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Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby BloodSuckinFiend » Sun Nov 30, 2003 8:31 pm

aww! that update kicked...went from hilarious to absolutely sweet and 'awwwwww'...good job!!:bounce

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~ "I don't know how to behave around women of the opposite sex." - Space Ghost

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Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby shuyaku » Sun Nov 30, 2003 8:47 pm

I second the "awwwwwww" :bounce Me like muchly :)



-shuyaku

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"Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

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Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby TaraBaby77 » Sun Nov 30, 2003 10:10 pm

I think I am going to have to have my doctor surgically remove this huge smile from my face...... That was so beautiful. Not that I was expecting anything less, but that was awesome. I love there innocence. Even with there naughty thoughts (heehee), they shine with beauty and true love for each other. Once again, this is an update that deserves what I would call the "5 Star Wahoo", =) . I so don't want to sound like I am repeating myself, but you have a gift. A gift of writing and an imagination that is something to be fond of!!! Stacey/willowsgirl, keep it up. You can only go up from here!!! GREAT WORK, GREAT JOB!!! =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'

"It's about two people, regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: new update!

Postby Yellow Crayon » Sun Nov 30, 2003 10:13 pm

Im on the awwwwwww

train myself



Incredable. Wonderful. Great update.

Yellow Crayon
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby Arwen276 » Mon Dec 01, 2003 4:52 am



X-TREME EVILNESS, But the cuteness of the moment makes up for the BAD BAD BAD CLIFFHANGER!!



More soon please?



~Arwen



ps: raspberry and chocolate? YUMMY!

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby sam darls » Mon Dec 01, 2003 5:09 am

Evil? YES!! But oh so very sweet..and they're moving in together..woohoo..Such a wonderful update. Love sammi xx

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Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby intricate mirage » Mon Dec 01, 2003 6:29 am

Evil? Oh yes definitely :punish But the sweetness of the update gets you off the hook :p This update was lovely Stacey :heart

Cassie





I don't mind being alone

I just don't want to be alone without you





intricate mirage
 


Re: new update!

Postby willowsgirl » Mon Dec 01, 2003 7:25 am

Hey kitties!

Wow, what can I say? I just came on here to see if anybody had a left a little feedback on the last update, and theres loads of you!! :eek Thankyou so much

I think this is the most feedback I’ve ever had on a chapter that didn’t have some nc17 action in, LOL. I got a little excited when I saw it all and did I little jump n punch in the air! Im really sad aren’t I? LOL. :lol

So, here’s some replies to all you lovely readers…



Bloodsuckinfiend- Thanks a lot, Im not sure Ive had feedback from you before (sorry if I have and Ive forgotten!) so thanks for coming out of lurkdom! Glad you liked, and that the update kicked…!



Shuyaku- Thanks for the second awwww, I don’t think Im actually able to write anything really angsty when it comes to Willow and Tara; theyre just too cute! Have to say, I loved your sig- "Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - it really made me laugh!:lol



TaraBaby77- Hey Aaron! Now why does it not surprise me that you’ve left the longest essay of feedback here? Heehee. So, the “5 star woohoo” eh? Care to explain?!

Once again, thanks for such a lovely reply, I only hope that you got to your doctor in time. What with the time you spend at the drug store trying to find something for your fic addiction, and surgery to remove your permanent smile…Im surprised you have any time to read these fics!! Thanks again



Yellow crayon- The awwww train huh? I guess it was pretty sweet! Well, thanks for reading and your cute comments :)



Arwen276- Hey, long time no feedback! Hows it going?

I know, I know, extreme evilness! But you have to admit, its not often I leave things cliffhangery, so you have to let me have at least one! Im glad the cuteness made up for it. And raspberry ripple and chocolate is yummy! I think Ive tried every combination of ice cream and sauce. Hmmm, think I’ll just be off to the freezer now…!



Sam Darls- I don’t believe Ive said anything about them moving in together!! Tara hasn’t answered yet ;) Sorry it was evil, but it had to be done. Thanks for the comment, Sammi.



Intricate mirage- Hey Cassie, thanks so much! I know, bad me again. I think my ultimate punishment would be losing your avator, cos Im still transfixed by it! I might actually get something done if I could stop staring at it :lol

(You do realise Im not serious right?? I think my life would be over if it really disappeared!!)





Thanks again to all of you! Ive already started on the next update, so should hopefully be done in the next couple of days.

