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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby Krokador » Wed Sep 21, 2005 8:49 pm

so hmm, I kinda huh, stumbled over this fic, and again... well i just took on some sleep time to finish reading it... and well...

:cry no no! no more update for about 2 months! Does that mean you won't finish it? Because i kinda like realy liked that story, and I mean really. I love farwest wanted will, and well, will smith, thats rather funny :P

are you gonna update this? cuz its really good and worth the read, it would be such a waste to... stop this here y'know.
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby GayNow » Wed Sep 21, 2005 9:01 pm

Yeah, Cam....when are we gonna see an update for GER? :eyebrow
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby onyxsundrops » Thu Sep 22, 2005 7:08 am

Yeah, Cam... I mean, c'mon... it's been forever since we've had an update. :p

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby tarawhipped » Thu Sep 22, 2005 7:19 am

Hmm....I'm sensing a theme. Do you people want something? Sheesh...go read Neverland again. :p

Krokador, I assure you I will finish this, and any other fics I have out there that I'm not gonna name cause Car and Evy might start bitching at me in those threads. :-D

To all my lovely readers: I haven't forgotten about this, and as I am almost done with another project that actually had a deadline of sorts, I can start working on GER again. I'm going away for the weekend, which always seems to inspire me. Thanks for your continued support and patience.

Peace out-

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby watty » Thu Sep 22, 2005 7:55 am

Oh Captain Cameron, I was gonna swoop in and protect your honor and all, and to tell Car and Evy to leave you alone cos you're busy either controlling pretend people (where's that SimWatty and SimCar btw? :P ) or actually *gasp* writing *gasp* something *gasp*. But you got here before I did, well ... I had good intentions anyway.

I am almost done with another project that actually had a deadline of sorts

almost done? what happened to the "tomorrow night" that was uttered with so much confidence on Tuesday? I'm on a screwy clock (ie having to remember it's Wednesday night even though my qlock tells me it's Thursday lunchtime) but even I know "tomorrow" from Tuesday is Wednesday. Or are you so enamored with Tuesdays that you have somehow convinced yourself that it'll forever be Tuesday for you? (Me? I'm partial to Saturdays.)

I'm going away for the weekend, which always seems to inspire me.

Oh please let it be driving from Chicago to [*insert location with longest feasible driving distance from Chicago*], so you have slodges of time to think about updates. Cos you have GER, IoD, Dopey and whatever other projects you might find yourself working on to write in your head, and people are waiting.
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby tarawhipped » Sun Oct 02, 2005 4:20 pm

FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just spent an hour on fb replies, and lost them. Sorry folks, but I'm just gonna post. I'll try to get back to them, and I really do appreciate the comments. I hope y'all understand.
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Title: The Legend of Green Eyed Red
Author: tarawhipped (Cameron)
Email: tarawhipped@hotmail.com
Rating: R (just to be safe)
Disclaimer: All characters are the property of Joss Whedon/Mutant Enemy
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Distribution: Take it, just tell me where to visit it!
Summary: A redheaded stranger rides into a town full of trouble and meets a blonde barmaid. Can they save each other and the town?
Setting: AU (the Old West)[br]
Notes: Thanks to Carleen for her superlative beta skilz. You rule![br]
Flashback and thoughts in italics[br][br][br]
Chapter 17[br][br]
Faith tiptoed through the servants’ entrance of the Mayor’s mansion and crept down the hall toward the back staircase, relieved to find the area deserted. Before she reached the first step, her sharp eyes noticed a light shining under the door of her father’s office, and the muffled sound of voices inside. She stilled and held her breath, but could discern no other movement in the house. Carefully she inched her way to the door and crouched down.[br]
Through the keyhole she spied her husband, sitting stiffly, his hands clenching the arms of his chair. Across the room, his desk between them, paced her father, a grim expression on his face as he toyed with a gold letter opener. Faith pressed her ear to the keyhole and listened.[br]
“I’m getting a little tired of you taking matters into your own hands, Warren. I have some very important investors coming in next week, and I don’t need any suspicion falling on me right now. I needn’t remind you I’d have already owned that land if not for your interference.”[br]
“Yes sir, and again, if I’d known I certainly wouldn’t have—”[br]
“Well, we can’t change the past now, can we? And your ignorance is the only reason I allowed you to stay in Dusty Hollow, but I will not tolerate your personal vendetta getting in the way of my acquisition. From now on, you do what I say, when I say. Is that clear?”[br]
“Yes sir.”[br]
“That’s swell! You’ve got ambition, Warren. I like to see that in a young man, and you’ve got a bright future ahead of you, so long as you remember those who put you where you are. Never forget friends, that’s what I live by.”[br]
“These investors…they’re friends, then?”[br]
“They sure are. Their money made this town, and will make it into more, with our help. See Warren, too many people think small…build a house, build a farm, and they’re happy…it’s a little selfish, don’t you think? Great men look at the larger picture; think about what they can do for their community. Why, now that we have the railroad here, we could have the biggest and brightest city on the Plains, but that takes vision, and sacrifice.”[br]
“And land?”[br]
“Exactly. Those fools with their farms and stores have no vision. Take that idiot Maclay, for instance. Sure he was one of the first settlers in town, but does that mean he should be allowed to hold onto one of the richest parcels of land when I’ve got a dozen developers standing in line to mine it? I thought perhaps his son would be smarter, but…well, let’s just say I’m pleased things worked out the way they did. I have high hopes for you and my Faith, Warren. Someday you’ll run this town, and your sons after you.”[br]
Faith pushed herself away from the door, unable to listen to any more. Her eyes were wild with hurt, but she fought back her tears, clenching her jaw tight. She stole silently to the stairs and ascended to her room, her mind spinning. She had known that Warren was a conniving villain, but to hear from his own lips that her father had manipulated her for his own purposes…she scowled into the darkness as she entered her bedroom and locked the door. She had to warn Donnie of their plan. She sat down at her writing table and pulled out several sheets of paper, hoping she would be able to slip him the letter at church.[br][br][br]

