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Something To Mend For

Postby quirked_out » Wed May 24, 2006 7:33 pm

Title: Something To Mend For
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Disclaimer: I don’t anything, ‘cept all the books that my girl wants me to throw out… Never Surrender! Remember feed back is helpful, I’ve been toying with this idea for over a year.
Summary: Life throws the Scoobies a few surprises. Maeve and Jesse just don’t want to get into trouble when they make it back.




Maeve ran as quickly as her legs could carry her, Jesse at her side, taking much longer strides. If she had the time she would have cursed her vertically challenged genes, but there was green glowy light coming after them and she really didn’t have time to be voicing her disappointment in her genetic make-up.

Jesse threw a look at his lifelong friend as she began to lag behind. “C’mon Mae, we have to keep going.”

Maeve huffed tiredly weaving around the trees. “I’m trying-” She tripped, taking Jesse with her, only instead of hitting a dirt floor they landed with a thud on a beige carpet. Jesse had put on a lot of weight since the last time he had been sprawled on top of her. The last time being the final ever game of Kung Fu Masters played when they were five.

While the carpet took the brunt of their fall it still hurt, or at least it hurt Maeve, Jesse had his own Wicca cushion. “Oof, Jess get off, you’re like, uber heavy.” Jesse did as requested and pulled his friend up. Both finally settled themselves as best as they could before taking a look around and finding a startled Tara standing behind a chair.

“Mama?”

“M-m-mama?” Tara asked weakly, startled by the term of endearment. She got her first good look at them. The boy must have been at least 6’2. He had brownish hair and deep honey eyes, but he was muscular. Like… Xander. The girl…

Tara’s breath was stolen from her as she locked eyes with the girl’s; they were the exact same shade as Willow’s. She also had Willow’s high cheekbones, and her hair was the same brilliant red. If she hadn’t had those blue streaks it would have been like looking at a live photograph of her former lover as a teenager. Only she was a little taller and her nose reminded Tara of her own.

“Mama, what are you doing here? Wait, what am I doing here? Wait, where is here? Why do you look like those pictures from college- Oh Crap! Did we just pop out of a green glowy thing?”

*

“Oh this is not good. We’re going to be in so much trouble when we get home an-and Mom is going to kill me when she finds out I messed with the time stream, that’s like Scooby rule number four don’t mess with alternate universes and/or time streams. O-or is that rule number six? Doesn’t matter, I’m still going to be dead and-”

“Breathe Mae!” Jesse yelled as he saw his friend near hysteria.

Tara blinked. It had been as bad as Willow on one of her caffeine highs. “I’m your mom?” she asked again.

“Well, yeah… and I shouldn’t have just told you that. It’s all ‘Hi I’m Maeve, your daughter.’ Which is like, mondo surprising.”

“Kind of, I mean you,” Tara paused “you know I’m gay. Right?”

Maeve tucked a strand of hair behind her ear, a nervous gesture that Tara found herself unconsciously mirroring. “Well duh! You gave me this talk when I was five, and Auntie Dawnie gave me the whole you have two mommies speech way before that. Oh, and you kissing Mom? Kind of a give away.”

“Oh.”

Tara decided that then would be a nice time to recoup her exhausted mind, she took a deep breath and passed out.

Jesse bit his lip and looked between his honorary aunt on the floor and his friend. With a finesse that was partially inherited, he scratched the back of his head and stated the obvious. “I think we broke her, Mae.”

*

Tara slowly became aware of soft voices around her, “What are we gonna do Jess? Rowan is so gonna tell on us, we weren’t even supposed to be out there.”

“We’ll get through this, we always do. Remember when you accidentally turned yourself invisible to get out of the state gym test? We fixed that, didn’t we? ”

There was a rustle of cloth and when Tara cracked her eyes open she saw her… daughter wrapped in the tall boy’s embrace. Maeve sniffed into his chest and tightened her grip. “I just… shouldn’t I be setting a better example? For all we know, she’s corralled Joyce, Le, and Li into a slay-fest to look for us.”

