit of feedback and then get writing.


Thank you,

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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby jixer » Thu Dec 15, 2005 2:45 am

Hello Kittens-

Sometimes I just think the board is out to confuse me. Nevertheless, I feel I owe AntigoneUnbound some explanation beyond her very nice and well thought out feedback didn't register on my computer before I posted the last response. That and the fact that I feel very uneasy about 'bumping' my story made me late in answering this. Okay, that and trying to figure out just what hit single would be the first big hit for 'Buffy and Her Flying Zippo'. I was thinking something along the lines of ska with a title 'What's Wrong With The Water (in Washington D.C.)'

Spike was such a rich possibility at the end of S5. Let's just say his story isn't done yet.

I'm not sure Tara still has her innocence. She has lied and been lied to, seen her mother's search for power, and seen her love fall hard. Her path has not been easy, and maybe that is for the best.

Thank you, Mary for your words as always,


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Dance Of The Salamander Chapter Seven

Postby jixer » Thu Dec 15, 2005 2:49 am

Chapter Seven








Why now?

Willow sighed sadly. I should be asking why did I go to him in the first place.

In her cold crimson cell she shifted uneasily.

Power, she answered honestly. I wanted more power.

...*power*...

Willow looked around quickly. She had heard that.

...*why*...

This time the voice was sad, almost despairing. It echoed in Willow’s soul and chipped away the resolve she’d been holding onto with desperate hope.

...*lost*...

Willow felt the pain in that single word. She tried to keep her thoughts positive but what if...

What if...Tara wasn’t strong enough? Her girl wouldn’t stop trying, Willow knew that. What if this was a trap? What if she was responsible for Rack getting his hands on Tara? What if he killed her too? The words ‘what if’ began to build and Willow put her hands to her ears to keep them out but it was hopeless. Everything here was hopeless. Willow felt cold hands on her throat just as her despair broke through.

*MINE!*

*No! Mine!*

*...minemineminemine...*

*She is ours, fools! Leave off!*

Willow’s world became red mist. The witch raised a hand to break the grips she couldn’t see but her hand was numb. Willow looked at her hand, but could only see the vague red outline.

...*Give her over!*

...*your power will be mine*...

“NO!” Willow shouted. “Tara...”

Willow looked at her hand and remembered the times Tara had held it, or it had held Tara. Suddenly two hands meeting in the laundry room came to her with the clarity of a snapshot. Willow remembered the first time they’d held hands, the first time she took Tara’s hands in a spell, the first time their hands had entwined as they laid down together in the darkness.

Willow realized she didn’t feel the other presences in her cell. The witch looked for it and barely made out twin swirling points that might have been eyes in the cells above her and to her sides. Willow closed her hand into a fist.

“I’m already taken,” she said with a toss of her head.

...*you will*...

...nononomineminemine...

...*fade*...

...*we all do*...

“Nope,” Willow said steadily. “I’m waiting for my girl.”

...*No followers ever came*...

...*My acolytes failed me*...

...*slaves ran away*...

“She’s my girl,” Willow said proudly. “And she’s got my friends with her. Didn’t you guys ever try love and friends?”

There was no answer beyond a distant grumble.


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“Tara, what is it?” Buffy asked urgently.

“Willow...” Tara said distantly.

“Willow?” Buffy asked quickly.

“Is she in trouble?” Dawn asked urgently.

“What?” Tara replied as she shook her head. “S-Sorry. Willow was upset and it felt like she was, um, slipping. I think that’s it.”

“You could feel her?” Betty inquired carefully.

“For an instant,” Tara said worriedly.

“I understand,” Betty said sadly.

Tara looked at the book on the table. She went to the table and carefully put her hand on the cover. Suddenly the voices she’d heard when she had gone into the book to see Willow were louder if no clearer. Tara could feel Willow on the verge of her other-sense, as if she caught the scent of mocha and heard Willow’s laughter in a distant room of a large house.

“Mine!” Tara growled softly in the fading afternoon light.

The voices fell silent.


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“We’ve got her!” two mages sang out at once.

Lilah looked up from her latte.

“The book just got active and she’s definitely, well, probably commanded it,” the senior mage on Maclay’s overwatch team reported. “She’s at least claimed it in whole or in part, no doubt after a nice ritual she got off the internet. We can follow her anywhere.”

“We have found the seer,” the Black Griffon Society sorceress said smugly. “She’s at Cedars Sinai.”

“Is she a patient?” Lilah demanded.

“A pediatric oncology patient,” the sorceress grinned.

“Right,” Lilah declared. “Stand down the snatch teams. Get the data to Legal. Start working on getting her caregivers’ background.”

“I’ve felt a pair of very worried older presences,” the sorceress reported. “They feel like parents.”

“Make sure,” Lilah snapped. “We need to know.”

“We’re not just going to take her?” Danny asked.

“That’s old school,” an ancient mage wheezed. “Today we are much more cruel.”

“How?” Danny wondered aloud.

“Mind control spells, a bit of child abuse in public and we sweep in and ‘save’ our target,” the old man grinned. “The family blames the parents, the parents blame each other and the kid is so traumatized they control real easy like. It’s perfect.”

“How long until moonrise?” Lilah asked the mages watching the Sunnydale Wiccan.

“Ninety-seven minutes until it’s visible in Sunnydale,” one replied looking at his computer.

“Listen up!” Lilah said over the excited voices. “Let’s keep focused. The seer team will take the chopper out to Cedars. I want the forms perfect when her parents go nuts in two hours. Book team, that means you will have that thing in control by then. Do we have enough to get our hands on that power resource?”

“I think so,” a junior mage replied quickly.

Lilah glared at him.

“We do,” the ancient mage interjected. “Maclay is tied to the book. We have proof this will work.”

“Let’s move people,” Lilah said in a forceful but calm voice as she looked at the clock. “We’ve got to be in place and ready in an hour and half from...now!


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“Sir, we have a stirring in the magic field around Miss Maclay.”

D’Hoffryn looked at the excited faces around him. He struggled to keep a calm exterior as his careful wrought plan came together. He could feel the senior demons’ excitement as well. He allowed himself a small smile.

“Thank you, Percy,” he said carefully. “Is the Orb of Petbe ready?”

