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Re: Edge of Silence-Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby LeatherQueen » Mon Aug 12, 2002 7:35 pm

That was just yummy. :grin



And it's amazing to see Willow's nervousness, and Tara's assertiveness when it's just them. When they're alone and it's safe for them to just be who they are.



Plus, you know... hearing Tara say 'fuck' is truly a delight. ;)



And yes, I'm from Wisconsin. :lol My poor hothouse flower Southern girlfriend always freezes to death during Christmas at my parents. And I'll be saying, "But honey, it's not that cold. It's not even below zero yet!" Wauwatosa... that's down by Milwaukee. I grew up about two and half hours north of there, near Green Bay.








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"But when they're playing your song on the jukebox in Hell, you might as well dance." - K. Simpson


"Futile... like a FOX, baby!" - Tara in The Late Shift by wiccachica

LeatherQueen
 


Re: Edge of Silence-Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby AutumnT » Mon Aug 12, 2002 7:47 pm

Allrighty then. Dear God you have a way with words.



And can I just say how funny this was:
Quote:
an A- not her usual A/A+. She’d known that she’d done badly at the time,
Only Willow would see an A- as a failure. I also liked the way you worked in the tummy rub and breast gal parts of canon. And to be honest now I'm sorry you did not start this series when they first met because just that glimpse of the first kiss makes me want more.



Oh, and this line? Really funny.
Quote:
“Do you want me to fuck you, sweetie?”


Autumn

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Buffy Season 6: It grated, like something forced in where it doesn't belong.

Edited by: AutumnT  at: 8/12/02 6:49:17 pm
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Re: Edge of Silence-Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby Darcy » Mon Aug 12, 2002 8:01 pm

Actually, Willow's not the only one who would think an A- was doing badly - Melissa (aka Triscuit, aka Corky - geez, she's got more aliases than P. Diddy!) has that same perspective. To be fair, in the first draft I think it was a B, and I made her change it. I just didn't see Willow not acing a calculus exam.


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I don't care if it is an orgy of death, there's such a thing as a napkin! - Willow in "Superstar"

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Re: Edge of Silence-Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby TromDeGrey » Mon Aug 12, 2002 8:24 pm

I am officially requesting that ice water be served with all your new updates. Whew!! :grin

Confusion is a definite direction.

TromDeGrey
 


Re: Edge of Silence-Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby xita » Mon Aug 12, 2002 8:33 pm

God I love your timeline, full of sex and glory. See people can't see that because Willow was so closeted but I see it. You placed the first kiss at "A New Man," that's awesome and can I say way to reuse lines from Desert Hearts!!



Quote:
“Of course, I was.” Tara leaned close and kissed her. “How could I resist such a passionate plea?”


- - - - - - - - - - - -

Childie -"Not all girls are raving bloody lesbians, you know!"

George - "That's a misfortune of which I am perfectly well aware."

The Killing of Sister George

xita
 


Re: Edge of Silence-Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby Lindy » Mon Aug 12, 2002 8:37 pm

Aw, that was so sweet :D and hot! Hot too, but more sweet, really, heh, Willow said 'it' ;) Seems she only can say it when she is doing it the moment she says it, got it? :lol



Thanks for the update, I really enjoy your story. And Autumn is right, heh, the line she quoted was too funny.

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It's nothing. It's all.. nothing

Lindy
 


Re: Edge of Silence-Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby funkyasian » Mon Aug 12, 2002 8:46 pm

took your advice this time...made sure i breathed while i read...though it was difficult...and i had to keep reminding myself...:thud



great update...i love reading of tara and willow loving each other, not necessarily the whole smut thing (though that is good) - but just imagining how they express their love for each other...:love



can't wait for more



steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

funkyasian
 


Re: Edge of Silence-Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby tiredsoul » Mon Aug 12, 2002 8:51 pm

It's always the shy ones, ain't it?



Loved the update. Look forward to more.