Willow waited for another carriage to pass before crossing the street. She tipped her hat to the driver and his wife, and waved at the youngsters on the back of the wagon, fidgeting in their Sunday best. It seemed as though the entire town and surrounding area had passed by her that morning, and she’d had to politely decline a handful of offers to ride along to the Church, which lay just below the Mayor’s mansion on the small hill. In turn she’d received several disapproving looks and patronizing shakes of the head. Still, her experience in other small towns that had convinced her to take a pseudonym, and ruefully accept that people were kinder thinking she was a heathen than when they knew she was a Jew.[br]
She shook the thought out of her head as she walked up the steps to the saloon and knocked on the shuttered door. While she waited, her mind wandered to more immediate issues. When she’d returned to her room at the Inn the night before, she found that the red hair she’d carefully placed across the door latch had fallen to the floor. Someone had been in her room. She knew they wouldn’t find anything, but it had still set her on edge. First thing that morning she had gone to see Xander.[br][br][br]
“I may need my buckboard soon.”[br]
“It’s all but done now. I left the wheels off, but I can have them on and ready to roll anytime.”[br]
Willow had smirked at the young man, clearly uncomfortable in his suit, and darting his eyes toward Anya, waiting impatiently in his carriage.[br]
“It can wait til tonight. Go on, your gal’s waiting. Oh! Xander, you uh, didn’t tell nobody about what we talked about last night, did you? About me?”[br]
The young man grimaced, and Willow’s face fell.[br]
“Xander!”[br]
“I didn’t mean to! It’s just, I was drunk, and sometimes I don’t think…and I only told Anya…and possibly Clem. But it’s okay…they know it’s a secret.”
[br][br][br]
Willow rolled her eyes again at the admission. She felt pretty sure she could count on Clem to keep his mouth shut, but wasn’t so certain about Anya, who’d smirked at her knowingly before driving off. She didn’t really mind people thinking she was a dangerous bandit. In fact, it often worked to her advantage, but the last thing she needed right now was the Sheriff catching wind of her identity and throwing her jail before the card game.[br]
“How the heck did things get so complicated?” she muttered to herself.[br]
“Will?”[br]
The redhead spun at the sound of her name and came face to face with Tara standing in the doorway, looking sweaty and disheveled and altogether lovely, to Willow’s eyes.[br]
Oh. Right. That’s how.[br]
“Hi,” she squeaked, raising her hand in a listless wave.[br]
“Good morning. Do you want to come in?”[br]
“Are you busy? Cause I don’t want to disturb you. I thought I’d stop by and see how Donnie is, but if you’re too busy I can come back later.”[br]
Tara smiled patiently at the flustered redhead, who allowed the blonde to guide her inside by a gentle hand on the elbow.[br]
“It’s fine, Will. Donnie’s feeling much better; he just left for church. And I’m never to busy for y-y…um…I’m not too busy.”[br]
Willow beamed at the blushing barmaid, who bit her lip and ducked her head.[br]
“I w-was just doing the laundry. You could sit with me, keep me company?”[br]
“I could do that,” the redhead stated, nodding for emphasis. “Or I can help.”[br]
“You don’t have to,” Tara demurred.[br]
“I want to. You see this face?” Willow pointed at herself, mouth set, eyes serious and unblinking. “Well, this so happens to be my ‘I made up my mind and ain’t nobody gonna tell me to do otherwise, no matter how big or mean or in this case pretty they may be’ face.”[br]
Tara nodded sincerely, holding back a grin. “Maybe you should just call it your ‘resolve’ face. It’s not as much of a mouthful.”[br]
Willow blinked, her eyes automatically wandering to Tara’s mouth, which curled up on one side in amusement. Her temptation to taste that mouth was too great, and before she could give in, she took a half step back and gestured animatedly.[br]
“See! That’s why you would make such a great teacher!”[br]
The blonde simply laughed in response and led them through the barroom to a short hallway half-hidden by the piano. A door at the end opened onto a narrow outside passage, with separate privies marked for men and women on the right. The passage was closed at the end by a tall plywood gate, and Willow’s eyes widened in wonder as she followed Tara through the door into the yard.[br]
The area spanned the width of the saloon, and stretched out for a full acre, bordered on all sides by a split-rail fence, which was lined with yucca shrubs. They stood on a brick patio, and Willow noted the water pump, washtub, work table, and drying lines, but her eyes were drawn to the wonder beyond.[br]
Willow’s discerning gaze followed the walkway of sun bleached river pebbles winding its way through a garden of grasses and vibrant plants. A lovingly tended herb garden lay just off the patio in a small corner on the left, a larger section of root vegetables on the right. Beyond them, a low hedge of wild currant shrubs on either side of the path separated the practical from the decorative. Willow turned to smile at Tara with questioning eyes and the blonde nodded, taking Willow’s arm and leading her down the path.[br]
Green eyes took in each plant, silently identifying them as she passed: wild sweetpea, sunflower, tickclover, dayflower. The pebble path forked on either side, the right and left branches each leading to stocky wooden benches nestled amongst the flowers. Tara led her straight ahead, through another gate in a low stone wall almost obscured by blackberry bushes. On the other side, a grove of a dozen apple trees was nestled amongst the buffalo grass to the left of the walkway, which ended at a shed made of sod. Willow turned to look at Tara, but her eyes stopped on a wooden cross planted in the clearing to the right of the path, near the convergence of the stone wall and rail fence. Tara let her gaze follow the redhead’s and smiled sadly.[br]
“That’s my mom,” she whispered.[br]
Willow let her hand slip down Tara’s arm to entwine their fingers together. They stood in silence for several moments, only the twittering of sparrows marking the passage of time. Tara squeezed the slender fingers holding hers, and gestured to the sod building.[br]
“That’s where Dad and Donnie lived that first winter…me too, I guess. Donnie was so young, but he swears he remembers it, how cold it was. He never comes back here. I don’t know why Daddy never tore it down, but I…it makes me feel closer to her. I use it for canning. I think she’d like it here.”[br]
“It’s beautiful,” Willow concurred, feeling at once very peaceful, yet sad that her own parents lay far away in a paupers’ cemetery. She hastily shook off the thought and pointed to the purple and yellow flowers growing next to the grave.[br]
“I don’t recognize that.”[br]
“That’s my favorite,” Tara smiled. “Willowleaf aster.”[br]
Willow’s eyes widened and her mouth dropped open.[br]