“Yes, sir,” the senior demon on the Orb Committee answered proudly.

“Ladies and Gentlemen,” D’Hoffryn said gently. “We have a date with destiny.”


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“Boss, what the fuck is going on?”

Xander looked at Ben. Behind him Juan and Julie looked on with worried faces.

“What?” Xander managed as his gut knotted.

“We just got the the rest of the day and tomorrow off with pay,” the small, wiry black man replied. “With pay. They’re running all the union people off the site. The suits just showed up and that Miller guy is suddenly giving orders.”

That would be the guy I think I told everything I knew about Tara, Xander thought. He looked at his people and forced down the queasiness he’d been feeling.

“Take the money and go,” Xander said with more calm than he realized. “Get your pay to date as well. They’ll probably give it to you.”

“Okay,” Ben said. “I’ll get the team out of here.”

Xander went with them. He picked up his tools and saw his people follow his example. He went through the gate at the site and saw the suits and the new security that was far more fit and hard-eyed than the rent-a-cops that usually stood watch. He looked for Miller. Xander saw the well dressed man come out of the trailer in front of a pale woman wearing black clothes worth more than his entire crew. The two bodyguards following her looked almost human. Xander looked away and hurried out. He waited until the last of his people were in their vehicles and gone before he climbed into his own.

There’s one group I haven’t completely fucked over, he thought bitterly as he put his car in gear.

Xander wracked his brain trying to figure out what he’d told Miller. Without really thinking about it he pulled into the tavern he’d been stopping at recently after work before going home to an empty apartment. He was out and sitting down at his usual table before he looked at his watch. He was a bit early.

Just a quick bite, he told himself. Just to think over so I can tell Buffy what’s happening. What I think is happening.

“Hey there,” the waitress said brightly. “You’re in early. The usual?”

“Yeah, thanks,” Xander said as he took out a pencil and tried to make notes. He took a long drink of the beer when it came without thinking about it.


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“Why are we looking up the moonrise?” Dawn asked as Betty pirouetted on the keys. “Does the moon really help out because it speaks to women’s powers and desires?”

“Sorry, no,” Tara said seriously. “Tonight it’s just a bit of extra help in binding magic and I want everything on my side I can get. Are we ready?”

“We have Will’s stuff,” Buffy said patting the backpack on the floor. “Also bottled water, a first aid kit and I’m bringing the axe just in case.”

“Are you doing this at the Magic Box?” Dawn asked. “That way we’ll have everything we need to do emergency spells.”

“No,” Tara replied. “I feel that this needs to be done under the sky and I’m not going to be using anything I don’t already have. Besides, I’m not sure how this will manifest. It might get messy and I don’t want to damage the store if I can avoid it.”

“So that’s why were looking at vacant lots,” Buffy said nodding.

“Moonrise in seventy five minutes,” Betty said looking at the monitor. “That’s when it will break over the hills in the east.”

“You know what each of you are doing,” Tara said looking at Buffy.

“I keep any bad guys off until Will gets back,” Buffy answered easily. “Then I protect her and get her dressed.”

“I’m the Willow emergency girl,” Dawn answered eagerly. “I’ve even got her favorite lip gloss.”

“Are you sure you can orient your mate quickly?” Tara asked Betty worriedly.

“We’ve been through things like this before,” Betty sighed. “At least this time I’m not shielding a village from a lava flow in a blizzard.”

“Okay,” Tara said with as much confidence as she could muster. “Let’s go.”


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Lilah watched the helicopter lift from the nearby pad. In less than an hour both the book and the seer would be in Wolfram and Hart’s command. She hurried back into the building. There was a special ring on her cell before she entered the elevator.

“Yes?” she asked worriedly as she looked for eaves-droppers. “No. No that’s fine. I’ll pay for it.”

Lilah looked back out at the receding dot of the helicopter. She was taking a child away from her mother. Maybe it was a good thing. Mothers became senile, demanding, expensive things that never knew you unless they were recalling the things your sister had done better. Their kidneys failed and it took so much to keep them comfortable and safe.

Suddenly Lilah was at the door to her office without remembering how she got there. She hurried in and dried her eyes. She looked down at the note that fell from under the tissue box.

Maclay power level?

The mages had agreed there was no chance that Maclay could survive. Lilah pricked her finger and touched the bespelled stone. Then she turned on a more mundane signal jammer. Only then did she open the bottom of her desk and reach under the drawer for the one thing she had kept from her mother. The small crucifix went into her inner jacket pocket. Then she pulled out a piece of paper with preprinted jumbled words on it and ran it through the shredder. Only then did she turn off the jammer.

Just as she stood up to head out to the mages there was a knock on her door and a Wolfram and Hart security agent leaned in.

“Take a look if you want,” Lilah said confidently.

“We were concerned for your safety,” he said slipping back into his normal visage.

“Gives me a warm feeling knowing you care,” Lilah said with a smile. “Careful with the waste basket. It’s got a flame spell on it. Don’t get my rug dusty.”


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Tara led the others to an empty lot on the edge of Sunnydale’s small downtown near the old park. It was on a slight rise and opened to the park on the east. The edge of the unclaimed land that bordered the sluggish Sunnydale River was encroaching on the abandoned lot. The sad piles of rubble had hardy weeds encircling them. Buffy looked at a piece of scorched concrete.

“What happened here?” she asked. “Was this part of Glory’s cross dimensional light show?”

“Accelerant fire,” Betty said flitting about the pile. “Probably arson. It was smoky and didn’t want to burn.”

“What are you doing?” Dawn asked suddenly.

“Taking my shoes off,” Tara said evenly.

“Is that safe?” Buffy asked sternly.

“I’m about to use a powerful magic book, face a blood path sorcerer, and control dark black magic.” Tara replied. “All of this on a school night when I should be studying. I’m afraid safety isn’t my first concern.”

“Well let’s at least get an area clean for Betty and her mate to do their work,” Dawn insisted.

“Quite so,” Betty agreed.

“I need to find the center,” Tara said distantly. “I’m going to be gone for a few minutes.”

“Where?” Buffy asked quickly.

“Inside me,” Tara replied.

“Without Will?” Buffy asked with worry in her voice.

“I’ve got family here,” Tara smiled. “That’s all I need for this.”