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"I'm not coming back"

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Re: Edge of Silence-Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby MadeinNZ » Mon Aug 12, 2002 10:08 pm

First you say don't forget to breathe and then you write smut that makes breathing very difficult. There is evil in you I say.

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"When someone falls for Willow, they stay fallen" - Normal Again

MadeinNZ
 


Re: Edge of Silence-Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby Kieli » Mon Aug 12, 2002 10:26 pm

And here I am....after a long vacation...revisiting your fic, only to find that I have been thudded not once...not twice...but THRICE! *sigh* And I ain't happy with this here angsty part, Missy *shakes her finger* So on with the cute cuddliness and the evil sharing (the way that only best friends can share your whole life with everyone in the damn galaxy) and all that!



More smut! *ahem* (did I just say that out loud?)



T.


Love is tricky. It is never mundane or daily. You can never get used to it. You have to walk with it, then let it walk with you. You can never balk. It moves you like the tide. It takes you out to sea then lays you on the beach again. Today's struggling pain is the foundation for a certain stride through the heavens. You can run from it but you can never say no. It includes everyone."--Amy Tan "The Hundred Secret Senses"

Kieli
 


Re: Edge of Silence-Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby Jennpurr » Mon Aug 12, 2002 10:29 pm

Good God, Mel... you're gonna put me in an early grave.



:thud



That was... WOW...



I just have one question, what was that spell for? I mean, I have a pretty good guess, but...



WOW... :drool



Mmm... now how am I supposed to go to sleep, huh? I gotta get up early for work tomorrow. I should have waited to read this until tomorrow.



Oh well... It was soo worth it.



:thud



**Rolls over by your feet** Mind if I lay here for awhile?? :)



Can't wait for more, girl. Thanks for the update,

Jen

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Quotes from Melissa Etheridge on 8/10/02, in The Woodlands, TX


"I've been to every, one of Melissa Etheridge's concerts! ... No, really, I have!"
"THAT, is a bat! ... Hey, does it have a ticket? ... It doesn't have a ticket!"

Jennpurr
 


Re: Edge of Silence-Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby spazz07 » Tue Aug 13, 2002 1:37 am

:thud



*Owwww* Damn hit my head on the computer desk on my way down, shouldda paid more attention to the warning at the start :grin



Gotta love the spicey talk and Tara understanding Willow was to sweet, love that she now has a Willow basket aswell :)



Cheers

Nath

If life was meant to be a bed of daisy's we'd have chicken crap thown on us all the time.

spazz07
 


Re: Edge of Silence-Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby xita » Tue Aug 13, 2002 2:22 am

the spell was for silence I assume. They've been casting it so the neighbors won't hear :)

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Childie -"Not all girls are raving bloody lesbians, you know!"

George - "That's a misfortune of which I am perfectly well aware."

The Killing of Sister George

xita
 


Re: Edge of Silence-Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby tommo » Tue Aug 13, 2002 3:34 am

Yum. Wonderful. I can tell when it's good sex because I get a fluttery feeling in my stomach. You managed to make me feel that way pretty much throughout this chapter. Lovely stuff. I love the idea of them barely able to control their desires for one another. Snuggles, indeed. :lol



Thank you. :)


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The mature solution is to spend
your whole life telling stupid,
pointless jokes so no one will notice
you're just a scared, insecure little
boy! ~ Xander...or Joss...?

tommo
 


Re: Edge of Silence-Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby saphire tear » Tue Aug 13, 2002 4:06 am

really nice update

Willows A- lol



"do you want me to fuck you sweety"........That was so funny.

saphire tear
 


Re: Edge of Silence-Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby mollyig » Tue Aug 13, 2002 4:39 am

Tara trusting Willow enough to wait - thats just lovely. But I do hope that Willow doesn't take too long to let Buffy know of the amazing love she's found.



I love the assertive Tara! I think again its a measure of how much she trusts Willow that she can be so totally at ease in her company.