Jesse rolled his eyes, “ Row isn’t little anymore. She can handle stuff, at least if she’s anything like her big sister. Besides, if I’m right, they would be busting heads without any pushing from Row. ” Maeve gave a watery giggle, nearly jumping out of her friend’s embrace as she saw Tara was wide-awake.

“Mama, we were just-”

“You have a little sister?” Tara asked; her brow furrowed in curiosity.

Maeve blinked at the unexpected question. “Um, yeah. A year and two months younger.”

Tara breathed deeply and sat up on her couch, which she had somehow been put on. She had a family. The one thing she had wanted growing up was a loving family, not the harsh and cold people that she had lived with. Until Willow, her mother was the only person that she had loved, that had shown her love in return. “Um, if you don’t mind me asking, what are your names?” She asked, realizing that she didn’t know anything about the teens in her living room.

“Jesse Rupert Harris.” The boy flashed his obviously inherited, goofy grin. Tara’s eyes widened, no wonder he reminded her of Xander. Her eyes drifted to the pair’s still entwined hands; apparently the Harris charm was still going strong.

Tara looked expectantly at her daughter who flashed a familiar quirky smile. “Maeve Relina Rosenberg. Oh, before you ask my little sister’s is Rowan Cecelia Rosenberg.”

The older woman gave a small chuckle, “I’m gonna go out on a limb and say Willow named you.” She paused, “We’re together, I mean Willow and I are-”

“You’re very much together and very much in the world of love.” Maeve confirmed giving her best smile.

Her mother gave a sigh of relief, broaching another topic entirely. “W-why are you here?”

The teens looked to each other. “We can’t really say, I mean it would be really bad if we unintentionally let something leak.” Jesse finally explained. “Plus Aunt Dawnie would be super pissed if she found out we used a portal without her permission, even if we accidentally fell into it.”

Tara was a little overwhelmed. “What I am I supposed to do with you?”

“Maybe help us, or something to that effect.” Maeve suggested. She pushed a hand through her blue-streaked hair and sighed. “Goddess, why can’t anything ever go right? I wish Grandpa was here, he’d know what to do.”

Jesse let out a disbelieving snort, “Oh please, Grandpa would have made that weird clucking sound and lectured us on the evils of rash and half-thought-through decisions.” Maeve merely raised an eyebrow, “Which, okay, we should have listened to…” another pointed glare; “I should have listened to.” He amended. “Still, there’s no way I would want Grandpa here, maybe Aunt Buffy, or Uncle Connor, hell, right now I ‘d be plenty happy to have just the regular Scrappies.”

Tara felt completely lost by all of this, Grandpa? Could they be talking about Giles? When she thought about it Grandpa Giles had a really nice ring to it.

She turned her attention back to the matter at hand as she heard Maeve snort in disbelief. “You just know you’d get into the least trouble with Uncle Connor.”

“Well, yeah.”

Maeve rolled her eyes and turned back to Tara, “Can you believe this guy? We’re stuck in the past and he’s scared of what Grandpa would do to him if he came to rescue us.”

Jesse looked miffed, “It’s reasonable, you never get in trouble like I do.”

“Because I usually have the good sense to stay out of your bone-head ideas.”

“Who was it that wanted to levitate to the top of the bookshelf to get Yennarah Codex and try to have a snow day in June, hmmm? Oh that’s right! You!”

Tara had had enough, “Hey!” Two sets of eyes swiveled to her instantly and oddly enough Tara didn’t want to hide from them, in fact she felt strangely empowered. “You two need to calm down and we need get you back to where you belong, understand?”

Their meek answers of “yes Mama” and “yes Auntie Tara” felt strange but right.

“All right, it’s too late to try to get the gang in one place so we’ll try tomorrow. For now, Jesse, I’ve got one of Xand– your dad’s old shirts and Maeve you can borrow a set of pajamas.” She looked between the two and bit her lip. “The couch is a futon, can I trust you two?”