“Are you alright, Will? Should I not have—”[br]
“No! I’m glad you brought me here. I can see why you wouldn’t want to leave,” the redhead said, her brow crinkling as she looked down at her feet.[br]
Tara opened and closed her mouth several times before pursing her lips and scrutinizing the redhead, who avoided her eyes.[br]
“Will…what’s going on? You’ve brought up me leaving Dusty Hollow on several occasions now.”[br]
Willow tried to shrug off the issue, but her relentless hand wringing belied her calm.[br]
“I just want what’s best for you,” she said, finally meeting Tara’s eyes.[br]
“You don’t get to decide what’s best for me, Will,” she replied, her exasperation evident. “Not you, not Donnie. I can make my own choices…even if I am just a woman.”[br]
Willow flinched as if struck under the harsh words. She understood only too well the anger behind them, and berated herself for causing that anger.[br]
“Tara, no. I didn’t mean anything like that!”[br]
“Then what? I know you and Donnie are planning something. If it concerns me, I want to know what it is.”[br]
Willow cringed under the piercing blue stare. Tara stood defiantly, hands on her hips, arching one eyebrow. Willow blew out the breath she was holding.[br]
“Donnie and I are playing poker tonight. We’re going to win back everything the Sheriff’s taken from him…even if we have to cheat.” Technically that’s the truth…just cause I left out a lot.[br]
Willow bowed her head in an attempt to appear contrite, and after a moment Tara’s expression softened to one of concern.[br]
“Will, do you realize how dangerous that is? I love him, but Donnie’s not much of a card player…and if he drinks—”[br]
“Ah, but that’s where you come in,” Willow improvised, placing her hand at the small of Tara’s back and leading them back to the waiting laundry. “You’ll be watering down mine and Donnie’s drinks. If you want to, of course! Your choice. Entirely your decision.”[br]
Tara spun to face Willow and narrowed her eyes, but Willow could see the mirth dancing within.[br]
“So you want me to be a part of your evil scheme?”[br]
The blonde stepped closer, standing toe-to-toe with Willow, who was only able to nod her assent. Tara’s grin faded as she realized where she stood, how near the redhead’s mouth was to hers, the pink lips slightly parted. Her head inched forward, seemingly of its own volition, but she stopped short at the worried look on the redhead’s face and opened her mouth to question the cause.[br]
Willow was emotionally warring with herself. Her conscience was screaming ‘don’t kiss her!’ while her body and heart were pleading for her to give in. She sighed in resignation and stepped back.[br]
Tara hid behind her hair, furious with herself for being so forward.[br]
I have got to stop taking advice from Anya.[br]
Willow swore under her breath at seeing Tara close herself off, knowing her actions were the reason. She raised her hand to gently tuck several strands of blonde hair behind Tara’s ear, letting her fingertips linger over the woman’s silky cheek.[br]
“Laundry?”[br]
“Laundry,” Tara agreed.[br][br][br][br]
Hours later, as the sun sat low on the horizon, Willow fidgeted in the back room of the saloon. The rest of the afternoon had passed pleasantly. Tara had washed while Willow worked the wringer and together they had hung the clothing on the lines to dry in the autumn breeze. Chagrined by her earlier reticence and its effect on Tara, Willow did not shy away from the exchange of flirtatious glances and innocent brushes of fingertips while tending to their task. Still, she was thankful when Donnie returned, rendering any further intimacy unthinkable, especially after he informed them both of the letter Faith had slipped him, laying out the Mayor’s plan to acquire the Maclay land.[br]
Willow and Donnie had spent several hours working out a system, and Donnie had explained all he knew of Warren’s style of play. She knew she had to remain alert, but the twelve cups of coffee she’d drank for that reason had turned her into a twitching mass of nerves. She stood to try to compose herself for the arrival of the others, and jerked violently when she felt a hand on her shoulder.[br]
“Tara! You startled me!”[br]
“Uh huh. No more coffee for you, mister,” the blonde winked, distributing shot glasses on the shelf surrounding the room. She set a bottle next to each glass, and indicated the one nearest to the redhead.[br]
“It’s mostly water. So’s that one,” she pointed to another. “That’s where Donnie sits.”[br]
Willow nodded and picked up her bottle with a shaky hand. The barmaid shook her head and took it, pouring a modest amount of liquid into the glass. Willow downed it in one gulp and set the glass back on the shelf, her hand noticeably steadier. Tara refilled it and set the bottle down.[br]
“Better?”[br]
“Not really, but thanks,” Willow replied. “I’ve got bats.”[br]
Tara frowned and looked up at the ceiling. Willow couldn’t help but smile when confused eyes returned to meet hers.[br]
“In my belly. Like butterflies? Only…bats.”[br]
“That sounds serious,” Tara said.[br]
“I’ll be okay, I just need to relax, I th—”[br]
Willow’s words were swallowed by Tara’s mouth pressing firmly against her own. All thought of her deception melted away as their lips slid wetly over each other, and she circled Tara’s waist with her arms, drawing their bodies into a snug embrace. They parted, hearts racing, and laid their foreheads together.[br]
“Relaxed?” Tara asked, her voice low and raspy.[br]
“Not even remotely,” Willow grinned, slowly easing her hands around to Tara’s hips before reluctantly letting go.[br]
The curtain parted and the pair stepped away from each other, twin blushes dotting their cheeks. Donnie scampered around the table, followed by Andrew, Spike, Ethan, and Warren.[br]
“What’s he doing here?” the Sheriff demanded.[br]
“I invited him,” Donnie replied.[br]
“Sorry, kid. The table’s full.”[br]
Willow looked at Donnie, but the young man shifted uneasily on his feet and made no response.[br]
“You know, it has been rather a long day,” Preacher Rayne smoothly interjected. “I think I’ll sit this one out. Let the boy take my place.”[br]
Willow gawked at Rayne, who smirked back, one eyebrow arched in amusement. Warren sneered, but remembering what Jonathan had told him about the redhead’s roll of cash, decided to acquiesce. He nodded, and Willow took her seat, directly facing the Sheriff. Before the other men could take their places, however, Warren raised his hand. His dark eyes bored into Willow’s.[br]
“Donnie, switch places with Andrew,” he said. “Unless you have a problem with that.”[br]
Donnie looked forlornly from the bottles to Willow, who shot him a warning look. The young man shuffled uneasily to his assigned seat. Once they were all settled, Spike drew an unopened deck of cards from his breast pocket and broke the seal. Warren continued to stare at Willow.[br]
“Ante up, gentlemen.”[br][br][br]
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby FineyMcFine » Sun Oct 02, 2005 4:39 pm