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

mollyig
 


Re: feedback - Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby Triscuit7 » Tue Aug 13, 2002 7:41 am

Hi all, just heading off to work in the steamy city - I can't wait until October when the temps in Philly become more reasonable and the NJ mosquitos vanish. Can anyone tell me why there are sooo many mosquitos if we're in the middle of a bloody drought? Being their nummy treat sucks...



Anyway:



LeatherQueen - Yummy is good; I like yummy. And the girls do hide their real selves from the world a lot, Tara especially, but Willow too. I couldn't resist the "fuck"; its actually one of my favorite words. A good strong Anglo-Saxon sounding word. But what I like most about it is the surprised looks I get from people when I (of all people) say it .



AutumnT - "Dear God you have a way with words" - . Thanks. Re: an A- see below. And "tummy rub" and "breast gal" had to come from somewhere - why not this early? Adding Tara's favorite epithet to a fairly crude statement does just sort of make you giggle; I obviously couldn't resist. Having Tara say fuck was fun, but sweetie did put it over the top. There is a very strong possibility that a story set earlier in S4 will make an appearance. I just want to finish this first and I'm sort of waiting for Darcy to finish writing her early S4 fic. When I started writing fanfic ("River"), I thought it would be a one shot deal - silly me - so I started just after the Nether Realms so I could write some sex scenes. Thanks for reading and all the encouragement.



Darcy - Hey, I resemble that remark! Sort of - I was always happy with an A-; lower than that was where failure began.



TromDeGrey - Request for ice water noted; I'll put that in the next advisory. Thanks.



xita - "Sex and glory", see now I'm blushing again...but with a big grin on my face. Re: first kiss-I placed it in "A New Man", but it could also be in The I in Team - I think they were snuggling by that point. Desert Hearts is a great movie. The "passionate plea" line was a direct lift, but I, ummm, paraphrased another bit earlier in "Edge": stand up, walk around, eat something.... Thanks again Xita.



Lindy - Sweet and hot. Two very good words - thanks. Willow does finally say "it", under duress, but she does say it. Glad you like. And I'm guessing the funny line was Tara's?



funkyasian - Hi Steph. Preliminary advisory - if things happen as I think they will, the next update or two will require your total concentration... And I'm glad you’re enjoying the romance and love that is Willow and Tara. Thanks.



tiredsoul - Uh-huh, I'm shy, so I guess I relate. Thanks.



MadeinNZ - But, but, but evil's good! And BTW - thanks.



Kieli - Taps foot.... I took a computer with me, on my honeymoon, even checked in with the kitten board at an internet cafe.... I'm not responsible for your health if you read sex scene after sex scene, after sex scene. They're short-ish scenes for a reason: so they don't cause harm to the reader.... Toni, Toni, Toni, what am I going to do with you? And where'd that Missy come from? That's sort of girlie girl, don't you think? I mean I'm not large with the butch but,hey --- Missy? fer gods sake. Ick and ewww. What self-respecting former softball catcher (recreational only) would answer to that? And if you were simply pulling an Anya on me (just you wait missy) disregard the above minor diatribe. And Toni, while there will be smut in abundance, fair warning - put on your crash helmet and assume crash positions, 'cause this is S4 and the angst only builds.... And hey, I'm glad you're back, girl. Thanks.



Jennpurr - Hi Jen, I'm sorry...not . The spell was for the "silencing" just in case Willow or Tara screamed again. "Tace!" is Latin for "Be silent!" and I'll stop there before I get started on conjugations and tenses...shutting up now. And sleep - what's that exactly? Guess it was what I didn't do last night and for no good reason (get your mind out of the gutter); too hot, too restless, and too claustrophobic (AC was on, door was closed, I was antsy). Golly gee, work is gonna be fun today... Thanks for the thudding guys.



spazz07 - Nath, I put those warnings up for a reason. Now wear a helmet for the next few updates, okay? Willow's such a great name - easy to play with. Glad you liked the basket bit and the spicy talk. Thanks again.



xita - hi again. Yep, silence spell.



tommo - I made tommo’s tummy flutter! Snuggles are good too, but difficult in that early "can't keep my hands off of you" stage that they're currently in. Thanks.