Maeve’s eyes were huge, “I’m not gonna do any naughty… and…when you’re… when you’re in the next room.” Her face was flushed red, “We, and, the, and so with the no way…” She trailed off as she decided it would be best if she just ceased talking.

Tara shook her head and sighed, things were about to get really interesting, really soon.



Should I continue? Are you interested?
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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby writerfreak » Wed May 24, 2006 7:43 pm

yes, continue, much with the continuing, my interest is piqued now.

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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby MissMaclay89 » Wed May 24, 2006 8:10 pm

OMG I love it!!! Please continue!!!
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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby Willowtree252 » Wed May 24, 2006 8:20 pm

:pinky oh yes more please I love the past and the future thing MORE :kitty
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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby spells42 » Thu May 25, 2006 12:50 am

I hope you continue this fic. I like the time travel concept, and I'm a sucker for stories where W&T have kids. This one has the bonus of featuring college age W&T and also having teenage (and younger?) kids belonging not only to W&T, but also the other Scoobies. (Does Buffy have any??)

Liked the hints at the future roles played in the family dynamics by the Scoobies et al. Also liked the hints at the discoveries that'd been made in terms of their powers, e.g. the green glow they 'fell thru'.

Please do continue.
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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby inlerf » Thu May 25, 2006 2:16 am

love it! :D

but i'm curious why their last names are (only) Rosenberg. (new amendment to gay marriage laws in the future? :O)

oh right, something else: can you add a timeline in your uh, all the notes part. 'cause at first i was like "wtf are jesse and maeve?" and almost didn't read the story.
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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Thu May 25, 2006 5:21 am

Dang! Jesse Harris; I wish I'd thought of that in my own continuity instead of going for the obvious joke of "Nicholas" Harris.

Very intriguing beginning.....


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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby Thianne » Thu May 25, 2006 6:12 am

please continue! i'm loving this and it would be a shame if you left it there. go on, it's great
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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby Boadecia » Thu May 25, 2006 6:22 am

It sounds great so far! please continue! :kgeek
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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby PancakesinBellies » Thu May 25, 2006 6:38 am

Oh, this is good! I really like the interactions between Maeve and Jesse, especially when they seem to forget that Tara's there. And Willow and Tara need to get back together, like NOW, but I can be patient! ;-)
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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby Grayson » Thu May 25, 2006 8:51 am

This is a neat concept. I'm really interested to see what's happened to everyone in the future. I notice there's an Uncle Connor - perhaps he's married to Aunt Dawn. I'm curious about when this is set - season 4? 5? 6?
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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Thu May 25, 2006 12:30 pm

1-I wonder how far from the future they came from;was "Grandpa" killed in action? B/c he could easily stillb e alive age-wise once the Scoobs are in their later 40s or more.

2-Minor nitpick;isn't Rowan usualy a guy's name? (Like anything is either these days, tho. ;-) )

3-Odd how the child of same-gnedered parents can resemble both of them . Probably itneresting tale there.

4-As for MAeve only having Willow 's surname;several writers on thsi board have it that way, Tara abandoning her maiden name because of its unpleasantr associations. (I don't mys elf but several do.)
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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby Emms » Thu May 25, 2006 2:43 pm

This is very very cute so far!! I can't wait to see where you go with this. Mae and Jesse are adorable together. What a good Idea for a story. I really hope you continue this.

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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby WillowRulez » Thu May 25, 2006 3:39 pm

Cool idea! Cant wait for Willow to find out about her daughter(s)... and Xander's and (I presume) Anya's son... cute! So is Connor married to Dawn? :smash They fit!
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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby inlerf » Thu May 25, 2006 10:19 pm

WillowRulez wrote:So is Connor married to Dawn? They fit!


oh my god, their kids will be supremely whiny and shrieky, not to mention arrogant and obstinate (but good looking).
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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby Lonewolf22 » Thu May 25, 2006 11:23 pm

quirked_out: First off YES CONTINUE and Secondly YES I'M INTERESTED. I really like the whole idea of time travel and Tara meeting her daughter, how AWESOME is that, and also meeting Xander's son really cool. It was really funny when Jesse said that he was really worried about what Giles would do, LOL. I really like the names you gave our girls' daughters, what I wanna know is what does Rowan look like? I like the group name that the kids have "The Scrappies", very cool. Grandpa Giles, very nice, it does fit. I can't wait to read more.