Dibs!

ETA: Yee-haw! I do love me an update. I can almost taste the dust that everything is probably coated with, smell the dried sweat and the aroma of whiskey, and hear the thump-thump of people's boots on the plank floor of Maclay's Saloon, only slightly muffled by the sawdust that Tara throws down to absorb the mud and spittle.

Willow beamed at the blushing barmaid, who bit her lip and ducked her head.


An assuredly auspicious use of alliteration.

Twelve cups of coffee for young Will! My gosh, that's a lot of caffeine, even for an addict like Green Eyed Red. I hate that point when you've consumed so much caffeine that your poor adrenal glands have no more adrenaline to release into the bloodstream, so all subsequent cups just make you twitchy and have a sour stomach and have to pee a lot. I have a lot of sympathy for Willow's twitchy state of being. If only we could all get a big Tara-kiss planted on us when we've had too much coffee - Juan Valdez would probably triple his sales overnight.

On a scenery note, I loved that we got to see the Maclay land. Since the schemers are after it, it was a nice touch to have a tour and to see that it's worth saving and get emotionally invested in the sweet peas and the Willowleaf aster.

Rollicking, Cam, just rollicking!

E a second time TA: last night I posted dibs and then went outside to person the grill for our dinner, and my wife said "You are a giant dorkward, posting dibs but not even reading the update right away." I couldn't think of a good rejoinder at the time, but now I have. "I'm quick on the draw, like Green Eyed Red."
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby EasierSaid » Sun Oct 02, 2005 4:53 pm

Great job Cam, it's very good to see this story back and you in the swing of things. I really liked the subtle references to Willow's previous life (I'm thinking of her parents, as prime example), as well as your ability to hold on to Faith's wild nature while making her a heroine. Loved that Tara thought a hot and heavy smooch would calm Will down, and of course, huzzah to whipped Xander! :laugh Very funny. Had to know Warren would make them switch up seats, but hopefully it won't mess up things too badly. Looking forward to the game, and a ton of upcoming action (which you do so well). :clap
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby hermitfish » Sun Oct 02, 2005 4:54 pm

Yay Cam...you lowly slacker (pot...kettle...black...anyway). You updated!

They're not quite in constant makeout village yet, which I hear is nice this time of year, but they do make their closeness memorable. Or rather you do...you know what I mean.

Okay now I've got my own bats about the card game. Tricky evil seat switching. But I've got a way Donnie and Will can surely win...make me the dealer. I know a thing or two about...um nevermind...I'm a very upstanding citizen. I’m sure you’ve got a better way up your sleeve to resolve this anyway.

Thanks so much for the update, dear.

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby onlykaren » Sun Oct 02, 2005 5:13 pm

Wow :clap
Loved the update, specially the part when Tara tried to calm Willow down ... really great! Thanks.
Can't wait for more!
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby the hero factor » Sun Oct 02, 2005 5:16 pm

Yay, update.

I have to say, I just love Willow and Tara's interactions in this story. Makes me all swoony.

I'm gawking at Rayne right along with Willow. What's he playing at? I have a not so good feeling about this.

And 'eek' to Warren having Donny and Andrew switch seats. I can't wait for the game.
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby onyxsundrops » Sun Oct 02, 2005 6:33 pm

You should see the cheesy expression that I have on my face, Cam. The whole time I was reading the Will (Willow)/Tara part, I was thinking "tell her, tell her!" But I suppose there wouldn't be much of a story/surprise factor left if that was to happen. I'm rambling... anyway, let's hope the seat switching doesn't screw up their plans too much. I'm very curious to see how they're going to pull it off. Great update, and thanks.

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby Krokador » Sun Oct 02, 2005 6:58 pm

Oh! UPDATE! *jumps around the room and then reads, leaves feedback and goes back to jumping around the room*

Tara kissed Willow! big woohoo for that :D and big uhoh for warren switching andrew and donnie ( yeah, i know everyone said that)...

still, I love this story, keep it up!
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby pipsberg » Sun Oct 02, 2005 7:14 pm

Cam,

Great update! I love seeing GER back in action. It seems like the scheme is heating up, and so is Tara and "Will's" romance. Humina! Thanks for the treat and I can't wait for more.
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby dorksrcool » Sun Oct 02, 2005 8:42 pm

:bounce
Yay, an update! This was great as usual. You do a really fine job of describing everything, I feel like I'm there. Thanks for the W/T action and for the thickening plot. This is one of my favorite fics!
As one, they turn to the soda machine. It flies back into the door like a cannonball. Willow looks at it, at Tara. She doesn't let go of her hand.
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby spells42 » Sun Oct 02, 2005 11:07 pm

Yahoo!