“Okayyy,,,” Buffy answered with a frown.

Tara closed her eyes and began the familiar journey. The first step on the inner path showed her the world she stood on. The choked ley lines and dark pulsing pools of power she could feel so close to the Hellmouth were familiar now. She checked to make sure her barrier against the local contamination was holding and rewove it, tying it to the growing things around her.


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The danger was close. There was so much noise above and spells of binding it could not see the danger, but it felt it and the unease the danger brought. It shivered in it’s almost sleep.


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Miller looked down as the earth moved under his feet. He glanced at the mage who had been binding the Hellmouth for their client.

“Was that seismic activity or sorcery?”

“Both, I think,” the mage replied.


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In the Magic Box Anya heard a loud thump and then another. She looked up at the landing holding the books of dangerous magic as a volume slipped off the bookcase.

“What the hell?”


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“How much room do you need?” Buffy asked the salamander politely.

“Let me see,” Betty mused.

For a handful of seconds Buffy and Dawn watched fire come alive and fly. Both girls found themselves holding their breath as a flaming veil floated above the ground. Then Betty came to stop and looked at her work.

“About that,” she said in a satisfied tone.


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In a kitchen in Devonshire a rune on an ancient jug glowed dimly. The oldest member of the coven looked at it and smiled. Then she headed into her small parlour and coughed gently. Giles gave a snort and looked up, rubbing his eyes.

“Get ready, dear,” she said in her most grandmotherly tone.


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Tara looked to her family nearby and made sure the backlash safeties were in place and then rewove another layer for their safety. Only then did the witch look at them through her magic. Dawn was worried, hopeful and excited as expected. Then Tara looked at Buffy’s aura and froze. The Slayer was only in control by habit and force of will. Guilt and anger, fear and despair were being kept at arms reach only by the barest of margins. By reflex Tara began to reach out but stopped. Instead she looped a separate protection for the thin blonde woman into the life in the river and on its banks. The flowing water added an extra touch. It added little to Buffy’s peace of mind, but it made her much less vulnerable to the mental influences of black magic. Tara added a link from Buffy’s defense to Dawn just in case, though the supernatural manner of her creation had almost become ordinary. Still, Tara felt better with both girls having more protection.

Tara then pulled down a shield and took a quick mental glance at Betty. Even shielded and cautious Tara was nearly knocked senseless by the elemental creature’s radiance in this almost real place. Even so she could tell the salamander was also keeping a stiff upper lip through an internal turmoil that reminded Tara of looking over Willow’s shoulder at...

It was a Saturday and Willow was reviewing her notes for a presentation. Tara draped herself over the redhead’s shoulder but was unexpectedly caught up in the savage beauty of the sun on the monitor.

“Roiling and beautiful,” she’d said. Then she’d nipped gently at Willow’s ear. “It’s like a certain redhaired girl I know.”


“Tara?” Buffy said.

Tara looked at her friend and knew it was at least the second time her name had been called. The witch looked at the darkening sky and nodded when she saw the upper tip of the moon peer over the hills.

“I’m ready.”




To Be Continued
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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby Darth Pacula » Thu Dec 15, 2005 5:42 am

Dibs! Now to actually read it.

Right then. After a good night's sleep, and a half day of work wrapped off with a Christmas lunch, lets see if I can dredge up anything coherent in the way of feedback.

First off, I hope the earlier suckage of real life has at least slackened off a tad. It's no fun when it seems the world is out to get you.

I liked the way that you distinguished the difference between Willow and the other captive phantoms, in that she was better able to resist fading because of her love for Tara. This line just so eloquently summed up the basic differences between their core philosophies.

“She’s my girl,” Willow said proudly. “And she’s got my friends with her. Didn’t you guys ever try love and friends?”

There was no answer beyond a distant grumble.


I see these W&H magic types are still underestimating Tara. Boy, are they in for one heck of a surprise. Oh, and the Orb Committee of the vengeance demons just cracked me up. I don't know why, but it just conjured up images of the faculty of Unseen University from the Discworld.

Okay, Xander really seems to be falling apart now, and what the heck kind of info did he spill to that suit? Somehow, I don't think he's going to find the answers he seeks at the bottom of a bottle either, especially given his family history.

That was a nice little interlude with Lilah too, expanding upon the tidbits about her private life and the situation with her mother that was briefly mentioned in Angel.

And what the heck is this 'Sleeping thing'? The book? Some kind of apocalyptic beastie slumbering restlessly beneath Sunnyhell? Or something else entirely.

My, how the plot pot does boil over.

Cheers, Jixer. Have a grand day.

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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby AntigoneUnbound » Thu Dec 15, 2005 7:42 am

Jixer, this is just a really well-done update. I can see the threads coming together, all these forces and interests, new and ancient, roiling together and coming to their climax in the impending darkness. Perhaps I should say a climax, for who knows what might happen next, although I think "climax" has a pretty singular meaning so maybe I should have chosen a different word but I think I'm digressing.

That was a marvellous little glance into Lilah's mind, by the way. I always found her to be a fascinating character, and that quick trip down maternal memory lane was intriguing.

Xander--oh, little man-boy, what did you do? There's a fantastic line in "Terms of Endearment" when Shirley MacLaine tells Jeff Daniels, "You've always known your weaknesses, Flap. Please don't lose that quality now when you need it most." Xander always feels to me as though he wants to be more than he is and at his worst or most vulnerable he plows on recklessly--not in bravery, but in pseudo-knowledge of skills he doesn't have. You set it up wonderfully, too--he took a long pull on his beer...Then you end that section, and you just know that there will be another pull, and another one after that...

Such a primal scene to start out with: people pulling at Willow, trying to tug her away, and to wrap up by having Tara give a low growl of "Mine..." Very powerful.

I'm not surprised that Buffy's a little vulnerable, and I really liked how you wrote that entire scene. I think magic can be tough to write realistically and you do a great job.

I'm really enjoying this, Jix!
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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby jixer » Sat Dec 17, 2005 12:27 am

Hello Kittens-


Sometimes my muse just doesn't let up. My thanks to a very understanding wife who let me hog the computer for the last few days.

Darth Pacula- My real life issues aren't THAT big. Nothing like working in a hospital to give you a slap upside the head when self pity shows up.