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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby willowtarafan » Fri May 26, 2006 7:01 am

you so need to continue its such a great story well done :pray :party
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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby Krokador » Fri May 26, 2006 9:47 am

Wow, sounds interesting already :) I like the names, and I'm very intrigued by where you're gonna bring this.

Please conitnue?
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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby quirked_out » Fri Jun 16, 2006 8:46 pm

Author’s Note: I’m so sorry for being away for so long. Real life decided to rear it’s ugly head in the form of six finals. At the very least I aced my French and Art class… Part 2 of the math final is coming up but I decided I owed everyone a short update at the very least. I promise to try and up date more regularly. Thanks for every bit of feedback.

[center]In Which Maeve and Jesse Live Their Routines[/center]

In the dark of her mother’s living room Maeve stared at the popcorn ceiling, watching as the pattern re-arranged and shifted if she stared at it for too long. Jesse slept curled around her, his much larger frame dwarfing her own in a way that made her feel safe. Safe in the way that only Jesse could make her feel.

As the plaster formed into a dragon and then a mouse she considered what was going on. She was in the past. The past that she had grown up hearing about, the past that had formed the unbreakable bonds that made up her family. As Jesse pulled her into his chest she appreciated how non-familial some of her bonds were and if she were right about Rowan and Lena she would bet her favorite long-sword that they were too.

With a soft moan Jesse woke to what he liked to call Maeve thinky-time. He could tell just by the way she was breathing that she was contemplating something of the heavy variety. Within one smooth move he was rubbing her belly, which, coupled with her exhaustion put the girl out like a light. Jesse smiled and curled around her. His dad was right, understanding what a girl needed wasn’t that hard when you got the key points down.

With his mission accomplished he sighed and kissed the top of Maeve’s head before clocking out in true Harris fashion.

*

The sight that met Tara as she stepped into her living room was somewhere between adorable and freaky. From the angle she was viewing them at, it could have very well been Xander and Willow all snuggled up on her couch. Which, she decided, was not an image she wanted to entertain outside of the very platonic picture of them that lived in her mind.

With a shake of her head she started for her small kitchen and pulled out all that she would need to make pancakes. Just as she was about to put away the ingredients for her special batter, she paused and the image of Dawn’s eating habits flashed through her mind and then an image of Xander followed, with a sigh she added another half of what she already had.

*

Jesse woke instantly to the smell of pancakes and sat up; detangling himself from the redhead he had nearly braided his body with the night before. Maeve merely groaned and turned over, sprawling in a position that took up most of the futon now that her bedmate was gone.

The brunette boy practically bounced into the kitchen and grabbed a ready stack of cooling pancakes, never pausing in his obviously familiar routine as he placed a quick kiss on the cheek of a very surprised Tara. “Thanks Auntie Tara.” He then plopped onto a stool and promptly tucked in.

“Um… Morning Jesse, should we, maybe… wake Maeve up?” Tara asked hesitantly.

Jesse waved his hand flippantly, “We could, but she’ll be kind of grumpy. Then again if she wakes up on her own she’ll get all miffed. It’s really a no win situation.” His honey eyes were warm as he swallowed his mouthful. “Of course we could always just do this.” He took a breath and boomed, “Maeve Relina Rosenberg! Pop Quiz!” Tara watched in fascination as Maeve bolted up right in panic and pitched herself over the edge of the futon in her confusion.

After a few seconds of starring at the commercial beige carpet that was suddenly up-close and personal with her face, Maeve managed to gather her bearings. “Very funny!” To her ever-lasting horror when she looked up her mother was obviously stifling her laugh. “Mama!”