I'm so happy to see an update of GER :party .

As usual, your writing is great. I love this 'verse and picturing everyone in their 'western' gear. In fact it'd be nice if you could arrange for Tara to dress in trousers, boots and a man's shirt at some point??? and don't be too thorough with the disguise - you could never hide her figure anyway. Sorry, I'm getting carried away here.

The poker game will be interesting. If Donnie gets drunk, it will be difficult for Willow to stop him gambling away the saloon ...I don't know how you cheat at poker, but I guess you have to be dealer. If they take turns then Willow's only gonna get one chance in ummm 5? to 'fix' the game. I hope she's a good player, but of course she's great at maths isn't she?

Faith's part in this story is intriguing. She's hot-headed and wilful, but now she's realising she's been tricked into marrying Warren, she's turning against him and her father. I like the way you've woven the characters into this story, and Faith's role is very apt.

I just realised I don't remember a Giles in this fic. I'll have to go back and check. I wonder who/ what he could turn up as?

Thanks for continuing this story, Cameron. I look forward to reading much more of it.

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby watty » Mon Oct 03, 2005 4:30 am

You know what, I still can't get the vision of Faith in the attire of those days out of my head, like when she scuttled away from eavesdropping she'll be in those big dresses and big underdresses and her bloomers showing. :P Hee, I'm twelve.

Willow's thoughts about Tara are sweet. The power of love, that's what it is:
“How the heck did things get so complicated?” she muttered to herself.

“Will?”

The redhead spun at the sound of her name and came face to face with Tara standing in the doorway, looking sweaty and disheveled and altogether lovely, to Willow’s eyes.

Oh. Right. That’s how.

Swiftly following on from "doing spells", "naming constellations" and "googling myself", is "doing laundry" the newfangled (at least in the 1800s) metaphor for gay lovin'? The laundry basket is a metaphor for caves or boxes or what-nots? Yes, I'm still twelve. btw, love the reverse definition of "resolve face", that Tara gave name to it, rather than Will. Love the scene at the garden, I can see why Tara doesn't want to leave her home, and it becomes more important for Will and Donnie to win.

The transition from the almost kiss to the actual kiss is so great. Tara picking the right moment to reassure Will and show her support. Well, as if she wouldn't.

Can't wait for the poker game to begin. Switching Donnie's and Andrew's places is worrisome, perhaps Tara can help switch the bottles. As for Ethan, he's the joker in the pack isn't he. I get the feeling that he isn't 100% aligned with Warren; he "knows" Will's secret but will he tell? I get the feeling that he'll go with the group that seems to be winning, the scoundrel.

I second the motion that you should make Cyd the dealer, we can trust her -- provided we feed her regularly and let her listen to music. Plus, her loyalties are never in doubt.
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby JustSkipIt » Mon Oct 03, 2005 7:34 pm

Mmm, the plot thickens and thickens to a kind of stewey-glop. Donnie seems like the kind of guy who could screw up a one-horse-parade. Hard to believe that he and Tara are brother and sister. The scene Will stumbled upon with Tara and the land and her mother's headstone is very moving and shows something that Tara "let Willow in." I'm shocked that Tara didn't find it really strange that Will was willing to do laundry. I mean how many men help with laundry?

I love the moments between them but I'm anxious about the poker plan.
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby Artemis » Wed Oct 05, 2005 1:57 am

Oops - as soon as I saw that the drinks were in place, rather than being served by Tara during the game, I thought this could go horribly wrong. So, I guess Donnie's going to be working with a full load aboard, which will certainly be... interesting. That back-up plan Willow mentioned is looking like an increasingly good idea.

Poor Willow though, all complicated. She's got Warren's goons to fleece, Donnie to shepherd, Tara to defend, Anya to worry about, Faith possibly running around like a well-meaning loose cannon, and now Preacher Rayne apparently up to some scheme of his own - does he have an inkling of what's going on? It seems like he's well-disposed to Willow's efforts at the moment, allowing her to get into the game - but what's his motive? If he wants the Mayor out of town, it's not simply out of goodwill. Ethan's always looked out for Ethan first, after all.

Tara showing Will her mother's grave was a big gesture of trust, she doesn't seem like the kind of person to reveal something like that lightly. And though that became the brief argument over it, I don't think she did it just to demonstrate her reasons for not wanting to leave her home. She's genuinely opening up to Will - what I wonder is, how much extra pressure will that put on Willow, knowing that Tara's being so open with her, but that she herself has this big secret which (she thinks) would end it all between them?
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby ringwaldoeuvre » Wed Oct 05, 2005 10:07 pm

Cam, I am consistently impressed by your ability to develop numerous elements in the span of a passage. Lots happened here, and in a relatively short amount of time. You build the suspense very well, it is subtle yet palpable. Very well done.

As a member of the "Oh, just get it on already!" club, I do find myself torn. Of course, I want them to ride off into the sunset and live happily ever after, and skip all this angst and make with the love. If you're not careful, I will get snarky. Yet I worry that Willow and Tara need to pace themselves and not rush into anything, if for no other reason than to make Tara completely at ease with Willow by the time the big secret is revealed. Again, the warring elements are well-balanced. Looking forward to more.

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby Darth Pacula » Sat Oct 08, 2005 5:30 am

Well, howdy there ma'am. Here I was, rolling into town like a tumbleweed, just looking ta consume far too much whiskey than is healthy and raise a ruckus, and what do I find. One damn, hellfire of a fine tale. I'd doff my hat to you, if'n I hadn't eaten it yesterday.

Okay, now. I think I have to stop my mangled attempt at the western vernacular there, before I make an even bigger arse of myself than usual. But seriously, you've written a bloody little ripper here.