Thank you.



saphire tear - glad you're enjoying it and I couldn't resist "sweetie" . I wonder what grade Tara would give Willow - I'm guessing my favorite redhead is still an overachiever though... Thanks.



mollyig - Thanks for reading, but you're going to have to be patient with Willow, just like Tara... I like writing take-charge Tara, so surprising, but so much fun.



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I brought marshmallows!

Edited by: Triscuit7 at: 8/13/02 6:12:25 pm
Triscuit7
 


Re: feedback - Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby funkyasian » Tue Aug 13, 2002 8:04 am

hey melissa -



okay...warning duely noted...*preparing the a/c and cold shower. doing meditative breathing exercises*



and as for the mosquitos...well, we here in jersey didn't want them..so we sent them over to philly...sorry... :smug

but if it makes you feel better...i've got a tick problem around my house with all the damn deer that comes into the back yard (i live right by a "preserved forest" area)



can't wait for the next update!!



steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

funkyasian
 


Re: feedback - Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby TareBearRS » Tue Aug 13, 2002 10:39 am

Gotta love the spicy talk.



WOW nice update, scoring very high on the hotness scale there.



R.

TareBearRS
 


Re: feedback - Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby Puff » Tue Aug 13, 2002 11:24 am

Wow that was some update *fans self* I love the whole part about Willow not really being happy with an A- but how at least if she worked harder in future tests she could get an A/A+ that was cute :)

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You know, it's a real deal relationship and that's why people can relate to it
Amber Benson

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Re: feedback - Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby The Inward Sea » Tue Aug 13, 2002 12:12 pm

Ok... now I'm leaving to assist a lecture given by a very old professor about some boring subject and will have my mind full of W & T goodness... :lol I love it!



You wrote:



" I like writing take-charge Tara, so surprising, but so much fun."



I found that when they are alone -in the show- their balance change completely and Tara rules there! Nice detail.



And... you learnt latin? OMG! That's an achievement to me. My mind just wasn´'t made for it. :p



(I wonder why there isn't an emoticon of Miss Kitty Fantastico... )



Thank you, Triscuit!



Sea





The Inward Sea
 


Missy? Erm...well

Postby Kieli » Tue Aug 13, 2002 1:54 pm

Quote:
Taps foot.... I took a computer with me, on my honeymoon, even checked in with the kitten board at an internet cafe.... I'm not responsible for your health if you read sex scene after sex scene, after sex scene. They're short-ish scenes for a reason: so they don't cause harm to the reader.... Toni, Toni, Toni, what am I going to do with you? And where'd that Missy come from? That's sort of girlie girl, don't you think? I mean I'm not large with the butch but,hey --- Missy? fer gods sake. Ick and ewww. What self-resecting former softball catcher (recreational only) would answer to that? And if you were simply pulling an Anya on me (just you wait missy) disregard the above minor diatribe. And Toni, while there will be smut in abundance, fair warning - put your crash helmet and assume crash positions, 'cause this is S4 and the angst only builds.... And hey, I'm glad you're back, girl. Thanks.




Yep...it was "girlie girl" kind of thing....honest. I'd never call a self respecting softball chick like yerself anything so "girlie". A woman's got her reputation to consider! ;) MORE ANGST?!! *falls over in a dead faint* I don't think my 34 yr old heart can stand much more of this. I want you to promise me a happy ending, Mel. Really. Truly. Please?