As odd as it was to hear the name she had called her own mother intended for her, Tara handled the situation flawlessly. “I’m sorry, it’s just” Tara paused in unadulterated mirth, “That was so, incredibly Willow I couldn’t help myself.

Maeve had heard this from the older members of her family many times and had built a certain tolerance to it. “Yeah, yeah. I’m so sure.” Her crankiness faded as soon as she caught a whiff of pancakes. Without a word she was up and had claimed a sizeable stack of breakfast for herself. The girl was clearly focusing on her baser needs, moaning in appreciation the second the food touched her mouth.

Tara blinked when Maeve grunted and Jesse seamlessly handed her the syrup. Jesse held out his hand and Maeve passed him the pitcher of orange juice without even looking up. She was starting to have a feeling that this was a normal every-day occurrence; their moves were obviously practiced, graceful even.

After five minutes of watching the teens eat she shook herself into concentration, she had a phone call to make.

*

After an evasive call to Buffy, Tara rubbed her face wearily. She and Willow had arranged for a date tonight, unfortunately it seemed that it would have to be put on hold. Their rekindling romance was proving to be a lot harder than the first time around, but the important thing was that Willow was doing well, she had to have been or Tara would never have accepted the redhead’s nervous and non-linear invitation to Sunnydale’s new Japanese restaurant.

At the very least Tara had Maeve as proof of how worthwhile their entire struggle actually was. She looked at her reflection in her bathroom mirror and sighed. “I hope you’re ready to meet our teenage bundle of joy, Willow.”

Interesting wasn’t the word for what was going to happen today.
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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby inlerf » Fri Jun 16, 2006 9:02 pm

An update! An update! *does the dance of joy*

love the "POP QUIZ!" part :D.

omg, i have no criticisms...hmm...



ooo, there, one. "Interesting wasn’t the word for what was going to happen today." from what i learned, something about um, narrator's voice or something. since we're in tara's pov, either make that a thought or um, change it.

and congrats on your acing! update sooner! (i seem to really like exclamations in this thread...)
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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby Willowtree252 » Fri Jun 16, 2006 9:22 pm

:pinky thank you for an update wonderful more soon please :kitty
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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby Lonewolf22 » Fri Jun 16, 2006 11:07 pm

quirked_out: Great update, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE Maeve and Jesse together, they are very cute together, the Pop Quiz line was hilarious, I can't imagine how weird yet comforting this must be for Tara. I'm dying to hear what Willow is going to say when she meets her daughter and nephew. I can't wait to read more.

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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby spells42 » Sat Jun 17, 2006 4:42 am

QO
Short but sweet! Looking forward to more soon, but understand your finals have priority. Good luck with 'em.

Waiting, trying to be patient. :kitty

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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby PancakesinBellies » Sat Jun 17, 2006 2:47 pm

How very interesting. This is very good and I look forward to more. Good luck with finals!
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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby WillowRulez » Sat Jun 17, 2006 5:25 pm

Hehe, the pop quiz bit was hilarious.
Tara blinked when Maeve grunted and Jesse seamlessly handed her the syrup. Jesse held out his hand and Maeve passed him the pitcher of orange juice without even looking up. She was starting to have a feeling that this was a normal every-day occurrence; their moves were obviously practiced, graceful even.

Very cute!
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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby Emms » Sun Jun 18, 2006 10:22 pm

Yay! That was a wonderful chapter!! You are a very good writer and I just loved everything about this update...especially the way Maeve was made to wake up --so very Willow!

Speaking of Willow...I can't help but feel worried about how she's going to take the news about what's happened...it's not everyday you get to meet your daughter from the future... I just hope she doesn't freak out or something :lol

Woot! I can't wait for more!

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Re: Something To Mend For

Postby Grayson » Mon Jun 19, 2006 6:49 am

I just noticed the "Scrappies" line from the first chapter - very funny that that's what the children of the Scoobies would nickname themselves.

It'll be interesting to see how Willow reacts to the news that she and Tara have 2 kids in the future. Who are presently at Tara's house.
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