First off, I love the running joke of Willow and all things horse related. When I started reading this, I have to admit I didn't think of Willow's horse phobia, but hey, how can you have a western without horses? Good thing Willow's got a buckboard, or she'd never go anywhere. Plus, it gives her somewhere to hide all of her purloined dynamite. Thank god it ain't gelignite, huh?

Oh, and Will Smith? :lol :rofl :lmao Priceless, abso-bloody-lutely priceless.

The way that you've weaved characters from cannon, suitably modified that is, into your story is masterful. Or should that be mistressful? :-D

Let's see, Donnie's here, and he's not a total arsewipe, which is a nice change. Sure, he's a schmuck, and not too good with the cards or the liquor, but he's a likable schmuck. Here's hoping he doesn't end up in Boot Hill. You've written the little sibling back and forth between them so well.

Warren as a sheriff? Kind of amusing, given his less than total respect for the rule of the law in the series, but I suppose he is a corrupt sheriff. Not to mention still a complete shit heel. Here's hoping someone gives that boy a good pistol whippin', or better yet ( and my first impulse ) a high speed lead injection.

Xander and the rest of Will's poker cronies are fun. Larry's acting just like he was in the show before Xander accidentally talked him out of the closet, and hell, who doesn't love good ol' Clem.

“That little weasel was Deputy Andrew, though most of the time he works in the bank. Word is he’s smart—went to college and ever’thing—but he ain’t got the sense God gave a turnip.”


Isn't that a disservice to turnips?

Spike the mortician? :lol Spot on there, and I loved the source of his nickname in your little world. Makes him sound more like the original 'Bloody Awful Poet William". Would I be right in guessing his wife would be a pale, dark haired woman who's a little touched in the head. Lass name of Drusilla?

You somewhat surprised me with the preacher though. I was half expecting Caleb, but Ethan works. I can totally see the slimy git as a sanctimonious weasel, and kudos on how you've worked in his chaos worship. Well done indeed. :bow

Anya. Oh, Anya. What can I say except she's always a hoot to read when well written. And you milady, write her very well indeed. I loved her little whitewash comment to the vapid tramps aka Cordelia and Glory. :lol Love the idea of those two and Harmony as ladies of negotiable virtue. And making Darla the cat house madam? Inspired, given what her profession was in the Buffyverse prior to being vamped.

Hey, Captain Cardboard gets demoted to Lieutenant, huh? Here's hoping the cavalry is more F-Troop than anything else, or they might be like throwing water on a grease fire. When they finally turn up, anyway.

The little interlude crossing into the future was cute. Given that this is the Kitten Board, it's a given that our favorite girls will get a happy ending, but it's nice to see early confirmation.

The Willow/Tara kissage has been heartbreakingly intense, albeit a little on the light side, frequency wise. Oh well, less is more right? Or so I keep hearing. But the restrained pace works for the time period, so well done for showing suitable restraint.

You've touched on some pretty meaty backstory for Willow here. Should be interesting to see what else comes bubbling up out of the past.

Okay, now Donnie and Will's little plan to scam the black hat wearing, mustache twirling cad Warren seems to have hit a snag. Maybe, if'n we're all lucky, someone will deal the pox-ridden bastard aces-and-eights, and he'll get everything historically associated with that hand.

Anyhoo Cameron, to sum up, your story rocks, your writing rocks ... and I'm a babbling idiot. Right then.

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby sinkinghearts » Sun Mar 05, 2006 4:18 am

*bump*

is this story forgotten already? :(

i want updates *sob* *sob* :sob
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby peggy of sunnydale » Sun Mar 05, 2006 6:27 am

i have to say this is by far my favorite fiction today and its been so long since weve gotten an update i reread twice i beg of you please update

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby tarawhipped » Sun Mar 05, 2006 10:27 am

Just a quick note: I haven't forgotten GER, I promise. I will finish this, but it may be a little while yet before an update. My plan is to complete another unfinished piece first, and there's a short project I'm committed to, but once those are done, I'll be able to focus entirely on this fic. I miss it myself, and appreciate all the comments and your continued patience. Happy trails.

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby sacinema » Sun Mar 05, 2006 1:14 pm

Just wanted to stop by and express my feelings about your story being one of my favorites on this board. It's so good to hear that you are going to finish it sometime. Hopefully sooner than later. Making a wish here.
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby dorksrcool » Sun Mar 05, 2006 1:17 pm

:applause
Yay update!
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby sinkinghearts » Tue Mar 07, 2006 1:25 pm

whooopeeee!! this fic is not forgotten? yay!!! :applause :applause :applause

that's good enough for me to hear :D
i'll definitely be one fo the first people to do the happy dance on teh next uodate :dance (hey, this looks more of a drunk dance more than anything!)
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby sweet_southern_sex_kitten » Fri Jul 07, 2006 6:06 pm

Well I just read this fic. and I really really like it. It would be nice if you would update as soon as you can. That is if your going to get this one done or what ever. Any way great job its like a 12 on my scale!! :wtkiss
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The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby tarawhipped » Sun Dec 31, 2006 2:40 pm

I couldn’t let 2006 pass without an update to this story, and I hope it will be the incentive I need to get back into the swing of things. That said, the next update is a bit of a set-up chapter, but I hope it pleases.

As it’s been over a year, I’m not going to do individual replies this time (which I know is a cop-out, so, umm…sorry). Thank you to Sally McFine, EasierSaid, hermitfish, onlykaren, the hero factor, onyxsundrops, Krokador, pipsberg, dorksrcool, spells42, watty, JustSkipIt, Artemis, ringwaldoeuvre, Darth Pacula, shane, peggy of sunnydale, sacinema, and sweet southern sex kitten for taking the time to leave feedback, and thanks to everyone for reading.