Toni






Love is tricky. It is never mundane or daily. You can never get used to it. You have to walk with it, then let it walk with you. You can never balk. It moves you like the tide. It takes you out to sea then lays you on the beach again. Today's struggling pain is the foundation for a certain stride through the heavens. You can run from it but you can never say no. It includes everyone."--Amy Tan "The Hundred Secret Senses"

Kieli
 


Re: feedback - Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby BethanyB3 » Tue Aug 13, 2002 4:57 pm

Poor Willow thinking an A - isn't good enough and then being anxious about Tara on top of that. Glad that Tara reassured her so quickly. So...that was the start of the tummy rubs.



You do such a wonderful job of combining sexuality with sensuality and I am so glad that I've started packing my poor monitor in ice. :thud



Mlis, for the mosquitos you might want to try zero-bite or cactus juice (that's the name & an active ingredient) both natural and available at most health food stores. Cactus juice also at cactusjuice.com Good luck. ~ Beth

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"To Live is so startling it leaves little time for anything else." ~ Emily Dickinson (1830 - !886)

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Re: feedback - Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby Triscuit7 » Tue Aug 13, 2002 7:47 pm

Hi kittens - Well, I'm now hooked on Rally's videos - what better way to get in a writing mood than to watch "I'm Too Sexy" a few times, hmmmm? Anyway, before I start writing I just wanted to drop in and say "Thanks."



funkyasian - Hi again steph - it'll probably be Thur eve late or more likely midday Friday for the next update. BTW I work in Philly, but live in south Jersey. But there are skeeters both places: the mall has them, my backroom has them, and my yard has them. I think they're attacking me in all three locations. And ticks are just gross, but usually their bites don't itch, if that's a plus. Mosquitos vs. ticks, W Nile vs. Lyme - hell of a choice. Thanks again for reading.



TareBearRS - Spicy talk is all to the good. And soonish there will be more hotness - promise.



Puff - Hey. Glad you're enjoying the fic. Willow is my favorite overachiever ever. Thanks.



The Inward Sea - Hope the goodness helped with the boredom. I find myself less able to concentrate at work; I'm writing the next update in my head as I ring up customers or shelve books. Hopefully my ability to mulitask is up to the demands. And Tara does rule privately, doesn't she? - that's sort of interesting . And yeah, I have 3 years of Latin, mostly forgotten, 3 years of Greek happily forgotten, and ancient Egyptian (10+ years and the subject of my much neglected dissertation). But I can't do calculus....



Kieli - Hey Toni.... I don't know that I have a reputation left...... Yes, more angst. My fic's canonical (even if I'm occasionally stretching things). Remember, this is just a few days before Superstar so we have those trials and tribulations, and the "horsies" from Where The Wild Things Are and then that diving airplane spiral thing-y for New Moon Rising. So crash helmet and crash positions, please - the ride will be bumpy.... But I'll give out hugs on request



BethanyB3 - Hi Beth! I love the tummy rubs too. And the over-sharing that let all the Scoobies know about them. Take care of your monitor okay; I don't want you to miss any goodness.... Thanks for the tip on cactus juice. I'm going to try GNC tomorrow before work - that's the closest thing my mall has to a natural/health food store. 'Cause the Skin So Soft isn't working this summer....



Ciao, Melissa







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I brought marshmallows!

Edited by: Triscuit7 at: 8/13/02 7:08:01 pm
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Re: feedback - Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby The Inward Sea » Tue Aug 13, 2002 11:44 pm

You wrote:



"I have 3 years of Latin, mostly forgotten, 3 years of Greek happily forgotten, and ancient Egyptian (10+ years and the subject of my much neglected dissertation). But I can't do calculus...."



That sounds like a fellow historian to me! :)



I love Darcy's posting here too! :D



Sea





The Inward Sea
 


Re: feedback - Chap. 4d: In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby Jennpurr » Wed Aug 14, 2002 12:01 am

You little tease. :p You know you did that on purpose. You just wanted me to have a heart attack, just admit it. Come on. You were planning that, weren't you?? Hee hee... I'm jk, girl. ;) Anyway, I would have died happily, if I would have killed over. A happy, 22, um.... nevermind. :blush



Okay, thanks for explaining what that spell was for. I figured it was, but I wasn't sure.