Surprises will abound in the next chapter of this fanfic gumbo, and not just for the W&H staff.

I'm finding Lilah interesting to use while Xander is a challenge because quite frankly S-6 really broke off the good bits. I'll see what I can do.

The sleeping thing will be revealed in the next chapter. (see below)

AntigoneUnbound- Oh dear, Mary, loaded words! I have another one to add to my list.

I really wish we knew more about Lilah, so I'm exploring her just a bit here. I'll try to keep her interesting.

Xander. Sigh. I like the way you describe his mindset because that was S-6 Xander. What the heck happened over that summer between S5 and 6? Paint fumes in the writers lounge? More likely a hubris outbreak of epic proportions. Oh well.

Magic has been a challenge to write. I hope my magic keeps measuring up. You know, that doesn't exactly read right...


My thanks for everyone who stopped by,


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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby jixer » Sat Dec 17, 2005 12:33 am

Chapter Eight







Tara looked at the moon now moving with slow majesty into view over the low hills to the east. As the line between dark and light became visible she gave a brief touch to her family and let herself feel the earth under her. She looked into the world between and took in a deep breath of the evening air. She unwrapped The True Path Of Magic and opened it to the spell that held Willow’s soul and essence captive.

“Douglas Ambrose Wilson, I name you and claim what you claimed!” she called out in the gathering twilight and the place between worlds.


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Buffy waited with the axe shifting in her grasp. On any other night she would be getting off work and preparing for patrol. Tonight she waited and for the first time realized how much beauty waited in small unknown places. She heard the river’s slowing waters and knew that as pretty and fragrant as the night was the land needed one more good rain to be ready for the dry summer ahead. Still, the moment was wonderful, and in it’s wonder there was pain because her best friend wasn’t there to share it. Buffy looked at Dawn and knew somehow her sister was feeling the same thing. Then Tara took a breath and the Slayer was back in control, waiting for a battle she did not fully understand.


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Warren Meers was growing bored with waiting for the Slayer or the witch to find him and more importantly the magic filled backpack that would destroy them. He wanted to see the pack in action but the burden was dulling his enthusiasm. He was about to head for the Bronze when the packstraps suddenly tightened on him.

“What the fuck?” Warren bleated as he pulled uselessly at the straps.


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“What the fuck!?!" Rack roared as he felt the pull on his magics.

There was a flare as the salamander he’d caught was simply gone.


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Tara wove her hands in the air as she called forth a bubble of protection around the salamander. She could feel the creature coming awake as she pulled the fire elemental free of Rack’s spell and shattered the enchantment. She pushed it quickly but gently towards Betty’s familiar heat.


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“Betty!” a tenor voice that seemed young and strong sang in the clearing.

Buffy saw two balls of fire come together in a shower of sparks.

“Follow my lead, love!” Betty said urgently.

Buffy’s axe stopped moving as she gaped at the weave of fire danced into being.


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Tara felt the book in her grasp vibrate with excitement as she touched the ensorceled page.

“I command this spell broken and what was and is and always shall be mine come to me,” Tara read aloud. “The others await my pleasure here.”

Tara heard untold glass vessels shatter in the nether space near her.


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Rack leapt into the hot tub for he had read what happened when a salamander is taken. The flames gave a red light to the water that closed over him as fire filled his inner sanctum. Then there was another wave of red but this one was not as bright. Rack felt the water grow chill all at once.


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One moment Willow had heard Tara’s voice call out “Douglas Ambrose Wilson” and the next there had been an earthquake, or rather a cell quake she corrected herself. The sluggish salamander had leapt gracefully into the air on a pillar of white flame that had filled the space around it. She felt a surge of disappointment as Rack leapt into the hot tub. That was all the time she had for observation because she was falling backwards into a cloud of red shards. Then she felt Tara’s hands all over her. She was quite happy when the world went black.


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“We’ve got it!” a senior mage called out in the work room of Wolfram and Hart. “We’ve-WHAT THE FUCK?”

Lilah felt herself and everyone else in the room come off the floor for a moment and then become still like they had been frozen in place.

“Break the binding spell!” screamed the ancient mage through a now out of place smile. “It’s the other copy! BREAK THE DAMN BINDING SPELL!!”


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For a heartbeat Tara felt Willow in her hands. She looked to Betty, not daring to blink even in the glare of paired salamanders on this plane.

“We take what you offer freely,” Betty intoned gravely. “I and mine shall guard and bring it forth. So do we swear by the Oldest Fire.”

Then Willow was gone but something was still in Tara’s hands. She opened them to see the doll’s eye crystal catch the reflected primal fire of the salamanders.


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Rack flinched at the cold. He felt his lair grind into the real world to an accompaniment of wooden groans and snaps. The blood-mage flinched and saw his own blood on his palm where a tiny sliver of red crystal had cut him. He stared at it and felt a twinge as arthritis flared in his other hand. Only as his blood fell into the water did he feel panic. Rack tried to get out of the tub but he felt arms clasp him. He screamed as nymphs returned to nixies, their terrible teeth bright in obscene parodies of smiles.

“Come on, lover!” One half screamed, half sobbed.

“You know you like it this way!” just screamed the other in rage.

Then there was a froth and they dragged the one who had enslaved them and used them so cruelly far deeper than the the tub could possibly have gone.


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Tara opened her eyes entirely in the physical world. Behind her hundreds of voices promised everything from power to the basest of vices. Even here she could feel them for they were in her charge, but grounded in the world of green and growing things she controlled them even as two books whirled about each other drawing on some power that had made her skin crawl. She saw the cocoon of light in the gathering twilight and felt her heart fill with true hope.

There was a loud thump in front of her. Tara looked down to see one of the volumes from the Magic Box she had looked through for answers and rejected just a day ago. Another fell almost at her feet, but this one had a price tag on it.

“What’s going on?” Anya snapped as she hurried into the lot. “What are you doing with my stock? And what’s that sneaky flying amphibian doing?”

“Do be quiet, mortal,” D’Hoffryn said imperiously. “This is more important than your merchant’s issues.” Then the Vengeance Demon and his party bowed as one to Tara. “Miss Maclay, we have something for you.”