Best wishes for 2007!
-Cam

Title: The Legend of Green Eyed Red
Author: tarawhipped (Cameron)
Email: tarawhipped@hotmail.com
Rating: R (just to be safe)
Disclaimer: All characters are the property of Joss Whedon/Mutant Enemy
Feedback: Throws head back and screams YESSS!!!
Distribution: Take it, just tell me where to visit it!
Summary: A redheaded stranger rides into a town full of trouble and meets a blonde barmaid. Can they save each other and the town?
Setting: AU (the Old West)[br]
Thoughts in italics[br][br][br]
Chapter 18[br][br]
Willow palmed her cards and glanced around the table. Over the course of the last two hours, she had become adept at reading the other players’ ‘tells.’ Spike, the mortician, sucked in his right cheek when he had a decent hand, both cheeks when he had nothing. Deputy Andrew the banker might as well have been wearing a sign, as he was in the unfortunate habit of raising an eyebrow and nodding at his cards as if to say “how-de-do, Mister three of a kind.” When he came up empty, he visibly pouted and squirmed in his seat. Donnie, too, was an open book; biting his lower lip and darting his eyes around when he thought he had a decent draw.[br]
Warren, however…Willow had yet to figure him out. He sat perfectly relaxed in his chair, his expression of arrogant disdain never faltering. Willow didn’t think she’d ever seen such cold eyes on a human being. In any other situation, coming up against a card player such as the Sheriff, she would have scooped up her winnings and high-tailed it out of there. This time there was too much at stake, and besides, she and Donnie had a plan.[br]
She had feared Donnie would derail that plan when he started hitting the bottle hard upon first sitting down. She knew he was nervous, but Warren’s spontaneous seating assignment change meant that Donnie was drinking straight gin, not the watered down liquid Tara had provided them. When Tara had reappeared in the small room an hour into the game, ostensibly to empty Spike’s ashtray, and had managed to inconspicuously knock Donnie’s bottle to the floor and smash it, Willow had nearly cheered. The barmaid returned promptly with another, less potent bottle for her brother.[br]
Unfortunately, the damage had already been done.[br][br][br][br]
Ethan threw down his pickaxe with a huff and pulled a yellowed piece of paper from his coat pocket. He unfolded it carefully and squatted down next to his lantern, holding the brittle parchment at an angle to catch the light and squinting at the faded ink on the page. He traced a line from the edge of the paper, counting off the distance under his breath and pausing his fingertip at the image of a cluster of flat-topped boulders. He stood slowly, folding and returning the paper to his pocket as he turned in a complete circle, his eyes straining to read the landscape in the muted light of the half moon. His sharp vision picked out a potential spot, and he picked up his lantern and axe, kicked the boulder he’d been digging alongside, and started off toward his new objective.[br][br][br][br]
Xander tightened the final nut holding the wheel in place on the new axle, and wiped his brow with the back of his sleeve. He set aside his wrench and removed the blocks from under the wagon before releasing the pulley and carefully lowering the wagon to the ground. He was putting on his jacket when the large sliding door to his workshop opened with a creak.[br]
“Larry! Jeez, you scared me.”[br]
“Why so jumpy?” the barber gruffed, leading Miss Horsey to the cart.[br]
“Uh, no reason,” the carpenter answered with a nervous laugh, glancing over to the tarp covered pile in one corner of the workshop. “Let’s get her hitched up.”[br]
“Will tell you what’s goin’ down tonight?” Larry asked, holding the horse by the halter as Xander attached the saddle and harness.[br]
“Nope, didn’t offer and I didn’t ask.”[br]
“Sounds dangerous,” Larry mused. “Wanna go watch?”[br]
“You betcha,” Xnader grinned.[br]
The two men finished their task in an atmosphere of giddy anticipation, led the horse and cart around to the front of Xander’s shop and hitched Miss Horsey to the post. With an agreement to meet at the saloon, Xander excused himself to tell Anya where he’d be, while Larry rushed off to collect Clem.[br][br][br][br]
Madam Darla glided down the wide staircase, her royal blue silk skirts billowing over wide crinolines and swishing against the polished mahogany banister. She walked with imperious grace, her eyes dancing with satisfaction over the finery of her surroundings: the deep burgundy flocked walls, matching velvet draperies, an assortment of carved wood framed chaise lounges and chairs with overstuffed cushions covered in embroidered fabric, gilded mirrors, brass wall sconces and lead crystal chandeliers.[br]
When Mayor Wilkins had brought gas light to Dusty Hollow the year before, hers was the second building outfitted for the new technology—right after the Mayor’s mansion.[br]
Darla stepped into the sitting room, where her ladies were beginning to assemble for the evening. One of the newer girls sat at the spinet, softly playing a delicate minuet, while the others draped themselves over the couches or leaned against the walls in practiced poses. A servant appeared with a tray of glasses and bottle of claret, which she left on a sideboard next to an assortment of liquor decanters. Madam Darla allowed each girl one glass of the red wine to loosen their nerves and morals, but that was all. She fancied her house a high-class establishment, and would not stand for drunkenness from her whores. It was encouraged among the male guests, however. Madam Darla had learned many a valuable secret from the inebriated lips of her clientele.[br]
One such secret had come directly from Sheriff Mears, one of the few men in town to whom Darla personally administered services. That had been the start of a mutually beneficial arrangement. She had been more than willing to help him dispose of several unwanted residents of Dusty Hollow in exchange for a guarantee of free reign over her empire of vice. Warren was only too happy to look the other way at some of Darla’s younger acquisitions, even going so far as to return to her custody any girl who tried to escape the house of ill repute. Those were rare occasions, however. Darla ruled her house with an iron fist, with the help of her lover Liam, a hulking brute of a man whose viciousness was well known.[br]
“Ladies, I want you all here tonight,” she announced. While it was usual for her to send several to the saloon to solicit customers, Darla noticed with satisfaction that none dared to question her directive.[br]