You know, I actually was able to fall right asleep last night, as I probably will tonight. I'm :yawn Very :yawn Sorry you couldn't sleep. I hate when that happens.



Oh... and thank you for the tummy rubs. ;) Would Darcy get mad if I asked for another one??



Looking forward to more, Mel.

Take care,

Jen



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Quotes from Melissa Etheridge on 8/10/02, in The Woodlands, TX


"I've been to every, one of Melissa Etheridge's concerts! ... No, really, I have!"
"THAT, is a bat! ... Hey, does it have a ticket? ... It doesn't have a ticket!"

Jennpurr
 


Edge of Silence: Chap 4e-In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby Triscuit7 » Fri Aug 16, 2002 12:05 pm

Hi kittens - Well, it's midday Friday and here is the promised update. I'm revisiting some images, but from a different perspective .



This picks up immediately after the previous section.



Rating NC-17 so no underage kittens, please.



Health warning: Turn on fans/AC please and have your ice water or cold shower ready. And please remember to breathe and blink. Ooops, almost forgot: hey Kieli, here's a cushion.... and here are extras for other kittens should you find this portion thud-worthy. And Jen, tummy-rub coming your way.



Thanks.



Have fun.



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“Passionate plea?” Willow snorted and played with the blonde tresses. “You just wanted me to talk dirty.”



“Uh-huh,” Tara agreed, and kissed her again.



“MMmmmm, vixen,” she murmured, returning the kiss.



“And you … did … sweetie ….” Tara emphasized almost every word with a short kiss. “But I won’t tell anyone ....” A longer kiss followed. Her lover’s tongue slipped between her lips and she met it with her own eagerly.



Willow was held pinned to the bed by the softness of her body and the warmth of her love. Her nipples hardened as Tara continued kissing her. She could feel her lover’s every little shift, each small movement, along the entire length of her body.



Tara kissed her until Willow was drunk on kisses, until she had to break away panting. She saw her own hunger reflected in her lover’s blue eyes. She ran her hands through the shimmering hair in silent desperation. Tara’s mouth slowly quirked in a lopsided smile and Willow’s heart fluttered – oh, god, she’s going to tease me! Equal parts of anticipation and dread made her tremble.



This Tara – so different from the diffident one that everyone else saw – this Tara was hers alone. Willow smiled sensually as her lover shifted her body just a tiny bit and ran a finger slowly over her collarbone, up her neck and along her jaw. She turned her head when the finger reached her mouth, met its caress with her tongue, and tasted herself momentarily before it was withdrawn.



“Let’s move those pillows, sweetie.” Tara repositioned her body so that her legs splayed to either side and her weight was mostly on her knees. Willow raised herself up and helped push the supporting pillows away from her back and head. Resting flat on her back, Tara’s thighs and calves along the outside of hers, their hips snuggled together, she was at her teasing lover’s mercy.



They’d done this before, her hands in Tara’s, their pussies together, her lips on Tara’s breasts. It had been very good, in a light, stimulating way that had led to more intense lovemaking. She licked her lips in anticipation.



“Sweet Willow, my breast gal.” Tara’s voice brimmed with amusement.



“Uh-huh. C’mere.”



Her lover smiled and shook her head. “Uh-uh.”



“But ….,” Willow tried to object, but Tara trailed her fingernails lightly over her stomach making her squirm. Such a scratchy, squinchy sensation.



“You make love to my breasts all the time. Turnabout is fair play.” Tara’s eyes narrowed as she spoke.



She lifted her eyebrows and reached upwards, but was intercepted.



“And no hands either.”



“Tara …,” she pouted.



“No hands, sweetie. Not on my breasts anyway. Other places fine, but not my breasts.” She smiled softly and leaned forward until they were nipple to nipple. “At least, not right now.”