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The sorceress of the Black Griffon Society smiled with the easy confidence she had felt moments ago as people moved around her without seeing either her or her immobile party. At least her enchantment of concealment and avoidance was working even if her body wasn’t. All of the mages and lawyers with her were almost inside the hospital so the flow pattern change would not gather too much attention for the short time. She had been taught by cruel masters the cost of panic so she was carefully going through various spells of strictly mental power to free herself. As she took a brief rest between these efforts she roundly cursed the fools on the book team who were no doubt at fault.


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The ancient mage also felt no panic as he struggled against a flow of power he could not contain. He felt rage. He had foregone the things the weak needed like family or the illusion men called love. He had given that up in order to have the power never to be hurt, never to be beaten. Now everything he had made for himself was being pulled slowly away and his anger gave him strength. Somehow the little Wiccan had lucked out and found an eddy in the flows of magic to hide in. But even rivers of magic could be beaten. All he had to do was break her shield point.

“Earth mage!” one of his colleagues grunted. “She must be an earth mage!”

“Impossible!” the oldest sorcerer snarled. “That path is weakness!”

“What if she’s tied to the earth?” another asked in panic. “She could be an earth magic adept!”

Even in his circumstances the oldest mage cackled. “An adept at bunny-petting? A power in the field of flower growing? Get a grip, man! Adepts are power itself, earth mages are peasants!”

“The two poles of magic are in a repeating pattern!” one of the youngest mages called out against the draining flow of magic.

“Izzat good?” Lilah asked with all her strength. Next time I get a wizard to read the contract too, she fumed internally.

“A pattern can be broken,” the oldest said serenely. “I see it. On my mark we-WHAT THE HELL?!?”


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“Miss Maclay,” declared with a broad smile. “I have the honor to offer you the Orb of Petbe.”

The Senior Vengeance Demon opened a small chest of inlaid fine woods. A plain round ball of agate lifted of its own volition. It seemed to merely float towards Tara. The witch looked at Buffy for help but the Slayer was staring transfixed as the weave of moving light took on a slim female shape.

For a split second Tara too took her sight from the agate sphere. Then it touched her.

COMMAND ME! echoed in Tara’s mind.


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Xander stared as a magic book from the bad book section began to flap it’s covers and took off like a clumsy pigeon for the back of the Magic Box. He followed it, hoping some clever words would come to him when he saw Anya. It wasn’t hard to follow the book through the broken window over the back door, or rather it shouldn’t have been. Xander found himself puffing though before he went three blocks. Suddenly ahead of him lightning flashed. He looked up at a cloud that suddenly formed overhead.

“Not good,” he wheezed. Then he hurried after the book.



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COMMAND ME! the Orb demanded again.

Show me- Tara started.

Image after image ripped into Tara’s mind. Villages burned, then cities. Every kind of torture she had ever heard of and many more besides played out before her. Parents watched their children die screaming. Rape of every stripe seared her. Tara turned away.

NO! the inhuman thing in her mind cried. COMMAND ME!

The Orb lifted and Tara’s feet left the ground.

IN THE PAST YOU HAVE WISHED FOR VENGEANCE!

Tara heard her mother crying.


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Donald Maclay yawned. His father simply glared at the television as the game wore down. Suddenly both coughed on air now too thick to breathe. For a long moment their chests heaved uselessly. Then it passed and both shook and turned away from the other to hide their fear.


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Tara pulled back from the nearly killing scene in front of her. Off balance in both worlds she struggled upright in one. At the last second she realized she was between the true forms of The True Path Of Magic. Then an atonal eldritch choir filled her senses with begging as they pleaded to be used. Tara started to push them away but the books drew close and she touched them. A bolt of green fire leapt from book to book across her outstretched arms. As Tara staggered in the shadow world of magic the spells swarmed over her.


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Betty felt the wave of raw power slam into her shields but the life she was bringing forth was unharmed as she and her mate began the close part of the dance of life bringing. For a time out of knowing she and her love moved to the secret beat of fire, burning away the emptiness that had filled her for too long.


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It was a clear night and Bruce Larson was looking for the wreck that had been phoned in to the station when his helicopter gave a lurch and the tone of his rotors took on an ominous whine. He struggled with the craft with all thoughts of good news footage gone from his mind as his radio suddenly crackled to life.

“All air traffic, be advised we have a storm watch in affect for the greater Southern California region.”

Bruce glanced over just in time to see a distant flare of lightning in the north echoed by one almost at the heart of LA. Locally he could see a pillar of whirling clouds beginning to fill the sky.

“What the fuck?” he yelped.


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“We call you, Petbe,” D’Hoffryn chanted. “Fill our talismans again with power-”

He choked as his amulet stood out on the end of its chain at an upward angle. Then lightning struck the amulets and illuminated the scene of Tara Maclay flying in the center of a dark cloud, now spinning with green and purple lightning flickering on it’s edges.

Anya let out a shriek at the nearby strike of electric destruction.

“This is who you went to instead of me?” Tara roared from the base of the storm. “I called you, Anya! I left so many messages I filled up your system! I waited on your doorstep until daybreak and you never even thought of calling me!”

Anya was slammed into Tara’s worry-filled memories. She felt the cold hallway, the questioning glances, the bone tired realization the night she had spent in a maid of honor’s dress had been superfluous to the woman she had thought of as her friend.

“It was a wonderful choice,” Tara chuckled grimly.

D’Hoffryn looked up at an aide. “Well?” the senior demon asked curtly.

“We found him, sir,” the aide replied. “He’s ready and eager to have his own vengeance on Anya.”

“Get to it,” D’Hoffryn said with a dismissive wave. “I have important matters to consider.”

The young demon left and D’Hoffryn picked up his putter.


Anya blinked away the images as another strike on the collected Vengeance Demons shattered their chains and impossibly drew back the medallions into the center of the storm. The next flare within the cloud was actinic and now Anya could see Tara’s hair was raven black in the unnatural wind.


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Buffy wondered if the wind would bring rain in the back of her mind. For the moment all she could see was Willow had been made almost whole. The axe lay forgotten at her feet as she pulled out Willow’s favorite top.