Darla strode into the entry hall and pulled on her lace gloves. Liam entered from outside, where Darla could see her carriage waiting.[br]
“Shall we go get your new girl?” the Irishman asked, offering his arm.[br]
“Yes, my Angel.”[br][br][br][br]
Lieutenant Finn slowed his horse to a walk and peered into the distance. He could see the lights of the town several miles away, but the movement of a lone figure nearby captured his attention. He held up his hand for silence and pointed in that direction. His patrol consisted of the five best members of his usual troop, and as they rode quietly towards their target, they gradually spread out into a semicircle, prepared to close in at a moment’s notice.[br]
As they neared the man, Riley could see it was not the Red Bandit, but he maintained his cautious approach until they were within 20 yards. The man wore a dark suit, plain but well tailored, and stood in a shallow hole about three yards in diameter, swinging a pickaxe haphazardly. Whoever he was, Finn surmised he was not used to physical labor. Riley’s men had virtually surrounded the stranger before he heard the whiny of a horse and looked up.[br]
“Oh, you gave me a fright,” the man said, though his expression betrayed no such emotion. “Can I help you officers?”[br]
“Lieutenant Finn, United States Cavalry,” Riley stated. “We’re tracking a wanted criminal to Dusty Hollow.”[br]
“Dusty Hollow? Why, I live there! How can I be of assistance?”[br]
Riley dismounted and passed his reins to Corporal Miller before taking a piece of paper from Sergeant Gates.[br]
“Have you seen this man?” he asked, holding out the wanted poster of the Red Bandit. The stranger inspected it carefully for several long moments.[br]
“Well now, I can’t be sure, but I have seen a young man who may be the one you’re looking for. Is he dangerous?”[br]
“Very,” Finn answered, handing the poster back. “We’d be much obliged for any information.”[br]
“He only just arrived in town, said his name was Smith.”[br]
Riley nodded. “Probably an alias. Do you know where we can find this Mister Smith?”[br]
“I would try the saloon—Maclay’s. There’s not many places in town, and that’s where I saw him before.”[br]
Finn hauled himself back into his saddle and looked toward the town.[br]
“Thank you, sir, you’ve been very helpful.”[br]
“I noticed there was a reward mentioned,” the man added casually.[br]
“If it’s him, you would be entitled to it, Mister…”[br]
“Rayne. Ethan Rayne.”[br][br][br][br]
Willow tried to still an antsy leg, which jittered nervously under the table. She was holding steady, her bankroll depleted a little, but more or less intact. Donnie had been losing as planned, but she could tell he was almost to the point of having to throw in his deed, and neither of them had come up with the one hand that could break the bank. While she could stay in the game indefinitely, it was imperative that Donnie win on the hand that staked the bar. With a pot that size, Donnie could pay off all his debts.[br]
Warren had just dealt, and while she looked at her cards Willow wondered if they would have to resort to more extreme measures when a motion out of the corner of her right eye caught her attention. Donnie rubbed his head, then his chin, and finally scratched the tip of his nose. It was the signal! Willow tried to keep her emotions in check as she let out a breath.[br]
Donnie started the bidding, throwing in four bits. Willow frowned, expecting him to start higher. Spike sucked in both cheeks, but called. Willow raised a dollar, and was too busy trying to glean some information from Warren’s stony face to notice Donnie looking at her. Andrew’s shoulders slumped and he tossed down his hand. Warren stared hard at Willow before calling. Donnie and Spike each threw in another dollar and Warren asked for cards.[br]
When Donnie requested three, Willow nearly spat out the gulp of watery gin in her mouth. She swallowed hard and looked at her hand again. A pair of fives, an eight, a ten, and an ace. Spike took three cards as well. Willow lay down the eight and ten and took two cards, while Warren dealt himself one. Willow held her cards close to her vest and fanned them out to reveal a full house, fives and aces.[br]
Donnie again began the bidding, starting at a dollar. Spike folded immediately. Willow raised to $5, which Warren doubled. Around and around they went, the pile in the center of the table growing until Willow estimated there had to be over a hundred. Warren looked over at Donnie and reached into his vest, pulling out a roll of ten-dollar bills. He counted out ten of them and tossed them onto the pile. Donnie blanched and looked around the table.[br]
“Something wrong, Donnie?” the Sheriff asked.[br]
“I can’t cover that, Warren,” Donnie stammered.[br]
“You’ve stayed in this far, it’d be a shame to waste your hand now,” Warren smoothly replied. “Maybe you have something else of value you can stake? There’s always the saloon…” Warren led. “If you’re so confident in your cards, it’s not like you’d really be risking it.”[br]
Donnie hedged appropriately, screwing up his face as though trying to puzzle out a problem. After several long minutes, he reached into his coat pocket and pulled out a folded parchment. He laid it on top of the stack of bills. Warren’s smile was predatory.[br]
Willow felt a tightening in her gut, but reached into her own bankroll to call. The noise from the saloon seemed to fade away in the small room, while the card players all stared silently at each other. Warren turned to Donnie, who lay down his cards: two pair, queens high. Willow closed her eyes tightly and shook her head. She looked again at her hand, hoping somehow it would be enough, and placed them on the green felt. Warren’s lips curled into a derisive sneer. He revealed his own hand: four kings, and began scooping the pile of winnings toward him.[br]
As his arms stretched across the table, Willow saw the cards peeking out of his left sleeve and grabbed his wrist. The Sheriff’s face reddened with fury.[br]
“What the hell do you think—”[br]
Willow stood up, not releasing her hold, plucked the cards from his sleeve, and threw them into his face.[br]
“Mister, you’re a cheat.”[br]
There was an audible gasp from one of the other men, but Willow couldn’t have said who it came from. She continued to stare bullets at Warren, who yanked his arm away and stood up sharply, his chair falling over backwards with a bang.[br]
And then, all hell broke loose.[br][br][br]
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby Willowtree252 » Sun Dec 31, 2006 3:49 pm

Dibs Loved the update. this is what I think of Warren :fit2 he needs his ass kicked.
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