Take care,



Willowsgirl/ Stacey xx :)

Edited by: willowsgirl at: 12/1/03 6:27 am
willowsgirl
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby intricate mirage » Mon Dec 01, 2003 9:04 am

:hmm **contemplates removing avatar**

Cassie





I don't mind being alone

I just don't want to be alone without you





intricate mirage
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby willowsgirl » Mon Dec 01, 2003 9:22 am

Oooooh, u better not!!! Please, pretty please?? I promise Ill be good and write the next update as fast as I can ;)



stace xxxx

willowsgirl
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby intricate mirage » Mon Dec 01, 2003 9:37 am

**looks at stace and aaron's pleas**



**contemplates for just a little while longer** :hmm



**relents and gives in**



Ok... no removing of avatar (for now **cheeky wink**)



So.... Stace... Aaron brought about a very good point, this avatar ensures an update which would hence feed all our addictions... **evil grin** Meaning... No update... No avatar? :wink

Cassie





I don't mind being alone

I just don't want to be alone without you





Edited by: intricate mirage at: 12/1/03 8:41 am
intricate mirage
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby TaraBaby77 » Mon Dec 01, 2003 10:37 am

Cassie??? Stop right there!!! Back away from the avatar!!! heehee. Don't remove it, please??? I love it when I find a fic that you have commented on, because I just kinda sit there and watch it. It's beautiful. And Stacey said that she would update her story as soon as she can. Is that enough to make you think otherwise ~~puppy dog eyes~~??? =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'

"It's about two people, regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: new update!

Postby TaraBaby77 » Mon Dec 01, 2003 10:40 am

Crap!!! Did I miss the "awwwww" train??? Please tell me I didn't??? I think I still have my ticket somewhere. Looking, looking, looking.......... WAHOO, here it is!!! I third that "awwwww"!!! I loved it!!! Anyone else, for the "awwwww" train??? It hasn't left yet..... =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'

"It's about two people, regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby TaraBaby77 » Mon Dec 01, 2003 10:42 am

WAHOO, Cassie. Thank you!!! I don't think my day could be complete without some Willow and Tara smoochies, heehee... =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'

"It's about two people, regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby willowsgirl » Mon Dec 01, 2003 1:34 pm

Heehe, at you two!

Quote:
Ok... no removing of avatar (for now **cheeky wink**)


Thank god, cassie!

Thanks for giving me another chance, I promise Ill be good from now on.

Aaron- thanks for joining the awwwwwww train!!



stacey xx

willowsgirl
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby willowsgirl » Tue Dec 02, 2003 4:59 am

Just wanted to apologise to anybody who was in kitten chat last night, for my drunken ramblings. Not quite sure what I said...possible something about singing...and water...

umm, and Im pretty embarassed about it today, not to mention hungover!

So sorry peeps, will try not to do it again- I was just all excited cos I only made it into chat for the first time yesterday :)

Ill be working on the update later, so Cassie- step away from the avator!!



Stacey xx

willowsgirl
 


Re: new update!

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Tue Dec 02, 2003 6:25 am

Awwww that was sweet and cool :) I cant wait to see what happens next ;)

AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby willowsgirl » Tue Dec 02, 2003 6:43 am

AmberAlysonLover- Thanks alot, Im glad you liked the update. Hopefully you'll be finding out what happens next very soon ;)



stacey xxx

willowsgirl
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby amberfan87 » Tue Dec 02, 2003 7:54 am

hi nice update who knows what was the title of the song at the end of family ep 6 ssn 5?

amberfan87
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby willowsgirl » Tue Dec 02, 2003 8:24 am

Thanks alot Amberfan87!

The song at the end of family- do you mean the one that willow and tara dance to? That one is I cant take my eyes off you by Melanie Doane.



willowsgirl xx

willowsgirl
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby TaraBaby77 » Tue Dec 02, 2003 10:13 am

Stacey/willowsgirl -



See??? It's just little stuff like that, that make you different from the others. You actually got on here and apologized for something that most people would have laughed and blew it off. But, noppers, not you. Just amazing. Anyhoo, I just wanted to say to you and, well, anyone else, that I love this fic. And thinking about it now, I have said that about, maybe 5 different fics. So, that is something that I don't just blah blah out all the time. So, in one sentence, WAHOO and awwwww!!! heehee. Great work, Stacey/willowsgirl. Great stuff... I know that I'm not just the only one saying it. You know what??? I think I am just going to have to read it over again. Well, as much as I can, at the moment. Anyhoo, just wanted to get my willowbabble out to you. Keep those updates comin'... Awesome job. =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'

"It's about two people, regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby willowsgirl » Tue Dec 02, 2003 4:11 pm

Hey, thanks alot Aaron! Not sure how I missed this post, but Ive seen it now, so cheers :)

But, you know I have come to the logical conclusion that you might be...just a little bit...insane!!

If you really went to read it again then...thats *blushes* wow. If not then I think you might be my most outspoken reader anyway, which is always a good thing!