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“EEEP!” Dawn squeaked at the close-by thunder echoing in her ears. She glanced at Tara hovering off the ground in the storm and wondered if she should run, cry, or pee. She could swear she was seeing books flying into the storm. Dawn looked to Buffy and saw her sister fumbling for Willow’s clothes.

If Buffy’s not worried I can handle it, Dawn thought with new if shaky resolve. Then she arranged the blanket under the glowing Willow figure hanging in the salamanders’ fiery tracery and pulled out a long warm skirt. She kept her head down and concentrated on getting ready for Willow.


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There was a collective scream in the work room as the north wall gave a bass groan and fell away. Paper filled the night sky as briefs and forms mimicked leaves in a gale. Lilah felt her feet leave the floor and begin to slip towards the darkness. She fought to move but she was as helpless as the others.

“Not like this!” growled the oldest mage. “Not like this!”


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The man who called himself Brian Palmer looked over his dinner party. Fourteen girls of fourteen years struggled against their bonds. Thirteen other vampires chatted and took tiny drops from small cuts on the girls’ cheeks. They were bidding for the delicious creature with AB Negative blood when Brian felt suddenly hot. He looked at the ward he had acquired in a complex deal with a minor Power brokered by his law firm. As he watched it crumbled. Then one of his guests rudely burst into flaming dust. Before he could move it got very, very hot.


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Warren Meers was almost sobbing in fear. He was being dragged backwards towards a storm of almost pure blackness relieved only by lightning he knew didn’t belong outside of nightmares. He pulled and twisted even more against the pack he wore.


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Tara struggled to keep them off her. Each breath was filled with corruption and fear. She pushed against them and flailed to find her balance. Each time she punched something with her right fist her hand hurt and that was important-

“Any woman at all, for a moment or a night or a hundred years,” suddenly filled her ears like soft honey as a succubus pleaded with her.

Tara’s right hand burned as she hit the succubus.


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“NO!” Anya screamed in panic as a bolt of lightning seemed to slip off a tree and hit the earth near her. Suddenly she was covered by something familiar. Anya looked up and saw Xander and knew he was almost as frightened as she was.

“Leave her alone!” Xander yelled at Tara.

Tara looked at him, or rather something with pale skin and dark hair wearing Tara’s face.

“Having a ‘Lost Weekday’ are we?” Tara laughed cruelly. “Let’s see just how you’ve been spending your time.”

Xander saw the conversation he’d had with Miller. The suit had been sipping his drink and filling Xander’s glass. When Xander was snoring on the couch Miller left with Tara’s name, birthday, and classes.

“And how did you get this spiffy new job?” Tara asked brightly.

“I think we’ll be calling you, Mr. Harris,” the construction boss said with a smile as he stood up. “You might as well finish that Scotch,” he said with a wink. “That’s the good stuff. Get used to it, foreman.”

Xander saw himself smile broadly and follow the man’s advice.

Now he saw the man leave and get into a limo. Miller glanced up from a pile of papers. The boss smiled.

“He may be a big part of whatever group runs with the Slayer, but he’s a junior lush if I ever saw one,” the boss smiled.

“Any questions?” Miller asked pointedly.

“After I dangled a foreman’s job in front of a guy barely a journeyman?” the boss chuckled. “He wants to be a big man. As long as he gets the title he’ll build a fucking feeding ramp for your big ugly.”

“We at Wolfram and Hart are undertaking this project of a new high school because we believe in families,” Miller said evenly. “That’s why the children’s choir will be there at the opening ceremony.”


“You really are your daddy’s boy,” Tara laughed.


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Tara felt her stomach churn. She couldn’t have said that! Not to Xander!

COMMAND ME OR FREE ME! OTHERS WILL TAKE MY OFFER!

Tara saw the world through hate-filled eyes. Good was your own. Evil was everything else, and anything was allowed against evil.

Anything.


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“Tara,” Giles said with a forceful calm he didn’t feel, especially not after hearing one of the witches creating his now fading portal mutter “oh shit”.

Lightning filled the sky as Tara looked down at him.

“Giles, you brought a present,” she laughed. “It’s almost as good as the one you gave Buffy when you left.”

“Tara,” Giles began sternly.

“Let me show you,” Tara said sweetly.

“Ready?” the eldest witch asked.

“We’ve been ready,” another replied. “Good God, do you know Mary Tolliver’s little tramp of a daughter is sleeping with a fucking chink? She may even be having a half breed little monster by the poxy slant.”

“Things must be returned to their proper place,” the oldest intoned. “I swear if I see one more Paki wearing things above his station I’m going to vomit.”

“I’ll finally be able to shop at Harrod’s again,” her second in command chuckled. “All we have to do is get back what’s ours from Smith’s damn book to make sure the right people get back into power. Do we have the list of new MPs from both parties that are going to be elected afterward?”

“And a list of those to enforce the future laws,” the oldest smiled. “Pax Britannia will set the world aright one way or the other.”


“Now the spell itself is really nasty,” Tara said yanking it out of Giles and casting it up.

Giles thought it looked like a serpent of red before a lightning bolt shattered it. Then Tara just looked at him and...

Buffy was crying, confessing to things that turned his stomach as Tara tried to find the words to ease the pain.

Giles knelt on the ground and shook his head helplessly.

“I didn’t know,” he said softly.

“You didn’t want to know,” Tara said evenly.


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In Devonshire an ancient jug glowed brightly and imploded in a cloud of hot dust. After a second the oldest witch sneezed.

“Twas me I’d have blown us all up,” she said with a shrug. “Stupid gel.”


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WHY HOLD BACK? SHOULD YOU NOT DESTROY EVIL?

“I...I...” Tara fought for words as the spells became frenzied.


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Lilah saw the eyes of the oldest mage flick around helplessly and felt her heart skip a beat.

“No!” begged another. “We can’t have burned through it all! There must be some magic we can get from London or Cairo!”

They’ll cut us off, Lilah realized. We’re expendable assets of the firm.

The thought filled her with anger.


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D’Hoffryn stopped running and leaned against the swings in the park. He tried to catch his breath. Six middle-aged humans dressed like his senior demons stumbled after him. D’Hoffryn lifted his hand and felt a human face much like the one he had had millennia ago.

“I’m afraid,” he gasped. “That things did not go as well as we had hoped.”