Willow searched Tara’s face and sighed. She was no fool – she could recognize a resolve-face when she saw one. “Later?”



“Later,” Tara agreed, bringing her mouth down and kissing her passionately.



She ran her hands over Tara’s back and opened herself to her lover’s kiss. Willow-tongue met Tara-tongue. When her lover pulled back slightly she curled her tongue, licking the full lips and caressing the open mouth. She felt her lover tremble. Good.



“Okay,” she murmured. Winding a hand in the blonde hair, she drew Tara’s mouth back to hers. For long moments they kissed, until she permitted her lover to retreat.



But Tara’s mouth didn’t go far. She trailed a series of kisses along her jaw, nuzzling and nibbling her ear, until Willow’s squirminess returned.



Willow stroked her hands over her lover’s back and up her sides, wanting Tara’s mouth just a little lower – wanting it nibbling her neck.



“You liked it, didn’t you?” Tara’s breath was hot against her ear. “When your evil twin … when she licked your neck, you liked it a lot.”



“It was disgusting, and really, really disturbing.” Willow inhaled deeply, and spoke truthfully, “And yes, it turned me on.”



Tara lifted her head and looked into her eyes. “Was that the first time that happened … with another girl who wasn’t B-Buffy?”



“I ... I’m not ….” Willow was astounded by Tara’s mental leap, and concerned. Her hands brushed the blonde hair back from the beautiful face and she concentrated on reassurance. “I mean, I was, I guess, but not anymore. In high school, I was attracted to her, I think, but I didn’t really know what it all meant, and ….”



“Shhhhh.” Tara kissed her. “I know that you l-love Buffy … j-just, not that way.” A smile graced her face briefly then was gone. “I was j-just asking if that was the first time another woman was physical with you and you liked it.”



“Ummm, sort of, but not ….” Willow was amazed at her lover’s acceptance, and after a moment’s hesitation continued. “It … the first time, I think, was that same evening. And it was with Buffy. It was when she thought I was dead, and then I came into the library, and she saw that I was alive. She gave me this great big hug, and for a moment I … then Xander was hugging me too, and it was weird.” She frowned at the memory. “Really weird.”



Tara’s lips quirked and deposited a kiss on her furrowed brow. “So B-Buffy and Xander and you together ….”



“Stop. Just stop.” Willow shuddered.



Her lover chuckled and traced her lips with her finger. “So when vampire-you licked your neck, that really was the first time you thought you might be physically attracted to other women?”



“Pretty much so,” Willow admitted. “There was a teacher, and she was pretty and … and really, really smart. I helped out in her computer labs, but she and Giles had a thing, so .… yeah, vampire-me was when ….”



Tara licked her neck, a long slow stroke of her tongue that followed the path of her carotid.



Willow’s babble cut off and a moan tore from her throat.



“I was just curious.” Her lover’s breath heated her ear. “That would have been hard, I think. Being held by a vampire, possibly about to be eaten, and realizing that you liked this.” She kissed her way back down and then licked upwards again. "That you might like girls."



Willow arched her back, her fingers clenching in Tara’s buttocks as she thrust upward. Hot kisses seared her throat, and she entwined one hand in the blonde hair trying to anchor Tara’s mouth to her neck.



“Uh-uh, sweetie,” Tara whispered, continuing to move her lips over her neck.



Willow forced herself to relax and simply to hold her lover’s head, to pretend that she guided the hungry mouth and tongue which, in spite of Tara’s earlier promises, were most definitely not concentrating on her breasts. At the moment, she didn’t mind that at all.



“So hot, so hungry,” Tara murmured in her other ear, and licked that side of her neck too. “I wish you could have told me that story. Just the two of us ….” Another long slow lick. “I find myself wondering how you looked in black leather.” Her lips kissed the day-old mark on her neck, then she sucked it again gently.