Thanks alot,



stacey xxx

willowsgirl
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby bluewillowwitch » Tue Dec 02, 2003 5:45 pm

:bigwave willowsgirl :flower ,

I love this fic! :clap :bow And yes, you are :devilish and evil! :lol But hey, it's all good. YAY! :applause :pride :willow asked :tara to move in together. Now :tara has to tell :willow yes. :eyebrow Well at least in my book she does. With you, we never know what to expect. :wink Can't wait to :read more. Update soon, please? :pray :pray :pray :pray





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby FIRESIGN » Tue Dec 02, 2003 5:47 pm

Hello Hello!



Excellent fic! I'm waiting for an update!!! heheheh! Great job - I'm really enjoying the interaction with all of the characters...



Great job! Keep up the good work!



-Cin aka FIRESIGN:applause

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Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby TaraBaby77 » Tue Dec 02, 2003 5:55 pm

Heehee, okay, Stacey/willowsgirl... that's two pleads for an update in the span of 5 minutes... make that three now, :D . Just wanted to throw some pressure on you, hope it isn't too much. Anyway, just to let you know, yes i did read it again. I could probably act it out, like in a play or something, :party . That isn't anywhere close to a play, but... So, what do ya say??? Can we...have one??? Pretty please??? =)



Take your time, you can't rush perfection... =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'

"It's about two people, regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby willowsgirl » Tue Dec 02, 2003 6:14 pm

Bluewillowwitch- Thanks muchly, you’re right, you can never know 100%! You’ll jusy have to wait and find out ;)



Firesign- Cheers Cin, good to know Ive got another person reading! Glad you like the interaction, as I do with both your fics :)

Ill update soon.



TaraBaby77- Your own play? Aww, that’s so cute! And I cant take the pressure, LOL. Update may take a few days, gotta major presentation to do in uni 2moro and haven’t so much started it yet..! I guess 5 hours talking to intricate mirage earlier didnt help! :lol



Ill try and get it done soon k? Thanks for reading!



Stace xxx

willowsgirl
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby YMKA » Tue Dec 02, 2003 9:13 pm

Hey there:grin

I caught up:p

Yeap....I do read your fic and you sooo not innocent;)

Really sweet update;) and the teen boy.....:lol :lol :lol

Waiting for an update.....*looks at her watch... it's time for a new update...yeap....it def. is....:grin

:peace :heart

M.

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"..I feel you, I taste you, I cannot forget, everytime it rains I get wet..." (c) Ace of Base

"I want to go back to...Believing in everything and knowing nothing at all.."(c) Evanescence

YMKA
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby LostWithoutTara » Wed Dec 03, 2003 12:23 pm

Gorgeous update, both hilarious (at the start) and really sweet at the end. :heart

Every time you walk away, I pretend that I'm okay

LostWithoutTara
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby WTrock » Wed Dec 03, 2003 5:33 pm

Hey! I finally registered, it's been a while since I wanted to do it! (it took me some time though )

Anyway I just wanted to say...

Your story is amazing!!!! I love it!!

Now I'm gonna pray for an update and continue to laugh at that dancing thing!

(I just so love the emoticons here hahaha!!)



Bye! =^.^=

WTrock
 


Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby willowsgirl » Sun Dec 07, 2003 6:23 am

Hey there! I just remembered that people had left feedback a while ago and I never replied *slaps forehead* silly me! Sorry about that.

Also, sorry for leaving you all with a bit of a cliffhanger, and well, leaving you hanging! This week has been pretty hardcore with uni work, so Ive been working away like a busy bee. But I have set today aside to work on the chapter, and to do my beta-ing, so hopefully, you will have updatey goodness sometime very very soon.

So, some quick replies;



YMKA- Marina, how many times do I have to tell you? I am sweet, innocent and pure! :lol Im glad you liked the story, I didn’t realise you were reading it when we spoke before. But I do now! The teen boy? I just wondered what would happen if they forgot where they were, and who’s the worst possible person to see them? Enter horny teenage boy, hehehe. There will be more soon.



LostWithoutTara- Hey there, Im happy youre still enjoying the story! It really does make my day to know that people are out there reading, and it makes it a million times better when I know about it- so thanks!!



WTrock
- Hey, so you finally registered eh? That’s great! And woohoo, you like my story! There’ll be an update soon for you. Hehe, when I first saw your name I thought it was W Trock, and I was like, that is one weird surname! But after I got over my utter blonde moment, I figured it out. Duh! So, great name, and thanks for reading- hope those emoticons are still amusing you!!:)



Willowsgirl xxx

Tara ignored him. "Your interruption has left me high and, well... I hardly think dry is the word." Returning home by tempest duer

willowsgirl
 

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