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Betty and her mate came to a stop. Willow appeared from under the last of the flame and settled on the blanket. Buffy pulled the redhead to her and laughed and cried. Betty looked up at the storm above.

“Uh-oh,” she muttered.


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Dawn blinked back her own tears as she covered Willow from the waist down with the skirt. She looked up to see Buffy cradling Willow and babbling about Spike and friendship and being wrong and sorry and never, ever going away again.

“Buffy!” Dawn yelled. “Get her covered!”

Buffy threw Willow’s top over the redhead while keeping an arm on her. Suddenly Buffy looked up at the storm.

“Oh no,” she whispered.


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“What’s happening?” Andrew yelled as the roar over the jail became louder.

“How should I know?” Jonathan said as he crawled under a bunk.

“What’s happening?” Andrew repeated shrilly as he began to dart about the small space. “What’s happening!

“Shut up!” Jonathan shouted.

“I’ve got get out of here!” Andrew screeched as his moments became more frenzied. “I’VE GOT TO GET OUT OF H-”

There was a resounding clang as Andrew tripped and fell into the bars. He slid unconscious to the floor.

“I thought he’d never shut up,” Jonathan muttered.


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Dr. Georgia Watson gazed at the drawing. In the middle the figure that had had blue eyes looked out with eyes of black flint. Her hair was black and tiny, fine marker drawn lines crept into her face. There were two salamanders now with small smiles. The nice girls and the salamanders were around the red haired girl who was still unhappy. The man with glasses, a blonde girl, and the lonely man were all looking on with tears and open, frightened mouths.

But above the now black-eyed girl flew in a green and purple crayon whirlwind with books that looked almost like vultures. Two of the books, larger than the rest, were in place to be eyes with a pale dot between them. Below seven green-yellow dots turned down in a frown.

The doctor gave a start and then just shook her head. It was only the wind against the window.


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Willow could feel Buffy hold her and heard Dawn somewhere nearby. She tried to ask Buffy where Tara was. Willow couldn’t feel her. Maybe this was a dream and Tara wasn’t here. No! Tara had to be here.

Willow called out for her love but her dry throat made no sound.


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Dawn saw Willow look around and saw the redhead’s mouth move silently. The teen grabbed the bottle of water and eased it to Willow’s lips. The witch took a drink and coughed slightly. Suddenly Dawn heard something like giant bees buzzing and felt her hair stand up. She flattened Willow and then Dawn covered her.

The world got bright.


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Betty’s mate threw himself over the two humans and felt the million plus degrees of the lightning strike.

“Now that’s refreshing!” he laughed.

“Daft lizard!” Betty snapped. Then she looked up at the storm. “Follow me!” Betty called as she flew into the storm.

You fly into a magic lightning storm and I’m a daft lizard?”


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“Tara!” Willow said in less than a whisper.


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Tara shoved all of the almost living spells away at once. She opened her right hand and saw the dolls eye crystal glowing softly.

“Tara!” Betty called out nearby. “It’s after your mate!”

Tara closed her hand over the crystal again.

“I command thee!”


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Willow looked up and saw Tara descend from the clouds, her hair standing away from her face in an ebony nimbus. Willow tried to stand.

DO YOU COMMAND? the storm thundered.

Tara looked at the three women. Behind them the salamanders landed.

“Take care of her,” Tara said tiredly.

DO YOU COMMAND? the storm demanded.

“I command thee!” Tara called out.

“And us?” a hundred whispers demanded.

“I command thee!” Tara cried out raising her right hand.

YES! the night itself screamed.

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Willow looked over at Tara and knew her lover was in pain. Willow tried to stand up to get to Tara. An arm with the strength of iron stopped her. Willow was about to complain about the unfairness of Buffy using her strength when Willow realized it was Dawn’s arm that held her. Willow looked at Tara and saw black where blue eyes should be and tiny black veins beginning to spread across Tara’s strained face.


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Tara touched what she had claimed and held it. She held them until her very soul felt like it was being bathed in acid. Ancient powers, demons, blood filled spells hurt but when she saw the things that had been good but had failed their path her own resolve almost failed.

COMMAND US IF YOU DARE

Tara looked into the darkness that surrounded her in place and saw the eager, predatory eyes staring at her.

“I can command you,” Tara said as she gripped the crystal in her hand.


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“I CAN COMMAND YOU” echoed through the storm. All of the Scoobies stared as a bolt of lightning started at the witch’s feet and swept up through the clouds. Then because this lightning was unique it leapt from the top of the storm to create an impossible sprite that carried to the very edge of space. The thunder was beyond hearing as it shook the Scoobies to their knees. Betty threw a protective forelimb over her mate.

“Careful, baby,” Willow said with a worried frown.


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Tara turned to face the Hellmouth in the distance, the lights of the construction site marking its location.


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Panic filled the waking entity. It was no nightmare. The thing that had bothered it’s repose for almost a thousand nights was now about to strike while it was open and helpless.


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“YOUR COMMAND?” scores of eager voices begged as Tara took a deep breath.

“I COMMAND THEE BE THEE GONE FROM THIS PLANE AND NEVER RETURN!!” Tara howled as she brought her right hand down into her left.

The dolls eye crystal bested the sun in radiance for a single heartbeat. The storm screamed but it was already fading as it swept down towards the gaping Hellmouth. Just over the tallest trees and buildings the clouds rushed on, an unholy cyclone that could only touch the earth in one place.


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Every thunderstorm Miller had ever seen exploded around him. His bladder proved it could still function even if he and the mage from the firm were immobile. Then he and the mage were surrounded by the frame work of the building as it collapsed in the teeth of the winds. He flailed as he fell and found out he could now move.


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Warren Meers’ hands were aching with his efforts to escape his pack. Then he was picked up and began to fly. All around him things with claws and fangs tried to catch him to slow down their own unwilling flight. Warren screamed and twisted and screamed again when his efforts wrenched his shoulder. But in his pain he bought his freedom. He was free of the pack for the rest of his life, which lasted for the length of time it took him to fall just over one hundred and ten meters to land on the Wal-Mart parking lot in an empty handicapped space.