Willow was moving past conscious thought, Tara’s lips and mouth slowly driving her wild. And Tara’s soft whispers – hearing her was making her feel things that only touching had ever done before. Her hips lifted involuntarily, meeting Tara’s downward motion. They rubbed together, the gentle friction of their damp curls teasing and exciting their clits. They moved together, Tara’s mouth and tongue mercilessly loving her neck.



She wanted more – more of everything – so badly, but Tara controlled her as effortlessly as her vampire self had once done. She gripped her lover tight and ran her nails over Tara’s back.



“I’d love to have seen you.” Tara nuzzled her neck near her ear then nibbled downwards until her mouth covered one of yesterday’s bites. She swirled her tongue over the small bruise and Willow stiffened expectantly. “How hot you must have looked in the arms of your evil twin. Two Willows. ”



Willow’s vision went inward, focused on the image Tara had given her, and a wave of hunger made her tremble.



“And that whole thing, so explains this ...” Tara paused and nipped her neck, bringing her still closer. “… this whole neck thing you have.” She bit down and sucked, bruising the soft flesh with her teeth.



Willow’s head tipped back as she arched into the fierce kiss, nerve bundles exploding in her cunt as an orgasm swept through her. She writhed, moaning beneath her lover as Tara continued to nibble her neck, until the last waves flowed through her.



“And now – I think I promised this ….” Tara curled around so that she could reach and began to love her breasts with the same fierce attention she’d given her neck.



Willow’s body vibrated, nerves singing with pleasure, as Tara’s loving lifted her upwards again. Her hips rocked, meeting her lover’s, and her hands stroked the blonde’s body hungrily. Panting, she looked up into Tara’s eyes, and saw the moment just before pleasure flooded the blonde woman’s body.



“Willow!” Tara cried as the wave broke, and she found herself carried along in her blonde lover’s wake.



Tara’s body came to rest against her as the strength flowed out of her body. Her breath coming in hoarse sobs, she could feel Tara’s heart beating rapidly against her chest. She lifted a trembling hand and caressed her cheek, then gently pulled the blond head down against her.



“Mine,” she murmured into the blonde hair.



“Yes.”







Edited by: Triscuit7 at: 8/16/02 11:07:28 am
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Re: Edge of Silence: Chap 4e-In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby Kieli » Fri Aug 16, 2002 12:12 pm

Hmmm....glad I had swallowed my mouthful of Vanilla Coke before I read this (ahem....get yer minds outta the gutter people!). Hey Mel, I've been trying to reply to your email all day. Call me will ya or IM me (if you have IM). Comcast sez their email server for their Internet customers will be down almost all day. :( (



Toni


Love is tricky. It is never mundane or daily. You can never get used to it. You have to walk with it, then let it walk with you. You can never balk. It moves you like the tide. It takes you out to sea then lays you on the beach again. Today's struggling pain is the foundation for a certain stride through the heavens. You can run from it but you can never say no. It includes everyone."--Amy Tan "The Hundred Secret Senses"

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Re: Edge of Silence: Chap 4e-In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby Triscuit7 » Fri Aug 16, 2002 12:22 pm

Hi Kieli - Yeah, email server is down and unfortunately I don't IM. I did post the question in creative help, if you want to answer it there. ???



And thanks.

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I brought marshmallows!

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Re: Edge of Silence: Chap 4e-In the Coolness of Your Shadow

Postby Kieli » Fri Aug 16, 2002 12:31 pm

your wish is my command. It has been done. And I really REALLY want to know how much...ahem...research you get to do for all these steamy little numbers :grin


Love is tricky. It is never mundane or daily. You can never get used to it. You have to walk with it, then let it walk with you. You can never balk. It moves you like the tide. It takes you out to sea then lays you on the beach again. Today's struggling pain is the foundation for a certain stride through the heavens. You can run from it but you can never say no. It includes everyone."--Amy Tan "The Hundred Secret Senses"

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