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Lilah felt herself pulled along with her staff out of the building with a sudden jerk. Now they could move again for the good it did. They were swept upward and Lilah felt the air grow cold and her mind less clear. Then they began to drop like ungainly falcons in a stoop. Lilah could make out the path of the clouds before her. They were in disappearing into an impossibly small space ringed with arcs of lightning. Lilah fought vertigo and cold to grab the crucifix in her hand.

She is not going to die in some old-age flophouse! the lawyer thought with sudden anger.

Then she was passing the lip of the hole. Lilah held out the base of the crucifix and felt it dig into the side. She held on as an impossible roar filled her ears.


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It would survive! It had to! It was the First! It would hold on forever if need be...

Then there was a line of pure fiery pain across it’s skin. It lost the fragile hold it had and fell forever.


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Lilah came to a stop as a scream that overcame the roar of the winds swept past her and then faded as swiftly as it started.


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Buffy heard a fading scream that lifted her heart more than she could ever say. She lifted her head and answered it with a triumphant yell.


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Across all the area a thousand miles from Sunnydale buildings collapsed and important people vanished or changed in impossible ways as things long delayed came due. Beyond the failing of things bought with blood and death another evil was paid for as vampires flared with white light leaving not even dust and ash behind.


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Angel staggered, suddenly weak and helpless. Cordelia saw him fall and headed towards him only to feel weakness wash over her as well. She slipped to the floor and closed her eyes.

Connor watched them fall. He carefully lifted Cordelia and placed her on a couch in the lobby. Then he looked down at the thing that was supposedly his father. He smiled and hurried to the stash the black man kept nearby. He returned with a liter of holy water.

“Get up, Dad,” Connor said as he upended the bottle.

The boy’s mouth dropped open as the skin where the water had fallen became more ruddy. He reached down and a second later leapt back trembling when he touched warm skin and felt a pulse.


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Tara stood under the storm as it passed. Willow could feel the effort it took to control the frightened, angry magics passing overhead. Next to her Buffy sprang up and seized the axe.

“There’s nothing to fight,” Willow said quickly.

Buffy saw Tara go to her knees but hold her hands in position.

“She needs help,” Buffy said, setting the axe back down carefully.


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Tara felt like she would never be clean again. Her arms shook in agony as she kept her hands tightly in the ‘mortar and pestle’ position. Then she felt hands on hers. Tara looked up to see Buffy holding her hands in position. Sweat began to bead and run on the blonde Slayer’s face when Xander knelt beside the Slayer with Anya by his side.

“I’ve got her, Buff,” he said raggedly.

We’ve got her,” Anya corrected.

“What she said,” Xander added.

Buffy let go and the other two supported Tara’s grip as the winds lessened slightly above them. Almost instantly both Scoobies began to struggle but they held on for long seconds. Dawn knelt by them and set the water bottle down next to Xander.

“Don’t get it too icky,” she warned as the teen and Giles took hold for the last moments of the storm.

Finally Tara let her hands relax and leaned back to see the moon barely higher in the clear sky with the first stars of the night in her train. Giles and Dawn sagged back. Then Tara felt the close presence of the other part of her. Tara dropped her face and let her now black hair become curtain of purest jet.

“Tara,” Willow said gently kneeling in front of her lover.

“No,” Tara whispered. “Please, love, not now.”

“Then when?” Willow asked in plaintively.

“When my eyes aren’t so dark,” Tara said tightly. “It will be past then.”

There was a pure soft white light that increased in brightness as the salamanders drifted to either side of the witches. Willow gently lifted Tara’s face and brushed back the ebony locks to meet her love’s eyes. Tara saw Willow smile.

“I’ve seen them a darker blue,” the redhead whispered.

Tara’s face lit up with a sudden hope. She reached hesitantly for Willow’s cheek. Then she began to cry and both witches embraced under the light of the salamanders’ dance.


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To Be Continued
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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby lottagay » Sat Dec 17, 2005 11:39 am

Excellant update I look forward to reading more. Happy holidays to all.
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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby Alcy » Mon Dec 19, 2005 3:01 am

Hey Jixer,
I am so totally blown away by this chapter! Although it's almost 11pm and I have to go to work tomorrow...so shame on you for keeping me up!
I'll leave some more coherant feedback when I'm awake, ie: when I'm actually at work and getting paid to read wonderful fics!! Ahh, gotta love the festive season, no one cares about work!

Anyway, you know how much I love exploring the idea of dark magick corruption and seeing it in Tara was both powerful and incredibly scary. The fact that it is so overwhelming even someone like Tara cannot remain good in the face of it...but she is strong enough to come back from it. Can't wait for the next chapter, :peace

Cheers!
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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby AntigoneUnbound » Mon Dec 19, 2005 6:34 am

Jixer--What an absolutely incredible chapter! This was so evocative, so powerful...You had an unbelievably complicated plot and you made it believable.What I loved most was that you could have just told the story but you made us feel it, and the journey was so, so powerful. I'm amazed that you managed to keep all of the threads up to date and cogent, internally meaningful. We could see the terror and the agony of creatures on the edge of the abyss. I loved reading all of it, but Warren's death was particularly satisfying and I don't care if that sounds mean. There it is. He breaks free--only to fall into a Wal-Mart handicapped space? That's just too beautiful for words. I also love the fact that in the midst of all this sound and fury (that signified a great deal indeed), Andrew was felled by his own clumsiness. Heh!

The description of Tara's temptation was simply wonderful. We could hear those voices, just crying out to be used. (I'm not all that much into power, but the succubus would have been hard to turn down...) She teeters on the edge, and we fear she's gone over that edge...And then she pulls out her last reserve of strength and flings temptation away.

This whole chapter was a delight to read, Jixer. I'm glad the muse pestered you so ceaselessly, b/c we get the spoils!

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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby umgaynow » Mon Dec 19, 2005 10:53 am

Lips moving but no sound coming out

um...wow...that was...um...amazing...yeah...wow
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Re: Dance Of The Salamander

Postby Darth Pacula » Wed Dec 21, 2005 2:04 am

G'day, Jixer.

Well, I'm afraid I don't have long, because I'm leaving for my parents place tommorrow, and I still have to pack, not to mention wrap all of my christmas presents.

So I will have to keep this short: whoa nelly! That was explosive! Props to your tenacious muse.

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